Comments received on poems by arqios
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read, perfect for a relaxing Sunday, enjoyed
July 27th, 2025 06:36
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read, perfect for a relaxing Sunday, enjoyed
July 27th, 2025 06:36
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, arqios. Dark and gloomy here, but I rejoice anyway. Enjoyed your read over morning coffee.
July 27th, 2025 06:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, arqios. Dark and gloomy here, but I rejoice anyway. Enjoyed your read over morning coffee.
July 27th, 2025 06:06
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the process of awakening and entering the busy day in this poem. This baptism or rebirth in a bustling world is an eye opener. Well done Cryptic
July 27th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the process of awakening and entering the busy day in this poem. This baptism or rebirth in a bustling world is an eye opener. Well done Cryptic
July 27th, 2025 04:51
choirside
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, music brings love to all in the world.
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, music brings love to all in the world.
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:53
murmur of whispers
NafisaSB said:
yes, thanks - it is a very soothing message
felt good reading it too...
July 26th, 2025 23:26
NafisaSB said:
yes, thanks - it is a very soothing message
felt good reading it too...
July 26th, 2025 23:26
choirside
Bella Shepard said:
I love the setting you\'ve chosen for this poem. A place where both voice and silence hold sway. Beautifully written!
July 26th, 2025 14:29
Bella Shepard said:
I love the setting you\'ve chosen for this poem. A place where both voice and silence hold sway. Beautifully written!
July 26th, 2025 14:29
choirside
orchidee said:
Or these days in some places - Worship Groups-side, *Gets out the guitar, drums, keyboard, whatever*
July 26th, 2025 11:07
orchidee said:
Or these days in some places - Worship Groups-side, *Gets out the guitar, drums, keyboard, whatever*
July 26th, 2025 11:07
choirside
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a stunningly tender and luminous piece, dear poet and friend. The language here feels both sacred and lived-in...like liturgy rising from breath and memory. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a stunningly tender and luminous piece, dear poet and friend. The language here feels both sacred and lived-in...like liturgy rising from breath and memory. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:25
choirside
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read some say silence can be deafening but to only those who can hear it, nicely done
July 26th, 2025 08:23
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read some say silence can be deafening but to only those who can hear it, nicely done
July 26th, 2025 08:23
choirside
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful piece Cryptic I particularly loved the last line that in its contradiction those notes can be heard. It seems that all things are waves and particles two ways of seeing the same thing and sound no different is carried in those waves where particle vibration makes it recognizable to the human ear. I believe that silence can be heard because like everything else there is no absolute but if there were it too would be heard. A fave if for nothing else for listening to my ramblings.
July 26th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful piece Cryptic I particularly loved the last line that in its contradiction those notes can be heard. It seems that all things are waves and particles two ways of seeing the same thing and sound no different is carried in those waves where particle vibration makes it recognizable to the human ear. I believe that silence can be heard because like everything else there is no absolute but if there were it too would be heard. A fave if for nothing else for listening to my ramblings.
July 26th, 2025 05:07
murmur of whispers
Goldfinch60 said:
You can never hear them coming arqios until they want their food.
Andy
July 26th, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
You can never hear them coming arqios until they want their food.
Andy
July 26th, 2025 01:14
murmur of whispers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Beautiful! The imagery is wrapped in a soft rhythm, love the flow lots, and that there is a quiet grace present in that closing benediction Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Beautiful! The imagery is wrapped in a soft rhythm, love the flow lots, and that there is a quiet grace present in that closing benediction Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:54
murmur of whispers
Priya Tomar said:
Very lovely !
The last stanza has heart touching tone......
July 25th, 2025 10:52
Priya Tomar said:
Very lovely !
The last stanza has heart touching tone......
July 25th, 2025 10:52
murmur of whispers
Bella Shepard said:
On little cat\'s feet this poem creeps in and charms. Delightful!
July 25th, 2025 08:50
Bella Shepard said:
On little cat\'s feet this poem creeps in and charms. Delightful!
July 25th, 2025 08:50
murmur of whispers
arqios said:
Hopefully the animal lovers here catch on to this as well...
July 25th, 2025 06:20
arqios said:
Hopefully the animal lovers here catch on to this as well...
July 25th, 2025 06:20
murmur of whispers
arqios said:
I hope the physical shape of the poem also elevated the visual aspect of the poem.
July 25th, 2025 05:59
arqios said:
I hope the physical shape of the poem also elevated the visual aspect of the poem.
July 25th, 2025 05:59
murmur of whispers
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed this, those little pads tip toeing through the night, getting up to no good, lovely
July 25th, 2025 04:51
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed this, those little pads tip toeing through the night, getting up to no good, lovely
July 25th, 2025 04:51
murmur of whispers
sorenbarrett said:
Images of Carl Sandburg and Fog that comes on little cat feet. Loved this write Cryptic I have had cats and it evokes images of them. I can hear their soft padded walk over the floor. Nicely done a fave
July 25th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Images of Carl Sandburg and Fog that comes on little cat feet. Loved this write Cryptic I have had cats and it evokes images of them. I can hear their soft padded walk over the floor. Nicely done a fave
July 25th, 2025 04:24
riptide fantasia
Goldfinch60 said:
Let\' just continue dancing to the tunes arqios.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Let\' just continue dancing to the tunes arqios.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:50
riptide fantasia
Dan Williams said:
I like the short but intent phrases, \"Staccato sparks ignite\", \"in the hush between heartbeats\", nice.
July 25th, 2025 00:24
Dan Williams said:
I like the short but intent phrases, \"Staccato sparks ignite\", \"in the hush between heartbeats\", nice.
July 25th, 2025 00:24
riptide fantasia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is damn electric...sound, sweat, tide, all folding into one motion. “We are the current / We are infinite” is such a mic drop. Beautiful crafting done in this poem, my friend...and that is always the case with you. Love this. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is damn electric...sound, sweat, tide, all folding into one motion. “We are the current / We are infinite” is such a mic drop. Beautiful crafting done in this poem, my friend...and that is always the case with you. Love this. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 08:12
5 Varya and Anya’s Vigil
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this holds such delicate strength. “Smiling around broken china”...I get that, deeply. it’s a quiet kind of survival only sisters can share. Each image blooms with restraint. This whole suite has been a gift to witness...I’m here for the home stretch, my friend. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 07:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this holds such delicate strength. “Smiling around broken china”...I get that, deeply. it’s a quiet kind of survival only sisters can share. Each image blooms with restraint. This whole suite has been a gift to witness...I’m here for the home stretch, my friend. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 07:19
riptide fantasia
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely write taking me back to the day of out dancing and clubbing, I find music is like a photograph, you remember each song where and when you first heard it, they evoke emotions and so on, the beauty of creative art, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 05:45
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely write taking me back to the day of out dancing and clubbing, I find music is like a photograph, you remember each song where and when you first heard it, they evoke emotions and so on, the beauty of creative art, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 05:45
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