Comments received on poems by arqios
letting go: Anton Ego
arqios said:
A film reference no less but for the younger crown and those disposed to animation.
April 15th, 2025 05:56
arqios said:
A film reference no less but for the younger crown and those disposed to animation.
April 15th, 2025 05:56
letting go: Anton Ego
David Wakeling said:
I had flash backs to Master chief\' I find it difficult for someone to judge anothers food.Certainly a well written detailled piece.Excellent work
April 15th, 2025 05:39
David Wakeling said:
I had flash backs to Master chief\' I find it difficult for someone to judge anothers food.Certainly a well written detailled piece.Excellent work
April 15th, 2025 05:39
letting go: Anton Ego
Poetic Licence said:
That reminds me of one of the most brutal forms of journalism, if you can call it that,a food critic, and in he got the result that in his heart he didnt want, it tasted really good, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:32
Poetic Licence said:
That reminds me of one of the most brutal forms of journalism, if you can call it that,a food critic, and in he got the result that in his heart he didnt want, it tasted really good, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:32
letting go: Anton Ego
sorenbarrett said:
What a great story with a moral. The line is so true (elegance does thrive in imperfection) The use of building tension to increase the power of the statement was very well done. Well imaged and structured it is a lovely poem and story
April 15th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
What a great story with a moral. The line is so true (elegance does thrive in imperfection) The use of building tension to increase the power of the statement was very well done. Well imaged and structured it is a lovely poem and story
April 15th, 2025 03:46
midnight courage
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things come into my mind in the wee small hours arqios.
Andy
April 15th, 2025 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things come into my mind in the wee small hours arqios.
Andy
April 15th, 2025 01:49
midnight courage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is often where I exist, my friend. That liminal space between life an death, reality and surreality, where the muse calls on those courageous enough to stay awake past delirium into the magical moments of the crisp, creative, conscious night. Well done on this! Well done! You\'ve described my home! 🖤🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 07:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is often where I exist, my friend. That liminal space between life an death, reality and surreality, where the muse calls on those courageous enough to stay awake past delirium into the magical moments of the crisp, creative, conscious night. Well done on this! Well done! You\'ve described my home! 🖤🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 07:32
midnight courage
David Wakeling said:
The midnight hour. It certainly is a creative time.The poem highlights the creative power of that time of night.Excellent poem.Enjoyed reading
April 14th, 2025 05:43
David Wakeling said:
The midnight hour. It certainly is a creative time.The poem highlights the creative power of that time of night.Excellent poem.Enjoyed reading
April 14th, 2025 05:43
midnight courage
Poetic Licence said:
I do most of writing over the night when the world appears at peace and sometimes accompanied by a libation or two to free the mind, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 04:16
Poetic Licence said:
I do most of writing over the night when the world appears at peace and sometimes accompanied by a libation or two to free the mind, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 04:16
midnight courage
sorenbarrett said:
Ah I know those hours well my friend. So poetically stated in these few lines. Hours where one can write without guilt or being disturbed. Hours stolen from sleep and dreams to put them on paper for others to share. Your word choice is exquisite.
April 14th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Ah I know those hours well my friend. So poetically stated in these few lines. Hours where one can write without guilt or being disturbed. Hours stolen from sleep and dreams to put them on paper for others to share. Your word choice is exquisite.
April 14th, 2025 04:14
midnight courage
orchidee said:
Re your comment: I doubt I will pick up on the thought of much cryptic stuff! lol. Good write A.
April 14th, 2025 03:01
orchidee said:
Re your comment: I doubt I will pick up on the thought of much cryptic stuff! lol. Good write A.
April 14th, 2025 03:01
song to the stars
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios bring joy to all.
Andy
April 14th, 2025 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios bring joy to all.
Andy
April 14th, 2025 01:52
Anton Ego
Kevin Hulme said:
My friend Mr Creosote and I enjoyed your Poem .
Thank you.
April 13th, 2025 19:37
Kevin Hulme said:
My friend Mr Creosote and I enjoyed your Poem .
Thank you.
April 13th, 2025 19:37
song to the stars
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the blending of nursery rhyme and metaphor. This feels like a lullaby sung after the world has moved on—a song for what remains: old stories, natural beauty, and the celestial dust that makes up the cosmos. It is weary but has whimsy; filled with light, yet shadowed by the longing for things once bright and now dimmed in our memories. Or, at least, that is what I get out of it. A brilliant poem and a fave for sure. 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 07:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the blending of nursery rhyme and metaphor. This feels like a lullaby sung after the world has moved on—a song for what remains: old stories, natural beauty, and the celestial dust that makes up the cosmos. It is weary but has whimsy; filled with light, yet shadowed by the longing for things once bright and now dimmed in our memories. Or, at least, that is what I get out of it. A brilliant poem and a fave for sure. 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 07:41
song to the stars
David Wakeling said:
Some childhood memories here with a touch of regret.Always a delight to read your poems mi amigo
April 13th, 2025 05:30
David Wakeling said:
Some childhood memories here with a touch of regret.Always a delight to read your poems mi amigo
April 13th, 2025 05:30
song to the stars
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read for a sunday, mixture of child gone songs and lovely imagery, I am probably completly of the track, but this gave me the feeling of children who are no longer here and are now seen in the stars, enjoyed the read
April 13th, 2025 05:02
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read for a sunday, mixture of child gone songs and lovely imagery, I am probably completly of the track, but this gave me the feeling of children who are no longer here and are now seen in the stars, enjoyed the read
April 13th, 2025 05:02
song to the stars
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images mixed with nursery rhyme tells of deeper meaning and some very nice lines particularly the whole last stanza. Cryptically imaged in the poem is the heavens and what is so obvious becomes metaphor. Very nicely done my firend
April 13th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images mixed with nursery rhyme tells of deeper meaning and some very nice lines particularly the whole last stanza. Cryptically imaged in the poem is the heavens and what is so obvious becomes metaphor. Very nicely done my firend
April 13th, 2025 04:40
celestial threads
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be with us arqios.
Andy
April 13th, 2025 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be with us arqios.
Andy
April 13th, 2025 02:30
celestial threads
David Wakeling said:
I see a poet writing about the universe. Very powerful images here.
April 12th, 2025 16:38
David Wakeling said:
I see a poet writing about the universe. Very powerful images here.
April 12th, 2025 16:38
celestial threads
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully explores the cosmic dance between the universe and human insight, where celestial forces intricately weave stories and memories, encapsulating life\'s profound mysteries. The subject matter beautifully touches upon timeless themes of time, memory, nature, and the cosmic bond that unites all things. The poem may be intended to joyfully celebrate nature\'s breathtaking beauty and the emotional resonance that the changing seasons evoke in the human experience, inviting readers to revel in the awe-inspiring transformations that unfold in the world around them.
April 12th, 2025 11:07
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully explores the cosmic dance between the universe and human insight, where celestial forces intricately weave stories and memories, encapsulating life\'s profound mysteries. The subject matter beautifully touches upon timeless themes of time, memory, nature, and the cosmic bond that unites all things. The poem may be intended to joyfully celebrate nature\'s breathtaking beauty and the emotional resonance that the changing seasons evoke in the human experience, inviting readers to revel in the awe-inspiring transformations that unfold in the world around them.
April 12th, 2025 11:07
celestial threads
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Celestial imagery mixed with the craft of writing verse, the metaphor is profound and beautiful. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
April 12th, 2025 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Celestial imagery mixed with the craft of writing verse, the metaphor is profound and beautiful. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
April 12th, 2025 08:01
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