Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Victim
Neville said:
say it like it needs to be said keep it ragged and real .. the way truth should always be .. much respect .. Neville
January 26th, 2025 05:52
Neville said:
say it like it needs to be said keep it ragged and real .. the way truth should always be .. much respect .. Neville
January 26th, 2025 05:52
Victim
David Wakeling said:
This is certainly a well-constructed powerful piece. I see Gods and Gladiators in the Colosseum. Well done Amazing
January 26th, 2025 05:32
David Wakeling said:
This is certainly a well-constructed powerful piece. I see Gods and Gladiators in the Colosseum. Well done Amazing
January 26th, 2025 05:32
Victim
arqios said:
Such a powerful, poignant and unsettling reflection on the human capacity for cruelty and the tragic consequences for those who are victimized. 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 26th, 2025 04:54
arqios said:
Such a powerful, poignant and unsettling reflection on the human capacity for cruelty and the tragic consequences for those who are victimized. 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 26th, 2025 04:54
Victim
Teddy.15 said:
My dearest sorrenbarret, one could take this so many ways so kudos for that,
Unblemished hide torn away, naked shame on display
Honos dies Maat cries
A feather to weigh, a Judas to betray
Pride justice and honor, I just keep going back to politics health and war, Victims, are we the ones who don\'t vote for the lunatics and those truly innocent souls who are right in the middle of it, a superb and very beautifully crafted piece of poetry. 🌹
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January 26th, 2025 04:51
Teddy.15 said:
My dearest sorrenbarret, one could take this so many ways so kudos for that,
Unblemished hide torn away, naked shame on display
Honos dies Maat cries
A feather to weigh, a Judas to betray
Pride justice and honor, I just keep going back to politics health and war, Victims, are we the ones who don\'t vote for the lunatics and those truly innocent souls who are right in the middle of it, a superb and very beautifully crafted piece of poetry. 🌹
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January 26th, 2025 04:51
Dinner with an old friend
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so hard to sit at a table with nobody else there soren, this happened to me when my wife died 5 years ago. All is different now though.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so hard to sit at a table with nobody else there soren, this happened to me when my wife died 5 years ago. All is different now though.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 02:53
Dinner with an old friend
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah what a poetic intrigue! Kudos for a sublime muse!
January 25th, 2025 23:39
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah what a poetic intrigue! Kudos for a sublime muse!
January 25th, 2025 23:39
Dinner with an old friend
Thad Wilk said:
A fascinating poem
and great brevity!! 👍
And the AN,
helped immensely! 🤩
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 25th, 2025 21:59
Thad Wilk said:
A fascinating poem
and great brevity!! 👍
And the AN,
helped immensely! 🤩
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 25th, 2025 21:59
Dinner with an old friend
Teddy.15 said:
We simply make do don\'t we? Such beautiful imagery, you made magic out of nothing. 🌹
January 25th, 2025 07:58
Teddy.15 said:
We simply make do don\'t we? Such beautiful imagery, you made magic out of nothing. 🌹
January 25th, 2025 07:58
Dinner with an old friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A profound poem, my friend. I love the complex, multi-layered nature of this and how it uses surreal imagery and dark symbolism to explore its themes, as I read it, of loss, memory, and the lingering ghost of those who died. Your note was very helpful in keeping me from pulling out the old dictionary. I knew what a flesh monger was, but I confess, I\'ve never encountered a tosher before! I suppose I would have known standing downwind! 🤣 For me (again, not sure if I am on the mark or not), the tosher represents a friend or a person who was on the margins in one way or another. I am not sure if I am anywhere remotely close on this, but it is what came across to me when I read it! Well done, Soren! ❤️🙏
January 25th, 2025 06:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A profound poem, my friend. I love the complex, multi-layered nature of this and how it uses surreal imagery and dark symbolism to explore its themes, as I read it, of loss, memory, and the lingering ghost of those who died. Your note was very helpful in keeping me from pulling out the old dictionary. I knew what a flesh monger was, but I confess, I\'ve never encountered a tosher before! I suppose I would have known standing downwind! 🤣 For me (again, not sure if I am on the mark or not), the tosher represents a friend or a person who was on the margins in one way or another. I am not sure if I am anywhere remotely close on this, but it is what came across to me when I read it! Well done, Soren! ❤️🙏
January 25th, 2025 06:58
Dinner with an old friend
arqios said:
Much like a dinner for one facing a reflective surface. This friend appears to be a Jack of all trades, and a vagabond at that. But I just got off a shift, so my mind isn’t the best. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 25th, 2025 06:17
arqios said:
Much like a dinner for one facing a reflective surface. This friend appears to be a Jack of all trades, and a vagabond at that. But I just got off a shift, so my mind isn’t the best. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 25th, 2025 06:17
Dinner with an old friend
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I feed KP with food from the sewers. Urgh! lol.
January 25th, 2025 03:48
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I feed KP with food from the sewers. Urgh! lol.
January 25th, 2025 03:48
Deflowered
Goldfinch60 said:
In all the things we see in our lives soren we learn more.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
In all the things we see in our lives soren we learn more.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:54
Wake of a muse
Cassie58 said:
When the muse is with you, how great that can feel. Mine is lazy and I have far more scribbles half started than I’ve ever posted. This reminds me how I can start with a couple of good lines only for them to descend into cast offs. Nothing cast off here sorenbarrett. Some great imagery.
January 24th, 2025 17:03
Cassie58 said:
When the muse is with you, how great that can feel. Mine is lazy and I have far more scribbles half started than I’ve ever posted. This reminds me how I can start with a couple of good lines only for them to descend into cast offs. Nothing cast off here sorenbarrett. Some great imagery.
January 24th, 2025 17:03
Deflowered
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is powerful.The fight between Nature and the senses.Nature often wins.Well done
January 24th, 2025 16:01
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is powerful.The fight between Nature and the senses.Nature often wins.Well done
January 24th, 2025 16:01
Deflowered
Bella Shepard said:
You extoll nature\'s rapture in breathtaking words of surrender. Exquisite!!!
January 24th, 2025 10:51
Bella Shepard said:
You extoll nature\'s rapture in breathtaking words of surrender. Exquisite!!!
January 24th, 2025 10:51
Deflowered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone with major seasonal allergies, I started to sniffle reading this one! Just glad you chose roses over lilac! 🤣 Well done, my friend. Your descriptions are second to none! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone with major seasonal allergies, I started to sniffle reading this one! Just glad you chose roses over lilac! 🤣 Well done, my friend. Your descriptions are second to none! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 09:09
Deflowered
Poetic Licence said:
I find it refreshing to read a piece of poetry that pushes against expected limits of poetry, i enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:21
Poetic Licence said:
I find it refreshing to read a piece of poetry that pushes against expected limits of poetry, i enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:21
Deflowered
arqios said:
Oh to be outdoors and free, be it in a humble back garden rose bed… the exhilaration is beyond description but you have done so in poem! 🌹🌹🌹
January 24th, 2025 06:16
arqios said:
Oh to be outdoors and free, be it in a humble back garden rose bed… the exhilaration is beyond description but you have done so in poem! 🌹🌹🌹
January 24th, 2025 06:16
Deflowered
Neville said:
This is quite simply exquisite my friend .. all my senses have been aroused & then some .. if you would kindly excuse the pun .. 🌻😎👍
January 24th, 2025 05:30
Neville said:
This is quite simply exquisite my friend .. all my senses have been aroused & then some .. if you would kindly excuse the pun .. 🌻😎👍
January 24th, 2025 05:30
Deflowered
Teddy.15 said:
You have uncovered the rose and it\'s mystical beauty my dear friend. Like everything in our lives time takes its toll. 🌹
January 24th, 2025 04:41
Teddy.15 said:
You have uncovered the rose and it\'s mystical beauty my dear friend. Like everything in our lives time takes its toll. 🌹
January 24th, 2025 04:41
Deflowered
orchidee said:
Good write again SB. I admit I don\'t get some of the more cryptic meanings in people\'s poems, but don\'t let that stop you - or anyone else!
January 24th, 2025 04:25
orchidee said:
Good write again SB. I admit I don\'t get some of the more cryptic meanings in people\'s poems, but don\'t let that stop you - or anyone else!
January 24th, 2025 04:25
Wake of a muse
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all rise in time soren and be together in a wonderful place of love and peace.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all rise in time soren and be together in a wonderful place of love and peace.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:14
Wake of a muse
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct,
a most captivating
and emotional write!!
Though your muse became
flaming clouds of smoke. 🔥
It will return,
So don\'t give up the fight! 🙏👍
Great read thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:25
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct,
a most captivating
and emotional write!!
Though your muse became
flaming clouds of smoke. 🔥
It will return,
So don\'t give up the fight! 🙏👍
Great read thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:25
Wake of a muse
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, you certainly woke me, I could smell the smouldering lines. Wonderful. 🌹 Love your title
January 23rd, 2025 12:27
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, you certainly woke me, I could smell the smouldering lines. Wonderful. 🌹 Love your title
January 23rd, 2025 12:27
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