Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Modern poet
orchidee said:

Ahh, lovely - I was just thinking about what to give KP for her dinners next week. Now I need think no more! heehee.
What deep thought did I ever contribute to \'comments\'?! lol.

April 14th, 2024 10:30

Modern poet
Parisab said:

Even a poem translated becomes another one ‘birth a new creature’ though I think that’s the big trick to the magic of poetry-good write…

April 14th, 2024 09:20

Modern poet
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous. I love the creativity.

April 14th, 2024 08:38

Modern poet
Teddy.15 said:

Wow I\'d say a perfect description. just to be in a day of yesterday for it\'s beauty and altered philosophy I\'d truly love to be, although books are my time travel I very rarely read.

April 14th, 2024 03:43

Modern poet
sorenbarrett said:

Thanks so much for the review and comment it is appreciated

April 14th, 2024 02:41

Modern poet
Alan R said:

Beautiful

April 14th, 2024 02:35

Bring another round
Goldfinch60 said:

Very clever words soren showing the strange intricacies of the English language.

Andy

April 14th, 2024 01:56

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Doggerel Dave said:

Gave me a headache to begin with, Soren, but I got there in the end.
Ingenuously ingenious - not quite right , but it\'s the closest I can come to telling you.....!

April 13th, 2024 20:55

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Bella Shepard said:

This poem is so much fun!! It has to be read aloud and enjoyed to the max. Brilliant my friend, you\'ve outdone yourself.

April 13th, 2024 15:33

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orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

April 13th, 2024 08:41

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Teddy.15 said:

Genius my dear sorrenbarret genius one of a kind filled with sharp.whit rhyme and emotion.

An invalid invalid did object to the object

but did present a present in the present as a project

most inspiring you are 🌹

April 13th, 2024 04:36

Black and white
Goldfinch60 said:

Black and white can give such a clear understanding soren.

Andy

April 13th, 2024 01:13

Black and white
Teddy.15 said:

Sending you some pink. This is amazing I just love your muse so much sorrenbarret superb. 🌹

April 12th, 2024 11:21

Black and white
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

April 12th, 2024 09:40

Black and white
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

April 12th, 2024 04:30

Let it be
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong words soren and so true,

Andy

April 12th, 2024 01:41

Let it be
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

April 11th, 2024 10:05

Let it be
Teddy.15 said:

Truly beautiful and powerful, I believe that life is a lesson, we all need to find comfort and we all need to find each single positive thing we possibly can, they pain of yesterday is right in front of all of us right now dear sorrenbarret, although your words are so raw and truthful I find comfort knowing your angel has come to lay his wisdom. Kudos. My husband he is a physicist and he always argues that my angel shouldn\'t be a she because they don\'t have gender, I always tell him, she can be a she if I want. ❤️

April 11th, 2024 05:05

Purloined
Goldfinch60 said:

But we all learn from experience soren as experience cannot be taught.

Andy

April 11th, 2024 01:26

Purloined
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Powerful work. You pain this picture well with vivid and sharp imagery and language.

April 10th, 2024 21:00

Purloined
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.
Ah, you\'ve given me the idea for what to give KP for her supper tonight - worm infested fruit. lol.

April 10th, 2024 08:01

Purloined
2781 said:

You might need a different strain.

April 10th, 2024 07:28

Purloined
Teddy.15 said:

A.new title utter nonsense lol 😆 oh sorrenbarret your recent work sparks such a light, love this it\'s really harsh I love everything about it, are we ever truly content with who we are? I\'d like to believe I am. People break my balls in ways you cannot imagine each day, living in a foreign country has perks yet a very big difference in culture and work ethic that\'s so important for me. I\'ve ranted enough (wonderful) 🌹

April 10th, 2024 05:29

A cynic\'s meal (stick it to em)
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words soren.

Andy

April 10th, 2024 01:10

A cynic\'s meal (stick it to em)
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

April 9th, 2024 18:37

A cynic\'s meal (stick it to em)
Bella Shepard said:

A very profound write my friend. We have little regard for charity these days, \"me\" comes before \"we\". You skillfully present a sad but unfortunetly true commentery on all parts of society. A fine write!

April 9th, 2024 15:01

A cynic\'s meal (stick it to em)
2781 said:

Absolutely. I\'ve seen a pie chart or two and I didn\'t need to be Einstein to see who got the biggest slice.
Now it\'s a corporate takeover.
God bless the poor.

April 9th, 2024 07:23

A cynic\'s meal (stick it to em)
Teddy.15 said:

A very powerful poem of utter truth. I was actually in Rome a couple of weeks ago, incredible to see the Vatican verse all the tents on the lungotevere River. 🌹

April 9th, 2024 06:48

Dirty Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong and intriguing words soren.

Andy

April 9th, 2024 01:07

Dirty Love
Bella Shepard said:

After reading this poem several times I felt a connection between \"born as a leak of love\" and \"a torn privates glove\", perhaps reference to a condom? The result, an unwanted and perhaps abandoned child left in poverty, after dirty love. Stunning write my friend. Or, maybe I\'ve misinterpreted.

April 8th, 2024 15:49



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