Comments received on poems by arqios
a royal pain
NafisaSB said:
history is full of such tales- thanks for reviving my interest in it - had read about it
March 23rd, 2025 23:47
NafisaSB said:
history is full of such tales- thanks for reviving my interest in it - had read about it
March 23rd, 2025 23:47
waterfront recital: reprise
Poetic Licence said:
The washing away of the old allowing fresh new memories to be made, a lovely read
March 23rd, 2025 05:22
Poetic Licence said:
The washing away of the old allowing fresh new memories to be made, a lovely read
March 23rd, 2025 05:22
waterfront recital: reprise
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.Such wonderful immagery and depth.The cycles of life explored in great detail.Enjoyed reading
March 23rd, 2025 05:06
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.Such wonderful immagery and depth.The cycles of life explored in great detail.Enjoyed reading
March 23rd, 2025 05:06
waterfront recital: reprise
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor I like the idea of the past being the sand where footprints are cast and the future,( time ) or the sea that washes away every trace. A poem with a somewhat melancholy feel. Very nice
March 23rd, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor I like the idea of the past being the sand where footprints are cast and the future,( time ) or the sea that washes away every trace. A poem with a somewhat melancholy feel. Very nice
March 23rd, 2025 04:03
waterfront recital: reprise
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, memories came and gone but forever in our lives.
Andy
March 23rd, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, memories came and gone but forever in our lives.
Andy
March 23rd, 2025 02:49
unveiling
whats write for me said:
Beautiful rthymic flow, casting shadows and revealing light with words. Excellent!
March 22nd, 2025 09:20
whats write for me said:
Beautiful rthymic flow, casting shadows and revealing light with words. Excellent!
March 22nd, 2025 09:20
“the internet does not lie”
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A most though-provoking poem, my friend. Question, if the Internet does not lie, what about AI? 🤖 🤣 Okay, okay, I could not resist that. Seriously though, between your poem and your note, what I am getting is that the input feeds the output, which makes perfect sense. Bad input equals bad output. And people never enter in 100% good input, do we? Hence the silly AI question, but it is not that silly at all, is it? What we knew to be truths today are no longer seen as truths, in sometimes very scary ways. Everything we have is fed to us through a single device that we carry on our person all the time. We sometimes even talk to people in the same room through them. My kids would notoriously NOT get an answer if they did that! 🤣 Anywho, all of this to ask, what is truth anymore? It, of course, still exists. A very fine write, my friend, that got the gears in my head spinning! A fave for sure!
March 22nd, 2025 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A most though-provoking poem, my friend. Question, if the Internet does not lie, what about AI? 🤖 🤣 Okay, okay, I could not resist that. Seriously though, between your poem and your note, what I am getting is that the input feeds the output, which makes perfect sense. Bad input equals bad output. And people never enter in 100% good input, do we? Hence the silly AI question, but it is not that silly at all, is it? What we knew to be truths today are no longer seen as truths, in sometimes very scary ways. Everything we have is fed to us through a single device that we carry on our person all the time. We sometimes even talk to people in the same room through them. My kids would notoriously NOT get an answer if they did that! 🤣 Anywho, all of this to ask, what is truth anymore? It, of course, still exists. A very fine write, my friend, that got the gears in my head spinning! A fave for sure!
March 22nd, 2025 08:11
“the internet does not lie”
Friendship said:
Sadly it does lie! well written ,Your poem aims to inspire and empower the conviction that the internet can be a reliable source of information amidst a landscape often plagued by doubt and misinformation, championing a visionary view of technology as a catalyst for knowledge and understanding.
March 22nd, 2025 07:12
Friendship said:
Sadly it does lie! well written ,Your poem aims to inspire and empower the conviction that the internet can be a reliable source of information amidst a landscape often plagued by doubt and misinformation, championing a visionary view of technology as a catalyst for knowledge and understanding.
March 22nd, 2025 07:12
“the internet does not lie”
Poetic Licence said:
It shouldn\'t lie, but it is programmed by humans so it\'s bound to. makes you wonder how it will be when the computers completely take over, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 06:08
Poetic Licence said:
It shouldn\'t lie, but it is programmed by humans so it\'s bound to. makes you wonder how it will be when the computers completely take over, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 06:08
“the internet does not lie”
Mutley Ravishes said:
If I can find it in an internet search then it must be real!
March 22nd, 2025 06:04
Mutley Ravishes said:
If I can find it in an internet search then it must be real!
March 22nd, 2025 06:04
“the internet does not lie”
David Wakeling said:
If its made by human beings there will be 50% lies an 50% truth.Great poem mi amigo
March 22nd, 2025 05:25
David Wakeling said:
If its made by human beings there will be 50% lies an 50% truth.Great poem mi amigo
March 22nd, 2025 05:25
“the internet does not lie”
sorenbarrett said:
It matters not whether the data entry of faulty material is intentional or not the outcome is the same. In an everchanging world what was true yesterday no longer is today so output based on yesterdays input is no longer correct today. A most mind provoking write and well done as well with the lead in line spewing what is known to be most controversial ( the internet speaks truth) one of those statements that is both true and false. Loved it
March 22nd, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
It matters not whether the data entry of faulty material is intentional or not the outcome is the same. In an everchanging world what was true yesterday no longer is today so output based on yesterdays input is no longer correct today. A most mind provoking write and well done as well with the lead in line spewing what is known to be most controversial ( the internet speaks truth) one of those statements that is both true and false. Loved it
March 22nd, 2025 04:59
“the internet does not lie”
Goldfinch60 said:
But it can lie, I used to work in computing and it can be programmed to tell untruths.
Andy
March 22nd, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
But it can lie, I used to work in computing and it can be programmed to tell untruths.
Andy
March 22nd, 2025 03:01
cure-alls
Friendship said:
Well written,Your poem explores themes of consumption, the search for meaning in art, and the contrast between public persona and private peace. It captures the essence of a society that prioritizes entertainment over profound artistic expression, revealing a sense of restlessness and dissatisfaction among its audience.
March 21st, 2025 12:46
Friendship said:
Well written,Your poem explores themes of consumption, the search for meaning in art, and the contrast between public persona and private peace. It captures the essence of a society that prioritizes entertainment over profound artistic expression, revealing a sense of restlessness and dissatisfaction among its audience.
March 21st, 2025 12:46
cure-alls
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, arqios! Absolutely found truth in these words! Thank you for sharing their beauty and wisdom with us! 🌹👏
March 21st, 2025 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, arqios! Absolutely found truth in these words! Thank you for sharing their beauty and wisdom with us! 🌹👏
March 21st, 2025 08:25
cure-alls
David Wakeling said:
Show us the justice of Poetry. Making me think again. Amazing poem with rhyme as well.
March 21st, 2025 04:59
David Wakeling said:
Show us the justice of Poetry. Making me think again. Amazing poem with rhyme as well.
March 21st, 2025 04:59
cure-alls
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read as it is very relatable to a lot of people, though I am still searching for that peace, have a great day
March 21st, 2025 04:47
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read as it is very relatable to a lot of people, though I am still searching for that peace, have a great day
March 21st, 2025 04:47
cure-alls
sorenbarrett said:
In comfort our choice of entertainment is far different than when under threat. This poem speaks to me on different levels poems I appreciate today are not the same tomorrow and like music are dictated by and also influence my mood of the moment. It is the last two lines that settle the poem. Loved it Cryptic
March 21st, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
In comfort our choice of entertainment is far different than when under threat. This poem speaks to me on different levels poems I appreciate today are not the same tomorrow and like music are dictated by and also influence my mood of the moment. It is the last two lines that settle the poem. Loved it Cryptic
March 21st, 2025 04:06
cure-alls
orchidee said:
Good write A. There\'s an olde hymn \'Teach me, my God and King\' that has a sort of alchemy theme. \'This is the precious stone, That turneth all to gold\', as if it\'s a cure-all, an elixir. Plus other alchemical connotations in the same hymn. But not meaning magically.
March 21st, 2025 03:20
orchidee said:
Good write A. There\'s an olde hymn \'Teach me, my God and King\' that has a sort of alchemy theme. \'This is the precious stone, That turneth all to gold\', as if it\'s a cure-all, an elixir. Plus other alchemical connotations in the same hymn. But not meaning magically.
March 21st, 2025 03:20
cure-alls
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios, that private peace is within us all.
Andy
March 21st, 2025 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios, that private peace is within us all.
Andy
March 21st, 2025 02:50
déjà brew
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How was the flight? ✈️ 🤣 As for the poem, truly wonderful. Loved the flow of this and metaphor! And, truly, smelling a good brew is like de ja vu every time! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 09:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How was the flight? ✈️ 🤣 As for the poem, truly wonderful. Loved the flow of this and metaphor! And, truly, smelling a good brew is like de ja vu every time! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 09:01
déjà brew
Friendship said:
Nicely done,
You seem to have a memory , a strong sense of smell and atmosphere.
March 20th, 2025 07:08
Friendship said:
Nicely done,
You seem to have a memory , a strong sense of smell and atmosphere.
March 20th, 2025 07:08
déjà brew
Mutley Ravishes said:
I learned a new word today. Thanks! And this is coming from a tea drinker.....
March 20th, 2025 05:35
Mutley Ravishes said:
I learned a new word today. Thanks! And this is coming from a tea drinker.....
March 20th, 2025 05:35
déjà brew
Poetic Licence said:
Sharing is a wonderful thing in any form and so is the smell of fresh coffee, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 04:56
Poetic Licence said:
Sharing is a wonderful thing in any form and so is the smell of fresh coffee, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 04:56
déjà brew
sorenbarrett said:
This is not referring to Kopi luwak coffee is it? lol This write requires time to filter through this old brain and settle. It is subtle and like a deja vu has an air of familiarity. Nicely done.
March 20th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This is not referring to Kopi luwak coffee is it? lol This write requires time to filter through this old brain and settle. It is subtle and like a deja vu has an air of familiarity. Nicely done.
March 20th, 2025 04:26
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