Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Little bird
Goldfinch60 said:
This can happen to many animals and humans soren through no fault of their own.
Andy
November 21st, 2024 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
This can happen to many animals and humans soren through no fault of their own.
Andy
November 21st, 2024 02:04
Little bird
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember killing ants for \"fun\" as a kid. And smashing their nests up in woodlands.
When I grew up, I remember someone telling me about the \"rush\" of doing evil.
Great write, Soren.
November 20th, 2024 18:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember killing ants for \"fun\" as a kid. And smashing their nests up in woodlands.
When I grew up, I remember someone telling me about the \"rush\" of doing evil.
Great write, Soren.
November 20th, 2024 18:58
Little bird
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps I am way off, but I kept thinking of life in gilded cage. Very powerful and introspective poem.
November 20th, 2024 15:03
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps I am way off, but I kept thinking of life in gilded cage. Very powerful and introspective poem.
November 20th, 2024 15:03
Little bird
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching poem,
thoughts and message penned!! 👍
Great rhyme AND flows
like a gentle stream,
much enjoyed my friend,!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 20th, 2024 14:58
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching poem,
thoughts and message penned!! 👍
Great rhyme AND flows
like a gentle stream,
much enjoyed my friend,!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 20th, 2024 14:58
Little bird
Bobby O said:
I liked this one. I’m still thinking about it. When should we have known better !?
Rhetorical Q. You’re off the hook so now I’m thinking if I had a nickel for each grasshopper I let fir in a jar.
November 20th, 2024 10:22
Bobby O said:
I liked this one. I’m still thinking about it. When should we have known better !?
Rhetorical Q. You’re off the hook so now I’m thinking if I had a nickel for each grasshopper I let fir in a jar.
November 20th, 2024 10:22
Little bird
Doggerel Dave said:
Now a memory, but a permanent part of you. Had a budgie in a cage as a kid..... Short but to the point. Thanks Soren.
November 20th, 2024 08:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Now a memory, but a permanent part of you. Had a budgie in a cage as a kid..... Short but to the point. Thanks Soren.
November 20th, 2024 08:31
Little bird
Neville said:
this is, in its entirety and also contains an important moralistic message .. so, despite it reading like a nursery crime you are henceforth forgived ..
November 20th, 2024 08:25
Neville said:
this is, in its entirety and also contains an important moralistic message .. so, despite it reading like a nursery crime you are henceforth forgived ..
November 20th, 2024 08:25
Little bird
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A very sad and thought-provoking poem. With the literal interpretation aside, this poem makes for a fine metaphor on how we can end up treating human beings as well. A well-written, simple...yet profound...poem that works on multiple levels. 🌹👏
November 20th, 2024 07:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A very sad and thought-provoking poem. With the literal interpretation aside, this poem makes for a fine metaphor on how we can end up treating human beings as well. A well-written, simple...yet profound...poem that works on multiple levels. 🌹👏
November 20th, 2024 07:46
Little bird
RSM0812 said:
It reminds me of men were born in chains. Like nature is to man, and man is to himself. The ending is a classic like some of your works should be.
November 20th, 2024 06:18
RSM0812 said:
It reminds me of men were born in chains. Like nature is to man, and man is to himself. The ending is a classic like some of your works should be.
November 20th, 2024 06:18
Little bird
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful work.I love the rhyme.It is debatable whether a bird should be caged or set free. Well done
November 20th, 2024 06:03
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful work.I love the rhyme.It is debatable whether a bird should be caged or set free. Well done
November 20th, 2024 06:03
Little bird
arqios said:
Now that’s so sad. As a child I’da thought otherwise. Had a green thumb though, for the longest time. Birthed the sow at the farm. But couldn’t keep an aviary alive.
November 20th, 2024 05:55
arqios said:
Now that’s so sad. As a child I’da thought otherwise. Had a green thumb though, for the longest time. Birthed the sow at the farm. But couldn’t keep an aviary alive.
November 20th, 2024 05:55
Laugh oneself blind
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is awful at the moment but some of us can find the goodness and love in pour own small worlds soren.
Andy
November 20th, 2024 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is awful at the moment but some of us can find the goodness and love in pour own small worlds soren.
Andy
November 20th, 2024 02:07
Laugh oneself blind
Dan Williams said:
Amen, all is good. The part about needing experience to get a job really rung true to me. That and being turned away because \"I made too much money\". \"Reparations to who never suffered loss\" these days really rankles.
November 20th, 2024 01:51
Dan Williams said:
Amen, all is good. The part about needing experience to get a job really rung true to me. That and being turned away because \"I made too much money\". \"Reparations to who never suffered loss\" these days really rankles.
November 20th, 2024 01:51
Laugh oneself blind
NafisaSB said:
a power packed poem that spares no punches. great write
November 20th, 2024 00:40
NafisaSB said:
a power packed poem that spares no punches. great write
November 20th, 2024 00:40
Truth
NafisaSB said:
what a concept of truth - beautifully described..no words to express my admiration.
November 20th, 2024 00:37
NafisaSB said:
what a concept of truth - beautifully described..no words to express my admiration.
November 20th, 2024 00:37
Laugh oneself blind
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll pay that very last line for sure Soren, given my take on it. Injustice in the world which goes way beyond the law.
November 19th, 2024 19:31
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll pay that very last line for sure Soren, given my take on it. Injustice in the world which goes way beyond the law.
November 19th, 2024 19:31
Laugh oneself blind
Mutley Ravishes said:
Imagine if this present humanity was to continue indefinitely? Where on earth would it end up?!
Great write, Soren
November 19th, 2024 19:19
Mutley Ravishes said:
Imagine if this present humanity was to continue indefinitely? Where on earth would it end up?!
Great write, Soren
November 19th, 2024 19:19
Truth
Teddy.15 said:
Well as you always do you do it in style dearest sorrenbarret, truth be you are a magnificent poet sir. 🌹
November 19th, 2024 14:10
Teddy.15 said:
Well as you always do you do it in style dearest sorrenbarret, truth be you are a magnificent poet sir. 🌹
November 19th, 2024 14:10
Laugh oneself blind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The world is on effed up place, no? Everything seems backwards to how it SHOULD be. I remember being enraged as a kid about the beer thing. Let’s not add old enough to drive a car, but not rent. Yet you can still go to jail for life! I am still angered by it, as I hate double standards. Regardless, what can one do when most blindly accept and then keep the status quo. Wonderful write my friend. Powerfully written! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 19th, 2024 08:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The world is on effed up place, no? Everything seems backwards to how it SHOULD be. I remember being enraged as a kid about the beer thing. Let’s not add old enough to drive a car, but not rent. Yet you can still go to jail for life! I am still angered by it, as I hate double standards. Regardless, what can one do when most blindly accept and then keep the status quo. Wonderful write my friend. Powerfully written! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 19th, 2024 08:27
Laugh oneself blind
Neville said:
I have a thing about irony and satire .. this gave me a dubble helping ..
November 19th, 2024 04:51
Neville said:
I have a thing about irony and satire .. this gave me a dubble helping ..
November 19th, 2024 04:51
Laugh oneself blind
Cassie58 said:
Sadly this is the world we live in. Completely bonkers isn’t it? Very powerful piece Soren. Highlights the madness of it all. A great piece of writing.
November 19th, 2024 04:09
Cassie58 said:
Sadly this is the world we live in. Completely bonkers isn’t it? Very powerful piece Soren. Highlights the madness of it all. A great piece of writing.
November 19th, 2024 04:09
Laugh oneself blind
arqios said:
Story of my existence! For years I’ve up and yelled at the illogical logic of it all…. And now that I’m mostly settled in realise that I was the one that played along…. Idiosyncratic idiocy… 🤪
November 19th, 2024 04:03
arqios said:
Story of my existence! For years I’ve up and yelled at the illogical logic of it all…. And now that I’m mostly settled in realise that I was the one that played along…. Idiosyncratic idiocy… 🤪
November 19th, 2024 04:03
Truth
Goldfinch60 said:
Truth should always be with us but in many occasions it is missing soren, just ask a politician!
Andy
November 19th, 2024 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Truth should always be with us but in many occasions it is missing soren, just ask a politician!
Andy
November 19th, 2024 02:16
Truth
Dan Williams said:
I seem to dwell way too much in shadow\'s realm, leaves me struggling to recognize change. Thanks for this.
November 19th, 2024 01:14
Dan Williams said:
I seem to dwell way too much in shadow\'s realm, leaves me struggling to recognize change. Thanks for this.
November 19th, 2024 01:14
Serrated pages
NafisaSB said:
wow, beautifully penned. i sometimes see these silver fish tumble out of old newspaper cuttings i had preserved long back, and can definitely identify the picture so well drawn out here.
brilliant imagery
November 19th, 2024 00:31
NafisaSB said:
wow, beautifully penned. i sometimes see these silver fish tumble out of old newspaper cuttings i had preserved long back, and can definitely identify the picture so well drawn out here.
brilliant imagery
November 19th, 2024 00:31
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