Comments received on poems by arqios
frozen clock
isa kemmy said:
Est ist sehr schön ,wie sie uber die zeit gesagt haben
July 16th, 2026 09:23
isa kemmy said:
Est ist sehr schön ,wie sie uber die zeit gesagt haben
July 16th, 2026 09:23
frozen clock
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we all feel like that from time to time🤕
But a Stopped Clock is correct Twice in a day.
A fine discriptive write. Enjoyed.
July 16th, 2026 09:05
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we all feel like that from time to time🤕
But a Stopped Clock is correct Twice in a day.
A fine discriptive write. Enjoyed.
July 16th, 2026 09:05
frozen clock
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really hit me hard. The atmosphere is wonderfully oppressive...everything feels suspended between endurance and decay. You painted that world beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really hit me hard. The atmosphere is wonderfully oppressive...everything feels suspended between endurance and decay. You painted that world beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:23
frozen clock
sorenbarrett said:
You are a day ahead of me my friend as I am writing tomorrow\'s poem on time as well. This one my friend is well imaged. Rot and encrustation evidence of time itself. The blind and unblinking face shows time\'s indifference. The second verse a couplet speaks to time itself has no divisions, it is man that divides it into measurable units. The third stanza speaks of the slow accumulation of time in dust and its sagging under its own weight. A fave
July 16th, 2026 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
You are a day ahead of me my friend as I am writing tomorrow\'s poem on time as well. This one my friend is well imaged. Rot and encrustation evidence of time itself. The blind and unblinking face shows time\'s indifference. The second verse a couplet speaks to time itself has no divisions, it is man that divides it into measurable units. The third stanza speaks of the slow accumulation of time in dust and its sagging under its own weight. A fave
July 16th, 2026 05:49
frozen clock
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most descriptive write my friend
July 16th, 2026 05:23
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most descriptive write my friend
July 16th, 2026 05:23
only from you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, \"like a signal meant only for you\" really stayed with me. It gives the whole poem an intimate feeling, as though the world still has moments of quiet wonder waiting for us. Beautifully done, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, \"like a signal meant only for you\" really stayed with me. It gives the whole poem an intimate feeling, as though the world still has moments of quiet wonder waiting for us. Beautifully done, Rik. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:41
voices we allow/disallow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really struck me. We all have those voices competing for space in our heads, and I love the reminder that we still have a say in which ones get to stay. Wonderfully thoughtful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really struck me. We all have those voices competing for space in our heads, and I love the reminder that we still have a say in which ones get to stay. Wonderfully thoughtful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:36
voices we allow/disallow
Kevin Hulme said:
As soon as you put the TV on there\'s people trying to influence you. As well as those Signs in Supermarkets telling you how much you are saving Shopping here. And the Prices keep going up. All Phycological Stuff.
Good Write.
July 15th, 2026 19:19
Kevin Hulme said:
As soon as you put the TV on there\'s people trying to influence you. As well as those Signs in Supermarkets telling you how much you are saving Shopping here. And the Prices keep going up. All Phycological Stuff.
Good Write.
July 15th, 2026 19:19
voices we allow/disallow
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores the tension between allowing certain influences into our minds while guarding against those that might disrupt our peace or distort our identity.
July 15th, 2026 13:28
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores the tension between allowing certain influences into our minds while guarding against those that might disrupt our peace or distort our identity.
July 15th, 2026 13:28
voices we allow/disallow
sorenbarrett said:
This is nicely written with internal rhyme that carries a rocking meter giving a feel of surety to this piece. There are some great buildups and lines in this short piece \"For some will tread inside our head with heavy, muddy shoes\" What a great image this is. Loved it my friend
July 15th, 2026 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
This is nicely written with internal rhyme that carries a rocking meter giving a feel of surety to this piece. There are some great buildups and lines in this short piece \"For some will tread inside our head with heavy, muddy shoes\" What a great image this is. Loved it my friend
July 15th, 2026 05:42
voices we allow/disallow
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
most pleasant read my friend
July 15th, 2026 05:29
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
most pleasant read my friend
July 15th, 2026 05:29
only from you
orchidee said:
Good write A. I could do short poems too, I suppose. One said: \'\'Give up the desire to ever be complicated / long / involved / difficult / etc\'. lol.
July 14th, 2026 10:53
orchidee said:
Good write A. I could do short poems too, I suppose. One said: \'\'Give up the desire to ever be complicated / long / involved / difficult / etc\'. lol.
July 14th, 2026 10:53
only from you
isa kemmy said:
it so beautiful, hope someone will tell me this words one day
July 14th, 2026 06:45
isa kemmy said:
it so beautiful, hope someone will tell me this words one day
July 14th, 2026 06:45
only from you
sorenbarrett said:
Communication pure and different than words. Nicely done my friend
July 14th, 2026 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Communication pure and different than words. Nicely done my friend
July 14th, 2026 05:52
only from you
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully understated. It captures the feeling of hearing a small sound that somehow feels deeply personal, as if nature has singled you out for a quiet moment of connection.
July 14th, 2026 05:48
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully understated. It captures the feeling of hearing a small sound that somehow feels deeply personal, as if nature has singled you out for a quiet moment of connection.
July 14th, 2026 05:48
platform lights
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I love the restraint in this piece. The metaphor of the platform as a liminal space carries the whole poem, while the mingling of scents and the waiting train quietly reinforce that sense of living between worlds. The ending couldn\'t be more fitting. A wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I love the restraint in this piece. The metaphor of the platform as a liminal space carries the whole poem, while the mingling of scents and the waiting train quietly reinforce that sense of living between worlds. The ending couldn\'t be more fitting. A wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:49
platform lights
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, I love the restraint in this piece. The metaphor of the platform as a liminal space carries the whole poem, while the mingling of scents and the waiting train quietly reinforce that sense of living between worlds. The ending couldn\'t be more fitting. A wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, I love the restraint in this piece. The metaphor of the platform as a liminal space carries the whole poem, while the mingling of scents and the waiting train quietly reinforce that sense of living between worlds. The ending couldn\'t be more fitting. A wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:49
platform lights
Kevin Hulme said:
This Person could going on a Journey, Or just arriving. Ambiguous is the Word for this.
July 13th, 2026 08:06
Kevin Hulme said:
This Person could going on a Journey, Or just arriving. Ambiguous is the Word for this.
July 13th, 2026 08:06
platform lights
sorenbarrett said:
This one conveyed to me that space between where one is neither home or anywhere else. On the way not arrived. Nicely written my friend
July 13th, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
This one conveyed to me that space between where one is neither home or anywhere else. On the way not arrived. Nicely written my friend
July 13th, 2026 06:57
platform lights
Mutley Ravishes said:
I`ve just enjoyed something I don`t \"understand.\" Love it!
July 13th, 2026 06:02
Mutley Ravishes said:
I`ve just enjoyed something I don`t \"understand.\" Love it!
July 13th, 2026 06:02
shoal about the tunaverse
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Rik and so true.
Andy
July 13th, 2026 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Rik and so true.
Andy
July 13th, 2026 01:16
an older poet\'s advice
arqios said:
Thanks for the Fave @RSM0812, it also has a sequel, the reply of the younger poet.
July 13th, 2026 01:05
arqios said:
Thanks for the Fave @RSM0812, it also has a sequel, the reply of the younger poet.
July 13th, 2026 01:05
shoal about the tunaverse
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure there\'s alot undiscovered in our Oceans as well as in other areas of Nature.
Good Images here.
July 12th, 2026 18:59
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure there\'s alot undiscovered in our Oceans as well as in other areas of Nature.
Good Images here.
July 12th, 2026 18:59
shoal about the tunaverse
orchidee said:
A fine write A. More to be found under the water, than above it.
But unfortunately for me, there\'s LESS to be found inside me head than outside of it. Well, I\'ve only 3 brain cells. lol.
July 12th, 2026 11:19
orchidee said:
A fine write A. More to be found under the water, than above it.
But unfortunately for me, there\'s LESS to be found inside me head than outside of it. Well, I\'ve only 3 brain cells. lol.
July 12th, 2026 11:19
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