Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Never
MR.apocalypse said:
lol this reminds me of a poem i wrote. the snap of the whip and the uttering of a word/ they both can be quick and they both can be heard/ the barrel of a gun and the words that are spoken/ one can make a heart stop and one can leave a heart broken
October 30th, 2024 21:18
MR.apocalypse said:
lol this reminds me of a poem i wrote. the snap of the whip and the uttering of a word/ they both can be quick and they both can be heard/ the barrel of a gun and the words that are spoken/ one can make a heart stop and one can leave a heart broken
October 30th, 2024 21:18
Sepia dreams
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve read this 20 times today and every time it just gets more powerful. 🌹
October 30th, 2024 12:44
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve read this 20 times today and every time it just gets more powerful. 🌹
October 30th, 2024 12:44
Sepia dreams
Neville said:
Excellent .. no punches pulled here and the one aimed at the kidney was delivered perfectly .. In my mind memorably so .. but then I\'ve always had a thing about sepia .. Neville
October 30th, 2024 06:16
Neville said:
Excellent .. no punches pulled here and the one aimed at the kidney was delivered perfectly .. In my mind memorably so .. but then I\'ve always had a thing about sepia .. Neville
October 30th, 2024 06:16
Sepia dreams
arqios said:
That brought back memories. Over the weekend I found myself sharing some old photos of us cousins ain our chat group- the first of us had exited this scene just over a year ago.
October 30th, 2024 05:55
arqios said:
That brought back memories. Over the weekend I found myself sharing some old photos of us cousins ain our chat group- the first of us had exited this scene just over a year ago.
October 30th, 2024 05:55
Sepia dreams
David Wakeling said:
This has a wonderful nostalgic feel about it. An old photograph can say so much. Well done
October 30th, 2024 05:33
David Wakeling said:
This has a wonderful nostalgic feel about it. An old photograph can say so much. Well done
October 30th, 2024 05:33
Never
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things can happen and be reversed in life soren.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things can happen and be reversed in life soren.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:48
Never
Doggerel Dave said:
Never knew about \'never\', Soren. Seems I continue to learn something new. Will ponder this and use with discretion (cannot recollect if I\'ve ever sinned in the past!) Many thanks for the tip.
October 29th, 2024 22:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Never knew about \'never\', Soren. Seems I continue to learn something new. Will ponder this and use with discretion (cannot recollect if I\'ve ever sinned in the past!) Many thanks for the tip.
October 29th, 2024 22:02
Never
orchidee said:
I don\'t fancy a spot of seppuku. Not now, thanks, it\'ll put me off me food. I thought someone said \'Fancy a spot of Supper Haikus?\' Doh! lol.
October 29th, 2024 11:40
orchidee said:
I don\'t fancy a spot of seppuku. Not now, thanks, it\'ll put me off me food. I thought someone said \'Fancy a spot of Supper Haikus?\' Doh! lol.
October 29th, 2024 11:40
Never
Neville said:
I\'m much more a hardly ever kinda guy .. and rarely if ever say neva .. no kiddin
October 29th, 2024 09:06
Neville said:
I\'m much more a hardly ever kinda guy .. and rarely if ever say neva .. no kiddin
October 29th, 2024 09:06
Never
Teddy.15 said:
Dipends on my mood, sometimes I\'d sell my soul to the devil. So very powerful in imagery and emotion 💙 🌹
October 29th, 2024 04:35
Teddy.15 said:
Dipends on my mood, sometimes I\'d sell my soul to the devil. So very powerful in imagery and emotion 💙 🌹
October 29th, 2024 04:35
More than clay
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes the core of our body and mind can be infinite soren
Andy
October 29th, 2024 03:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes the core of our body and mind can be infinite soren
Andy
October 29th, 2024 03:46
More than clay
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The opening lines are simply captivating, then the rest of the piem seems to flow naturally like a stream on a hilly terrain. Loved it 🎇
October 29th, 2024 03:08
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The opening lines are simply captivating, then the rest of the piem seems to flow naturally like a stream on a hilly terrain. Loved it 🎇
October 29th, 2024 03:08
A nursery rhyme for us mature children
sunshine777 said:
Very unique, one of a kind no doubt
October 28th, 2024 19:28
sunshine777 said:
Very unique, one of a kind no doubt
October 28th, 2024 19:28
More than clay
Neilton said:
Great work here sorenbarret ! You never fail to impress me with your talent 💓
October 28th, 2024 16:49
Neilton said:
Great work here sorenbarret ! You never fail to impress me with your talent 💓
October 28th, 2024 16:49
More than clay
Neville said:
and there at the heart of the matter, having dug deep, it lies patiently just waiting to be found ..
October 28th, 2024 11:29
Neville said:
and there at the heart of the matter, having dug deep, it lies patiently just waiting to be found ..
October 28th, 2024 11:29
More than clay
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderfully captivating
and evocative write!! 👍
Great rhyme, rhythm and
flow, way to go!! ⭐⭐⭐
Brilliantly composed
a pleasure to recite!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
October 28th, 2024 10:03
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderfully captivating
and evocative write!! 👍
Great rhyme, rhythm and
flow, way to go!! ⭐⭐⭐
Brilliantly composed
a pleasure to recite!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
October 28th, 2024 10:03
More than clay
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"When memory\'s prick revives the sting of yesterday\'s thorn / and the scent of rot on today\'s breeze is born\"...excellent! These opening lines grabs you from the outset and don\'t let go. Deep and relatable. Memory\'s can be both beautiful and eternally haunting. I have had many-a-memory pricks that have revived yesterday\'s thorn, that is for sure. And then the rest of the poem ensues, building upon that initial prick, with an ending that provides a glimpse of hope, that as we confront the memories of the past and the shame they can bring, that we can put those winds to our heels and move onward. We are more than the things that bring us shame, guilt and pain. Excellent write! 🖤❤️🖤👏🌹
October 28th, 2024 07:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"When memory\'s prick revives the sting of yesterday\'s thorn / and the scent of rot on today\'s breeze is born\"...excellent! These opening lines grabs you from the outset and don\'t let go. Deep and relatable. Memory\'s can be both beautiful and eternally haunting. I have had many-a-memory pricks that have revived yesterday\'s thorn, that is for sure. And then the rest of the poem ensues, building upon that initial prick, with an ending that provides a glimpse of hope, that as we confront the memories of the past and the shame they can bring, that we can put those winds to our heels and move onward. We are more than the things that bring us shame, guilt and pain. Excellent write! 🖤❤️🖤👏🌹
October 28th, 2024 07:28
More than clay
arqios said:
It brings a thought about that we feed and tend and shear and spindle and knit what we eventually wear in our daily lives. Oh my. ☺️
October 28th, 2024 07:02
arqios said:
It brings a thought about that we feed and tend and shear and spindle and knit what we eventually wear in our daily lives. Oh my. ☺️
October 28th, 2024 07:02
Ember
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, trees are so important in our lives with Nature.
Andy
October 28th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, trees are so important in our lives with Nature.
Andy
October 28th, 2024 02:23
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