Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Unknot the not
justyouraveragewriter said:
Wow really love this. So very true to all of it
April 19th, 2025 09:38
justyouraveragewriter said:
Wow really love this. So very true to all of it
April 19th, 2025 09:38
Not what it seems
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Metaphors are hidden, no doubt—and that’s what rewards close readings. What always amazes me, however, are the metaphors hidden even from the author. There are times when I write something with a clear metaphor in mind—and that metaphor is definitely present—but then someone else sees another metaphor I didn’t initially intend. For me, that’s when the reader isn’t just rewarded by their close read—their close read ends up rewarding the poet. Wonderful poem, truly—and a magical appearance on the page. A fave from me, my friend. 🌹👏
April 19th, 2025 09:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Metaphors are hidden, no doubt—and that’s what rewards close readings. What always amazes me, however, are the metaphors hidden even from the author. There are times when I write something with a clear metaphor in mind—and that metaphor is definitely present—but then someone else sees another metaphor I didn’t initially intend. For me, that’s when the reader isn’t just rewarded by their close read—their close read ends up rewarding the poet. Wonderful poem, truly—and a magical appearance on the page. A fave from me, my friend. 🌹👏
April 19th, 2025 09:00
Not what it seems
Tony Grannell said:
The many colours of the chameleon as there are in the array of metaphors that enhance the flavours of poetry or as you so perfectly describe it: \'Camouflaged eloquence\'. Delightfully light in its narrative with a mellow flow and rhymed off to perfection. Excellent - accolades galore.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 19th, 2025 08:33
Tony Grannell said:
The many colours of the chameleon as there are in the array of metaphors that enhance the flavours of poetry or as you so perfectly describe it: \'Camouflaged eloquence\'. Delightfully light in its narrative with a mellow flow and rhymed off to perfection. Excellent - accolades galore.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 19th, 2025 08:33
Broken toys
teardrop said:
Ice cream boats on lemonade seas , you penned a very beautiful piece here poet. Looking forward to
reading more of your work.
April 19th, 2025 06:56
teardrop said:
Ice cream boats on lemonade seas , you penned a very beautiful piece here poet. Looking forward to
reading more of your work.
April 19th, 2025 06:56
Who died and made you God
teardrop said:
Words penned perfectly. Message well spoken. Judge not, throw the first stone, etc. Thank you for a beautiful read this morning.
April 19th, 2025 05:51
teardrop said:
Words penned perfectly. Message well spoken. Judge not, throw the first stone, etc. Thank you for a beautiful read this morning.
April 19th, 2025 05:51
Not what it seems
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely wonderful, I\'ve actually had the priveliage to hold a chameleon in my very hands and watch it change colour in Madagascar in the wild, your metaphor is truly graceful. Whether is the serpent or the angel. 🌹
April 19th, 2025 03:46
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely wonderful, I\'ve actually had the priveliage to hold a chameleon in my very hands and watch it change colour in Madagascar in the wild, your metaphor is truly graceful. Whether is the serpent or the angel. 🌹
April 19th, 2025 03:46
Not what it seems
arqios said:
A definite fave, Soren. Nicely presented on the page as well🙏🏻🕊️
April 19th, 2025 03:08
arqios said:
A definite fave, Soren. Nicely presented on the page as well🙏🏻🕊️
April 19th, 2025 03:08
Passing on
maydanae said:
I love the use of repetitive rhyming here in the different stanzas! Very simple but is nicely tied together :)
April 18th, 2025 21:20
maydanae said:
I love the use of repetitive rhyming here in the different stanzas! Very simple but is nicely tied together :)
April 18th, 2025 21:20
Acts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An excellent poem that acknowledges the reality that the very animals we admire are the same animals \"we\" kill to eat in a savory meal. (I put \"we\" in quotes because I am a vegetarian...but at one time I was not). Anyway, this is a powerful poem, Soren. 🌹👏
April 18th, 2025 16:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An excellent poem that acknowledges the reality that the very animals we admire are the same animals \"we\" kill to eat in a savory meal. (I put \"we\" in quotes because I am a vegetarian...but at one time I was not). Anyway, this is a powerful poem, Soren. 🌹👏
April 18th, 2025 16:12
Acts
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m not too sure you should ever share this with KFC 🤣 you always write with grace dear friend 🌹
April 18th, 2025 15:37
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m not too sure you should ever share this with KFC 🤣 you always write with grace dear friend 🌹
April 18th, 2025 15:37
Acts
Mutley Ravishes said:
Love the birds, Soren! Many of them come so close to the human world. Perhaps they\'re being prepared? Yes, I have eaten many of them.
Beautiful write.
April 18th, 2025 05:15
Mutley Ravishes said:
Love the birds, Soren! Many of them come so close to the human world. Perhaps they\'re being prepared? Yes, I have eaten many of them.
Beautiful write.
April 18th, 2025 05:15
Acts
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is about killing beautiful birds just to have a bit of lunch at the shooting party, something I do not agree with, nicely crafted write
April 18th, 2025 04:55
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is about killing beautiful birds just to have a bit of lunch at the shooting party, something I do not agree with, nicely crafted write
April 18th, 2025 04:55
Acts
arqios said:
A meal of game done well is a wonderful thing and yet its tragedy 🎭 brings us to a deeper awareness of what surrounds us.🙏🏻🕊
April 18th, 2025 03:33
arqios said:
A meal of game done well is a wonderful thing and yet its tragedy 🎭 brings us to a deeper awareness of what surrounds us.🙏🏻🕊
April 18th, 2025 03:33
Acts
David Wakeling said:
Birds are wonderful.They sing and fly.This is a clever tribute.Well done comendatore
April 18th, 2025 03:00
David Wakeling said:
Birds are wonderful.They sing and fly.This is a clever tribute.Well done comendatore
April 18th, 2025 03:00
Muse\'s blood
Goldfinch60 said:
Poems come from so many places that reach our minds soren.
Andy
April 18th, 2025 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Poems come from so many places that reach our minds soren.
Andy
April 18th, 2025 01:56
You will argue
mya said:
I love the feeling of uncertainty in this, and the questions with no easy answers are so thought provoking too!! amazing piece.
April 17th, 2025 14:30
mya said:
I love the feeling of uncertainty in this, and the questions with no easy answers are so thought provoking too!! amazing piece.
April 17th, 2025 14:30
Muse\'s blood
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Writing has been my life, my saving grace, the way I get to process my inner and outer worlds and connect with others in the world around me. It has been a blessing to me beyond all compare. Well done in expressing that so eloquently, Soren. 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 08:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Writing has been my life, my saving grace, the way I get to process my inner and outer worlds and connect with others in the world around me. It has been a blessing to me beyond all compare. Well done in expressing that so eloquently, Soren. 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 08:37
Muse\'s blood
Poetic Licence said:
Writing is what keeps me slightly connected to the normal world, and has been the only outlet i have ever felt comfortable in saying i feel, loved the read
April 17th, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
Writing is what keeps me slightly connected to the normal world, and has been the only outlet i have ever felt comfortable in saying i feel, loved the read
April 17th, 2025 06:18
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