Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Nowhere
Goldfinch60 said:

A wonderful place to be soren.

Andy

December 9th, 2022 02:37

Nowhere
sorenbarrett said:

Thanks Dave for stopping by and commenting on this piece.

December 8th, 2022 18:40

Nowhere
Doggerel Dave said:

Definitely a Dreamtime - a place where negativity could have a positive application - Thanks Soren.

December 8th, 2022 17:48

Conscience
Bella Shepard said:

You pose quite a serious question in this little pearl. A blameless life might give sweet repose, but on the other hand who does not at times second guess everything they\'ve ever done. Thank you for my contemplation of the day.

December 2nd, 2022 15:02

Conscience
Doggerel Dave said:

Only way out, I would think, Soren.

December 2nd, 2022 08:32

Conscience
dusk arising said:

LOL The screen would have the sleepy bits

December 2nd, 2022 08:21

Tombs to dreams
L. B. Mek said:

life-affirmingly powerful message!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
\'life\'s climb is ever easier
if we empty our baggage
as we go
if we carry too much regret
doubt we\'ll make it far
before we break down...)


December 2nd, 2022 05:04

Tombs to dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Every moment in our lives is so special, live in the now soren.

Andy

December 1st, 2022 02:28

Tombs to dreams
Doggerel Dave said:

All I have is now - dead right Soren.
The \'dead\' may well be true of tomorrow, but today is here, I have it, can use it. Yesterday cannot be changed.
Confirm I understood every word of your poem. Important principle engaged with here.

November 30th, 2022 18:03

Tombs to dreams
MR.apocalypse said:

this is not just good but personal

November 30th, 2022 13:39

Tombs to dreams
Bella Shepard said:

This poem touches every nerve. Truer words were never spoken. Each day is ours to make, and cherish, if only we have the wisdom to realize it. A very powerful write my friend, can\'t help but be a fav.

November 30th, 2022 10:16

Tombs to dreams
Bella Shepard said:

This poem touches every nerve. Truer words were never spoken. Each day is ours to make, and cherish, if only we have the wisdom to realize it. A very powerful write my friend, can\'t help but be a fav.

November 30th, 2022 10:16

Tombs to dreams
Ash :) said:

good write S.

November 30th, 2022 09:59

How you look at it
Bella Shepard said:

For me, this poem became more powerful with each line. The way you have framed it on the page serves to emphasize the opposites of life that have to be there. Such a great write my friend, and such a fav!

November 28th, 2022 12:25

How you look at it
Neville said:



.. uniquely poemed and elsewise excellent too .. very much enjoyed ..

November 28th, 2022 07:00

How you look at it
L. B. Mek said:

a great write, with an important message!
thank you, kind Poet
(this, that perspective: directive
of mindset
and importance of outlook
defining choices
curating regrets
and anchoring our achievements
if only
all monumental crossroads in life
came with angled mirrors
to widen the scope of our horizons)


November 28th, 2022 06:39

How you look at it
dusk arising said:

The choice is from within us once our mettel is tested.

November 28th, 2022 06:15

How you look at it
Doggerel Dave said:

And I thought I\'d got hope - despair, glass half full/empty all sorted. You\'ve given my picture more colour, Soren.

November 28th, 2022 05:53

How you look at it
arqios said:

A poem that celebrates and uplifts! Thanks Soren.

November 28th, 2022 05:17

Never enough
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true but love comes first.

Andy

November 26th, 2022 03:59

Never enough
orchidee said:

Good write S.

November 25th, 2022 08:11

A thin line
arqios said:

So thin in fact that one does overlap the other that is dominant. Growing up they told us that everyone has a dash of neuroses, one and all. The human mind is not black or white but actually filled with much grey matter. LOL. Good to be reading this. Thanks Soren. /Rik.

November 23rd, 2022 07:43

Passage
arqios said:

Whatever it takes to get there!

November 21st, 2022 08:36

Fear
Goldfinch60 said:

Fear is just as your words describe soren.

Andy

November 20th, 2022 02:43

Fear
arqios said:

Such is fear! Awesome poetic description.

November 19th, 2022 06:59

A thought
Bella Shepard said:

Concise and beautifully to the point. The last line is a gem. Love it!

November 17th, 2022 12:31

A thought
arqios said:

What a world it would be!

November 17th, 2022 07:53

Where is the rhyme?
Bella Shepard said:

This is a rhyming junkies dream, and I stand accused. Love it, love it, love it! You have striven and so beautifully given, a piece so sublime it staggers my mind. I have to rave, cause it\'s such a fav!

November 16th, 2022 16:22

Where is the rhyme?
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write soren.

Andy

November 16th, 2022 02:55

Where is the rhyme?
Doggerel Dave said:

Interesting soren, I\'ll have to give it some thought.... Nah, too much of a traditionalist to try it myself....but provided you give me warning first....

November 15th, 2022 19:42



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