Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
One in all, all in one
Neville said:
.. its a jungle out here .. it aint a melting pot no more .. tis lovely ..
August 8th, 2024 14:01
Neville said:
.. its a jungle out here .. it aint a melting pot no more .. tis lovely ..
August 8th, 2024 14:01
One in all, all in one
orchidee said:
The title sounds a tad Musketeer-ish! lol.
August 8th, 2024 11:58
orchidee said:
The title sounds a tad Musketeer-ish! lol.
August 8th, 2024 11:58
One small voice
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
since regularly receiving kudos (from you) for my postings, I thought to browse some poems of yours, which no matter if a smattering of lines pack a punch.
August 8th, 2024 10:21
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
since regularly receiving kudos (from you) for my postings, I thought to browse some poems of yours, which no matter if a smattering of lines pack a punch.
August 8th, 2024 10:21
One in all, all in one
Teddy.15 said:
Soulmates till the end. I\'m salt and my husband is sugar, that\'s what I believe anyway or maybe he is the salt depends on the day. This is sadly profoundly beautiful. 🌹
August 8th, 2024 09:13
Teddy.15 said:
Soulmates till the end. I\'m salt and my husband is sugar, that\'s what I believe anyway or maybe he is the salt depends on the day. This is sadly profoundly beautiful. 🌹
August 8th, 2024 09:13
One in all, all in one
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, SB. Great imagery made me think.
August 8th, 2024 08:44
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, SB. Great imagery made me think.
August 8th, 2024 08:44
Life is what you make it
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write soren showing the opposites in life.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write soren showing the opposites in life.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:29
Life is what you make it
HolesInMyJeans said:
That was a pleasure to read. Easy flow of words. You’re one of the few whose poems are delightfully thought out for the reader. Well done.
August 7th, 2024 19:46
HolesInMyJeans said:
That was a pleasure to read. Easy flow of words. You’re one of the few whose poems are delightfully thought out for the reader. Well done.
August 7th, 2024 19:46
Life is what you make it
Bella Shepard said:
The analogy of each stanza is outstanding, as is the superb rhyming pattern that pulls it all together into a masterclass. The message is powerful.
August 7th, 2024 15:20
Bella Shepard said:
The analogy of each stanza is outstanding, as is the superb rhyming pattern that pulls it all together into a masterclass. The message is powerful.
August 7th, 2024 15:20
Life is what you make it
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
thoughts and
message my friend!! 🤔
A treat to read
beginning to end!!! 😁 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 7th, 2024 13:52
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
thoughts and
message my friend!! 🤔
A treat to read
beginning to end!!! 😁 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 7th, 2024 13:52
Life is what you make it
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Beautiful, wise words.
Excellent rhyme.
But what is mans true purpose in life my friend?
August 7th, 2024 10:28
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Beautiful, wise words.
Excellent rhyme.
But what is mans true purpose in life my friend?
August 7th, 2024 10:28
Life is what you make it
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly make it if you can, Soren.
August 7th, 2024 08:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly make it if you can, Soren.
August 7th, 2024 08:42
Life is what you make it
Teddy.15 said:
Superb your message, and full of magnificent wisdom I shall show this one to my son, what a way to wake the reader up and make them take a look at the bigger picture that with a positive attitude we can in fact live our lives to the full, despite all of the obstacles and madness. Kudos dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
August 7th, 2024 04:51
Teddy.15 said:
Superb your message, and full of magnificent wisdom I shall show this one to my son, what a way to wake the reader up and make them take a look at the bigger picture that with a positive attitude we can in fact live our lives to the full, despite all of the obstacles and madness. Kudos dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
August 7th, 2024 04:51
Life is what you make it
Neville said:
This is one o them absolutely superb bits of poetry that I seriously wish I had got to first ..
excellent ink and so finely spilt .. N
August 7th, 2024 04:51
Neville said:
This is one o them absolutely superb bits of poetry that I seriously wish I had got to first ..
excellent ink and so finely spilt .. N
August 7th, 2024 04:51
Too many
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Isn\'t it ironic that small things in life can turn into disastrous situations. I really enjoyed reading your poem, it has a lot of meaning. Well done.
Thank you
August 7th, 2024 03:06
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Isn\'t it ironic that small things in life can turn into disastrous situations. I really enjoyed reading your poem, it has a lot of meaning. Well done.
Thank you
August 7th, 2024 03:06
Too many
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words soren and so true in the world which we now live in.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words soren and so true in the world which we now live in.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 01:53
From a tiny view
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words soren, if only we could go back to the innocence of childhood it would be wonderful.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words soren, if only we could go back to the innocence of childhood it would be wonderful.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 01:41
Too many
Dan Williams said:
Brazo! This is simply beautiful. I admit I am partial to you but this is no random standout; you get better every time.
August 6th, 2024 23:43
Dan Williams said:
Brazo! This is simply beautiful. I admit I am partial to you but this is no random standout; you get better every time.
August 6th, 2024 23:43
Too many
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for this, Soren. I hear population on decline through a combination of lower fertility, personal choice and economic necessity, I hear, I hear.
But your well formed little icicle sends cold winds round my ears and is for my money more realistic.
Here the South is suffering a more than usually cold winter….thus the icicle… (South pole cooked and sent this way?)
August 6th, 2024 18:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for this, Soren. I hear population on decline through a combination of lower fertility, personal choice and economic necessity, I hear, I hear.
But your well formed little icicle sends cold winds round my ears and is for my money more realistic.
Here the South is suffering a more than usually cold winter….thus the icicle… (South pole cooked and sent this way?)
August 6th, 2024 18:45
Too many
Bella Shepard said:
Somehow we do not understand the finiteness of earths ability to sustain us. You capture this graphically in a poem that is a wake up call, which goes unheard.
August 6th, 2024 13:03
Bella Shepard said:
Somehow we do not understand the finiteness of earths ability to sustain us. You capture this graphically in a poem that is a wake up call, which goes unheard.
August 6th, 2024 13:03
Too many
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written two stanzas here sorenbarrett.
Your poem highlights the fact, that no proud human can ever think themselves a master of the planet.
Also, it highlights the importance and the respect of the concept of space, which you mention with a particular clarity in the second stanza.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 6th, 2024 11:32
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written two stanzas here sorenbarrett.
Your poem highlights the fact, that no proud human can ever think themselves a master of the planet.
Also, it highlights the importance and the respect of the concept of space, which you mention with a particular clarity in the second stanza.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 6th, 2024 11:32
Too many
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
thoughts and message too! 🤔
Awesome rhyme and flow,
way to go, thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 6th, 2024 09:33
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
thoughts and message too! 🤔
Awesome rhyme and flow,
way to go, thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 6th, 2024 09:33
Too many
Neville said:
they say it\'ll be all right on the night .. but somehow what with everything that is going on, I doubt it .. you can beat an egg but you can\'t beat nature ..
August 6th, 2024 07:30
Neville said:
they say it\'ll be all right on the night .. but somehow what with everything that is going on, I doubt it .. you can beat an egg but you can\'t beat nature ..
August 6th, 2024 07:30
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