Comments received on poems by arqios
sleep on it
sorenbarrett said:
One does not need to go far to find the most important answers. A most beautiful poem of truth and inner warmth and safety as well as what is of most value. Nicely done Cryptic
May 16th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
One does not need to go far to find the most important answers. A most beautiful poem of truth and inner warmth and safety as well as what is of most value. Nicely done Cryptic
May 16th, 2025 04:16
starshift
Goldfinch60 said:
Stars are are the holes in heavens floor arqios.
Andy
May 16th, 2025 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Stars are are the holes in heavens floor arqios.
Andy
May 16th, 2025 01:52
starshift
vicecream said:
LOVE THIS!! SO MUCH TO THINK ABOUT AND FEEL INTO HERE but so subtle at the same time
May 15th, 2025 11:56
vicecream said:
LOVE THIS!! SO MUCH TO THINK ABOUT AND FEEL INTO HERE but so subtle at the same time
May 15th, 2025 11:56
starshift
orchidee said:
Now lookie here, website - \"I told you I was human - accept this comment, at my second attempt at posting it!\" lol.
As I was saying before I was cut orf - Good write A. Also probably - stellar aberration and parallax, etc - wot SB said! :)
May 15th, 2025 11:33
orchidee said:
Now lookie here, website - \"I told you I was human - accept this comment, at my second attempt at posting it!\" lol.
As I was saying before I was cut orf - Good write A. Also probably - stellar aberration and parallax, etc - wot SB said! :)
May 15th, 2025 11:33
starshift
Poetic Licence said:
Under the watchful gaze of the stars we and the world move on, for better or worse, enjoyed the read
May 15th, 2025 06:23
Poetic Licence said:
Under the watchful gaze of the stars we and the world move on, for better or worse, enjoyed the read
May 15th, 2025 06:23
starshift
sorenbarrett said:
Stellar aberration and parallax a metaphor for an internal shift is a great metaphor for change. Very nice Cryptic
May 15th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Stellar aberration and parallax a metaphor for an internal shift is a great metaphor for change. Very nice Cryptic
May 15th, 2025 05:45
to be real
Poetic Licence said:
I do not know this story, I read the write as the past meeting the present igniting feelings we had in younger days, that sadly are no longer true however much we wished they were, I found it very enjoyable
May 14th, 2025 23:21
Poetic Licence said:
I do not know this story, I read the write as the past meeting the present igniting feelings we had in younger days, that sadly are no longer true however much we wished they were, I found it very enjoyable
May 14th, 2025 23:21
to be real
arqios said:
Forgive the cat, it may confuse some... it was not meant to be the rabbit or replace it either.
May 14th, 2025 21:25
arqios said:
Forgive the cat, it may confuse some... it was not meant to be the rabbit or replace it either.
May 14th, 2025 21:25
to be real
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, my friend…what you’ve done here is more than revisit a childhood tale—you’ve rekindled its soul. This reads like a conversation between Skin Horse and the reader, and I feel deeply honored that our exchange played even a small part in this poem’s becoming. Lines like “shabbiness glows” and “the touch of belonging” cut straight to the heart of what made The Velveteen Rabbit so timeless. Most excellent. An easy fave. 🕊️🌱📖🌹
May 14th, 2025 11:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, my friend…what you’ve done here is more than revisit a childhood tale—you’ve rekindled its soul. This reads like a conversation between Skin Horse and the reader, and I feel deeply honored that our exchange played even a small part in this poem’s becoming. Lines like “shabbiness glows” and “the touch of belonging” cut straight to the heart of what made The Velveteen Rabbit so timeless. Most excellent. An easy fave. 🕊️🌱📖🌹
May 14th, 2025 11:25
soul of time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend. Love the word play, how they connect and progress the entire piece. Excellent job! A fave!
May 14th, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend. Love the word play, how they connect and progress the entire piece. Excellent job! A fave!
May 14th, 2025 10:50
to be real
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful retelling! Your words capture the heart of the classic tale, conveying the tender themes of love and what it means to be \"real.\"
May 14th, 2025 09:29
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful retelling! Your words capture the heart of the classic tale, conveying the tender themes of love and what it means to be \"real.\"
May 14th, 2025 09:29
to be real
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia meets the present and births lost feelings of a past filled with memories of a time of faith, belief, love and all those things we wished were true. A most touching and lovely write and a fave
May 14th, 2025 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia meets the present and births lost feelings of a past filled with memories of a time of faith, belief, love and all those things we wished were true. A most touching and lovely write and a fave
May 14th, 2025 06:35
soul of time
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stories bring memories and wonder to all our lives arqios.
Andy
May 14th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stories bring memories and wonder to all our lives arqios.
Andy
May 14th, 2025 01:25
soul of time
David Wakeling said:
This is very Shakesperean. I see a medieval minstrel with a lute entertaining the king. Wonderful poem about the power of stories to go forever.
May 13th, 2025 04:52
David Wakeling said:
This is very Shakesperean. I see a medieval minstrel with a lute entertaining the king. Wonderful poem about the power of stories to go forever.
May 13th, 2025 04:52
soul of time
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful wording encapsulates a most important message that of storytelling and poetry. This even flow gains a fave
May 13th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful wording encapsulates a most important message that of storytelling and poetry. This even flow gains a fave
May 13th, 2025 04:03
soul of time
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely gentle write, which flows so natural, a poet\'s strain, I fear not, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 03:31
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely gentle write, which flows so natural, a poet\'s strain, I fear not, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 03:31
velveteen quietude
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, let us all waltz together in our world.
Andy
May 13th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, let us all waltz together in our world.
Andy
May 13th, 2025 01:25
velveteen quietude
Neilton said:
First of all what an amazing title I didn\'t even know these words existed ! As for the poem it\'s amazing with excellent imagery
May 13th, 2025 00:59
Neilton said:
First of all what an amazing title I didn\'t even know these words existed ! As for the poem it\'s amazing with excellent imagery
May 13th, 2025 00:59
momEntary deEp
NafisaSB said:
beautiful. this is definitely a message of hope and love in the journey of life
enjoyed it
May 12th, 2025 23:59
NafisaSB said:
beautiful. this is definitely a message of hope and love in the journey of life
enjoyed it
May 12th, 2025 23:59
velveteen quietude
Cheeky Missy said:
I wonder nobody favorited this, it is so exquisite and lovely, akin almost to a benediction, yet not, a lullaby of sorts, a soothing meditation which takes the unconscious soul to those higher realms we instinctively yearned to ascend to, whereat we sigh. Very, very gorgeous. I love it. Deliciously rendered with beautiful imagery and a soothing poignancy. Thank you so VERY much for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 18:47
Cheeky Missy said:
I wonder nobody favorited this, it is so exquisite and lovely, akin almost to a benediction, yet not, a lullaby of sorts, a soothing meditation which takes the unconscious soul to those higher realms we instinctively yearned to ascend to, whereat we sigh. Very, very gorgeous. I love it. Deliciously rendered with beautiful imagery and a soothing poignancy. Thank you so VERY much for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 18:47
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