Comments received on poems by arqios
awakening (haiku cluster)
sorenbarrett said:
Like a winter storm, each poem of flake falls, and accumulates until by the end, the ground is covered in white and a new beauty is painted. A wonderful cluster of haiku
November 21st, 2024 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Like a winter storm, each poem of flake falls, and accumulates until by the end, the ground is covered in white and a new beauty is painted. A wonderful cluster of haiku
November 21st, 2024 06:41
Where do dreams flow?
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write and acclamation arqios.
Andy
November 21st, 2024 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write and acclamation arqios.
Andy
November 21st, 2024 02:08
Where do dreams flow?
Neville said:
This is excellent reads like an abridged version of Percival\'s Narrative .. Neville 😎👍👍
November 20th, 2024 08:32
Neville said:
This is excellent reads like an abridged version of Percival\'s Narrative .. Neville 😎👍👍
November 20th, 2024 08:32
Where do dreams flow?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful job friend. A fitting poetic tribute and raising awareness at the same time. Bravo! 🌹👏🖤
November 20th, 2024 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful job friend. A fitting poetic tribute and raising awareness at the same time. Bravo! 🌹👏🖤
November 20th, 2024 07:48
Where do dreams flow?
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a master piece. The cadence and rhyme are impeccable. There is an obvious sadness in Thomas Chatterton\'s life but this poem is a magnificent tribute to a poet who died at 17. Well done
November 20th, 2024 06:00
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a master piece. The cadence and rhyme are impeccable. There is an obvious sadness in Thomas Chatterton\'s life but this poem is a magnificent tribute to a poet who died at 17. Well done
November 20th, 2024 06:00
Where do dreams flow?
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a poet warning about mental health issues. Very nicely captured in this biography, a poetic form.
November 20th, 2024 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a poet warning about mental health issues. Very nicely captured in this biography, a poetic form.
November 20th, 2024 05:39
Archeology of Understanding
Goldfinch60 said:
Grief has many sages as it did for me when my wife died five years ago, but it does move on arqios and I am a great believer in that when we lose somebody we love we must learn not to live without them but to live with the love they left behind.
Andy
November 20th, 2024 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Grief has many sages as it did for me when my wife died five years ago, but it does move on arqios and I am a great believer in that when we lose somebody we love we must learn not to live without them but to live with the love they left behind.
Andy
November 20th, 2024 02:11
Archeology of Understanding
Dan Williams said:
Graceful, sincere. \"Only time will reveal if we will find clarity or remain lost.\" ever so true. Well done.
November 20th, 2024 01:58
Dan Williams said:
Graceful, sincere. \"Only time will reveal if we will find clarity or remain lost.\" ever so true. Well done.
November 20th, 2024 01:58
Archeology of Understanding
Cassie58 said:
No one can teach you how to grieve. It is a personal journey from the start. There is no ending. Only acceptance and learning to live with it. It is like the ocean, some days calm and on others it will consume you whole. There is much depth in your lines and this piece has left its mark on me.
November 19th, 2024 19:13
Cassie58 said:
No one can teach you how to grieve. It is a personal journey from the start. There is no ending. Only acceptance and learning to live with it. It is like the ocean, some days calm and on others it will consume you whole. There is much depth in your lines and this piece has left its mark on me.
November 19th, 2024 19:13
Archeology of Understanding
Thomas W Case said:
You nailed it. Powerful work.
November 19th, 2024 19:08
Thomas W Case said:
You nailed it. Powerful work.
November 19th, 2024 19:08
Archeology of Understanding
Doggerel Dave said:
There are no time limits to those unexpected moments you mention in your comments, Rik.
November 19th, 2024 18:53
Doggerel Dave said:
There are no time limits to those unexpected moments you mention in your comments, Rik.
November 19th, 2024 18:53
Archeology of Understanding
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep friend! There is no time limit to grief and we all, whether we want to or not, end up going through it uniquely. Thank you for sharing! 🙏
November 19th, 2024 14:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep friend! There is no time limit to grief and we all, whether we want to or not, end up going through it uniquely. Thank you for sharing! 🙏
November 19th, 2024 14:14
a true marriage of minds
Cassie58 said:
I enjoyed your lines here. Poets are a breed unto themselves, no one understands a poet like another poet. Your fourth stanza stood out for me in particular. Great piece.
November 19th, 2024 10:33
Cassie58 said:
I enjoyed your lines here. Poets are a breed unto themselves, no one understands a poet like another poet. Your fourth stanza stood out for me in particular. Great piece.
November 19th, 2024 10:33
Archeology of Understanding
Neville said:
You are absolutely right .. grief is a very personal experience & unique to any given individual it is also one which no one wishes to experience .. ever but one does .. I encounter much of it in my profession yet am a vary poor griever .. I am impressed with the words you shared here today .. & truly ..
November 19th, 2024 04:49
Neville said:
You are absolutely right .. grief is a very personal experience & unique to any given individual it is also one which no one wishes to experience .. ever but one does .. I encounter much of it in my profession yet am a vary poor griever .. I am impressed with the words you shared here today .. & truly ..
November 19th, 2024 04:49
Archeology of Understanding
sorenbarrett said:
Very deep thoughts and emotions emerge from this poem, many reflections and a questioning of purpose and value. This reaches to the bottom of the soul and looks to the stars.
November 19th, 2024 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Very deep thoughts and emotions emerge from this poem, many reflections and a questioning of purpose and value. This reaches to the bottom of the soul and looks to the stars.
November 19th, 2024 04:18
a true marriage of minds
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Arqios, those words will never stop coming from us.
Andy
November 19th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Arqios, those words will never stop coming from us.
Andy
November 19th, 2024 02:19
a true marriage of minds
Dan Williams said:
\"In words exchanged, new dreams take flight\" hopeful and light, \"Minds and spirits face to face\" sums it up nicely. Well said.
November 19th, 2024 01:23
Dan Williams said:
\"In words exchanged, new dreams take flight\" hopeful and light, \"Minds and spirits face to face\" sums it up nicely. Well said.
November 19th, 2024 01:23
a true marriage of minds
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Powerful and poignant.
November 18th, 2024 16:13
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Powerful and poignant.
November 18th, 2024 16:13
a true marriage of minds
Neville said:
Let me not to the marriage of true minds etc etc .. the way you have approached this exercise is really cool .. hardly bardly but I reckon you just done good ..🐧👍
November 18th, 2024 08:35
Neville said:
Let me not to the marriage of true minds etc etc .. the way you have approached this exercise is really cool .. hardly bardly but I reckon you just done good ..🐧👍
November 18th, 2024 08:35
a true marriage of minds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The marriage of minds and hearts through poetic craft. Indeed, I feel this as i read, write, post and interact. Wonderfully expressed!
November 18th, 2024 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The marriage of minds and hearts through poetic craft. Indeed, I feel this as i read, write, post and interact. Wonderfully expressed!
November 18th, 2024 08:17
a true marriage of minds
sorenbarrett said:
Unification consciousness head and heart As well as all else. I like the theme of this poem and where it is headed nicely done
November 18th, 2024 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
Unification consciousness head and heart As well as all else. I like the theme of this poem and where it is headed nicely done
November 18th, 2024 07:41
Pirates’ Cove
Goldfinch60 said:
May that friendship never cease arqios.
Andy
November 18th, 2024 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
May that friendship never cease arqios.
Andy
November 18th, 2024 02:20
Pirates’ Cove
Dan Williams said:
AAARRR Mate, me and the parrot sailing for Nassau.
November 18th, 2024 01:08
Dan Williams said:
AAARRR Mate, me and the parrot sailing for Nassau.
November 18th, 2024 01:08
Pirates’ Cove
NafisaSB said:
lovely flashback. reminds me of the stories we had read as kids
good write indeed
November 18th, 2024 00:44
NafisaSB said:
lovely flashback. reminds me of the stories we had read as kids
good write indeed
November 18th, 2024 00:44
Pirates’ Cove
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yo ho yo ho, a Pirate\'s life...er...argh! A mighty fine poem der, matee! 🏴☠️
November 17th, 2024 17:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yo ho yo ho, a Pirate\'s life...er...argh! A mighty fine poem der, matee! 🏴☠️
November 17th, 2024 17:03
Pirates’ Cove
Cassie58 said:
You just reminded me of my own little pirate, with his eye patch and cutlass, afloat in a plastic boat after heavy rainfall. Many years ago but this garden memory is priceless. Your poem generated that memory. Thank you.
November 17th, 2024 07:24
Cassie58 said:
You just reminded me of my own little pirate, with his eye patch and cutlass, afloat in a plastic boat after heavy rainfall. Many years ago but this garden memory is priceless. Your poem generated that memory. Thank you.
November 17th, 2024 07:24
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