Comments received on poems by arqios
beautiful regret
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem aches with quiet wisdom—
love’s presence lingers, not to heal, but to hold
the tender weight of what cannot be undone.
May 26th, 2025 02:26
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem aches with quiet wisdom—
love’s presence lingers, not to heal, but to hold
the tender weight of what cannot be undone.
May 26th, 2025 02:26
con un beso (with a kiss)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It did indeed! Understood the Spanish. ¡Mucho Gracias, mi amigo! Well done on this. A fave 😎
May 25th, 2025 20:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It did indeed! Understood the Spanish. ¡Mucho Gracias, mi amigo! Well done on this. A fave 😎
May 25th, 2025 20:25
con un beso (with a kiss)
orchidee said:
A fine write A. If ya had not translated it for us, I would have thought it was an occasional blip, when text appears all in Greek. Then it\'s \'All Greek to me\', if the \'translate button won\'t work! lol.
The only bit of Spanish I know is \'Bonjour\' (Eh? lol). Fido of course knows about 99 languages.
May 25th, 2025 10:02
orchidee said:
A fine write A. If ya had not translated it for us, I would have thought it was an occasional blip, when text appears all in Greek. Then it\'s \'All Greek to me\', if the \'translate button won\'t work! lol.
The only bit of Spanish I know is \'Bonjour\' (Eh? lol). Fido of course knows about 99 languages.
May 25th, 2025 10:02
Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend
arqios said:
Thanks @Damaso for the Fave 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
May 25th, 2025 08:35
arqios said:
Thanks @Damaso for the Fave 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
May 25th, 2025 08:35
Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend
Soman Ragavan said:
“Ink the slate - etched by wound-dipped quills…”
The words and creations that result from sadness are those that have the biggest impact. Thus, the emotions in Shakespeare’s tragedies. Light-hearted words are soon forgotten, but tragic ones remain lingering for long.
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May 25th, 2025 06:13
Soman Ragavan said:
“Ink the slate - etched by wound-dipped quills…”
The words and creations that result from sadness are those that have the biggest impact. Thus, the emotions in Shakespeare’s tragedies. Light-hearted words are soon forgotten, but tragic ones remain lingering for long.
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May 25th, 2025 06:13
con un beso (with a kiss)
BlessedbyGod said:
Muy Bonita mi amigo !
Very beautiful my friend
May 25th, 2025 05:36
BlessedbyGod said:
Muy Bonita mi amigo !
Very beautiful my friend
May 25th, 2025 05:36
con un beso (with a kiss)
Poetic Licence said:
Very tender and gentle write, a kiss can dry a thousand tears, lovely write
May 25th, 2025 05:15
Poetic Licence said:
Very tender and gentle write, a kiss can dry a thousand tears, lovely write
May 25th, 2025 05:15
con un beso (with a kiss)
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is quite a beautiful poem. Very sensitive approach to an intimate meeting. Very well done commendatore
May 25th, 2025 04:26
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is quite a beautiful poem. Very sensitive approach to an intimate meeting. Very well done commendatore
May 25th, 2025 04:26
con un beso (with a kiss)
sorenbarrett said:
The two the same but at the same time not. English is my first language and Portuguese my second at a very lame third is Spanish and yet in this poem that is the one that I prefer. It has a sensuous appeal that goes deeper despite it being the exact same translation. Funny how associations with words are not able to be translated exactly even when the words are. Loved the poem that is very tender. Nice Cryptic
May 25th, 2025 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
The two the same but at the same time not. English is my first language and Portuguese my second at a very lame third is Spanish and yet in this poem that is the one that I prefer. It has a sensuous appeal that goes deeper despite it being the exact same translation. Funny how associations with words are not able to be translated exactly even when the words are. Loved the poem that is very tender. Nice Cryptic
May 25th, 2025 03:34
Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend
orchidee said:
Good write Peaty, erm, Arqois.
May 24th, 2025 08:24
orchidee said:
Good write Peaty, erm, Arqois.
May 24th, 2025 08:24
Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend
arqios said:
Should be but it isn\'t, off for another run through...
May 24th, 2025 06:32
arqios said:
Should be but it isn\'t, off for another run through...
May 24th, 2025 06:32
Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend
Poetic Licence said:
Have to be honest, this ones above my station, still working it out, nicely composed write
May 24th, 2025 04:27
Poetic Licence said:
Have to be honest, this ones above my station, still working it out, nicely composed write
May 24th, 2025 04:27
Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend
sorenbarrett said:
This one accomplishes its task well in Acrostic form. It sounds philosophic to begin with then comes my favorite line (Ink the slate - etched by wound-dipped quills) From there it becomes more epic in nature and the battle cry can be heard. Very nice Cryptic
May 24th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
This one accomplishes its task well in Acrostic form. It sounds philosophic to begin with then comes my favorite line (Ink the slate - etched by wound-dipped quills) From there it becomes more epic in nature and the battle cry can be heard. Very nice Cryptic
May 24th, 2025 04:10
constants of change
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may that constance of life be forever there.
Andy
May 24th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may that constance of life be forever there.
Andy
May 24th, 2025 01:16
constants of change
orchidee said:
Did you know that Pythagoras guy and his theorem?!
May 23rd, 2025 09:55
orchidee said:
Did you know that Pythagoras guy and his theorem?!
May 23rd, 2025 09:55
it walks, not me
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, mate. Love the title and the repetition through the poem. Brilliant work.
May 23rd, 2025 07:01
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, mate. Love the title and the repetition through the poem. Brilliant work.
May 23rd, 2025 07:01
constants of change
Poetic Licence said:
I never liked maths teachers, the subject was ok but I enjoyed this write. Clever write that as we mature in life, the issues we have in our youth gradually reveal the answers, very nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
I never liked maths teachers, the subject was ok but I enjoyed this write. Clever write that as we mature in life, the issues we have in our youth gradually reveal the answers, very nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 05:59
constants of change
arqios said:
Thanks Salvia for the Fave of this poem. Much appreciated 🤩🕊️🙏🏻
May 23rd, 2025 05:41
arqios said:
Thanks Salvia for the Fave of this poem. Much appreciated 🤩🕊️🙏🏻
May 23rd, 2025 05:41
constants of change
David Wakeling said:
I used to be a Maths Teacher so this poem was right up my algorithm. Very clever the fact taht in youth we struggle with the solutions and as we get older the truth reveals itself. Friendship is the key solution.Very clever poem.I enjoyed reading
May 23rd, 2025 04:57
David Wakeling said:
I used to be a Maths Teacher so this poem was right up my algorithm. Very clever the fact taht in youth we struggle with the solutions and as we get older the truth reveals itself. Friendship is the key solution.Very clever poem.I enjoyed reading
May 23rd, 2025 04:57
constants of change
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem where mathematical features are turned mythical in a great metaphor of deeper meaning and so all myths are made. Lovely Cryptic
May 23rd, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem where mathematical features are turned mythical in a great metaphor of deeper meaning and so all myths are made. Lovely Cryptic
May 23rd, 2025 04:31
it walks, not me
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, the past was the palce we walked.
Andy
May 23rd, 2025 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, the past was the palce we walked.
Andy
May 23rd, 2025 00:56
it walks, not me
Salvia.S said:
This gently explores how the past moves on without us. The repeating lines and soft images create a calm, reflective feeling. Well written!!!
May 22nd, 2025 12:18
Salvia.S said:
This gently explores how the past moves on without us. The repeating lines and soft images create a calm, reflective feeling. Well written!!!
May 22nd, 2025 12:18
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