Comments received on poems by arqios
“Play It Again, Sam”
Doggerel Dave said:
A fitting tribute to a movie in most of our memories... Oh Ingrid (sigh) - adolescent yearnings....
November 24th, 2024 05:29
Doggerel Dave said:
A fitting tribute to a movie in most of our memories... Oh Ingrid (sigh) - adolescent yearnings....
November 24th, 2024 05:29
ashes from your urn
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully written, sad yet most graceful. 🌹
November 23rd, 2024 17:27
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully written, sad yet most graceful. 🌹
November 23rd, 2024 17:27
ashes from your urn
Neville said:
Jeez this is so real & so raw on my first visit I thought I had caught mumps or something that prevented a decent intake of breath before swallowing .. 10/10 ++ 👍👍
November 23rd, 2024 10:40
Neville said:
Jeez this is so real & so raw on my first visit I thought I had caught mumps or something that prevented a decent intake of breath before swallowing .. 10/10 ++ 👍👍
November 23rd, 2024 10:40
ashes from your urn
2781 said:
Good timing. My wife just returned from the UK, after having her mother cremated. Her ashes are staying on the mantelpiece, for now.
It\'s not worth battling, sometimes.
November 23rd, 2024 08:45
2781 said:
Good timing. My wife just returned from the UK, after having her mother cremated. Her ashes are staying on the mantelpiece, for now.
It\'s not worth battling, sometimes.
November 23rd, 2024 08:45
ashes from your urn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sorry to hear of your loss! A wonderfully somber yet respectful remembrance,, friend! ❤️
November 23rd, 2024 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sorry to hear of your loss! A wonderfully somber yet respectful remembrance,, friend! ❤️
November 23rd, 2024 08:30
ashes from your urn
sorenbarrett said:
Somber and sad poem of loss and missing someone near. Very well written with amazing imagery.
November 23rd, 2024 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
Somber and sad poem of loss and missing someone near. Very well written with amazing imagery.
November 23rd, 2024 07:08
ashes from your urn
Cassie58 said:
Sombre, respectful and raw. I resonate with this poem. Second stanza powerful.
your faceless bard swoons
That tells me everything. The short stanzas suit this piece very well. It was touching and left a lump in my throat.
November 23rd, 2024 06:42
Cassie58 said:
Sombre, respectful and raw. I resonate with this poem. Second stanza powerful.
your faceless bard swoons
That tells me everything. The short stanzas suit this piece very well. It was touching and left a lump in my throat.
November 23rd, 2024 06:42
Pizza Fit for a Queen
Neville said:
I am so sorry for my being so late checking in my friend and not particularly because I feature so prominently here but because yesterday was a day from hell .. Anyway, enough of that .. Pizza is a subject that I truly believe I know something about .. having said that, I have rarely if ever except for one or two places in the UK and one place in the US dared to sample this most delicious comfort food .. Unfortunately, I have been spoilt by my early experiences of pizza in Napoli and once hooked there have more often than not been disappointed by those I have tried elsewhere .. Like I said, there are a couple of exceptions .. Margarita is my most fave example and if I can request a few anchovies spread on top even better .. Now, as far as its origin is concerned, I think you just about covered the lot .. I am also quite partial to a good old Yorkshire pud .. Well penned my friend .. Neville 🍕🍕🍕🍕😊👍
November 23rd, 2024 05:27
Neville said:
I am so sorry for my being so late checking in my friend and not particularly because I feature so prominently here but because yesterday was a day from hell .. Anyway, enough of that .. Pizza is a subject that I truly believe I know something about .. having said that, I have rarely if ever except for one or two places in the UK and one place in the US dared to sample this most delicious comfort food .. Unfortunately, I have been spoilt by my early experiences of pizza in Napoli and once hooked there have more often than not been disappointed by those I have tried elsewhere .. Like I said, there are a couple of exceptions .. Margarita is my most fave example and if I can request a few anchovies spread on top even better .. Now, as far as its origin is concerned, I think you just about covered the lot .. I am also quite partial to a good old Yorkshire pud .. Well penned my friend .. Neville 🍕🍕🍕🍕😊👍
November 23rd, 2024 05:27
Pizza Fit for a Queen
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, now I need to get that pizza. LOL
Andy
November 23rd, 2024 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, now I need to get that pizza. LOL
Andy
November 23rd, 2024 02:44
Pizza Fit for a Queen
Doggerel Dave said:
A great informative piece which enhanced a little my shriveled knowledge of culinary history, presented in straightforward rhyming quatrains……… Nah, didn’t like it at all…. 🙃😜
November 22nd, 2024 22:47
Doggerel Dave said:
A great informative piece which enhanced a little my shriveled knowledge of culinary history, presented in straightforward rhyming quatrains……… Nah, didn’t like it at all…. 🙃😜
November 22nd, 2024 22:47
Pizza Fit for a Queen
David Wakeling said:
What is not to like. A romantic tale of Pizza. That is a magnificent photograph by the way, The poem is a wonderful tribute. Well constructed and clear. Well done
November 22nd, 2024 17:29
David Wakeling said:
What is not to like. A romantic tale of Pizza. That is a magnificent photograph by the way, The poem is a wonderful tribute. Well constructed and clear. Well done
November 22nd, 2024 17:29
awakening (haiku cluster)
Doggerel Dave said:
Beyond that you cannot persuade me to like anything to do with snow, I have to grudgingly admit your haikus formed a rich read, Rik.
November 22nd, 2024 17:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Beyond that you cannot persuade me to like anything to do with snow, I have to grudgingly admit your haikus formed a rich read, Rik.
November 22nd, 2024 17:15
Pizza Fit for a Queen
sorenbarrett said:
I’ve had these pizza many times before and love it as well. A nice story and I loved it.
November 22nd, 2024 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
I’ve had these pizza many times before and love it as well. A nice story and I loved it.
November 22nd, 2024 12:49
Pizza Fit for a Queen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’m waiting for Nev’s take on this too! As for my take:Yum! I want some Pizza Margherita now! 😂 Excellent, informative, and hunger inducing, fun write!
November 22nd, 2024 08:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’m waiting for Nev’s take on this too! As for my take:Yum! I want some Pizza Margherita now! 😂 Excellent, informative, and hunger inducing, fun write!
November 22nd, 2024 08:50
Where do dreams flow?
Dan Williams said:
Ah, this guy. Shone brightly, briefly, fell into an open grave a few days before taking his own life. Is this the definition of tragedy, or what? nice.
November 22nd, 2024 00:15
Dan Williams said:
Ah, this guy. Shone brightly, briefly, fell into an open grave a few days before taking his own life. Is this the definition of tragedy, or what? nice.
November 22nd, 2024 00:15
awakening (haiku cluster)
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Terrific haiku clusters indeed!!
Eye pleasing imagery and
a real treat to read!!💯
Thanks for sharing my friend,!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 21st, 2024 23:30
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Terrific haiku clusters indeed!!
Eye pleasing imagery and
a real treat to read!!💯
Thanks for sharing my friend,!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 21st, 2024 23:30
awakening (haiku cluster)
David Wakeling said:
This is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout. Real poetry. So many delightful phrases here helps to create a wonderful scene,Enjoyable
November 21st, 2024 16:23
David Wakeling said:
This is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout. Real poetry. So many delightful phrases here helps to create a wonderful scene,Enjoyable
November 21st, 2024 16:23
awakening (haiku cluster)
Cassie58 said:
Five haiku which gift the reader with a beautiful winter wonderland. From first flakes to a complete covering of the ground. From day to night. Quite lovely. A cluster of visual delight.
November 21st, 2024 12:45
Cassie58 said:
Five haiku which gift the reader with a beautiful winter wonderland. From first flakes to a complete covering of the ground. From day to night. Quite lovely. A cluster of visual delight.
November 21st, 2024 12:45
awakening (haiku cluster)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write. With SAD, I am really longing for the new light. I want to love winter, but it is so very hard on me. One day at a time, right? LOL! Excellent write. With that said, there is nothing more peaceful and calming that a first snow ❄️ fall. This haiku sequence captures that brilliantly! Bravo friend! ❤️
November 21st, 2024 11:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write. With SAD, I am really longing for the new light. I want to love winter, but it is so very hard on me. One day at a time, right? LOL! Excellent write. With that said, there is nothing more peaceful and calming that a first snow ❄️ fall. This haiku sequence captures that brilliantly! Bravo friend! ❤️
November 21st, 2024 11:44
awakening (haiku cluster)
Neville said:
each one a perfect little literary gem in its own right, but as a cluster shine like some otherworldly orb or heavenly jewel ..
November 21st, 2024 09:14
Neville said:
each one a perfect little literary gem in its own right, but as a cluster shine like some otherworldly orb or heavenly jewel ..
November 21st, 2024 09:14
awakening (haiku cluster)
sorenbarrett said:
Like a winter storm, each poem of flake falls, and accumulates until by the end, the ground is covered in white and a new beauty is painted. A wonderful cluster of haiku
November 21st, 2024 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Like a winter storm, each poem of flake falls, and accumulates until by the end, the ground is covered in white and a new beauty is painted. A wonderful cluster of haiku
November 21st, 2024 06:41
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