Comments received on poems by arqios
summer breeze
sorenbarrett said:
And so is life my dear friend. So poetically said. We like the wind are all part of nature. I loved the calm wistfulness of the poem and the sense of peace that it gives.
April 25th, 2023 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
And so is life my dear friend. So poetically said. We like the wind are all part of nature. I loved the calm wistfulness of the poem and the sense of peace that it gives.
April 25th, 2023 07:19
lift
Bella Shepard said:
How wonderful to see self-worth reflected in the eyes of another, and to embrace that self-worth as part of the whole which makes both stronger. Beautiful three line say it all!
April 21st, 2023 13:10
Bella Shepard said:
How wonderful to see self-worth reflected in the eyes of another, and to embrace that self-worth as part of the whole which makes both stronger. Beautiful three line say it all!
April 21st, 2023 13:10
lift
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic, another great Haiku that brought my memories to the song SOS d\'un terrien en detresse where a person that feels detached from this world wonders what it would be to fly that the world might look more beautiful upside down.
April 21st, 2023 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic, another great Haiku that brought my memories to the song SOS d\'un terrien en detresse where a person that feels detached from this world wonders what it would be to fly that the world might look more beautiful upside down.
April 21st, 2023 08:10
lift
L. B. Mek said:
another great shorty, dear Poet
(reciprocation
as our access, to soaring
self-worth
a half smile, enough
to empower our dreams
for a week...
how thirsty for all-things
sickly, mirage sweet
we all are my friend, still
....onwards, then
to that next breathless
bite, sip or kiss
in existence\'s, peerless
wondrousness)
April 21st, 2023 07:22
L. B. Mek said:
another great shorty, dear Poet
(reciprocation
as our access, to soaring
self-worth
a half smile, enough
to empower our dreams
for a week...
how thirsty for all-things
sickly, mirage sweet
we all are my friend, still
....onwards, then
to that next breathless
bite, sip or kiss
in existence\'s, peerless
wondrousness)
April 21st, 2023 07:22
hearticulate
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear Poet
(we learn to grasp, for
that we can\'t comprehend
before we\'ve learnt to crawl or fall
then, act all depressed as adults
for a loss, we can\'t quantify
while beside us
our treasures, are ignored
devalued
by their very presence, proximity\'s
accessibility
as a new wording of cheap
in our warped
decrepit notion of true, worth...)
April 21st, 2023 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear Poet
(we learn to grasp, for
that we can\'t comprehend
before we\'ve learnt to crawl or fall
then, act all depressed as adults
for a loss, we can\'t quantify
while beside us
our treasures, are ignored
devalued
by their very presence, proximity\'s
accessibility
as a new wording of cheap
in our warped
decrepit notion of true, worth...)
April 21st, 2023 04:42
luminaries
L. B. Mek said:
that choice wording of \'sliver\'
anchors it all, I think
a wonderfully technical, triumph
poem, worth meditating
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 21st, 2023 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
that choice wording of \'sliver\'
anchors it all, I think
a wonderfully technical, triumph
poem, worth meditating
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 21st, 2023 04:36
hearticulate
orchidee said:
Dang it! Spell-checker\'s gone again!
I have to harticulate that it\'s a fine write!
April 19th, 2023 11:37
orchidee said:
Dang it! Spell-checker\'s gone again!
I have to harticulate that it\'s a fine write!
April 19th, 2023 11:37
hearticulate
sorenbarrett said:
They say that walking early is a help to reading and writhing. In this piece I got the message that we sould think about things before we put them to paper. That what we put down between those \"undulating lines\" casts shadows that remain afterward. Such writing should be uplifting to thouse that follow. I truely enjoyed this one.
April 19th, 2023 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
They say that walking early is a help to reading and writhing. In this piece I got the message that we sould think about things before we put them to paper. That what we put down between those \"undulating lines\" casts shadows that remain afterward. Such writing should be uplifting to thouse that follow. I truely enjoyed this one.
April 19th, 2023 08:30
pyrite-technic
Goldfinch60 said:
Once that true love arrives in your life you will recover.
Andy
April 19th, 2023 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Once that true love arrives in your life you will recover.
Andy
April 19th, 2023 01:00
pyrite-technic
Bobby O said:
The risk , the offered kinship w the promise of more must be a goal, setbacks aside, the true measure of true heart is in the vital pursuit of nurtur and attachment. Nice piece
April 18th, 2023 21:19
Bobby O said:
The risk , the offered kinship w the promise of more must be a goal, setbacks aside, the true measure of true heart is in the vital pursuit of nurtur and attachment. Nice piece
April 18th, 2023 21:19
pyrite-technic
Bella Shepard said:
Great title! Lessons learned and hopefully the wiser for? It doesn\'t lessen the pain, and can only hope for better. Wishing you a soothing balm dear friend.
April 18th, 2023 14:32
Bella Shepard said:
Great title! Lessons learned and hopefully the wiser for? It doesn\'t lessen the pain, and can only hope for better. Wishing you a soothing balm dear friend.
April 18th, 2023 14:32
come and get it
Bella Shepard said:
Three lovely lines seem to symbolize the peace and comfort of a simple routine. We have a routine to bring in the bird feeder at 7:00 PM every evening because we have a four legged bandit that likes to strike in the dead of night.
April 17th, 2023 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
Three lovely lines seem to symbolize the peace and comfort of a simple routine. We have a routine to bring in the bird feeder at 7:00 PM every evening because we have a four legged bandit that likes to strike in the dead of night.
April 17th, 2023 16:05
come and get it
Rocky Lagou said:
Haikus are forceful and potent...this proves that very fact
April 17th, 2023 12:40
Rocky Lagou said:
Haikus are forceful and potent...this proves that very fact
April 17th, 2023 12:40
come and get it
sorenbarrett said:
This one rings a bell. I used to bring cows in at night from the pasture and it brings back memories just like echoes.
April 17th, 2023 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
This one rings a bell. I used to bring cows in at night from the pasture and it brings back memories just like echoes.
April 17th, 2023 08:49
bedtime symphony
2781 said:
It\'s tricky to comment on..\"one generation passes away and another generation comes; but the earth abides forever.\" I used to think smart phones were evil.
April 16th, 2023 07:58
2781 said:
It\'s tricky to comment on..\"one generation passes away and another generation comes; but the earth abides forever.\" I used to think smart phones were evil.
April 16th, 2023 07:58
Kernou
sorenbarrett said:
Having been raised for the first two years of my life in a mining town (Now a ghost town) so the lines: \"ghosts of centuries of mining towns and specters of legend\" have a special meaning for me. Although they say that one does not remember befor they aquire language I have vivid visual memories of this mountain mining town that the details were confirked by my parents. In this town in a house next to ours there was a card game where a man was shot to death and the word spectre has meaning. dydh da to you as well.
April 16th, 2023 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Having been raised for the first two years of my life in a mining town (Now a ghost town) so the lines: \"ghosts of centuries of mining towns and specters of legend\" have a special meaning for me. Although they say that one does not remember befor they aquire language I have vivid visual memories of this mountain mining town that the details were confirked by my parents. In this town in a house next to ours there was a card game where a man was shot to death and the word spectre has meaning. dydh da to you as well.
April 16th, 2023 06:09
Kernou
Neville said:
I was raised in gullworthy cottages a mere spit from the banks of the good old Tamar who has featured variously amongst my own little scribbles over a good many years .. Girt lush squire .. I will have to give lady Fay a nudge since I believe she resides thereabouts ... Neville
April 15th, 2023 14:27
Neville said:
I was raised in gullworthy cottages a mere spit from the banks of the good old Tamar who has featured variously amongst my own little scribbles over a good many years .. Girt lush squire .. I will have to give lady Fay a nudge since I believe she resides thereabouts ... Neville
April 15th, 2023 14:27
Kernou
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Bard, did some googling on this one and found the answers to my questions. In doing so I learned something about the Cornish tongue, and it is lovely. I\'m a huge fan of \"Doc Martin\", and scenes of the beautiful Cornish coast. What a delightful piece, thank you!
April 15th, 2023 13:16
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Bard, did some googling on this one and found the answers to my questions. In doing so I learned something about the Cornish tongue, and it is lovely. I\'m a huge fan of \"Doc Martin\", and scenes of the beautiful Cornish coast. What a delightful piece, thank you!
April 15th, 2023 13:16
Kernou
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Doh! I\'m not expanding my Cornish vocabulary! lol.
April 15th, 2023 10:55
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Doh! I\'m not expanding my Cornish vocabulary! lol.
April 15th, 2023 10:55
Kernou
Eugene S. said:
Interesting. I\'m expanding my Cornish vocabulary and my understand of the UK landscape. dydh da
April 15th, 2023 10:27
Eugene S. said:
Interesting. I\'m expanding my Cornish vocabulary and my understand of the UK landscape. dydh da
April 15th, 2023 10:27
life from home
Neville said:
lockdown days off to a T sir ..
funny thing is, I\'ve been thinking a lot about light emitting diodes myself recently ... 🐧
April 15th, 2023 03:43
Neville said:
lockdown days off to a T sir ..
funny thing is, I\'ve been thinking a lot about light emitting diodes myself recently ... 🐧
April 15th, 2023 03:43
life from home
2781 said:
Sounds nifty. We have ducted with a long hose, awkward but the decibels give the neighbours blower some competition.
April 14th, 2023 07:58
2781 said:
Sounds nifty. We have ducted with a long hose, awkward but the decibels give the neighbours blower some competition.
April 14th, 2023 07:58
seasonal diabetes
Neville said:
Great title lost somewhere in translation ...... maybe :)
April 13th, 2023 13:06
Neville said:
Great title lost somewhere in translation ...... maybe :)
April 13th, 2023 13:06
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