Comments received on poems by arqios
‘til all my breath is You
Poetic Licence said:
How some people and things get right under and into your skin, either good or bad and once resident very difficult to eject, enjoyed the read
February 17th, 2025 07:26
Poetic Licence said:
How some people and things get right under and into your skin, either good or bad and once resident very difficult to eject, enjoyed the read
February 17th, 2025 07:26
‘til all my breath is You
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a snake bite with plenty of venom. I\'m not sure who is upset with whom but the message is palpable. Wonderful
February 17th, 2025 05:35
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a snake bite with plenty of venom. I\'m not sure who is upset with whom but the message is palpable. Wonderful
February 17th, 2025 05:35
‘til all my breath is You
Mutley Ravishes said:
Good poison! For a moment there I thought you were going into self-pity! Like so many on this.....no wait, I\'ll keep my mouth shut.
February 17th, 2025 04:50
Mutley Ravishes said:
Good poison! For a moment there I thought you were going into self-pity! Like so many on this.....no wait, I\'ll keep my mouth shut.
February 17th, 2025 04:50
‘til all my breath is You
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how we like our poisons. Be it drugs, cholesterol, sugar, inactivity, toxic relationships they are the things we live for. A write that seems too real to feel good about but its appeal like the drug brings one back. Lovely Cryptic
February 17th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how we like our poisons. Be it drugs, cholesterol, sugar, inactivity, toxic relationships they are the things we live for. A write that seems too real to feel good about but its appeal like the drug brings one back. Lovely Cryptic
February 17th, 2025 04:41
once upon a long ago
Goldfinch60 said:
So true arqios, the muse often takes time to wake up.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
So true arqios, the muse often takes time to wake up.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:13
once upon a long ago
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful. I was transported to the poet\'s study. Both the joy and the struggle. Both are here wrestling. Inspirational
February 16th, 2025 16:27
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful. I was transported to the poet\'s study. Both the joy and the struggle. Both are here wrestling. Inspirational
February 16th, 2025 16:27
poetspeak
Ma5on said:
arqios
Your poem is rich in metaphor, evoking the interplay between poetry, memory, & transcendence. The language is both elegant & haunting, lending itself to deep reflection.
Absolutely loved the opening line \"a poem is the funeral pyre of pulsations\" - stunning!!!
Your poem is perfectly refined & deeply expressive.
I could go on but, actually, this is best left as it is...I just want to read it again & not evaluate anymore.
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 14:25
Ma5on said:
arqios
Your poem is rich in metaphor, evoking the interplay between poetry, memory, & transcendence. The language is both elegant & haunting, lending itself to deep reflection.
Absolutely loved the opening line \"a poem is the funeral pyre of pulsations\" - stunning!!!
Your poem is perfectly refined & deeply expressive.
I could go on but, actually, this is best left as it is...I just want to read it again & not evaluate anymore.
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 14:25
once upon a long ago
Cassie58 said:
The struggle at times to find the inspiration to turn a thought into a poem. To develop it through all the stages and then to deliver it. You describe this so well. I like that word fickle. That sums up my own muse. Nicely composed arqios.
February 16th, 2025 12:40
Cassie58 said:
The struggle at times to find the inspiration to turn a thought into a poem. To develop it through all the stages and then to deliver it. You describe this so well. I like that word fickle. That sums up my own muse. Nicely composed arqios.
February 16th, 2025 12:40
not your day, either?
Cassie58 said:
Some great metaphors here arqios, but I would be lying if I told you I felt no pain. I did.
wrenched dreams
Another fine write from your prolific pen. Have a word with my muse will you. She’s slacking.
February 16th, 2025 12:18
Cassie58 said:
Some great metaphors here arqios, but I would be lying if I told you I felt no pain. I did.
wrenched dreams
Another fine write from your prolific pen. Have a word with my muse will you. She’s slacking.
February 16th, 2025 12:18
once upon a long ago
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Clunky means more room to play. This \"work in progress\" is quite good as is, my friend.
\"Lines emerged, each a reminder of the struggle, a / record of the battle waged on paper.\" These words really hit home. I know that battle! ❤️🙏
February 16th, 2025 11:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Clunky means more room to play. This \"work in progress\" is quite good as is, my friend.
\"Lines emerged, each a reminder of the struggle, a / record of the battle waged on paper.\" These words really hit home. I know that battle! ❤️🙏
February 16th, 2025 11:00
once upon a long ago
orchidee said:
Good write A. Is that an olive tree/branch there? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
February 16th, 2025 10:42
orchidee said:
Good write A. Is that an olive tree/branch there? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
February 16th, 2025 10:42
reflection by the sea
whats write for me said:
Enthralling verse, thank you.
February 16th, 2025 09:39
whats write for me said:
Enthralling verse, thank you.
February 16th, 2025 09:39
once upon a long ago
Neville said:
There\'s nowt wrong with a bit o good old clunk now n then .. and in this case it seems to work well .. Neville
February 16th, 2025 07:24
Neville said:
There\'s nowt wrong with a bit o good old clunk now n then .. and in this case it seems to work well .. Neville
February 16th, 2025 07:24
cowardly survivor
Ma5on said:
arqios,
Your poem paints a gripping & emotionally charged portrait of a fugitive, or perhaps a haunted soul, struggling between fear & survival. The imagery is vivid, the pacing urgent, & the tone reflective.
This is a well-crafted, gripping poem with a powerful message about survival. The flow is sometimes a little awkward but to me that adds a gritty emphasis, overall, it’s a compelling piece.
Very much enjoyed,
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 07:22
Ma5on said:
arqios,
Your poem paints a gripping & emotionally charged portrait of a fugitive, or perhaps a haunted soul, struggling between fear & survival. The imagery is vivid, the pacing urgent, & the tone reflective.
This is a well-crafted, gripping poem with a powerful message about survival. The flow is sometimes a little awkward but to me that adds a gritty emphasis, overall, it’s a compelling piece.
Very much enjoyed,
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 07:22
once upon a long ago
Poetic Licence said:
A single thought, or a single spark, or a single bit of hope and if you take it how everything can change, enjoyed the read from long ago
February 16th, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
A single thought, or a single spark, or a single bit of hope and if you take it how everything can change, enjoyed the read from long ago
February 16th, 2025 06:13
once upon a long ago
sorenbarrett said:
Birth is not an easy process, conception, development, birth itself with the pains that accompany it. This poem in some way reminded me of Poe and that was strange given the topic. I above all else love the title it could easily be the title of a book or movie.
February 16th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Birth is not an easy process, conception, development, birth itself with the pains that accompany it. This poem in some way reminded me of Poe and that was strange given the topic. I above all else love the title it could easily be the title of a book or movie.
February 16th, 2025 03:44
not your day, either?
Goldfinch60 said:
But the good times came arqios.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
But the good times came arqios.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:47
not your day, either?
David Wakeling said:
There seems to be some memories here that are good bad and ugly. Hope better days have followed
February 15th, 2025 20:58
David Wakeling said:
There seems to be some memories here that are good bad and ugly. Hope better days have followed
February 15th, 2025 20:58
not your day, either?
arqios said:
Thanks for the fave: @Mutley Ravishes and @Cheeky Missy 🪶🙏🏻🕊🌷
February 15th, 2025 20:20
arqios said:
Thanks for the fave: @Mutley Ravishes and @Cheeky Missy 🪶🙏🏻🕊🌷
February 15th, 2025 20:20
“my bloody valentine”
Kevin Hulme said:
The Seven Members of the ‘North Side’ gang had a bad Valentine’s Day In 1929 as well.
This is a fine Poem about the Origins of the Tradition. Well Said.
February 15th, 2025 10:07
Kevin Hulme said:
The Seven Members of the ‘North Side’ gang had a bad Valentine’s Day In 1929 as well.
This is a fine Poem about the Origins of the Tradition. Well Said.
February 15th, 2025 10:07
not your day, either?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Living life with the tools we\'ve got. This is a poem of the struggle of living life with less than what is needed to get by. A car that barely rumbles along, is falling apart, and is running on fumes and flat tires. Brilliant metaphor, my friend! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Living life with the tools we\'ve got. This is a poem of the struggle of living life with less than what is needed to get by. A car that barely rumbles along, is falling apart, and is running on fumes and flat tires. Brilliant metaphor, my friend! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:39
not your day, either?
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Raw, emotional, and beautifully written. These words will stay with me for a while🙏
February 15th, 2025 08:35
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Raw, emotional, and beautifully written. These words will stay with me for a while🙏
February 15th, 2025 08:35
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