Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Acts
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Would I be wrong if I said it evoked the memory of Gone With the Wind? The gaity in the beginning followed by the tragedy of war?
May 2nd, 2025 12:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Would I be wrong if I said it evoked the memory of Gone With the Wind? The gaity in the beginning followed by the tragedy of war?
May 2nd, 2025 12:34
A lot of wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe every family must have a great storyteller. Perhaps not, but that is hard to imagine. Mine has had a few. This was such a wonderful write that I am sure is a fitting tribute to your Uncle. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 10:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe every family must have a great storyteller. Perhaps not, but that is hard to imagine. Mine has had a few. This was such a wonderful write that I am sure is a fitting tribute to your Uncle. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 10:46
A lot of wind
MDStone said:
I hasten to say, I was blown away! Great story with vivid expression. For a moment it brought back that childlike imagination. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
May 2nd, 2025 10:17
MDStone said:
I hasten to say, I was blown away! Great story with vivid expression. For a moment it brought back that childlike imagination. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
May 2nd, 2025 10:17
A lot of wind
hzugman said:
Good write. Brings up the question does time flow both ways.
May 2nd, 2025 09:59
hzugman said:
Good write. Brings up the question does time flow both ways.
May 2nd, 2025 09:59
A lot of wind
David Wakeling said:
an amazing tale of the wind creating havoc, An enjoyable read.Excellent
May 2nd, 2025 05:11
David Wakeling said:
an amazing tale of the wind creating havoc, An enjoyable read.Excellent
May 2nd, 2025 05:11
A lot of wind
Teddy.15 said:
A story teller, how truly wonderful and in all this imagery a very windy journey absolutely magical last stanza 🌹 I\'ll be wanting to rent it too. 🌬️
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Teddy.15 said:
A story teller, how truly wonderful and in all this imagery a very windy journey absolutely magical last stanza 🌹 I\'ll be wanting to rent it too. 🌬️
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
A lot of wind
Victor Bolshov said:
Holy Carroll! Innit something?! This one\'s probably the best I read here so far. Surrealistic, rich imagery. The idea of a storm that comes in as a constructive force (mills flour, holds a whole lake in place, all at right angles!) - is brilliant. It\'s like this is the storm of very reason!
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Victor Bolshov said:
Holy Carroll! Innit something?! This one\'s probably the best I read here so far. Surrealistic, rich imagery. The idea of a storm that comes in as a constructive force (mills flour, holds a whole lake in place, all at right angles!) - is brilliant. It\'s like this is the storm of very reason!
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Ponderings
Goldfinch60 said:
Insanity seems to rulke the world nowadays soren.
Andy
May 2nd, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Insanity seems to rulke the world nowadays soren.
Andy
May 2nd, 2025 01:45
Blackness\' light
Dan Williams said:
First class work. \"A thought forgot cuts the knot\" and \"Drinking from earth\'s nipples\" could carry it all by themselves. Nice.
May 1st, 2025 21:21
Dan Williams said:
First class work. \"A thought forgot cuts the knot\" and \"Drinking from earth\'s nipples\" could carry it all by themselves. Nice.
May 1st, 2025 21:21
Good taste
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe he needed a \'Bigger Boat\' as someone once said.
Enjoyable poem
May 1st, 2025 18:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe he needed a \'Bigger Boat\' as someone once said.
Enjoyable poem
May 1st, 2025 18:23
Ponderings
Lorenz said:
Squeaking thinking machine .Reminiscent of pink floyds themes .
May 1st, 2025 13:00
Lorenz said:
Squeaking thinking machine .Reminiscent of pink floyds themes .
May 1st, 2025 13:00
Ponderings
Tony Grannell said:
What caught my attention was \'A silent Rustle,\' a conflict, as in imagining sounds, a cacophony of presumed sounds and the madness therein, an aural paranoia , \'echoing in my brain\'. Frightening to say the least and very well captured in this exceedingly interesting and well written poem. Excellent!
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 11:36
Tony Grannell said:
What caught my attention was \'A silent Rustle,\' a conflict, as in imagining sounds, a cacophony of presumed sounds and the madness therein, an aural paranoia , \'echoing in my brain\'. Frightening to say the least and very well captured in this exceedingly interesting and well written poem. Excellent!
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 11:36
Ponderings
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It\'s KP squeaking and creeping about! lol.
May 1st, 2025 10:53
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It\'s KP squeaking and creeping about! lol.
May 1st, 2025 10:53
Good taste
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A befitting commentry on modern life of living beyond the means. Loved it
May 1st, 2025 10:23
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A befitting commentry on modern life of living beyond the means. Loved it
May 1st, 2025 10:23
Ponderings
David Wakeling said:
This is some amazing word play. Some enigmatic sounds to ponder.Great read
May 1st, 2025 05:20
David Wakeling said:
This is some amazing word play. Some enigmatic sounds to ponder.Great read
May 1st, 2025 05:20
Ponderings
MDStone said:
Oh yes indeed, I heard it. Well done yet again, Soren. We learn to ignore the things that go “bump” in the night, but those whispers are hard to ignore. Thank for sharing.
May 1st, 2025 05:16
MDStone said:
Oh yes indeed, I heard it. Well done yet again, Soren. We learn to ignore the things that go “bump” in the night, but those whispers are hard to ignore. Thank for sharing.
May 1st, 2025 05:16
Ponderings
arqios said:
Who gets to say we’re insane is quite a debatable issue 🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2025 05:11
arqios said:
Who gets to say we’re insane is quite a debatable issue 🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2025 05:11
Ponderings
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well maybe you are normal after all if you are insane! What a fun and visual write, i felt as if the three bears were going to burst through the cabin door in the Forrest lol 🤣 brilliant, way to keep the reader on their toes, with smell and emotion and the scene so beautifully created. 🌹
May 1st, 2025 04:05
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well maybe you are normal after all if you are insane! What a fun and visual write, i felt as if the three bears were going to burst through the cabin door in the Forrest lol 🤣 brilliant, way to keep the reader on their toes, with smell and emotion and the scene so beautifully created. 🌹
May 1st, 2025 04:05
Blackness\' light
Goldfinch60 said:
But whenever darkness is there we know that light will be waiting for all soren.
Andy
May 1st, 2025 03:20
Goldfinch60 said:
But whenever darkness is there we know that light will be waiting for all soren.
Andy
May 1st, 2025 03:20
Unknot the not
Amy Michelle Mosier said:
This seems like something that spilled onto the paper. Nicely done!
April 30th, 2025 22:14
Amy Michelle Mosier said:
This seems like something that spilled onto the paper. Nicely done!
April 30th, 2025 22:14
Footprints on a beaten path
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for sharing how creativity transcends time, even when the source is forgotten. I hope I can leave something for my grandchildren to read, something I\'ve written.
April 30th, 2025 18:01
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for sharing how creativity transcends time, even when the source is forgotten. I hope I can leave something for my grandchildren to read, something I\'ve written.
April 30th, 2025 18:01
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