Comments received on poems by arqios
w o r d s
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah. Your title and your note speak of the a power words brought together, not just power, but sacred power. That said, they can carry deadly power. This is such a powerful metaphor my friend. The Word (logos) that existed in the beginning, that was the creative force behind everything, that embodied itself in a human being, taught, instructed, was bound, banned, destroyed...but not really...rather resurrected, living in the hearts and minds of countless. This, of course, could be seen through a religious lens, but it need not be either. It is a profound and timely reflection given. πΉπ
April 19th, 2025 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah. Your title and your note speak of the a power words brought together, not just power, but sacred power. That said, they can carry deadly power. This is such a powerful metaphor my friend. The Word (logos) that existed in the beginning, that was the creative force behind everything, that embodied itself in a human being, taught, instructed, was bound, banned, destroyed...but not really...rather resurrected, living in the hearts and minds of countless. This, of course, could be seen through a religious lens, but it need not be either. It is a profound and timely reflection given. πΉπ
April 19th, 2025 08:45
w o r d s
David Wakeling said:
Yes words are powerful things.They can hurt or heal.Wonderful tribute poem.Enjoyable
April 19th, 2025 05:05
David Wakeling said:
Yes words are powerful things.They can hurt or heal.Wonderful tribute poem.Enjoyable
April 19th, 2025 05:05
w o r d s
arqios said:
Hope the video attached brings a ray of light to your day and your body as well. π§ + words = being
April 19th, 2025 04:08
arqios said:
Hope the video attached brings a ray of light to your day and your body as well. π§ + words = being
April 19th, 2025 04:08
w o r d s
sorenbarrett said:
Words, dialogue at times are projectiles and at others calming forces. Understanding, which most all long for, only comes from such. A most lovely write my friend.
April 19th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Words, dialogue at times are projectiles and at others calming forces. Understanding, which most all long for, only comes from such. A most lovely write my friend.
April 19th, 2025 03:44
twilight trek
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hope endures. Amen! Excellent my friend! πΉπ
April 18th, 2025 21:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hope endures. Amen! Excellent my friend! πΉπ
April 18th, 2025 21:35
twilight trek
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtly disarming winsomeness to the seemingly simple stanzas trickling down the blank page like a delicate stream of pure water. Beautiful and charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:47
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtly disarming winsomeness to the seemingly simple stanzas trickling down the blank page like a delicate stream of pure water. Beautiful and charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:47
twilight trek
Mutley Ravishes said:
Those first two lines especially, Arqios. Then, Middle Earth teleportation!
April 18th, 2025 05:24
Mutley Ravishes said:
Those first two lines especially, Arqios. Then, Middle Earth teleportation!
April 18th, 2025 05:24
twilight trek
Poetic Licence said:
The tender footsteps of our journey in life, reminding us there is, hope, softly written with nice imagery, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 04:44
Poetic Licence said:
The tender footsteps of our journey in life, reminding us there is, hope, softly written with nice imagery, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 04:44
twilight trek
sorenbarrett said:
To me this poem represents life\'s journey where the final word is hope. A lovely structure with short two or three word lines like footsteps taking each line onward. The imagery gives texture to the poem enhancing its meaning. The rhyme is an echo of each foot step and is so natural it is hardly noticed. Most lovely.
April 18th, 2025 03:28
sorenbarrett said:
To me this poem represents life\'s journey where the final word is hope. A lovely structure with short two or three word lines like footsteps taking each line onward. The imagery gives texture to the poem enhancing its meaning. The rhyme is an echo of each foot step and is so natural it is hardly noticed. Most lovely.
April 18th, 2025 03:28
twilight trek
David Wakeling said:
I enjoyed this.Hope keeps as going.Excellent
April 18th, 2025 03:04
David Wakeling said:
I enjoyed this.Hope keeps as going.Excellent
April 18th, 2025 03:04
but a flesh wound
orchidee said:
Good write A, but as (normally) as usual, I\'ve not the foggiest of the cryptic meanings. lol.
April 17th, 2025 09:37
orchidee said:
Good write A, but as (normally) as usual, I\'ve not the foggiest of the cryptic meanings. lol.
April 17th, 2025 09:37
but a flesh wound
Kevin Hulme said:
I was at the next Table enjoying my Spam , when suddenly...
Nice one.
April 17th, 2025 09:21
Kevin Hulme said:
I was at the next Table enjoying my Spam , when suddenly...
Nice one.
April 17th, 2025 09:21
but a flesh wound
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well...now that you worked up my appetite again...I am, well, hungry for good 5-star gourmet cuisine. Anyone want to buy? π€£ A most wonderful, alluring, and enticing read. You had me salivating all the way down. πΉπ
April 17th, 2025 08:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well...now that you worked up my appetite again...I am, well, hungry for good 5-star gourmet cuisine. Anyone want to buy? π€£ A most wonderful, alluring, and enticing read. You had me salivating all the way down. πΉπ
April 17th, 2025 08:06
but a flesh wound
David Wakeling said:
An amazing tale of the culinary arts.An enjoyable read chef
April 17th, 2025 05:32
David Wakeling said:
An amazing tale of the culinary arts.An enjoyable read chef
April 17th, 2025 05:32
but a flesh wound
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of Monty Python\'s Meaning of Life. You have painted the scene and the imagery is superb depicting the gluttony present in individuals, corporations, countries a whole race and it\'s result. Quit a picture it is. All we can do is get out of the way
April 17th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of Monty Python\'s Meaning of Life. You have painted the scene and the imagery is superb depicting the gluttony present in individuals, corporations, countries a whole race and it\'s result. Quit a picture it is. All we can do is get out of the way
April 17th, 2025 04:08
but a flesh wound
Poetic Licence said:
Now that\'s a bit different and to me certainly a mind bender, one for me to work on, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
Now that\'s a bit different and to me certainly a mind bender, one for me to work on, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 02:27
but a flesh wound
Goldfinch60 said:
Can I have the main course now please arqios.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Can I have the main course now please arqios.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:58
pot plants
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios we all learn new things going through life.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios we all learn new things going through life.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:46
pot plants
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtle depth in these disarmingly light yet eloquent stanzas, the conclusion too perfect thereby. Charming. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 14:52
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtle depth in these disarmingly light yet eloquent stanzas, the conclusion too perfect thereby. Charming. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 14:52
pot plants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The mind is a long-twisted path...and when one wanders...beware crushing the potted flowers indeed. Well done on this, my friend. And excellent metaphor! πΉπ
April 16th, 2025 07:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The mind is a long-twisted path...and when one wanders...beware crushing the potted flowers indeed. Well done on this, my friend. And excellent metaphor! πΉπ
April 16th, 2025 07:24
pot plants
arqios said:
Some get it, some donβt; a few are on a tangent of their own.
April 16th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
Some get it, some donβt; a few are on a tangent of their own.
April 16th, 2025 06:25
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