Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Undeserving
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed. I like the rhyme. Guilt and shame are always with us.
December 12th, 2024 03:48
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed. I like the rhyme. Guilt and shame are always with us.
December 12th, 2024 03:48
Undeserving
arqios said:
For me this poem captures the frustration of life\'s fleeting joys and the weight of guilt and shame that makes them unattainable. The imagery of \"dissolving threads of sunlight\" and \"water between fingers\" poignantly illustrates the elusive nature of happiness and fulfilment. Yet a beautifully haunting reflection on the transient beauty in our lives.
December 12th, 2024 03:47
arqios said:
For me this poem captures the frustration of life\'s fleeting joys and the weight of guilt and shame that makes them unattainable. The imagery of \"dissolving threads of sunlight\" and \"water between fingers\" poignantly illustrates the elusive nature of happiness and fulfilment. Yet a beautifully haunting reflection on the transient beauty in our lives.
December 12th, 2024 03:47
Mist
arqios said:
I am loving the ephemeral beauty of a misty morning, where the interplay of light and shadow creates a sense of magic and wonder. The emphasis appears to be the fleeting and transformative moments in nature, where the mundane becomes extraordinary!
December 12th, 2024 02:45
arqios said:
I am loving the ephemeral beauty of a misty morning, where the interplay of light and shadow creates a sense of magic and wonder. The emphasis appears to be the fleeting and transformative moments in nature, where the mundane becomes extraordinary!
December 12th, 2024 02:45
Mist
Thad Wilk said:
Wonderfully vivid view
of the mornings sunrise! 🌄 🌅
Mellifluously penned my friend!!
Thanks for sharing your
superb poetic vision!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 11th, 2024 21:38
Thad Wilk said:
Wonderfully vivid view
of the mornings sunrise! 🌄 🌅
Mellifluously penned my friend!!
Thanks for sharing your
superb poetic vision!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 11th, 2024 21:38
Mist
Cassie58 said:
Stunning imagery of the sun breaking through the mist at dawn. Have seen that so many times on the river and it really is ghostly in its appearance. A word painting Soren. Just wonderful.
December 11th, 2024 07:57
Cassie58 said:
Stunning imagery of the sun breaking through the mist at dawn. Have seen that so many times on the river and it really is ghostly in its appearance. A word painting Soren. Just wonderful.
December 11th, 2024 07:57
The perfect poem
NafisaSB said:
TWO WORDS THAT ENCOMPASS A WORLD OF MEANING- THIS IS INDED BREVITY AT IT\'S BEST.
NEXT POEM ON YOURSELF [TITLED ME , MYSELF AND PERHAPS A BIT LONGER ?]
WAITING EAGERLY
December 11th, 2024 06:17
NafisaSB said:
TWO WORDS THAT ENCOMPASS A WORLD OF MEANING- THIS IS INDED BREVITY AT IT\'S BEST.
NEXT POEM ON YOURSELF [TITLED ME , MYSELF AND PERHAPS A BIT LONGER ?]
WAITING EAGERLY
December 11th, 2024 06:17
Mist
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Even though it is dark and no doubt dreary by me (we in the Northeast US need the rain)…you helped me see the sunrise and got me hungry for breakfast at the same time! Love that description of the sun rays! Well done, Soren!. 🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 06:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Even though it is dark and no doubt dreary by me (we in the Northeast US need the rain)…you helped me see the sunrise and got me hungry for breakfast at the same time! Love that description of the sun rays! Well done, Soren!. 🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 06:14
Mist
rin said:
I don\'t know if it\'s surrealism, but that\'s the image I got.
December 11th, 2024 05:02
rin said:
I don\'t know if it\'s surrealism, but that\'s the image I got.
December 11th, 2024 05:02
Mist
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely stunning imagery and so joyful at the end, in Tuscany we have these exact moments early in the morning this time of year, wonderful poetry as yours always is my dear sorrenbarret perfectly composed in a scene. 🌹
December 11th, 2024 04:07
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely stunning imagery and so joyful at the end, in Tuscany we have these exact moments early in the morning this time of year, wonderful poetry as yours always is my dear sorrenbarret perfectly composed in a scene. 🌹
December 11th, 2024 04:07
Words of the prophets
Goldfinch60 said:
Wise words can come from some very surprising places soren.
Andy
December 11th, 2024 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wise words can come from some very surprising places soren.
Andy
December 11th, 2024 02:15
Words of the prophets
Dan Williams said:
I love how this makes me cringe with gospel truth. Should be \"words from a prophet\".
December 11th, 2024 01:20
Dan Williams said:
I love how this makes me cringe with gospel truth. Should be \"words from a prophet\".
December 11th, 2024 01:20
Words of the prophets
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Powerful and thought provoking - absolutely loved it
December 11th, 2024 01:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Powerful and thought provoking - absolutely loved it
December 11th, 2024 01:16
Words of the prophets
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful and
poignant poem
and point of view!!👍
Can\'t trust some
news articles
half are untrue! 😲
Great read thank you!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 22:09
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful and
poignant poem
and point of view!!👍
Can\'t trust some
news articles
half are untrue! 😲
Great read thank you!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 22:09
Words of the prophets
David Wakeling said:
Out of the dust emerges the truth.This is a sad and powerful poem.Enjoyable read
December 10th, 2024 15:26
David Wakeling said:
Out of the dust emerges the truth.This is a sad and powerful poem.Enjoyable read
December 10th, 2024 15:26
Words of the prophets
Neville said:
I thought this was about the discovery of penicillin until it dawned on me it wasn\'t at all, but maybe about some kind of zealot or zealots .. like in lots of them .. perchance .. made me wonder deeply regardless .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 11:27
Neville said:
I thought this was about the discovery of penicillin until it dawned on me it wasn\'t at all, but maybe about some kind of zealot or zealots .. like in lots of them .. perchance .. made me wonder deeply regardless .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 11:27
Words of the prophets
rin said:
I really like this poem. I can see your image lurking in the depths of your words.
December 10th, 2024 10:52
rin said:
I really like this poem. I can see your image lurking in the depths of your words.
December 10th, 2024 10:52
Words of the prophets
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah yes...prophets. You know when they are true...or do you? Deceptive people tend to seem the most likable and then they hook you. Truth be told, whether it is in religion or in secular society, the real prophets are the ones in the streets calling FOUL agains injustice and getting stoned by the mob for going against the status quo. The ones filling the world with their hot air from comfortable chairs and cushy cars of commercial, Capitalistic prosperity and political poppycockery,...as well as those who think they are holier than thou as they ignore the religious texts they claim to follow...they\'re the prophets of this poem! This, my friend, is a masterful poem with a bird\'s eye view on deception. Well done! 🌹👏
December 10th, 2024 09:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah yes...prophets. You know when they are true...or do you? Deceptive people tend to seem the most likable and then they hook you. Truth be told, whether it is in religion or in secular society, the real prophets are the ones in the streets calling FOUL agains injustice and getting stoned by the mob for going against the status quo. The ones filling the world with their hot air from comfortable chairs and cushy cars of commercial, Capitalistic prosperity and political poppycockery,...as well as those who think they are holier than thou as they ignore the religious texts they claim to follow...they\'re the prophets of this poem! This, my friend, is a masterful poem with a bird\'s eye view on deception. Well done! 🌹👏
December 10th, 2024 09:59
Words of the prophets
orchidee said:
Nice disgusting food ideas for KP there, though she calls me that drunken buffoon! lol.
Good write there SB. I shaid - goodsh writesh there. I\'ve hadsh a few. Oops!
December 10th, 2024 08:27
orchidee said:
Nice disgusting food ideas for KP there, though she calls me that drunken buffoon! lol.
Good write there SB. I shaid - goodsh writesh there. I\'ve hadsh a few. Oops!
December 10th, 2024 08:27
Words of the prophets
Bobby O said:
So many phrases delicately woven. I’m still unraveling the drunken buffoon ending?
December 10th, 2024 07:32
Bobby O said:
So many phrases delicately woven. I’m still unraveling the drunken buffoon ending?
December 10th, 2024 07:32
Words of the prophets
arqios said:
Poets often fall under the category of drunken buffoons… and I don’t know whether that’s a good or a bad thing, but it is a thing… possibly worth considering.
December 10th, 2024 05:33
arqios said:
Poets often fall under the category of drunken buffoons… and I don’t know whether that’s a good or a bad thing, but it is a thing… possibly worth considering.
December 10th, 2024 05:33
Words of the prophets
Lorenz said:
Poetry is a dagger to tear the soul apart !
Very pleasant words in a blood and stripes fashion !
December 10th, 2024 03:53
Lorenz said:
Poetry is a dagger to tear the soul apart !
Very pleasant words in a blood and stripes fashion !
December 10th, 2024 03:53
Words of the prophets
Teddy.15 said:
Such truth and irony in here it\'s amazing to see how religion can bring one to their own life of slavery. There is extreme power in this dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
December 10th, 2024 03:51
Teddy.15 said:
Such truth and irony in here it\'s amazing to see how religion can bring one to their own life of slavery. There is extreme power in this dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
December 10th, 2024 03:51
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