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epilogue: the seed beyond memory
Neville said:
Renaissance rules the roost .. or at least the principal does .. in my book .. Let there always be another my friend .. always .. Neville
July 30th, 2025 02:29
Neville said:
Renaissance rules the roost .. or at least the principal does .. in my book .. Let there always be another my friend .. always .. Neville
July 30th, 2025 02:29
epilogue: the seed beyond memory
arqios said:
🌱 “The Seed Beyond Memory” closes the Cherry Orchard Suite with a quiet promise of rebirth beneath loss. In its soft echo—roots unraveling, laughter on the breeze, seeds stirring—what endures beyond the felling?
What moments stayed with you, and what new hope did you find in this epilogue? Share your thoughts below. 🌸
July 30th, 2025 00:46
arqios said:
🌱 “The Seed Beyond Memory” closes the Cherry Orchard Suite with a quiet promise of rebirth beneath loss. In its soft echo—roots unraveling, laughter on the breeze, seeds stirring—what endures beyond the felling?
What moments stayed with you, and what new hope did you find in this epilogue? Share your thoughts below. 🌸
July 30th, 2025 00:46
right here, right now
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, arqios. Still thinking about it.
July 29th, 2025 07:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, arqios. Still thinking about it.
July 29th, 2025 07:03
right here, right now
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is soft but certain...like a hand held out in the rain. The repetition of “right” becomes something deeper here—not about precision, but presence. That final line lands quiet and true. A love poem disguised as a compass. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 29th, 2025 06:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is soft but certain...like a hand held out in the rain. The repetition of “right” becomes something deeper here—not about precision, but presence. That final line lands quiet and true. A love poem disguised as a compass. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 29th, 2025 06:21
right here, right now
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely written creative write, which I have enjoyed right here right now.
July 29th, 2025 05:32
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely written creative write, which I have enjoyed right here right now.
July 29th, 2025 05:32
right here, right now
arqios said:
Thanks for the Faves dears, @Cheeky Missy and @sorenbarrett
July 29th, 2025 04:17
arqios said:
Thanks for the Faves dears, @Cheeky Missy and @sorenbarrett
July 29th, 2025 04:17
right here, right now
arqios said:
2/3 - now this is beginning to look interesting... let\'s see where the day takes us!
July 29th, 2025 04:13
arqios said:
2/3 - now this is beginning to look interesting... let\'s see where the day takes us!
July 29th, 2025 04:13
right here, right now
sorenbarrett said:
This is one of those rare poems that can be read in any order or its lines scrambled and still makes sense in much the same way. It has a lovely care free carpe diem feel to it and gets a fave for its creativity.
July 29th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This is one of those rare poems that can be read in any order or its lines scrambled and still makes sense in much the same way. It has a lovely care free carpe diem feel to it and gets a fave for its creativity.
July 29th, 2025 04:11
right here, right now
arqios said:
I’m excited to share “right here, right now,” a poem about seizing the moment,
chasing sparks of connection, and discovering home in simple steps.
No spoilers—just lean in, let the imagery of umbrellas, fireflies, and spinning compasses guide you.
What line speaks to you most? Where do you find your “right here, right now”?
I’d love to hear your thoughts and experiences. 🕊️👍📝📲
July 29th, 2025 02:55
arqios said:
I’m excited to share “right here, right now,” a poem about seizing the moment,
chasing sparks of connection, and discovering home in simple steps.
No spoilers—just lean in, let the imagery of umbrellas, fireflies, and spinning compasses guide you.
What line speaks to you most? Where do you find your “right here, right now”?
I’d love to hear your thoughts and experiences. 🕊️👍📝📲
July 29th, 2025 02:55
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
NafisaSB said:
Hope this continues for all time. A very cheerful and positive poem
July 29th, 2025 01:54
NafisaSB said:
Hope this continues for all time. A very cheerful and positive poem
July 29th, 2025 01:54
riptide fantasia
NafisaSB said:
so well expressed that one can almost visualize the dance , the music and the feelings generrated
well done!!
July 29th, 2025 00:41
NafisaSB said:
so well expressed that one can almost visualize the dance , the music and the feelings generrated
well done!!
July 29th, 2025 00:41
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, intriguing, and rather chilling. The tree thus personified is an interesting commentator on his circumstances. Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 15:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, intriguing, and rather chilling. The tree thus personified is an interesting commentator on his circumstances. Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 15:43
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this holds the weight of centuries in just a handful of lines. It feels like the earth speaking…rooted in grief, but loyal to memory. That final couplet is both quiet and devastating. You’re carving something timeless in this suite, I mean that. I, for one, have not tired of this and do look forward to part 7...and the epilogue! 😊 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my friend.
July 28th, 2025 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this holds the weight of centuries in just a handful of lines. It feels like the earth speaking…rooted in grief, but loyal to memory. That final couplet is both quiet and devastating. You’re carving something timeless in this suite, I mean that. I, for one, have not tired of this and do look forward to part 7...and the epilogue! 😊 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my friend.
July 28th, 2025 08:54
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
arqios said:
We may be looking at a moving of dates for the Epilogue of the cherry orchard suite. It kinda feels like a Broadway flop in some ways. But then again, you can\'t win it all and we can\'t really please everyone all at once. Let\'s keep on keeping on.🕊️🙏🏻
July 28th, 2025 06:23
arqios said:
We may be looking at a moving of dates for the Epilogue of the cherry orchard suite. It kinda feels like a Broadway flop in some ways. But then again, you can\'t win it all and we can\'t really please everyone all at once. Let\'s keep on keeping on.🕊️🙏🏻
July 28th, 2025 06:23
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
Poetic Licence said:
This has quite a sad and haunting feel to it, standing guard over what was home, knowing that soon he will be gone as well. Nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 05:53
Poetic Licence said:
This has quite a sad and haunting feel to it, standing guard over what was home, knowing that soon he will be gone as well. Nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 05:53
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a very haunting quality to it. It has a sense of finality as well, it is as vague as the fog and speaks with a sense of being ancient and entitlement to the land itself. It feels final and being the last of a type. Very nice Cryptic
July 28th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a very haunting quality to it. It has a sense of finality as well, it is as vague as the fog and speaks with a sense of being ancient and entitlement to the land itself. It feels final and being the last of a type. Very nice Cryptic
July 28th, 2025 04:20
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
arqios said:
It may not fare well but there is no resolve but to go through and complete what has been commenced...
July 28th, 2025 04:19
arqios said:
It may not fare well but there is no resolve but to go through and complete what has been commenced...
July 28th, 2025 04:19
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
arqios said:
Quite sure many will be happy this is over and done with. I may or may not put up the epilogue poem but 7/7 is in sight and will end the series
July 28th, 2025 02:30
arqios said:
Quite sure many will be happy this is over and done with. I may or may not put up the epilogue poem but 7/7 is in sight and will end the series
July 28th, 2025 02:30
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
Friendship said:
nicely said.I love Sunday, it\'s my day to vent all day to God, I the to catch him up on all I do,🙌❤️🙌
July 27th, 2025 15:29
Friendship said:
nicely said.I love Sunday, it\'s my day to vent all day to God, I the to catch him up on all I do,🙌❤️🙌
July 27th, 2025 15:29
choirside
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
Hailing the morn\'s choristers, muses of the bards as one meanders through each noble verse of this most resplendent poem, blessed in gratefulness and love of the morning\'s quietude. One of those rare poems that should not be read aloud - but whispered.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 11:48
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
Hailing the morn\'s choristers, muses of the bards as one meanders through each noble verse of this most resplendent poem, blessed in gratefulness and love of the morning\'s quietude. One of those rare poems that should not be read aloud - but whispered.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 11:48
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Why, Happy Sunday, my friend. What a playful and vivid burst. This reads like resistance wrapped in joy...sunlight pressed through headlines, laughter over static. The who piece has perfect pitch, imho. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2025 07:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Why, Happy Sunday, my friend. What a playful and vivid burst. This reads like resistance wrapped in joy...sunlight pressed through headlines, laughter over static. The who piece has perfect pitch, imho. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2025 07:59
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