Comments received on poems by arqios
clarity
Poetic Dan said:
Although I write my knowledge of words is not great and got a bit lost on the way but the when I got to bottom of this page. I could feel a pleasant wave.
Maybe clarity came my way.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
August 19th, 2025 01:54
Poetic Dan said:
Although I write my knowledge of words is not great and got a bit lost on the way but the when I got to bottom of this page. I could feel a pleasant wave.
Maybe clarity came my way.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
August 19th, 2025 01:54
clarity
Goldfinch60 said:
Clarity is there arqios once we ever understand what is happening in this world, it may be a long time coming.
Andy
August 19th, 2025 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Clarity is there arqios once we ever understand what is happening in this world, it may be a long time coming.
Andy
August 19th, 2025 01:00
clarity
Poetic Licence said:
A life long search for clarity amongst the confusion as many do, I am sure it\'s there somewhere , but for me anyway it\'s very well hidden, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 20:30
Poetic Licence said:
A life long search for clarity amongst the confusion as many do, I am sure it\'s there somewhere , but for me anyway it\'s very well hidden, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 20:30
clarity
Friendship said:
The poem delves into themes of human vulnerability, the search for truth, and the nature of reality. It contemplates the interplay between confusion and clarity, portraying clarity as a companion to chaos rather than its opponent.
August 18th, 2025 20:23
Friendship said:
The poem delves into themes of human vulnerability, the search for truth, and the nature of reality. It contemplates the interplay between confusion and clarity, portraying clarity as a companion to chaos rather than its opponent.
August 18th, 2025 20:23
clarity
arqios said:
Sometimes you get the niggling feeling that welcome has been overstayed
August 18th, 2025 18:57
arqios said:
Sometimes you get the niggling feeling that welcome has been overstayed
August 18th, 2025 18:57
clarity
David Wakeling said:
Oh I think we all seek clarity in this confusing life.I\'m not sure I have found it.Like the poem says its waiting beneath the noise.A great poem.I enjoyed reading compadre
August 18th, 2025 17:46
David Wakeling said:
Oh I think we all seek clarity in this confusing life.I\'m not sure I have found it.Like the poem says its waiting beneath the noise.A great poem.I enjoyed reading compadre
August 18th, 2025 17:46
clarity
arqios said:
Sometimes we don’t get rid of the questions; we just learn to live alongside them. Clarity is a quiet walk through tangled thoughts and odd turns, pausing to notice the beauty in what isn’t perfectly straight. It’s an invitation to settle in and listen for the gentle truths drumming their beat underneath.
August 18th, 2025 05:15
arqios said:
Sometimes we don’t get rid of the questions; we just learn to live alongside them. Clarity is a quiet walk through tangled thoughts and odd turns, pausing to notice the beauty in what isn’t perfectly straight. It’s an invitation to settle in and listen for the gentle truths drumming their beat underneath.
August 18th, 2025 05:15
clarity
sorenbarrett said:
This one left me in a different land. I feel drifting somehow, vaguely aware that I have been here before. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
This one left me in a different land. I feel drifting somehow, vaguely aware that I have been here before. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 03:43
week in a wink
RSM0812 said:
This poem has a great beat and rhyme shceme. Nice job.
August 17th, 2025 23:32
RSM0812 said:
This poem has a great beat and rhyme shceme. Nice job.
August 17th, 2025 23:32
week in a wink
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, arqios,
This is lovely, it reads like a skipping rope ditty - the last two lines, a gem - a gem in the mud, that is. As I said, Lovely and then some.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 15:31
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, arqios,
This is lovely, it reads like a skipping rope ditty - the last two lines, a gem - a gem in the mud, that is. As I said, Lovely and then some.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 15:31
8-days in a gum-leaf blur
Tony Grannell said:
Good, day, arqios,
What a delightful passage of poetry - so entertaining with delicious quirky bits throughout the week. Lovely, truly lovely.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 12:46
Tony Grannell said:
Good, day, arqios,
What a delightful passage of poetry - so entertaining with delicious quirky bits throughout the week. Lovely, truly lovely.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 12:46
week in a wink
Neville said:
that BIG smile you just lent me is now a broad smile .. write across my face sidewards with the ends curled up at each corner .. nice one squire ..
August 17th, 2025 11:44
Neville said:
that BIG smile you just lent me is now a broad smile .. write across my face sidewards with the ends curled up at each corner .. nice one squire ..
August 17th, 2025 11:44
week in a wink
Kevin Hulme said:
Must be nice to hear Kookaburras first thing.
Enjoyed.
August 17th, 2025 08:59
Kevin Hulme said:
Must be nice to hear Kookaburras first thing.
Enjoyed.
August 17th, 2025 08:59
week in a wink
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No scrolling past by me...loved every movement through the week. What a wonderfully creative and poetic way to tackle the week! Love it, mon! We be jammin\' here! 🤣 A fave from me, dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No scrolling past by me...loved every movement through the week. What a wonderfully creative and poetic way to tackle the week! Love it, mon! We be jammin\' here! 🤣 A fave from me, dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:35
week in a wink
arqios said:
Love how each day arrives with its own little cameo — trackpants and Tim-Tams setting the mood, kookaburras as the week’s chorus, hope literally striding in to clear the muck. The quick, breezy rhymes make it feel like flipping through a week’s worth of Polaroids, ending on that perfect contrast of gold and mud. It’s got that wink‑and‑wave tone that makes you want to read it aloud. And we hope reading it aloud is enjoyable! 🕊️🙏🏻
August 17th, 2025 05:02
arqios said:
Love how each day arrives with its own little cameo — trackpants and Tim-Tams setting the mood, kookaburras as the week’s chorus, hope literally striding in to clear the muck. The quick, breezy rhymes make it feel like flipping through a week’s worth of Polaroids, ending on that perfect contrast of gold and mud. It’s got that wink‑and‑wave tone that makes you want to read it aloud. And we hope reading it aloud is enjoyable! 🕊️🙏🏻
August 17th, 2025 05:02
week in a wink
Poetic Licence said:
No need for Fido, a lovely piece of Fun, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:56
Poetic Licence said:
No need for Fido, a lovely piece of Fun, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:56
week in a wink
sorenbarrett said:
This took me back to my childhood and rhymes of the days of the week. It has a little fun word play as well making it all the better. Nice Cryptic
August 17th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
This took me back to my childhood and rhymes of the days of the week. It has a little fun word play as well making it all the better. Nice Cryptic
August 17th, 2025 04:17
8-days in a gum-leaf blur
Neville said:
How extraordinarily Antipodean .. Love it .. becuz it took me way back .. to when I dabbled & the whole world was different .. way different .. it used to be easy to lose a week .. but then who cared .. if I remember writely, we probably cared more if we didn\'t .. Neville
August 17th, 2025 01:11
Neville said:
How extraordinarily Antipodean .. Love it .. becuz it took me way back .. to when I dabbled & the whole world was different .. way different .. it used to be easy to lose a week .. but then who cared .. if I remember writely, we probably cared more if we didn\'t .. Neville
August 17th, 2025 01:11
the cupboard light
Salvia.S said:
Softly intimate and beautifully understated, -it says so much with so little, like a whispered truth in the dark. Well written!!!!
August 17th, 2025 01:07
Salvia.S said:
Softly intimate and beautifully understated, -it says so much with so little, like a whispered truth in the dark. Well written!!!!
August 17th, 2025 01:07
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