Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Doggerel Dave said:
Those dreams, Soren….. You’ve just hauled memories back of tormented nights.…. Far too uncomfortable. I feel fortunate that currently my dreams are much more linear and untroubled – But am I (fortunate)?
August 13th, 2024 17:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Those dreams, Soren….. You’ve just hauled memories back of tormented nights.…. Far too uncomfortable. I feel fortunate that currently my dreams are much more linear and untroubled – But am I (fortunate)?
August 13th, 2024 17:50
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Neville said:
Just like I like my coffee .. very noir & then some .. Neville
August 13th, 2024 14:26
Neville said:
Just like I like my coffee .. very noir & then some .. Neville
August 13th, 2024 14:26
Familiarity of the nonexistent
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful Write Soren! flows so well.
August 13th, 2024 11:36
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful Write Soren! flows so well.
August 13th, 2024 11:36
One in all, all in one
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautifully written two stanzas here sorenbarrett, that reminds us the importance of a true core unity, despite our many differences.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
August 13th, 2024 11:05
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautifully written two stanzas here sorenbarrett, that reminds us the importance of a true core unity, despite our many differences.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
August 13th, 2024 11:05
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
deep, dark and delving. 😱
Love it! 👍
Great rhyme and flow,.
captivating throughout!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 13th, 2024 09:05
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
deep, dark and delving. 😱
Love it! 👍
Great rhyme and flow,.
captivating throughout!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 13th, 2024 09:05
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
A beautiful lovely poem. It hits deep my friend. Well done poet.
August 13th, 2024 09:02
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
A beautiful lovely poem. It hits deep my friend. Well done poet.
August 13th, 2024 09:02
Time eroded memories
Tom Dylan said:
A fascinating piece, Soren. Love the imagery.
August 13th, 2024 06:42
Tom Dylan said:
A fascinating piece, Soren. Love the imagery.
August 13th, 2024 06:42
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Teddy.15 said:
Don\'t go to sleep come to the 70 disco with me, oh my dear sorrenbarret this one made me shake, you have managed to get into my mind when I have dreams of the dead and then awake. Superbly dark and actually incredibly relatable and beautifully written. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 04:13
Teddy.15 said:
Don\'t go to sleep come to the 70 disco with me, oh my dear sorrenbarret this one made me shake, you have managed to get into my mind when I have dreams of the dead and then awake. Superbly dark and actually incredibly relatable and beautifully written. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 04:13
Time eroded memories
Dan Williams said:
From dust we came . . .Classy stuff, my friend.
August 13th, 2024 00:27
Dan Williams said:
From dust we came . . .Classy stuff, my friend.
August 13th, 2024 00:27
Time eroded memories
Neville said:
I have long found it helpful to take notes in order to help preserve situations, circumstances and events encountered along the way .. I now find it crucial .. lest we forget ..
August 13th, 2024 00:07
Neville said:
I have long found it helpful to take notes in order to help preserve situations, circumstances and events encountered along the way .. I now find it crucial .. lest we forget ..
August 13th, 2024 00:07
Time eroded memories
gray0328 said:
speaks to the fleeting nature of memories and how they shape our identity. Well Done Soren
August 12th, 2024 11:51
gray0328 said:
speaks to the fleeting nature of memories and how they shape our identity. Well Done Soren
August 12th, 2024 11:51
Time eroded memories
MendedFences27 said:
Do as we all do, embellish. Those \"Time Eroded Memories\" can be expanded and cleaned up and converted to poetry. Your poem states the truth and is therefore poetic. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2024 10:59
MendedFences27 said:
Do as we all do, embellish. Those \"Time Eroded Memories\" can be expanded and cleaned up and converted to poetry. Your poem states the truth and is therefore poetic. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2024 10:59
Time eroded memories
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
You have summarized life in a few words. Beautiful, well done.
August 12th, 2024 09:53
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
You have summarized life in a few words. Beautiful, well done.
August 12th, 2024 09:53
Point of view
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Works on so many levels. Thanks for sharing.
August 12th, 2024 06:33
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Works on so many levels. Thanks for sharing.
August 12th, 2024 06:33
Time eroded memories
Teddy.15 said:
You have captured the very essence of this poem in the title, beautifully done 🌹
August 12th, 2024 04:57
Teddy.15 said:
You have captured the very essence of this poem in the title, beautifully done 🌹
August 12th, 2024 04:57
Point of view
Neville said:
the interpretation of stimulus as deemed by the senses past present and future ..
the above definition has remained with me ever since our first lectures on the subject of perception many many many years ago .. and boy, have you just reinforced that here .. you are absolutely right and the rule is, it applies to absolutely everything and everyone .. the topic features large in my would be novel (A Certain Point of Beauty) ..
A splendid offering today sorenbarrett .. 100/100 at least ..
Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:23
Neville said:
the interpretation of stimulus as deemed by the senses past present and future ..
the above definition has remained with me ever since our first lectures on the subject of perception many many many years ago .. and boy, have you just reinforced that here .. you are absolutely right and the rule is, it applies to absolutely everything and everyone .. the topic features large in my would be novel (A Certain Point of Beauty) ..
A splendid offering today sorenbarrett .. 100/100 at least ..
Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:23
Point of view
Dan Williams said:
You are the master of the short and sweet, when you are not looking I just might steal that mud line. Borrow?
August 12th, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
You are the master of the short and sweet, when you are not looking I just might steal that mud line. Borrow?
August 12th, 2024 00:21
Point of view
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
very evocative and
skillfully expressed! 👍
Poetic perfection
just resonates throughout
each line, way to go!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 11th, 2024 22:28
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
very evocative and
skillfully expressed! 👍
Poetic perfection
just resonates throughout
each line, way to go!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 11th, 2024 22:28
Point of view
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Powerful yet beautiful poem Soren, Love your writes!
August 11th, 2024 20:29
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Powerful yet beautiful poem Soren, Love your writes!
August 11th, 2024 20:29
Point of view
MendedFences27 said:
No two people see the same thing exactly the same.
Your poem on perception shows this
exactly. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 18:13
MendedFences27 said:
No two people see the same thing exactly the same.
Your poem on perception shows this
exactly. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 18:13
Point of view
Bobby O said:
So much wisdom here, but that’s not enough to say. (Don’t wince) the yin Yang thing can be trite in lesser hands but not here. A comparison might be on observation of a group in unison performing Tai Chi , it would be trite to notice moves in common and generalize but that may be the greatest disservice to self., a limit that reflex adopts then births that overly proud and boisterousn explanation as the ego of some needs a place to go , never recognizing these built their own corral and will insist they didn’t.
That is a world of the yin Yang (trite).
If allowed to seep and steep the minuscule detailsnd beauty of Nuance dances in and performs and adds splendor as that Tai Chi master with control and precision snf timing and urgency to improve is separate and a Joy to own., much like it was for me as I read your piece. Thanks for listening.
August 11th, 2024 11:42
Bobby O said:
So much wisdom here, but that’s not enough to say. (Don’t wince) the yin Yang thing can be trite in lesser hands but not here. A comparison might be on observation of a group in unison performing Tai Chi , it would be trite to notice moves in common and generalize but that may be the greatest disservice to self., a limit that reflex adopts then births that overly proud and boisterousn explanation as the ego of some needs a place to go , never recognizing these built their own corral and will insist they didn’t.
That is a world of the yin Yang (trite).
If allowed to seep and steep the minuscule detailsnd beauty of Nuance dances in and performs and adds splendor as that Tai Chi master with control and precision snf timing and urgency to improve is separate and a Joy to own., much like it was for me as I read your piece. Thanks for listening.
August 11th, 2024 11:42
Point of view
Bobby O said:
So much wisdom here, but that’s not enough to say. (Don’t wince) the yin Yang thing can be trite in lesser hands but not here. A comparison might be on observation of a group in unison performing Tai Chi , it would be trite to notice moves in common and generalize but that may be the greatest disservice to self., a limit that reflex adopts then births that overly proud and boisterousn explanation as the ego of some needs a place to go , never recognizing these built their own corral and will insist they didn’t.
That is a world of the yin Yang (trite).
If allowed to seep and steep the minuscule detailsnd beauty of Nuance dances in and performs and adds splendor as that Tai Chi master with control and precision snf timing and urgency to improve is separate and a Joy to own., much like it was for me as I read your piece. Thanks for listening.
August 11th, 2024 11:42
Bobby O said:
So much wisdom here, but that’s not enough to say. (Don’t wince) the yin Yang thing can be trite in lesser hands but not here. A comparison might be on observation of a group in unison performing Tai Chi , it would be trite to notice moves in common and generalize but that may be the greatest disservice to self., a limit that reflex adopts then births that overly proud and boisterousn explanation as the ego of some needs a place to go , never recognizing these built their own corral and will insist they didn’t.
That is a world of the yin Yang (trite).
If allowed to seep and steep the minuscule detailsnd beauty of Nuance dances in and performs and adds splendor as that Tai Chi master with control and precision snf timing and urgency to improve is separate and a Joy to own., much like it was for me as I read your piece. Thanks for listening.
August 11th, 2024 11:42
Point of view
orchidee said:
Yes - and also:
KP - Mrs Botox to me; some sort of \'superstar\' to others! lol.
August 11th, 2024 09:37
orchidee said:
Yes - and also:
KP - Mrs Botox to me; some sort of \'superstar\' to others! lol.
August 11th, 2024 09:37
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