Comments received on poems by arqios
hymn of the exiles
Cheeky Missy said:
Is that the grand term for this characteristic beauty? Too cool and aptly said. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 27th, 2025 11:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Is that the grand term for this characteristic beauty? Too cool and aptly said. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 27th, 2025 11:10
hymn of the exiles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hell yes! A hymn I know well and sing loudly, my friend. Well done on this! 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hell yes! A hymn I know well and sing loudly, my friend. Well done on this! 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:38
hymn of the exiles
Salvia.S said:
Love the defiance and imagery in this piece! Powerful words!!!
April 27th, 2025 07:26
Salvia.S said:
Love the defiance and imagery in this piece! Powerful words!!!
April 27th, 2025 07:26
hymn of the exiles
David Wakeling said:
This certainly is inspirational.It reminds me of the sixties when many people dropped out of traditional society.Powerful poem
April 27th, 2025 05:38
David Wakeling said:
This certainly is inspirational.It reminds me of the sixties when many people dropped out of traditional society.Powerful poem
April 27th, 2025 05:38
hymn of the exiles
sorenbarrett said:
I love the savage power and defiance in this poem a fave
April 27th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
I love the savage power and defiance in this poem a fave
April 27th, 2025 04:28
printed word
Dan Williams said:
Wind carried messages are all around us. Many listen, few care, fewer reply. Tasteful and edgy, nice work.
April 27th, 2025 00:30
Dan Williams said:
Wind carried messages are all around us. Many listen, few care, fewer reply. Tasteful and edgy, nice work.
April 27th, 2025 00:30
printed word
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for sharing this deeply moving piece—it lingers in both thought and heart. I believe there is a time for everything, and it is up to us to make our best effort to leave a mark, no matter the means we choose. Thank you again for this profound and thought-provoking work.
April 26th, 2025 14:28
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for sharing this deeply moving piece—it lingers in both thought and heart. I believe there is a time for everything, and it is up to us to make our best effort to leave a mark, no matter the means we choose. Thank you again for this profound and thought-provoking work.
April 26th, 2025 14:28
printed word
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When I started writing, I wrote in long hand. Pencil (usually) and a hand-selected journal or composition notebook. Now, I mostly type my poems on computer, but still like to pull out ol\' pad and pencil. My poem today was written old school! 🤣 Anyway, a fantastic poem, my friend. Well done. 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When I started writing, I wrote in long hand. Pencil (usually) and a hand-selected journal or composition notebook. Now, I mostly type my poems on computer, but still like to pull out ol\' pad and pencil. My poem today was written old school! 🤣 Anyway, a fantastic poem, my friend. Well done. 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:29
Ypres, lest we forget
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for sharing these deeply evocative lines; they resonate with me as we have so many memories to honor and never forget. Thank you!
April 26th, 2025 11:55
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for sharing these deeply evocative lines; they resonate with me as we have so many memories to honor and never forget. Thank you!
April 26th, 2025 11:55
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David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful.I enjoyed reading this piece.Well written with an important message of hope that we can re-capture the glory days.Excellent
April 26th, 2025 05:18
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful.I enjoyed reading this piece.Well written with an important message of hope that we can re-capture the glory days.Excellent
April 26th, 2025 05:18
printed word
sorenbarrett said:
There is much metaphor in this poem Cryptic. I began poetry when the only was was with typewriter or pen and paper, certainty was paramount in that editing was a pain. Hard copy was the way but circulation was limited. Now there is no permanence but circulation is high. Loved this poem a fave
April 26th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is much metaphor in this poem Cryptic. I began poetry when the only was was with typewriter or pen and paper, certainty was paramount in that editing was a pain. Hard copy was the way but circulation was limited. Now there is no permanence but circulation is high. Loved this poem a fave
April 26th, 2025 04:46
printed word
Goldfinch60 said:
That permanence is always with us arqios but sometimes life gets in the way.
Andy
April 26th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
That permanence is always with us arqios but sometimes life gets in the way.
Andy
April 26th, 2025 01:18
Ypres, lest we forget
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A beautiful tribute. Our \"Memorial Day\" is coming up at the end of May. It is emotional for me too. Many of my family members served and fought, including my Dad, who is currently paying the price for his service. I wish all wars would end, but we should honor and remember those who are forced to fight in them...and let their memory be the impetus for pushing for peace. A wonderful poem that highlights what we should NEVER no matter where we\'re from. A fave from me, my friend! May ANZAC Day be a powerful day of remembrance for you all in Australian and New Zealand!
April 25th, 2025 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A beautiful tribute. Our \"Memorial Day\" is coming up at the end of May. It is emotional for me too. Many of my family members served and fought, including my Dad, who is currently paying the price for his service. I wish all wars would end, but we should honor and remember those who are forced to fight in them...and let their memory be the impetus for pushing for peace. A wonderful poem that highlights what we should NEVER no matter where we\'re from. A fave from me, my friend! May ANZAC Day be a powerful day of remembrance for you all in Australian and New Zealand!
April 25th, 2025 08:02
Ypres, lest we forget
Doggerel Dave said:
LEST WE FORGET all subsequent wars, the casualties on all sides, (both civilian as well as military) the stupidity of politicians and the military industrial complex which inflicts it all.
A redux
April 25th, 2025 03:54
Doggerel Dave said:
LEST WE FORGET all subsequent wars, the casualties on all sides, (both civilian as well as military) the stupidity of politicians and the military industrial complex which inflicts it all.
A redux
April 25th, 2025 03:54
Ypres, lest we forget
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to the fallen. Those brave souls that fought for what we no enjoy. A wonderful poem of metaphor that pairs the cold and heat of war with the cold and heat of what was fought for. The light and the darkness of what was wone. Great symbolism.
April 25th, 2025 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to the fallen. Those brave souls that fought for what we no enjoy. A wonderful poem of metaphor that pairs the cold and heat of war with the cold and heat of what was fought for. The light and the darkness of what was wone. Great symbolism.
April 25th, 2025 03:27
Ypres, lest we forget
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.I must say I get emotional on Anzac Day. A nice tribute poem.Well done.
April 25th, 2025 02:54
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.I must say I get emotional on Anzac Day. A nice tribute poem.Well done.
April 25th, 2025 02:54
once again
Goldfinch60 said:
That printed words will bring wonder tom us all arqios.
Andy
April 25th, 2025 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
That printed words will bring wonder tom us all arqios.
Andy
April 25th, 2025 01:06
once again
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A powerful write. Writing has been a recorder and preserver of my soul, so this rings very true to me. It\'s funny, because I see you wrote this in \"long hand\". The poem I published today was written in long hand, along with another one! Yes, the fingers are not so used to that anymore, though I love the practice! 🤣 Well done on this, my friend! 👏🌹
April 24th, 2025 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A powerful write. Writing has been a recorder and preserver of my soul, so this rings very true to me. It\'s funny, because I see you wrote this in \"long hand\". The poem I published today was written in long hand, along with another one! Yes, the fingers are not so used to that anymore, though I love the practice! 🤣 Well done on this, my friend! 👏🌹
April 24th, 2025 09:06
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