Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Video Games, Reality Shows, Social Media
Bella Shepard said:
I can relate to this this poem,with the myriad of reality television shows that we are inundated with here in the states. Survival in the wilderness (with or without clothes, with or without other people), buying beachfront property, rehabbing houses, and on and on ad nauseam. Thank you for this well deserved jab, very well penned.
April 3rd, 2022 12:40
Bella Shepard said:
I can relate to this this poem,with the myriad of reality television shows that we are inundated with here in the states. Survival in the wilderness (with or without clothes, with or without other people), buying beachfront property, rehabbing houses, and on and on ad nauseam. Thank you for this well deserved jab, very well penned.
April 3rd, 2022 12:40
Video Games, Reality Shows, Social Media
dusk arising said:
I have \'met\' these \'people\' online in various guises. Keyboard warriors and trolls they are often named.
Great original poetry here, i\'ve not seen this subject covered before. Good one!
April 3rd, 2022 10:41
dusk arising said:
I have \'met\' these \'people\' online in various guises. Keyboard warriors and trolls they are often named.
Great original poetry here, i\'ve not seen this subject covered before. Good one!
April 3rd, 2022 10:41
Video Games, Reality Shows, Social Media
Christina8 said:
I love your AAB rhyme scheme! Anyway, \"pretend warriors\'--video games. \"Having no moxie to face the worlds strife\"---Actually that could pertain to a lot of people but I think you are referring to social media here.....This is a great poem!!--Christina
April 3rd, 2022 09:37
Christina8 said:
I love your AAB rhyme scheme! Anyway, \"pretend warriors\'--video games. \"Having no moxie to face the worlds strife\"---Actually that could pertain to a lot of people but I think you are referring to social media here.....This is a great poem!!--Christina
April 3rd, 2022 09:37
Video Games, Reality Shows, Social Media
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Yup! I feel this. Cheers 🥂🕊🌞
April 3rd, 2022 09:01
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Yup! I feel this. Cheers 🥂🕊🌞
April 3rd, 2022 09:01
Video Games, Reality Shows, Social Media
dean langmuir said:
Good write,take care.
April 3rd, 2022 08:57
dean langmuir said:
Good write,take care.
April 3rd, 2022 08:57
Euhemerism
dean langmuir said:
Nice write,agree with Bella about diamonds,take care,poet on.
April 2nd, 2022 17:31
dean langmuir said:
Nice write,agree with Bella about diamonds,take care,poet on.
April 2nd, 2022 17:31
Euhemerism
Bella Shepard said:
I admit I had to google Euhemerism, (you are expanding my vocabulary), and I thank you for that. This is thought provoking and so beautifully written. I fixated on \"carbon footprints pressed into diamonds\", the imagery of that just blows my mind. Thank you for this wonderful piece.
April 2nd, 2022 12:03
Bella Shepard said:
I admit I had to google Euhemerism, (you are expanding my vocabulary), and I thank you for that. This is thought provoking and so beautifully written. I fixated on \"carbon footprints pressed into diamonds\", the imagery of that just blows my mind. Thank you for this wonderful piece.
April 2nd, 2022 12:03
Anaclictic metamorphosis
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much L.B. for your review and kind comments. They are deeply appreciated.
April 1st, 2022 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much L.B. for your review and kind comments. They are deeply appreciated.
April 1st, 2022 12:51
Anaclictic metamorphosis
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this! I feel that boatman line refers to the trip made to the Underworld in Greek mythology in which you need to pay Charon, the ferryman of the underworld, a certain coin or else you\'re doomed to swim in the dark waters of the Styx for 100 years. From the title I feel that this could be an evolution from not relying on others to depending on yourself. Great job!
April 1st, 2022 09:34
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this! I feel that boatman line refers to the trip made to the Underworld in Greek mythology in which you need to pay Charon, the ferryman of the underworld, a certain coin or else you\'re doomed to swim in the dark waters of the Styx for 100 years. From the title I feel that this could be an evolution from not relying on others to depending on yourself. Great job!
April 1st, 2022 09:34
Anaclictic metamorphosis
L. B. Mek said:
a butterfly, of a poem
deep threads, you pull at my friend
deep!
thanks for sharing
(love all your myth referencing, imagery
crossing time\'s borders
from one line to the next
I feel
James Joyce, would relate)
April 1st, 2022 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
a butterfly, of a poem
deep threads, you pull at my friend
deep!
thanks for sharing
(love all your myth referencing, imagery
crossing time\'s borders
from one line to the next
I feel
James Joyce, would relate)
April 1st, 2022 05:57
Normal
Bella Shepard said:
I love the paradoxical nature of your poem. Do we take on the attitudes of those we\'re surrounded by, simply by virtue of numbers? Or do we seek out those who think as we do, safety in numbers. Such a puzzlement. I love the way you pose your question. Well crafted piece.
March 31st, 2022 13:29
Bella Shepard said:
I love the paradoxical nature of your poem. Do we take on the attitudes of those we\'re surrounded by, simply by virtue of numbers? Or do we seek out those who think as we do, safety in numbers. Such a puzzlement. I love the way you pose your question. Well crafted piece.
March 31st, 2022 13:29
Normal
dusk arising said:
In the view of the patients - No. Theyre insane LOL.
I enjoyed this teaser.
March 31st, 2022 11:19
dusk arising said:
In the view of the patients - No. Theyre insane LOL.
I enjoyed this teaser.
March 31st, 2022 11:19
Normal
Rocky Lagou said:
So I assume this is about society viewing someone as either \"crazy\" or possibly \"provocative\" through their expressions (either artistical or personal) and forming judgments about whether or not it is \"morally okay\" to do those things. Interesting and it honestly happens quite often.
March 31st, 2022 08:14
Rocky Lagou said:
So I assume this is about society viewing someone as either \"crazy\" or possibly \"provocative\" through their expressions (either artistical or personal) and forming judgments about whether or not it is \"morally okay\" to do those things. Interesting and it honestly happens quite often.
March 31st, 2022 08:14
Paralyzed
L. B. Mek said:
beneath your poetic mastery
of rhythmically pleasing, wordplay
exists, some deep - deep veracity
to that true distilled state, of most
unsuccessful relationships..
wonderfully executed, a great read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 31st, 2022 02:35
L. B. Mek said:
beneath your poetic mastery
of rhythmically pleasing, wordplay
exists, some deep - deep veracity
to that true distilled state, of most
unsuccessful relationships..
wonderfully executed, a great read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 31st, 2022 02:35
Paralyzed
Christina8 said:
Sorry about the circumstances but great poem! Hope things get better.
March 30th, 2022 17:45
Christina8 said:
Sorry about the circumstances but great poem! Hope things get better.
March 30th, 2022 17:45
Paralyzed
dusk arising said:
Its gotta be said
this pleased my head
once it was read
i was well fed
Nice one
March 30th, 2022 17:40
dusk arising said:
Its gotta be said
this pleased my head
once it was read
i was well fed
Nice one
March 30th, 2022 17:40
Sheep
dusk arising said:
Often people become fixed in a way of believing because those around them share a certain view. To think outside that train of thought can become frightening for them. In the case of religions it is often child induced fear which has been instilled in them.
March 29th, 2022 17:57
dusk arising said:
Often people become fixed in a way of believing because those around them share a certain view. To think outside that train of thought can become frightening for them. In the case of religions it is often child induced fear which has been instilled in them.
March 29th, 2022 17:57
Sheep
Rocky Lagou said:
Zamm! I feel this is directed to Christians, and possibly religion in general, as inferred by the title. But honestly you spoke some truth though. I love the way you challenged morality in this one and I like your brazen tone.
March 29th, 2022 13:17
Rocky Lagou said:
Zamm! I feel this is directed to Christians, and possibly religion in general, as inferred by the title. But honestly you spoke some truth though. I love the way you challenged morality in this one and I like your brazen tone.
March 29th, 2022 13:17
Perspective
Crowns4Christ said:
I like this,a bit confusing at first but it all makes sense when you think about it
March 28th, 2022 16:31
Crowns4Christ said:
I like this,a bit confusing at first but it all makes sense when you think about it
March 28th, 2022 16:31
Perspective
Bella Shepard said:
Question; does the whole perspective change if you\'re left handed? This was such fun, kudos for keeping it all straight, I think.
March 28th, 2022 16:15
Bella Shepard said:
Question; does the whole perspective change if you\'re left handed? This was such fun, kudos for keeping it all straight, I think.
March 28th, 2022 16:15
Perspective
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. Your perspective, or your \"attitude\" towards life will really alter everything around you. It\'s powerful and we must always stay firm in our beings and our worth.
March 28th, 2022 13:26
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. Your perspective, or your \"attitude\" towards life will really alter everything around you. It\'s powerful and we must always stay firm in our beings and our worth.
March 28th, 2022 13:26
Perspective
dusk arising said:
This is a great play with words and fearing a headache i gave up trying to figure it all out.
On reflection, if i turned around and looked over my shoulder would i have the right to feel i\'d been left behind?
March 28th, 2022 13:25
dusk arising said:
This is a great play with words and fearing a headache i gave up trying to figure it all out.
On reflection, if i turned around and looked over my shoulder would i have the right to feel i\'d been left behind?
March 28th, 2022 13:25
Saudade
Rocky Lagou said:
This was wonderful, I can definitely relate to that sensation. Also my father is Brazilian so when I read the title I was like \"Yes!\" Normally I hear it used like \"I miss you.\" But it can also be taken like a wistful yearning. Well done!
March 28th, 2022 13:19
Rocky Lagou said:
This was wonderful, I can definitely relate to that sensation. Also my father is Brazilian so when I read the title I was like \"Yes!\" Normally I hear it used like \"I miss you.\" But it can also be taken like a wistful yearning. Well done!
March 28th, 2022 13:19
Saudade
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful poem that I can easily relate to. The older I get, the deeper I feel all the life I\'ve lived through those memories. I also wonder where did all that life go, and did I really do all those things. Yes dear friend, we did.
March 26th, 2022 15:52
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful poem that I can easily relate to. The older I get, the deeper I feel all the life I\'ve lived through those memories. I also wonder where did all that life go, and did I really do all those things. Yes dear friend, we did.
March 26th, 2022 15:52
Lost Innocence
Bella Shepard said:
2 lines, 14 words, limitless thoughts for those who read them. Always enjoyable, thank you.
March 25th, 2022 12:34
Bella Shepard said:
2 lines, 14 words, limitless thoughts for those who read them. Always enjoyable, thank you.
March 25th, 2022 12:34
Lost Innocence
dusk arising said:
My grandchildren have just had their fourth and eighth birthdays. I found myself wondering what will be the childhood memories which will stay with them long into their adult years. I doubt I shall figure there as covid kept us apart and still does much to my displeasure.
That\'s where your two lines took me today. Bring on tomorrow.
March 25th, 2022 07:27
dusk arising said:
My grandchildren have just had their fourth and eighth birthdays. I found myself wondering what will be the childhood memories which will stay with them long into their adult years. I doubt I shall figure there as covid kept us apart and still does much to my displeasure.
That\'s where your two lines took me today. Bring on tomorrow.
March 25th, 2022 07:27
Lost Innocence
L. B. Mek said:
yup, with each breath
we cherish
we accumulate distance
from
us at our, \'blank canvas\'
best...
(so clever
thanks for sharing)
March 25th, 2022 06:43
L. B. Mek said:
yup, with each breath
we cherish
we accumulate distance
from
us at our, \'blank canvas\'
best...
(so clever
thanks for sharing)
March 25th, 2022 06:43
Love and Loyalty
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet, wonderful symmetry, so pleasing to the eye in its composition, yet tugging at heart strings. It flows beautifully from one line to the next.You inextricably link the two most important things that a relationship should be based on. A wonderful read!
March 24th, 2022 08:54
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet, wonderful symmetry, so pleasing to the eye in its composition, yet tugging at heart strings. It flows beautifully from one line to the next.You inextricably link the two most important things that a relationship should be based on. A wonderful read!
March 24th, 2022 08:54
Matrimony
Bella Shepard said:
Love this take on matrimony, done with tongue in cheek. Gave me a chuckle. After 52 years of marriage it comes down to figuring out what makes your better half tick. Surprising the power you can wield with a little psychology. Guess I\'ve spilled the beans.
March 23rd, 2022 14:29
Bella Shepard said:
Love this take on matrimony, done with tongue in cheek. Gave me a chuckle. After 52 years of marriage it comes down to figuring out what makes your better half tick. Surprising the power you can wield with a little psychology. Guess I\'ve spilled the beans.
March 23rd, 2022 14:29
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