Comments received on poems by arqios
what we\'ll always be
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh me! To read this delicacy aloud, as poetry is to be properly treated, is an experience which seems to cull swooning, until I nearly faint in concluding. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it.
May 28th, 2025 15:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh me! To read this delicacy aloud, as poetry is to be properly treated, is an experience which seems to cull swooning, until I nearly faint in concluding. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it.
May 28th, 2025 15:39
hair in the wind
NafisaSB said:
beautiful description and a different take on an old nursery rhyme. enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 01:41
NafisaSB said:
beautiful description and a different take on an old nursery rhyme. enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 01:41
beautiful regret
NafisaSB said:
such a tender and beautiful message - love does forgive and overlook a lot , especially in the first bloom of love - later it learns to forgive too..
May 28th, 2025 01:19
NafisaSB said:
such a tender and beautiful message - love does forgive and overlook a lot , especially in the first bloom of love - later it learns to forgive too..
May 28th, 2025 01:19
what we\'ll always be
MendedFences27 said:
In those unspoken moments, \"the language of skin,\" promises are made that must be kept. The wind does not forget. Your poem explicates the intimacy of lovers; the communication made without words. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 27th, 2025 14:01
MendedFences27 said:
In those unspoken moments, \"the language of skin,\" promises are made that must be kept. The wind does not forget. Your poem explicates the intimacy of lovers; the communication made without words. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 27th, 2025 14:01
beautiful regret
RSM0812 said:
I especially liked \"in the spaces where breath is safe\". Great write.
May 27th, 2025 08:46
RSM0812 said:
I especially liked \"in the spaces where breath is safe\". Great write.
May 27th, 2025 08:46
what we\'ll always be
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece my friend , i can absolutely relate to a time that once was and that will forever be etched in my heart mind and echo of a particular persons touch , love it
May 27th, 2025 08:30
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece my friend , i can absolutely relate to a time that once was and that will forever be etched in my heart mind and echo of a particular persons touch , love it
May 27th, 2025 08:30
what we\'ll always be
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic your poems are always filled with deeper meaning and this one required three readings to peel away layers. There is a haunting but ephemeral feel to this poem that reaches out from the shadows and takes the hand of the reader. It begs for another reading and further enlightenment. There are great lines here (The wind carries whispers too fragile to hold) and whole stanzas the like honey are viscous each word pulling one to the next. In each reading new meaning appears and that is the measure of a great work of art. Loved it a fave
May 27th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic your poems are always filled with deeper meaning and this one required three readings to peel away layers. There is a haunting but ephemeral feel to this poem that reaches out from the shadows and takes the hand of the reader. It begs for another reading and further enlightenment. There are great lines here (The wind carries whispers too fragile to hold) and whole stanzas the like honey are viscous each word pulling one to the next. In each reading new meaning appears and that is the measure of a great work of art. Loved it a fave
May 27th, 2025 04:39
what we\'ll always be
David Wakeling said:
This reads so elegantly. I see two people who love each other communicating with touch. An enjoyable read compadre
May 27th, 2025 04:15
David Wakeling said:
This reads so elegantly. I see two people who love each other communicating with touch. An enjoyable read compadre
May 27th, 2025 04:15
what we\'ll always be
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t grasp the \'always\', the moment felt sufficient for me.
May 27th, 2025 02:38
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t grasp the \'always\', the moment felt sufficient for me.
May 27th, 2025 02:38
what we\'ll always be
Poetic Licence said:
What we always be, that\'s a fighting thought, have a great week
May 27th, 2025 02:34
Poetic Licence said:
What we always be, that\'s a fighting thought, have a great week
May 27th, 2025 02:34
what we\'ll always be
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios showing us that the smallest things in our lives can bring such pleasure.
Andy
May 27th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios showing us that the smallest things in our lives can bring such pleasure.
Andy
May 27th, 2025 01:48
beautiful regret
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once came across the idea that the past can be changed. It\'s one of the most challenging ideas I\'ve ever heard.
May 26th, 2025 19:13
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once came across the idea that the past can be changed. It\'s one of the most challenging ideas I\'ve ever heard.
May 26th, 2025 19:13
beautiful regret
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful description of one of the aspects of love. Your colorful phrasings, \" where breath is safe, time learns to forgive,\" are particularly poignant. Your poem is a gentle and soft way of expressing loves power. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2025 13:53
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful description of one of the aspects of love. Your colorful phrasings, \" where breath is safe, time learns to forgive,\" are particularly poignant. Your poem is a gentle and soft way of expressing loves power. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2025 13:53
con un beso (with a kiss)
twistedlogicx said:
i love this poem, it is so sweet and intimate
May 26th, 2025 10:56
twistedlogicx said:
i love this poem, it is so sweet and intimate
May 26th, 2025 10:56
beautiful regret
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem hits me because I know it well. It is 💯 relatable and true on a profound level. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem hits me because I know it well. It is 💯 relatable and true on a profound level. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 10:52
con un beso (with a kiss)
RSM0812 said:
A lovely write. Great imagery here. \"To dry my tears with a kiss\". 😀
May 26th, 2025 09:01
RSM0812 said:
A lovely write. Great imagery here. \"To dry my tears with a kiss\". 😀
May 26th, 2025 09:01
beautiful regret
David Wakeling said:
Some powerful wisdom here . I can\'t really say I ever found Love but I can see the power and beauty of forgiveness.Made think deeply.well done
May 26th, 2025 04:30
David Wakeling said:
Some powerful wisdom here . I can\'t really say I ever found Love but I can see the power and beauty of forgiveness.Made think deeply.well done
May 26th, 2025 04:30
beautiful regret
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of tender feeling and even deeper thought that rolls of the tongue in this poem. A fave
May 26th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of tender feeling and even deeper thought that rolls of the tongue in this poem. A fave
May 26th, 2025 03:58
beautiful regret
Poetic Licence said:
That is a wonderful thought, biding it\'s time, lovely write
May 26th, 2025 02:54
Poetic Licence said:
That is a wonderful thought, biding it\'s time, lovely write
May 26th, 2025 02:54
beautiful regret
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem aches with quiet wisdom—
love’s presence lingers, not to heal, but to hold
the tender weight of what cannot be undone.
May 26th, 2025 02:26
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem aches with quiet wisdom—
love’s presence lingers, not to heal, but to hold
the tender weight of what cannot be undone.
May 26th, 2025 02:26
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