Comments received on poems by arqios
soul of time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend. Love the word play, how they connect and progress the entire piece. Excellent job! A fave!
May 14th, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend. Love the word play, how they connect and progress the entire piece. Excellent job! A fave!
May 14th, 2025 10:50
to be real
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful retelling! Your words capture the heart of the classic tale, conveying the tender themes of love and what it means to be \"real.\"
May 14th, 2025 09:29
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful retelling! Your words capture the heart of the classic tale, conveying the tender themes of love and what it means to be \"real.\"
May 14th, 2025 09:29
to be real
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia meets the present and births lost feelings of a past filled with memories of a time of faith, belief, love and all those things we wished were true. A most touching and lovely write and a fave
May 14th, 2025 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia meets the present and births lost feelings of a past filled with memories of a time of faith, belief, love and all those things we wished were true. A most touching and lovely write and a fave
May 14th, 2025 06:35
soul of time
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stories bring memories and wonder to all our lives arqios.
Andy
May 14th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stories bring memories and wonder to all our lives arqios.
Andy
May 14th, 2025 01:25
soul of time
David Wakeling said:
This is very Shakesperean. I see a medieval minstrel with a lute entertaining the king. Wonderful poem about the power of stories to go forever.
May 13th, 2025 04:52
David Wakeling said:
This is very Shakesperean. I see a medieval minstrel with a lute entertaining the king. Wonderful poem about the power of stories to go forever.
May 13th, 2025 04:52
soul of time
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful wording encapsulates a most important message that of storytelling and poetry. This even flow gains a fave
May 13th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful wording encapsulates a most important message that of storytelling and poetry. This even flow gains a fave
May 13th, 2025 04:03
soul of time
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely gentle write, which flows so natural, a poet\'s strain, I fear not, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 03:31
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely gentle write, which flows so natural, a poet\'s strain, I fear not, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 03:31
velveteen quietude
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, let us all waltz together in our world.
Andy
May 13th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, let us all waltz together in our world.
Andy
May 13th, 2025 01:25
velveteen quietude
Neilton said:
First of all what an amazing title I didn\'t even know these words existed ! As for the poem it\'s amazing with excellent imagery
May 13th, 2025 00:59
Neilton said:
First of all what an amazing title I didn\'t even know these words existed ! As for the poem it\'s amazing with excellent imagery
May 13th, 2025 00:59
momEntary deEp
NafisaSB said:
beautiful. this is definitely a message of hope and love in the journey of life
enjoyed it
May 12th, 2025 23:59
NafisaSB said:
beautiful. this is definitely a message of hope and love in the journey of life
enjoyed it
May 12th, 2025 23:59
velveteen quietude
Cheeky Missy said:
I wonder nobody favorited this, it is so exquisite and lovely, akin almost to a benediction, yet not, a lullaby of sorts, a soothing meditation which takes the unconscious soul to those higher realms we instinctively yearned to ascend to, whereat we sigh. Very, very gorgeous. I love it. Deliciously rendered with beautiful imagery and a soothing poignancy. Thank you so VERY much for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 18:47
Cheeky Missy said:
I wonder nobody favorited this, it is so exquisite and lovely, akin almost to a benediction, yet not, a lullaby of sorts, a soothing meditation which takes the unconscious soul to those higher realms we instinctively yearned to ascend to, whereat we sigh. Very, very gorgeous. I love it. Deliciously rendered with beautiful imagery and a soothing poignancy. Thank you so VERY much for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 18:47
velveteen quietude
MLHnow said:
So beautiful bringing much to the heart and soul. I love how you apply rhyme rhythm and each word speaks here as a gift thank you!
Write more!
May 12th, 2025 12:49
MLHnow said:
So beautiful bringing much to the heart and soul. I love how you apply rhyme rhythm and each word speaks here as a gift thank you!
Write more!
May 12th, 2025 12:49
velveteen quietude
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This title reminded me of the \"Velveteen Rabbit.\" Used to love that story as a kid. What a.wonderful and dream-like poem. 🌹👏
May 12th, 2025 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This title reminded me of the \"Velveteen Rabbit.\" Used to love that story as a kid. What a.wonderful and dream-like poem. 🌹👏
May 12th, 2025 08:40
velveteen quietude
arqios said:
Halfway is neither here nor there.... as long as it keeps going forward...
May 12th, 2025 07:20
arqios said:
Halfway is neither here nor there.... as long as it keeps going forward...
May 12th, 2025 07:20
velveteen quietude
David Wakeling said:
a masterpiece of rhyme cadence and theme. So many vivid images created here from velvet haze to grand waltz.Wonderful.
May 12th, 2025 06:54
David Wakeling said:
a masterpiece of rhyme cadence and theme. So many vivid images created here from velvet haze to grand waltz.Wonderful.
May 12th, 2025 06:54
velveteen quietude
MDStone said:
“In this grand waltz”, I feel as though I watched it in the hushed moments. The tune, the very precise movements, the elegance, and the grace. Thank you, Arqios for sharing this piece. It was a splendid performance.
May 12th, 2025 05:36
MDStone said:
“In this grand waltz”, I feel as though I watched it in the hushed moments. The tune, the very precise movements, the elegance, and the grace. Thank you, Arqios for sharing this piece. It was a splendid performance.
May 12th, 2025 05:36
velveteen quietude
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in gentle waves turns upon itself rocking the reader into a hypnotic trance. Its revolving lines like those waves return. Very nicely done Cryptic
May 12th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in gentle waves turns upon itself rocking the reader into a hypnotic trance. Its revolving lines like those waves return. Very nicely done Cryptic
May 12th, 2025 04:05
velveteen quietude
Poetic Licence said:
That has a wonderful calming feel as you read through, lovely start to the week, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 04:04
Poetic Licence said:
That has a wonderful calming feel as you read through, lovely start to the week, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 04:04
momEntary deEp
John Prophet said:
Your words dance off the page. Well done.
John
May 11th, 2025 21:25
John Prophet said:
Your words dance off the page. Well done.
John
May 11th, 2025 21:25
momEntary deEp
Tony Grannell said:
Powerful observations and yet rendered forth with eloquent poetry with a style to enrapture any reader. A poem to linger on in the mind well after the reading. You have a great talent. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
May 11th, 2025 08:06
Tony Grannell said:
Powerful observations and yet rendered forth with eloquent poetry with a style to enrapture any reader. A poem to linger on in the mind well after the reading. You have a great talent. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
May 11th, 2025 08:06
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