Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Life is but a dream
A.H. Browning said:

Excellent‼️‼️‼️

October 7th, 2024 00:31

Piled logs
Dan Williams said:

\"to become but an ashen memory\", kind of like us I guess. More good work here.

October 7th, 2024 00:08

Piled logs
arqios said:

Solid and strong, Soren! Innate indelible beauty in pristine lines. So glad to chance upon it 😊

October 6th, 2024 23:09

Masters of the universe?
arqios said:

Boneless fish would look like jellyfish minus the jelly and sea cucumbers 🥒 without that rubbery feel… gripping imagery!

October 6th, 2024 22:55

Piled logs
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

October 6th, 2024 19:05

Dust of a dream
arqios said:

Mighty images, familiar but filled with image and meaning. Resonates with souls well traveled 🙏🏻

October 6th, 2024 18:03

Piled logs
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 6th, 2024 07:49

Piled logs
Demar Desu said:

This poem should be stamped on any business that does cremation

October 6th, 2024 04:55

Circles of the invisible
Goldfinch60 said:

You ae right soren, being on this earth is just a flash in the pan of our existence.

Andy

October 6th, 2024 01:08

Circles of the invisible
Dan Williams said:

The idea of \"negatives of trees\" terrifies me. Especially when described by \"invisible ink from a dried-up pen\" So nice.

October 6th, 2024 00:12

Circles of the invisible
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent write. Indeed we are all born dying and the race back does being! Amazingly deep and profound write!!! From the first line to the last, brilliant!

October 5th, 2024 21:27

Circles of the invisible
2781 said:

Then shall the dust return to the earth as it was: and the spirit shall return unto God who gave it.

October 5th, 2024 10:45

Circles of the invisible
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 5th, 2024 08:28

Circles of the invisible
David Wakeling said:

This is quite a journey filled with amazing imagery. Very pleasant to read.

October 5th, 2024 06:58

Slumber painted dreams
Neville said:



I don\'t think that orange coloured tick tack woz an orange coloured tick tack

October 5th, 2024 06:55

Circles of the invisible
Neville said:


at first glance I couldn\'t see where you were going ..
but having gone around again, it was as clear as the nose on my face ..

October 5th, 2024 06:51

Slumber painted dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words soren.

Andy

October 5th, 2024 01:45

Slumber painted dreams
Dan Williams said:

You are just too clever. Fine work.

October 5th, 2024 00:08

Slumber painted dreams
Thad Wilk said:

Wonderfully depicted
poem and dreams penned!! 👏
Exhilarating awesomeness
a superb read my friend!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad

October 4th, 2024 21:22

Slumber painted dreams
Thomas W Case said:

Amazing work.

October 4th, 2024 16:10

Slumber painted dreams
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 4th, 2024 10:07

Running late
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words and so lucky to get away.

Andy

October 4th, 2024 01:20

Running late
Dan Williams said:

Hey, I think I was the guy in that other car. Nice work.

October 4th, 2024 00:32

Running late
David Wakeling said:

A lucky result. Great story and well constructed. I like the rhyme. Well done

October 3rd, 2024 18:50

Running late
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

October 3rd, 2024 13:58

Rings
Goldfinch60 said:

May that light be forever with you soren.

Andy

October 3rd, 2024 01:06

Life is but a dream
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Its such a beautiful write Soren!
Thanks for sharing.

October 3rd, 2024 00:50

Rings
Neville said:



October 2nd, 2024 04:50

Rings
Neville said:


this aint heavy .. it\'s just perfect ..
not just for the here and now,
but for any time .. Treemendous 🌳

October 2nd, 2024 04:50

Inside out
aDarkerMind said:

as good as a Haika can be Soren.

most impressed, as always.

October 2nd, 2024 03:00



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