Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Yesterday
Teddy.15 said:

This is one of the most touching poems I\'ve ever read about missing ones wife, loved every line especially about your son, I really understand. Beautiful as can be and so creative. Bravo my dearest sorrenbarret 🌹

August 17th, 2024 08:10

Yesterday
Neville said:

there are those who insist that nothing is new, or nothing ever changes ..
I say nothing stays the same and you just gone and proved it .. nice, very ..

August 17th, 2024 07:24

Yesterday
Doggerel Dave said:

The passage of time Soren, modifies,and sometimes, grows into maturity.
I think you covered that nicely.

August 17th, 2024 05:52

Ripples
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words soren, those ripples can go on forever.

Andy

August 17th, 2024 01:17

Ripples
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderful write, ✍️
great imagery my friend! 👍
Captivating beginning
to end! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad

August 16th, 2024 17:54

Ripples
Neville said:


this reinforces the view that nothing happens in isolation & that everything is in some way or ways interconnected & likewise influenced ..

August 16th, 2024 10:23

Ripples
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.
My poem goes something like:
In muddy waters much sewage is found
And plenty green algae...
All stuff I give KP to eat and drink! heehee.

August 16th, 2024 09:00

Ripples
Mutley Ravishes said:

Beautiful poem, Soren. Water and memory!

August 16th, 2024 05:02

Ripples
Teddy.15 said:

How very beautiful, I love your title too. Wonderful imagery and a soothing tone. 🌹


August 16th, 2024 04:56

A taste of honey
Goldfinch60 said:

No never been kissed by a bee but have been kissed many times by my beeautiful lover.

Andy

August 16th, 2024 01:19

Silent colors
Parisab said:

The whole of nature, describing primary colors…very inventive….

August 16th, 2024 01:03

Memory the cruelest reward
Dan Williams said:

Ah,\"glistening gossamer clouds
devouring dusty shadows of doom\" This might be the most optimistic thing ever. Thanks, I needed that.

August 15th, 2024 23:58

A taste of honey
Dan Williams said:

Honey will keep forever, hope this sentiment does too.

August 15th, 2024 23:16

A taste of honey
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this poem is 🐝 the bee’s knees! 🐝 Thank you please! Excellent write! Enjoyed it a lot! A sweet 🍯 and beautiful poetic musing! Bravo!

August 15th, 2024 22:46

A taste of honey
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

August 15th, 2024 10:57

A taste of honey
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:

Good write,







August 15th, 2024 10:51

A bad rap(tor)?
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write, Soren. Nicely done.

August 15th, 2024 07:43

A taste of honey
Cassie58 said:

Thank goodness it was a friendly bee and you didn’t get stung. A lovely sweet poem Soren. Have a happy day.

August 15th, 2024 06:24

A taste of honey
Doggerel Dave said:

In \'love\' and passion a sting is always a possibility......

August 15th, 2024 05:15

A taste of honey
Neville said:



some B\'s just tease .. how sweet is that .. now I can\'t close my eyes without seeing fields of cornflowers .. against a backdrop of humming ..


August 15th, 2024 05:14

A taste of honey
Bobby O said:

So as per this date the bee has eluded me
“ maybe you wanna give me kisses, sweet but only for one night and no repeat or maybe you’ll go away and never call a taste of honey is worse than none at all”

August 15th, 2024 05:01

A taste of honey
2781 said:

Is that how those lovely ladies stumbled on the beauty of botox

August 15th, 2024 04:54

A taste of honey
Teddy.15 said:

This is incredibly sweet. Did you know, some of the best honey in Europe can be found in Tuscany and indeed on the island of Elba, fun fact. 🌹

August 15th, 2024 03:58

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good words soren and so true.

Andy

August 15th, 2024 01:40

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Dan Williams said:

Well deserved praise for the subject and the author. nice.

August 15th, 2024 00:07

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2781 said:

I saw an angel standing in the sun, shouting to all the flying birds in Middle-Heaven, \"Come to the Great Supper of God! Feast on the flesh of kings, captains and champions, horses and their riders. Eat your fill of them all- free and slave, small and great!\"

For wheresoever the carcass is, there the vultures will gather.

August 14th, 2024 21:49

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Thad Wilk said:

A powerful and
captivating write! 👍
Intriguing to the
very last bite! 👌
Thanks for sharing
to read A delight!! 🦤
Best regards ✌️ Thad

August 14th, 2024 21:48

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Cassie58 said:

You know vultures get bad press. For the first time Soren I am looking at them in a different light, after reading your poem. Normally they give me the creeps. All the best.

August 14th, 2024 18:32

Time eroded memories
Thomas W Case said:

Superb and powerful work. Magnificent.

August 14th, 2024 17:52

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Bobby O said:

I love your list or at least my imagined view of it. First I imagine a question for a survey. Now this is not a commentary or judgement , it’s a survey to present just a raw number and observation of contrast
A thousand people asked one question.
“Do you regularly think of paying tribute and listing positive attributes of vultures in a poem?” The contrast without comment is that if surveyed your answer would be yes.

August 14th, 2024 17:20



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