Comments received on poems by arqios



Potato Time Travel
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful story Cryptic The reflects connection of people passed and lands nicely done

November 13th, 2024 05:23

not quite forgotten
Goldfinch60 said:

We MUST remember them as they gave their lives for us to live.

Andy

November 13th, 2024 02:19

not quite forgotten
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

November 12th, 2024 12:24

not quite forgotten
Neville said:



So very sadly much enjoyed ..

November 12th, 2024 12:18

not quite forgotten
Cassie58 said:

I love how you have referenced the war poets in this fabulous write as well as Freds. A very fitting tribute to those who
made the ultimate sacrifice for our freedom. A most poignant write. Great work.

November 12th, 2024 10:54

not quite forgotten
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful and well written Crytic it speaks to those fallen in wars now fading into the past.

November 12th, 2024 10:38

not quite forgotten
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful poem honoring those who have sacrificed for all of us, no matter where we are from. Those of us who live free should honor those who keep us living in freedom. Beautiful poem! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤

November 12th, 2024 07:52

Admonitions for a young or emerging poet
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a wonderfully true message arqios.

Andy

November 12th, 2024 03:17

Admonitions for a young or emerging poet
Tony36 said:

Lovw it

November 11th, 2024 15:00

Admonitions for a young or emerging poet
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Love this! Good advice for any writer, poet or otherwise, new or seasoned alike! Bravo! 🖤❤️🖤🌹👏

November 11th, 2024 07:47

Admonitions for a young or emerging poet
Neville said:



what a generous, noble & most relevant form of response .. I hope it will be heeded .. and shall keep a copy for myself ..

November 11th, 2024 07:40

Admonitions for a young or emerging poet
Doggerel Dave said:

Very kind, generous and rich advice, Rik.

As a postscript, do you mind (too late!😜) if I add my own take on this subject?
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-155194

November 11th, 2024 07:39

Admonitions for a young or emerging poet
sorenbarrett said:

Good advice to all poets, young and old, experienced and Novice A wonderful list of things to do and how to act

November 11th, 2024 07:31

Admonitions for a young or emerging poet
2781 said:

And a touch of ambiguity

November 11th, 2024 05:30

my daily dose of humanity
Goldfinch60 said:

Your words touch our heats arqios, may ours touch yours.

Andy

November 11th, 2024 02:29

my daily dose of humanity
Neville said:



Its what makes the world go round .. and wot makes all the effort seem worthwhile ..

November 11th, 2024 02:19

my daily dose of humanity
2781 said:

I may not always understand but always appreciate

November 11th, 2024 01:23

my daily dose of humanity
David Wakeling said:

Gotta love humans. In fact some of my best friends are almost human.Nice poem

November 10th, 2024 18:57

my daily dose of humanity
Doggerel Dave said:

Hear Hear - precisely.👍(to both of you..)

November 10th, 2024 16:17

my daily dose of humanity
sorenbarrett said:

I feel the same way Cryptic Poems are therapy for me, as well as a social release and an exercise for the mind very nicely stated

November 10th, 2024 12:05

A place where you belong
Goldfinch60 said:

That place is there for all of us arqios. Wonderful words.

Andy

November 10th, 2024 02:45

A place where you belong
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 9th, 2024 11:51

A place where you belong
Neville said:



and there woz me all along thinking a sestina was a short nap after lunch .. but I surely bet these aint easy neither ..

November 9th, 2024 10:41

A place where you belong
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Well done on this beautiful poem my friend!

November 9th, 2024 07:32

in vino veritas
Doggerel Dave said:

Pissed again?

(Don\'t look at me in that tone of voice - this turned up on the trailer to another post entirely!)🙃

November 9th, 2024 05:28

The Beauty of a Kiss
Neville said:



very nicely executed ..

November 9th, 2024 04:51

The Beauty of a Kiss
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true arqios.

Andy

November 9th, 2024 02:41

The Beauty of a Kiss
Dan Williams said:

I think I was there once. Thanks for the reminder.

November 9th, 2024 01:14

The Beauty of a Kiss
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Beautiful! Thank you for sharing!

November 8th, 2024 12:11

One Such Day
Caring dove said:

Lovely words

November 8th, 2024 07:16



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