Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
The Steel Fortress
Doggerel Dave said:
Well Bella, I\'m not sure I wanted this: the relationships metaphor consensus lead to a mental rehearsal of possibilities which did not improve my day one whit.....😟
Never mind, I\'m moving on... 🙂
September 1st, 2022 00:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Well Bella, I\'m not sure I wanted this: the relationships metaphor consensus lead to a mental rehearsal of possibilities which did not improve my day one whit.....😟
Never mind, I\'m moving on... 🙂
September 1st, 2022 00:14
The Steel Fortress
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen so well the shock of bullets fired from inside a steel-built partnership - -- a potent three-liner dear Bella.
August 31st, 2022 15:52
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen so well the shock of bullets fired from inside a steel-built partnership - -- a potent three-liner dear Bella.
August 31st, 2022 15:52
The Steel Fortress
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, never ever think you are protected within.
August 31st, 2022 13:55
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, never ever think you are protected within.
August 31st, 2022 13:55
Being Human
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes less is more.... in this case definitely, Bella
August 30th, 2022 04:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes less is more.... in this case definitely, Bella
August 30th, 2022 04:26
Happy Together
Neville said:
You just brought music to my ears .. I can totally relate to every word .. indeed it wasn\'t that long ago I spent the entire weekend from Friday evening through till Sunday afternoon at the local Butlins Holiday Camp watching back on back so many of my musical hero\'s playing live .. Still going strong from as far back as the 60\'s .. Yeah\' you really got me going Bella .. Bless ya .................... Neville :)
August 28th, 2022 02:09
Neville said:
You just brought music to my ears .. I can totally relate to every word .. indeed it wasn\'t that long ago I spent the entire weekend from Friday evening through till Sunday afternoon at the local Butlins Holiday Camp watching back on back so many of my musical hero\'s playing live .. Still going strong from as far back as the 60\'s .. Yeah\' you really got me going Bella .. Bless ya .................... Neville :)
August 28th, 2022 02:09
Happy Together
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you just have to look at the Stones, who still sell out stadiums. You feeling young again and raring to rock.
August 27th, 2022 06:29
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you just have to look at the Stones, who still sell out stadiums. You feeling young again and raring to rock.
August 27th, 2022 06:29
Happy Together
sorenbarrett said:
Dear Bella music has always been a passion for me. I too grew up in that era, but I found with age, that my musical interests have spread to all types. Like poetry music can move the soul and keep us young.
August 22nd, 2022 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
Dear Bella music has always been a passion for me. I too grew up in that era, but I found with age, that my musical interests have spread to all types. Like poetry music can move the soul and keep us young.
August 22nd, 2022 16:01
Happy Together
Greg57 said:
Your words are so true. I loved sitting next to you at the concert and for the last 52+ years. Love you, Sweetheart.
August 21st, 2022 19:50
Greg57 said:
Your words are so true. I loved sitting next to you at the concert and for the last 52+ years. Love you, Sweetheart.
August 21st, 2022 19:50
Happy Together
dean langmuir said:
Bella may you always be a teen at heart,awesome write and can relate,you take care,poem on
August 21st, 2022 17:40
dean langmuir said:
Bella may you always be a teen at heart,awesome write and can relate,you take care,poem on
August 21st, 2022 17:40
Every Life is a Story
Neville said:
this reads like a seamless marriage between a whimsey & a universal truth ............ write on my friend ...
August 21st, 2022 03:53
Neville said:
this reads like a seamless marriage between a whimsey & a universal truth ............ write on my friend ...
August 21st, 2022 03:53
Being Human
Neville said:
my word, you are so very write & true .. just wish my head popped like that, every now and then :)
August 21st, 2022 03:46
Neville said:
my word, you are so very write & true .. just wish my head popped like that, every now and then :)
August 21st, 2022 03:46
Being Human
sorenbarrett said:
Whenever we think we know something about it we find we were wrong. Being human is to be part of a universal whole. Too much for me to comprehend.
August 16th, 2022 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
Whenever we think we know something about it we find we were wrong. Being human is to be part of a universal whole. Too much for me to comprehend.
August 16th, 2022 13:24
Being Human
orchidee said:
Good write Bella.
Since when did my singing sound like a human being?! lol.
August 15th, 2022 01:26
orchidee said:
Good write Bella.
Since when did my singing sound like a human being?! lol.
August 15th, 2022 01:26
Being Human
Fay Slimm. said:
What a journey of learning is our life on this planet. Thank you for this three-line reminder of on-going lessons for humans dear Bella.
August 14th, 2022 15:23
Fay Slimm. said:
What a journey of learning is our life on this planet. Thank you for this three-line reminder of on-going lessons for humans dear Bella.
August 14th, 2022 15:23
In Life
Paul Bell said:
How many people do it.
Work hard all their life, retire, and die a couple of months later.
Work-life balance, me thinks.
August 13th, 2022 03:43
Paul Bell said:
How many people do it.
Work hard all their life, retire, and die a couple of months later.
Work-life balance, me thinks.
August 13th, 2022 03:43
Sticky Hands and Grape Juice Smiles
sorenbarrett said:
Bella this brought so many memories of my own children and the past. The past is foggy like a dream but some images remain clear. I am glad that the clear ones are the happiest
August 12th, 2022 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
Bella this brought so many memories of my own children and the past. The past is foggy like a dream but some images remain clear. I am glad that the clear ones are the happiest
August 12th, 2022 13:02
Sticky Hands and Grape Juice Smiles
Neville said:
I just knew from the delicious title and even before opening the page that I was gonna enjoy sharing the mess that was likely to be contained within ... and boy, I was not disappointed ... I\'m still wearing a trace of my initial smile as I recollect similar memories of my own kids .. Thank you my dear literary friend and poet ..... Neville
August 12th, 2022 04:10
Neville said:
I just knew from the delicious title and even before opening the page that I was gonna enjoy sharing the mess that was likely to be contained within ... and boy, I was not disappointed ... I\'m still wearing a trace of my initial smile as I recollect similar memories of my own kids .. Thank you my dear literary friend and poet ..... Neville
August 12th, 2022 04:10
Sticky Hands and Grape Juice Smiles
LexiLou said:
Beautiful dedication to your children Bella. I vividly saw the scenes as you took us through each milestone ! Great write !
August 11th, 2022 15:39
LexiLou said:
Beautiful dedication to your children Bella. I vividly saw the scenes as you took us through each milestone ! Great write !
August 11th, 2022 15:39
Sticky Hands and Grape Juice Smiles
Paul Bell said:
I would imagine not a lot has changed. The fingers are still sticky, the high chair might be a bit posher, but the food still goes everywhere apart from in their mouths.
August 11th, 2022 08:45
Paul Bell said:
I would imagine not a lot has changed. The fingers are still sticky, the high chair might be a bit posher, but the food still goes everywhere apart from in their mouths.
August 11th, 2022 08:45
Sticky Hands and Grape Juice Smiles
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
this
work, of sheer unwavering bravery
and sincerity of the utmost intimacy
with that poetic eloquence
of effortless, magnetism
is why I read..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
\'Food was a tactile experience
New tastes, new textures
The stickier, the better\'
reading choice wording, like this
reminds me, despite it all
indeed, life
is beautiful!
August 11th, 2022 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
this
work, of sheer unwavering bravery
and sincerity of the utmost intimacy
with that poetic eloquence
of effortless, magnetism
is why I read..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
\'Food was a tactile experience
New tastes, new textures
The stickier, the better\'
reading choice wording, like this
reminds me, despite it all
indeed, life
is beautiful!
August 11th, 2022 03:30
Sticky Hands and Grape Juice Smiles
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful poem Bella, those times when children very young are so very special in our memories.
Andy
August 11th, 2022 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful poem Bella, those times when children very young are so very special in our memories.
Andy
August 11th, 2022 01:01
In Life
jazzwa30 said:
so short but provoked a loud message I ask myself that alot..
August 10th, 2022 19:12
jazzwa30 said:
so short but provoked a loud message I ask myself that alot..
August 10th, 2022 19:12
In Life
Neville said:
My word, now that really is the million dollar question .. Can I press pause & go ask a friend ................. Neville
August 10th, 2022 07:10
Neville said:
My word, now that really is the million dollar question .. Can I press pause & go ask a friend ................. Neville
August 10th, 2022 07:10
In Life
Goldfinch60 said:
That life is with you Bella and there is much more for you to live and I am sure it will be wonderful.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
That life is with you Bella and there is much more for you to live and I am sure it will be wonderful.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 23:56
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