Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Poetry a la tartare
Thad Wilk said:

WOW! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
What a wonderfully
tasteful and delicious
poem, so well done! ๐Ÿ‘Œ
Love the rhyme and
flow, terrific as usual!!
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

August 21st, 2024 18:35

Poetry a la tartare
Thomas W Case said:

tREMENDOUS WORK.

August 21st, 2024 14:53

Not what it seems
Cassie58 said:

Fabulous use of metaphor here in a poem of love gone wrong. Superbly penned.

Nothing in my pocket but I am rich

Money doesnโ€™t make happiness. A great read.

August 21st, 2024 14:27

Poetry a la tartare
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 21st, 2024 09:28

Poetry a la tartare
Teddy.15 said:

Outstanding metaphor dearest sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

August 21st, 2024 07:42

Not what it seems
Neville said:


on repeated reflection, I think the secret lies somewhere deep & in many respects delicious behind that mental mirror .. I only have one word to add and that is majestic ..


August 21st, 2024 05:35

Poetry a la tartare
orchidee said:

More \'food\' for KP here. It\'s saving me a fortune not actually buying her any tangible food. lol.

August 21st, 2024 05:15

Poetry a la tartare
Neville said:



I like mine with an additional raw egg on top .. not to everyone\'s taste but I continue to enjoy occasionally when placed in my begging bowl .. Very tasty sir, say\'s I ... Neville


August 21st, 2024 04:54

Poetry a la tartare
kwrites said:

extraordinary as usual. The description is out of this world!

August 21st, 2024 04:26

Not what it seems
Goldfinch60 said:

We are all rich in our lives soren as we get up every morning.

Andy

August 21st, 2024 00:42

Not what it seems
Dan Williams said:

I\'d like to pick put a favorite line but no room here for the full poem. Your usual high quality.

August 21st, 2024 00:01

Steps
Dan Williams said:

Resonates strongly with me. My heavy sack of provisions also got left behind. Do I need to say \"nice work\"?

August 20th, 2024 23:57

Not what it seems
Thad Wilk said:

Another beauty that
showcases your
superb poetic talent!
Wonderfully woven,
skillfully expressed! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’ฏ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

August 20th, 2024 21:16

Not what it seems
ChrisLyn๐Ÿ•Š said:

Buttered smiles, good one

August 20th, 2024 16:39

Not what it seems
Bella Shepard said:

This poem, phrased in the gastronomy of past love, is quite beautiful. Superb imagery satisfies the palate of the mind. An excellent write my friend!

August 20th, 2024 13:39

Not what it seems
orchidee said:

KP says she\'s always hungry. Dunno why. I feed her as here - memories, smiles, trials, etc. Nothing she can actually eat! lol.

August 20th, 2024 11:00

Not what it seems
Cheeky Missy said:

The pile or collection of intriguing and tantalizing details, whose essence as similes or metaphors heightens the experience, leave the casual reader in over his head and the more thoughtful with more to mull than can be put directly into words spat out on the draw. Fascinating and contemplative. Dat\'s all I has on the fly.

August 20th, 2024 10:29

One in all, all in one
NafisaSB said:

your imagination soars, and in the verse, shows
well done, keep it coming

August 20th, 2024 08:09

Not what it seems
Doggerel Dave said:

Depravation then hallucination in a few short lines. Richly detailed hard times, Soren.

August 20th, 2024 07:54

Not what it seems
Mutley Ravishes said:

Leave it out, Marlene, I am skint!

August 20th, 2024 06:36

Steps
AuburnScribbler said:

A brilliantly written defiant piece on the power of resilience and of gratitude here sorenbarrett.

To thank both yourself and the others who have aided you, and perhaps you them, that have given such mutual strength to live, is a beautiful thing indeed.

Bravo and I hope that all is well.

August 20th, 2024 04:43

Not what it seems
Teddy.15 said:

Ah beautiful piece, you know I have a lot of friends, who wouldn\'t last a day if their bank accounts were even frozen for an hour lol, I like to think the poverty I suffered especially when I was a child was actually a life tool, rather than hunger, I could literally live without everything. A Gorgeous write dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

August 20th, 2024 04:38

Steps
Goldfinch60 said:

Those people come into our loves soren and lift us up to new joys.

Andy

August 20th, 2024 01:18

Steps
Dan Williams said:

I hope this reflects an actual memory for you. Your economy of words again impresses me.

August 19th, 2024 23:48

Steps
Thad Wilk said:

Brilliantly scripted,
strong feelings and
thoughts penned!! ๐Ÿ‘
A pleasure to recite,
much enjoyed my friend! ๐Ÿ˜„
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad


August 19th, 2024 19:33

Steps
Neville said:



such smiles clearly stem from the heart ..

August 19th, 2024 16:29

Steps
Cheeky Missy said:

Fascinating and thought-provoking, leaving me pondering the implications, uncertain, left in the last light of gloaming with the taste upon my tongue I can\'t define except it\'s bittersweet, like the best dark chocolate. Lovely.

August 19th, 2024 14:54

Steps
Bella Shepard said:

There is an elegance in the rhyming pattern of this poem that enhances every line. Here memory and regret are so beautifully expressed. Loved it!

August 19th, 2024 09:49

Steps
Alan R said:

Gorgeous!

August 19th, 2024 08:04

Steps
Saleh Ben Saleh said:

Life has its ups and downs, but one must always remain optimistic, until the day that brings delight.
Well expressed feelings even though I feel depression.
Thank you for sharing.

August 19th, 2024 05:21



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