Comments received on poems by arqios



Boy and Bonnet
orchidee said:

Good write A.

November 30th, 2024 11:53

Boy and Bonnet
sorenbarrett said:

That’s very heartwarming and I’m sure all mothers feel the same. A very tender poem and nicely done.

November 30th, 2024 10:12

Boy and Bonnet
Neville said:



this has a very dated feel to it .. for a moment I thought Robert Herrick who I have a soft spot for .. but then it took off and I still liked it muchly .. Neville

November 30th, 2024 08:31

Boy and Bonnet
Tristan Robert Lange said:

There’s nothing like a mother’s love and SPRING!!!! Thank you for bringing it up here! Well done, friend! 🌹👏

November 30th, 2024 08:13

Boy and Bonnet
Cassie58 said:

Maternal love, nothing like it. This poem warms my heart on a cold grey day. Beautiful poetry. Thank you for some sunshine. Nice posted image too.

November 30th, 2024 06:44

winter’s embrace
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words arqios and so true.

Andy

November 30th, 2024 02:23

winter’s embrace
Doggerel Dave said:

For me I try to extract something from a poem I\'ve read...but find it terrible hard when the subject is winter and snow..... but hang on a minute... nonet? Down the rabbit hole... I\'m on my way....
Thanks.

November 29th, 2024 17:34

winter’s embrace
David Wakeling said:

This is clever.I have never seen snow so it transported me there.Excellent

November 29th, 2024 14:47

winter’s embrace
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A Northern Hemisphere folk myself! Thank you for this. May not be a fan of the dark days and the cold, but you’ve hit the beauty of a winter night so well. Bravo friend! 👏🌹

November 29th, 2024 10:54

winter’s embrace
Neville said:



Disorientatingly beautiful .. for a moment I thought I woke up in a snow globe .. Neville

November 29th, 2024 09:31

winter’s embrace
Cassie58 said:

Perfect winter’s scene, picture postcard and words to match. I guess you are sitting on the beach lapping up the sun. Lovely imagery, nice brevity.

November 29th, 2024 07:23

winter’s embrace
2781 said:

I wondered where you were...
You took me there, clear skies after snow. The wind cuts like a knife. You need a good fire!

November 29th, 2024 06:26

winter’s embrace
sorenbarrett said:

I can feel it Cryptic I can see it and that’s all that’s needed for it to be poetic

November 29th, 2024 06:03

mateship’s duty of care
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words arqios, may that light always be shining for you.

Andy

November 29th, 2024 02:51

mateship’s duty of care
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed, a blessing to be thankful for! Well done friend! And since you are at least observing poetically, a Happy Thanksgiving to you my friend! Your poem captures the true essence! 🌹👏

November 28th, 2024 09:16

mateship’s duty of care
Cassie58 said:

The true meaning of thanksgiving. The sincerity here was marvelous. A special bond and you are truly thankful. Wonderful.

November 28th, 2024 08:43

mateship’s duty of care
Neville said:



This is absolutely lovely .. I just knew it was about the bond between brothers from the off .. your authors note confirmed that & reminded me of the relationship I have with my own younger brother .. Neville

November 28th, 2024 08:00

mateship’s duty of care
Doggerel Dave said:

Kinship, mateship, brother doesn\'t necessarily have to imply a connection by blood, does it? Where it occurs it can anchor and stabilize one\'s existence. Good call.

November 28th, 2024 07:30

mateship’s duty of care
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of kinship and closeness very nicely worded, convey the feeling of family weather of blood or just spirit

November 28th, 2024 06:54

mateship’s duty of care
TobaniNataiella said:

Beautifully written

November 28th, 2024 06:05

mateship’s duty of care
2781 said:

Amen.

November 28th, 2024 05:22

when the downpour ends
Teddy.15 said:

Exquisite poetry 🌹

November 28th, 2024 04:36

when the downpour ends
Goldfinch60 said:

The silence after the rainfall is so encompassing arqios, fine words.

Andy

November 28th, 2024 01:41

when the downpour ends
Thad Wilk said:

A very touching and
emotional poem so
eloquently expressed!! 👍
Strong feelings and
message,, just resonates
with greatness!! Love it! 🤩
Thanks for sharing, much enjoyed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad


November 27th, 2024 21:28

when the downpour ends
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

November 27th, 2024 20:47

when the downpour ends
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Knowing this was written in April 2020, during beginning pandemic, adds a ton this already impactful poem. A wonderful write my friend that shows hope in the midst of sadness and seeming hopelessness. Brilliant and beautiful! 🌹👏

November 27th, 2024 11:16

when the downpour ends
rin said:

People have paths they have lived and will live, and there is no hope for them unless the dots are connected, but it is very nice that a route is shown to fill in the problems there.

November 27th, 2024 09:13

when the downpour ends
2781 said:

Timely again! We\' could be in for a soaking after the heat.

November 27th, 2024 08:25

when the downpour ends
Neville said:



............................... Beautiful .. Neville 👍👍

November 27th, 2024 07:04

when the downpour ends
sorenbarrett said:

Soft, tender, a rebirth. A poem of growth from sadness. Solace from the storm. All of this and much more in this poem. Very carefully crafted and written, it reads smoothly and well.

November 27th, 2024 06:17



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