Comments received on poems by arqios
Time to Live
orchidee said:
Good write A. Not altogether unlinked to the time of All Saints Day, today 1st Nov.
November 1st, 2024 11:27
orchidee said:
Good write A. Not altogether unlinked to the time of All Saints Day, today 1st Nov.
November 1st, 2024 11:27
Time to Live
Parisab said:
Dawn is always fascinating and full of promise!
Through trials faced, the victor’s call,
Embrace the light, let shadows flee,
From dawn’s first light to evening’s fall,
Life’s fleeting dance, a gift to see.
The interplay of light and dark, dawn to dusk, beautifully choreographed…
November 1st, 2024 10:56
Parisab said:
Dawn is always fascinating and full of promise!
Through trials faced, the victor’s call,
Embrace the light, let shadows flee,
From dawn’s first light to evening’s fall,
Life’s fleeting dance, a gift to see.
The interplay of light and dark, dawn to dusk, beautifully choreographed…
November 1st, 2024 10:56
heavenly bodice
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to the soul. Each and every line a treasure. The last line encapsulates all and is my favorite
October 31st, 2024 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to the soul. Each and every line a treasure. The last line encapsulates all and is my favorite
October 31st, 2024 06:07
heavenly bodice
Neville said:
This is really cool .. and I see you are a man of your word .. Great title too mate .. bravo .. Neville
October 31st, 2024 05:55
Neville said:
This is really cool .. and I see you are a man of your word .. Great title too mate .. bravo .. Neville
October 31st, 2024 05:55
untitled (autumn sijo)
Goldfinch60 said:
May that warmth always be with us arqois.
Andy
October 31st, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May that warmth always be with us arqois.
Andy
October 31st, 2024 02:23
Whispers of a Wandering Soul
Dan Williams said:
Suitable praise for poetry and the poet, in this case, you. Nice work.
October 30th, 2024 23:33
Dan Williams said:
Suitable praise for poetry and the poet, in this case, you. Nice work.
October 30th, 2024 23:33
untitled (autumn sijo)
Neville said:
As far as I can recount this is my first encounter with this particular poetic form .. I am thrilled you should have introduced me to it since I have an interest in all poetic forms .. I did a swift Wiki check and can see that you have been true to form and all associated criteria have been well met .. I doubt I shall have such a warm glow in my belly for the rest of the day .. perhaps .. and as such, I subsequently award you the increasingly prestigious dubble 👍👍
October 30th, 2024 06:29
Neville said:
As far as I can recount this is my first encounter with this particular poetic form .. I am thrilled you should have introduced me to it since I have an interest in all poetic forms .. I did a swift Wiki check and can see that you have been true to form and all associated criteria have been well met .. I doubt I shall have such a warm glow in my belly for the rest of the day .. perhaps .. and as such, I subsequently award you the increasingly prestigious dubble 👍👍
October 30th, 2024 06:29
untitled (autumn sijo)
sorenbarrett said:
To one never having been there it feels as if I were. Very picturesque
October 30th, 2024 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
To one never having been there it feels as if I were. Very picturesque
October 30th, 2024 05:49
untitled (autumn sijo)
David Wakeling said:
This captures warmth and winter chill all in one. Excellent
October 30th, 2024 05:35
David Wakeling said:
This captures warmth and winter chill all in one. Excellent
October 30th, 2024 05:35
Whispers of a Wandering Soul
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful sonnet arqios.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful sonnet arqios.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:44
Whispers of a Wandering Soul
Doggerel Dave said:
A long way from a comfortable armchair to a fired up PC....occasionally I get there in time.
But then again, none of mine seem to fit the specifications embodied in the last quatrain.
If you\'ve got it, then go for it!🙂
October 29th, 2024 16:14
Doggerel Dave said:
A long way from a comfortable armchair to a fired up PC....occasionally I get there in time.
But then again, none of mine seem to fit the specifications embodied in the last quatrain.
If you\'ve got it, then go for it!🙂
October 29th, 2024 16:14
Whispers of a Wandering Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated is such solid verse it sounds classic and serves as a good definition for the word poem itself, I think I\'ll contact mister Webster. Lovely my cryptic friend.
October 29th, 2024 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated is such solid verse it sounds classic and serves as a good definition for the word poem itself, I think I\'ll contact mister Webster. Lovely my cryptic friend.
October 29th, 2024 05:03
Whispers of a Wandering Soul
Neville said:
Feels just about write .. been there so many times .. both seen the light and heard the whisper .. darn near sends one mad, dunnit 🐧👍
October 29th, 2024 04:37
Neville said:
Feels just about write .. been there so many times .. both seen the light and heard the whisper .. darn near sends one mad, dunnit 🐧👍
October 29th, 2024 04:37
Oktoberfest
Goldfinch60 said:
May that good cheer be forever with us arqois.
Andy
October 29th, 2024 03:49
Goldfinch60 said:
May that good cheer be forever with us arqois.
Andy
October 29th, 2024 03:49
Oktoberfest
David Wakeling said:
I always love a good limerick to be sure to be sure,Good fun here.
October 28th, 2024 20:47
David Wakeling said:
I always love a good limerick to be sure to be sure,Good fun here.
October 28th, 2024 20:47
Oktoberfest
sorenbarrett said:
Love limericks and this one served two purposes. It made me smile and reminded me this is the season and not one poem about it have I written. I think I\'ll break out the beer and get to work.
October 28th, 2024 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
Love limericks and this one served two purposes. It made me smile and reminded me this is the season and not one poem about it have I written. I think I\'ll break out the beer and get to work.
October 28th, 2024 08:33
Oktoberfest
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the double limerick! They\'re always fun...and then add in beer! 🍺 Ha! Cheers! Excellent job!
October 28th, 2024 07:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the double limerick! They\'re always fun...and then add in beer! 🍺 Ha! Cheers! Excellent job!
October 28th, 2024 07:39
Oktoberfest
Neville said:
Gets one o these from me 👍👍or rather two .. that\'s a dubble you owe me by the way .. 😎
October 28th, 2024 07:13
Neville said:
Gets one o these from me 👍👍or rather two .. that\'s a dubble you owe me by the way .. 😎
October 28th, 2024 07:13
together with heavy hearts
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotion laden words arqios.
Andy
October 28th, 2024 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotion laden words arqios.
Andy
October 28th, 2024 02:24
in the light
Dan Williams said:
\"Shadows cast by doubt\" leads gracefully to the rest, very well said.
October 27th, 2024 22:58
Dan Williams said:
\"Shadows cast by doubt\" leads gracefully to the rest, very well said.
October 27th, 2024 22:58
in the light
Young Fella said:
Enjoyed going through your words. Lovely lines.
October 27th, 2024 15:57
Young Fella said:
Enjoyed going through your words. Lovely lines.
October 27th, 2024 15:57
together with heavy hearts
Neville said:
Going strong since around the 5th or 6th centuries .. and so many crafted, with heavy hearts ..
October 27th, 2024 06:17
Neville said:
Going strong since around the 5th or 6th centuries .. and so many crafted, with heavy hearts ..
October 27th, 2024 06:17
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