Comments received on poems by arqios
fair go
orchidee said:
This ain\'t unwritten, as you\'ve written it! Me spouting verbal garbage. lol.
May 18th, 2023 14:57
orchidee said:
This ain\'t unwritten, as you\'ve written it! Me spouting verbal garbage. lol.
May 18th, 2023 14:57
muse assistants
Goldfinch60 said:
Those muses can appear in many disguises CB.
Andy
May 18th, 2023 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Those muses can appear in many disguises CB.
Andy
May 18th, 2023 01:13
first snow blues
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing 🙂
May 17th, 2023 04:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing 🙂
May 17th, 2023 04:03
first snow blues
Bella Shepard said:
This stunning metaphor for love captured in water, its properties, its incredible power and moods, fit so aptly bodies that are in and of themselves 97% water, for without love and water we simply would not exist. Beautiful write!
May 16th, 2023 14:03
Bella Shepard said:
This stunning metaphor for love captured in water, its properties, its incredible power and moods, fit so aptly bodies that are in and of themselves 97% water, for without love and water we simply would not exist. Beautiful write!
May 16th, 2023 14:03
first snow blues
Neville said:
remind me never again to put all my eggs in the same basket with the weather being as fickle as it is around these here parts .. 🐧
May 16th, 2023 11:49
Neville said:
remind me never again to put all my eggs in the same basket with the weather being as fickle as it is around these here parts .. 🐧
May 16th, 2023 11:49
first snow blues
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how you intertwined the passage of love with the water cycle. Such an apt metaphor. Precipitation. Evaporation. Splendid.
May 16th, 2023 08:17
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how you intertwined the passage of love with the water cycle. Such an apt metaphor. Precipitation. Evaporation. Splendid.
May 16th, 2023 08:17
prehensile pledge
Neville said:
I\'m with Mek .. otherwise I\'m just Mordred ................... 🐧⚔️
May 15th, 2023 14:13
Neville said:
I\'m with Mek .. otherwise I\'m just Mordred ................... 🐧⚔️
May 15th, 2023 14:13
prehensile pledge
sorenbarrett said:
I have always been entranced by the Arthurian legends. Lady Modaunt threw a bit of British political mix into it. Since I\'m not up on politics I lost some of the meaning. But it seems clear at the end that like Mordred (Medraut) or Charles? should never be king. I loved the bringing in of English lore and the lady of the lak and sword that signifies kingship.
May 15th, 2023 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
I have always been entranced by the Arthurian legends. Lady Modaunt threw a bit of British political mix into it. Since I\'m not up on politics I lost some of the meaning. But it seems clear at the end that like Mordred (Medraut) or Charles? should never be king. I loved the bringing in of English lore and the lady of the lak and sword that signifies kingship.
May 15th, 2023 10:17
prehensile pledge
L. B. Mek said:
Katie McGrath
made Merlin, \'a must see watch\'
\'and dat\'s all I gotta say bout dat\'
...ahem
May 15th, 2023 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
Katie McGrath
made Merlin, \'a must see watch\'
\'and dat\'s all I gotta say bout dat\'
...ahem
May 15th, 2023 06:03
cannery row
L. B. Mek said:
(soaked in brine
soar tinged flavours of sunshine
seeking respite,
timid flavour
teeming with juicy vivaciousness
trimmed of skin and pride,)
displayed side by side, they await
that lid opening of demise
where their worth, will be realised
at their food chain, fated
tepid ending
May 15th, 2023 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
(soaked in brine
soar tinged flavours of sunshine
seeking respite,
timid flavour
teeming with juicy vivaciousness
trimmed of skin and pride,)
displayed side by side, they await
that lid opening of demise
where their worth, will be realised
at their food chain, fated
tepid ending
May 15th, 2023 03:54
cannery row
Neville said:
No point looking at me .. I\'m pickled .. a circumstance preserved for the overprivileged but internally grateful
May 14th, 2023 13:01
Neville said:
No point looking at me .. I\'m pickled .. a circumstance preserved for the overprivileged but internally grateful
May 14th, 2023 13:01
cannery row
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m old enough to remember real food; grown in the yard, washed, cooked and happily eaten. somewhere in that future of synthisized food no one will ever know the delight of tasting a lucious, ripe tomato or plucking an apple right from the tree and eating it in the orchard. Much food for thought here dear poet, no pun intended.
May 14th, 2023 12:36
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m old enough to remember real food; grown in the yard, washed, cooked and happily eaten. somewhere in that future of synthisized food no one will ever know the delight of tasting a lucious, ripe tomato or plucking an apple right from the tree and eating it in the orchard. Much food for thought here dear poet, no pun intended.
May 14th, 2023 12:36
cannery row
sorenbarrett said:
The falseness of convienience. Addatives, canned, bottled, bagged, frozen plasticised. Fake nutrition not only in food but relationships and anything that was real. I\'m not even sure what is real anymore. Ah but for a ripe peach from the tree. Heaven forbid, it might not be clean or have a worm.
May 14th, 2023 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
The falseness of convienience. Addatives, canned, bottled, bagged, frozen plasticised. Fake nutrition not only in food but relationships and anything that was real. I\'m not even sure what is real anymore. Ah but for a ripe peach from the tree. Heaven forbid, it might not be clean or have a worm.
May 14th, 2023 08:37
stars and gripes
Bobby O said:
It’s a nice read I looked up 1433. What an interesting year
May 13th, 2023 12:15
Bobby O said:
It’s a nice read I looked up 1433. What an interesting year
May 13th, 2023 12:15
stars and gripes
orchidee said:
You been doing that astronomy course as I have?!
I thought I found a new object in space, but a bird had pooped on me telescope lens!
May 13th, 2023 10:12
orchidee said:
You been doing that astronomy course as I have?!
I thought I found a new object in space, but a bird had pooped on me telescope lens!
May 13th, 2023 10:12
giant\'s demise
Neville said:
I like it as is and think it would be a crying shame to supernosedive and become just another black whole, even if it was heart shaped 🖤
May 12th, 2023 12:53
Neville said:
I like it as is and think it would be a crying shame to supernosedive and become just another black whole, even if it was heart shaped 🖤
May 12th, 2023 12:53
giant\'s demise
orchidee said:
As it happens, I\'m doing a short astronomy course. Oh no, they say the Sun\'s only got about 5 billion years left. Now that\'s not long! Doh! lol.
I\'m travelling to Mars by bus. It goes at the speed of light.
May 12th, 2023 11:04
orchidee said:
As it happens, I\'m doing a short astronomy course. Oh no, they say the Sun\'s only got about 5 billion years left. Now that\'s not long! Doh! lol.
I\'m travelling to Mars by bus. It goes at the speed of light.
May 12th, 2023 11:04
giant\'s demise
2781 said:
How to frame such magnificence in words is beyond me. Just thinking about Light speed give me a short circuit.
May 12th, 2023 07:38
2781 said:
How to frame such magnificence in words is beyond me. Just thinking about Light speed give me a short circuit.
May 12th, 2023 07:38
bygones gone by
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that can be identified with. Thinking back I have been working on nothing most of my life. And yes \"the words are never few\"
May 11th, 2023 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that can be identified with. Thinking back I have been working on nothing most of my life. And yes \"the words are never few\"
May 11th, 2023 08:28
bygones gone by
2781 said:
My wife thinks I have early onset dementia. I call it a blessing.
May 11th, 2023 08:08
2781 said:
My wife thinks I have early onset dementia. I call it a blessing.
May 11th, 2023 08:08
bygones gone by
Neville said:
who needs a frontal lobe when one can always refer back to this ..
May 11th, 2023 07:30
Neville said:
who needs a frontal lobe when one can always refer back to this ..
May 11th, 2023 07:30
bygones gone by
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a clever switch - --- your forceful message comes over not only in your title but in those telling few lines.
May 11th, 2023 07:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a clever switch - --- your forceful message comes over not only in your title but in those telling few lines.
May 11th, 2023 07:07
plumbing depths
Mr. Not said:
Might the paperplane be a metaphor for someone who was let down by a person close to them, and then they struggle without them perhaps?
and the last verse, that no matter how well you turn out without that person, the thought of them and why they left you will forever be weighing you down?
Very nice poem crypticbard! All the meanings hidden under the simple words makes me think lots and lots!
May 10th, 2023 13:45
Mr. Not said:
Might the paperplane be a metaphor for someone who was let down by a person close to them, and then they struggle without them perhaps?
and the last verse, that no matter how well you turn out without that person, the thought of them and why they left you will forever be weighing you down?
Very nice poem crypticbard! All the meanings hidden under the simple words makes me think lots and lots!
May 10th, 2023 13:45
wilderness calling, again
Neville said:
I have been working full on so seem to have missed out on a whole lotta news .. this post reads well but I need to know what exactly inspired it ..
I guess I have just proved that old adage write \'All work and no play makes Nev a dull boy\' ... N
May 10th, 2023 12:35
Neville said:
I have been working full on so seem to have missed out on a whole lotta news .. this post reads well but I need to know what exactly inspired it ..
I guess I have just proved that old adage write \'All work and no play makes Nev a dull boy\' ... N
May 10th, 2023 12:35
plumbing depths
Bella Shepard said:
There is something in the air these days that insidiously wraps us in dismay, dispair, disharmony. When and how it began is hard to say, and when it will end I guess is up to us, if we\'re up to the task. This is such a thought provoking and soul searching write dear poet. Thank you for putting into words something I think we are all sharing.
May 9th, 2023 11:45
Bella Shepard said:
There is something in the air these days that insidiously wraps us in dismay, dispair, disharmony. When and how it began is hard to say, and when it will end I guess is up to us, if we\'re up to the task. This is such a thought provoking and soul searching write dear poet. Thank you for putting into words something I think we are all sharing.
May 9th, 2023 11:45
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