Comments received on poems by arqios



One Such Day
Caring dove said:

Lovely words

November 8th, 2024 07:16

The Beauty of a Kiss
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful moment expressed in a poem. So nicely worded loved it

November 8th, 2024 06:16

One Such Day
Goldfinch60 said:

So would I arqios, so would I.

Andy

November 8th, 2024 02:46

One Such Day
Neville said:



How extraordinarily delightful & as sweet as baklava with a glace cherry on top .. 🍒

November 7th, 2024 14:06

One Such Day
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 7th, 2024 10:45

One Such Day
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful sonnet cryptic and a beautiful thought

November 7th, 2024 06:35

Keloidal Suspension
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words arqios, it is surprising what come into our minds.

Andy

November 7th, 2024 02:23

Keloidal Suspension
David Wakeling said:

A very rich poem. Filled with images and high-level vocabulary, I had to look up some of the words. Excellent

November 6th, 2024 19:41

Keloidal Suspension
Neville said:



What\'s not to like .. but everything to love and die for ..

November 6th, 2024 13:09

Keloidal Suspension
2781 said:

Lucky I looked up the word..but I did like the thought of floating in a kaleidoscope!

November 6th, 2024 08:45

Keloidal Suspension
Tony36 said:

Brilliant

November 6th, 2024 07:31

Keloidal Suspension
sorenbarrett said:

Almost transcendental this poem takes the reader on an internal journey that reflects on past and present pain. It seems surreal. A haunting flight through another dimention

November 6th, 2024 06:21

Dog-Tired Simplicity
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words arqios and that last line is so meaningful.

Andy

November 6th, 2024 02:21

Dog-Tired Simplicity
Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t mind you doing some rhyming verse, but I\'ve cornered the term for myself, thanks, and anyway your rhythm is ace.
BTW \'In acts that are simple\' provides the antidote...

November 5th, 2024 06:43

Dog-Tired Simplicity
Neville said:



You clearly need more Z\'s .. that\'s not a horizontal N by the way ..

November 5th, 2024 04:39

A Bridge Once Too Far
NafisaSB said:

i agree that \'kindness is our compass, and compassion our guide\' to live a beautiful and fruitful life..good one

November 5th, 2024 00:46

Severed Bridges
sorenbarrett said:

Such diverted traffic wanders lost amongst the side roads. A most wonderful metaphor that speaks to broken relationships. Very nice Cryptic

November 4th, 2024 09:01

A Bridge Once Too Far
Neville said:


very nicely poemed sir a little masterpiece if you ask me .. đź‘Ť

November 4th, 2024 02:59

A Bridge Once Too Far
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful positive words arqios, let us all cross those bridges ahead of us.

Andy

November 4th, 2024 02:46

All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
Ladywithaquill said:

This was so clever! And I can hear it being sung as a lullaby.

November 3rd, 2024 19:27

A Bridge Once Too Far
orchidee said:

Good write A.

November 3rd, 2024 12:53

A Bridge Once Too Far
sorenbarrett said:

Not so cryptic this read sets a course through past devestation to new understanding and structure that will withstand time and its ravishes. Lovely words my friend.

November 3rd, 2024 07:33

All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very clever write arqios.

Andy

November 3rd, 2024 02:21

Time to Live
Dan Williams said:

It cheers me to see people like you that can be so optimistic, something that comes very hard to me. Nice work.

November 2nd, 2024 23:40

Time to Live
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

November 2nd, 2024 21:23

All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

November 2nd, 2024 21:20

All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
Neville said:



I always sleep with one eye open .. just in case .. plus I like to know what\'s going on @ all times .. N

November 2nd, 2024 10:09

All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
Cheeky Missy said:

Okay, that riddle rattled my pitiful sense of intelligence more than it should have. Ah, but I do love this one! Awesome! Excellently rendered with superb imagery and subtly haunting poignancy, oh, but I love it!

November 2nd, 2024 09:35

All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
orchidee said:

Good write A.

November 2nd, 2024 09:20

All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
sorenbarrett said:

Ah Cryptic you have captured the feel of sleep and that peaceful hour. Your careful wording of Wynken with waves, Blynken with eyes the again followed by weaving and lastly Nod with dreams followed by wandering is a careful and masterful weaving ot thought and sound. Congratulations

November 2nd, 2024 08:39



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