Comments received on poems by arqios
… how to get to there
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed the read but i have to be honest this has beaten me.
February 23rd, 2025 06:34
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed the read but i have to be honest this has beaten me.
February 23rd, 2025 06:34
… how to get to there
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the trap was set and I fell right in. A most joyful trap, that of childhood where lucidity is blind yet sees with great acuity, where there are no metaphors they are all reality. Ah to have that innocence again. A fave
February 23rd, 2025 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the trap was set and I fell right in. A most joyful trap, that of childhood where lucidity is blind yet sees with great acuity, where there are no metaphors they are all reality. Ah to have that innocence again. A fave
February 23rd, 2025 05:08
Melbourne mosaic
Doggerel Dave said:
Demolition of large parts of what was a pristine Victorian city during and around the sixties was a tragedy. Should have been preserved in aspic. Still, seems there may be enough left to please.......
February 22nd, 2025 21:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Demolition of large parts of what was a pristine Victorian city during and around the sixties was a tragedy. Should have been preserved in aspic. Still, seems there may be enough left to please.......
February 22nd, 2025 21:04
Melbourne mosaic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Would love to visit Melbourne and Australia as a whole. Thanks for the mental trip! 🌹👏 Well done, my friend! Cool to see you on Insta too! Yay!
February 22nd, 2025 09:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Would love to visit Melbourne and Australia as a whole. Thanks for the mental trip! 🌹👏 Well done, my friend! Cool to see you on Insta too! Yay!
February 22nd, 2025 09:44
Melbourne mosaic
Mutley Ravishes said:
Hi Melbourne!
Its your old enemy, Sydney
Shut your cakehole
And listen to me
Your coffee\'s crap
And an Opera House
You lack
Anymore of this nonsense
And I\'ll give you a slap!
February 22nd, 2025 05:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
Hi Melbourne!
Its your old enemy, Sydney
Shut your cakehole
And listen to me
Your coffee\'s crap
And an Opera House
You lack
Anymore of this nonsense
And I\'ll give you a slap!
February 22nd, 2025 05:58
Melbourne mosaic
arqios said:
Thankful for the marvellous reception today. I will now attempt to comment on your equally wonderful poems. 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 05:38
arqios said:
Thankful for the marvellous reception today. I will now attempt to comment on your equally wonderful poems. 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 05:38
Melbourne mosaic
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Arqios
Nice Vibrant Rhythms
February 22nd, 2025 05:03
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Arqios
Nice Vibrant Rhythms
February 22nd, 2025 05:03
Melbourne mosaic
David Wakeling said:
Everyone I have spoken to from Melbourne really like the place.From this poem I can see why.Nice tribute
February 22nd, 2025 04:44
David Wakeling said:
Everyone I have spoken to from Melbourne really like the place.From this poem I can see why.Nice tribute
February 22nd, 2025 04:44
Melbourne mosaic
Poetic Licence said:
From the imagery in this piece it\'s clearly a wonderful place to visit, enjoyed the read
February 22nd, 2025 04:21
Poetic Licence said:
From the imagery in this piece it\'s clearly a wonderful place to visit, enjoyed the read
February 22nd, 2025 04:21
Melbourne mosaic
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful view of that city arqios.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 03:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful view of that city arqios.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 03:07
Melbourne mosaic
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of wonderful images woven into a description of a place I have never been but now feel I have and stitched so nicely with the silver thread of river and words holding not only nature and man\'s accomplishments together but transcending space pulling me to a place far away. Loved it.
February 22nd, 2025 03:03
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of wonderful images woven into a description of a place I have never been but now feel I have and stitched so nicely with the silver thread of river and words holding not only nature and man\'s accomplishments together but transcending space pulling me to a place far away. Loved it.
February 22nd, 2025 03:03
beneath the nightingale’s call
Goldfinch60 said:
May that Nightingale forever bring songs to our lives arqios.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
May that Nightingale forever bring songs to our lives arqios.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 02:48
beneath the nightingale’s call
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful extension of the ancient Greek story. I enjoyed reading very much
February 21st, 2025 16:07
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful extension of the ancient Greek story. I enjoyed reading very much
February 21st, 2025 16:07
beneath the nightingale’s call
arqios said:
Looks like it’s back to the drawing board with you Philly🪶
February 21st, 2025 14:02
arqios said:
Looks like it’s back to the drawing board with you Philly🪶
February 21st, 2025 14:02
beneath the nightingale’s call
orchidee said:
Cccoooeee!!! My impression of a nightingale\'s call. Do shut up Orchi, says Fido to me. lol.
February 21st, 2025 11:22
orchidee said:
Cccoooeee!!! My impression of a nightingale\'s call. Do shut up Orchi, says Fido to me. lol.
February 21st, 2025 11:22
beneath the nightingale’s call
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Such a tragic yet juicy tale, Philopela\'s is. A wonderful homage to her, my friend! 🌹👏
February 21st, 2025 11:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Such a tragic yet juicy tale, Philopela\'s is. A wonderful homage to her, my friend! 🌹👏
February 21st, 2025 11:08
beneath the nightingale’s call
Poetic Licence said:
I didn\'t know anything about this subject till I read this write, will look it up later and then truly understand this eloquent read
February 21st, 2025 06:06
Poetic Licence said:
I didn\'t know anything about this subject till I read this write, will look it up later and then truly understand this eloquent read
February 21st, 2025 06:06
beneath the nightingale’s call
sorenbarrett said:
The story of her in Ovid a sad one and ironically it is only the male Nightingale that sings. Here revenge a brutal one serving the son cooked for the man to eat. Quite the tale of lust and revenge nicely portrayed in this poem it rings through the years in the song of the Nightingale. Masterfully done and deserving of a fave
February 21st, 2025 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
The story of her in Ovid a sad one and ironically it is only the male Nightingale that sings. Here revenge a brutal one serving the son cooked for the man to eat. Quite the tale of lust and revenge nicely portrayed in this poem it rings through the years in the song of the Nightingale. Masterfully done and deserving of a fave
February 21st, 2025 05:25
Three dots dancing
David Wakeling said:
This is a well constructed poem.I like the rhyme.Those dots will make you think
February 20th, 2025 15:23
David Wakeling said:
This is a well constructed poem.I like the rhyme.Those dots will make you think
February 20th, 2025 15:23
untitled (bemused rumination)
Cassie58 said:
Very much admire the structure of this poem, but the message is far more important. Kindness counts. Fine writing arqios.
February 20th, 2025 14:02
Cassie58 said:
Very much admire the structure of this poem, but the message is far more important. Kindness counts. Fine writing arqios.
February 20th, 2025 14:02
Three dots dancing
Cassie58 said:
Dancing dots, a lovely way to poem communication off the page and in private. What a unique idea for a poem arqios. Enjoyed the end rhyme to your stanzas.
February 20th, 2025 13:34
Cassie58 said:
Dancing dots, a lovely way to poem communication off the page and in private. What a unique idea for a poem arqios. Enjoyed the end rhyme to your stanzas.
February 20th, 2025 13:34
Three dots dancing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Three dots dancing...they can be a source of hope, dread, or unnoticed completely. In your poem, hope and connection. Eager anticipation for the words the other has to offer to you. A wonderful write, my friend! 🌹👏 Easy fave.
February 20th, 2025 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Three dots dancing...they can be a source of hope, dread, or unnoticed completely. In your poem, hope and connection. Eager anticipation for the words the other has to offer to you. A wonderful write, my friend! 🌹👏 Easy fave.
February 20th, 2025 08:16
Three dots dancing
arqios said:
A much younger set have yet to opine… but that’s the way of things. Perhaps later in the day, they too will have their say.
February 20th, 2025 06:06
arqios said:
A much younger set have yet to opine… but that’s the way of things. Perhaps later in the day, they too will have their say.
February 20th, 2025 06:06
Three dots dancing
Neville said:
there is considerable significance to those there three dots .. and these ones two .. Nice & I aint talking about the National Institute of Clinical Evidence neither ..👍
February 20th, 2025 05:18
Neville said:
there is considerable significance to those there three dots .. and these ones two .. Nice & I aint talking about the National Institute of Clinical Evidence neither ..👍
February 20th, 2025 05:18
Three dots dancing
jim56 said:
love this cleverly written
nice flow and rhyme
and words used express poem so well
brilliant
February 20th, 2025 05:13
jim56 said:
love this cleverly written
nice flow and rhyme
and words used express poem so well
brilliant
February 20th, 2025 05:13
Three dots dancing
Poetic Licence said:
The joining up of the dots in the correct way, which we do not always do, yet have been correctly joined in this poem, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 05:03
Poetic Licence said:
The joining up of the dots in the correct way, which we do not always do, yet have been correctly joined in this poem, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 05:03
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