Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Ephemeral Embrace
dusk arising said:
Such are the regrets on waking from euphoric dreams. Delaying arising to meet the day... clutching at fading remnants of that dream... I know this only too well...
Very well written, easily relateable. Hopefully they will return for your togetherness in the slumbers which await your nights ahead.
March 10th, 2022 12:19
dusk arising said:
Such are the regrets on waking from euphoric dreams. Delaying arising to meet the day... clutching at fading remnants of that dream... I know this only too well...
Very well written, easily relateable. Hopefully they will return for your togetherness in the slumbers which await your nights ahead.
March 10th, 2022 12:19
Ephemeral Embrace
Bella Shepard said:
Enchanting! As we wake we often try to hold onto those slender threads of a beautiful dream. Loved your poem.
March 10th, 2022 10:38
Bella Shepard said:
Enchanting! As we wake we often try to hold onto those slender threads of a beautiful dream. Loved your poem.
March 10th, 2022 10:38
From the dirt
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review and comment on this poem. Your comments are deeply appreciated.
March 7th, 2022 16:32
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review and comment on this poem. Your comments are deeply appreciated.
March 7th, 2022 16:32
From the dirt
Bella Shepard said:
I love the beautiful utilization of words in your poem. The way they shape, mold the essence of the piece. Loved the words, loved the poem.
March 7th, 2022 16:08
Bella Shepard said:
I love the beautiful utilization of words in your poem. The way they shape, mold the essence of the piece. Loved the words, loved the poem.
March 7th, 2022 16:08
From the dirt
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! This recalled a Sylvia Plath poem to mind, \"The Stones.\" It\'s very similar in execution in which the speaker is describing themselves as being this \"object\" and being handled by different people with their tools. This is an excerpt from the poem:
\"The jewelmaster drives his chisel to pry
Open one stone eye...
Heating the pincers, hoisting the delicate hammers.
A current agitates the wires
Volt upon volt.\"
I really enjoyed this poem and you did great! I love this sense of assurance in this person the speaker is describing, going as far as \"given [the speaker a] meaning. 👏✨
March 7th, 2022 13:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! This recalled a Sylvia Plath poem to mind, \"The Stones.\" It\'s very similar in execution in which the speaker is describing themselves as being this \"object\" and being handled by different people with their tools. This is an excerpt from the poem:
\"The jewelmaster drives his chisel to pry
Open one stone eye...
Heating the pincers, hoisting the delicate hammers.
A current agitates the wires
Volt upon volt.\"
I really enjoyed this poem and you did great! I love this sense of assurance in this person the speaker is describing, going as far as \"given [the speaker a] meaning. 👏✨
March 7th, 2022 13:51
Lovingly
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for taking your time to review and comment on this poem
March 5th, 2022 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for taking your time to review and comment on this poem
March 5th, 2022 19:34
Lovingly
Christina8 said:
This is a deeply personal and poignant write. Very well done!
March 4th, 2022 20:13
Christina8 said:
This is a deeply personal and poignant write. Very well done!
March 4th, 2022 20:13
An Answer Without a Question
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you Rocky for your review and comment. Reality is an illusion as are all others.
March 3rd, 2022 13:14
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you Rocky for your review and comment. Reality is an illusion as are all others.
March 3rd, 2022 13:14
An Answer Without a Question
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay, as opposed to Dusk\'s opinion, I personally enjoyed the font, as it fit in with the theme. I love the contradictory phrases you state and the paradoxes you opened were profound and sage. Interesting. \"Reality\'s an illusion\" 💖💖✨
March 3rd, 2022 11:43
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay, as opposed to Dusk\'s opinion, I personally enjoyed the font, as it fit in with the theme. I love the contradictory phrases you state and the paradoxes you opened were profound and sage. Interesting. \"Reality\'s an illusion\" 💖💖✨
March 3rd, 2022 11:43
An Answer Without a Question
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for your review and comments. I selected the font because like the poem it made it more difficult. Oh well some choices could have always been better in this life. Thanks again
March 3rd, 2022 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for your review and comments. I selected the font because like the poem it made it more difficult. Oh well some choices could have always been better in this life. Thanks again
March 3rd, 2022 11:36
An Answer Without a Question
dusk arising said:
I deny in full agreement where bright colours lead me through darkness.
I enjoyed your piece for your clever wordplay. The font was difficult though LOL.
March 3rd, 2022 11:33
dusk arising said:
I deny in full agreement where bright colours lead me through darkness.
I enjoyed your piece for your clever wordplay. The font was difficult though LOL.
March 3rd, 2022 11:33
The End
Christina8 said:
Well, it\'s inevitable! Death and the passing of time...wonderfully conveyed and written!
March 1st, 2022 18:10
Christina8 said:
Well, it\'s inevitable! Death and the passing of time...wonderfully conveyed and written!
March 1st, 2022 18:10
The End
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your review and comment Rocky.
March 1st, 2022 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your review and comment Rocky.
March 1st, 2022 13:33
A moment in time
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem stirs so many emotions of days gone by for me. Married 52 years and thinking back on so much life shared through thick and thin. Thank you for your beautiful words.
March 1st, 2022 12:10
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem stirs so many emotions of days gone by for me. Married 52 years and thinking back on so much life shared through thick and thin. Thank you for your beautiful words.
March 1st, 2022 12:10
The End
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a message! This was written very well and the evolution is felt. A passing of time and an understanding of the inevitable. 💖
March 1st, 2022 10:29
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a message! This was written very well and the evolution is felt. A passing of time and an understanding of the inevitable. 💖
March 1st, 2022 10:29
Another point of view
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for your review and kind comment.
March 1st, 2022 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for your review and kind comment.
March 1st, 2022 07:40
Another point of view
Bella Shepard said:
We have to have the opposites of life, the beginnings and ends. It\'s how we make sense of our world. It\'s how we learn from infancy. The trick is to find the balance, the equilibrium, which takes a lifetime of work and commitment for each one of us individually and collectively. Thank you for this stunning piece, loved it.
The pendulum has swung
February 28th, 2022 12:29
Bella Shepard said:
We have to have the opposites of life, the beginnings and ends. It\'s how we make sense of our world. It\'s how we learn from infancy. The trick is to find the balance, the equilibrium, which takes a lifetime of work and commitment for each one of us individually and collectively. Thank you for this stunning piece, loved it.
The pendulum has swung
February 28th, 2022 12:29
Another point of view
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your review and kind words. Sometimes you have to be crazy to see the truth.
February 28th, 2022 12:00
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your review and kind words. Sometimes you have to be crazy to see the truth.
February 28th, 2022 12:00
Another point of view
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! This was so freaking GOOD! I literally love how candid this poem was like absolutely no restraint and I live for that boldness. The social issues you touched on really made me feel hope. I love the way you worded this piece. The line \"The entrance to heaven is through hell\'s door\" literally captivated me! Like that\'s some profound stuff! I totally agree with this \"new point of view.\" Morality is in the eye of the beholder! 💖💖
February 28th, 2022 11:07
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! This was so freaking GOOD! I literally love how candid this poem was like absolutely no restraint and I live for that boldness. The social issues you touched on really made me feel hope. I love the way you worded this piece. The line \"The entrance to heaven is through hell\'s door\" literally captivated me! Like that\'s some profound stuff! I totally agree with this \"new point of view.\" Morality is in the eye of the beholder! 💖💖
February 28th, 2022 11:07
Snow
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your review. Your comments are greatly welcomed.
February 28th, 2022 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your review. Your comments are greatly welcomed.
February 28th, 2022 08:09
Snow
Christina8 said:
Beautiful Haiku. Easy to picture and then smell the pines. Wonderful!
February 27th, 2022 09:58
Christina8 said:
Beautiful Haiku. Easy to picture and then smell the pines. Wonderful!
February 27th, 2022 09:58
Seasons of a life
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you ao very much for taking your precious time to read and comment on it with such kind words.
February 26th, 2022 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you ao very much for taking your precious time to read and comment on it with such kind words.
February 26th, 2022 20:07
Seasons of a life
Rozina said:
Beautiful memories written in such a lovely way. I loved reading your poem. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2022 18:21
Rozina said:
Beautiful memories written in such a lovely way. I loved reading your poem. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2022 18:21
Seasons of a life
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for taking your time to review it and for your kind comments. They are most appreciated.
February 26th, 2022 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for taking your time to review it and for your kind comments. They are most appreciated.
February 26th, 2022 13:19
Seasons of a life
dusk arising said:
This is the most beautiful poem I have read in a long, long time. I knew it would go into my favourites long before i neared the ending.
I was hooked on the romance of childhood in your words and gently taken through acceptance of our own children moving on which you phrased so delicately and on.... to our senior years which i share now.
Yes a beautiful work. Well done and thank you so much for such a fine read today
February 26th, 2022 11:01
dusk arising said:
This is the most beautiful poem I have read in a long, long time. I knew it would go into my favourites long before i neared the ending.
I was hooked on the romance of childhood in your words and gently taken through acceptance of our own children moving on which you phrased so delicately and on.... to our senior years which i share now.
Yes a beautiful work. Well done and thank you so much for such a fine read today
February 26th, 2022 11:01
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