Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Flies
Mutley Ravishes said:
The big fish eat the little ones!
That was a fun read, Soren.
February 21st, 2025 07:18
Mutley Ravishes said:
The big fish eat the little ones!
That was a fun read, Soren.
February 21st, 2025 07:18
Flies
Poetic Licence said:
On the fun side of this write I hate flies with a passion, on the serious side there are many messages in this write. How it needs one bad thing to go unchecked then it quickly multiplies, how greed becomes a disease, the more they the more they want etc etc, very nicely written and really enjoyed the read
February 21st, 2025 06:16
Poetic Licence said:
On the fun side of this write I hate flies with a passion, on the serious side there are many messages in this write. How it needs one bad thing to go unchecked then it quickly multiplies, how greed becomes a disease, the more they the more they want etc etc, very nicely written and really enjoyed the read
February 21st, 2025 06:16
Flies
arqios said:
The onset of a maggoty process, I’m afraid… prevention is always more effective than curative measures… 🙏🏻
February 21st, 2025 06:08
arqios said:
The onset of a maggoty process, I’m afraid… prevention is always more effective than curative measures… 🙏🏻
February 21st, 2025 06:08
Flies
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say this is about greed, I see the generosity of the peaceful narrator acceptance of what is going on, knowing he cannot change it, he reflects on what good he can get from the bad situation. I would go as far to say this could also be about politics. But who am I to say. 🌹 Ah yes lots to munch on. 🌹
February 21st, 2025 04:34
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say this is about greed, I see the generosity of the peaceful narrator acceptance of what is going on, knowing he cannot change it, he reflects on what good he can get from the bad situation. I would go as far to say this could also be about politics. But who am I to say. 🌹 Ah yes lots to munch on. 🌹
February 21st, 2025 04:34
Relics of the lost
Emile Dubois said:
Beautiful, I guess even in dementia the mind has the key, and yet one is sadly lost to oneself. Thanks for a stimulating read
February 21st, 2025 03:11
Emile Dubois said:
Beautiful, I guess even in dementia the mind has the key, and yet one is sadly lost to oneself. Thanks for a stimulating read
February 21st, 2025 03:11
Ultimate weapon
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of understanding soren.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of understanding soren.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:12
Ultimate weapon
James Michael said:
Great flow, rhyming and rhythm to this one. Metaphorically relatable. Well done!
February 20th, 2025 19:38
James Michael said:
Great flow, rhyming and rhythm to this one. Metaphorically relatable. Well done!
February 20th, 2025 19:38
All loss
Ladywithaquill said:
I thought the first line was biting but then the rest of it hits you and wow this poem really pierces your heart!
February 20th, 2025 15:36
Ladywithaquill said:
I thought the first line was biting but then the rest of it hits you and wow this poem really pierces your heart!
February 20th, 2025 15:36
Ultimate weapon
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a lot to unpack.I had to read it twice to appreciate it.Pity sympathy compassion they are all there .Amazing poem
February 20th, 2025 15:20
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a lot to unpack.I had to read it twice to appreciate it.Pity sympathy compassion they are all there .Amazing poem
February 20th, 2025 15:20
Ultimate weapon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
At first read, this comes off as a poem about empathy and compassion; however, some clues might alter that initial reading. Words such as pity and weapon. The lines: “no one can ignore / This a weapon of the mind refined / Treating the enemy as one below, disarming the hardest blow / Now shrunken the largest foe, disemboweled their ego”, are further evidence that this is someone who is using pity, compassion and empathy against others as weapon, perhaps utilizing it as a way of building themselves up why cutting others down. So, while this initially sounds like a sincerely compassionate person, he/she turns out to be a narcissist, weaponizing those otherwise good things against others for their own gain. Well done on this, my friend. A multi-layered and rewarding read. ❤️🙏 I apologize for my absence for the last couple of days. Been hit hard with a nasty cold. Finally, I feel somewhat alive again! LOL!
February 20th, 2025 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
At first read, this comes off as a poem about empathy and compassion; however, some clues might alter that initial reading. Words such as pity and weapon. The lines: “no one can ignore / This a weapon of the mind refined / Treating the enemy as one below, disarming the hardest blow / Now shrunken the largest foe, disemboweled their ego”, are further evidence that this is someone who is using pity, compassion and empathy against others as weapon, perhaps utilizing it as a way of building themselves up why cutting others down. So, while this initially sounds like a sincerely compassionate person, he/she turns out to be a narcissist, weaponizing those otherwise good things against others for their own gain. Well done on this, my friend. A multi-layered and rewarding read. ❤️🙏 I apologize for my absence for the last couple of days. Been hit hard with a nasty cold. Finally, I feel somewhat alive again! LOL!
February 20th, 2025 08:41
Ultimate weapon
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Such a beautiful and thought provoking poem! Well done!
February 20th, 2025 06:41
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Such a beautiful and thought provoking poem! Well done!
February 20th, 2025 06:41
Ultimate weapon
Neville said:
At times when one has a clear advantage, pity per se is indeed the most welcome and ultimate gift .. however, those that use it as a weapon will ultimately lose that advantage on what will become an uneven playing field .. this feels like something that is being played out write now .. and I note not a drop of ink wasted .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 05:28
Neville said:
At times when one has a clear advantage, pity per se is indeed the most welcome and ultimate gift .. however, those that use it as a weapon will ultimately lose that advantage on what will become an uneven playing field .. this feels like something that is being played out write now .. and I note not a drop of ink wasted .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 05:28
Ultimate weapon
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m a grand believer that some thrive on pity, I myself am not a fan of those sorts, I am a grand believer of justice ⚖️ and ego well, you know me well enough to know that\'s a thing I really dislike, I want to show you a line I love more but in this case it\'s every line, so powerful and indeed is the very reason I myself do not believe in God. Kudos, you just interpreted my own thoughts of today. 🤗 🌹
February 20th, 2025 05:25
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m a grand believer that some thrive on pity, I myself am not a fan of those sorts, I am a grand believer of justice ⚖️ and ego well, you know me well enough to know that\'s a thing I really dislike, I want to show you a line I love more but in this case it\'s every line, so powerful and indeed is the very reason I myself do not believe in God. Kudos, you just interpreted my own thoughts of today. 🤗 🌹
February 20th, 2025 05:25
Ultimate weapon
Poetic Licence said:
Loved this read of honest observations, with some great lines in.
February 20th, 2025 05:14
Poetic Licence said:
Loved this read of honest observations, with some great lines in.
February 20th, 2025 05:14
Ultimate weapon
arqios said:
How so very true! And no less in a poem too🙏🏻🕊
February 20th, 2025 03:48
arqios said:
How so very true! And no less in a poem too🙏🏻🕊
February 20th, 2025 03:48
Divine waste
NinjaGirl said:
Beautiful write...a lot of anger and questions which I can second!
February 19th, 2025 11:23
NinjaGirl said:
Beautiful write...a lot of anger and questions which I can second!
February 19th, 2025 11:23
Relics of the lost
whats write for me said:
Excellent prose, dark tinged memory.
February 19th, 2025 10:06
whats write for me said:
Excellent prose, dark tinged memory.
February 19th, 2025 10:06
Divine waste
Poetic Licence said:
That caught me off guard, powerful words of anger directed above,raw, passionate and to the point and i Loved it
February 19th, 2025 08:31
Poetic Licence said:
That caught me off guard, powerful words of anger directed above,raw, passionate and to the point and i Loved it
February 19th, 2025 08:31
Divine waste
Cassie58 said:
The poet’s words fall
as tear drops
Whatever horrors befall this earth, there will always be poets around who will record it with their own tears. There’s going to be alot of rain before the sun comes out.
Powerful write. Thought provoking.
February 19th, 2025 08:19
Cassie58 said:
The poet’s words fall
as tear drops
Whatever horrors befall this earth, there will always be poets around who will record it with their own tears. There’s going to be alot of rain before the sun comes out.
Powerful write. Thought provoking.
February 19th, 2025 08:19
Divine waste
arqios said:
Once the poet’s tears were salt off the Earth… these days the value appear to have dropped almost like a stock market crash.. and still we weep…
February 19th, 2025 05:39
arqios said:
Once the poet’s tears were salt off the Earth… these days the value appear to have dropped almost like a stock market crash.. and still we weep…
February 19th, 2025 05:39
Divine waste
David Wakeling said:
Wow some anger here and rightly so.God has a lot to answer for.Excellent.I enjoyed reading
February 19th, 2025 05:20
David Wakeling said:
Wow some anger here and rightly so.God has a lot to answer for.Excellent.I enjoyed reading
February 19th, 2025 05:20
Divine waste
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful and it\'s a kudos from me. 🌹
February 19th, 2025 05:14
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful and it\'s a kudos from me. 🌹
February 19th, 2025 05:14
Relics of the lost
Goldfinch60 said:
Tomorrows dawn will bring the light for those memories to be remembered soren.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Tomorrows dawn will bring the light for those memories to be remembered soren.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:49
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