Comments received on poems by arqios



a vantaged perch
Neville said:



Exemplary .. And maybe even better than that…

November 18th, 2023 16:21

a vantaged perch
orchidee said:

Was that a pigeon I saw on the... plop...... roof?! Doh!

November 18th, 2023 13:31

a vantaged perch
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

November 18th, 2023 09:26

Pandanus
Neville said:



a more than droolworthy concept and I would be more than happy to partake .. but go heavy on the salt ..

November 18th, 2023 00:53

Pandanus
orchidee said:

Who is Pandanus?! lol. I\'m quite ignorant and uncultured at times heehee.

November 17th, 2023 07:49

of thunder and fire
Mr. Not said:

sunlight and moonlight, complete opposites, yet the sun is so important for the moon to shine
great poem

November 16th, 2023 15:21

of thunder and fire
Mr. Not said:

sunlight and moonlight, complete opposites, yet the sun is so important for the moon to shine
great poem

November 16th, 2023 15:21

of thunder and fire
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

November 16th, 2023 09:10

Promises
Doggerel Dave said:

From data storage to artificial lawns via AI, I got it alright - sums up my discombobulation nicely.

November 16th, 2023 05:53

of thunder and fire
orchidee said:

Yep, lost me again in the crypticness of it, but looks a good poem, so it\'s my usual \'good write\' or \'fine write\' comment!
Now spellcheck don\'\'t like \'crypticness\'. Doh!

November 16th, 2023 05:31

Promises
Firefall said:

True words. Have you found that your memories are not quite what is captured digitally? I think the differences increase as you get older. I really enjoyed the sentiment of your poem.

November 15th, 2023 17:49

Promises
Neville said:



the only constant .. is time but my artificial intelligence keeps telling me its wrong ..


November 15th, 2023 05:04

Promises
2781 said:

Now, that is brilliant!

November 15th, 2023 03:29

Promises
orchidee said:

I don\'t like places with paved front \'gardens\', which are no garden at all!

November 15th, 2023 03:29

Spendthrift
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

November 14th, 2023 06:17

Spendthrift
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

November 14th, 2023 06:08

Spendthrift
Neville said:


this is one of them that\'s more than just a teensy bit special sir CB .. be proud of it .. as I am indeed for you ..

but I\'ll have you know that it is fluff I\'m saving for when the cold weather sets in and not that posh lint stuff .......... Neville

November 14th, 2023 06:03

stick to it
Neville said:


Yeah, I say fuck it too each time it falls off .. and sometimes when it doesn\'t .. cheers CB .. I owe ya .. N

November 13th, 2023 06:15

stick to it
orchidee said:

That\'s made the spell-checker blow a fuse! lol.

November 13th, 2023 05:42

darkish hopefulness
Neville said:


It may well be a throwback but it is also much loved .. at least by me ..

November 12th, 2023 14:03

darkish hopefulness
Neville said:


It may well be a throwback but it is also much loved .. at least by me ..

November 12th, 2023 14:03

darkish hopefulness
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
I don\'t always get the crypticness of it, so it\'s a standard \'good write\' or \'fine write\' comment from me!
Or should that be crypticity? Spell-checker don\'t like \'crypticness\'! (Do shut up sometimes, spell-checker. lol).

November 12th, 2023 11:04

untimely demise
Neville said:


maybe just as well we none of us know what lies around the corner .. perhaps .. :)


November 10th, 2023 12:49

recital
orchidee said:

A fine write CB.

November 7th, 2023 03:12

recital
Neville said:


what a way to spend a weekend .. can\'t think of anything better .. just watch ya step CB .. N

November 7th, 2023 02:49

fly
Bella Shepard said:

Soaring words that lift the spirit. Beautifully versed, steeped in positivity. Loved every line!

November 2nd, 2023 14:50

fly
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

November 2nd, 2023 09:15

fly
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful poetry. Very well crafted.

November 2nd, 2023 08:01

fly
Neville said:


Loved and so much from a distANCE

whatever way you look at it, its clear there are none on you sir 🪰✈️

November 2nd, 2023 07:59

flamebuoyant
Bella Shepard said:

Dear poet you have beautifully expressed in this poem a feeling, that for me seems all too familiar, a loss of purpose in a world that has become unrecognizabale. Perhaps a reboot is in order? Good write!

November 1st, 2023 13:42



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