Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Ax of division
Teddy.15 said:
Sweet dearest sorrenbarret, I have always been at odds with my father, I so appreciate this Sir. 🌹
December 23rd, 2024 17:18
Teddy.15 said:
Sweet dearest sorrenbarret, I have always been at odds with my father, I so appreciate this Sir. 🌹
December 23rd, 2024 17:18
Ax of division
Michael Edwards said:
Many are the wounds that never heal in the generation affected and often in future generations - and still the human race clings to its many Gods.
December 23rd, 2024 16:45
Michael Edwards said:
Many are the wounds that never heal in the generation affected and often in future generations - and still the human race clings to its many Gods.
December 23rd, 2024 16:45
Ax of division
Neville said:
The first cut is not always the deepest, is it .. but hey, now you got me sounding like a chip off the old block .. and now I can\'t get Thor out of my head .. but he had a hammer didn\'t he .. 🧑🎄👍
December 23rd, 2024 13:07
Neville said:
The first cut is not always the deepest, is it .. but hey, now you got me sounding like a chip off the old block .. and now I can\'t get Thor out of my head .. but he had a hammer didn\'t he .. 🧑🎄👍
December 23rd, 2024 13:07
Ax of division
Poetic Licence said:
Some wounds we can only put a bandage on, well written
December 23rd, 2024 11:40
Poetic Licence said:
Some wounds we can only put a bandage on, well written
December 23rd, 2024 11:40
Ax of division
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, time does not heal all wounds. Well expressed my friend! 🌹👏
December 23rd, 2024 10:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, time does not heal all wounds. Well expressed my friend! 🌹👏
December 23rd, 2024 10:11
On edge
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have had those problems on the edge of our lives soren but to reach the age I have I have overcome them.
Andy
December 23rd, 2024 03:04
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have had those problems on the edge of our lives soren but to reach the age I have I have overcome them.
Andy
December 23rd, 2024 03:04
On edge
Thad Wilk said:
A fantastic poem
the imagery out of sight! 👍
Great rhyme, rhythm and flow,
a treat to recite!! 💯👏
My pleasure to read indeed!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 22nd, 2024 20:02
Thad Wilk said:
A fantastic poem
the imagery out of sight! 👍
Great rhyme, rhythm and flow,
a treat to recite!! 💯👏
My pleasure to read indeed!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 22nd, 2024 20:02
On edge
Cassie58 said:
A stream of thoughts which appear to be random, almost like over thinking. Interesting imagery Soren. Beautifully penned.
December 22nd, 2024 14:26
Cassie58 said:
A stream of thoughts which appear to be random, almost like over thinking. Interesting imagery Soren. Beautifully penned.
December 22nd, 2024 14:26
On edge
Bella Shepard said:
Metaphorically sublime, rhythmicaly beautiful, such a gem!
December 22nd, 2024 13:32
Bella Shepard said:
Metaphorically sublime, rhythmicaly beautiful, such a gem!
December 22nd, 2024 13:32
On edge
Michael Edwards said:
A great read - it flows and worth another visit.
December 22nd, 2024 08:40
Michael Edwards said:
A great read - it flows and worth another visit.
December 22nd, 2024 08:40
On edge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have absolutely had those thoughts ride those storms and they can be friggin\' turbulent. On edge indeed. Well expressed, my friend. The imagery in this is rich, surreal and multilayered, just the way I like it. Well done! 👍
December 22nd, 2024 07:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have absolutely had those thoughts ride those storms and they can be friggin\' turbulent. On edge indeed. Well expressed, my friend. The imagery in this is rich, surreal and multilayered, just the way I like it. Well done! 👍
December 22nd, 2024 07:23
On edge
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Inside a thought riding a storm.\" One of the best lines I\'ve ever read, Soren!
December 22nd, 2024 04:09
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Inside a thought riding a storm.\" One of the best lines I\'ve ever read, Soren!
December 22nd, 2024 04:09
On edge
arqios said:
Loving the title choice on this one Soren, sets up the whole poem with tension, instability and vulnerability. In its chaos, offering a profound exploration of memory, pain, and the subtle hint of potential for renewal. An thought provoking \'portrait\' of the intricate and often turbulent nature of our minds, and the enduring hope that lies beneath the surface.
December 22nd, 2024 03:51
arqios said:
Loving the title choice on this one Soren, sets up the whole poem with tension, instability and vulnerability. In its chaos, offering a profound exploration of memory, pain, and the subtle hint of potential for renewal. An thought provoking \'portrait\' of the intricate and often turbulent nature of our minds, and the enduring hope that lies beneath the surface.
December 22nd, 2024 03:51
God\'s Christmas
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, may your god go with you.
Andy
December 22nd, 2024 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, may your god go with you.
Andy
December 22nd, 2024 02:14
God\'s Christmas
Doggerel Dave said:
Let folks make what they will of the Festive Season. You have made it with your well honed piece. A rich read, Soren. But it is going to take more than all the charities put together at all times of the year to resolve poverty and inequality.
I\'m going to raise a glass to all those poor poets in the north who are suffering in the Winter Solstice.😊
December 21st, 2024 18:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Let folks make what they will of the Festive Season. You have made it with your well honed piece. A rich read, Soren. But it is going to take more than all the charities put together at all times of the year to resolve poverty and inequality.
I\'m going to raise a glass to all those poor poets in the north who are suffering in the Winter Solstice.😊
December 21st, 2024 18:59
God\'s Christmas
Thad Wilk said:
Yes Christmas 🎄 seasons
a time of the year to show
we care, peace and goodwills
a blessing we all still share. 🙏
Awesome poem, thoughts
and message!!🤩👍
Best regards ✌️ y
December 21st, 2024 18:01
Thad Wilk said:
Yes Christmas 🎄 seasons
a time of the year to show
we care, peace and goodwills
a blessing we all still share. 🙏
Awesome poem, thoughts
and message!!🤩👍
Best regards ✌️ y
December 21st, 2024 18:01
God\'s Christmas
David Wakeling said:
A thoughtful poem.Brings some reality to the fantasy of Christmas.Made me think
December 21st, 2024 14:52
David Wakeling said:
A thoughtful poem.Brings some reality to the fantasy of Christmas.Made me think
December 21st, 2024 14:52
God\'s Christmas
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful with an enormity of metaphor that is most appreciated as I myself am not a single bit religious. Brilliant dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 21st, 2024 14:49
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful with an enormity of metaphor that is most appreciated as I myself am not a single bit religious. Brilliant dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 21st, 2024 14:49
Love of a father
Cassie58 said:
This is a moving read. It speaks to me of nurture. Qualities passed from father to son. I found strength in the lines and so much more. Strong roots, great foundations. Very nice Soren.
December 21st, 2024 14:03
Cassie58 said:
This is a moving read. It speaks to me of nurture. Qualities passed from father to son. I found strength in the lines and so much more. Strong roots, great foundations. Very nice Soren.
December 21st, 2024 14:03
God\'s Christmas
Cassie58 said:
Christmas time, a time to count our own blessings and to remember the many people who struggle with life for a myriad of different reasons. A time to be generous to those less fortunate. A beautiful, compassionate poem Soren. I am not a fan of organised religion but spiritual I will always be. Lovely work.
December 21st, 2024 13:58
Cassie58 said:
Christmas time, a time to count our own blessings and to remember the many people who struggle with life for a myriad of different reasons. A time to be generous to those less fortunate. A beautiful, compassionate poem Soren. I am not a fan of organised religion but spiritual I will always be. Lovely work.
December 21st, 2024 13:58
God\'s Christmas
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“ Christ lives in beggar clothes, / Allah in an infant\'s smile / Buddha is a rose that grows out of a garbage pile.” This is the heart of the Christmas message…that we are all connected and should not ignore others in their plight. That no one should be left without hope, peace, joy and love…not on Christmas Day or any other. Yet so many are. Your poem is excellent, my friend!
December 21st, 2024 13:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“ Christ lives in beggar clothes, / Allah in an infant\'s smile / Buddha is a rose that grows out of a garbage pile.” This is the heart of the Christmas message…that we are all connected and should not ignore others in their plight. That no one should be left without hope, peace, joy and love…not on Christmas Day or any other. Yet so many are. Your poem is excellent, my friend!
December 21st, 2024 13:41
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