Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
Swan Lake
Aradhya said:
A very perceptive, beautifully written poem, portraying the reality of life. keep on it!
May 21st, 2022 10:03
Aradhya said:
A very perceptive, beautifully written poem, portraying the reality of life. keep on it!
May 21st, 2022 10:03
Try To Remember
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Your thoughts laid out well
Smooth flow
Ageing can be fraught with duch sentiment
For balance, as all is not in vain, another side which you alsi may have experienced
Age
freedom
Freedom from nonsensical worry
To not matter is 解放,
what is the word liberation
He is bothering me turns to
he was bothering me
Relax enjoy enjoy some more
sleep perhaps sleepsomemore
Awakening
Freedom
freedom
age
May 20th, 2022 06:04
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Your thoughts laid out well
Smooth flow
Ageing can be fraught with duch sentiment
For balance, as all is not in vain, another side which you alsi may have experienced
Age
freedom
Freedom from nonsensical worry
To not matter is 解放,
what is the word liberation
He is bothering me turns to
he was bothering me
Relax enjoy enjoy some more
sleep perhaps sleepsomemore
Awakening
Freedom
freedom
age
May 20th, 2022 06:04
Phoenix
Neville said:
it would be very naughty not to love this shorty .... succinct and very much to the point ... Neville
May 18th, 2022 16:00
Neville said:
it would be very naughty not to love this shorty .... succinct and very much to the point ... Neville
May 18th, 2022 16:00
Phoenix
spilleronsheet said:
It was truly amazing
From phoenix to self
The human embroiled in it
And the words so true
Very intriguing
Really enjoyed it dear Bella…
May 18th, 2022 13:50
spilleronsheet said:
It was truly amazing
From phoenix to self
The human embroiled in it
And the words so true
Very intriguing
Really enjoyed it dear Bella…
May 18th, 2022 13:50
Phoenix
Paul Bell said:
It is a great analogy. Does it have to burn. Does it need to hurt before I feel the benefit. The answer is always yes, yet there\'s always just that little doubt in the back of your head.
May 14th, 2022 04:35
Paul Bell said:
It is a great analogy. Does it have to burn. Does it need to hurt before I feel the benefit. The answer is always yes, yet there\'s always just that little doubt in the back of your head.
May 14th, 2022 04:35
Try To Remember
rrodriguez said:
Excellent flow and thought pattern. Thank you for sharing it with us.
May 13th, 2022 14:16
rrodriguez said:
Excellent flow and thought pattern. Thank you for sharing it with us.
May 13th, 2022 14:16
Phoenix
Goldfinch60 said:
Much meaning in these few words Bella, good write.
Andy
May 13th, 2022 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Much meaning in these few words Bella, good write.
Andy
May 13th, 2022 00:26
Phoenix
Distant View said:
A thought-provoking write. Sometimes we must cut away (or burn) the bad to see the good.
May 12th, 2022 14:47
Distant View said:
A thought-provoking write. Sometimes we must cut away (or burn) the bad to see the good.
May 12th, 2022 14:47
Phoenix
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes Bella! What a dazzling 5/7/5 that speaks so many meanings in so little words. I adore the way you presented this with a question, it makes it feel like I walked into a conversation. This pheonix analogy reminds me of Sylvia Plath\'s most iconic lines in the poem \"Lady Lazarus\" in which she concludes the poem with, \"Beware. Out of the ash. I rise with my red hair. And I eat men like air.\" The \"red hair\" hinting at a phoenix type of resurrection. Your poem is so true, in order to make it far, we have to be willing to \"grab the match\" and light ourselves aflame. Marvelous Bella, just marvelous.
May 12th, 2022 12:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes Bella! What a dazzling 5/7/5 that speaks so many meanings in so little words. I adore the way you presented this with a question, it makes it feel like I walked into a conversation. This pheonix analogy reminds me of Sylvia Plath\'s most iconic lines in the poem \"Lady Lazarus\" in which she concludes the poem with, \"Beware. Out of the ash. I rise with my red hair. And I eat men like air.\" The \"red hair\" hinting at a phoenix type of resurrection. Your poem is so true, in order to make it far, we have to be willing to \"grab the match\" and light ourselves aflame. Marvelous Bella, just marvelous.
May 12th, 2022 12:13
Fatalist?
Rocky Lagou said:
Period. This is literally golden though, a great delve into the human mind. We truly are our own obstacles. Great job Bella!
May 12th, 2022 10:45
Rocky Lagou said:
Period. This is literally golden though, a great delve into the human mind. We truly are our own obstacles. Great job Bella!
May 12th, 2022 10:45
Fatalist?
Paul Bell said:
This is me on any project, then I delegate to the smart people.
May 8th, 2022 05:08
Paul Bell said:
This is me on any project, then I delegate to the smart people.
May 8th, 2022 05:08
Fatalist?
Neville said:
succinctus superbus & of course trueus ............................ Neville :)
May 8th, 2022 02:37
Neville said:
succinctus superbus & of course trueus ............................ Neville :)
May 8th, 2022 02:37
Fatalist?
Goldfinch60 said:
So true unless we think outside the box into our own reality.
Andy
May 8th, 2022 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
So true unless we think outside the box into our own reality.
Andy
May 8th, 2022 02:15
Into The Universe
Paul Bell said:
I suppose we are but a mere particle in the big scale of life, which can be a bit frightening at times.
April 29th, 2022 03:03
Paul Bell said:
I suppose we are but a mere particle in the big scale of life, which can be a bit frightening at times.
April 29th, 2022 03:03
Into The Universe
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing 🙂
April 29th, 2022 02:23
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing 🙂
April 29th, 2022 02:23
Into The Universe
Neville said:
if its not too late, I can truly & totally relate .. a well penned meditation my friend ......................... Neville
April 29th, 2022 02:21
Neville said:
if its not too late, I can truly & totally relate .. a well penned meditation my friend ......................... Neville
April 29th, 2022 02:21
Into The Universe
Goldfinch60 said:
That universe is there for us all to admire and be part of Bella.
Andy
April 29th, 2022 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That universe is there for us all to admire and be part of Bella.
Andy
April 29th, 2022 01:30
Into The Universe
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes dear Bella when we seek silence and breathe night\'s peace we learn our smallness as more life fills our hearts - -- a inspiring read.
April 28th, 2022 15:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes dear Bella when we seek silence and breathe night\'s peace we learn our smallness as more life fills our hearts - -- a inspiring read.
April 28th, 2022 15:33
Try To Remember
sorenbarrett said:
Bella I loved this write and its humorous but sad focus on old age and memory. My memory too is not what it used to be, but then I just kid myself that it is because of all the junk I\'ve stored upstairs over the years. Great poem.
April 25th, 2022 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
Bella I loved this write and its humorous but sad focus on old age and memory. My memory too is not what it used to be, but then I just kid myself that it is because of all the junk I\'ve stored upstairs over the years. Great poem.
April 25th, 2022 20:10
Just Because (senryu-maybe)
Rocky Lagou said:
This is excellent, to see you fit it in the senryu form as well is spectacular. This delightfully reminds me of a Lana Del Rey poem called \"Never to Heaven\" in which she say:
\"The whys in this lifetime I\'ve found are inconsequential
compared to the magic of the nowness - the solution to most
questions
there are no reasons\"
This poem is amazing, thank you.
April 25th, 2022 13:25
Rocky Lagou said:
This is excellent, to see you fit it in the senryu form as well is spectacular. This delightfully reminds me of a Lana Del Rey poem called \"Never to Heaven\" in which she say:
\"The whys in this lifetime I\'ve found are inconsequential
compared to the magic of the nowness - the solution to most
questions
there are no reasons\"
This poem is amazing, thank you.
April 25th, 2022 13:25
Try To Remember
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Bella, we can remember those wonderful times but where the keys are can be quite a problem, like the question of why did I come up stairs?
Andy
April 25th, 2022 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Bella, we can remember those wonderful times but where the keys are can be quite a problem, like the question of why did I come up stairs?
Andy
April 25th, 2022 00:46
Try To Remember
MendedFences27 said:
\" Let me tell you Bella, they\'re most likely there in your pocketbook.\" I have lived this poem. It was like looking in a mirror. Well written and an amusing read. Just the other day, I went downstairs to fetch a book I left on my desk, got distracted and had to make three trips.
Your poem hit home for me. Liked the rhymes. Enjoyed the entire read. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2022 21:13
MendedFences27 said:
\" Let me tell you Bella, they\'re most likely there in your pocketbook.\" I have lived this poem. It was like looking in a mirror. Well written and an amusing read. Just the other day, I went downstairs to fetch a book I left on my desk, got distracted and had to make three trips.
Your poem hit home for me. Liked the rhymes. Enjoyed the entire read. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2022 21:13
Try To Remember
Rozina said:
I know this song. I sang your lines to the tune. Very nice.
April 24th, 2022 17:23
Rozina said:
I know this song. I sang your lines to the tune. Very nice.
April 24th, 2022 17:23
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