Comments received on poems by arqios
abandonee
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, lovely piece
October 12th, 2026 07:14
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, lovely piece
October 12th, 2026 07:14
abandonee
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message in this poem my friend. One only depends on oneself for company and joy. Don\'t march to the step of the troops but to one\'s own tune and one will never be lonely or sad. Nicely done
October 12th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message in this poem my friend. One only depends on oneself for company and joy. Don\'t march to the step of the troops but to one\'s own tune and one will never be lonely or sad. Nicely done
October 12th, 2026 06:52
matilda to the coast
Paul Bell said:
I suppose in a way, Austrailia benifited from prisoners from Britain.
You sort of can\'t get it into your mind that someone who stole a loaf of bread could be shipped out to serve a sentence.
In saying that, all my ancesters came from Australia. lol
October 12th, 2026 05:52
Paul Bell said:
I suppose in a way, Austrailia benifited from prisoners from Britain.
You sort of can\'t get it into your mind that someone who stole a loaf of bread could be shipped out to serve a sentence.
In saying that, all my ancesters came from Australia. lol
October 12th, 2026 05:52
matilda to the coast
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Those boots got to me, Rik…such a young person to have been through so much already. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2026 23:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Those boots got to me, Rik…such a young person to have been through so much already. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2026 23:07
matilda to the coast
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
An horrendous affair. \'Civilised\' do gooders doing what they do best, adulterating the minds, hearts and freedoms of those poor honest souls of blue skies to grey cobblestons. This is a poem well worth reading, as an Irish man,I found it heartbreaking as it is relative. A superlative passage of poetry. Thank you very much.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 11th, 2026 16:09
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
An horrendous affair. \'Civilised\' do gooders doing what they do best, adulterating the minds, hearts and freedoms of those poor honest souls of blue skies to grey cobblestons. This is a poem well worth reading, as an Irish man,I found it heartbreaking as it is relative. A superlative passage of poetry. Thank you very much.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 11th, 2026 16:09
matilda to the coast
orchidee said:
Good write A. Yes, criminals deported to Australia from the UK in olden days. \'Why send us your rubbish?\' do you reply there?! lol.
October 11th, 2026 10:04
orchidee said:
Good write A. Yes, criminals deported to Australia from the UK in olden days. \'Why send us your rubbish?\' do you reply there?! lol.
October 11th, 2026 10:04
matilda to the coast
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a much enjoyed and epic journey
October 11th, 2026 07:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a much enjoyed and epic journey
October 11th, 2026 07:53
matilda to the coast
sorenbarrett said:
Epic and historical in its implications it dives deep into psychology, culture and social manipulation to tell a tale of man\'s need for conformity. The history of the American Indian, the Australian bushman, Africans and many others adopted into a new culture as well as those captured and raised in a foreign culture and redeemed. Even feral children brought back to society often die or at best find it hard to adapt. A most wonderful write my friend that has implications even for those raised in society with different values and upbringing. This poem deserves far greater exposure. A fave
October 11th, 2026 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Epic and historical in its implications it dives deep into psychology, culture and social manipulation to tell a tale of man\'s need for conformity. The history of the American Indian, the Australian bushman, Africans and many others adopted into a new culture as well as those captured and raised in a foreign culture and redeemed. Even feral children brought back to society often die or at best find it hard to adapt. A most wonderful write my friend that has implications even for those raised in society with different values and upbringing. This poem deserves far greater exposure. A fave
October 11th, 2026 06:11
weaving dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, you’ve talked me into calling it a night…though now I want a teddy before I go! Great write, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 22:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, you’ve talked me into calling it a night…though now I want a teddy before I go! Great write, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 22:07
weaving dreams
Doggerel Dave said:
Insomnia at night, sleep all day. I have hopes that your short enough to remeber poem may be the first step to righting the situation...
October 10th, 2026 18:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Insomnia at night, sleep all day. I have hopes that your short enough to remeber poem may be the first step to righting the situation...
October 10th, 2026 18:39
weaving dreams
Kevin Hulme said:
The Annoying thing about Dreams is how they slip from the Memory when waking.
A good short Write.
October 10th, 2026 14:54
Kevin Hulme said:
The Annoying thing about Dreams is how they slip from the Memory when waking.
A good short Write.
October 10th, 2026 14:54
weaving dreams
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
In snoring dreams and all is well with the world, the epitome of serenity. I\'m quite relaxed, myself after the reading. A lovely poem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 10th, 2026 06:28
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
In snoring dreams and all is well with the world, the epitome of serenity. I\'m quite relaxed, myself after the reading. A lovely poem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 10th, 2026 06:28
weaving dreams
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Dreams, our ultimate entertainment , be they good or bad
October 10th, 2026 06:02
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Dreams, our ultimate entertainment , be they good or bad
October 10th, 2026 06:02
weaving dreams
sorenbarrett said:
We all become children again in dreams and the soft covers of a bed where time has no meaning. A mother\'s loving embrace resurrected in night\'s shadows. This poem is tender and comforting. I loved particularly the first stanza where your poetic imagery breaks the silence like a snore. The last line \"to ruffle night\'s silence\" is marvelous and caught my attention right away. Well done my friend.
October 10th, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
We all become children again in dreams and the soft covers of a bed where time has no meaning. A mother\'s loving embrace resurrected in night\'s shadows. This poem is tender and comforting. I loved particularly the first stanza where your poetic imagery breaks the silence like a snore. The last line \"to ruffle night\'s silence\" is marvelous and caught my attention right away. Well done my friend.
October 10th, 2026 05:54
dry creek theory
Kevin Hulme said:
\'What leaves is not always lost\' etc is such a good way of putting Something that can live on.
A good Write.
October 9th, 2026 18:46
Kevin Hulme said:
\'What leaves is not always lost\' etc is such a good way of putting Something that can live on.
A good Write.
October 9th, 2026 18:46
dry creek theory
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, I love when someone reads something in my work that I hadn’t consciously put there. Makes me want to sit down and hear them out. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 11:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, I love when someone reads something in my work that I hadn’t consciously put there. Makes me want to sit down and hear them out. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 11:48
a band on knee
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, you\'ve really outdone yourself with this one! 🤣 I\'m trying to imagine the logistics of getting an entire jazz ensemble strapped to someone\'s leg. Talk about a knee-slapping performance! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, you\'ve really outdone yourself with this one! 🤣 I\'m trying to imagine the logistics of getting an entire jazz ensemble strapped to someone\'s leg. Talk about a knee-slapping performance! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 09:49
dry creek theory
orchidee said:
Good write A. Doh! A fancy notice said \'Shop closed due to ingress of water\'. Ingress?! Just say the darn place is flooded! lol.
They could have added \'We\'ll be open again when the water has egressed\'. Meanwhile, no one\'s got the foggiest idea of what\'s going on, cos there\'s a word we don\'t hear every day! lol.
October 9th, 2026 09:24
orchidee said:
Good write A. Doh! A fancy notice said \'Shop closed due to ingress of water\'. Ingress?! Just say the darn place is flooded! lol.
They could have added \'We\'ll be open again when the water has egressed\'. Meanwhile, no one\'s got the foggiest idea of what\'s going on, cos there\'s a word we don\'t hear every day! lol.
October 9th, 2026 09:24
dry creek theory
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderfully deep and thoughtful piece my friend
October 9th, 2026 06:31
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderfully deep and thoughtful piece my friend
October 9th, 2026 06:31
dry creek theory
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous metaphor here Cryptic yes poems like water sink over time underground but like that sentence found in the minds of a reader held incomplete. They are caried and find their way into new water where there was only dust. Anonymous, nameless they remain in the human consciousness completed by others and carried on to surface as new water. That water that once flowed in creeks gone underground and forgotten remains, evaporates and rains again to continually flow. The same water nameless but immortal. A fave my friend
October 9th, 2026 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous metaphor here Cryptic yes poems like water sink over time underground but like that sentence found in the minds of a reader held incomplete. They are caried and find their way into new water where there was only dust. Anonymous, nameless they remain in the human consciousness completed by others and carried on to surface as new water. That water that once flowed in creeks gone underground and forgotten remains, evaporates and rains again to continually flow. The same water nameless but immortal. A fave my friend
October 9th, 2026 06:09
a band on knee
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed the Write. Not letting things get him down by playing Music. \'Without Music, Life would be a Mistake\'. As a Philosopher once said . Who\'s name escapes me.
October 8th, 2026 19:07
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed the Write. Not letting things get him down by playing Music. \'Without Music, Life would be a Mistake\'. As a Philosopher once said . Who\'s name escapes me.
October 8th, 2026 19:07
a band on knee
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
Light and bright with a delicious play on words. The fellow is to be admired, from loneliness to that great companion - music. Well done, magical.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 8th, 2026 15:01
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
Light and bright with a delicious play on words. The fellow is to be admired, from loneliness to that great companion - music. Well done, magical.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 8th, 2026 15:01
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