Comments received on poems by arqios
\"the question\"
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, arqios. The illustration captures that moment when you are handed something wonderful,
August 24th, 2025 07:59
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, arqios. The illustration captures that moment when you are handed something wonderful,
August 24th, 2025 07:59
\"the question\"
sorenbarrett said:
You have captured in words the moment and excitement of the hunt. It is not the trophy but the thrill of the tracking the tension of looking sensing not the trigger pull. This poem is so sensitive to the process and so well worded that it deserves a fave
August 24th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
You have captured in words the moment and excitement of the hunt. It is not the trophy but the thrill of the tracking the tension of looking sensing not the trigger pull. This poem is so sensitive to the process and so well worded that it deserves a fave
August 24th, 2025 05:06
\"the question\"
Demar Desu said:
I like the picture… I wish I had three hands
August 24th, 2025 04:38
Demar Desu said:
I like the picture… I wish I had three hands
August 24th, 2025 04:38
\"the question\"
arqios said:
There’s a certain kind of writing that isn’t about endings at all, but about the breath that happens in the middle of making something , the part where thought loosens, where sound and sense lean toward each other, and where the act of shaping words feels as alive as the thing being shaped. This piece lingers in that space, catching the quiet voltage between attention and arrival. It’s an invitation to listen in.
August 24th, 2025 04:37
arqios said:
There’s a certain kind of writing that isn’t about endings at all, but about the breath that happens in the middle of making something , the part where thought loosens, where sound and sense lean toward each other, and where the act of shaping words feels as alive as the thing being shaped. This piece lingers in that space, catching the quiet voltage between attention and arrival. It’s an invitation to listen in.
August 24th, 2025 04:37
public square, Grote Markt Bruxelles
Neville said:
I\'ve been there .. literally & as a kid too .. very impressed with todays gift arquis .. cryptic is as cryptic woz as me Mam used to say .. & me DAD but less often :)
August 24th, 2025 03:29
Neville said:
I\'ve been there .. literally & as a kid too .. very impressed with todays gift arquis .. cryptic is as cryptic woz as me Mam used to say .. & me DAD but less often :)
August 24th, 2025 03:29
public square, Grote Markt Bruxelles
Cheeky Missy said:
While there seems to be a ghost of beauty haunting, the more ghastly and macabre reality playing out routinely overrides this coldly. Beautifully rendered in delicate and deliciously eloquent simplicity with a cruel poignancy haunting. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 23rd, 2025 18:24
Cheeky Missy said:
While there seems to be a ghost of beauty haunting, the more ghastly and macabre reality playing out routinely overrides this coldly. Beautifully rendered in delicate and deliciously eloquent simplicity with a cruel poignancy haunting. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 23rd, 2025 18:24
public square, Grote Markt Bruxelles
arqios said:
It’s a bit on the vague surrealistic side but glad you’ve taken it on🕊🙏🏻
August 23rd, 2025 07:49
arqios said:
It’s a bit on the vague surrealistic side but glad you’ve taken it on🕊🙏🏻
August 23rd, 2025 07:49
public square, Grote Markt Bruxelles
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Beautifully written, quietly powerful with strong, clear imagery.
August 23rd, 2025 07:16
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Beautifully written, quietly powerful with strong, clear imagery.
August 23rd, 2025 07:16
public square, Grote Markt Bruxelles
sorenbarrett said:
At first puzzled, I reach inside, a child in ignorance searches sounds, signs hard rocks, amidst the noise the inner child sits protected. Not much of an interpretation but it is all I\'ve got mate
August 23rd, 2025 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
At first puzzled, I reach inside, a child in ignorance searches sounds, signs hard rocks, amidst the noise the inner child sits protected. Not much of an interpretation but it is all I\'ve got mate
August 23rd, 2025 06:53
public square, Grote Markt Bruxelles
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, arqios. A cautionary illustration: when everybody goes in the same direction, it can\'t end well.
August 23rd, 2025 06:47
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, arqios. A cautionary illustration: when everybody goes in the same direction, it can\'t end well.
August 23rd, 2025 06:47
moreton mirror
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
What a beautiful poem!!!!
The way you have connected the imagery of the bay, mangroves and the tide to describe the connection between 2 strangers is stunning. Well done!!
August 23rd, 2025 03:23
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
What a beautiful poem!!!!
The way you have connected the imagery of the bay, mangroves and the tide to describe the connection between 2 strangers is stunning. Well done!!
August 23rd, 2025 03:23
moreton mirror
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Rik, we all eventually go home.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Rik, we all eventually go home.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:24
moreton mirror
Kevin Hulme said:
Could be a story from the \'Twilight Zone\'.
A lot to think about. Good one.
August 22nd, 2025 19:11
Kevin Hulme said:
Could be a story from the \'Twilight Zone\'.
A lot to think about. Good one.
August 22nd, 2025 19:11
moreton mirror
Cheeky Missy said:
This frankly is intriguing, the seeming acquaintance more of a ghost than tangible, if I comprehend your lines. Curious and haunting, excellently rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a lingering poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 22nd, 2025 09:00
Cheeky Missy said:
This frankly is intriguing, the seeming acquaintance more of a ghost than tangible, if I comprehend your lines. Curious and haunting, excellently rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a lingering poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 22nd, 2025 09:00
moreton mirror
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, arqios. Great illustration.
August 22nd, 2025 08:07
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, arqios. Great illustration.
August 22nd, 2025 08:07
moreton mirror
arqios said:
Set on Brisbane’s river edge, Moreton Mirror drifts from a simple meeting at the ferry pier into something far more uncanny. With imagery steeped in tide, mangrove, and jacaranda, it folds the landscape into a portrait of connection (or reflection ) that hopefully lingers long after the last line.
August 22nd, 2025 07:02
arqios said:
Set on Brisbane’s river edge, Moreton Mirror drifts from a simple meeting at the ferry pier into something far more uncanny. With imagery steeped in tide, mangrove, and jacaranda, it folds the landscape into a portrait of connection (or reflection ) that hopefully lingers long after the last line.
August 22nd, 2025 07:02
moreton mirror
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t we all have this mirror image the reverse reflection of ourselves that we sometimes recognize in others, some of whom become shadows. A lovely write. Cryptic and deserving of a fave
August 22nd, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t we all have this mirror image the reverse reflection of ourselves that we sometimes recognize in others, some of whom become shadows. A lovely write. Cryptic and deserving of a fave
August 22nd, 2025 04:42
eye of the beholder
Goldfinch60 said:
We each make our own world within us Rik so we are all unique.
Andy
August 22nd, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
We each make our own world within us Rik so we are all unique.
Andy
August 22nd, 2025 01:24
we meet again, mid-sentence
Kevin Hulme said:
Sometimes a lot is said in such simple way.
Good one.
August 21st, 2025 19:16
Kevin Hulme said:
Sometimes a lot is said in such simple way.
Good one.
August 21st, 2025 19:16
eye of the beholder
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, arqious. Simply beautiful.
August 21st, 2025 08:23
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, arqious. Simply beautiful.
August 21st, 2025 08:23
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