Comments received on poems by arqios
A Place
rrodriguez said:
This speaks to the soul, unveiling the beauty of vulnerability. I read and thought about your words. Thank you for sharing... Be blessed!
April 30th, 2025 18:57
rrodriguez said:
This speaks to the soul, unveiling the beauty of vulnerability. I read and thought about your words. Thank you for sharing... Be blessed!
April 30th, 2025 18:57
A Place
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliant, my friend. And you put that \"place\" in the space between the first couplet and the last stanza. Mirrors the content and enhances the metaphor. A fave!
April 30th, 2025 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliant, my friend. And you put that \"place\" in the space between the first couplet and the last stanza. Mirrors the content and enhances the metaphor. A fave!
April 30th, 2025 10:09
A Place
David Wakeling said:
Well this is very thoughtful.We all need a Place.A sanctuary between the harsh world and the sensitive self. This is quite profound.Made me think
April 30th, 2025 04:52
David Wakeling said:
Well this is very thoughtful.We all need a Place.A sanctuary between the harsh world and the sensitive self. This is quite profound.Made me think
April 30th, 2025 04:52
A Place
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic whether in the literal writing or metaphorical pauses in life or action it is those pauses that are most vulnerable. Whether loss of initiative, train of thought, energy, or interruption from outside forces in that brief interlude all can change. Yet wallowing in such looking back one can see what was accomplished and who you are. That is what came to me first read of this poem. It is in the space between that the character resides
April 30th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic whether in the literal writing or metaphorical pauses in life or action it is those pauses that are most vulnerable. Whether loss of initiative, train of thought, energy, or interruption from outside forces in that brief interlude all can change. Yet wallowing in such looking back one can see what was accomplished and who you are. That is what came to me first read of this poem. It is in the space between that the character resides
April 30th, 2025 03:42
A Place
Victor Bolshov said:
I am kneeling to the power of words: worlds created in the depths of your true self, and you let them out like Vishnu breathes out new Universes. Even the word \"Universe\" is like some divine verse of creation.
April 30th, 2025 03:32
Victor Bolshov said:
I am kneeling to the power of words: worlds created in the depths of your true self, and you let them out like Vishnu breathes out new Universes. Even the word \"Universe\" is like some divine verse of creation.
April 30th, 2025 03:32
O Frenzied Light!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very dramatic words arqios, a pleasure to read.
Andy
April 30th, 2025 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very dramatic words arqios, a pleasure to read.
Andy
April 30th, 2025 01:22
hymn of the exiles
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure People can put their own Interpretation on this .
Good One.n
April 29th, 2025 19:20
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure People can put their own Interpretation on this .
Good One.n
April 29th, 2025 19:20
O Frenzied Light!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is another WOW, poem. Love the reference to Dionysus, revelry and suffering...the one often leading to the other even as it often fills the black holes we are escaping. That need not be read into this, but this poem is about two opposing forces, pleasure and pain and so much can be interpreted out of it. Bravo. A must fave! 🌹👏
April 29th, 2025 18:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is another WOW, poem. Love the reference to Dionysus, revelry and suffering...the one often leading to the other even as it often fills the black holes we are escaping. That need not be read into this, but this poem is about two opposing forces, pleasure and pain and so much can be interpreted out of it. Bravo. A must fave! 🌹👏
April 29th, 2025 18:46
O Frenzied Light!
Salvia.S said:
A powerful and vivid poem—full of emotion, movement, and striking imagery. Well written!!!
April 29th, 2025 08:05
Salvia.S said:
A powerful and vivid poem—full of emotion, movement, and striking imagery. Well written!!!
April 29th, 2025 08:05
O Frenzied Light!
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is dramatic.I enjoyed reading so much.I had to look up some of the words but that\'s just me.The poem is very good.
April 29th, 2025 05:19
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is dramatic.I enjoyed reading so much.I had to look up some of the words but that\'s just me.The poem is very good.
April 29th, 2025 05:19
O Frenzied Light!
sorenbarrett said:
So classic in form the opposites reconciled as one merges into the next. I love the paradoxical philosophy of this. A fave
April 29th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
So classic in form the opposites reconciled as one merges into the next. I love the paradoxical philosophy of this. A fave
April 29th, 2025 04:51
roaring tides
rrodriguez said:
Your poem captures the wild beauty of nature perfectly—so powerful and vivid! It reminds me of the ocean waves in Monterey, California, or the crashing waves at Dorado Beach in Puerto Rico.
April 28th, 2025 18:56
rrodriguez said:
Your poem captures the wild beauty of nature perfectly—so powerful and vivid! It reminds me of the ocean waves in Monterey, California, or the crashing waves at Dorado Beach in Puerto Rico.
April 28th, 2025 18:56
roaring tides
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, this poem is not only brilliant, but I learned something new! The best of both worlds, my friend. Well done on this. An instant fave! 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 09:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, this poem is not only brilliant, but I learned something new! The best of both worlds, my friend. Well done on this. An instant fave! 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 09:31
roaring tides
Salvia.S said:
Breathtaking!!!! The language is vivid and powerful, capturing the fury and majesty of the sea. Well written!!!!
April 28th, 2025 06:51
Salvia.S said:
Breathtaking!!!! The language is vivid and powerful, capturing the fury and majesty of the sea. Well written!!!!
April 28th, 2025 06:51
roaring tides
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful dithyramb.I always learn something reading your work cobber.
April 28th, 2025 05:06
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful dithyramb.I always learn something reading your work cobber.
April 28th, 2025 05:06
roaring tides
sorenbarrett said:
Not only entertained with a most magnificent piece of literary work but I learned something as well. The word choices for this poem are most artistic. A beautiful creation that moves the reader and itself as waves in the sea, a tempest in the soul. A fave
April 28th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Not only entertained with a most magnificent piece of literary work but I learned something as well. The word choices for this poem are most artistic. A beautiful creation that moves the reader and itself as waves in the sea, a tempest in the soul. A fave
April 28th, 2025 04:37
roaring tides
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard a rumor that the deep will erupt soon. (Pacific area).
Great write. I felt the sea through your words!
April 28th, 2025 02:39
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard a rumor that the deep will erupt soon. (Pacific area).
Great write. I felt the sea through your words!
April 28th, 2025 02:39
roaring tides
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to the sea can be so inspiring arqios.
Andy
April 28th, 2025 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to the sea can be so inspiring arqios.
Andy
April 28th, 2025 01:08
just my ☘️ luck
NafisaSB said:
enjoyed it - glad to see how even commonplace things inspire you..
April 28th, 2025 00:01
NafisaSB said:
enjoyed it - glad to see how even commonplace things inspire you..
April 28th, 2025 00:01
once again
NafisaSB said:
i agree with your thoughts, and feel that it is just a matter of time.
April 27th, 2025 23:52
NafisaSB said:
i agree with your thoughts, and feel that it is just a matter of time.
April 27th, 2025 23:52
hymn of the exiles
Cheeky Missy said:
Is that the grand term for this characteristic beauty? Too cool and aptly said. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 27th, 2025 11:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Is that the grand term for this characteristic beauty? Too cool and aptly said. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 27th, 2025 11:10
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