Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Too warm
Goldfinch60 said:

That heat can be so overwhelming, it is only 12 at the moment and may be 16 durung the day which is OK by me. Hope you can find some coolness soren.

Andy

March 8th, 2025 02:59

Flies
NafisaSB said:

this is such a true and telling message - these obnoxious creatures defile whatever they land on.
wonderfully explained in good detail

March 8th, 2025 00:00

Too warm
Doggerel Dave said:

Stap me vitals - you never told me you lived next door....

March 7th, 2025 19:38

Too warm
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

March 7th, 2025 11:23

Too warm
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, SB.

March 7th, 2025 08:01

Flies
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Seemed like a mesterly picture of decay embedded into our lives. Great write

March 7th, 2025 07:49

Night of dream dust
Alan R said:

Love the ending!!

March 7th, 2025 07:44

Too warm
Salvia.S said:

This poem brings the heat in the best possible way!

March 7th, 2025 05:36

Too warm
Poetic Licence said:

I feel a sense of might become, with global warming, enjoyed the read

March 7th, 2025 05:27

Too warm
Neville said:



Now that is bloomin hot .. Sounds like a global warming warning to me ..

March 7th, 2025 04:57

Too warm
David Wakeling said:

Indeed it hot as hades here at times.A powerful poem. Enjoyed

March 7th, 2025 04:56

Too warm
Teddy.15 said:

Yes, only the best for the devil 🤣 oh how I know this feeling, it can be truly unbearable the summer heat here in Italy, I cannot have air-conditioning because I\'m an asthma sufferer and allergic to dust, hey maybe that old devil bought my soul lol wonderful rhyme and I could feel the heat, Dante is down there having a party I believe 🌹

March 7th, 2025 03:57

Too warm
orchidee said:

Some of those overhead cooler things give out an icy blast, even in Summer. Then it\'s colder indoors than outdoors. Doh! It\'s a draught that\'s more unpleasant than actually being outdoors on a chilly windy day.

March 7th, 2025 03:28

Blinded by the light
Goldfinch60 said:

We are so intent on going one way soren that we ignore other things around us.

Andy

March 7th, 2025 02:15

Canned expression
Princesslove said:

Nice poem
Well written!!

March 7th, 2025 00:23

Blinded by the light
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Hard to see what the heart won’t allow sometimes. A beautiful write!!

March 6th, 2025 14:05

Blinded by the light
NinjaGirl said:

\"bent is the straight line\" this is everything!

March 6th, 2025 13:21

Blinded by the light
Cassie58 said:

The hard headed crowd. No man is an island, and yet here in this write I saw a real struggle going on against dark forces. One man against the crowd. Full of imagery and thought provoking lines. Well penned.

March 6th, 2025 06:33

Blinded by the light
David Wakeling said:

It seems hard to find security with all the problems in the world.Powerful messages here

March 6th, 2025 05:48

Nuts
Doggerel Dave said:

Now that\'s what I\'m talking about, Soren....

March 6th, 2025 05:39

Blinded by the light
Poetic Licence said:

The double sided coin of not always getting what you see, as we only see what we want to see, enjoyed the read

March 6th, 2025 05:02

Blinded by the light
Teddy.15 said:

No matter what is in front of us sometimes it can be hard to see and even harder to hear. Beautiful. 🌹

March 6th, 2025 04:32

Naive
Naina Pandey said:

Ethereal quality!

March 6th, 2025 04:07

Blinded by the light
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

March 6th, 2025 03:17

Nuts
Goldfinch60 said:

Craze away soren, it is a way of seeing life.

Andy

March 6th, 2025 02:54

Blinded by the light
arqios said:

Could be sleight of hand, we’re too engrossed at what’s presented to notice the sidelines 🙏🏻🕊

March 6th, 2025 02:48

Nuts
Salvia.S said:

Powerful and intense poem!

March 5th, 2025 19:45

Nuts
Mutley Ravishes said:

So you carried on testing the limits after departing childhood?! That\'s the spirit!

March 5th, 2025 18:21

Nuts
Neville said:


There’s a hell of a lot here that reminds me of me .. some of which I am happy about but others I would much rather forget .. I think it is great and can see why so many people have faved it .. Neville 😎👍

March 5th, 2025 15:53

Nuts
Thomas W Case said:

Superb. We are all crazy. Love the alliteration in this piece.

March 5th, 2025 13:18



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