Comments received on poems by arqios
grace that broke me
Kevin Hulme said:
I see the Coin as a Metaphor for the small gifts that invade our life\'s. Sometimes to small to Notice. But all add up.
September 21st, 2026 06:13
Kevin Hulme said:
I see the Coin as a Metaphor for the small gifts that invade our life\'s. Sometimes to small to Notice. But all add up.
September 21st, 2026 06:13
grace that broke me
sorenbarrett said:
Are we all such? One has to think yet so hard to break thoughts free from their routine. Do we not all live in grace? Unrecognized grace for just being here. A lovely write my friend it is thought provoking.
September 21st, 2026 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
Are we all such? One has to think yet so hard to break thoughts free from their routine. Do we not all live in grace? Unrecognized grace for just being here. A lovely write my friend it is thought provoking.
September 21st, 2026 05:50
grace that broke me
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
fine write much enjoyed
September 21st, 2026 05:25
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
fine write much enjoyed
September 21st, 2026 05:25
autumn haiku, 2026
Mutley Ravishes said:
My favorite season, and not favorite at the same time!
September 21st, 2026 03:36
Mutley Ravishes said:
My favorite season, and not favorite at the same time!
September 21st, 2026 03:36
autumn haiku, 2026
NafisaSB said:
enjoy the fruits [of your labour?] - short and sweet haiku!
September 21st, 2026 01:49
NafisaSB said:
enjoy the fruits [of your labour?] - short and sweet haiku!
September 21st, 2026 01:49
autumn haiku, 2026
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this made me stop for a second and just look. Simple and damn near perfect. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2026 17:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this made me stop for a second and just look. Simple and damn near perfect. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2026 17:54
autumn haiku, 2026
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s the \'Late Sunlight\' that speaks to me.
Of not wanting to let go. To keep the Autumn alive. Enjoyed.
September 20th, 2026 10:29
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s the \'Late Sunlight\' that speaks to me.
Of not wanting to let go. To keep the Autumn alive. Enjoyed.
September 20th, 2026 10:29
autumn haiku, 2026
orchidee said:
A fine write A. Erm, what\'s that Y9 thingy? lol.
September 20th, 2026 09:26
orchidee said:
A fine write A. Erm, what\'s that Y9 thingy? lol.
September 20th, 2026 09:26
autumn haiku, 2026
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic still life painting with metaphoric meaning (at least to me that sees metaphor in everything) the darkening of the season. Short but pregnant with meaning. A time of harvest.
September 20th, 2026 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic still life painting with metaphoric meaning (at least to me that sees metaphor in everything) the darkening of the season. Short but pregnant with meaning. A time of harvest.
September 20th, 2026 05:38
to all poets, everywhere
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good Words Rik and so true,
Andy
September 20th, 2026 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good Words Rik and so true,
Andy
September 20th, 2026 00:57
to all poets, everywhere
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yep...and every poet who has gotten one of those bullshit offers knows exactly why this needed saying. I’m with you, Arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yep...and every poet who has gotten one of those bullshit offers knows exactly why this needed saying. I’m with you, Arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:51
to all poets, everywhere
orchidee said:
Yes, and that plague-y thing - plagiarising - throws poets into a rage! One person, not on MPS, actually posted a photo of himself while pinching another person\'s words. Responses from poets included F, F, F, and F! (ooh!).
September 19th, 2026 09:59
orchidee said:
Yes, and that plague-y thing - plagiarising - throws poets into a rage! One person, not on MPS, actually posted a photo of himself while pinching another person\'s words. Responses from poets included F, F, F, and F! (ooh!).
September 19th, 2026 09:59
to all poets, everywhere
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, with a Saturday morning coffee.
September 19th, 2026 09:44
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, with a Saturday morning coffee.
September 19th, 2026 09:44
to all poets, everywhere
sorenbarrett said:
I have had lines stolen but never a penny was made that I am aware of. Possibly due to stealing from a garbage heap rends little in return. Never the less it does at times irk while at others one has to feel flattered that someone would steal. It implies value and strokes the ego. This poem points the ink stained finger at those that would profit off of another\'s work. The music industry is famous for this or rather I should say infamous. It is the flaw in capitalism hit with the hammer and wedge of greed. I love the line \"a fight to own what is made of breath and ink\". Nicely done my friend.
September 19th, 2026 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
I have had lines stolen but never a penny was made that I am aware of. Possibly due to stealing from a garbage heap rends little in return. Never the less it does at times irk while at others one has to feel flattered that someone would steal. It implies value and strokes the ego. This poem points the ink stained finger at those that would profit off of another\'s work. The music industry is famous for this or rather I should say infamous. It is the flaw in capitalism hit with the hammer and wedge of greed. I love the line \"a fight to own what is made of breath and ink\". Nicely done my friend.
September 19th, 2026 07:36
to all poets, everywhere
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem . For the Pen is Mightier etc.
Good one.
September 19th, 2026 07:19
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem . For the Pen is Mightier etc.
Good one.
September 19th, 2026 07:19
danchi style
Doggerel Dave said:
Many a glossy observational traveloge does not have the kind of observatioal depth to enrich the experience you have given us here, Rik. Enjoyed thoroughly.
September 18th, 2026 20:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Many a glossy observational traveloge does not have the kind of observatioal depth to enrich the experience you have given us here, Rik. Enjoyed thoroughly.
September 18th, 2026 20:00
danchi style
Kevin Hulme said:
Poems like this take you to another Place or Country without leaving your Chair.
The way other people live. There surroundings etc.
No Air fare needed.
Enjoyed.
September 18th, 2026 19:40
Kevin Hulme said:
Poems like this take you to another Place or Country without leaving your Chair.
The way other people live. There surroundings etc.
No Air fare needed.
Enjoyed.
September 18th, 2026 19:40
danchi style
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That vending machine at the end got me, Arqios...a tiny light holding the whole evening together. Enjoyed this a lot, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2026 10:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That vending machine at the end got me, Arqios...a tiny light holding the whole evening together. Enjoyed this a lot, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2026 10:01
danchi style
Paul Bell said:
Always liked the Japanese, they have manners, trains that run on time, and a bit of decorum.
Though I hear the younger generation are becoming westernised and falling about the streets drunk.
It was bound to happen.
September 18th, 2026 09:33
Paul Bell said:
Always liked the Japanese, they have manners, trains that run on time, and a bit of decorum.
Though I hear the younger generation are becoming westernised and falling about the streets drunk.
It was bound to happen.
September 18th, 2026 09:33
danchi style
sorenbarrett said:
Each line an image. A collage. Each image a feeling. Another collage one superimposed on the other and what immerges is nostalgia a savory broth served in a poetic bowel. Nicely done my friend.
September 18th, 2026 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
Each line an image. A collage. Each image a feeling. Another collage one superimposed on the other and what immerges is nostalgia a savory broth served in a poetic bowel. Nicely done my friend.
September 18th, 2026 08:40
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