Comments received on poems by arqios
The Lost Key
Goldfinch60 said:
Those lost keys, when found, can take us to places of wonder arqios.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Those lost keys, when found, can take us to places of wonder arqios.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:16
The Lost Key
spilleronsheet said:
Pip’s quest for lost key truly finds reflection of life…we keep searching, some find and some rise…while some simply lost before finding lost key….nice write dear poet
April 3rd, 2025 23:46
spilleronsheet said:
Pip’s quest for lost key truly finds reflection of life…we keep searching, some find and some rise…while some simply lost before finding lost key….nice write dear poet
April 3rd, 2025 23:46
The Lost Key
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem is told through the POV of a child, eyes wide with imagination, ready to head out on an adventure mapped out in their dreams! Beautiful, my friend! 🙏🌹👏🕯️
April 3rd, 2025 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem is told through the POV of a child, eyes wide with imagination, ready to head out on an adventure mapped out in their dreams! Beautiful, my friend! 🙏🌹👏🕯️
April 3rd, 2025 12:39
The Lost Key
Poetic Licence said:
This a lovely write, if only all keys opened a world of treasures and fun
April 3rd, 2025 04:14
Poetic Licence said:
This a lovely write, if only all keys opened a world of treasures and fun
April 3rd, 2025 04:14
The Lost Key
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic this poem tells its story in metaphor through a child\'s story that lets all lower their defenses. We all have keys that we search for and when found are great treasures. A lovely write.
April 3rd, 2025 03:15
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic this poem tells its story in metaphor through a child\'s story that lets all lower their defenses. We all have keys that we search for and when found are great treasures. A lovely write.
April 3rd, 2025 03:15
a future\'s horizon
Cheeky Missy said:
From the cheesy movie, or Dicken\'s original? Either way, why are my eyes suddenly beginning to open after perusing this disarming beauty? Pip, of all things. La dee. How eloquent, rendered beautifully with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy! Thank you, thank you for sharing. Oh the artists!
April 2nd, 2025 17:12
Cheeky Missy said:
From the cheesy movie, or Dicken\'s original? Either way, why are my eyes suddenly beginning to open after perusing this disarming beauty? Pip, of all things. La dee. How eloquent, rendered beautifully with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy! Thank you, thank you for sharing. Oh the artists!
April 2nd, 2025 17:12
waxing witless
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, tis a bit of a change. Warned we are destined to repeat our history if we are either ignorant of the same or disregard it, and further, that Rome fell after decaying into debauchery, the \"flood of Noah\" leaving nary vestige of that world, it\'s an eerie reality indeed staring us down. Excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 17:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, tis a bit of a change. Warned we are destined to repeat our history if we are either ignorant of the same or disregard it, and further, that Rome fell after decaying into debauchery, the \"flood of Noah\" leaving nary vestige of that world, it\'s an eerie reality indeed staring us down. Excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 17:09
a future\'s horizon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh. I like the dissipating rhyming scheme. As for the poem, well done...well done! I kinda want to hear more about this (autobiographical, I presume) Pip. A series? 🤣 No pressure. I really enjoyed this, my friend! 🖤🌹👏 Oh...and I love the image you created/chose.
April 2nd, 2025 08:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh. I like the dissipating rhyming scheme. As for the poem, well done...well done! I kinda want to hear more about this (autobiographical, I presume) Pip. A series? 🤣 No pressure. I really enjoyed this, my friend! 🖤🌹👏 Oh...and I love the image you created/chose.
April 2nd, 2025 08:22
a future\'s horizon
arqios said:
Hope isn’t always served on a bountiful platter it would seem
April 2nd, 2025 03:11
arqios said:
Hope isn’t always served on a bountiful platter it would seem
April 2nd, 2025 03:11
a future\'s horizon
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This is a form I was not familiar with and that works so well for this piece. It fits the theme where as the rhyme diminishes so does the hope. Ingenious a fave for that creative ploy
April 2nd, 2025 02:53
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This is a form I was not familiar with and that works so well for this piece. It fits the theme where as the rhyme diminishes so does the hope. Ingenious a fave for that creative ploy
April 2nd, 2025 02:53
is it all over for city cat?
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice one, though I preferred the 4th one : Tom Baker, or am I thinking of something else .
Well written.
April 1st, 2025 18:45
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice one, though I preferred the 4th one : Tom Baker, or am I thinking of something else .
Well written.
April 1st, 2025 18:45
waxing witless
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The state of humanity should bring humility. Ah, but we are speaking wisdom here and you know the old proverb, \"A fool returns to their folly like a dog returns to its vomit.\" This poem has a humble, real, fresh look at human beings. May those who have eyes and/or ears see and hear the truth presented here. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 1st, 2025 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The state of humanity should bring humility. Ah, but we are speaking wisdom here and you know the old proverb, \"A fool returns to their folly like a dog returns to its vomit.\" This poem has a humble, real, fresh look at human beings. May those who have eyes and/or ears see and hear the truth presented here. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 1st, 2025 11:04
waxing witless
sorenbarrett said:
Myth tells us that the gods were not happy with their first try in creating humans and decided to start over. So it was with biblical Noah. Maybe they were not too far off. It seems that man\'s DNA is not programed for humanity and needs a new start. A very deep and philosophical write
April 1st, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Myth tells us that the gods were not happy with their first try in creating humans and decided to start over. So it was with biblical Noah. Maybe they were not too far off. It seems that man\'s DNA is not programed for humanity and needs a new start. A very deep and philosophical write
April 1st, 2025 04:18
waxing witless
arqios said:
Slow start, habits are changing with the change of the season; or perhaps it’s something else in the air
April 1st, 2025 03:57
arqios said:
Slow start, habits are changing with the change of the season; or perhaps it’s something else in the air
April 1st, 2025 03:57
waxing witless
Poetic Licence said:
They things go in cycles, there was a time in days gone by you could say humanity had improved for the better, sadly thats not the case at the moment, maybe the cycle will return, an interesting and enjoyable read
April 1st, 2025 03:22
Poetic Licence said:
They things go in cycles, there was a time in days gone by you could say humanity had improved for the better, sadly thats not the case at the moment, maybe the cycle will return, an interesting and enjoyable read
April 1st, 2025 03:22
waxing witless
orchidee said:
Good write A. Strange place for a train - in a shopping centre. lol.
I fear - and yet I don\'t fear really, as it\'s no surprise, that I don\'t believe humanity will improve of their own doing. I bring in religion, or rather Christianity here, believing all mankind needs that help for salvation. Otherwise Christianity could be just a hobby of little old ladies going to church as a club, or some eccentric interest that some people may have.
April 1st, 2025 02:11
orchidee said:
Good write A. Strange place for a train - in a shopping centre. lol.
I fear - and yet I don\'t fear really, as it\'s no surprise, that I don\'t believe humanity will improve of their own doing. I bring in religion, or rather Christianity here, believing all mankind needs that help for salvation. Otherwise Christianity could be just a hobby of little old ladies going to church as a club, or some eccentric interest that some people may have.
April 1st, 2025 02:11
waxing witless
Goldfinch60 said:
Each generation changes arqios maybe one day it will be for the better.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Each generation changes arqios maybe one day it will be for the better.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:55
is it all over for city cat?
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, we all learn in our lives.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, we all learn in our lives.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:46
is it all over for city cat?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That was purrrrfect, my friend! Enjoyed this, and I am pretty sure my daughters two feline rascals did too. 🤣 The one cat is so large/long, he might be a distant cousin to a panther if not a lion! Well done on this poem! 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That was purrrrfect, my friend! Enjoyed this, and I am pretty sure my daughters two feline rascals did too. 🤣 The one cat is so large/long, he might be a distant cousin to a panther if not a lion! Well done on this poem! 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:27
Antwerpen, 1995
Cheeky Missy said:
This is so very deliciously laden with more than initially meets the eye, until like many poems I used to try to collect, I want it. \'95 was not particularly memorable for me but how eloquently you\'ve rendered it herein. Delightfully full of exquisite imagery with a sweetly haunting poignancy oh! I love it. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 31st, 2025 11:48
Cheeky Missy said:
This is so very deliciously laden with more than initially meets the eye, until like many poems I used to try to collect, I want it. \'95 was not particularly memorable for me but how eloquently you\'ve rendered it herein. Delightfully full of exquisite imagery with a sweetly haunting poignancy oh! I love it. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 31st, 2025 11:48
is it all over for city cat?
Cheeky Missy said:
Meow? I guess when twas a fall guy the jellied toast was strapped to its back securely, keeping it forever turning in air, with Schrodinger surmising on eternity, was that? Math stumped me when geometry leered and I spent that life on futility, I guess. Being the language of science, I\'ll balance equations, yet go no further. Why your conclusion brought to mind, \"...the lion of the tribe of Judah hath prevailed--\" I can\'t guess, but there you go. Fascinating and beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery and an exquisite, haunting poignancy.
March 31st, 2025 08:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Meow? I guess when twas a fall guy the jellied toast was strapped to its back securely, keeping it forever turning in air, with Schrodinger surmising on eternity, was that? Math stumped me when geometry leered and I spent that life on futility, I guess. Being the language of science, I\'ll balance equations, yet go no further. Why your conclusion brought to mind, \"...the lion of the tribe of Judah hath prevailed--\" I can\'t guess, but there you go. Fascinating and beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery and an exquisite, haunting poignancy.
March 31st, 2025 08:27
is it all over for city cat?
Salvia.S said:
Powerful story of transformation and self-empowerment.
March 31st, 2025 07:36
Salvia.S said:
Powerful story of transformation and self-empowerment.
March 31st, 2025 07:36
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