Comments received on poems by arqios
“flight from self”
David Wakeling said:
Very thoughtful poetry.There seems a deep examination of the human condition.Memorable lines here like belonging sealed before choice finds breathe.Wonderful exploration into the human condition
July 14th, 2025 18:51
David Wakeling said:
Very thoughtful poetry.There seems a deep examination of the human condition.Memorable lines here like belonging sealed before choice finds breathe.Wonderful exploration into the human condition
July 14th, 2025 18:51
“flight from self”
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem cuts deep—the way it frames self-erasure as both armor and inheritance is haunting. The revisited version sharpens the ache with its quieter, more deliberate precision. Stunning and unsettling.
July 14th, 2025 12:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem cuts deep—the way it frames self-erasure as both armor and inheritance is haunting. The revisited version sharpens the ache with its quieter, more deliberate precision. Stunning and unsettling.
July 14th, 2025 12:51
“flight from self”
Bella Shepard said:
I read it, then walked away allowing myself to do something different, while my brain worked on it. I returned and read again, slowly and methodically and the light went on. WOW! You capture brilliantly the conformity we find it so difficult to overcome, and it does become infectious. And that final stanza, no lie, brought a lump to my throat. Brilliant!!
July 14th, 2025 09:48
Bella Shepard said:
I read it, then walked away allowing myself to do something different, while my brain worked on it. I returned and read again, slowly and methodically and the light went on. WOW! You capture brilliantly the conformity we find it so difficult to overcome, and it does become infectious. And that final stanza, no lie, brought a lump to my throat. Brilliant!!
July 14th, 2025 09:48
“flight from self”
arqios said:
Just hoping the extended version does not affect the enjoyment and understanding of the former and vice versa as they have been written decades apart.
July 14th, 2025 06:20
arqios said:
Just hoping the extended version does not affect the enjoyment and understanding of the former and vice versa as they have been written decades apart.
July 14th, 2025 06:20
“flight from self”
sorenbarrett said:
I suppose that this too may be taken many ways but my read is in this metaphor of a plain suit we all wish to blend in out of fear of rejection so we never get to show our colors. The world remains drab and dull. I choose to circulate with birds of bright feathers the oddballs that have no fear for they help take mine away. A wonderful write Cryptic.
July 14th, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
I suppose that this too may be taken many ways but my read is in this metaphor of a plain suit we all wish to blend in out of fear of rejection so we never get to show our colors. The world remains drab and dull. I choose to circulate with birds of bright feathers the oddballs that have no fear for they help take mine away. A wonderful write Cryptic.
July 14th, 2025 05:29
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is such a beautiful piece. I love the way it blends quiet observation with a deeper reflection on time, memory, and stillness. It’s written so nicely.
July 14th, 2025 03:10
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is such a beautiful piece. I love the way it blends quiet observation with a deeper reflection on time, memory, and stillness. It’s written so nicely.
July 14th, 2025 03:10
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
Bella Shepard said:
Cats and sunbeams just seem to be a natural pairing. Your poem captures this beautifully, the feeling of peace that can come over you as you observe them lounging in that golden spot. You are so right, \"Nothing is wasted in a sunbeam\", priceless!
July 13th, 2025 14:42
Bella Shepard said:
Cats and sunbeams just seem to be a natural pairing. Your poem captures this beautifully, the feeling of peace that can come over you as you observe them lounging in that golden spot. You are so right, \"Nothing is wasted in a sunbeam\", priceless!
July 13th, 2025 14:42
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
Friendship said:
The poem \"The Archives of the Sunbeam\" explores the notion of presence, stillness, and the ephemeral beauty of moments captured through the lens of companionship between cats.
July 13th, 2025 13:51
Friendship said:
The poem \"The Archives of the Sunbeam\" explores the notion of presence, stillness, and the ephemeral beauty of moments captured through the lens of companionship between cats.
July 13th, 2025 13:51
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
Tony Grannell said:
Carefree felines in a shaft of light, the epitome of grace and contentment. I tiptoed through this poem, so delicately woven and for fear of disturbing the moment. Such a beautiful and mellow poem. Perfect reading for a lazy Sunday afternoon. Thank you ever so much for this one.
All the best,
Tony.
July 13th, 2025 08:33
Tony Grannell said:
Carefree felines in a shaft of light, the epitome of grace and contentment. I tiptoed through this poem, so delicately woven and for fear of disturbing the moment. Such a beautiful and mellow poem. Perfect reading for a lazy Sunday afternoon. Thank you ever so much for this one.
All the best,
Tony.
July 13th, 2025 08:33
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
arqios said:
Of the two versions, which is your preference?
July 13th, 2025 08:28
arqios said:
Of the two versions, which is your preference?
July 13th, 2025 08:28
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
arqios said:
Thanks for the Fave @Tristan, a lone light in dark beginnings, but still a light!
July 13th, 2025 08:25
arqios said:
Thanks for the Fave @Tristan, a lone light in dark beginnings, but still a light!
July 13th, 2025 08:25
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing quite like a cat (well the one I have a sometime acquaintance with anyway) to demonstrate just being, just being without complaint fear or need, at least in that moment (the moment of the sunbeam?)
July 13th, 2025 08:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing quite like a cat (well the one I have a sometime acquaintance with anyway) to demonstrate just being, just being without complaint fear or need, at least in that moment (the moment of the sunbeam?)
July 13th, 2025 08:19
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Need I say this, but this pure brilliance, arqios. You take something as simple as a sunbeam and unfold an entire philosophy of presence, memory, and grace. The way you weave pause into poetry (nice alliteration, no? 🤣) especially through the cats\' silent wisdom...is nothing short of sacred. “Affection by implication” might be one of my new favorite phrases. Beautifully, beautifully done. 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
July 13th, 2025 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Need I say this, but this pure brilliance, arqios. You take something as simple as a sunbeam and unfold an entire philosophy of presence, memory, and grace. The way you weave pause into poetry (nice alliteration, no? 🤣) especially through the cats\' silent wisdom...is nothing short of sacred. “Affection by implication” might be one of my new favorite phrases. Beautifully, beautifully done. 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
July 13th, 2025 08:18
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
arqios said:
Agreed. A day of rest and relaxation!
July 13th, 2025 07:27
arqios said:
Agreed. A day of rest and relaxation!
July 13th, 2025 07:27
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful relaxing comforting write accompanied by its partner, purfect for a lazy sunday and very enjoyable read
July 13th, 2025 07:11
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful relaxing comforting write accompanied by its partner, purfect for a lazy sunday and very enjoyable read
July 13th, 2025 07:11
from the Archives of the Sunbeam
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that unfolds as a cat does in warmth and comfort stretching and reaching flexing its meaning. It seemed very comfortable to me and I definitely enjoyed it on a lazy Sunday. Thanks for sharing Cryptic.
July 13th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that unfolds as a cat does in warmth and comfort stretching and reaching flexing its meaning. It seemed very comfortable to me and I definitely enjoyed it on a lazy Sunday. Thanks for sharing Cryptic.
July 13th, 2025 04:42
crossings
Goldfinch60 said:
That matchbox will be filled with the love that comes to you arqios.
Andy
July 13th, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That matchbox will be filled with the love that comes to you arqios.
Andy
July 13th, 2025 01:45
crossings
David Wakeling said:
Wow now this is special and dare I say therapeutic poem .The the authors history in 6 stages.There is so much wisdom it is really mind blowng. It is one of the most important poems I have read for a long time.It begins It with a communication with the authors younger self and ends with an open matchbox which could be as innocent as having a cigarette or it could be as sinister as burning the house down. Either way this is an amazing poem.Well done compadre
July 12th, 2025 19:41
David Wakeling said:
Wow now this is special and dare I say therapeutic poem .The the authors history in 6 stages.There is so much wisdom it is really mind blowng. It is one of the most important poems I have read for a long time.It begins It with a communication with the authors younger self and ends with an open matchbox which could be as innocent as having a cigarette or it could be as sinister as burning the house down. Either way this is an amazing poem.Well done compadre
July 12th, 2025 19:41
unyielding eyes
Keeter C said:
And that is exactly why I prefer words over numbers. Words are elegant and can be bent, crafted and swayed. Numbers are regimental, still and rigid.
July 12th, 2025 17:32
Keeter C said:
And that is exactly why I prefer words over numbers. Words are elegant and can be bent, crafted and swayed. Numbers are regimental, still and rigid.
July 12th, 2025 17:32
unrelenting horizon
Keeter C said:
Sometimes where you land after a fall and it all that is where you take root and grow again. Was at the peak of success and toil. I feel this.
July 12th, 2025 17:21
Keeter C said:
Sometimes where you land after a fall and it all that is where you take root and grow again. Was at the peak of success and toil. I feel this.
July 12th, 2025 17:21
crossings
Bella Shepard said:
To me the stages of this poem speak beautifully of forgiveness, love, remembrance and ultimately hope. A true gem my friend!
July 12th, 2025 12:00
Bella Shepard said:
To me the stages of this poem speak beautifully of forgiveness, love, remembrance and ultimately hope. A true gem my friend!
July 12th, 2025 12:00
crossings
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written write, very nicely staged, I wish they had been my steps, very enjoyable read
July 12th, 2025 09:01
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written write, very nicely staged, I wish they had been my steps, very enjoyable read
July 12th, 2025 09:01
crossings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is breathtaking, dear poet and friend. Every step feels like a rite of remembering...tender, sacred, and unflinchingly honest. The layering here…name, fragment, threshold, altar...each part throbs with lived truth. That final gesture with the matchbox? Chills. If feel you and here you there. You’ve built something luminous here, my friend. 🌹👏 One of my faves of yours. Love the ritual aspect of it!
July 12th, 2025 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is breathtaking, dear poet and friend. Every step feels like a rite of remembering...tender, sacred, and unflinchingly honest. The layering here…name, fragment, threshold, altar...each part throbs with lived truth. That final gesture with the matchbox? Chills. If feel you and here you there. You’ve built something luminous here, my friend. 🌹👏 One of my faves of yours. Love the ritual aspect of it!
July 12th, 2025 08:24
crossings
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poem \"Crossings\" explores personal transformation, healing, and self-acceptance through a ritualistic journey. It reflects on the relationship between one\'s past and present self, emphasizing the importance of recognizing and honoring one’s experiences, struggles, and growth.
July 12th, 2025 07:06
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poem \"Crossings\" explores personal transformation, healing, and self-acceptance through a ritualistic journey. It reflects on the relationship between one\'s past and present self, emphasizing the importance of recognizing and honoring one’s experiences, struggles, and growth.
July 12th, 2025 07:06
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