Comments received on poems by arqios



Time to Live
orchidee said:

Good write A. Not altogether unlinked to the time of All Saints Day, today 1st Nov.

November 1st, 2024 11:27

Time to Live
Parisab said:

Dawn is always fascinating and full of promise!

Through trials faced, the victor’s call,
Embrace the light, let shadows flee,
From dawn’s first light to evening’s fall,
Life’s fleeting dance, a gift to see.

The interplay of light and dark, dawn to dusk, beautifully choreographed…

November 1st, 2024 10:56

heavenly bodice
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words arqios.

Andy

November 1st, 2024 01:52

heavenly bodice
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that speaks to the soul. Each and every line a treasure. The last line encapsulates all and is my favorite

October 31st, 2024 06:07

heavenly bodice
Neville said:


This is really cool .. and I see you are a man of your word .. Great title too mate .. bravo .. Neville

October 31st, 2024 05:55

untitled (autumn sijo)
Goldfinch60 said:

May that warmth always be with us arqois.

Andy

October 31st, 2024 02:23

Whispers of a Wandering Soul
Dan Williams said:

Suitable praise for poetry and the poet, in this case, you. Nice work.

October 30th, 2024 23:33

untitled (autumn sijo)
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful. 🍂

October 30th, 2024 12:40

untitled (autumn sijo)
Tony36 said:

Bravo

October 30th, 2024 09:47

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Neville said:



As far as I can recount this is my first encounter with this particular poetic form .. I am thrilled you should have introduced me to it since I have an interest in all poetic forms .. I did a swift Wiki check and can see that you have been true to form and all associated criteria have been well met .. I doubt I shall have such a warm glow in my belly for the rest of the day .. perhaps .. and as such, I subsequently award you the increasingly prestigious dubble 👍👍



October 30th, 2024 06:29

untitled (autumn sijo)
sorenbarrett said:

To one never having been there it feels as if I were. Very picturesque

October 30th, 2024 05:49

untitled (autumn sijo)
David Wakeling said:

This captures warmth and winter chill all in one. Excellent

October 30th, 2024 05:35

Whispers of a Wandering Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

A wonderful sonnet arqios.

Andy

October 30th, 2024 02:44

Whispers of a Wandering Soul
Doggerel Dave said:

A long way from a comfortable armchair to a fired up PC....occasionally I get there in time.

But then again, none of mine seem to fit the specifications embodied in the last quatrain.

If you\'ve got it, then go for it!🙂

October 29th, 2024 16:14

Whispers of a Wandering Soul
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 29th, 2024 09:27

Whispers of a Wandering Soul
sorenbarrett said:

Beautifully stated is such solid verse it sounds classic and serves as a good definition for the word poem itself, I think I\'ll contact mister Webster. Lovely my cryptic friend.

October 29th, 2024 05:03

Whispers of a Wandering Soul
Neville said:



Feels just about write .. been there so many times .. both seen the light and heard the whisper .. darn near sends one mad, dunnit 🐧👍

October 29th, 2024 04:37

Oktoberfest
Goldfinch60 said:

May that good cheer be forever with us arqois.

Andy

October 29th, 2024 03:49

Oktoberfest
David Wakeling said:

I always love a good limerick to be sure to be sure,Good fun here.

October 28th, 2024 20:47

Oktoberfest
Young Fella said:

Great lines. Enjoyed it.

October 28th, 2024 17:34

Oktoberfest
orchidee said:

Good writes A.

October 28th, 2024 14:52

Oktoberfest
sorenbarrett said:

Love limericks and this one served two purposes. It made me smile and reminded me this is the season and not one poem about it have I written. I think I\'ll break out the beer and get to work.

October 28th, 2024 08:33

Oktoberfest
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Love the double limerick! They\'re always fun...and then add in beer! 🍺 Ha! Cheers! Excellent job!

October 28th, 2024 07:39

Oktoberfest
Neville said:



Gets one o these from me 👍👍or rather two .. that\'s a dubble you owe me by the way .. 😎

October 28th, 2024 07:13

Oktoberfest
Doggerel Dave said:

Cheers X 2. 🍺

October 28th, 2024 07:12

together with heavy hearts
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotion laden words arqios.

Andy

October 28th, 2024 02:24

in the light
Dan Williams said:

\"Shadows cast by doubt\" leads gracefully to the rest, very well said.

October 27th, 2024 22:58

in the light
Young Fella said:

Enjoyed going through your words. Lovely lines.

October 27th, 2024 15:57

together with heavy hearts
orchidee said:

Good write A.

October 27th, 2024 09:32

together with heavy hearts
Neville said:



Going strong since around the 5th or 6th centuries .. and so many crafted, with heavy hearts ..

October 27th, 2024 06:17



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