Comments received on poems by arqios
of resonances
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Rik, they are so meaningful.
Andy
September 14th, 2025 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Rik, they are so meaningful.
Andy
September 14th, 2025 01:12
of resonances
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is both hymn and hurricane...voice, marrow, and music forged into tribute. You’ve given our friend Soren a piece alive with respect and fire. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2025 14:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is both hymn and hurricane...voice, marrow, and music forged into tribute. You’ve given our friend Soren a piece alive with respect and fire. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2025 14:58
of resonances
Priya Tomar said:
A good poem about friendship...
Nicely done.
September 13th, 2025 08:45
Priya Tomar said:
A good poem about friendship...
Nicely done.
September 13th, 2025 08:45
of resonances
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is breathtaking! The imagery and rhythm make the music almost tangible you can feel the raw intensity and reverence. I love how it balances the visceral power of the sound with the warmth of friendship. Truly a master piece.
September 13th, 2025 06:49
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is breathtaking! The imagery and rhythm make the music almost tangible you can feel the raw intensity and reverence. I love how it balances the visceral power of the sound with the warmth of friendship. Truly a master piece.
September 13th, 2025 06:49
of resonances
sorenbarrett said:
Thunderstruck, tongue stuck words caught in the throat, such beautiful lines this message entwines with words wrote. Poetic word choice in this piece cut to the marrow of meaning and the reader feels the scrape of the knife edge drawn along bone surface. A powerful blend of the cold technology of the present and the warm visceral flesh and blood, fountain of poetic emotion that bleeds on the page but dissolves into pixels on glass. Honored to see my name where a thousand others more worthy would serve as well for this masterful work. Thank you so much for sharing
September 13th, 2025 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Thunderstruck, tongue stuck words caught in the throat, such beautiful lines this message entwines with words wrote. Poetic word choice in this piece cut to the marrow of meaning and the reader feels the scrape of the knife edge drawn along bone surface. A powerful blend of the cold technology of the present and the warm visceral flesh and blood, fountain of poetic emotion that bleeds on the page but dissolves into pixels on glass. Honored to see my name where a thousand others more worthy would serve as well for this masterful work. Thank you so much for sharing
September 13th, 2025 06:31
foment in the firmament
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Rik, the strength of nature is always there but it can also bring wonder to our lives.
Andy
September 13th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Rik, the strength of nature is always there but it can also bring wonder to our lives.
Andy
September 13th, 2025 01:24
foment in the firmament
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
‘Somewhere, a wind rehearses its entrance,
curling through the rafters of the sky,
its breath warm with the scent of rain not yet born.’
Love this stanza. Fascinating poem.
September 12th, 2025 10:28
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
‘Somewhere, a wind rehearses its entrance,
curling through the rafters of the sky,
its breath warm with the scent of rain not yet born.’
Love this stanza. Fascinating poem.
September 12th, 2025 10:28
foment in the firmament
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, dearest Rik…I know that charged stillness before the storm, when air itself tastes of iron. You’ve captured it with force. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, my mate!
September 12th, 2025 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, dearest Rik…I know that charged stillness before the storm, when air itself tastes of iron. You’ve captured it with force. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, my mate!
September 12th, 2025 08:41
foment in the firmament
Kevin Hulme said:
Very Atmospheric, if you\'ll pardon the Pun.
\'Scent of the Rain \' is right . Enjoyed.
September 12th, 2025 08:01
Kevin Hulme said:
Very Atmospheric, if you\'ll pardon the Pun.
\'Scent of the Rain \' is right . Enjoyed.
September 12th, 2025 08:01
between shelves
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A stunning work. The first stanza blew me away. Read it thrice. Great poem
September 12th, 2025 07:51
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A stunning work. The first stanza blew me away. Read it thrice. Great poem
September 12th, 2025 07:51
between shelves
Fred1794 said:
Ahhh a love letter to the library and bookshops everywhere. I am a big fan.
September 12th, 2025 07:38
Fred1794 said:
Ahhh a love letter to the library and bookshops everywhere. I am a big fan.
September 12th, 2025 07:38
foment in the firmament
orchidee said:
I can\'t shay that title after a ginsh or threesh. Hic! lol. Notice the good acting there from me?! Fomentsh in the firmamentsh, is it?
September 12th, 2025 05:55
orchidee said:
I can\'t shay that title after a ginsh or threesh. Hic! lol. Notice the good acting there from me?! Fomentsh in the firmamentsh, is it?
September 12th, 2025 05:55
foment in the firmament
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and full of nature\'s strength this poem feels like a new birth. Lovely Cryptic
September 12th, 2025 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and full of nature\'s strength this poem feels like a new birth. Lovely Cryptic
September 12th, 2025 05:52
between shelves
Goldfinch60 said:
Word written and read will always be there for us all Rik.
Andy
September 11th, 2025 23:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Word written and read will always be there for us all Rik.
Andy
September 11th, 2025 23:45
between shelves
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, my friend…I’ve walked those aisles myself, feeling the dust as currency, breathing in the silence. You captured that weight perfectly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 20:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, my friend…I’ve walked those aisles myself, feeling the dust as currency, breathing in the silence. You captured that weight perfectly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 20:59
between shelves
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s a fine sight to see Children reading a Book instead of looking at a tablet or Phone.
Well Said.
September 11th, 2025 12:53
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s a fine sight to see Children reading a Book instead of looking at a tablet or Phone.
Well Said.
September 11th, 2025 12:53
between shelves
orchidee said:
In between my shelves....are layers of dust! lol.
September 11th, 2025 10:59
orchidee said:
In between my shelves....are layers of dust! lol.
September 11th, 2025 10:59
between shelves
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve always loved libraries, particularly those of my youth, when books were found on index cards instead of by pounding computer keys. Your beautifully written poem takes me back to that quiet, magical place. Thank you for the reminiscence.
September 11th, 2025 08:40
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve always loved libraries, particularly those of my youth, when books were found on index cards instead of by pounding computer keys. Your beautifully written poem takes me back to that quiet, magical place. Thank you for the reminiscence.
September 11th, 2025 08:40
between shelves
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last two lines of this they speak so much in metaphor. Lovely
September 11th, 2025 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last two lines of this they speak so much in metaphor. Lovely
September 11th, 2025 06:06
“Lovin’ where I live”
NafisaSB said:
wow, this is stupendous..you have brought life to this bare parched land with your poem - and your love for the place and life you live shines bright
September 11th, 2025 00:58
NafisaSB said:
wow, this is stupendous..you have brought life to this bare parched land with your poem - and your love for the place and life you live shines bright
September 11th, 2025 00:58
the river carries her
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, my dear friend…this carries Faulkner’s ghost, but in your own cadence. The grief, the weight, the motion that cannot stop...you’ve rendered it powerfully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done!
September 10th, 2025 18:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, my dear friend…this carries Faulkner’s ghost, but in your own cadence. The grief, the weight, the motion that cannot stop...you’ve rendered it powerfully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done!
September 10th, 2025 18:34
the river carries her
Kevin Hulme said:
I enjoyed this ; especially the second Stanza.
Some fine descriptive work.
September 10th, 2025 18:27
Kevin Hulme said:
I enjoyed this ; especially the second Stanza.
Some fine descriptive work.
September 10th, 2025 18:27
the old home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…each detail...the oaken door, the empty stairwell, the fading nursery...brings memory alive even as time erases it. A very poignant piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…each detail...the oaken door, the empty stairwell, the fading nursery...brings memory alive even as time erases it. A very poignant piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 09:39
the river carries her
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning imagery, with a pic that magnifies the feeling of grief and loss. This is beautiful!
September 10th, 2025 08:55
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning imagery, with a pic that magnifies the feeling of grief and loss. This is beautiful!
September 10th, 2025 08:55
the old home
Tom Dylan said:
A fine piece, mate. Really makes you think. And love the line about time sending us a-packing.
September 10th, 2025 06:09
Tom Dylan said:
A fine piece, mate. Really makes you think. And love the line about time sending us a-packing.
September 10th, 2025 06:09
the river carries her
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t know what it is about the wording of this piece but it brings to mind Steinbeck so well imaged. Very nicely done Cryptic
September 10th, 2025 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t know what it is about the wording of this piece but it brings to mind Steinbeck so well imaged. Very nicely done Cryptic
September 10th, 2025 05:39
the old home
Goldfinch60 said:
The stories those old homes could tell would be amazing Rik.
Andy
September 10th, 2025 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
The stories those old homes could tell would be amazing Rik.
Andy
September 10th, 2025 00:54
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