Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Another day
aDarkerMind said:
murky reflections in faded fog...
love that line.
another fine write soren.
September 16th, 2024 06:04
aDarkerMind said:
murky reflections in faded fog...
love that line.
another fine write soren.
September 16th, 2024 06:04
Country walk
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren describing time in Nature\'s beautiful way.
Andy
September 16th, 2024 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren describing time in Nature\'s beautiful way.
Andy
September 16th, 2024 01:15
Country walk
Dan Williams said:
Spoken like a true country boy, at heart anyway. Nice.
September 16th, 2024 00:41
Dan Williams said:
Spoken like a true country boy, at heart anyway. Nice.
September 16th, 2024 00:41
Country walk
Teddy.15 said:
Wow I feel like I was with you on the country walk, I was on my own today in the magnificent hills of Florence but yours capture the smell too. Stunning write my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 15th, 2024 12:41
Teddy.15 said:
Wow I feel like I was with you on the country walk, I was on my own today in the magnificent hills of Florence but yours capture the smell too. Stunning write my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 15th, 2024 12:41
Country walk
aDarkerMind said:
a very expressive write soren.
picture perfect and most enjoyable.
September 15th, 2024 11:01
aDarkerMind said:
a very expressive write soren.
picture perfect and most enjoyable.
September 15th, 2024 11:01
Country walk
Cassie58 said:
Your words have captured some fine imagery here Soren. In my mind’s eye I saw movement and colour, sunlight and shadow. Lovely.
September 15th, 2024 10:38
Cassie58 said:
Your words have captured some fine imagery here Soren. In my mind’s eye I saw movement and colour, sunlight and shadow. Lovely.
September 15th, 2024 10:38
Mother\'s place
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, she will always be with us in life.
Andy
September 15th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, she will always be with us in life.
Andy
September 15th, 2024 01:21
Mother\'s place
Dan Williams said:
As someone who lost his Mother as a young child this rings as true to me; I will take your word for it.
September 15th, 2024 00:28
Dan Williams said:
As someone who lost his Mother as a young child this rings as true to me; I will take your word for it.
September 15th, 2024 00:28
Mother\'s place
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Both parents play a very important role in our lives, but we are more attached to our mothers. The sad part is that kids don\'t understand their true value until too late. No one can really pay back their mother or father.
Thank you for this poem Sorren. It is another reminder of the importance of MOTHERS.
September 14th, 2024 10:20
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Both parents play a very important role in our lives, but we are more attached to our mothers. The sad part is that kids don\'t understand their true value until too late. No one can really pay back their mother or father.
Thank you for this poem Sorren. It is another reminder of the importance of MOTHERS.
September 14th, 2024 10:20
Mother\'s place
Cassie58 said:
I so understand the need to do this. I wear my mum clothes. She died two years ago. I can still catch her scent on a good day. It keeps her fresh in my memory. Such beautiful sentiment here.
September 14th, 2024 04:51
Cassie58 said:
I so understand the need to do this. I wear my mum clothes. She died two years ago. I can still catch her scent on a good day. It keeps her fresh in my memory. Such beautiful sentiment here.
September 14th, 2024 04:51
Mother\'s place
Teddy.15 said:
I often put the coat on that my mum gave me as a present, you just always get it so perfectly. A hug from beyond. 🌹
September 14th, 2024 03:37
Teddy.15 said:
I often put the coat on that my mum gave me as a present, you just always get it so perfectly. A hug from beyond. 🌹
September 14th, 2024 03:37
Time flows backward
Goldfinch60 said:
Time flowing backward will take you to where you ave been already soren but they are just memories time flowing forward is exciting.
Andy
September 14th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Time flowing backward will take you to where you ave been already soren but they are just memories time flowing forward is exciting.
Andy
September 14th, 2024 01:21
Time flows backward
Dan Williams said:
You and your economy of words still getting the message across. Jealous.
September 14th, 2024 00:20
Dan Williams said:
You and your economy of words still getting the message across. Jealous.
September 14th, 2024 00:20
Time flows backward
adnan it is said:
Beautiful poem!! Could nearly understand the chaos unleashed right there..
September 13th, 2024 23:21
adnan it is said:
Beautiful poem!! Could nearly understand the chaos unleashed right there..
September 13th, 2024 23:21
The rusty nail
Tom Dylan said:
A fantastic piece. Another of your poems that works on so many levels. Well done, Soren.
September 13th, 2024 05:38
Tom Dylan said:
A fantastic piece. Another of your poems that works on so many levels. Well done, Soren.
September 13th, 2024 05:38
Time flows backward
Teddy.15 said:
Time flows backward
gravity\'s stream reversed
guilt in rash words
taken back in a life rehearsed
Dearest sorrenbarret this is so significant to me this week, I said something to my mother in law because she did something I didn\'t like, for me it was over after I said my piece but she is italian.lol all hell broke loose. I\'m still alive though 🤣
September 13th, 2024 04:46
Teddy.15 said:
Time flows backward
gravity\'s stream reversed
guilt in rash words
taken back in a life rehearsed
Dearest sorrenbarret this is so significant to me this week, I said something to my mother in law because she did something I didn\'t like, for me it was over after I said my piece but she is italian.lol all hell broke loose. I\'m still alive though 🤣
September 13th, 2024 04:46
The rusty nail
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things in our lives last for a very long time soren, this makes life wonderful.
Andy
September 13th, 2024 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things in our lives last for a very long time soren, this makes life wonderful.
Andy
September 13th, 2024 01:53
The rusty nail
Mutley Ravishes said:
Some houses are held together without nails!
Great write, Soren.
September 12th, 2024 18:36
Mutley Ravishes said:
Some houses are held together without nails!
Great write, Soren.
September 12th, 2024 18:36
The rusty nail
2781 said:
I\'ve noticed with nails (and other fasteners), they erode from the inside, often failing without warning.
September 12th, 2024 18:04
2781 said:
I\'ve noticed with nails (and other fasteners), they erode from the inside, often failing without warning.
September 12th, 2024 18:04
The rusty nail
Doggerel Dave said:
On a straightforward literal level, there was a rusty protruding nail which did tear my shirt and accepted the consequences.
On your clear account as a metaphor, there are many creatives (not exclusively poets) whose work, initially disparaged or ignored, gain acceptance as contributions to culture and social cohesion just as the nail, hammered in, continues to hold the house in place.
Interesting write I enjoyed, Soren.
September 12th, 2024 16:56
Doggerel Dave said:
On a straightforward literal level, there was a rusty protruding nail which did tear my shirt and accepted the consequences.
On your clear account as a metaphor, there are many creatives (not exclusively poets) whose work, initially disparaged or ignored, gain acceptance as contributions to culture and social cohesion just as the nail, hammered in, continues to hold the house in place.
Interesting write I enjoyed, Soren.
September 12th, 2024 16:56
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