Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Sigh of a storm
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful metaphors sorenbarrett and much admired imagery. Your beautiful poem speaks to me of death and rebirth. Lovely.
February 16th, 2025 12:23
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful metaphors sorenbarrett and much admired imagery. Your beautiful poem speaks to me of death and rebirth. Lovely.
February 16th, 2025 12:23
Record Player
MendedFences27 said:
Your poem spins memories for its reader. Vinyl plastic at its best. I still have hordes of them stashed in a closet. I play them rarely. I still have a phonograph so no excuses, except the ease of listening to the downloads, but what memories they do reflash. Loved it- Phil A.
February 16th, 2025 11:04
MendedFences27 said:
Your poem spins memories for its reader. Vinyl plastic at its best. I still have hordes of them stashed in a closet. I play them rarely. I still have a phonograph so no excuses, except the ease of listening to the downloads, but what memories they do reflash. Loved it- Phil A.
February 16th, 2025 11:04
Record Player
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve definitely played this record before and my copy seems to be broken. The ending on repeat where I\'d rather it not be. Love this metaphor. Gets a fave! Brilliantly done. 🌹👏
February 16th, 2025 10:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve definitely played this record before and my copy seems to be broken. The ending on repeat where I\'d rather it not be. Love this metaphor. Gets a fave! Brilliantly done. 🌹👏
February 16th, 2025 10:57
Record Player
orchidee said:
I saw some record players for sale - making a comeback? Though I got a strange look from someone, when I asked: \'Do you still sell videos?\'
February 16th, 2025 10:43
orchidee said:
I saw some record players for sale - making a comeback? Though I got a strange look from someone, when I asked: \'Do you still sell videos?\'
February 16th, 2025 10:43
Record Player
Neville said:
For as long as I live n breathe, I shall regret getting shot of all my vinyl .. I\'m now only about half way through replacing them but of course loads are no longer avinynable .. N
February 16th, 2025 07:29
Neville said:
For as long as I live n breathe, I shall regret getting shot of all my vinyl .. I\'m now only about half way through replacing them but of course loads are no longer avinynable .. N
February 16th, 2025 07:29
Record Player
Ma5on said:
Soren,
Your piece beautifully captures the bittersweet nature of nostalgia, using music as a metaphor for memories resurfacing. The imagery of a phonograph playing forgotten tunes is evocative & sets a melancholic yet elegant tone.
You create a rhymthic feel by offering different musical elements to create a vivid visual & emotion.
I am this morning playing some early Pet Shop Boys on vinyl so this was a welcome piece to read whilst hearing that vinyl static scatch, as arqios mentioned, in the background.
This is a well-crafted, evocative poem with a strong nostalgic theme.
Off to turn up that amp!
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 06:59
Ma5on said:
Soren,
Your piece beautifully captures the bittersweet nature of nostalgia, using music as a metaphor for memories resurfacing. The imagery of a phonograph playing forgotten tunes is evocative & sets a melancholic yet elegant tone.
You create a rhymthic feel by offering different musical elements to create a vivid visual & emotion.
I am this morning playing some early Pet Shop Boys on vinyl so this was a welcome piece to read whilst hearing that vinyl static scatch, as arqios mentioned, in the background.
This is a well-crafted, evocative poem with a strong nostalgic theme.
Off to turn up that amp!
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 06:59
Record Player
Teddy.15 said:
How true, music can bring so much in emotional memories good and bad, music for me is certainly the key to remembering. 🌹 You have such a warm poetic heart dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 16th, 2025 06:44
Teddy.15 said:
How true, music can bring so much in emotional memories good and bad, music for me is certainly the key to remembering. 🌹 You have such a warm poetic heart dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 16th, 2025 06:44
Record Player
Poetic Licence said:
Records are so like photographs, they instantly remind you of places, feelings and people of the past. Enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 06:06
Poetic Licence said:
Records are so like photographs, they instantly remind you of places, feelings and people of the past. Enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 06:06
Record Player
arqios said:
Nothing like the scratchy, staticky sound of needle on vinyl! The vibrations of the turntable revolution soothed the cheek on the wooden floor! 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 03:34
arqios said:
Nothing like the scratchy, staticky sound of needle on vinyl! The vibrations of the turntable revolution soothed the cheek on the wooden floor! 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 03:34
Sigh of a storm
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new moment is a new moment in our life to be enjoyed soren.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new moment is a new moment in our life to be enjoyed soren.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:44
Sigh of a storm
John Prophet said:
And just like that it’s done. Great write!
John
February 15th, 2025 19:25
John Prophet said:
And just like that it’s done. Great write!
John
February 15th, 2025 19:25
Sigh of a storm
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful and very creative with the rhyme scheme.
February 15th, 2025 18:19
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful and very creative with the rhyme scheme.
February 15th, 2025 18:19
Sigh of a storm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this poem, I read of birth, death, rebirth and the struggle of it all. A beautiful poem, friend. Love the metaphor! 🌹👏 Easy fave!
February 15th, 2025 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this poem, I read of birth, death, rebirth and the struggle of it all. A beautiful poem, friend. Love the metaphor! 🌹👏 Easy fave!
February 15th, 2025 09:35
Sigh of a storm
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoying the calm before the storm arrives, enjoyed the read
February 15th, 2025 08:03
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoying the calm before the storm arrives, enjoyed the read
February 15th, 2025 08:03
Sigh of a storm
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful the very rebirth of a new day
I see two metaphors here, one could also be about our inner struggles. 🌹
February 15th, 2025 06:32
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful the very rebirth of a new day
I see two metaphors here, one could also be about our inner struggles. 🌹
February 15th, 2025 06:32
Sigh of a storm
arqios said:
That’s such a scary thing to me, being in the eye of the storm, it’s like waiting to be fish slapped from both directions, certain of uncertainty! 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 06:12
arqios said:
That’s such a scary thing to me, being in the eye of the storm, it’s like waiting to be fish slapped from both directions, certain of uncertainty! 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 06:12
Sigh of a storm
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful writing. Well constructed verse. Th passing of the day and the rebirth.
February 15th, 2025 04:45
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful writing. Well constructed verse. Th passing of the day and the rebirth.
February 15th, 2025 04:45
All loss
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words soren, may that change soon and love and happiness return to your life.
Andy
February 15th, 2025 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words soren, may that change soon and love and happiness return to your life.
Andy
February 15th, 2025 02:45
All loss
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
A powerful and emotional reflection on loneliness and the human experience. Well written!
February 14th, 2025 21:32
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
A powerful and emotional reflection on loneliness and the human experience. Well written!
February 14th, 2025 21:32
Sonnett of an old man
whats write for me said:
Wow, that creates visceral visuals. Such strong prose.
February 14th, 2025 17:34
whats write for me said:
Wow, that creates visceral visuals. Such strong prose.
February 14th, 2025 17:34
All loss
David Wakeling said:
That\'s life it can be hard work being alone and getting old. Clever rhyming in the middle of the line.I think Sylvia Plath experimented with that style.Well done
February 14th, 2025 15:36
David Wakeling said:
That\'s life it can be hard work being alone and getting old. Clever rhyming in the middle of the line.I think Sylvia Plath experimented with that style.Well done
February 14th, 2025 15:36
Naive
whats write for me said:
Excellent verse, life is like a vapor, disappearing before our very eyes. The way it moves, mixing with the threads of other\'s lives.
February 14th, 2025 13:35
whats write for me said:
Excellent verse, life is like a vapor, disappearing before our very eyes. The way it moves, mixing with the threads of other\'s lives.
February 14th, 2025 13:35
All loss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sadly, this is where I am this morning, this week, this month, this year. The past couple of years. Well done, Soren. For me, Valentine\'s Day is depressing at best, so this was the read I needed! 🌹👏🙏❤️
February 14th, 2025 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sadly, this is where I am this morning, this week, this month, this year. The past couple of years. Well done, Soren. For me, Valentine\'s Day is depressing at best, so this was the read I needed! 🌹👏🙏❤️
February 14th, 2025 09:55
Carpe diem without conscience
2781 said:
You paint my picture, but I finally found my conscience.
February 14th, 2025 06:07
2781 said:
You paint my picture, but I finally found my conscience.
February 14th, 2025 06:07
All loss
Poetic Licence said:
Hits all the nails on the head, for some this is a very painful and sad day, very nicely written
February 14th, 2025 05:41
Poetic Licence said:
Hits all the nails on the head, for some this is a very painful and sad day, very nicely written
February 14th, 2025 05:41
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