Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Naive
David Wakeling said:

Wonderful poem. Well constructed and thoughtful. Love and truth there is a match made in Disney land.This poem made me think

February 13th, 2025 05:08

Naive
arqios said:

Wow, from slipping to disappearing to dissipating to disguising… like a slippery slope.”Ghostly deceptions,” indeed 🙏🏻🕊

February 13th, 2025 03:39

Naive
orchidee said:

I gave KP an old coat covered in ash for her birthday! lol.

February 13th, 2025 03:20

Naive
Teddy.15 said:

I have been writing about my first love for most of 30 years, that young open blinded moment is a must and I would never ever take it back, it taught me more than most of what I now know about love, your title is perfect, I would say to these young go live your love. A beautiful honest portrait of what in fact is love. 🌹 Wonderful.

February 13th, 2025 03:17

Music top hits
John Prophet said:

Great work…..

February 12th, 2025 20:53

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GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Not all music is created equal.

February 12th, 2025 13:54

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NinjaGirl said:

Interesting thought, well-written.

February 12th, 2025 13:30

Dragonfly
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:



February 12th, 2025 11:54

Dragonfly
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:

skittering insect
buzzfeeding “mosquito hawk”
try to guess my name

February 12th, 2025 11:54

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orchidee said:

Good write SB. Yes, I\'m an \'oldie\' preferring traditional stuff mainly. When something is re-done, or re-issued, I sometimes think \'Now you\'ve ruined it!\' Doh! There\'s a ghastly expression if some Psalms have been \'updated\'. We may say \'Now you\'ve murdered that Psalm\'.

February 12th, 2025 11:38

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Factory assembled bubble gum nothingness that lacks soul and will never move the cosmos like true art will. Truthfully, every generation has had this so long as a music \"industry\" has been around. Elvis, himself, got rich and famous off of the backs of some very talented people who happened to be \"the wrong color\" at the time. It is the very true and ugly underbelly of the music business. To each their own. As for me, I\'ve never been much of a radio listener. I\'m a music adventurer, but I do it on my own without the droning of the industry telling me what to consume! LOL! Well, I guess the industry still reaches us if we consume music of any variety, but I severely limit its reach! LOL! Well done on this Soren. 🌹👏

February 12th, 2025 10:31

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Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 12th, 2025 08:21

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Salvia.S 🌹 said:

Powerful critique of modern music! Well done!

February 12th, 2025 07:31

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Poetic Licence said:

I am a vinyl person and always have been, there are very artists around these days that can actually sing live and it sounds like a record, and the art of writing great songs has long gone. Love this poem highlighting the artificial music they churn out today.

February 12th, 2025 06:05

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arqios said:

Very rarely is a remake better than the original and I for one would pick preferred versions and renditions. Maybe they are that good to pass up redoing? So perhaps not totally a lack of originality. Perhaps 🤔🙏🏻🕊

February 12th, 2025 05:43

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David Wakeling said:

The music industry is a mess.I still listen to vinyl.It seems more genuine.Thoughtful poem on a modern topic.Well done

February 12th, 2025 05:16

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Teddy.15 said:

How true, we all have our own taste, I say bring back the vinyl of the 70\'s that\'s mine. A thought-provoking piece. We have some of the finest singers in the world also in Italy. 🌹

February 12th, 2025 04:45

Carpe diem without conscience
Mutley Ravishes said:

Wanting to exist until the end of time is our secret wish, isn\'t it? It has been demonstrated to us that this can be a living reality - if we are prepared to pay the price of entry!
Great write, Soren.

February 11th, 2025 18:55

Carpe diem without conscience
David Wakeling said:

That is the clear message of youth.A powerful poem about casting caution to the wind.Made me think

February 11th, 2025 15:11

Carpe diem without conscience
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is relatable on many levels. Living is a risky business, and yet we often ignore that fact. Nothing is guaranteed. What is really, truly known? And yet, the risk doesn\'t go away by staying stagnant in one place. So, we might as well intentionally risk living life and let the journey be our home. That is what I get out of this...that and the last line, so true. I think we all live like we will never die. It\'s a wonderful poem, and all around profound on this one! ❤️🙏

February 11th, 2025 12:06

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aDarkerMind said:

only one word to write on this piece Soren.....

Superb.

thank you my friend;

February 11th, 2025 11:19

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Cassie58 said:

My Dad and both my brothers pushed boundaries, were talented in business, reckless in approach at times and two of them died young. They certainly lived for the day. The women in the family were far more cautious. This writing really makes one look inwardly and reflect on their own experiences. I am not a gambler in any way:) maybe I learned lessons. Great read Soren.

February 11th, 2025 10:16

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

February 11th, 2025 09:47

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Poetic Licence said:

I enjoyed this read, take the gamble or play safe, or always a difficult question, but no progress has ever been made without taking a chance, lovely writing

February 11th, 2025 08:37

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arqios said:

Our freedom needs to be exercised and stood up for. No one ever pioneered nor thrived sitting down. A thesis well taken in this poem. 🙏🏻🕊️

February 11th, 2025 05:27

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Teddy.15 said:

Living for today, as much as we may wish too, there hopefully will be a tomorrow so being cautious of what we do is a must some don\'t have that and live on the edge always, I\'ve lived both, I took a massive gamble with nothing to lose and I gained, yet not always the case. A brilliant peice of poetry dearest sorrenbarret that will.make many reflect on your lines. 🌹 Wonderful title too. 🌹

February 11th, 2025 03:56

Tickles from the past
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true soren, we all leave marks in our lives for others to see.

Andy

February 11th, 2025 02:23

Wake of a muse
jennybee89 said:

I really like your inner poet! Great job!

February 10th, 2025 21:07

Word of rocks
jennybee89 said:

Very nice!

February 10th, 2025 21:06

Flocks
Shetonya Latryce said:

Love this. Birds and their unique ability to do what they do, has always fascinated me. Flocking to formations all the things birds are exciting. Thank you for your impeccable words.

February 10th, 2025 17:02



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