Comments received on poems by arqios
father, father
Paul Bell said:
Must admit when I was a kid other fathers would come out and play football with us, it was a great learning curve, and one I continued when I got older.
September 7th, 2026 13:24
Paul Bell said:
Must admit when I was a kid other fathers would come out and play football with us, it was a great learning curve, and one I continued when I got older.
September 7th, 2026 13:24
savoury feast
Kevin Hulme said:
This took me back to my Grandmother\'s House.
Dinner time and Broth. Liked it 👍
September 7th, 2026 06:38
Kevin Hulme said:
This took me back to my Grandmother\'s House.
Dinner time and Broth. Liked it 👍
September 7th, 2026 06:38
savoury feast
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely picture animated to call one most literal but to me metaphorical as well. I can smell it now.
September 7th, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely picture animated to call one most literal but to me metaphorical as well. I can smell it now.
September 7th, 2026 05:31
savoury feast
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A beautiful simplicity well expressed not overburdened
September 7th, 2026 05:15
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A beautiful simplicity well expressed not overburdened
September 7th, 2026 05:15
father, father
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a lovely poem, arqios. The father never needs to explain himself or take credit…he simply creates the space, tends it patiently, and lets the child grow into whatever is waiting there. Tender, wise, and beautifully restrained, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a lovely poem, arqios. The father never needs to explain himself or take credit…he simply creates the space, tends it patiently, and lets the child grow into whatever is waiting there. Tender, wise, and beautifully restrained, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:10
father, father
Neville said:
there is something both inherently relatable & natural here .. dependable too & in so many ways .. Neville
September 6th, 2026 09:56
Neville said:
there is something both inherently relatable & natural here .. dependable too & in so many ways .. Neville
September 6th, 2026 09:56
father, father
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic what a marvelous multi leveled poem of the father role, be it God, real father, teacher, father figure of any type. How help is given best not by doing for but teaching one to provide for themselves, not giving a fish but teaching how to fish and feeding one for a lifetime. So nicely put in metaphor of a garden space and providing the tools and space to learn. Being there quietly with wisdom to to tell and create resistance but available for true desired questions. A masterful work my friend
September 6th, 2026 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic what a marvelous multi leveled poem of the father role, be it God, real father, teacher, father figure of any type. How help is given best not by doing for but teaching one to provide for themselves, not giving a fish but teaching how to fish and feeding one for a lifetime. So nicely put in metaphor of a garden space and providing the tools and space to learn. Being there quietly with wisdom to to tell and create resistance but available for true desired questions. A masterful work my friend
September 6th, 2026 07:46
father, father
2781 said:
A good father has a delicate balancing act. As mortals we can only do our best.
September 6th, 2026 07:08
2781 said:
A good father has a delicate balancing act. As mortals we can only do our best.
September 6th, 2026 07:08
an unhurried hour
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is so special Rik, enjoy every one of them.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is so special Rik, enjoy every one of them.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:59
an unhurried hour
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a lovely poem, arqios. There’s such peace in letting the world carry on without demanding anything from yourself…and you make that kind of rest feel almost sacramental. Absolutely loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a lovely poem, arqios. There’s such peace in letting the world carry on without demanding anything from yourself…and you make that kind of rest feel almost sacramental. Absolutely loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:59
muse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, what a gorgeous piece. The relationship between creator and inspiration feels intimate and almost sacred…each one leading the other toward something neither could reach alone. Excellent work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 19:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, what a gorgeous piece. The relationship between creator and inspiration feels intimate and almost sacred…each one leading the other toward something neither could reach alone. Excellent work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 19:32
an unhurried hour
Kevin Hulme said:
This is like the sentiments in \'Leisure\' by WH Davies.
Well Said.
September 5th, 2026 19:02
Kevin Hulme said:
This is like the sentiments in \'Leisure\' by WH Davies.
Well Said.
September 5th, 2026 19:02
an unhurried hour
orchidee said:
Good write A. I hurried the hour, but it was still 60 minutes! lol.
September 5th, 2026 11:37
orchidee said:
Good write A. I hurried the hour, but it was still 60 minutes! lol.
September 5th, 2026 11:37
an unhurried hour
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lazy summer feel to this poem my friend. The first two lines captured me. It leaves me with a warm feeling where time means nothing and just experiencing and being is enough. A fave
September 5th, 2026 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lazy summer feel to this poem my friend. The first two lines captured me. It leaves me with a warm feeling where time means nothing and just experiencing and being is enough. A fave
September 5th, 2026 08:40
an unhurried hour
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, much enjoyed
September 5th, 2026 06:33
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, much enjoyed
September 5th, 2026 06:33
an evening harmony
Goldfinch60 said:
May that serenade always be there for us Rik.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
May that serenade always be there for us Rik.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:02
muse
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s nice when the Muse is always by you.
Not so when your ready to write and she\'s no where to be seen. Stopping out all hours. Probably with other Muses playing Bingo or Twister while fellow Poets sit Idlely by waiting to begin. Think I\'ll have a lie down now after that. Came over all unnecessary. Good Write by the way.
September 4th, 2026 19:21
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s nice when the Muse is always by you.
Not so when your ready to write and she\'s no where to be seen. Stopping out all hours. Probably with other Muses playing Bingo or Twister while fellow Poets sit Idlely by waiting to begin. Think I\'ll have a lie down now after that. Came over all unnecessary. Good Write by the way.
September 4th, 2026 19:21
muse
Syd said:
Hi arqios,
love the idea of drifting through half formed dreams until the pen gives that little tug and shows the way.
Beautifully written - Syd 🍄
September 4th, 2026 14:23
Syd said:
Hi arqios,
love the idea of drifting through half formed dreams until the pen gives that little tug and shows the way.
Beautifully written - Syd 🍄
September 4th, 2026 14:23
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