Comments received on poems by arqios
but a flesh wound
Poetic Licence said:
Now that\'s a bit different and to me certainly a mind bender, one for me to work on, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
Now that\'s a bit different and to me certainly a mind bender, one for me to work on, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 02:27
but a flesh wound
Goldfinch60 said:
Can I have the main course now please arqios.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Can I have the main course now please arqios.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:58
pot plants
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios we all learn new things going through life.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios we all learn new things going through life.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:46
pot plants
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtle depth in these disarmingly light yet eloquent stanzas, the conclusion too perfect thereby. Charming. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 14:52
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtle depth in these disarmingly light yet eloquent stanzas, the conclusion too perfect thereby. Charming. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 14:52
pot plants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The mind is a long-twisted path...and when one wanders...beware crushing the potted flowers indeed. Well done on this, my friend. And excellent metaphor! 🌹👏
April 16th, 2025 07:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The mind is a long-twisted path...and when one wanders...beware crushing the potted flowers indeed. Well done on this, my friend. And excellent metaphor! 🌹👏
April 16th, 2025 07:24
pot plants
arqios said:
Some get it, some don’t; a few are on a tangent of their own.
April 16th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
Some get it, some don’t; a few are on a tangent of their own.
April 16th, 2025 06:25
pot plants
David Wakeling said:
Yes pot plants can be problematic.they are always drying out in summer.There is always depth in your work.Well done
April 16th, 2025 05:29
David Wakeling said:
Yes pot plants can be problematic.they are always drying out in summer.There is always depth in your work.Well done
April 16th, 2025 05:29
pot plants
sorenbarrett said:
Clever play on words creating expectations that are not met but instead unjustified beliefs become something else. I see this a second level metaphor and message to be careful what you think for it may well be something else. Enjoyed this one
April 16th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever play on words creating expectations that are not met but instead unjustified beliefs become something else. I see this a second level metaphor and message to be careful what you think for it may well be something else. Enjoyed this one
April 16th, 2025 04:40
pot plants
Poetic Licence said:
Be careful where you let your mind wander, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 04:33
Poetic Licence said:
Be careful where you let your mind wander, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 04:33
midnight courage
NafisaSB said:
definitely worth picking on - yes the muse does strike me sometimes at midnight, or sometimes after reading a good forward.
thanks for the inspiration
April 16th, 2025 02:49
NafisaSB said:
definitely worth picking on - yes the muse does strike me sometimes at midnight, or sometimes after reading a good forward.
thanks for the inspiration
April 16th, 2025 02:49
letting go: Anton Ego
Goldfinch60 said:
Food critics can ruin dishes if they are well known but your words were fine arqios.
Andy
April 16th, 2025 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Food critics can ruin dishes if they are well known but your words were fine arqios.
Andy
April 16th, 2025 02:21
letting go: Anton Ego
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Chef\'s kiss! Wonderful narrative poem, one that I could taste, that had a great message! Well done on this! 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Chef\'s kiss! Wonderful narrative poem, one that I could taste, that had a great message! Well done on this! 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 07:48
letting go: Anton Ego
MDStone said:
I was drawn in, I could feel the tension in the air. I could smell, the aroma wafting in the air. I long to taste the dish. To recognize the simplicity and beauty, that is often right before us. Thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 07:13
MDStone said:
I was drawn in, I could feel the tension in the air. I could smell, the aroma wafting in the air. I long to taste the dish. To recognize the simplicity and beauty, that is often right before us. Thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 07:13
letting go: Anton Ego
arqios said:
A film reference no less but for the younger crown and those disposed to animation.
April 15th, 2025 05:56
arqios said:
A film reference no less but for the younger crown and those disposed to animation.
April 15th, 2025 05:56
letting go: Anton Ego
David Wakeling said:
I had flash backs to Master chief\' I find it difficult for someone to judge anothers food.Certainly a well written detailled piece.Excellent work
April 15th, 2025 05:39
David Wakeling said:
I had flash backs to Master chief\' I find it difficult for someone to judge anothers food.Certainly a well written detailled piece.Excellent work
April 15th, 2025 05:39
letting go: Anton Ego
Poetic Licence said:
That reminds me of one of the most brutal forms of journalism, if you can call it that,a food critic, and in he got the result that in his heart he didnt want, it tasted really good, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:32
Poetic Licence said:
That reminds me of one of the most brutal forms of journalism, if you can call it that,a food critic, and in he got the result that in his heart he didnt want, it tasted really good, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:32
letting go: Anton Ego
sorenbarrett said:
What a great story with a moral. The line is so true (elegance does thrive in imperfection) The use of building tension to increase the power of the statement was very well done. Well imaged and structured it is a lovely poem and story
April 15th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
What a great story with a moral. The line is so true (elegance does thrive in imperfection) The use of building tension to increase the power of the statement was very well done. Well imaged and structured it is a lovely poem and story
April 15th, 2025 03:46
midnight courage
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things come into my mind in the wee small hours arqios.
Andy
April 15th, 2025 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things come into my mind in the wee small hours arqios.
Andy
April 15th, 2025 01:49
midnight courage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is often where I exist, my friend. That liminal space between life an death, reality and surreality, where the muse calls on those courageous enough to stay awake past delirium into the magical moments of the crisp, creative, conscious night. Well done on this! Well done! You\'ve described my home! 🖤🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 07:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is often where I exist, my friend. That liminal space between life an death, reality and surreality, where the muse calls on those courageous enough to stay awake past delirium into the magical moments of the crisp, creative, conscious night. Well done on this! Well done! You\'ve described my home! 🖤🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 07:32
midnight courage
David Wakeling said:
The midnight hour. It certainly is a creative time.The poem highlights the creative power of that time of night.Excellent poem.Enjoyed reading
April 14th, 2025 05:43
David Wakeling said:
The midnight hour. It certainly is a creative time.The poem highlights the creative power of that time of night.Excellent poem.Enjoyed reading
April 14th, 2025 05:43
midnight courage
Poetic Licence said:
I do most of writing over the night when the world appears at peace and sometimes accompanied by a libation or two to free the mind, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 04:16
Poetic Licence said:
I do most of writing over the night when the world appears at peace and sometimes accompanied by a libation or two to free the mind, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 04:16
midnight courage
sorenbarrett said:
Ah I know those hours well my friend. So poetically stated in these few lines. Hours where one can write without guilt or being disturbed. Hours stolen from sleep and dreams to put them on paper for others to share. Your word choice is exquisite.
April 14th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Ah I know those hours well my friend. So poetically stated in these few lines. Hours where one can write without guilt or being disturbed. Hours stolen from sleep and dreams to put them on paper for others to share. Your word choice is exquisite.
April 14th, 2025 04:14
midnight courage
orchidee said:
Re your comment: I doubt I will pick up on the thought of much cryptic stuff! lol. Good write A.
April 14th, 2025 03:01
orchidee said:
Re your comment: I doubt I will pick up on the thought of much cryptic stuff! lol. Good write A.
April 14th, 2025 03:01
song to the stars
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios bring joy to all.
Andy
April 14th, 2025 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios bring joy to all.
Andy
April 14th, 2025 01:52
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