Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
The Memory Forest
orchidee said:
A fine write Bella.
Meanwhile - a fictional daft write on this theme, from me, beginning:
Me end had come
They chucked me in an old tea chest
But no! They needed the chest for more tea
So they tipped me on the rubbish heap.
Where I mixed with old manure!....... (heehee)
I write some rubbish sometimes. lol.
June 13th, 2022 12:01
orchidee said:
A fine write Bella.
Meanwhile - a fictional daft write on this theme, from me, beginning:
Me end had come
They chucked me in an old tea chest
But no! They needed the chest for more tea
So they tipped me on the rubbish heap.
Where I mixed with old manure!....... (heehee)
I write some rubbish sometimes. lol.
June 13th, 2022 12:01
The Memory Forest
Paul Bell said:
I would love to be put in the recycle bin with the words. See what you can do for me, guys.
June 13th, 2022 11:57
Paul Bell said:
I would love to be put in the recycle bin with the words. See what you can do for me, guys.
June 13th, 2022 11:57
The Memory Forest
arqios said:
May peace continue to take root, to grown and flourish.
June 13th, 2022 09:02
arqios said:
May peace continue to take root, to grown and flourish.
June 13th, 2022 09:02
Why?
Neville said:
such a dreadful, largely unavoidable and unnecessary tragedy .. some things never change and some things most surely must ................... Neville
June 5th, 2022 13:30
Neville said:
such a dreadful, largely unavoidable and unnecessary tragedy .. some things never change and some things most surely must ................... Neville
June 5th, 2022 13:30
Why?
sorenbarrett said:
Why? Yes a complicated question, though only three letters long. Access to guns by those that shouldn\'t have them, troubled individuals that go undetected, lack of parental monitoring, video games that encourage killing and criminality. A question that goes unanswered.
June 3rd, 2022 21:16
sorenbarrett said:
Why? Yes a complicated question, though only three letters long. Access to guns by those that shouldn\'t have them, troubled individuals that go undetected, lack of parental monitoring, video games that encourage killing and criminality. A question that goes unanswered.
June 3rd, 2022 21:16
Why?
Paul Bell said:
Steve summed it up.
How the hell can you be allowed to buy assault rifles. Does no one ask questions, does no one do background checks. Some shootings are preventible, and if checks were done, this would be one of them. 19 kids killed because the law allows lunatics to buy rifles.
May 27th, 2022 13:22
Paul Bell said:
Steve summed it up.
How the hell can you be allowed to buy assault rifles. Does no one ask questions, does no one do background checks. Some shootings are preventible, and if checks were done, this would be one of them. 19 kids killed because the law allows lunatics to buy rifles.
May 27th, 2022 13:22
Why?
Goldfinch60 said:
The gun culture in the USA is dreadful Bella, surely guns should not be allowed for all to buy.
Andy
May 26th, 2022 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
The gun culture in the USA is dreadful Bella, surely guns should not be allowed for all to buy.
Andy
May 26th, 2022 00:29
Why?
Rozina said:
A terrible tragedy AGAIN. The Port Arthur massacre in Tasmania Australia1996 led to the historic gun control act in Australia. I wonder what it will take in USA. Your lines show your despair, your grief. I am so sorry too.
May 25th, 2022 18:27
Rozina said:
A terrible tragedy AGAIN. The Port Arthur massacre in Tasmania Australia1996 led to the historic gun control act in Australia. I wonder what it will take in USA. Your lines show your despair, your grief. I am so sorry too.
May 25th, 2022 18:27
Why?
JudyStella said:
A powerful message presented through an impressive use of language. This is truly the downfall of humanity. Such a pathetic sight😔
May 25th, 2022 11:35
JudyStella said:
A powerful message presented through an impressive use of language. This is truly the downfall of humanity. Such a pathetic sight😔
May 25th, 2022 11:35
Why?
Rocky Lagou said:
When I woke up to these news, my mind went straight to the Parkland Shooting that happened just a few miles from where I used to live. My heart is so heavy to know that these types of massacres are still occuring at alarming rates. We can truly only hope for better days.
May 25th, 2022 10:29
Rocky Lagou said:
When I woke up to these news, my mind went straight to the Parkland Shooting that happened just a few miles from where I used to live. My heart is so heavy to know that these types of massacres are still occuring at alarming rates. We can truly only hope for better days.
May 25th, 2022 10:29
Why?
dusk arising said:
It seems the USA need not worry about terrorist attacks, americans of all backgrounds are killing each other off without help from terrorists.
P.S. It\'s not guns which kill people, it\'s the ammunition.
May 25th, 2022 10:03
dusk arising said:
It seems the USA need not worry about terrorist attacks, americans of all backgrounds are killing each other off without help from terrorists.
P.S. It\'s not guns which kill people, it\'s the ammunition.
May 25th, 2022 10:03
Why?
Aradhya said:
the world has become a dangerous place to live in not just because of people who does wrong but even more because of the society that ignores such acts. indeed! such a powerful message, you have expressed with an exquisite flow of words.
May 25th, 2022 08:31
Aradhya said:
the world has become a dangerous place to live in not just because of people who does wrong but even more because of the society that ignores such acts. indeed! such a powerful message, you have expressed with an exquisite flow of words.
May 25th, 2022 08:31
Clarity
Distant View said:
Indeed, as long as we have our faculties we can gain clarity, when our mind is in the right place!
May 25th, 2022 07:38
Distant View said:
Indeed, as long as we have our faculties we can gain clarity, when our mind is in the right place!
May 25th, 2022 07:38
Swan Lake
spilleronsheet said:
The balance of passion and perfection
The connection to soul that rhythm
A ballet means so much
Imbibed in an innocent heart
Stays forever with us
Truly appreciate your lines and I am so glad you did justice to an artist
Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece
It inspires me…
May 25th, 2022 02:09
spilleronsheet said:
The balance of passion and perfection
The connection to soul that rhythm
A ballet means so much
Imbibed in an innocent heart
Stays forever with us
Truly appreciate your lines and I am so glad you did justice to an artist
Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece
It inspires me…
May 25th, 2022 02:09
Clarity
spilleronsheet said:
Words of wisdom
Stringed as senryu
So true my dear friend…
I keep rereading those lines to connect so many situations in life…
May 25th, 2022 02:05
spilleronsheet said:
Words of wisdom
Stringed as senryu
So true my dear friend…
I keep rereading those lines to connect so many situations in life…
May 25th, 2022 02:05
Clarity
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen to this Bella, honestly. Being \"woke\" and tactful in a time like this is honestly a treasure. I know that with enough kindness and love we can save ourselves from out impending doom.
May 24th, 2022 08:59
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen to this Bella, honestly. Being \"woke\" and tactful in a time like this is honestly a treasure. I know that with enough kindness and love we can save ourselves from out impending doom.
May 24th, 2022 08:59
Clarity
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, distilled wisdom
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 24th, 2022 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, distilled wisdom
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 24th, 2022 03:51
Clarity
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Bella, that clarity is always there but many people just look without seeing.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Bella, that clarity is always there but many people just look without seeing.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 00:24
Clarity
dusk arising said:
The moment clarity shows the way... succinctly captured.
May 23rd, 2022 17:25
dusk arising said:
The moment clarity shows the way... succinctly captured.
May 23rd, 2022 17:25
Clarity
JudyStella said:
A great fact presented in a simple yet powerful manner!
May 23rd, 2022 15:14
JudyStella said:
A great fact presented in a simple yet powerful manner!
May 23rd, 2022 15:14
Swan Lake
Paul Bell said:
That is a sad state, yet the music brings her back to life for a while.
I suppose stardom is fleeting and must be grabbed with both hands.
May 23rd, 2022 11:00
Paul Bell said:
That is a sad state, yet the music brings her back to life for a while.
I suppose stardom is fleeting and must be grabbed with both hands.
May 23rd, 2022 11:00
Swan Lake
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Bella, music is so important when suffering like this as it was for my wife during her dementia.
Music is so powerful in our lives.
Andy
May 22nd, 2022 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Bella, music is so important when suffering like this as it was for my wife during her dementia.
Music is so powerful in our lives.
Andy
May 22nd, 2022 00:31
Swan Lake
Rozina said:
A very beautiful tribute. So touching to watch this amazing dancer perform.
May 21st, 2022 18:13
Rozina said:
A very beautiful tribute. So touching to watch this amazing dancer perform.
May 21st, 2022 18:13
Swan Lake
rrodriguez said:
Very thoughtful of you to write this fine piece. Bravo!
May 21st, 2022 15:23
rrodriguez said:
Very thoughtful of you to write this fine piece. Bravo!
May 21st, 2022 15:23
Into The Universe
Aradhya said:
the universe is vast and unfathomable and it is as much a part of us as we are a part of it. every breathe we take and release resonates that deep rooted connection. great lines Bella!
May 21st, 2022 10:21
Aradhya said:
the universe is vast and unfathomable and it is as much a part of us as we are a part of it. every breathe we take and release resonates that deep rooted connection. great lines Bella!
May 21st, 2022 10:21
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