Comments received on poems by arqios
fluid mosaic
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, that mosaic of life affects us all.
Andy
March 8th, 2025 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, that mosaic of life affects us all.
Andy
March 8th, 2025 02:45
fluid mosaic
arqios said:
Looks like another roundabout way of getting there…again
March 7th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
Looks like another roundabout way of getting there…again
March 7th, 2025 06:25
fluid mosaic
Poetic Licence said:
It is a sense of wonder, not knowing what could be discovered on any given day, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 05:24
Poetic Licence said:
It is a sense of wonder, not knowing what could be discovered on any given day, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 05:24
fluid mosaic
David Wakeling said:
Yes the microscopic world is amazing.This isan insightful poem.It made me think.No wonder my head hurts.Enjoyable read
March 7th, 2025 04:54
David Wakeling said:
Yes the microscopic world is amazing.This isan insightful poem.It made me think.No wonder my head hurts.Enjoyable read
March 7th, 2025 04:54
fluid mosaic
Neville said:
Ever since reading a Marvel comic many, many, many, many, years ago which featured for one episode only, a character called Mordar the great or the incredible who believed he ruled his universe only to be flushed away from the petri dish he in reality inhabited, by a lab technician or scientist who couldn\'t see anything visible or viable through his atomic microscope .. I have been fascinated by those things you have brought to our attention .. Consequently, very muchly enjoyed .. not only for the ride, but for the rush that accompanied me back to my childhood & all things associated .. Neville
March 7th, 2025 04:52
Neville said:
Ever since reading a Marvel comic many, many, many, many, years ago which featured for one episode only, a character called Mordar the great or the incredible who believed he ruled his universe only to be flushed away from the petri dish he in reality inhabited, by a lab technician or scientist who couldn\'t see anything visible or viable through his atomic microscope .. I have been fascinated by those things you have brought to our attention .. Consequently, very muchly enjoyed .. not only for the ride, but for the rush that accompanied me back to my childhood & all things associated .. Neville
March 7th, 2025 04:52
fluid mosaic
sorenbarrett said:
I love your last stanza
(It evokes a sense of wonder
a reminder of the vastness
contained within the small.}
Size is relative and is infinite both ways. Lovely
March 7th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love your last stanza
(It evokes a sense of wonder
a reminder of the vastness
contained within the small.}
Size is relative and is infinite both ways. Lovely
March 7th, 2025 04:30
recuperation
Cassie58 said:
The cyclone may be advancing towards you and I wish you well, but this poem I see as a struggle against inner turmoil. There is much chaos here and I see strength riding high through the storm. A poem of battle and survival into calmer waters. Well penned. The struggle felt.
March 6th, 2025 06:07
Cassie58 said:
The cyclone may be advancing towards you and I wish you well, but this poem I see as a struggle against inner turmoil. There is much chaos here and I see strength riding high through the storm. A poem of battle and survival into calmer waters. Well penned. The struggle felt.
March 6th, 2025 06:07
recuperation
David Wakeling said:
A powerful message of hope and survival.Excellent poem
March 6th, 2025 05:52
David Wakeling said:
A powerful message of hope and survival.Excellent poem
March 6th, 2025 05:52
recuperation
sorenbarrett said:
Been there many times mate. Although on this side they are called hurricanes. They are a nuisance it\'s the tornados inside them that worry me. Wishing you well. Be safe
March 6th, 2025 03:23
sorenbarrett said:
Been there many times mate. Although on this side they are called hurricanes. They are a nuisance it\'s the tornados inside them that worry me. Wishing you well. Be safe
March 6th, 2025 03:23
recuperation
orchidee said:
Argh! Hope that\'s not you there - nor that it might be you soon!
March 6th, 2025 03:20
orchidee said:
Argh! Hope that\'s not you there - nor that it might be you soon!
March 6th, 2025 03:20
slipping away
Goldfinch60 said:
They will always return arqios as love will bring them back.
Andy
March 6th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
They will always return arqios as love will bring them back.
Andy
March 6th, 2025 02:52
recuperation
Doggerel Dave said:
Well Good Luck. While I\'m not trying to minimize your experience, (I didn\'t know you lived up there) I in general am quite bored with it as we have had nothing much else on the news (sandbagging preparations etc) for the past week. My point is that they only classify this one as a category two, when in far North Queensland they regularly have categories 3 and four, which gain brief news items. Maybe because fewer people and Murri (indigenous) live in those regions.....
Take care - look after yourselves.
March 6th, 2025 01:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Well Good Luck. While I\'m not trying to minimize your experience, (I didn\'t know you lived up there) I in general am quite bored with it as we have had nothing much else on the news (sandbagging preparations etc) for the past week. My point is that they only classify this one as a category two, when in far North Queensland they regularly have categories 3 and four, which gain brief news items. Maybe because fewer people and Murri (indigenous) live in those regions.....
Take care - look after yourselves.
March 6th, 2025 01:20
slipping away
Neville said:
an insidious demise springs to mind .. I doubt you could have crafted it better .. indeed I\'m pretty sure that nobody could .. so very sadly but very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
March 5th, 2025 10:27
Neville said:
an insidious demise springs to mind .. I doubt you could have crafted it better .. indeed I\'m pretty sure that nobody could .. so very sadly but very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
March 5th, 2025 10:27
slipping away
Poetic Licence said:
I get a small sense of confidence and belief so slipping away but not knowing why, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 07:00
Poetic Licence said:
I get a small sense of confidence and belief so slipping away but not knowing why, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 07:00
slipping away
arqios said:
Much thought about how our surroundings may set us on a mood or a journey.
March 5th, 2025 06:21
arqios said:
Much thought about how our surroundings may set us on a mood or a journey.
March 5th, 2025 06:21
slipping away
sorenbarrett said:
From one that frequently writes dark, no this is not too dark. It talks to entropy the second law of thermodynamics. It is a constant in nature from birth to death and from empathy to disinterest. I found this poem very nicely woven and hope that I didn\'t unravel it.
March 5th, 2025 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
From one that frequently writes dark, no this is not too dark. It talks to entropy the second law of thermodynamics. It is a constant in nature from birth to death and from empathy to disinterest. I found this poem very nicely woven and hope that I didn\'t unravel it.
March 5th, 2025 06:02
slipping away
David Wakeling said:
Seems a sense of loneliness and losing confidence. A very powerful piece.Excellent
March 5th, 2025 05:13
David Wakeling said:
Seems a sense of loneliness and losing confidence. A very powerful piece.Excellent
March 5th, 2025 05:13
slipping away
Cassie58 said:
the tides return twice a day, and birds migrate and return too, but the river is something else. Once that water has gone beneath the bridge, it never returns. My mind drifted reading you, excuse my ramblings. I didn’t see permanent in your poem, but then I seek light rather than darkness. Thought provoking. Have a good day arqios.
March 5th, 2025 04:14
Cassie58 said:
the tides return twice a day, and birds migrate and return too, but the river is something else. Once that water has gone beneath the bridge, it never returns. My mind drifted reading you, excuse my ramblings. I didn’t see permanent in your poem, but then I seek light rather than darkness. Thought provoking. Have a good day arqios.
March 5th, 2025 04:14
‘bear pottery’
Kevin Hulme said:
You’d think the other Two Bears would help-out .
Good one.
March 4th, 2025 19:20
Kevin Hulme said:
You’d think the other Two Bears would help-out .
Good one.
March 4th, 2025 19:20
minuet of the reeds
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful poem.Some of the big words I had to look up but a powerful image created.
March 4th, 2025 15:59
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful poem.Some of the big words I had to look up but a powerful image created.
March 4th, 2025 15:59
minuet of the reeds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, natural, sensual, linguistically, lyrically titillating. All of this and above. Loved this, my friend. An easy fave. By the way what would coffee be without xanthine? Decaf of course! LOL! 🙏🌹
March 4th, 2025 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, natural, sensual, linguistically, lyrically titillating. All of this and above. Loved this, my friend. An easy fave. By the way what would coffee be without xanthine? Decaf of course! LOL! 🙏🌹
March 4th, 2025 09:11
minuet of the reeds
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful images painted with the dancing of the reeds, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 07:57
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful images painted with the dancing of the reeds, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 07:57
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