Comments received on poems by arqios
a morning like this
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, arqios. I enjoyed the read.
April 18th, 2026 15:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, arqios. I enjoyed the read.
April 18th, 2026 15:27
a morning like this
Katie B. said:
Treasures found in what a day brings. Tell me more, is there a deeper meaning behind the obvious.
April 18th, 2026 05:15
Katie B. said:
Treasures found in what a day brings. Tell me more, is there a deeper meaning behind the obvious.
April 18th, 2026 05:15
a morning like this
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of a person I knew that would gather bits and pieces that they formed into artwork. It also is a metaphor for me of those things we gather along the day that becomes our psychological, metaphysical, formation of each day. Lovely Cryptic
April 18th, 2026 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of a person I knew that would gather bits and pieces that they formed into artwork. It also is a metaphor for me of those things we gather along the day that becomes our psychological, metaphysical, formation of each day. Lovely Cryptic
April 18th, 2026 05:12
when you are old
Kevin Hulme said:
\'When you are Old\' is one of my favourite Yeats Poems.
A good Version you did.
April 17th, 2026 18:08
Kevin Hulme said:
\'When you are Old\' is one of my favourite Yeats Poems.
A good Version you did.
April 17th, 2026 18:08
when you are old
Doggerel Dave said:
Given the topic, just wot is the idea of making the text so small I needed to utilise CTRL and mouse wheel to read it... Turning that wheel fair exhausted me. Can tell you haven\'t quite reached this state yet... No consideration, the younger generation and so on...
Smooth poetry I could feel.
April 17th, 2026 17:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Given the topic, just wot is the idea of making the text so small I needed to utilise CTRL and mouse wheel to read it... Turning that wheel fair exhausted me. Can tell you haven\'t quite reached this state yet... No consideration, the younger generation and so on...
Smooth poetry I could feel.
April 17th, 2026 17:13
when you are old
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dearest friend, there’s a quiet warmth here…a gentle reimagining that honors its roots while still feeling like your own voice. Knowing it’s shaped in response to Yeats adds another layer…like a conversation carried forward rather than repeated. It stays grounded in memory and presence, and that’s what gives it its strength. Beautifully done, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 10:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dearest friend, there’s a quiet warmth here…a gentle reimagining that honors its roots while still feeling like your own voice. Knowing it’s shaped in response to Yeats adds another layer…like a conversation carried forward rather than repeated. It stays grounded in memory and presence, and that’s what gives it its strength. Beautifully done, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 10:57
when you are old
Friendship said:
Nicely done. I must be really old, cause it\'s hard to read. Your typing was so small.😊
April 17th, 2026 07:51
Friendship said:
Nicely done. I must be really old, cause it\'s hard to read. Your typing was so small.😊
April 17th, 2026 07:51
when you are old
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done Cryptic it reads smoothly and kindly. Well done
April 17th, 2026 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done Cryptic it reads smoothly and kindly. Well done
April 17th, 2026 06:04
the other impulse
Goldfinch60 said:
May that impulse lift us into the love of life Rik.
Andy
April 17th, 2026 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May that impulse lift us into the love of life Rik.
Andy
April 17th, 2026 01:16
the other impulse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a clarity here that comes from restraint…letting the idea stand without dressing it up. It moves from limitation into action in a way that feels natural and grounded. It’s brief, but it carries more than it lets on. Powerful write, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a clarity here that comes from restraint…letting the idea stand without dressing it up. It moves from limitation into action in a way that feels natural and grounded. It’s brief, but it carries more than it lets on. Powerful write, arqios. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:24
shower
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it took a lot out of me. This is minimal in the best way…each line doing its part, building to that quiet reset. The movement from separation to contact feels both physical and internal, and it lingers longer than you’d expect from something this short. Powerful write, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it took a lot out of me. This is minimal in the best way…each line doing its part, building to that quiet reset. The movement from separation to contact feels both physical and internal, and it lingers longer than you’d expect from something this short. Powerful write, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:33
the other impulse
sorenbarrett said:
I would go with that always let impulse lift. Well said Cryptic
April 16th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
I would go with that always let impulse lift. Well said Cryptic
April 16th, 2026 06:31
shower
Kevin Hulme said:
Reading this on a day when it\'s been Raining all Afternoon.
Nice one.
April 15th, 2026 18:12
Kevin Hulme said:
Reading this on a day when it\'s been Raining all Afternoon.
Nice one.
April 15th, 2026 18:12
before the ink runs dry
RSM0812 said:
One of the best poetic descriptions of the poet i have ever read. It filled my mind with historical reference, modern thought and a bleeding quil.
April 15th, 2026 16:43
RSM0812 said:
One of the best poetic descriptions of the poet i have ever read. It filled my mind with historical reference, modern thought and a bleeding quil.
April 15th, 2026 16:43
before the ink runs dry
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, as someone who is not that in touch with technology willingly, i can see the nostalgia within these words. Reminds of when i first starting writing and the ink pots on my school desk, Pleasure to read.
April 15th, 2026 13:36
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, as someone who is not that in touch with technology willingly, i can see the nostalgia within these words. Reminds of when i first starting writing and the ink pots on my school desk, Pleasure to read.
April 15th, 2026 13:36
shower
sorenbarrett said:
It is the removal of the raincoat that is the most difficult for me Cryptic. Once it is off the touching of the water is no problem and oh the cleansing of the soul is most delicious. I love my bath and daily shower. Lovely short my friend
April 15th, 2026 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
It is the removal of the raincoat that is the most difficult for me Cryptic. Once it is off the touching of the water is no problem and oh the cleansing of the soul is most delicious. I love my bath and daily shower. Lovely short my friend
April 15th, 2026 05:39
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