Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Rejection
L. B. Mek said:
acutely, pertinent questions
in this
most segregated of time\'s
for humanity\'s, fragmented
sense of civility and society..
still, even if one of us is asking
the searchingly right questions
then we may hope, another
will have a proposition or theory
that can guide us
to helping us find
the answers we need..
\'in hope, we intrust!\'
(such
a wonderfully thought provoking
write!
thanks for sharing)
July 13th, 2022 23:31
L. B. Mek said:
acutely, pertinent questions
in this
most segregated of time\'s
for humanity\'s, fragmented
sense of civility and society..
still, even if one of us is asking
the searchingly right questions
then we may hope, another
will have a proposition or theory
that can guide us
to helping us find
the answers we need..
\'in hope, we intrust!\'
(such
a wonderfully thought provoking
write!
thanks for sharing)
July 13th, 2022 23:31
Rejection
Bella Shepard said:
Five exquisite lines! Questions that will always confound us. And your final line may save some peace of mind, what more can you do?
July 13th, 2022 10:42
Bella Shepard said:
Five exquisite lines! Questions that will always confound us. And your final line may save some peace of mind, what more can you do?
July 13th, 2022 10:42
If I loved you i\'d tell you
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Paul for your review and witty comment. It is appreciated
July 6th, 2022 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Paul for your review and witty comment. It is appreciated
July 6th, 2022 09:11
If I loved you i\'d tell you
Paul Bell said:
Like adopting an Elephant online, then it turns up to your high rise flat. I\'m here for you when you\'re at your lowest, the grave digger remarked to himself.
July 6th, 2022 04:23
Paul Bell said:
Like adopting an Elephant online, then it turns up to your high rise flat. I\'m here for you when you\'re at your lowest, the grave digger remarked to himself.
July 6th, 2022 04:23
Riddles
Paul Bell said:
Life and the riddle of it.
We\'re all in it in our own way, going where we\'re going, but never really going at all. Maybe that\'s the whole joke of life, we find out at the end.
July 4th, 2022 11:08
Paul Bell said:
Life and the riddle of it.
We\'re all in it in our own way, going where we\'re going, but never really going at all. Maybe that\'s the whole joke of life, we find out at the end.
July 4th, 2022 11:08
Riddles
arqios said:
Playful and yet hinting of a deeper undertone of meaning. Very creative, Soren. And it’s fun to read as well! Thanks for sharing.
July 3rd, 2022 09:14
arqios said:
Playful and yet hinting of a deeper undertone of meaning. Very creative, Soren. And it’s fun to read as well! Thanks for sharing.
July 3rd, 2022 09:14
Aquarium
Paul Bell said:
Neat little humans, taming everything in site, aren\'t we just super.
July 2nd, 2022 06:59
Paul Bell said:
Neat little humans, taming everything in site, aren\'t we just super.
July 2nd, 2022 06:59
Believe
Doggerel Dave said:
Well put, Soren.
But I don\'t have to believe at all because I don\'t know.
Doesn\'t matter - I\'m still here, enjoyed the ride and whatever happens next (can\'t be far away) will happen.
July 1st, 2022 18:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Well put, Soren.
But I don\'t have to believe at all because I don\'t know.
Doesn\'t matter - I\'m still here, enjoyed the ride and whatever happens next (can\'t be far away) will happen.
July 1st, 2022 18:24
Lost in the past
arqios said:
And that\'s the indelible truth! We see history through those perspectives, coloured by the tints of those lenses. Thanks for sharing, Soren.
June 28th, 2022 22:35
arqios said:
And that\'s the indelible truth! We see history through those perspectives, coloured by the tints of those lenses. Thanks for sharing, Soren.
June 28th, 2022 22:35
Messages from beyond
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, being open minded can show us the true way.
Andy
June 16th, 2022 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, being open minded can show us the true way.
Andy
June 16th, 2022 00:15
Messages from beyond
Bella Shepard said:
So very well said dear poet! The path is there if we choose to see it, and take it.
June 15th, 2022 11:07
Bella Shepard said:
So very well said dear poet! The path is there if we choose to see it, and take it.
June 15th, 2022 11:07
Messages from beyond
arqios said:
What is more is waiting, always waiting… thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 09:45
arqios said:
What is more is waiting, always waiting… thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 09:45
Psychological cancer
arqios said:
When people drag you into their thought life it can be very dangerous and like your title! It’s a psychological cancer. Thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 08:35
arqios said:
When people drag you into their thought life it can be very dangerous and like your title! It’s a psychological cancer. Thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 08:35
Broken
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much L.B. for taking your time to review this, Your comments mean alot.
June 13th, 2022 21:40
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much L.B. for taking your time to review this, Your comments mean alot.
June 13th, 2022 21:40
Broken
arqios said:
Like a toxic armour that does not only deflect but numbs. A potent poem. Thanks for sharing.
June 13th, 2022 07:27
arqios said:
Like a toxic armour that does not only deflect but numbs. A potent poem. Thanks for sharing.
June 13th, 2022 07:27
Broken
L. B. Mek said:
it can be a cruel world, most times
I feel
we should all be recognised
whenever
we make it back to our pillows
as just surviving our days
is an achievement, most times...
stay strong! dear Poet
June 13th, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
it can be a cruel world, most times
I feel
we should all be recognised
whenever
we make it back to our pillows
as just surviving our days
is an achievement, most times...
stay strong! dear Poet
June 13th, 2022 04:35
Love Unrequited
dusk arising said:
An amazing and painfully sad tale. People can be amazing having learned so much from life\'s cruelties.
Super piece I\'m pleased you changed the font. Pleased I read it.
June 4th, 2022 09:23
dusk arising said:
An amazing and painfully sad tale. People can be amazing having learned so much from life\'s cruelties.
Super piece I\'m pleased you changed the font. Pleased I read it.
June 4th, 2022 09:23
Love Unrequited
dusk arising said:
Ouch at that font. Sorry Soren but i can\'t read it.
June 4th, 2022 01:40
dusk arising said:
Ouch at that font. Sorry Soren but i can\'t read it.
June 4th, 2022 01:40
English
arqios said:
And to top it off, the more you interact in English, with English, the more it becomes a part of you! Thank you for sharing.
May 1st, 2022 18:38
arqios said:
And to top it off, the more you interact in English, with English, the more it becomes a part of you! Thank you for sharing.
May 1st, 2022 18:38
English
Crowns4Christ said:
Haha, I totally agree with this, it can be very confusing
April 30th, 2022 22:56
Crowns4Christ said:
Haha, I totally agree with this, it can be very confusing
April 30th, 2022 22:56
Love and fear
dusk arising said:
So true. We are and we become the love that we share.
April 29th, 2022 13:43
dusk arising said:
So true. We are and we become the love that we share.
April 29th, 2022 13:43
Almost a sonnet
Rozina said:
I enjoyed reading this, the lines are very meaningful.
April 28th, 2022 18:00
Rozina said:
I enjoyed reading this, the lines are very meaningful.
April 28th, 2022 18:00
Almost a sonnet
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful, flowing, conveys such tender feelings of a soulful relationship. Just loved it!
April 28th, 2022 14:49
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful, flowing, conveys such tender feelings of a soulful relationship. Just loved it!
April 28th, 2022 14:49
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