Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Serrated pages
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Silverfish and rat urine! This poem is vivid in its descriptive imagery. This beautifully describes the our memories through the passage of time...\"memory\'s graveyard of holes\", my favorite line (though every line is brilliant). This is a cathartic write my friend! Well done! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 15th, 2024 16:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Silverfish and rat urine! This poem is vivid in its descriptive imagery. This beautifully describes the our memories through the passage of time...\"memory\'s graveyard of holes\", my favorite line (though every line is brilliant). This is a cathartic write my friend! Well done! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 15th, 2024 16:49
Serrated pages
Cassie58 said:
Wow, so brilliantly penned. All those nasties. I think I’ll just stay outside Soren. Very vivid imagery.
November 15th, 2024 16:44
Cassie58 said:
Wow, so brilliantly penned. All those nasties. I think I’ll just stay outside Soren. Very vivid imagery.
November 15th, 2024 16:44
Glass prison
NafisaSB said:
wonderful way of describing a commonplace item, and the reactions.
keep it coming
November 15th, 2024 09:20
NafisaSB said:
wonderful way of describing a commonplace item, and the reactions.
keep it coming
November 15th, 2024 09:20
Ants
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing piece, Soren. Works on so many levels. Nicely done.
November 15th, 2024 09:10
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing piece, Soren. Works on so many levels. Nicely done.
November 15th, 2024 09:10
Serrated pages
arqios said:
Like the story of my vagabond life- familiar odours and textures; what a capture!
November 15th, 2024 07:57
arqios said:
Like the story of my vagabond life- familiar odours and textures; what a capture!
November 15th, 2024 07:57
Serrated pages
Neville said:
You sure got the edge over many of em .. You are also the only person other than me that I know, that has referenced silver fish (the kind I suspect you mean) in a poem ..
November 15th, 2024 05:54
Neville said:
You sure got the edge over many of em .. You are also the only person other than me that I know, that has referenced silver fish (the kind I suspect you mean) in a poem ..
November 15th, 2024 05:54
Serrated pages
Teddy.15 said:
Jagged edges of a page, so powerful and brilliant, your imagery brought me into see the paper shavings devoured by the rat. Beautifully done. 🌹 Your title is superb.
November 15th, 2024 05:00
Teddy.15 said:
Jagged edges of a page, so powerful and brilliant, your imagery brought me into see the paper shavings devoured by the rat. Beautifully done. 🌹 Your title is superb.
November 15th, 2024 05:00
Ants
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true of many people soren but I tend to think outside the box.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true of many people soren but I tend to think outside the box.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:46
Ants
MendedFences27 said:
\"Follow a scent trail. swallow rules, life sacrificed,\" Like sheep to the slaughter. Yet we can \"dance.\" Music and dance are universal and powerful. Maybe, a saving grace of humanity.
Loved your poem. _ Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:23
MendedFences27 said:
\"Follow a scent trail. swallow rules, life sacrificed,\" Like sheep to the slaughter. Yet we can \"dance.\" Music and dance are universal and powerful. Maybe, a saving grace of humanity.
Loved your poem. _ Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:23
Ants
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Great read, 💯
Busy, busy little
creatures, we are, life sacrificed
for a greater number indeed!! 🐜 🐜
Great use of metaphor,
and a treat to read!!
November 14th, 2024 17:22
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Great read, 💯
Busy, busy little
creatures, we are, life sacrificed
for a greater number indeed!! 🐜 🐜
Great use of metaphor,
and a treat to read!!
November 14th, 2024 17:22
Ants
Neville said:
it can be a very big and brave thing thinking outside the box .. but there\'s nothing selfish about looking at the big picture .. is there .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 07:54
Neville said:
it can be a very big and brave thing thinking outside the box .. but there\'s nothing selfish about looking at the big picture .. is there .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 07:54
Ants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A great metaphor, Soren. Much said in very few words. This is certainly how life feels...the endless droning on and on and on. The loss of individuality. Your poem is excellent and causes the reader to pause and reflect! A hallmark of great poetry. You are spot on with this! Well done, my friend! 🙏
November 14th, 2024 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A great metaphor, Soren. Much said in very few words. This is certainly how life feels...the endless droning on and on and on. The loss of individuality. Your poem is excellent and causes the reader to pause and reflect! A hallmark of great poetry. You are spot on with this! Well done, my friend! 🙏
November 14th, 2024 07:52
Ants
Cassie58 said:
Fascinating creatures to watch. Amazing workers. They know how to get a job done. Humans by comparison don’t cut the mustard. Multi meanings here. I also thought of world war 1 in particular. Enjoyed my visit.
November 14th, 2024 07:25
Cassie58 said:
Fascinating creatures to watch. Amazing workers. They know how to get a job done. Humans by comparison don’t cut the mustard. Multi meanings here. I also thought of world war 1 in particular. Enjoyed my visit.
November 14th, 2024 07:25
Ants
Doggerel Dave said:
In many ways, I\'d say.....
Worth thinking on, Soren.
November 14th, 2024 07:09
Doggerel Dave said:
In many ways, I\'d say.....
Worth thinking on, Soren.
November 14th, 2024 07:09
Ants
arqios said:
All we like ants are up for extermination, that’s how it feels on certain days. And speaking of scents, there were the tiniest of flowers that I caught a whiff of association, a scent that reminded me of bees, while I was walking to the mailbox today.
November 14th, 2024 05:28
arqios said:
All we like ants are up for extermination, that’s how it feels on certain days. And speaking of scents, there were the tiniest of flowers that I caught a whiff of association, a scent that reminded me of bees, while I was walking to the mailbox today.
November 14th, 2024 05:28
Ants
Demar Desu said:
Have you ever seen the movie Antz?! I believe you would really enjoy it. That being said, I’m just happy people are dancing
November 14th, 2024 04:58
Demar Desu said:
Have you ever seen the movie Antz?! I believe you would really enjoy it. That being said, I’m just happy people are dancing
November 14th, 2024 04:58
Scraps
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, brutal, and the last line just nails it.
November 14th, 2024 03:21
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, brutal, and the last line just nails it.
November 14th, 2024 03:21
Scraps
Goldfinch60 said:
Strnge things can happen behind closed doors soren, we may never know.
Andy
November 14th, 2024 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Strnge things can happen behind closed doors soren, we may never know.
Andy
November 14th, 2024 02:59
Scraps
Dan Williams said:
OK I have noticed falling rain on a sunny day. Clever all the same.
November 14th, 2024 00:24
Dan Williams said:
OK I have noticed falling rain on a sunny day. Clever all the same.
November 14th, 2024 00:24
Scraps
Mutley Ravishes said:
Time to get off the wheel?!
Great write, Soren.
November 13th, 2024 18:56
Mutley Ravishes said:
Time to get off the wheel?!
Great write, Soren.
November 13th, 2024 18:56
Scraps
Teddy.15 said:
I see the need to be grateful for what we have 🌹 beautiful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
November 13th, 2024 14:11
Teddy.15 said:
I see the need to be grateful for what we have 🌹 beautiful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
November 13th, 2024 14:11
Romp (acrostic)
Tom Dylan said:
Love this, Soren. Can relate to this from my own childhood scrapes.
November 13th, 2024 10:52
Tom Dylan said:
Love this, Soren. Can relate to this from my own childhood scrapes.
November 13th, 2024 10:52
Scraps
Neville said:
familiarity does not always breed contempt .. sometimes, and more often than not, behind closed doors, it fosters fear too .. Neville
November 13th, 2024 08:46
Neville said:
familiarity does not always breed contempt .. sometimes, and more often than not, behind closed doors, it fosters fear too .. Neville
November 13th, 2024 08:46
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