Comments received on poems by arqios
way back when
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know how certain places continue carrying those we have lost, my friend. We return, and somehow their absence is still waiting there for us. This deeply moved me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2026 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know how certain places continue carrying those we have lost, my friend. We return, and somehow their absence is still waiting there for us. This deeply moved me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2026 08:01
way back when
Neville said:
Having just seen the light with my own eyes this little work of art was very much enjoyed .. Neville
August 29th, 2026 07:08
Neville said:
Having just seen the light with my own eyes this little work of art was very much enjoyed .. Neville
August 29th, 2026 07:08
way back when
sorenbarrett said:
Another lovely and haunting write my dear friend it is the last three lines that hit the hardest \"their white trunks shimmer in light you left behind\" Beautiful and another fave
August 29th, 2026 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
Another lovely and haunting write my dear friend it is the last three lines that hit the hardest \"their white trunks shimmer in light you left behind\" Beautiful and another fave
August 29th, 2026 06:32
the bridge speaks
Kevin Hulme said:
Bridge of Sighs springs to mind. An Interesting Story and Write. 🌁
August 28th, 2026 19:00
Kevin Hulme said:
Bridge of Sighs springs to mind. An Interesting Story and Write. 🌁
August 28th, 2026 19:00
the bridge speaks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is extraordinary. Grief, inheritance, mentorship, and human connection all meet within something painfully aware of its own fragility. Yet inadequacy never prevents it from fulfilling its sacred purpose…sometimes presence alone carries one soul toward another. Absolutely beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 28th, 2026 17:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is extraordinary. Grief, inheritance, mentorship, and human connection all meet within something painfully aware of its own fragility. Yet inadequacy never prevents it from fulfilling its sacred purpose…sometimes presence alone carries one soul toward another. Absolutely beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 28th, 2026 17:39
the bridge speaks
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor woven in these lines where a story is told. Loved it my friend a fave
August 28th, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor woven in these lines where a story is told. Loved it my friend a fave
August 28th, 2026 05:54
cost of love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard. The collision of childhood innocence and violence is brutal...showing how betrayal at such an early age can distort the very meaning of affection. Painful, powerful, and deeply moving work, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 16:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard. The collision of childhood innocence and violence is brutal...showing how betrayal at such an early age can distort the very meaning of affection. Painful, powerful, and deeply moving work, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 16:29
cost of love
Demar Desu said:
The cost of love…. Wait give us more! Come back!
August 27th, 2026 06:15
Demar Desu said:
The cost of love…. Wait give us more! Come back!
August 27th, 2026 06:15
cost of love
sorenbarrett said:
The play on words with batteries is most clever. Darkness and the light of torches plays off dualism as does nurture and torture another word play against torch. Nicely done Cryptic. You know I love word play.
August 27th, 2026 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
The play on words with batteries is most clever. Darkness and the light of torches plays off dualism as does nurture and torture another word play against torch. Nicely done Cryptic. You know I love word play.
August 27th, 2026 05:35
neo-priesthood
Kevin Hulme said:
Remember Hal from 2001. A Space Odyssey?
Enough said.
A good Write as usual.
August 26th, 2026 19:38
Kevin Hulme said:
Remember Hal from 2001. A Space Odyssey?
Enough said.
A good Write as usual.
August 26th, 2026 19:38
neo-priesthood
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is chillingly perceptive. Nothing is violently seized, yet human agency gradually passes to a technological elite claiming exclusive access to systems the wider public cannot examine…disturbingly close to where we are heading. Brilliant work, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 15:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is chillingly perceptive. Nothing is violently seized, yet human agency gradually passes to a technological elite claiming exclusive access to systems the wider public cannot examine…disturbingly close to where we are heading. Brilliant work, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 15:56
neo-priesthood
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling it carries a lonely feel, one of isolation insulated from the electronic and human an alienation in a cold dark universe. Well written my friend
August 26th, 2026 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling it carries a lonely feel, one of isolation insulated from the electronic and human an alienation in a cold dark universe. Well written my friend
August 26th, 2026 07:41
neo-priesthood
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a warning ignored my friend until its too late
August 26th, 2026 07:08
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a warning ignored my friend until its too late
August 26th, 2026 07:08
neo-priesthood
Syd said:
This is brilliant arqios, no one notices the small changes over a long period until it\'s too late. Indeed, the faint warmth of the severs will be the only thing keeping us warm in the near future.
I do use and embrace new technology and I\'m aware of the dangers it brings. Great awareness write.
- Syd 🍄
August 26th, 2026 06:44
Syd said:
This is brilliant arqios, no one notices the small changes over a long period until it\'s too late. Indeed, the faint warmth of the severs will be the only thing keeping us warm in the near future.
I do use and embrace new technology and I\'m aware of the dangers it brings. Great awareness write.
- Syd 🍄
August 26th, 2026 06:44
durable measure
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminds me of people who flourish without attention, praise, or advantage. Their strength rarely announces itself, yet it lasts. Lovely piece, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminds me of people who flourish without attention, praise, or advantage. Their strength rarely announces itself, yet it lasts. Lovely piece, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:55
durable measure
Kevin Hulme said:
This could be a Metaphor for certain types of people.
A good Write.
August 25th, 2026 18:52
Kevin Hulme said:
This could be a Metaphor for certain types of people.
A good Write.
August 25th, 2026 18:52
durable measure
orchidee said:
Good write A. We have couple of indoor plants that we often forget to water. That\'s KP, stuck in a corner and forgotten (on purpose!). lol.
August 25th, 2026 10:31
orchidee said:
Good write A. We have couple of indoor plants that we often forget to water. That\'s KP, stuck in a corner and forgotten (on purpose!). lol.
August 25th, 2026 10:31
durable measure
sorenbarrett said:
Deep meaning in this metaphor my friend. Some plants we treat with great care giving all we think they need yet they are fragile compared to the strength of those that survive on their own, sometimes in the most adverse conditions. I have a plant left by a mother in law sitting in a corner now for over fifty years, sometimes watered sometimes going months without. It lives vibrant as the day I first saw it, I call it immortal. A fave my friend
August 25th, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
Deep meaning in this metaphor my friend. Some plants we treat with great care giving all we think they need yet they are fragile compared to the strength of those that survive on their own, sometimes in the most adverse conditions. I have a plant left by a mother in law sitting in a corner now for over fifty years, sometimes watered sometimes going months without. It lives vibrant as the day I first saw it, I call it immortal. A fave my friend
August 25th, 2026 06:27
terminal lights
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Terminal light\" equals nothingness, perhaps?
August 24th, 2026 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Terminal light\" equals nothingness, perhaps?
August 24th, 2026 19:19
terminal lights
Kevin Hulme said:
That\'s one way of looking at the Journey of Life.
Like it.
August 24th, 2026 16:09
Kevin Hulme said:
That\'s one way of looking at the Journey of Life.
Like it.
August 24th, 2026 16:09
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