Comments received on poems by arqios
d a n c e
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it my friend...the form and the poem, executed flawlessly. The words practically dance as you read them, whether silently or out loud. Wonderful job. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it my friend...the form and the poem, executed flawlessly. The words practically dance as you read them, whether silently or out loud. Wonderful job. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:14
d a n c e
MDStone said:
Danced my way through the lines. The rhyme giving those sharp deliberate movements every good waltz deserves. Very Nice. Thanks for sharing.
April 10th, 2025 05:31
MDStone said:
Danced my way through the lines. The rhyme giving those sharp deliberate movements every good waltz deserves. Very Nice. Thanks for sharing.
April 10th, 2025 05:31
d a n c e
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.I see Lord of the Dance dancing to this cadence and rhythm.Enjoyable
April 10th, 2025 05:21
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.I see Lord of the Dance dancing to this cadence and rhythm.Enjoyable
April 10th, 2025 05:21
d a n c e
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely done, just need the music now to accompany it
April 10th, 2025 04:03
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely done, just need the music now to accompany it
April 10th, 2025 04:03
d a n c e
sorenbarrett said:
Good job of keeping rhyme to the meaning in such short lines. Very nice Cryptic
April 10th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Good job of keeping rhyme to the meaning in such short lines. Very nice Cryptic
April 10th, 2025 04:01
d a n c e
Cheeky Missy said:
If only we heard the strains whileas your lyrics trip down the page, I daresay we\'d waltz gaily. Fascinating and sweetly rendered with excellent imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Thank you as well for the note on it!
April 10th, 2025 02:17
Cheeky Missy said:
If only we heard the strains whileas your lyrics trip down the page, I daresay we\'d waltz gaily. Fascinating and sweetly rendered with excellent imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Thank you as well for the note on it!
April 10th, 2025 02:17
windswept smiles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. I remember these days myself...and they do bring a smile to my face. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. I remember these days myself...and they do bring a smile to my face. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 08:51
windswept smiles
Friendship said:
lovely done, your poem revolves around summer activities and experiences, such as enjoying fruits, laughter, and leisure time spent with loved ones. It paints a vivid picture of sunny days, playful interactions, and the warmth of human connection.
April 9th, 2025 07:43
Friendship said:
lovely done, your poem revolves around summer activities and experiences, such as enjoying fruits, laughter, and leisure time spent with loved ones. It paints a vivid picture of sunny days, playful interactions, and the warmth of human connection.
April 9th, 2025 07:43
windswept smiles
arqios said:
Here it goes again, season must’ve shifted the cohort
April 9th, 2025 05:13
arqios said:
Here it goes again, season must’ve shifted the cohort
April 9th, 2025 05:13
windswept smiles
Poetic Licence said:
A drive down more youthful days, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:01
Poetic Licence said:
A drive down more youthful days, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:01
windswept smiles
sorenbarrett said:
Full of forgotten images of youth and past days. I was most intrigued with your opening lines
long, top-down drives
even shirtless-tans
sweet strawberry-kisses and
glorious watermelon stains
Here the imagery first line is reinforced in the second, a top down drive (in a convertible) is seen as a top down in shirtless tans. Sweet strawberry kisses is seen in the red watermelon stains of the second line. This is most ingenious and certainly most poetic on another level. My congratulations and a fave
April 9th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Full of forgotten images of youth and past days. I was most intrigued with your opening lines
long, top-down drives
even shirtless-tans
sweet strawberry-kisses and
glorious watermelon stains
Here the imagery first line is reinforced in the second, a top down drive (in a convertible) is seen as a top down in shirtless tans. Sweet strawberry kisses is seen in the red watermelon stains of the second line. This is most ingenious and certainly most poetic on another level. My congratulations and a fave
April 9th, 2025 04:53
Vilvoorde: wash
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words arqios, may that moonlight polish all our lives.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words arqios, may that moonlight polish all our lives.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:14
Vilvoorde: wash
David Wakeling said:
This creates a melancholic mood of a mind nit yet defeated.Enjoyable read
April 8th, 2025 22:14
David Wakeling said:
This creates a melancholic mood of a mind nit yet defeated.Enjoyable read
April 8th, 2025 22:14
Vilvoorde: wash
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write that demands multiple reads and is layered in metaphor. I also love how the shape of the poem resembles, at least to me, sheets hung out in the wind. Brilliantly done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 18:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write that demands multiple reads and is layered in metaphor. I also love how the shape of the poem resembles, at least to me, sheets hung out in the wind. Brilliantly done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 18:23
eye on the road
Cheeky Missy said:
Time and painful facts illustrate repeatedly the work is forever more highly valued than the authors. Man himself is guilty of this in the highest regard, charged with the fault by none other than his maker. However the same proves that the potter is higher than the clay. Gorgeous and beautifully rendered with nigh exquisite imagery, thank you very much for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Time and painful facts illustrate repeatedly the work is forever more highly valued than the authors. Man himself is guilty of this in the highest regard, charged with the fault by none other than his maker. However the same proves that the potter is higher than the clay. Gorgeous and beautifully rendered with nigh exquisite imagery, thank you very much for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:51
Vilvoorde: wash
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing with delicious imagery and a tantalizing poignancy, how shall I look or answer? You leave me standing like a bird on one foot, uncertain whither the mists lead. Thank you for sharing
April 8th, 2025 16:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing with delicious imagery and a tantalizing poignancy, how shall I look or answer? You leave me standing like a bird on one foot, uncertain whither the mists lead. Thank you for sharing
April 8th, 2025 16:48
Vilvoorde: wash
orchidee said:
....Not that I understand all the cryptic phrases - of course, I hardly ever do! lol.
April 8th, 2025 11:02
orchidee said:
....Not that I understand all the cryptic phrases - of course, I hardly ever do! lol.
April 8th, 2025 11:02
Vilvoorde: wash
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This poem grasped my attention straight away. For me the language used was so much attuned coming from deep inner sources. It had the ability to become this kind of voyaging energy that you captured so well. Really liked the subtle word phrases. It felt completed. An inspiring read! I will surely be reading more of your work. Greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 10:29
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This poem grasped my attention straight away. For me the language used was so much attuned coming from deep inner sources. It had the ability to become this kind of voyaging energy that you captured so well. Really liked the subtle word phrases. It felt completed. An inspiring read! I will surely be reading more of your work. Greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 10:29
Vilvoorde: wash
Poetic Licence said:
I have to be honest I have enjoyed reading this but I am still trying to work it, which makes it more fun.
April 8th, 2025 05:55
Poetic Licence said:
I have to be honest I have enjoyed reading this but I am still trying to work it, which makes it more fun.
April 8th, 2025 05:55
Vilvoorde: wash
sorenbarrett said:
With each reading the poem becomes less cryptic. Sheets in the wind billowing under sun images of a wash out to dry and what sheets are these? A wan smile not feeling well. Illness? Thundering pain, storm, metaphor, bring in the wash. A receding stain. And stained from what? Moonlight end of day. Polishes past damage seen as utter defeat. Like bringing in still wet wash due to a storm little gained in the wash. Rambling thoughts. Hope all is well with you. Loved the poem
April 8th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
With each reading the poem becomes less cryptic. Sheets in the wind billowing under sun images of a wash out to dry and what sheets are these? A wan smile not feeling well. Illness? Thundering pain, storm, metaphor, bring in the wash. A receding stain. And stained from what? Moonlight end of day. Polishes past damage seen as utter defeat. Like bringing in still wet wash due to a storm little gained in the wash. Rambling thoughts. Hope all is well with you. Loved the poem
April 8th, 2025 03:58
The Lost Key
NafisaSB said:
wonderful imagination displayed here..thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2025 00:56
NafisaSB said:
wonderful imagination displayed here..thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2025 00:56
eye on the road
John Prophet said:
So true the bard is simply the conduit for the message
April 7th, 2025 20:42
John Prophet said:
So true the bard is simply the conduit for the message
April 7th, 2025 20:42
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