Comments received on poems by arqios
once again
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A powerful write. Writing has been a recorder and preserver of my soul, so this rings very true to me. It\'s funny, because I see you wrote this in \"long hand\". The poem I published today was written in long hand, along with another one! Yes, the fingers are not so used to that anymore, though I love the practice! 🤣 Well done on this, my friend! 👏🌹
April 24th, 2025 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A powerful write. Writing has been a recorder and preserver of my soul, so this rings very true to me. It\'s funny, because I see you wrote this in \"long hand\". The poem I published today was written in long hand, along with another one! Yes, the fingers are not so used to that anymore, though I love the practice! 🤣 Well done on this, my friend! 👏🌹
April 24th, 2025 09:06
once again
MDStone said:
Our memory lingers in our words and future travelers should they discover them and take the time to open the chest… peer for a moment into our soul. Well written and well said. Thank you for sharing with us.
April 24th, 2025 05:34
MDStone said:
Our memory lingers in our words and future travelers should they discover them and take the time to open the chest… peer for a moment into our soul. Well written and well said. Thank you for sharing with us.
April 24th, 2025 05:34
once again
David Wakeling said:
I think this makes a profound point about writing. It can be seen as eternal life because writing preserves the soul.Great poem made me think
April 24th, 2025 05:14
David Wakeling said:
I think this makes a profound point about writing. It can be seen as eternal life because writing preserves the soul.Great poem made me think
April 24th, 2025 05:14
once again
sorenbarrett said:
Shall we return to our past? At times I wish it so, at others I would not for anything relive it. I remember well the times of pencil and paper, ink that could not be altered and paper copy. Maybe some day a solar flare with erase all our cloud history and we will start anew. Great write Cryptic
April 24th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Shall we return to our past? At times I wish it so, at others I would not for anything relive it. I remember well the times of pencil and paper, ink that could not be altered and paper copy. Maybe some day a solar flare with erase all our cloud history and we will start anew. Great write Cryptic
April 24th, 2025 04:30
a miscreant yearns
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words arqios, those words are within us all.
Andy
April 24th, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words arqios, those words are within us all.
Andy
April 24th, 2025 01:14
cavernous
rrodriguez said:
Simplicity with intensity, all in one well-written poem. Bravo!
April 23rd, 2025 16:49
rrodriguez said:
Simplicity with intensity, all in one well-written poem. Bravo!
April 23rd, 2025 16:49
a miscreant yearns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, dear poet and friend! This reads like a quiet revelation—the kind of truth that whispers rather than shouts. I love how you show the soul’s cry not just as catharsis, but as careful craft—words chosen, woven, and made beautiful through longing. That line about beauty finding form through articulation really struck me. You capture the heart of why we write. 👏🌹 Again, well done!
April 23rd, 2025 07:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, dear poet and friend! This reads like a quiet revelation—the kind of truth that whispers rather than shouts. I love how you show the soul’s cry not just as catharsis, but as careful craft—words chosen, woven, and made beautiful through longing. That line about beauty finding form through articulation really struck me. You capture the heart of why we write. 👏🌹 Again, well done!
April 23rd, 2025 07:17
a miscreant yearns
David Wakeling said:
It is so true that Beauty finds its form in articulation.Interesting poem. It made me think.
April 23rd, 2025 05:37
David Wakeling said:
It is so true that Beauty finds its form in articulation.Interesting poem. It made me think.
April 23rd, 2025 05:37
a miscreant yearns
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry indeed does bridge the gap between mind and heart in words. A most meta poetic statement. Loved it Cryptic
April 23rd, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry indeed does bridge the gap between mind and heart in words. A most meta poetic statement. Loved it Cryptic
April 23rd, 2025 05:02
twilight trek
NafisaSB said:
what a lovely message of hope - even if the mountain looms - the path wil dlefinitely unwind and reveal itself if we have the patience and will to wait
April 22nd, 2025 23:41
NafisaSB said:
what a lovely message of hope - even if the mountain looms - the path wil dlefinitely unwind and reveal itself if we have the patience and will to wait
April 22nd, 2025 23:41
cavernous
Cheeky Missy said:
Haunting. \"...Thou tellest my wanderings: put Thou my tears into Thy bottle: are they not all in Thy book?\" (Ps 56:8) are you referencing this? Fascinatingly rendered in the seeming shape itself with excellent imagery and a poignancy which culls the thing itself. Thank you for sharing.
April 22nd, 2025 18:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Haunting. \"...Thou tellest my wanderings: put Thou my tears into Thy bottle: are they not all in Thy book?\" (Ps 56:8) are you referencing this? Fascinatingly rendered in the seeming shape itself with excellent imagery and a poignancy which culls the thing itself. Thank you for sharing.
April 22nd, 2025 18:57
cavernous
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful shape poem, the shape cleverly mirroring its content. Profoundly deep and open to multiple interpretations. What great poetry is made of. Well done, my friend! A must fave from me. 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful shape poem, the shape cleverly mirroring its content. Profoundly deep and open to multiple interpretations. What great poetry is made of. Well done, my friend! A must fave from me. 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 07:52
cavernous
sorenbarrett said:
This poem clever in its writing as well as form also used a homograph to add even greater appeal and charm. Unique in that the homograph leaves this poem up to interpretation of how it is read. This is a definite Fave
April 22nd, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem clever in its writing as well as form also used a homograph to add even greater appeal and charm. Unique in that the homograph leaves this poem up to interpretation of how it is read. This is a definite Fave
April 22nd, 2025 04:38
cavernous
David Wakeling said:
This is very clever.The text is shaped like a vase.Very inspirational with some sadness as well.
April 22nd, 2025 03:04
David Wakeling said:
This is very clever.The text is shaped like a vase.Very inspirational with some sadness as well.
April 22nd, 2025 03:04
a poem’s succession
Goldfinch60 said:
That invisible ink is always within our minds arqios.
Andy
April 22nd, 2025 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That invisible ink is always within our minds arqios.
Andy
April 22nd, 2025 01:13
a poem’s succession
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Poem on the Process of Creating Poetry.
Good One.
April 21st, 2025 20:05
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Poem on the Process of Creating Poetry.
Good One.
April 21st, 2025 20:05
a poem’s succession
Cheeky Missy said:
La, what a gorgeous beauty! Delicately rendered with delicious imagery and a richly haunting poignancy, I fail at words to express my happiness in it. Thank you so very, very much for sharing. I love it.
April 21st, 2025 18:34
Cheeky Missy said:
La, what a gorgeous beauty! Delicately rendered with delicious imagery and a richly haunting poignancy, I fail at words to express my happiness in it. Thank you so very, very much for sharing. I love it.
April 21st, 2025 18:34
a poem’s succession
John Prophet said:
What a wonderful piece of writing and so true about yet to be born poems.
John
April 21st, 2025 06:32
John Prophet said:
What a wonderful piece of writing and so true about yet to be born poems.
John
April 21st, 2025 06:32
a poem’s succession
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful evaluation of the power of poetry.A very clever poem.I enjoyed going on the journey
April 21st, 2025 05:12
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful evaluation of the power of poetry.A very clever poem.I enjoyed going on the journey
April 21st, 2025 05:12
a poem’s succession
sorenbarrett said:
This touches close to heart. I have many fledglings in the nest some will survive some not they are hungry and need food to grow. From day to day a new egg hatches and a new face appears. Sometimes the stronger eat the weak. A wonderful poem of a poet\'s creativity.
April 21st, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This touches close to heart. I have many fledglings in the nest some will survive some not they are hungry and need food to grow. From day to day a new egg hatches and a new face appears. Sometimes the stronger eat the weak. A wonderful poem of a poet\'s creativity.
April 21st, 2025 04:00
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