Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Gone
MendedFences27 said:
This reminded me of the Dutch Elm Disease that wiped out all the chestnut trees in the U.S. They died from the inside out, became a hollowed-out trunk and nothing else. Can we try to save our natural environment?
- Phil A.
May 27th, 2025 14:28
MendedFences27 said:
This reminded me of the Dutch Elm Disease that wiped out all the chestnut trees in the U.S. They died from the inside out, became a hollowed-out trunk and nothing else. Can we try to save our natural environment?
- Phil A.
May 27th, 2025 14:28
Gone
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I see some trees with rot or leaning over. Must have strong roots so as not to come crashing down.
A joke now (argh): What is brown and green, and if it fell on you out of a tree, would kill you? Nope, not a branch - but a snooker table! heehee.
May 27th, 2025 07:56
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I see some trees with rot or leaning over. Must have strong roots so as not to come crashing down.
A joke now (argh): What is brown and green, and if it fell on you out of a tree, would kill you? Nope, not a branch - but a snooker table! heehee.
May 27th, 2025 07:56
Gone
Poetic Licence said:
To be free we have to discard all the rot around us and the debris of our life\'s, a very positive message, may take a bit of time!!!, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 06:43
Poetic Licence said:
To be free we have to discard all the rot around us and the debris of our life\'s, a very positive message, may take a bit of time!!!, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 06:43
Floral memories
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Lilacs have always been my favorite! A touching poem of seasons and changes.
May 27th, 2025 05:23
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Lilacs have always been my favorite! A touching poem of seasons and changes.
May 27th, 2025 05:23
Gone
Salvia.S said:
A powerful metaphor about decay and the need to let go of what clings to us - quietly thought-provoking and beautifully written.
May 27th, 2025 04:40
Salvia.S said:
A powerful metaphor about decay and the need to let go of what clings to us - quietly thought-provoking and beautifully written.
May 27th, 2025 04:40
Gone
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave nature’s truth with haunting grace—
a stark reminder to shed what decays, leaving no trace.
May 27th, 2025 04:24
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave nature’s truth with haunting grace—
a stark reminder to shed what decays, leaving no trace.
May 27th, 2025 04:24
Gone
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderfully constructrd piece.There is a great metaphor in the fallen tree.I see the secret to freedom is get rid of \"debris\" or things we don\'t need, An enjoyable clever poem.Well done
May 27th, 2025 04:09
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderfully constructrd piece.There is a great metaphor in the fallen tree.I see the secret to freedom is get rid of \"debris\" or things we don\'t need, An enjoyable clever poem.Well done
May 27th, 2025 04:09
Gone
Teddy.15 said:
I see two very important meanings to this poem, I see the soul of a person and a soul of a tree. Wonderful 🌹
May 27th, 2025 04:02
Teddy.15 said:
I see two very important meanings to this poem, I see the soul of a person and a soul of a tree. Wonderful 🌹
May 27th, 2025 04:02
Pebbles
Salvia.S said:
A beautifully evocative poem - fleeting, elemental and ephemeral.
May 27th, 2025 03:13
Salvia.S said:
A beautifully evocative poem - fleeting, elemental and ephemeral.
May 27th, 2025 03:13
Pebbles
Goldfinch60 said:
THos ripples can turn into waves soren but then they can turn back into ripples.
Andy
May 27th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
THos ripples can turn into waves soren but then they can turn back into ripples.
Andy
May 27th, 2025 01:24
Pebbles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the metaphor, pebbles creating ripples, and have used it myself; never in a poem though. Well done, Soren. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 15:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the metaphor, pebbles creating ripples, and have used it myself; never in a poem though. Well done, Soren. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 15:21
Good taste
Maryel said:
Poor neighbour. Just when he thought it was safe to go in the water! Darkly amusing.
May 26th, 2025 14:31
Maryel said:
Poor neighbour. Just when he thought it was safe to go in the water! Darkly amusing.
May 26th, 2025 14:31
Redemption in deception
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Nothing...and I mean nothing...is BLACK & WHITE. That\'s just faux security for the insecure. Well done on this poetic musing, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Nothing...and I mean nothing...is BLACK & WHITE. That\'s just faux security for the insecure. Well done on this poetic musing, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 08:48
Pebbles
Poetic Licence said:
In my turbulent mind these words do feel like a ripple in the pond, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 04:45
Poetic Licence said:
In my turbulent mind these words do feel like a ripple in the pond, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 04:45
Pebbles
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words ripple through time,
each verse a pebble in the mind’s pond—
beauty fleeting, impact eternal.
May 26th, 2025 04:38
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words ripple through time,
each verse a pebble in the mind’s pond—
beauty fleeting, impact eternal.
May 26th, 2025 04:38
Pebbles
David Wakeling said:
I read here that creatvity in the form of a Poem, a sand castle or a song sung cause ripples in the world but nothing lasts and their impact can actually disturb the balance.Quite a lot in a small space,Well done
May 26th, 2025 04:22
David Wakeling said:
I read here that creatvity in the form of a Poem, a sand castle or a song sung cause ripples in the world but nothing lasts and their impact can actually disturb the balance.Quite a lot in a small space,Well done
May 26th, 2025 04:22
Pebbles
Teddy.15 said:
Having read this many times each time the visions are more powerful, a wonderful title and how I could see those ripples. Superb as ever dear sorrenbarret 🌹
May 26th, 2025 03:57
Teddy.15 said:
Having read this many times each time the visions are more powerful, a wonderful title and how I could see those ripples. Superb as ever dear sorrenbarret 🌹
May 26th, 2025 03:57
Pebbles
Hollow Enigma said:
Always great reading your work! Hope that disturbance calms sooner than later.
A log burned, pages lost
I would say pages (Crossed, Tossed) to not say lost twice.
Ice sculpture dies belted
May 26th, 2025 03:21
Hollow Enigma said:
Always great reading your work! Hope that disturbance calms sooner than later.
A log burned, pages lost
I would say pages (Crossed, Tossed) to not say lost twice.
Ice sculpture dies belted
May 26th, 2025 03:21
Redemption in deception
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes we have to bend to truth to help others soren but hopefully we can find truer ways to do it.
Andy
May 26th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes we have to bend to truth to help others soren but hopefully we can find truer ways to do it.
Andy
May 26th, 2025 01:23
Redemption in deception
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see my message on • MOTTAKEENUR REHMAN>
• FIRST LOVE: THE AWAKENING
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-204491
May 25th, 2025 21:11
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see my message on • MOTTAKEENUR REHMAN>
• FIRST LOVE: THE AWAKENING
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-204491
May 25th, 2025 21:11
Redemption in deception
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Truth is always best. Well written.
May 25th, 2025 20:14
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Truth is always best. Well written.
May 25th, 2025 20:14
Redemption in deception
orchidee said:
It\'s the need to \'speak the truth in love\', I would say. If it\'s truth only, it can seem harsh, bigoted, \'like it or lump it\'. Maybe if it\'s love only, it can seem soft, wishy-washy, sentimental.
\'What\'s all this sensible thinking from you? I\'m the one who thinks sensibly\'. Fido says to me. lol. He knows.
May 25th, 2025 09:58
orchidee said:
It\'s the need to \'speak the truth in love\', I would say. If it\'s truth only, it can seem harsh, bigoted, \'like it or lump it\'. Maybe if it\'s love only, it can seem soft, wishy-washy, sentimental.
\'What\'s all this sensible thinking from you? I\'m the one who thinks sensibly\'. Fido says to me. lol. He knows.
May 25th, 2025 09:58
Redemption in deception
Salvia.S said:
Thought provoking!
Kindness can sometimes be a valid reason for deception, a little white lie can be more compassionate than harsh truth.
May 25th, 2025 06:01
Salvia.S said:
Thought provoking!
Kindness can sometimes be a valid reason for deception, a little white lie can be more compassionate than harsh truth.
May 25th, 2025 06:01
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