Comments received on poems by arqios
song to the stars
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the blending of nursery rhyme and metaphor. This feels like a lullaby sung after the world has moved on—a song for what remains: old stories, natural beauty, and the celestial dust that makes up the cosmos. It is weary but has whimsy; filled with light, yet shadowed by the longing for things once bright and now dimmed in our memories. Or, at least, that is what I get out of it. A brilliant poem and a fave for sure. 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 07:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the blending of nursery rhyme and metaphor. This feels like a lullaby sung after the world has moved on—a song for what remains: old stories, natural beauty, and the celestial dust that makes up the cosmos. It is weary but has whimsy; filled with light, yet shadowed by the longing for things once bright and now dimmed in our memories. Or, at least, that is what I get out of it. A brilliant poem and a fave for sure. 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 07:41
song to the stars
David Wakeling said:
Some childhood memories here with a touch of regret.Always a delight to read your poems mi amigo
April 13th, 2025 05:30
David Wakeling said:
Some childhood memories here with a touch of regret.Always a delight to read your poems mi amigo
April 13th, 2025 05:30
song to the stars
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read for a sunday, mixture of child gone songs and lovely imagery, I am probably completly of the track, but this gave me the feeling of children who are no longer here and are now seen in the stars, enjoyed the read
April 13th, 2025 05:02
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read for a sunday, mixture of child gone songs and lovely imagery, I am probably completly of the track, but this gave me the feeling of children who are no longer here and are now seen in the stars, enjoyed the read
April 13th, 2025 05:02
song to the stars
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images mixed with nursery rhyme tells of deeper meaning and some very nice lines particularly the whole last stanza. Cryptically imaged in the poem is the heavens and what is so obvious becomes metaphor. Very nicely done my firend
April 13th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images mixed with nursery rhyme tells of deeper meaning and some very nice lines particularly the whole last stanza. Cryptically imaged in the poem is the heavens and what is so obvious becomes metaphor. Very nicely done my firend
April 13th, 2025 04:40
celestial threads
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be with us arqios.
Andy
April 13th, 2025 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be with us arqios.
Andy
April 13th, 2025 02:30
celestial threads
David Wakeling said:
I see a poet writing about the universe. Very powerful images here.
April 12th, 2025 16:38
David Wakeling said:
I see a poet writing about the universe. Very powerful images here.
April 12th, 2025 16:38
celestial threads
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully explores the cosmic dance between the universe and human insight, where celestial forces intricately weave stories and memories, encapsulating life\'s profound mysteries. The subject matter beautifully touches upon timeless themes of time, memory, nature, and the cosmic bond that unites all things. The poem may be intended to joyfully celebrate nature\'s breathtaking beauty and the emotional resonance that the changing seasons evoke in the human experience, inviting readers to revel in the awe-inspiring transformations that unfold in the world around them.
April 12th, 2025 11:07
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully explores the cosmic dance between the universe and human insight, where celestial forces intricately weave stories and memories, encapsulating life\'s profound mysteries. The subject matter beautifully touches upon timeless themes of time, memory, nature, and the cosmic bond that unites all things. The poem may be intended to joyfully celebrate nature\'s breathtaking beauty and the emotional resonance that the changing seasons evoke in the human experience, inviting readers to revel in the awe-inspiring transformations that unfold in the world around them.
April 12th, 2025 11:07
celestial threads
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Celestial imagery mixed with the craft of writing verse, the metaphor is profound and beautiful. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
April 12th, 2025 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Celestial imagery mixed with the craft of writing verse, the metaphor is profound and beautiful. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
April 12th, 2025 08:01
celestial threads
MDStone said:
I feel like I got a peak behind the curtain to see the thread that binds it all together. Thoughtful, heartfelt, and provoking. Thank you, Arqios for sharing.
April 12th, 2025 07:22
MDStone said:
I feel like I got a peak behind the curtain to see the thread that binds it all together. Thoughtful, heartfelt, and provoking. Thank you, Arqios for sharing.
April 12th, 2025 07:22
celestial threads
arqios said:
The straw that breaks the camel’s back may be nigh.
April 12th, 2025 06:13
arqios said:
The straw that breaks the camel’s back may be nigh.
April 12th, 2025 06:13
celestial threads
Poetic Licence said:
Paints a lovely peaceful picture, nicely done
April 12th, 2025 04:40
Poetic Licence said:
Paints a lovely peaceful picture, nicely done
April 12th, 2025 04:40
celestial threads
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images here my friend, nicely woven into a tapestry of celestial magnificence. So well done
April 12th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images here my friend, nicely woven into a tapestry of celestial magnificence. So well done
April 12th, 2025 04:25
Anton Ego
Goldfinch60 said:
We connect with each other in so many ways arqios.
Andy
April 12th, 2025 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
We connect with each other in so many ways arqios.
Andy
April 12th, 2025 01:49
d a n c e
spilleronsheet said:
Lyrics told, my feet lightens as I step to dance….spurring hope in last lines…wonderfully written dear poet…keep writing
April 11th, 2025 14:31
spilleronsheet said:
Lyrics told, my feet lightens as I step to dance….spurring hope in last lines…wonderfully written dear poet…keep writing
April 11th, 2025 14:31
Anton Ego
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And I was hungry going into this brilliant metaphor. 🤣 Well done on this poem, my friend. \"To taste is to connect\" indeed. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And I was hungry going into this brilliant metaphor. 🤣 Well done on this poem, my friend. \"To taste is to connect\" indeed. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:42
Anton Ego
Friendship said:
Nicely done,Your poem serves to remind readers (and perhaps critics themselves) of the deeper significance of food beyond mere technicality—highlighting the importance of connection, memory, and emotional engagement in the appreciation of culinary art. You seem to suggest that true artistry lies not only in perfection but in the willingness to take risks and connect with others through shared experiences.
April 11th, 2025 06:50
Friendship said:
Nicely done,Your poem serves to remind readers (and perhaps critics themselves) of the deeper significance of food beyond mere technicality—highlighting the importance of connection, memory, and emotional engagement in the appreciation of culinary art. You seem to suggest that true artistry lies not only in perfection but in the willingness to take risks and connect with others through shared experiences.
April 11th, 2025 06:50
Anton Ego
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful tale of the relationship with food with an amazing conclusion that to taste is to connect. Great poem
April 11th, 2025 05:27
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful tale of the relationship with food with an amazing conclusion that to taste is to connect. Great poem
April 11th, 2025 05:27
Anton Ego
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor that made me hungry. Poems like food vary in their taste as do those that consume them vary in theirs. A poem may be perfect but is it perfect for the taste of its reader? No one can tell so all the cook or author can do is make it perfect for themselves. I have always said that what makes a poem a poem to me is the emotion it evokes not the nicety of form or rhyme.
April 11th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor that made me hungry. Poems like food vary in their taste as do those that consume them vary in theirs. A poem may be perfect but is it perfect for the taste of its reader? No one can tell so all the cook or author can do is make it perfect for themselves. I have always said that what makes a poem a poem to me is the emotion it evokes not the nicety of form or rhyme.
April 11th, 2025 04:06
Anton Ego
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very poetic and nicely written poem, nice way to end the week, enjoyed
April 11th, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very poetic and nicely written poem, nice way to end the week, enjoyed
April 11th, 2025 03:19
d a n c e
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dancing arqios it brings joy to our lives.
Andy
April 11th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dancing arqios it brings joy to our lives.
Andy
April 11th, 2025 01:25
d a n c e
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it my friend...the form and the poem, executed flawlessly. The words practically dance as you read them, whether silently or out loud. Wonderful job. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it my friend...the form and the poem, executed flawlessly. The words practically dance as you read them, whether silently or out loud. Wonderful job. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:14
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