Comments received on poems by arqios



angel envy
Jerry Reynolds said:

Nicely done, C.

December 6th, 2022 16:20

angel envy
orchidee said:

Angles? typo? in last verse. and - just call me Gabriel! lol.

December 6th, 2022 05:04

eternally connected
Bella Shepard said:

Dear Bard, I thought it was all done via magic. So it\'s technology after all, and me still with paper and pencil. Does the \"m\" stand for mystery? Presumably 10 of them?This was fun, even if I don\'t understand it all.

December 5th, 2022 14:14

eternally connected
Paul Bell said:

Just finishing 5g at my bit. 6 g must be round the corner. Definitely better than it used to be.

December 5th, 2022 12:19

inimitable contrivances
Mr. Not said:

\"Politicians hide themselves away
They only started the war
Why should they go out to fight?
They leave that role to the poor, yeah
Time will tell on their power minds
Making war just for fun
Treating people just like pawns in chess
Wait till their judgement day comes, yeah!\" - black sabbath, \'war pigs\'
fine read crypticbard

December 5th, 2022 08:06

eternally connected
orchidee said:

A fine write CB
There\'s a kerfuffle in a posh area here, of a possible 5G mast to be plonked outside someone\'s home. Doh!
Oh they are ancient, some of them. They don\'t know what a fax machine is, let alone a mobile phone!

December 5th, 2022 07:44

carillon
orchidee said:

That\'s my mate in that clip! lol. Good write CB.

December 4th, 2022 07:58

carillon
Paul Bell said:

This has everything going for it, plus, I used to live on Carillion rd.

December 4th, 2022 06:59

carillon
Neville said:



this most surely has a ring to it ..

December 4th, 2022 06:16

with John and Paul
Neville said:


Yeah yeah yeah yeah .. You can beat an egg & a drum of course, but you just can\'t beat \'The Beatles\' now can ya :)


December 4th, 2022 00:41

with John and Paul
Bella Shepard said:

You have hit the old memory button with this one. Roughly 40 years ago I danced in a recital to Stars on 45 Beatles Medley, and it all came flooding back reading this poem and listening to the music. The knees and hips may have aged, but the joy is still there. Thank you dear friend for this wonderful walk down memory lane, I\'ll be dancing the rest of the day, just hope I don\'t hurt myself.

December 3rd, 2022 14:38

with John and Paul
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

December 3rd, 2022 09:29

crypticbard
Bella Shepard said:

Verse on a shoestring? Short and oh, so very sweet. Love it!

December 2nd, 2022 15:10

crypticbard
orchidee said:

It\'s a fine character writing this, whoever he is. Do I know the guy?! heehee.

December 2nd, 2022 06:17

crypticbard
L. B. Mek said:

lol
\'if i may say so myself...!\' 😎
I envy your skill and hard-earned confidence
such a fun read, thank you!


December 2nd, 2022 05:53

what i\'m not saying
Neville said:


......... you just about said it all

December 1st, 2022 09:53

what i\'m not saying
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

December 1st, 2022 08:43

what i\'m not saying
dusk arising said:

why cant i fit into this lifestyle, i\'m only seventy.

December 1st, 2022 08:12

what i\'m not saying
Doggerel Dave said:

Definitely a luxuriant jungle in cyber- space, Rik. Difficult to negotiate at times, armed only with a keyboard as a machete. A succinct diagnosis there, mate.

December 1st, 2022 06:26

inimitable contrivances
Bella Shepard said:

This truly hits the painful spot of reality. War is the great destroyer, but also the great enhancer in the worst possible way. Very powerfully said dear friend!

November 30th, 2022 11:00

inimitable contrivances
Doggerel Dave said:

hear, hear!

November 30th, 2022 06:17

inimitable contrivances
dusk arising said:

the gods of war would do battle with you for this. For doing battle is all they are good for... and hush, for they lurk in the dark curtains ever seeking new game.

November 30th, 2022 05:30

inimitable contrivances
Fay Slimm. said:

Too true Rik and so succinctly put. This addiction to war will inflict more and more weariness to all life on this beautiful planet.

November 30th, 2022 05:28

inimitable contrivances
Neville said:



... and so, say all of us sir

November 30th, 2022 04:52

inimitable contrivances
orchidee said:

Good write CB. Orchilenge over?

November 30th, 2022 03:21

antipolarity
orchidee said:

And - I\'ve got as far as trying to work out, if a famous hyphen is needed between anti and polarity or not.
It\'s sad, I know, what I belabour myself with sometimes. lol.

November 29th, 2022 05:58

antipolarity
orchidee said:

It\'s an unattainable height for me sometimes to understand some poetry. Don\'t they know I only got three brain cells?
They get tired of trying to understand, and then they go off on holiday. I dunno when they\'ll be back! lol.

November 29th, 2022 05:56

antipolarity
Neville said:



you may well have a point here CB

November 29th, 2022 05:27

baggage claim delay
Doggerel Dave said:

For me Ohio is not the main point of interest, here. The pajamas in the cold and the lost baggage claim...... or is it me who has lost something, Rik?

November 28th, 2022 19:27

baggage claim delay
Bella Shepard said:

I love the way music can help enhance the tone of a poem, and you sure picked a honey, the sweet strains of Chuck Mangione. I\'m swaying, toes tapping as I\'m reading, and loving every minute of this lovely memory shared. Thank you!

November 28th, 2022 12:48



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