Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Night
David Wakeling said:
Wow now this is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout.real poetry. rhyme cadence metaphors it is all here.Well done
December 26th, 2024 15:04
David Wakeling said:
Wow now this is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout.real poetry. rhyme cadence metaphors it is all here.Well done
December 26th, 2024 15:04
Night
Poetic Licence said:
A Sultry Kiss of a Siren Breeze, what a wonderful line, enjoyed the read.
December 26th, 2024 06:12
Poetic Licence said:
A Sultry Kiss of a Siren Breeze, what a wonderful line, enjoyed the read.
December 26th, 2024 06:12
Night
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary imagery I saw it all, wow sorrenbarret you have out done your own poetry with this one, profound beauty. I am truly lucky that I see the magic of night most evenings here in Tuscany, I remember the first time I ever looked up at the sky at night, I almost fell over it was so beautiful 🌹
December 26th, 2024 04:44
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary imagery I saw it all, wow sorrenbarret you have out done your own poetry with this one, profound beauty. I am truly lucky that I see the magic of night most evenings here in Tuscany, I remember the first time I ever looked up at the sky at night, I almost fell over it was so beautiful 🌹
December 26th, 2024 04:44
Night
arqios said:
The night has always been a mistress like the Lady of the Lake to me, outside my childhood bedroom window was this huge avocado tree on the crest of a hill that always figured in the moments just before sleep as the Night smiled and saw me off to sleep.
December 26th, 2024 03:56
arqios said:
The night has always been a mistress like the Lady of the Lake to me, outside my childhood bedroom window was this huge avocado tree on the crest of a hill that always figured in the moments just before sleep as the Night smiled and saw me off to sleep.
December 26th, 2024 03:56
A message sent in the common way lasts only one day
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words always be with us soren.
Andy
December 26th, 2024 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words always be with us soren.
Andy
December 26th, 2024 02:42
A message sent in the common way lasts only one day
Teddy.15 said:
lol so very clever. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 02:14
Teddy.15 said:
lol so very clever. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 02:14
Call of the earth
NafisaSB said:
a true but sad commentary on age catching up with us all - let us hope for good health for the remaining years, and may 2025 see us fulfilling many items on our bucket list
merry x\'mas and happy 2025 in advance
December 26th, 2024 02:02
NafisaSB said:
a true but sad commentary on age catching up with us all - let us hope for good health for the remaining years, and may 2025 see us fulfilling many items on our bucket list
merry x\'mas and happy 2025 in advance
December 26th, 2024 02:02
A message sent in the common way lasts only one day
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
rhyme, rhythm and flow!! 👍
I really enjoyed it,
way to go bro,!! 😀 🌟🌟
Love it!! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 25th, 2024 22:17
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
rhyme, rhythm and flow!! 👍
I really enjoyed it,
way to go bro,!! 😀 🌟🌟
Love it!! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 25th, 2024 22:17
A message sent in the common way lasts only one day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah…the power of poetry! I love how it compares poems to honey and jewels - sweet and precious. And I concur on the longevity difference between ordinary communication and the poetic craft! Poetry rings and sings to the soul. Anyway, wonderful, though-provoking poem, my friend! Merry Christmas to you!
December 25th, 2024 13:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah…the power of poetry! I love how it compares poems to honey and jewels - sweet and precious. And I concur on the longevity difference between ordinary communication and the poetic craft! Poetry rings and sings to the soul. Anyway, wonderful, though-provoking poem, my friend! Merry Christmas to you!
December 25th, 2024 13:22
A message sent in the common way lasts only one day
2781 said:
I have no illusions, we can only hope some sticks, because most will be lost in time.
December 25th, 2024 09:41
2781 said:
I have no illusions, we can only hope some sticks, because most will be lost in time.
December 25th, 2024 09:41
A message sent in the common way lasts only one day
arqios said:
I love the power that poetry has in communicating land making it stick over a long period of time. Encourages us to be busy bees when it comes to weaving and crafting poems with meaning and depth. Thank you kindly.
December 25th, 2024 06:07
arqios said:
I love the power that poetry has in communicating land making it stick over a long period of time. Encourages us to be busy bees when it comes to weaving and crafting poems with meaning and depth. Thank you kindly.
December 25th, 2024 06:07
A message sent in the common way lasts only one day
orchidee said:
Good write SB. That fat beardy bloke has gone for another year! lol.
December 25th, 2024 03:12
orchidee said:
Good write SB. That fat beardy bloke has gone for another year! lol.
December 25th, 2024 03:12
Soft or hard
Goldfinch60 said:
Two types of life brought into our world soren, may the softer ones fill it with glory.
Andy
December 25th, 2024 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Two types of life brought into our world soren, may the softer ones fill it with glory.
Andy
December 25th, 2024 02:53
Soft or hard
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
and so true! 👍
Terrific use of
metaphor,
great rhyme, rhythm
and flow!!💯
Tempered and forged
quite eloquently, thank you!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
PS: Merry Christmas! 🎄⛄🧑🎄🌟
December 24th, 2024 22:01
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
and so true! 👍
Terrific use of
metaphor,
great rhyme, rhythm
and flow!!💯
Tempered and forged
quite eloquently, thank you!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
PS: Merry Christmas! 🎄⛄🧑🎄🌟
December 24th, 2024 22:01
Soft or hard
Michael Edwards said:
I read your poem and one thought came to mind \'forged in the brighest flame\' a line that will go into my \'Ideas Box\' for later use - a sign of a great poem - ie one thar inspires others.
December 24th, 2024 15:17
Michael Edwards said:
I read your poem and one thought came to mind \'forged in the brighest flame\' a line that will go into my \'Ideas Box\' for later use - a sign of a great poem - ie one thar inspires others.
December 24th, 2024 15:17
Soft or hard
Bella Shepard said:
Could it be that adversity is the best teacher, if the student embraces it and learns. You\'ve given much food for thought here, and I thank you.
December 24th, 2024 13:17
Bella Shepard said:
Could it be that adversity is the best teacher, if the student embraces it and learns. You\'ve given much food for thought here, and I thank you.
December 24th, 2024 13:17
Soft or hard
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful and deep poem that can both be taken outwardly (meaning an outward view of the world) or inwardly (at one\'s own self, circumstances, and influence on others). Either way, brilliantly penned, my dear friend! Merry Christmas to you and your family.
December 24th, 2024 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful and deep poem that can both be taken outwardly (meaning an outward view of the world) or inwardly (at one\'s own self, circumstances, and influence on others). Either way, brilliantly penned, my dear friend! Merry Christmas to you and your family.
December 24th, 2024 11:04
Soft or hard
Teddy.15 said:
Peace on earth my dear friend, peace on earth, may 2025 be a year where all world leaders find more wisdom and inspiration and demonstrate it for our young instead of what we have been seeing in these years🌹
December 24th, 2024 04:08
Teddy.15 said:
Peace on earth my dear friend, peace on earth, may 2025 be a year where all world leaders find more wisdom and inspiration and demonstrate it for our young instead of what we have been seeing in these years🌹
December 24th, 2024 04:08
Soft or hard
Neville said:
I have a thing about damascus steel & have a fine collection of sharp pointy things all custom made in forges from around the globe .. all kept in a temperature controlled environment .. I also have a thing about Damascus & Syria and loose sleep over both on a regular basis .. I may be a million miles off target today but it had to be said & it felt safer letting go of it here .. forgive me .. Neville
December 24th, 2024 03:31
Neville said:
I have a thing about damascus steel & have a fine collection of sharp pointy things all custom made in forges from around the globe .. all kept in a temperature controlled environment .. I also have a thing about Damascus & Syria and loose sleep over both on a regular basis .. I may be a million miles off target today but it had to be said & it felt safer letting go of it here .. forgive me .. Neville
December 24th, 2024 03:31
Soft or hard
arqios said:
The malleable seem to gain more durability and longevity, in general.
December 24th, 2024 03:30
arqios said:
The malleable seem to gain more durability and longevity, in general.
December 24th, 2024 03:30
Ax of division
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, sometime those cracks are never healed.
Andy
December 24th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, sometime those cracks are never healed.
Andy
December 24th, 2024 02:51
Ax of division
MendedFences27 said:
Your poem digs deep into the wounds that never heal. Some situations are not salvageable. Sometimes a clean break is the only solution. - Phil A.
December 23rd, 2024 23:39
MendedFences27 said:
Your poem digs deep into the wounds that never heal. Some situations are not salvageable. Sometimes a clean break is the only solution. - Phil A.
December 23rd, 2024 23:39
Ax of division
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting style. Creates a Charles Dicken like atmosphere. Excellent.
December 23rd, 2024 21:12
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting style. Creates a Charles Dicken like atmosphere. Excellent.
December 23rd, 2024 21:12
Ax of division
Thad Wilk said:
Yes, Father Time can\'t
always heal all wounds
and if so, the scars will
never really fade. 😢
A very touching poem
eloquently penned!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 23rd, 2024 20:20
Thad Wilk said:
Yes, Father Time can\'t
always heal all wounds
and if so, the scars will
never really fade. 😢
A very touching poem
eloquently penned!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 23rd, 2024 20:20
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