Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Ups and downs
Bella Shepard said:
I love a good brain teaser and this is a gem. You have played with the oddities of our language in the most delightful way. Thank you!
April 19th, 2022 09:23
Bella Shepard said:
I love a good brain teaser and this is a gem. You have played with the oddities of our language in the most delightful way. Thank you!
April 19th, 2022 09:23
Ups and downs
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the contradictions you portray. Truly thought-provoking and I\'m intrigued to journey further. Very well done!
April 19th, 2022 08:56
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the contradictions you portray. Truly thought-provoking and I\'m intrigued to journey further. Very well done!
April 19th, 2022 08:56
Psychotic world
dusk arising said:
Hmm fool or wise? I look at the trees and consider all they have seen in their long life and they sway nonchelantly. Immoveable presence. Are they wise or just a dumb life we overlook. What can we learn from these fool like trees.
Being around a tree or trees can teach a spiritual type person much as can the fool.
Maybe I have thought this through long and hard for i have a daughter who some might call a fool. She is merry and smiley and has no living skills, now in her forties she has taught me lots.
April 18th, 2022 16:44
dusk arising said:
Hmm fool or wise? I look at the trees and consider all they have seen in their long life and they sway nonchelantly. Immoveable presence. Are they wise or just a dumb life we overlook. What can we learn from these fool like trees.
Being around a tree or trees can teach a spiritual type person much as can the fool.
Maybe I have thought this through long and hard for i have a daughter who some might call a fool. She is merry and smiley and has no living skills, now in her forties she has taught me lots.
April 18th, 2022 16:44
Psychotic world
Dahlia said:
Excellently penned
like who is the pschyco now eh?!
great work poet 👌
April 18th, 2022 12:06
Dahlia said:
Excellently penned
like who is the pschyco now eh?!
great work poet 👌
April 18th, 2022 12:06
Psychotic world
Rocky Lagou said:
The one not doing. The observer idly spending life annoying others. I love your works. Very well done.
April 18th, 2022 10:08
Rocky Lagou said:
The one not doing. The observer idly spending life annoying others. I love your works. Very well done.
April 18th, 2022 10:08
Psychotic world
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your welcome comments. I appreciate you taking your time to review this always good to hear from you.
April 18th, 2022 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your welcome comments. I appreciate you taking your time to review this always good to hear from you.
April 18th, 2022 07:16
Psychotic world
L. B. Mek said:
I know this person
recognise those self-serving
traits
in so many people\'s, indifferent gaze
but most of all, I recognise
that glint, I\'ve known my whole life
in that mirror reflection
I tend, to pretend
doesn\'t greet, every morning
knowingly, judging
ever-so silently..
(great write, dear poet
so many levels you touch upon)
thank you!
April 18th, 2022 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
I know this person
recognise those self-serving
traits
in so many people\'s, indifferent gaze
but most of all, I recognise
that glint, I\'ve known my whole life
in that mirror reflection
I tend, to pretend
doesn\'t greet, every morning
knowingly, judging
ever-so silently..
(great write, dear poet
so many levels you touch upon)
thank you!
April 18th, 2022 06:57
All or nothing
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello sorenbarett
This is chill, good job!
tchau!
April 17th, 2022 10:32
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello sorenbarett
This is chill, good job!
tchau!
April 17th, 2022 10:32
All or nothing
dusk arising said:
Have you been reading the buddha? These are some of his teachings.
April 17th, 2022 09:26
dusk arising said:
Have you been reading the buddha? These are some of his teachings.
April 17th, 2022 09:26
Moment to moment
Bella Shepard said:
I connect with that feeling of being frozen, yet having to move forward as time demands. Good write!
April 16th, 2022 12:16
Bella Shepard said:
I connect with that feeling of being frozen, yet having to move forward as time demands. Good write!
April 16th, 2022 12:16
Two sides of a coin
Bella Shepard said:
If only we had a crystal ball to look into the future and see the unforeseen consequence of our actions, whatever they may be. You have expressed this in such a thoughtful and intelligent way, I\'m blown away. Great write!
April 15th, 2022 14:56
Bella Shepard said:
If only we had a crystal ball to look into the future and see the unforeseen consequence of our actions, whatever they may be. You have expressed this in such a thoughtful and intelligent way, I\'m blown away. Great write!
April 15th, 2022 14:56
All things are possible
Bella Shepard said:
The contemplation here for the reader is incredible. It touches on the very nature of reality, and how I think we can never really understand it. Does it even exist, what is time? I have my homework for the afternoon, and probably into tomorrow. Thank you for this wonderful metaphysical ride, I love it!
April 14th, 2022 13:57
Bella Shepard said:
The contemplation here for the reader is incredible. It touches on the very nature of reality, and how I think we can never really understand it. Does it even exist, what is time? I have my homework for the afternoon, and probably into tomorrow. Thank you for this wonderful metaphysical ride, I love it!
April 14th, 2022 13:57
All things are possible
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how you touch on the metaphysical and philosophical with your poetry. I do believe we\'re all connected through one long and ethereal link. Can\'t wait to see you on the flipside!
April 14th, 2022 08:17
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how you touch on the metaphysical and philosophical with your poetry. I do believe we\'re all connected through one long and ethereal link. Can\'t wait to see you on the flipside!
April 14th, 2022 08:17
Pick my pocket
Bella Shepard said:
I think my head just exploded; yep, there it is all over the keyboard. You have a way of hitting the proverbial nail on the head, really hard. I can now stop muttering all those things to myself, and sit down peacefully, enjoy my book and my cup of tea. Loved it!!!
April 13th, 2022 11:44
Bella Shepard said:
I think my head just exploded; yep, there it is all over the keyboard. You have a way of hitting the proverbial nail on the head, really hard. I can now stop muttering all those things to myself, and sit down peacefully, enjoy my book and my cup of tea. Loved it!!!
April 13th, 2022 11:44
Pick my pocket
Christina8 said:
Wow what an eye opener of a poem sorenbarrett! I thought I paid a lot of taxes, but then you have to think what are they for? Great job!!
April 13th, 2022 09:26
Christina8 said:
Wow what an eye opener of a poem sorenbarrett! I thought I paid a lot of taxes, but then you have to think what are they for? Great job!!
April 13th, 2022 09:26
Intelligence
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
the arrogant human
the arrogance of
Humanity
👍
I like how you joined
the last two rhymes into
one sentence and what i
thread would be effective
linguistically and visually
is to remove the empty line
and place it above allowing
the final sentence to stand alone
The Verdict
April 12th, 2022 14:28
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
the arrogant human
the arrogance of
Humanity
👍
I like how you joined
the last two rhymes into
one sentence and what i
thread would be effective
linguistically and visually
is to remove the empty line
and place it above allowing
the final sentence to stand alone
The Verdict
April 12th, 2022 14:28
Intelligence
dusk arising said:
Of course mankind is superior, mankind can kill more species than any other and just by the magic of pushing a button... some accolade huh?
April 12th, 2022 07:58
dusk arising said:
Of course mankind is superior, mankind can kill more species than any other and just by the magic of pushing a button... some accolade huh?
April 12th, 2022 07:58
Pieces
Rocky Lagou said:
I literally love the line: \"It\'s noon with a broken compass.\" I sense that broken compass stands for the path we all take that can get hazy along the way. We\'re all searching for an elusive paradise. This is a great reflection.
April 11th, 2022 09:06
Rocky Lagou said:
I literally love the line: \"It\'s noon with a broken compass.\" I sense that broken compass stands for the path we all take that can get hazy along the way. We\'re all searching for an elusive paradise. This is a great reflection.
April 11th, 2022 09:06
Pieces
L. B. Mek said:
a great write!
distilled lines of insightful, truth
as a cascading waterfall
of seamless, poetry
just a wonderfully
thought provoking, reading experience
thank you, dear Poet
April 11th, 2022 06:47
L. B. Mek said:
a great write!
distilled lines of insightful, truth
as a cascading waterfall
of seamless, poetry
just a wonderfully
thought provoking, reading experience
thank you, dear Poet
April 11th, 2022 06:47
Pieces
dusk arising said:
Its been a strange sort of a day really, what is a tortoise shell doing on my cat? Your post is a real head scratcher which is refreshing in these horribly serious days.
April 11th, 2022 06:33
dusk arising said:
Its been a strange sort of a day really, what is a tortoise shell doing on my cat? Your post is a real head scratcher which is refreshing in these horribly serious days.
April 11th, 2022 06:33
Longing
Bella Shepard said:
Long ago memories, when enough time has passed it\'s as if they were a dream. The older you get, the sweeter they are. Thank you for reminding me.
April 10th, 2022 12:36
Bella Shepard said:
Long ago memories, when enough time has passed it\'s as if they were a dream. The older you get, the sweeter they are. Thank you for reminding me.
April 10th, 2022 12:36
Longing
dusk arising said:
Ah yes those entertaining days of time gone by and the lessons we like to kid ourselves we\'ve learned. Wisdom is a comfort blanket when just as you say beneath its warm smugness we want the thrill of the ride \"just one more time\"
April 10th, 2022 11:28
dusk arising said:
Ah yes those entertaining days of time gone by and the lessons we like to kid ourselves we\'ve learned. Wisdom is a comfort blanket when just as you say beneath its warm smugness we want the thrill of the ride \"just one more time\"
April 10th, 2022 11:28
Fire, water, air and earth
dusk arising said:
The love of nature and existence itself flows through your words. Much appreciated here as a fellow lover of this place we call earth.
April 9th, 2022 10:35
dusk arising said:
The love of nature and existence itself flows through your words. Much appreciated here as a fellow lover of this place we call earth.
April 9th, 2022 10:35
Winning a hundred million power ball lotteries in a row
Bella Shepard said:
You have given me the ultimate tutorial in reproduction, genetics and physics in one glorious poem. My mind is expanded to the millionth degree. Thank you dear poet, for the expanse of this poem, and for the depth it reaches.
April 8th, 2022 14:10
Bella Shepard said:
You have given me the ultimate tutorial in reproduction, genetics and physics in one glorious poem. My mind is expanded to the millionth degree. Thank you dear poet, for the expanse of this poem, and for the depth it reaches.
April 8th, 2022 14:10
Winning a hundred million power ball lotteries in a row
dusk arising said:
Wow! and again Wow! Excellent writing.
April 8th, 2022 11:43
dusk arising said:
Wow! and again Wow! Excellent writing.
April 8th, 2022 11:43
Sayings
dusk arising said:
Goodness gracious great balls of fire!
Well chosen words assembled to bring a colour to my cheeks. Good fun.
April 7th, 2022 12:44
dusk arising said:
Goodness gracious great balls of fire!
Well chosen words assembled to bring a colour to my cheeks. Good fun.
April 7th, 2022 12:44
Sayings
Bella Shepard said:
I love the lilting quality of the poem which counters its seriousness. It is impactful ,and so well written. Thank you!
April 7th, 2022 09:54
Bella Shepard said:
I love the lilting quality of the poem which counters its seriousness. It is impactful ,and so well written. Thank you!
April 7th, 2022 09:54
Sayings
Bella Shepard said:
I love the lilting quality of the poem which counters its seriousness. It is impactful ,and so well written. Thank you!
April 7th, 2022 09:35
Bella Shepard said:
I love the lilting quality of the poem which counters its seriousness. It is impactful ,and so well written. Thank you!
April 7th, 2022 09:35
Pilgrim
Christina8 said:
Very well done I liked the rhyme and rhythm very much. Great poem about the road less travelled (as I see dusk already said but it\'s true!) Great job!
April 6th, 2022 13:47
Christina8 said:
Very well done I liked the rhyme and rhythm very much. Great poem about the road less travelled (as I see dusk already said but it\'s true!) Great job!
April 6th, 2022 13:47
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