Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



The machine
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes, it is embryonic, Soren. I really enjoyed this – you make your justified reservations very clear. But there is hope. Some folks are detoxifying from their smart phones, eschewing social media.
I haven’t read ‘Brave New World’ for over sixty years; I must give it another go…..


June 20th, 2024 21:17

The machine
Teddy.15 said:

I never use the word hate but if I did it would be for technology. It\'s ruined the world and brought Pandora back from the dead. Yet there are some nice reasons to have it. A superb discussion from your wonderful lines. 🌹

June 20th, 2024 17:17

The machine
MLHnow said:

Love this poem!
I t is valuable for us to consider ourselves in the bigger picture and so removed from our natural connections

June 20th, 2024 16:11

The machine
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

June 20th, 2024 13:30

The machine
2781 said:

It\'s a beast.

June 20th, 2024 09:31

The machine
orchidee said:

I\'m controlled by an old trout KP! lol.

June 20th, 2024 08:10

The machine
Mutley Ravishes said:

Right on the money, Soren.
Steiner and co saw this coming
All those years ago

June 20th, 2024 07:14

Smoke of dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Dreams come from very many palces soren.

Andy

June 20th, 2024 01:28

Smoke of dreams
Cassie58 said:

Visually stunning in its movement and unpredictability. Beautifully penned stanzas sorenbarrett.

June 19th, 2024 23:44

Smoke of dreams
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 19th, 2024 11:31

Smoke of dreams
Teddy.15 said:

Burning dreams up in smoke, don\'t we all relate to that dearest sorrenbarret. Brilliant lines as they always are and a wonderful ending from what I remember. Authentic beauty in this poem. 🌹

June 19th, 2024 10:17

Smoke of dreams
2781 said:

Purging the dross?

June 19th, 2024 05:45

Imagination
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful fun write soren.

Andy

June 19th, 2024 01:10

Imagination
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work. You make the scene come alive.

June 18th, 2024 15:11

Imagination
Alan R said:

Ah that bittersweet!

June 18th, 2024 13:21

Imagination
2781 said:

I feel the frustration.

June 18th, 2024 08:03

Imagination
Doggerel Dave said:

So let\'s misinterpret, Soren - not every hot randy coupling is smooth and easy.....😓💦

June 18th, 2024 07:51

Imagination
orchidee said:

Fido warned me about anything \'hot\' - real or imaginary - in my poem for today! lol.

June 18th, 2024 05:05

Best friend
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren showing the love that can exist between us and dogs.

Andy

June 18th, 2024 01:45

Best friend
2781 said:

God spelt backwards

June 17th, 2024 19:18

Best friend
Teddy.15 said:

Dearest sorrenbarret charming and so full of wisdom, just because one may be old we still have feelings, and we always deserve love, animals the same. 🌹

June 17th, 2024 15:33

Best friend
Cassie58 said:

A beautiful reminder of the loyalty and unconditional love you can receive from a four legged friend. My dog Solo is amazing. Lovely , warming write sorenbarrett. All the best.

June 17th, 2024 11:07

Best friend
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Man\'s best friend.

June 17th, 2024 10:16

Best friend
Bella Shepard said:

This is a wonderful poem dedicated to incredible sentient, self aware creatures who love us no matter what , and deserve our unconditional love in return. You\'ve brightened my morning, and I thank you my friend. Have a wonderful day!

June 17th, 2024 08:47

Best friend
orchidee said:

Yes! says Fido. lol.

June 17th, 2024 04:41

Mediocrity
Goldfinch60 said:

So much can be found in poetry soren.

Andy

June 17th, 2024 01:43

Mediocrity
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous imagery.

June 16th, 2024 11:14

Mediocrity
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 16th, 2024 11:04

Mediocrity
2781 said:

And their all made out of ticky-tacky and they all look just the same.
I heard that song on the radio today.

June 16th, 2024 06:35

Mediocrity
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes – poetry is the form I find easy to use in order to push my views of the world and its ways. If I knew of a better way I would go there…any suggestions gratefully received.
A rich write, Soren.


June 16th, 2024 06:20



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