Comments received on poems by arqios
where hermits go to shop
Goldfinch60 said:
Visions of food can come to us all arqios.
Andy
July 19th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Visions of food can come to us all arqios.
Andy
July 19th, 2025 01:48
where hermits go to shop
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful dreamlike quality here, such lovely crafted lines. You have created an otherworldly atmosphere of poetic inclination here that drew me in. I would love to shop here! How seriously delightful this piece is . I genuinely LOVED it! Well done arqios. Really good write. Surreal and ethereal. Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 20:52
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful dreamlike quality here, such lovely crafted lines. You have created an otherworldly atmosphere of poetic inclination here that drew me in. I would love to shop here! How seriously delightful this piece is . I genuinely LOVED it! Well done arqios. Really good write. Surreal and ethereal. Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 20:52
baker’s gift
Joan Reese said:
Beautiful! Kindness is needed more than ever these days. Well written!
July 18th, 2025 20:13
Joan Reese said:
Beautiful! Kindness is needed more than ever these days. Well written!
July 18th, 2025 20:13
where hermits go to shop
Keeter C said:
Should have seen this before grocery shopping today. I wonder what to do when the markets are gone.
July 18th, 2025 15:47
Keeter C said:
Should have seen this before grocery shopping today. I wonder what to do when the markets are gone.
July 18th, 2025 15:47
where hermits go to shop
Tony Grannell said:
A stroll down the aisles of the etherial supermarket, divinely swaying beneath a moonlit haze and he of meagre purse and not a care in the world. What a great read. How did this and the previous poem come to be, a most unusual subject, unique even, you should agree.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony
July 18th, 2025 13:52
Tony Grannell said:
A stroll down the aisles of the etherial supermarket, divinely swaying beneath a moonlit haze and he of meagre purse and not a care in the world. What a great read. How did this and the previous poem come to be, a most unusual subject, unique even, you should agree.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony
July 18th, 2025 13:52
2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. # Misty Coloured Memories, of the way we were# as the Song says.
July 18th, 2025 08:03
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. # Misty Coloured Memories, of the way we were# as the Song says.
July 18th, 2025 08:03
where hermits go to shop
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is soft, surreal, and glows. The hush, the lyric stillness...a dream wandering into a grocery aisle and staying there. Absolutely love it. 🌹👏 A fave.
July 18th, 2025 06:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is soft, surreal, and glows. The hush, the lyric stillness...a dream wandering into a grocery aisle and staying there. Absolutely love it. 🌹👏 A fave.
July 18th, 2025 06:57
where hermits go to shop
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read, he might be shopping in heaven, but it reminded me of me shopping at 3 in the morning, very enjoyable
July 18th, 2025 06:43
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read, he might be shopping in heaven, but it reminded me of me shopping at 3 in the morning, very enjoyable
July 18th, 2025 06:43
where hermits go to shop
arqios said:
...not half as bad today... but the day is young, still.
July 18th, 2025 06:26
arqios said:
...not half as bad today... but the day is young, still.
July 18th, 2025 06:26
where hermits go to shop
Caring dove said:
I really like this .. the personification of the cans and jars .. and the mention of the divine .. a very nice and interesting read 🙂
July 18th, 2025 06:13
Caring dove said:
I really like this .. the personification of the cans and jars .. and the mention of the divine .. a very nice and interesting read 🙂
July 18th, 2025 06:13
where hermits go to shop
sorenbarrett said:
Enchanted shopping instead of elves I thought gremlins were adjusting the prices. At times demonic with shoppers possessed. A fun read Cryptic.
July 18th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Enchanted shopping instead of elves I thought gremlins were adjusting the prices. At times demonic with shoppers possessed. A fun read Cryptic.
July 18th, 2025 05:42
2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie
Tony Grannell said:
The sweet sorrow of a rare vintage effervescing to the last drop. An exquisite verse, arqios.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:47
Tony Grannell said:
The sweet sorrow of a rare vintage effervescing to the last drop. An exquisite verse, arqios.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:47
2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie
Damaso said:
Cheers to this piece then. Tinged with nostalgia and a beautiful, longed-for landscape. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
July 17th, 2025 14:02
Damaso said:
Cheers to this piece then. Tinged with nostalgia and a beautiful, longed-for landscape. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
July 17th, 2025 14:02
2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of reflection maybe with a tinge of sadness, nicely expressed write
July 17th, 2025 08:15
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of reflection maybe with a tinge of sadness, nicely expressed write
July 17th, 2025 08:15
2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie
Teddy.15 said:
Now there is a meeting I would have loved to have had. This is just a joy, especially the end, when we meet after a long absence we should be drinking champagne 🍾 🍾🍾🍾
July 17th, 2025 07:56
Teddy.15 said:
Now there is a meeting I would have loved to have had. This is just a joy, especially the end, when we meet after a long absence we should be drinking champagne 🍾 🍾🍾🍾
July 17th, 2025 07:56
2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friend, this feels like toast at the edge of ruin...the way Madame sips memory like champagne while everything quietly slips out of reach. “Hope, a threadbare gown” is a phenomenal line. Line envy exists too, you know? 🤣 This is gorgeous and ghosted. 🌹👏
July 17th, 2025 05:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friend, this feels like toast at the edge of ruin...the way Madame sips memory like champagne while everything quietly slips out of reach. “Hope, a threadbare gown” is a phenomenal line. Line envy exists too, you know? 🤣 This is gorgeous and ghosted. 🌹👏
July 17th, 2025 05:53
2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie
sorenbarrett said:
This one smells of nostalgia and has the taste melancholy. Very good word choice puts in my fave category
July 17th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
This one smells of nostalgia and has the taste melancholy. Very good word choice puts in my fave category
July 17th, 2025 03:58
2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie
arqios said:
Here’s the second instalment promised several days ago. The Cherry Orchard, Chekhovian suite of poems…
July 17th, 2025 02:55
arqios said:
Here’s the second instalment promised several days ago. The Cherry Orchard, Chekhovian suite of poems…
July 17th, 2025 02:55
grocery aisle poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
Has the hermit come across the fish counter where there are signs on the fish saying what the fish is, the cost of it and the words \"May contain fish\". I have!
Andy
July 17th, 2025 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Has the hermit come across the fish counter where there are signs on the fish saying what the fish is, the cost of it and the words \"May contain fish\". I have!
Andy
July 17th, 2025 01:15
grocery aisle poetry
Poetic Licence said:
I guess we are all dated suppose the question is with a use by date or a sell by date, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 01:04
Poetic Licence said:
I guess we are all dated suppose the question is with a use by date or a sell by date, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 01:04
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
Cheeky Missy said:
La, how you cull to mind what the ladies told me the day I officially signed papers and purchased my two fluff balls; they claimed cats are practically keepers of your soul, as if. I cannot agree, however they are remarkably perceptive and sensitive to our moods, aligning themselves with the same by the second day and onward. These two pieces are so lovely. The first is gorgeous and evocative, rendered with a seductive sense which romances to the finish, the second clarifying. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, exquisite poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 16th, 2025 23:25
Cheeky Missy said:
La, how you cull to mind what the ladies told me the day I officially signed papers and purchased my two fluff balls; they claimed cats are practically keepers of your soul, as if. I cannot agree, however they are remarkably perceptive and sensitive to our moods, aligning themselves with the same by the second day and onward. These two pieces are so lovely. The first is gorgeous and evocative, rendered with a seductive sense which romances to the finish, the second clarifying. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, exquisite poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 16th, 2025 23:25
an orchard’s lament
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautifully poignant and layered poem — elegaic & rich with imagery.
July 16th, 2025 21:15
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautifully poignant and layered poem — elegaic & rich with imagery.
July 16th, 2025 21:15
hair in the wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah. I was away when you posted this and some how missed it. BUT NOT FOREVER! LOL! What a wonderful poem and loved the reading too! Bravo, my friend! 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 20:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah. I was away when you posted this and some how missed it. BUT NOT FOREVER! LOL! What a wonderful poem and loved the reading too! Bravo, my friend! 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 20:57
grocery aisle poetry
Bella Shepard said:
My Tuesday morning grocery shopping will never be the same. I shall be on engarde for the elves on the shelves, and listening for the subliminal messages coming from the freezer aisle. From now on it shall be an adventure. Witty, and oh so much fun my friend!
July 16th, 2025 12:05
Bella Shepard said:
My Tuesday morning grocery shopping will never be the same. I shall be on engarde for the elves on the shelves, and listening for the subliminal messages coming from the freezer aisle. From now on it shall be an adventure. Witty, and oh so much fun my friend!
July 16th, 2025 12:05
grocery aisle poetry
Tony Grannell said:
I think I will wait this one out, arqios; cockroaches came to mind, I don\'t know why, they have absolutely nothing to do with elves - hahaha!
With bated breath,
Tony.
July 16th, 2025 08:35
Tony Grannell said:
I think I will wait this one out, arqios; cockroaches came to mind, I don\'t know why, they have absolutely nothing to do with elves - hahaha!
With bated breath,
Tony.
July 16th, 2025 08:35
grocery aisle poetry
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dear poet and friend, this is utterly spell-spun. The secret life of the grocery aisle rendered with reverence and wit...like a lullaby sung by the barcodes themselves. “Elvish dust” and lentils with memory? You just baptized the mundane with magic...which is always a wonderful endeavor. A masterpiece, imho. 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 08:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dear poet and friend, this is utterly spell-spun. The secret life of the grocery aisle rendered with reverence and wit...like a lullaby sung by the barcodes themselves. “Elvish dust” and lentils with memory? You just baptized the mundane with magic...which is always a wonderful endeavor. A masterpiece, imho. 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 08:35
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