Comments received on poems by arqios
the baron declares
sorenbarrett said:
Like the memory and story with some word play. Grueling was a great one reminiscent of gruel that goes well with the table. The fantastic exploits beyond belief are filed away as the exaggerations we all experience from fishermen to all that tell us of there exploits with poetic license. Great fun my friend and another fave
June 6th, 2026 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Like the memory and story with some word play. Grueling was a great one reminiscent of gruel that goes well with the table. The fantastic exploits beyond belief are filed away as the exaggerations we all experience from fishermen to all that tell us of there exploits with poetic license. Great fun my friend and another fave
June 6th, 2026 05:58
let the shadows drift
Mutley Ravishes said:
Daring to dream, and then working (with a lot of help from \"someone\"!) to see it materialize is a trip and a half, isn`t it? I`ve found all the \"seven sins\" are called in to play their parts in this work. Those \"parts\" being (necessary) opposition to the materialization of the dreams! What do you think?
Great write, Arqios.
June 6th, 2026 00:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
Daring to dream, and then working (with a lot of help from \"someone\"!) to see it materialize is a trip and a half, isn`t it? I`ve found all the \"seven sins\" are called in to play their parts in this work. Those \"parts\" being (necessary) opposition to the materialization of the dreams! What do you think?
Great write, Arqios.
June 6th, 2026 00:17
let the shadows drift
Kevin Hulme said:
I get the feeling this is something that\'s Sustains us through the Ages . Hope maybe.
June 5th, 2026 19:44
Kevin Hulme said:
I get the feeling this is something that\'s Sustains us through the Ages . Hope maybe.
June 5th, 2026 19:44
10-4 coded shouts
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t think I ever owned a proper kite. Twigs and paper, string and wind was all you needed.
Then they invented girls and the world changed forever.
June 5th, 2026 10:24
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t think I ever owned a proper kite. Twigs and paper, string and wind was all you needed.
Then they invented girls and the world changed forever.
June 5th, 2026 10:24
let the shadows drift
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good advice well written
June 5th, 2026 07:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good advice well written
June 5th, 2026 07:51
let the shadows drift
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I found myself thinking about ideas, communities, and even people while reading this. Things can be forgotten, overlooked, or tested, yet somehow persist because others continue to carry them forward. I really enjoyed that aspect of the poem. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I found myself thinking about ideas, communities, and even people while reading this. Things can be forgotten, overlooked, or tested, yet somehow persist because others continue to carry them forward. I really enjoyed that aspect of the poem. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:31
let the shadows drift
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about human aspiration.Wanting more that Life can give.And so let the shadows drift because in the end you make your own destiny.I could br wrong here but that\'s life.
June 5th, 2026 05:35
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about human aspiration.Wanting more that Life can give.And so let the shadows drift because in the end you make your own destiny.I could br wrong here but that\'s life.
June 5th, 2026 05:35
let the shadows drift
sorenbarrett said:
Ideals and idols come and go just as shadows pass but one is always left with oneself. Let that light shine and cast its own shadows. Well written my friend
June 5th, 2026 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Ideals and idols come and go just as shadows pass but one is always left with oneself. Let that light shine and cast its own shadows. Well written my friend
June 5th, 2026 05:30
10-4 coded shouts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this took me right back to that strange season of life where everything feels urgent and alive. Friends become entire worlds, every day feels important, and you are constantly reaching toward something just beyond your grasp. This resonated with me. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this took me right back to that strange season of life where everything feels urgent and alive. Friends become entire worlds, every day feels important, and you are constantly reaching toward something just beyond your grasp. This resonated with me. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:11
the price of looking
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really moved me. I love how the poem refuses to frame love purely as suffering or sacrifice. Instead, it embraces the cost willingly. There is tenderness and devotion here, but also a quiet acceptance that beauty is rarely free. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really moved me. I love how the poem refuses to frame love purely as suffering or sacrifice. Instead, it embraces the cost willingly. There is tenderness and devotion here, but also a quiet acceptance that beauty is rarely free. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:11
10-4 coded shouts
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
deep write my friend, much enjoyed
June 4th, 2026 06:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
deep write my friend, much enjoyed
June 4th, 2026 06:53
10-4 coded shouts
sorenbarrett said:
This one seemed to me Cryptic a series of connected snapshots of not only action but emotion and something beyond. There seems a theme of connection and the whole poem is filled with excitement and urgency. Lovely my friend
June 4th, 2026 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
This one seemed to me Cryptic a series of connected snapshots of not only action but emotion and something beyond. There seems a theme of connection and the whole poem is filled with excitement and urgency. Lovely my friend
June 4th, 2026 06:50
the price of looking
Shah Asst said:
A bittersweet reflection on love and pain, similar thoughts can be found on motivationshayari.com
June 4th, 2026 04:56
Shah Asst said:
A bittersweet reflection on love and pain, similar thoughts can be found on motivationshayari.com
June 4th, 2026 04:56
the price of looking
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is within most of us Rik but many do not realise this.
Andy
June 4th, 2026 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is within most of us Rik but many do not realise this.
Andy
June 4th, 2026 00:46
the price of looking
Kevin Hulme said:
You often hear of Someone who is Beautiful but Terrible to live with. You last lines are sadly true. Good Write.
June 3rd, 2026 19:45
Kevin Hulme said:
You often hear of Someone who is Beautiful but Terrible to live with. You last lines are sadly true. Good Write.
June 3rd, 2026 19:45
the price of looking
orchidee said:
I don\'t suppose I will get the message, if it\'s anything cryptic! lol. Good write A.
June 3rd, 2026 11:44
orchidee said:
I don\'t suppose I will get the message, if it\'s anything cryptic! lol. Good write A.
June 3rd, 2026 11:44
the price of looking
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
it does indeed get across, fine write
June 3rd, 2026 10:32
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
it does indeed get across, fine write
June 3rd, 2026 10:32
the price of looking
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem captures the essence of love as both a beautiful and challenging experience, resonating with anyone who has navigated similar feelings.
June 3rd, 2026 07:42
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem captures the essence of love as both a beautiful and challenging experience, resonating with anyone who has navigated similar feelings.
June 3rd, 2026 07:42
the price of looking
sorenbarrett said:
Many look for physical beauty in searching for a mate this often comes with a price of living with a undeveloped inner self, egocentrism, pride, infantile qualities. The first thought that I had when reading the title was the price of admission when entering an art gallery or theater, a music festival, or museum. Beauty costs even in the effort of its owner to maintain it. Workouts, diet, with a car or house maintenance a yard or garden. Even a painting needs periodic cleaning and care. A poem itself needs periodic readings by someone or its beauty is lost. Nicely done Cryptic a strong message and warning to any that wish to possess beauty
June 3rd, 2026 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
Many look for physical beauty in searching for a mate this often comes with a price of living with a undeveloped inner self, egocentrism, pride, infantile qualities. The first thought that I had when reading the title was the price of admission when entering an art gallery or theater, a music festival, or museum. Beauty costs even in the effort of its owner to maintain it. Workouts, diet, with a car or house maintenance a yard or garden. Even a painting needs periodic cleaning and care. A poem itself needs periodic readings by someone or its beauty is lost. Nicely done Cryptic a strong message and warning to any that wish to possess beauty
June 3rd, 2026 06:22
the shadows that follow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really spoke to me. There is something quietly uplifting here...the sense of moving forward despite resistance. In just a few lines, you capture motion, determination, and perspective all at once. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 21:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really spoke to me. There is something quietly uplifting here...the sense of moving forward despite resistance. In just a few lines, you capture motion, determination, and perspective all at once. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 21:33
the shadows that follow
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful scene painted here in words.It reminds how much fun can be had flying a kite.Well written
June 2nd, 2026 20:53
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful scene painted here in words.It reminds how much fun can be had flying a kite.Well written
June 2nd, 2026 20:53
the shadows that follow
Kevin Hulme said:
So many meanings. The Person moving into the Wind (Future). The Shadow the Past.
June 2nd, 2026 18:36
Kevin Hulme said:
So many meanings. The Person moving into the Wind (Future). The Shadow the Past.
June 2nd, 2026 18:36
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