Comments received on poems by arqios
scare
Bella Shepard said:
I cannot imagine any worse feeling in the world than seeing someone you love in pain, and suffering. God bless dear poet, your brother and your family as you struggle through this difficult time.
May 20th, 2023 15:45
Bella Shepard said:
I cannot imagine any worse feeling in the world than seeing someone you love in pain, and suffering. God bless dear poet, your brother and your family as you struggle through this difficult time.
May 20th, 2023 15:45
scare
Neville said:
I hit the heart shaped button because I feel for you CB and appreciate where you are coming from .. my own baby brother recently had his right lung removed and I know how I thought it really should have been me ....... Neville
May 19th, 2023 12:45
Neville said:
I hit the heart shaped button because I feel for you CB and appreciate where you are coming from .. my own baby brother recently had his right lung removed and I know how I thought it really should have been me ....... Neville
May 19th, 2023 12:45
scare
Elahe poems said:
I\'m sorry for your pain. you created something beautiful out of it. Brotherhood is love and you wrote it well
May 19th, 2023 10:08
Elahe poems said:
I\'m sorry for your pain. you created something beautiful out of it. Brotherhood is love and you wrote it well
May 19th, 2023 10:08
fair go
L. B. Mek said:
\'parading flotilla on digital sea\'
lovely imagery
a wonderful read, dear Poet
May 19th, 2023 02:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'parading flotilla on digital sea\'
lovely imagery
a wonderful read, dear Poet
May 19th, 2023 02:38
fair go
Neville said:
My mind ran riot with this one CB ..
I imagine you looking at the screen in front of you as you are typing into the keyboard with one hand and while your free elbow is resting unbeknownst to you on the delete button .. But then, I note you blame someone or something for unwriting or deleting you so I guess I must be wrong ... maybe ... Neville
May 18th, 2023 22:16
Neville said:
My mind ran riot with this one CB ..
I imagine you looking at the screen in front of you as you are typing into the keyboard with one hand and while your free elbow is resting unbeknownst to you on the delete button .. But then, I note you blame someone or something for unwriting or deleting you so I guess I must be wrong ... maybe ... Neville
May 18th, 2023 22:16
fair go
orchidee said:
This ain\'t unwritten, as you\'ve written it! Me spouting verbal garbage. lol.
May 18th, 2023 14:57
orchidee said:
This ain\'t unwritten, as you\'ve written it! Me spouting verbal garbage. lol.
May 18th, 2023 14:57
muse assistants
Goldfinch60 said:
Those muses can appear in many disguises CB.
Andy
May 18th, 2023 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Those muses can appear in many disguises CB.
Andy
May 18th, 2023 01:13
first snow blues
Bella Shepard said:
This stunning metaphor for love captured in water, its properties, its incredible power and moods, fit so aptly bodies that are in and of themselves 97% water, for without love and water we simply would not exist. Beautiful write!
May 16th, 2023 14:03
Bella Shepard said:
This stunning metaphor for love captured in water, its properties, its incredible power and moods, fit so aptly bodies that are in and of themselves 97% water, for without love and water we simply would not exist. Beautiful write!
May 16th, 2023 14:03
first snow blues
Neville said:
remind me never again to put all my eggs in the same basket with the weather being as fickle as it is around these here parts .. 🐧
May 16th, 2023 11:49
Neville said:
remind me never again to put all my eggs in the same basket with the weather being as fickle as it is around these here parts .. 🐧
May 16th, 2023 11:49
first snow blues
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how you intertwined the passage of love with the water cycle. Such an apt metaphor. Precipitation. Evaporation. Splendid.
May 16th, 2023 08:17
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how you intertwined the passage of love with the water cycle. Such an apt metaphor. Precipitation. Evaporation. Splendid.
May 16th, 2023 08:17
prehensile pledge
Neville said:
I\'m with Mek .. otherwise I\'m just Mordred ................... 🐧⚔️
May 15th, 2023 14:13
Neville said:
I\'m with Mek .. otherwise I\'m just Mordred ................... 🐧⚔️
May 15th, 2023 14:13
prehensile pledge
sorenbarrett said:
I have always been entranced by the Arthurian legends. Lady Modaunt threw a bit of British political mix into it. Since I\'m not up on politics I lost some of the meaning. But it seems clear at the end that like Mordred (Medraut) or Charles? should never be king. I loved the bringing in of English lore and the lady of the lak and sword that signifies kingship.
May 15th, 2023 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
I have always been entranced by the Arthurian legends. Lady Modaunt threw a bit of British political mix into it. Since I\'m not up on politics I lost some of the meaning. But it seems clear at the end that like Mordred (Medraut) or Charles? should never be king. I loved the bringing in of English lore and the lady of the lak and sword that signifies kingship.
May 15th, 2023 10:17
prehensile pledge
L. B. Mek said:
Katie McGrath
made Merlin, \'a must see watch\'
\'and dat\'s all I gotta say bout dat\'
...ahem
May 15th, 2023 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
Katie McGrath
made Merlin, \'a must see watch\'
\'and dat\'s all I gotta say bout dat\'
...ahem
May 15th, 2023 06:03
cannery row
L. B. Mek said:
(soaked in brine
soar tinged flavours of sunshine
seeking respite,
timid flavour
teeming with juicy vivaciousness
trimmed of skin and pride,)
displayed side by side, they await
that lid opening of demise
where their worth, will be realised
at their food chain, fated
tepid ending
May 15th, 2023 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
(soaked in brine
soar tinged flavours of sunshine
seeking respite,
timid flavour
teeming with juicy vivaciousness
trimmed of skin and pride,)
displayed side by side, they await
that lid opening of demise
where their worth, will be realised
at their food chain, fated
tepid ending
May 15th, 2023 03:54
cannery row
Neville said:
No point looking at me .. I\'m pickled .. a circumstance preserved for the overprivileged but internally grateful
May 14th, 2023 13:01
Neville said:
No point looking at me .. I\'m pickled .. a circumstance preserved for the overprivileged but internally grateful
May 14th, 2023 13:01
cannery row
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m old enough to remember real food; grown in the yard, washed, cooked and happily eaten. somewhere in that future of synthisized food no one will ever know the delight of tasting a lucious, ripe tomato or plucking an apple right from the tree and eating it in the orchard. Much food for thought here dear poet, no pun intended.
May 14th, 2023 12:36
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m old enough to remember real food; grown in the yard, washed, cooked and happily eaten. somewhere in that future of synthisized food no one will ever know the delight of tasting a lucious, ripe tomato or plucking an apple right from the tree and eating it in the orchard. Much food for thought here dear poet, no pun intended.
May 14th, 2023 12:36
cannery row
sorenbarrett said:
The falseness of convienience. Addatives, canned, bottled, bagged, frozen plasticised. Fake nutrition not only in food but relationships and anything that was real. I\'m not even sure what is real anymore. Ah but for a ripe peach from the tree. Heaven forbid, it might not be clean or have a worm.
May 14th, 2023 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
The falseness of convienience. Addatives, canned, bottled, bagged, frozen plasticised. Fake nutrition not only in food but relationships and anything that was real. I\'m not even sure what is real anymore. Ah but for a ripe peach from the tree. Heaven forbid, it might not be clean or have a worm.
May 14th, 2023 08:37
stars and gripes
Bobby O said:
It’s a nice read I looked up 1433. What an interesting year
May 13th, 2023 12:15
Bobby O said:
It’s a nice read I looked up 1433. What an interesting year
May 13th, 2023 12:15
stars and gripes
orchidee said:
You been doing that astronomy course as I have?!
I thought I found a new object in space, but a bird had pooped on me telescope lens!
May 13th, 2023 10:12
orchidee said:
You been doing that astronomy course as I have?!
I thought I found a new object in space, but a bird had pooped on me telescope lens!
May 13th, 2023 10:12
giant\'s demise
Neville said:
I like it as is and think it would be a crying shame to supernosedive and become just another black whole, even if it was heart shaped 🖤
May 12th, 2023 12:53
Neville said:
I like it as is and think it would be a crying shame to supernosedive and become just another black whole, even if it was heart shaped 🖤
May 12th, 2023 12:53
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