Comments received on poems by arqios
not your day, either?
David Wakeling said:
There seems to be some memories here that are good bad and ugly. Hope better days have followed
February 15th, 2025 20:58
David Wakeling said:
There seems to be some memories here that are good bad and ugly. Hope better days have followed
February 15th, 2025 20:58
not your day, either?
arqios said:
Thanks for the fave: @Mutley Ravishes and @Cheeky Missy 🪶🙏🏻🕊🌷
February 15th, 2025 20:20
arqios said:
Thanks for the fave: @Mutley Ravishes and @Cheeky Missy 🪶🙏🏻🕊🌷
February 15th, 2025 20:20
“my bloody valentine”
Kevin Hulme said:
The Seven Members of the ‘North Side’ gang had a bad Valentine’s Day In 1929 as well.
This is a fine Poem about the Origins of the Tradition. Well Said.
February 15th, 2025 10:07
Kevin Hulme said:
The Seven Members of the ‘North Side’ gang had a bad Valentine’s Day In 1929 as well.
This is a fine Poem about the Origins of the Tradition. Well Said.
February 15th, 2025 10:07
not your day, either?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Living life with the tools we\'ve got. This is a poem of the struggle of living life with less than what is needed to get by. A car that barely rumbles along, is falling apart, and is running on fumes and flat tires. Brilliant metaphor, my friend! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Living life with the tools we\'ve got. This is a poem of the struggle of living life with less than what is needed to get by. A car that barely rumbles along, is falling apart, and is running on fumes and flat tires. Brilliant metaphor, my friend! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:39
not your day, either?
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Raw, emotional, and beautifully written. These words will stay with me for a while🙏
February 15th, 2025 08:35
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Raw, emotional, and beautifully written. These words will stay with me for a while🙏
February 15th, 2025 08:35
not your day, either?
Poetic Licence said:
I could be completely off the mark here and probably am, but i get the sense of a sad childhood, nothing to dream for, lack of hope, best that they can do is try to survive, sorry if i have got it wrong. To me this a emotional and haunting write.
February 15th, 2025 08:12
Poetic Licence said:
I could be completely off the mark here and probably am, but i get the sense of a sad childhood, nothing to dream for, lack of hope, best that they can do is try to survive, sorry if i have got it wrong. To me this a emotional and haunting write.
February 15th, 2025 08:12
not your day, either?
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors of past now rusted dreams and memories in the squalor of the present where action not taken has led to languor and a settling into malaise. May be way off but this is the feel I get
February 15th, 2025 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors of past now rusted dreams and memories in the squalor of the present where action not taken has led to languor and a settling into malaise. May be way off but this is the feel I get
February 15th, 2025 07:06
“my bloody valentine”
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Beautiful poem! It really captures the true meaning of Valentine\'s story. Well written, dude!
February 15th, 2025 04:10
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Beautiful poem! It really captures the true meaning of Valentine\'s story. Well written, dude!
February 15th, 2025 04:10
all thinkers great and small
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine words . It takes all Sorts ( Not the Liquorice Kind) to make a World. I always try to learn something new every day by reading.
February 14th, 2025 20:08
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine words . It takes all Sorts ( Not the Liquorice Kind) to make a World. I always try to learn something new every day by reading.
February 14th, 2025 20:08
“my bloody valentine”
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful history lesson. I always thought Valentines day was suspicious. Now I know why.Excellent
February 14th, 2025 15:46
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful history lesson. I always thought Valentines day was suspicious. Now I know why.Excellent
February 14th, 2025 15:46
“my bloody valentine”
sorenbarrett said:
Very timely and historical, mythical, metaphorical and poetic. A most lovely write that captured my heart and deserves a fave
February 14th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Very timely and historical, mythical, metaphorical and poetic. A most lovely write that captured my heart and deserves a fave
February 14th, 2025 04:33
“my bloody valentine”
Poetic Licence said:
I was not aware of the history of valentine, so through this historical piece i have learnt something. Like the lay out like an old classic, enjoyed the read.
February 14th, 2025 03:36
Poetic Licence said:
I was not aware of the history of valentine, so through this historical piece i have learnt something. Like the lay out like an old classic, enjoyed the read.
February 14th, 2025 03:36
“my bloody valentine”
Cassie58 said:
A historical write with a tragic ending arqios. And since then there have been a multitude of perfect love matches resulting in happiness and probably a similar number of tragedies. Hoping your day is special.
February 14th, 2025 03:30
Cassie58 said:
A historical write with a tragic ending arqios. And since then there have been a multitude of perfect love matches resulting in happiness and probably a similar number of tragedies. Hoping your day is special.
February 14th, 2025 03:30
“my bloody valentine”
orchidee said:
A fine historical write A. It has a classical feel to it - ye olden days, yet a new poem.
I say this (title) to KP, but not in the same sense. Ooh lol!
February 14th, 2025 03:12
orchidee said:
A fine historical write A. It has a classical feel to it - ye olden days, yet a new poem.
I say this (title) to KP, but not in the same sense. Ooh lol!
February 14th, 2025 03:12
“my bloody valentine”
Goldfinch60 said:
But the following Valetines have been full of love aqios.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
But the following Valetines have been full of love aqios.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:51
“my bloody valentine”
Teddy.15 said:
lol indeed tragic. That is the very beauty of valentine\'s and indeed love, born in Rome no less. A great piece dear arqios 🌹
February 14th, 2025 02:48
Teddy.15 said:
lol indeed tragic. That is the very beauty of valentine\'s and indeed love, born in Rome no less. A great piece dear arqios 🌹
February 14th, 2025 02:48
all thinkers great and small
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This doesn\'t ruffle my feathers, then again, I am as feathered as a vulture\'s head...lol! That out there, this is profoundly true, first off. In this, I read people who are mindful of all the good and ill in the world, people who even point fingers at the world\'s woes, yet are small minded in their own lives within their microcosm...gossiping, tearing others down. All of that, of course, contributes to the microcosmic turmoil in the world. If this ruffles feathers, that bird might want to realize its own reflection! Beyond that, this poem is quite musical/lyrical and was very pleasant to read, a fine contrast to its content. Bravo, dear poet and friend! 🌹👏
February 13th, 2025 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This doesn\'t ruffle my feathers, then again, I am as feathered as a vulture\'s head...lol! That out there, this is profoundly true, first off. In this, I read people who are mindful of all the good and ill in the world, people who even point fingers at the world\'s woes, yet are small minded in their own lives within their microcosm...gossiping, tearing others down. All of that, of course, contributes to the microcosmic turmoil in the world. If this ruffles feathers, that bird might want to realize its own reflection! Beyond that, this poem is quite musical/lyrical and was very pleasant to read, a fine contrast to its content. Bravo, dear poet and friend! 🌹👏
February 13th, 2025 07:52
all thinkers great and small
Poetic Licence said:
I love the interactions in this poem between the minds and how related they all are. Being of the small mind myself, i have always been happy to not have a great mind, because those who are gifted in that way have some madness / lunacy that comes with it, and quite often are not nice people. Really enjoyable and interesting poem.
February 13th, 2025 05:31
Poetic Licence said:
I love the interactions in this poem between the minds and how related they all are. Being of the small mind myself, i have always been happy to not have a great mind, because those who are gifted in that way have some madness / lunacy that comes with it, and quite often are not nice people. Really enjoyable and interesting poem.
February 13th, 2025 05:31
all thinkers great and small
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
You express so well how no one is purely great or small. You capture human nature beautifully😊 Enjoy the read!
February 13th, 2025 05:19
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
You express so well how no one is purely great or small. You capture human nature beautifully😊 Enjoy the read!
February 13th, 2025 05:19
all thinkers great and small
Distant View said:
A good, thought-provoking poem! A child prodigy can be a chess champion at age 8, beating fully grown men! Capablanca was such! But away from the chess board, he was happy to play with his toys! We are all more complex than we may realise! An enjoyable poem!
February 13th, 2025 04:55
Distant View said:
A good, thought-provoking poem! A child prodigy can be a chess champion at age 8, beating fully grown men! Capablanca was such! But away from the chess board, he was happy to play with his toys! We are all more complex than we may realise! An enjoyable poem!
February 13th, 2025 04:55
all thinkers great and small
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic I have to say you have written a few really wonderful poems but this one I think is one of the best if not the best. It has the meter and flow, the rhyme, and most important of all the topic and complete circular construction of it that makes the thought complete. This one is not only worthy of publiction but cries out for it. It makes an old poet jealous.
February 13th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic I have to say you have written a few really wonderful poems but this one I think is one of the best if not the best. It has the meter and flow, the rhyme, and most important of all the topic and complete circular construction of it that makes the thought complete. This one is not only worthy of publiction but cries out for it. It makes an old poet jealous.
February 13th, 2025 03:42
all thinkers great and small
orchidee said:
Good write A. Some say \'Thinking? Ooh, that\'s dangerous, if you only have 3 brain cells\' (like me?) lol.
Or \'What you doing thinking?; that\'s rare of you! heehee.
February 13th, 2025 03:22
orchidee said:
Good write A. Some say \'Thinking? Ooh, that\'s dangerous, if you only have 3 brain cells\' (like me?) lol.
Or \'What you doing thinking?; that\'s rare of you! heehee.
February 13th, 2025 03:22
all thinkers great and small
Goldfinch60 said:
Our minds think of so many things arqios both important and silly but as long as the mind accepts all life is fine.
Andy
February 13th, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Our minds think of so many things arqios both important and silly but as long as the mind accepts all life is fine.
Andy
February 13th, 2025 02:23
forever we shall be
Mutley Ravishes said:
I came across a writer saying that in one sense we have to rebel against nature. Meaning the mechanicity of nature. The current rebellion against nature is adding more mechanicity! We got it all upside down.
February 12th, 2025 18:51
Mutley Ravishes said:
I came across a writer saying that in one sense we have to rebel against nature. Meaning the mechanicity of nature. The current rebellion against nature is adding more mechanicity! We got it all upside down.
February 12th, 2025 18:51
cowardly survivor
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
That unknown strength...we all have hidden in doubt, rising when needed. It pushes us forward and keeps us going. Good write, dude!
February 12th, 2025 10:21
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
That unknown strength...we all have hidden in doubt, rising when needed. It pushes us forward and keeps us going. Good write, dude!
February 12th, 2025 10:21
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