Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Scraps
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Powerfully provocative, Soren! This poem hits and causes us to reflect on our own desensitization to the suffering we see around us! Brilliantly done my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘πŸ–€β€οΈπŸ–€

November 13th, 2024 07:12

Let go
RSM0812 said:

One of my favorites for sure.

November 13th, 2024 06:39

Scraps
arqios said:

Wow! Now that’s a style I can’t say I see often from you…. Wow, just wow!

November 13th, 2024 05:22

Romp (acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true soren, you rarely saw lads without scabs on their knees when I was a kid.

Andy

November 13th, 2024 02:18

Glass prison
RSM0812 said:

The one that got away. That\'s what this reminds me of.

November 13th, 2024 00:44

Whispers
RSM0812 said:

I really liked this one. You have definitely mastered rhyme and contemplation bringing your reader through a journey of words that have more inner meaning than they can comprehend. It\'s like understanding the vastness of the universe in infinite thought and emotion.

November 13th, 2024 00:42

Romp (acrostic)
Teddy.15 said:

lol most endearing 🌹

November 12th, 2024 15:31

Romp (acrostic)
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘πŸ‘
A great Acrostic!! πŸ’―
Got flashbacks from
days gone by! 😳
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

November 12th, 2024 15:08

Romp (acrostic)
David Wakeling said:

Short and sweet. It sums up childhood. Its a wonder we survived

November 12th, 2024 15:05

Differences
FrasMac said:

Clever and thought provoking juxtapositions, makes for mental gymnastics in the reader.

November 12th, 2024 12:44

Romp (acrostic)
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 12th, 2024 12:25

Differences
Tom Dylan said:

An intriguing write, Soren. Works on so many levels.

November 12th, 2024 10:44

Romp (acrostic)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful acrostic my friend that rings true of many a romp in my childhood years! Well done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

November 12th, 2024 07:07

Romp (acrostic)
arqios said:

Not to mention the thick or cut lips and cauliflower ears!

November 12th, 2024 05:34

Romp (acrostic)
Neville said:



and did we listen .. nah\' not on your nelly ..

November 12th, 2024 04:45

Differences
Goldfinch60 said:

Opposites do attract in many cases soren.

Andy

November 12th, 2024 03:14

Differences
Thad Wilk said:

So many changes in this
World 🌎 their be!! 😱
Sooo thought provoking, πŸ€”
fantastic imagery!!! πŸ’―
Best regards my friend! ✌️. Thad


November 11th, 2024 20:51

Differences
orchidee said:

Good write SB. KP, so beautiful she says to herself, not knowing she attracts the opposite - flies! lol. Well, I feed her garbage from the sewers, so that\'s why there are flies around her! lol. It\'s all true this, ya know. heehee.

November 11th, 2024 12:39

Differences
Cassie58 said:

The state of the world as is. Some great imagery here to reflect the differences. So nicely illustrated.

November 11th, 2024 08:21

Differences
arqios said:

What a mash up of images and symbols! A feast to revel in…. A poem not to be taken too lightly!

November 11th, 2024 05:38

Differences
Neville said:



I suspect many of those differences are a sign of the times rather than just tricks of the light .. but well worth noting .. Neville

November 11th, 2024 04:59

Differences
Teddy.15 said:

I see so many things in here from cultural difference to opposites attracting, the world feels much like a square peg in a round hole right now, so much to reflect on. Always a pleasure Sir. 🌹

November 11th, 2024 04:53

Hidden (it is what it is)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words soren may we all avoid that sin.

Andy

November 11th, 2024 02:25

Hidden (it is what it is)
Neville said:


This is really quite brilliant .. and serves as yet another reminder of why I first fell in love with this craft .. Neville

November 11th, 2024 01:58

Hidden (it is what it is)
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

November 10th, 2024 20:07

Hidden (it is what it is)
arqios said:

All that makes us human, bound and discredited.

November 10th, 2024 17:05

Hidden (it is what it is)
Teddy.15 said:

Magnificent powerful and a huge statement for all who seek freedom 🌹

November 10th, 2024 06:37

Hidden (it is what it is)
2781 said:

King of kings, Jesus.

November 10th, 2024 04:35

Whispers
Goldfinch60 said:

May those words never stop soren.

Andy

November 10th, 2024 02:46

Whispers
David Wakeling said:

This is very powerful. I enjoyed reading.

November 9th, 2024 15:10



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