Comments received on poems by arqios
world on mute
Doggerel Dave said:
With you all the way.
PS: I do mean \'agree with\', not...
July 25th, 2026 17:42
Doggerel Dave said:
With you all the way.
PS: I do mean \'agree with\', not...
July 25th, 2026 17:42
world on mute
cellinic said:
A very nice, a bit enigmatic and deep write. Best wishes, my friend
July 25th, 2026 16:19
cellinic said:
A very nice, a bit enigmatic and deep write. Best wishes, my friend
July 25th, 2026 16:19
world on mute
Kevin Hulme said:
I really like this. We all need a Place of Peace and Quiet every now and then.
And you described it so well.
July 25th, 2026 15:53
Kevin Hulme said:
I really like this. We all need a Place of Peace and Quiet every now and then.
And you described it so well.
July 25th, 2026 15:53
world on mute
orchidee said:
Good write A. Then I came along and said \'BOO!!\' and ruined everything of silence, quietness, peace, etc. lol.
July 25th, 2026 09:55
orchidee said:
Good write A. Then I came along and said \'BOO!!\' and ruined everything of silence, quietness, peace, etc. lol.
July 25th, 2026 09:55
world on mute
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I deeply relate to the relief of everything finally falling away...leaving room to breathe, think, and simply exist. This truly spoke to me, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I deeply relate to the relief of everything finally falling away...leaving room to breathe, think, and simply exist. This truly spoke to me, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:22
world on mute
arqios said:
Thank you Soren. That is an astute reading. Most appreciated🙏🕊️
July 25th, 2026 08:17
arqios said:
Thank you Soren. That is an astute reading. Most appreciated🙏🕊️
July 25th, 2026 08:17
world on mute
sorenbarrett said:
Solitude clears the space around us allowing us to see more clearly, to breath more deeply, to hear more profoundly not just without but within. With no threats no barriers are needed, no obstructions of our view no buffers to our hearing. A lovely write Cryptic
July 25th, 2026 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Solitude clears the space around us allowing us to see more clearly, to breath more deeply, to hear more profoundly not just without but within. With no threats no barriers are needed, no obstructions of our view no buffers to our hearing. A lovely write Cryptic
July 25th, 2026 06:14
world on mute
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
short but very sweet my friend
July 25th, 2026 04:56
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
short but very sweet my friend
July 25th, 2026 04:56
on forgetting
Kevin Hulme said:
Sometimes a Word or Name just pops in your head and you think: \'Wheres that come from\'.
Then you remember it was something from your Childhood. Or someone.
Good Write.
July 25th, 2026 03:38
Kevin Hulme said:
Sometimes a Word or Name just pops in your head and you think: \'Wheres that come from\'.
Then you remember it was something from your Childhood. Or someone.
Good Write.
July 25th, 2026 03:38
on forgetting
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautifully put, Arqios! Your poem is so forgettable, no, I mean unforgettable. Nice song you wrote there!
July 24th, 2026 19:52
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautifully put, Arqios! Your poem is so forgettable, no, I mean unforgettable. Nice song you wrote there!
July 24th, 2026 19:52
on forgetting
Doggerel Dave said:
Forgetting/remembering; the whole process(s) is problematic from the get-go. I have always had trouble here – one of many deficits I’ve contended with for a lifetime. Agreed, it hasn’t got better, but I can’t remember if it has got worse…
July 24th, 2026 16:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Forgetting/remembering; the whole process(s) is problematic from the get-go. I have always had trouble here – one of many deficits I’ve contended with for a lifetime. Agreed, it hasn’t got better, but I can’t remember if it has got worse…
July 24th, 2026 16:14
on forgetting
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully contemplative piece, Rik! The restraint gives its sorrow tremendous depth...and its acceptance feels tender without becoming reassuring. I have felt that ache of reaching inward and finding only traces where something complete once lived. This truly moved me, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully contemplative piece, Rik! The restraint gives its sorrow tremendous depth...and its acceptance feels tender without becoming reassuring. I have felt that ache of reaching inward and finding only traces where something complete once lived. This truly moved me, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:39
on forgetting
sorenbarrett said:
Entropy of the mind a constant force it erodes and changes perceptions for the better or worse. Those canyons worn channel water of thought cutting deeper gorges below cliffs of hard sediment rock of prejudice layers of past perceptions. Particles of truth carried and buried under the silt of time. of A wonderful piece Cryptic that speaks to the distortion that happens in the mind. Loved it
July 24th, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Entropy of the mind a constant force it erodes and changes perceptions for the better or worse. Those canyons worn channel water of thought cutting deeper gorges below cliffs of hard sediment rock of prejudice layers of past perceptions. Particles of truth carried and buried under the silt of time. of A wonderful piece Cryptic that speaks to the distortion that happens in the mind. Loved it
July 24th, 2026 06:03
on forgetting
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Such beautiful reflection a fav
July 24th, 2026 05:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Such beautiful reflection a fav
July 24th, 2026 05:55
daze
RSM0812 said:
Very secriptive in few words yet creates a beautiful and calm scene in the imagination. Nice job.
July 24th, 2026 05:08
RSM0812 said:
Very secriptive in few words yet creates a beautiful and calm scene in the imagination. Nice job.
July 24th, 2026 05:08
daze
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absolutely beautiful. The stillness feels deeply restorative...a brief sanctuary from everything clamoring beyond it. Wonderful work, Arqios! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absolutely beautiful. The stillness feels deeply restorative...a brief sanctuary from everything clamoring beyond it. Wonderful work, Arqios! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:33
in the shallow trench of your stride
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Rik! This feels ancient, reverent, and profoundly human. The land remembers someone history has forgotten, and the living continue within what they left behind. That connection across time hit me hard. Outstanding work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Rik! This feels ancient, reverent, and profoundly human. The land remembers someone history has forgotten, and the living continue within what they left behind. That connection across time hit me hard. Outstanding work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:05
daze
sorenbarrett said:
Sol invictus the sun god of our ancestors Ra Frasier\'s golden bough to which we bow where as Muslim to the east disguised in Mohamud\'s tomb and Meca or the Mason\'s four directions. Nature itself bows to the east awaiting the sun\'s raise. Clever title daze as in days Well done my friend.
July 23rd, 2026 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Sol invictus the sun god of our ancestors Ra Frasier\'s golden bough to which we bow where as Muslim to the east disguised in Mohamud\'s tomb and Meca or the Mason\'s four directions. Nature itself bows to the east awaiting the sun\'s raise. Clever title daze as in days Well done my friend.
July 23rd, 2026 05:41
in the shallow trench of your stride
arqios said:
Thanks Kevin, it does feel that the whole poem hangs on that single line. 🙏🕊️
July 22nd, 2026 19:52
arqios said:
Thanks Kevin, it does feel that the whole poem hangs on that single line. 🙏🕊️
July 22nd, 2026 19:52
in the shallow trench of your stride
Kevin Hulme said:
\'But I walk in the Shadow of your Passing\', says it all . A fave.
July 22nd, 2026 19:32
Kevin Hulme said:
\'But I walk in the Shadow of your Passing\', says it all . A fave.
July 22nd, 2026 19:32
in the shallow trench of your stride
sorenbarrett said:
How many have passed before us on this track we tread we in their shadows. Well written Cryptic
July 22nd, 2026 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
How many have passed before us on this track we tread we in their shadows. Well written Cryptic
July 22nd, 2026 06:32
in the shallow trench of your stride
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most beautiful piece and a fav
July 22nd, 2026 05:57
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most beautiful piece and a fav
July 22nd, 2026 05:57
until the cosmos speaks
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for us all, Rik.
Andy
July 22nd, 2026 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for us all, Rik.
Andy
July 22nd, 2026 01:46
until the cosmos speaks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is absolutely mesmerizing. Creativity becomes something immense and almost unbearable here…a universe demanding release through the fragile limits of the human mind. Brilliant work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 20:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is absolutely mesmerizing. Creativity becomes something immense and almost unbearable here…a universe demanding release through the fragile limits of the human mind. Brilliant work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 20:19
until the cosmos speaks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is absolutely mesmerizing. Creativity becomes something immense and almost unbearable here…a universe demanding release through the fragile limits of the human mind. Brilliant work, my friend! 🌌🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 20:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is absolutely mesmerizing. Creativity becomes something immense and almost unbearable here…a universe demanding release through the fragile limits of the human mind. Brilliant work, my friend! 🌌🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 20:19
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