Comments received on poems by arqios
Three dots dancing
sorenbarrett said:
A technological marvel becomes a poetic display of mastery. This poem a dance of dots indeed. Loved it Cryptic it left a sense of distant closeness just as the phone does. Well worded my friend
February 20th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A technological marvel becomes a poetic display of mastery. This poem a dance of dots indeed. Loved it Cryptic it left a sense of distant closeness just as the phone does. Well worded my friend
February 20th, 2025 04:23
untitled (bemused rumination)
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One arqios
Cool And Nice Rhythms
February 20th, 2025 04:12
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One arqios
Cool And Nice Rhythms
February 20th, 2025 04:12
Three dots dancing
orchidee said:
Behind those dots on computer screens there is \'More\' - all sorts.
Meanwhile, I\'m fussing over ellipses (if that\'s the plural of \'ellipsis\'). I\'ve always use three dots for them. Some people use two dots. Oh well, it saves a milli-second each time, if using only two dots. And think of the ink that can be saved, if using two dots each time in writing! lol.
February 20th, 2025 03:25
orchidee said:
Behind those dots on computer screens there is \'More\' - all sorts.
Meanwhile, I\'m fussing over ellipses (if that\'s the plural of \'ellipsis\'). I\'ve always use three dots for them. Some people use two dots. Oh well, it saves a milli-second each time, if using only two dots. And think of the ink that can be saved, if using two dots each time in writing! lol.
February 20th, 2025 03:25
Three dots dancing
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dots will become letters and the letters become words and the words become poetry arqios.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dots will become letters and the letters become words and the words become poetry arqios.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:18
untitled (bemused rumination)
arqios said:
Perhaps kindness can be overrated
February 19th, 2025 16:13
arqios said:
Perhaps kindness can be overrated
February 19th, 2025 16:13
untitled (bemused rumination)
Poetic Licence said:
We will all hope for a better day, and i am sure in the end kindness will prevail, enjoyed today\'s read
February 19th, 2025 08:17
Poetic Licence said:
We will all hope for a better day, and i am sure in the end kindness will prevail, enjoyed today\'s read
February 19th, 2025 08:17
untitled (bemused rumination)
Michael Edwards said:
This one jumped out at me - original, beautifully written and conveying a hope for the new day. A great write.
February 19th, 2025 06:35
Michael Edwards said:
This one jumped out at me - original, beautifully written and conveying a hope for the new day. A great write.
February 19th, 2025 06:35
untitled (bemused rumination)
David Wakeling said:
I share the wish that genial kindness shall spring.Well said Great poem about the hope of a new day
February 19th, 2025 05:22
David Wakeling said:
I share the wish that genial kindness shall spring.Well said Great poem about the hope of a new day
February 19th, 2025 05:22
untitled (bemused rumination)
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem\'s innovation. I have thought of trying something similar but have gotten caught up in the technicalities complications. Maybe someday I\'ll work it out. Here the use of the single word serves as an echo that comes back again and again reverberating a message sent. Lovely work my friend
February 19th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem\'s innovation. I have thought of trying something similar but have gotten caught up in the technicalities complications. Maybe someday I\'ll work it out. Here the use of the single word serves as an echo that comes back again and again reverberating a message sent. Lovely work my friend
February 19th, 2025 04:38
untitled (bemused rumination)
orchidee said:
I \'ignited\'. I lit a match while leaving the gas on. Doh!
February 19th, 2025 03:21
orchidee said:
I \'ignited\'. I lit a match while leaving the gas on. Doh!
February 19th, 2025 03:21
untitled (bemused rumination)
Goldfinch60 said:
May hat kindness arise each day arqios.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
May hat kindness arise each day arqios.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 03:01
sheen of young love
Parisab said:
This Smiths’ song is a perfect pairing with your fresh harvest of a poem…
February 18th, 2025 17:45
Parisab said:
This Smiths’ song is a perfect pairing with your fresh harvest of a poem…
February 18th, 2025 17:45
sheen of young love
arqios said:
Not quite enough to weigh in, I suppose… oh well… 🪶🍗
February 18th, 2025 16:18
arqios said:
Not quite enough to weigh in, I suppose… oh well… 🪶🍗
February 18th, 2025 16:18
sheen of young love
Neville said:
Most voyeurs can’t bare the thought of being watched or even worse, observed but I know for a fact you make a very good point here and I’m glad I felt compelled to swing by .. Neville
February 18th, 2025 09:06
Neville said:
Most voyeurs can’t bare the thought of being watched or even worse, observed but I know for a fact you make a very good point here and I’m glad I felt compelled to swing by .. Neville
February 18th, 2025 09:06
sheen of young love
David Wakeling said:
This is a gentle respectful treatment of lovers. Enjoyed reading.Welll done
February 18th, 2025 05:25
David Wakeling said:
This is a gentle respectful treatment of lovers. Enjoyed reading.Welll done
February 18th, 2025 05:25
sheen of young love
sorenbarrett said:
Privacy a word of the past. Whether lovers of others or freedom lovers we are observed, poked and prodded and there is no right to privacy in the constitution. A mere afterthought in the ninth amendment now felt outdated and up for interpretation. Who you slept with, what positions were used, how you spent your money, how you voted, and the color of your stool all public knowledge.
February 18th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Privacy a word of the past. Whether lovers of others or freedom lovers we are observed, poked and prodded and there is no right to privacy in the constitution. A mere afterthought in the ninth amendment now felt outdated and up for interpretation. Who you slept with, what positions were used, how you spent your money, how you voted, and the color of your stool all public knowledge.
February 18th, 2025 04:56
forever we shall be
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One arqios
Soothing And Resplendent
February 18th, 2025 04:43
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One arqios
Soothing And Resplendent
February 18th, 2025 04:43
sheen of young love
Poetic Licence said:
The eyes window to the soul, by looking in there the real person you get to know, enjoyed today\'s read
February 18th, 2025 04:21
Poetic Licence said:
The eyes window to the soul, by looking in there the real person you get to know, enjoyed today\'s read
February 18th, 2025 04:21
sheen of young love
Goldfinch60 said:
But within those eyes the heart can be seen arqios and love will be found.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
But within those eyes the heart can be seen arqios and love will be found.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 03:01
‘til all my breath is You
Goldfinch60 said:
May that poison bring that love to you forever arqios.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
May that poison bring that love to you forever arqios.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:50
‘til all my breath is You
Cassie58 said:
I thought of the perfume called Poison. It is intoxicating. These words are too. That final line says it all. Good poison. In a strange way it reminded me of chemo. It can be a life saver.
February 17th, 2025 23:45
Cassie58 said:
I thought of the perfume called Poison. It is intoxicating. These words are too. That final line says it all. Good poison. In a strange way it reminded me of chemo. It can be a life saver.
February 17th, 2025 23:45
once upon a long ago
Doggerel Dave said:
\"...gazed upon the creation..\" and then came the revision.... After \'process\' and \'struggle\' so perfectly summed up the whole effort, there seemed little else to add....
February 17th, 2025 23:24
Doggerel Dave said:
\"...gazed upon the creation..\" and then came the revision.... After \'process\' and \'struggle\' so perfectly summed up the whole effort, there seemed little else to add....
February 17th, 2025 23:24
once upon a long ago
John Prophet said:
Absolutely wonderful, exactly how I feel about the creation process. Well said.
John
February 17th, 2025 18:53
John Prophet said:
Absolutely wonderful, exactly how I feel about the creation process. Well said.
John
February 17th, 2025 18:53
‘til all my breath is You
Cassie58 said:
A fine write arqios. Great use of language. The barbs kicked in with vigor. This dame certainly made her mark deeper than those that went before her. Your final line was unexpected and is a classic. Poison, so many variants of it. Hard to resist.
February 17th, 2025 17:45
Cassie58 said:
A fine write arqios. Great use of language. The barbs kicked in with vigor. This dame certainly made her mark deeper than those that went before her. Your final line was unexpected and is a classic. Poison, so many variants of it. Hard to resist.
February 17th, 2025 17:45
“my bloody valentine”
RSM0812 said:
Great history lesson in verse. One of my favorites.
February 17th, 2025 14:11
RSM0812 said:
Great history lesson in verse. One of my favorites.
February 17th, 2025 14:11
‘til all my breath is You
RSM0812 said:
Great write. To me the poison is a women. Like a poisonous medication that works barley better then a bandage. Just saying.
February 17th, 2025 14:09
RSM0812 said:
Great write. To me the poison is a women. Like a poisonous medication that works barley better then a bandage. Just saying.
February 17th, 2025 14:09
‘til all my breath is You
Neville said:
that summative line is a bloomin killer and to die for & furthermore, creased me up .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:00
Neville said:
that summative line is a bloomin killer and to die for & furthermore, creased me up .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:00
‘til all my breath is You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, my friend! Who doesn\'t like a li\'l good poison, now and again! Loved this! 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, my friend! Who doesn\'t like a li\'l good poison, now and again! Loved this! 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:24
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