Comments received on poems by arqios



a vantaged perch
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
I was on a panoramic height, then I fell down a hill! lol.

January 2nd, 2023 06:16

aubade 2023
thinkerbell said:

A wonderful way to greet the new year...Happy new year to you dear poet🥰

January 1st, 2023 12:27

aubade 2023
Bella Shepard said:

Thank you dear bard for sharing these words of infinite wisdom, and hope as we enter the new year. May 2023 be a new beginning.

January 1st, 2023 12:22

silver threaded web
thinkerbell said:

Beautifully written dear poet..the imagery is so crystal clear to me🥰

January 1st, 2023 11:39

aubade 2023
orchidee said:

A fine aubade (poem) that is, CB, I says, after getting out dictionary!
That\'s a good enough word to be starting a new year, or new day with!

January 1st, 2023 03:24

aubade 2023
Neville said:



may you have a most contented 2023

January 1st, 2023 03:15

silver threaded web
Bella Shepard said:

Beautifully worded my friend. The passage of time seems so much more tangible as we wade through the winter months. Thank you for this delightful end of the year verse.

December 31st, 2022 14:48

silver threaded web
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
You spent that extra second we had one year, or you saving it up for later?! lol.

December 31st, 2022 03:20

I am not your cup of tea!
orchidee said:

Yuk, tastes like drinking perfume, I imagine. Not that I ever have drank perfume. Well, smells like it anyway!

December 31st, 2022 03:11

grand coterie
Bella Shepard said:

Time to come together as one, for the good of all? Time for truth to prevail?

December 30th, 2022 17:31

I am not your cup of tea!
orchidee said:

I was about to have a pot of tea! lol.

December 30th, 2022 13:02

grand coterie
sorenbarrett said:

This one leads me down different paths simultaneously. I read the seriousness implied by the first line. Then I read the ending two lines and it takes me to another place.

December 29th, 2022 20:51

not all that glisters is gold
Bella Shepard said:

Enticing, the image of that beautiful, juicy orange. Perhaps taunting, as it may roll away to entice another day. Good one dear friend, always fun.

December 23rd, 2022 14:19

not all that glisters is gold
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully crisp imagery
so open to personalisation, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
hope you have a great festive season
stay safe!

December 23rd, 2022 08:07

not all that glisters is gold
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

December 23rd, 2022 03:02

Mr Right
Bella Shepard said:

Years of writing has given me arth-writis in my writing hand, but I do prefer the written word. This is a wonderful tongue, and brain twister dear bard, such fun.

December 22nd, 2022 15:36

Mr Right
sorenbarrett said:

Right. To write is to not be left behind my teacher used to say. Now I\'ll shut right up. Love plays on words. Right well done.

December 15th, 2022 21:49

Mr Right
orchidee said:

I writed (is that a word?!) that this rightly is a good write to read CB.
You got me at it now. lol.

December 15th, 2022 03:09

shapeshifting
orchidee said:

You turned over a leaf of your notebook and wrote this fine poem?!
Please excuse me - I can\'t shay that middlesh line as I\'ve had a gin or threesh!

December 11th, 2022 03:12

there
sorenbarrett said:

It came to me that all art is a bit nostalgic needing past experience to evoke feelings at times unidentifiable but locked in some form they do linger as you say and this is what makes a poem, or any work of art, art to me. Nicely done.

December 10th, 2022 07:33

there
Neville said:



some wholes are simply just too hard to fill ............... sadly but true

December 9th, 2022 07:48

there
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
I was a confused laddie with that poe, potato, whatever stuff! lol.

December 9th, 2022 07:00

angel envy
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!

December 9th, 2022 04:59

head gear all in poe
Neville said:


could this be noun sense by any chance :)

December 9th, 2022 00:56

head gear all in poe
sorenbarrett said:

A clever use of the word-- words. It makes sense to me but then I\'ve had a beer. I wonder if it would make sense to E. Poe? Loved it.

December 8th, 2022 19:06

head gear all in poe
Mr. Not said:

oh?

December 8th, 2022 04:56

head gear all in poe
orchidee said:

You been on that gin or whisky?! I will understand this poem when I\'ve had about 6 of \'em!

December 8th, 2022 04:08

head gear all in poe
Doggerel Dave said:

Not sure it\'s gonna help, Rik....

December 8th, 2022 03:25

booth chill
orchidee said:

Eek! It\'s become too cryptic for me too! Good write though I\'m sure.
Me brain cells threaten to go on holiday if it\'s too cryptic. I never know when they\'re coming back. lol.

December 7th, 2022 04:06

angel envy
Doggerel Dave said:

I think you better stay with orchi - I\'m out of my depth again....🙂

December 6th, 2022 19:46



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