Comments received on poems by arqios
summer fête
orchidee said:
Good wrire CB.
Now me poem:
\'Under dark rain clouds of summer
And blowing a howling gale.....\'
That\'s put a dampener on it! Doh! lol.
July 21st, 2023 10:11
orchidee said:
Good wrire CB.
Now me poem:
\'Under dark rain clouds of summer
And blowing a howling gale.....\'
That\'s put a dampener on it! Doh! lol.
July 21st, 2023 10:11
truest frame
Bobby O said:
PRINT decay. Great visual. Nice touch all the way through. Did you know you could be dainty and still
Declare ?
July 20th, 2023 16:39
Bobby O said:
PRINT decay. Great visual. Nice touch all the way through. Did you know you could be dainty and still
Declare ?
July 20th, 2023 16:39
truest frame
orchidee said:
Yep, those dawns do usually turn in to days. Like we said about nights being dark too!
Gosh, it\'s really educational on \'ere, innit?
July 20th, 2023 11:46
orchidee said:
Yep, those dawns do usually turn in to days. Like we said about nights being dark too!
Gosh, it\'s really educational on \'ere, innit?
July 20th, 2023 11:46
break of dawn
Goldfinch60 said:
Around that corner there is often the beginning of a wonderful life CB.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Around that corner there is often the beginning of a wonderful life CB.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:38
break of dawn
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Sharply expressive writing. A lot said in a few. I love the style. A definite fave... ❤
July 19th, 2023 14:10
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Sharply expressive writing. A lot said in a few. I love the style. A definite fave... ❤
July 19th, 2023 14:10
break of dawn
Bella Shepard said:
We wait, we watch, we never know until it\'s here. We hope for the best, never knowing what life will give us the next day. How can we? You say it so well dear poet.
July 19th, 2023 12:32
Bella Shepard said:
We wait, we watch, we never know until it\'s here. We hope for the best, never knowing what life will give us the next day. How can we? You say it so well dear poet.
July 19th, 2023 12:32
break of dawn
orchidee said:
Yep, the nights usually do turn into days.
In a comedy film, it said \'The night was dark - they usually are!\' lol.
July 19th, 2023 09:54
orchidee said:
Yep, the nights usually do turn into days.
In a comedy film, it said \'The night was dark - they usually are!\' lol.
July 19th, 2023 09:54
break of dawn
Neville said:
.. it can happen .. quick as the blink of an eye ..
July 19th, 2023 08:09
Neville said:
.. it can happen .. quick as the blink of an eye ..
July 19th, 2023 08:09
new bloom
Neville said:
its rarely as plain sailing as it says in the manual .. muchly enjoyed regardless .................... Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:30
Neville said:
its rarely as plain sailing as it says in the manual .. muchly enjoyed regardless .................... Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:30
new bloom
sorenbarrett said:
The swells are but waves that crest and fall. in this world, like a mobius strip, a half twist brings us back to where we began on a one sided journey. Lovely
July 18th, 2023 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
The swells are but waves that crest and fall. in this world, like a mobius strip, a half twist brings us back to where we began on a one sided journey. Lovely
July 18th, 2023 07:49
winter furnace
Bella Shepard said:
A lovely analogy dear friend, to forgive and possibly forget, that wounds may heal, but scars may remain.
July 17th, 2023 15:32
Bella Shepard said:
A lovely analogy dear friend, to forgive and possibly forget, that wounds may heal, but scars may remain.
July 17th, 2023 15:32
weedkillers
L. B. Mek said:
nature recognises no weeds
Gaia loves her children equal
its our toxic environments
that depict life as being deprived
of worth
red sands, stained by the crimson
of tears, from those who survived
rest
are well n truly deep into their
hard earned rest
this be the mercy imbued
in the promise between
death and destiny...
(love reading and engaging
with your poems, dear Poet
they never fail to push my limits
thank you!)
July 14th, 2023 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
nature recognises no weeds
Gaia loves her children equal
its our toxic environments
that depict life as being deprived
of worth
red sands, stained by the crimson
of tears, from those who survived
rest
are well n truly deep into their
hard earned rest
this be the mercy imbued
in the promise between
death and destiny...
(love reading and engaging
with your poems, dear Poet
they never fail to push my limits
thank you!)
July 14th, 2023 03:35
minutiae
L. B. Mek said:
windswept, from but a blink
squinting through life, hoping
choices come with marks
for intent..
and we roll our dice, to find
our place upon nature\'s sands..
(I so relate, dear Poet
loving the complexity
in your wordplay layers)
July 14th, 2023 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
windswept, from but a blink
squinting through life, hoping
choices come with marks
for intent..
and we roll our dice, to find
our place upon nature\'s sands..
(I so relate, dear Poet
loving the complexity
in your wordplay layers)
July 14th, 2023 03:30
Faraday\'s lack
Bella Shepard said:
I love reading about science, so this poem really intrigued me. I Wikipedia-ed Faraday and learned about Faraday efficiency and Faradaic loss. Very interesting. But for the mind of man, what would we be. Thank you for always stimulating the little gray cells dear poet, well done!
July 12th, 2023 11:09
Bella Shepard said:
I love reading about science, so this poem really intrigued me. I Wikipedia-ed Faraday and learned about Faraday efficiency and Faradaic loss. Very interesting. But for the mind of man, what would we be. Thank you for always stimulating the little gray cells dear poet, well done!
July 12th, 2023 11:09
minutiae
orchidee said:
How did you spend that extra second we had one year?
I made the most of it - sailed round the world 3,475 times; ran 8,593 marathons; and sang 6,496 songs - all in that second! lol.
I can\'t calculate if I would be able to do all that at the speed of light.
July 11th, 2023 10:09
orchidee said:
How did you spend that extra second we had one year?
I made the most of it - sailed round the world 3,475 times; ran 8,593 marathons; and sang 6,496 songs - all in that second! lol.
I can\'t calculate if I would be able to do all that at the speed of light.
July 11th, 2023 10:09
good lad
orchidee said:
The title is what KP says to me when I lend (give!) her more money for botox! lol.
July 10th, 2023 14:31
orchidee said:
The title is what KP says to me when I lend (give!) her more money for botox! lol.
July 10th, 2023 14:31
dancing koto
Neville said:
made me think on my most recent embu (moving prayer) my friend ..
July 9th, 2023 12:42
Neville said:
made me think on my most recent embu (moving prayer) my friend ..
July 9th, 2023 12:42
dancing koto
Bella Shepard said:
The deliberate movement and precision in each step of this dance is a thing of beauty. In a world where we seem to feel the need to move at max speed, this poem and video present an opportunity to pause and breath deep. Thank you dear poet!
July 9th, 2023 11:05
Bella Shepard said:
The deliberate movement and precision in each step of this dance is a thing of beauty. In a world where we seem to feel the need to move at max speed, this poem and video present an opportunity to pause and breath deep. Thank you dear poet!
July 9th, 2023 11:05
dancing koto
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna play me koto/zither thingy. I also played it in person years ago in Old Testament days. I whisked out me zither, lyre, etc. lol.
July 9th, 2023 09:44
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna play me koto/zither thingy. I also played it in person years ago in Old Testament days. I whisked out me zither, lyre, etc. lol.
July 9th, 2023 09:44
door
orchidee said:
Godo write CB.
My rather negative poem, a maxim, not that I ascribe to it, is:
\'Ohhh, when one door closes, cheer up; another one will slam in your face!\' \'heehee.
July 8th, 2023 11:56
orchidee said:
Godo write CB.
My rather negative poem, a maxim, not that I ascribe to it, is:
\'Ohhh, when one door closes, cheer up; another one will slam in your face!\' \'heehee.
July 8th, 2023 11:56
door
Neville said:
who in their write mind wants to be lonely and locked in ..
where would we be without them eh .. friends and doors that is .. Neville
July 8th, 2023 02:38
Neville said:
who in their write mind wants to be lonely and locked in ..
where would we be without them eh .. friends and doors that is .. Neville
July 8th, 2023 02:38
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