Comments received on poems by arqios



letting go: Anton Ego
arqios said:

A film reference no less but for the younger crown and those disposed to animation.

April 15th, 2025 05:56

letting go: Anton Ego
David Wakeling said:

I had flash backs to Master chief\' I find it difficult for someone to judge anothers food.Certainly a well written detailled piece.Excellent work

April 15th, 2025 05:39

letting go: Anton Ego
Poetic Licence said:

That reminds me of one of the most brutal forms of journalism, if you can call it that,a food critic, and in he got the result that in his heart he didnt want, it tasted really good, enjoyed the read

April 15th, 2025 04:32

letting go: Anton Ego
sorenbarrett said:

What a great story with a moral. The line is so true (elegance does thrive in imperfection) The use of building tension to increase the power of the statement was very well done. Well imaged and structured it is a lovely poem and story

April 15th, 2025 03:46

letting go: Anton Ego
2781 said:

You doesn\'t love a good rustic dish.

April 15th, 2025 02:07

midnight courage
Goldfinch60 said:

So many things come into my mind in the wee small hours arqios.

Andy

April 15th, 2025 01:49

midnight courage
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

April 14th, 2025 17:42

midnight courage
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

April 14th, 2025 09:17

midnight courage
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is often where I exist, my friend. That liminal space between life an death, reality and surreality, where the muse calls on those courageous enough to stay awake past delirium into the magical moments of the crisp, creative, conscious night. Well done on this! Well done! You\'ve described my home! πŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ‘

April 14th, 2025 07:32

midnight courage
David Wakeling said:

The midnight hour. It certainly is a creative time.The poem highlights the creative power of that time of night.Excellent poem.Enjoyed reading

April 14th, 2025 05:43

midnight courage
arqios said:

Here we go a writing

April 14th, 2025 04:46

midnight courage
Poetic Licence said:

I do most of writing over the night when the world appears at peace and sometimes accompanied by a libation or two to free the mind, enjoyed the read

April 14th, 2025 04:16

midnight courage
sorenbarrett said:

Ah I know those hours well my friend. So poetically stated in these few lines. Hours where one can write without guilt or being disturbed. Hours stolen from sleep and dreams to put them on paper for others to share. Your word choice is exquisite.

April 14th, 2025 04:14

midnight courage
orchidee said:

Re your comment: I doubt I will pick up on the thought of much cryptic stuff! lol. Good write A.

April 14th, 2025 03:01

song to the stars
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words arqios bring joy to all.

Andy

April 14th, 2025 01:52

song to the stars
Kevin Hulme said:

Very Edward Lear in places .
Nice One.

April 13th, 2025 19:40

Anton Ego
Kevin Hulme said:

My friend Mr Creosote and I enjoyed your Poem .
Thank you.

April 13th, 2025 19:37

song to the stars
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

April 13th, 2025 13:20

song to the stars
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant imagery.

April 13th, 2025 09:59

song to the stars
2781 said:

Imagine the manifestation.

April 13th, 2025 08:23

song to the stars
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Love the blending of nursery rhyme and metaphor. This feels like a lullaby sung after the world has moved onβ€”a song for what remains: old stories, natural beauty, and the celestial dust that makes up the cosmos. It is weary but has whimsy; filled with light, yet shadowed by the longing for things once bright and now dimmed in our memories. Or, at least, that is what I get out of it. A brilliant poem and a fave for sure. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

April 13th, 2025 07:41

song to the stars
David Wakeling said:

Some childhood memories here with a touch of regret.Always a delight to read your poems mi amigo

April 13th, 2025 05:30

song to the stars
arqios said:

When in despair, look up

April 13th, 2025 05:22

song to the stars
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely read for a sunday, mixture of child gone songs and lovely imagery, I am probably completly of the track, but this gave me the feeling of children who are no longer here and are now seen in the stars, enjoyed the read

April 13th, 2025 05:02

song to the stars
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful images mixed with nursery rhyme tells of deeper meaning and some very nice lines particularly the whole last stanza. Cryptically imaged in the poem is the heavens and what is so obvious becomes metaphor. Very nicely done my firend

April 13th, 2025 04:40

celestial threads
Goldfinch60 said:

That light will always be with us arqios.

Andy

April 13th, 2025 02:30

celestial threads
David Wakeling said:

I see a poet writing about the universe. Very powerful images here.

April 12th, 2025 16:38

celestial threads
orchidee said:

A celestial good write A.

April 12th, 2025 11:41

celestial threads
Friendship said:

Your poem masterfully explores the cosmic dance between the universe and human insight, where celestial forces intricately weave stories and memories, encapsulating life\'s profound mysteries. The subject matter beautifully touches upon timeless themes of time, memory, nature, and the cosmic bond that unites all things. The poem may be intended to joyfully celebrate nature\'s breathtaking beauty and the emotional resonance that the changing seasons evoke in the human experience, inviting readers to revel in the awe-inspiring transformations that unfold in the world around them.



April 12th, 2025 11:07

celestial threads
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Celestial imagery mixed with the craft of writing verse, the metaphor is profound and beautiful. Wonderful job, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

April 12th, 2025 08:01



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