Comments received on poems by arqios
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Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words echo in the hollow of the screen—
a lighthouse I long to answer, but dare not cross the unseen.
July 3rd, 2025 13:36
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words echo in the hollow of the screen—
a lighthouse I long to answer, but dare not cross the unseen.
July 3rd, 2025 13:36
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orchidee said:
Woof! Fido of course understands every cryptic meaning. He will explain them all to me later. lol.
July 3rd, 2025 09:49
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido of course understands every cryptic meaning. He will explain them all to me later. lol.
July 3rd, 2025 09:49
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Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, some lovely lines around I feel the coldness of technology and we expect everything from it now, where as before we were happy to wait and took our time to find the answers, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 08:27
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, some lovely lines around I feel the coldness of technology and we expect everything from it now, where as before we were happy to wait and took our time to find the answers, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 08:27
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sorenbarrett said:
And as you read these words spanning seas and vast tracts of land know that on the other side of the world someone got your message. Against technology in many ways it has made knowledge and poetry wider spread some false knowledge and some shall I say disposable poetry but none the less available. However technology i.e.. computers seem cold and distant. Some great metaphors used I particularly like the second to the last stanza that means something to me because I come from that time when the cursor blinked and remember well that wait. A fave
July 3rd, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
And as you read these words spanning seas and vast tracts of land know that on the other side of the world someone got your message. Against technology in many ways it has made knowledge and poetry wider spread some false knowledge and some shall I say disposable poetry but none the less available. However technology i.e.. computers seem cold and distant. Some great metaphors used I particularly like the second to the last stanza that means something to me because I come from that time when the cursor blinked and remember well that wait. A fave
July 3rd, 2025 05:28
baker’s gift
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words arqios. I will be baking bread and rolls today.
Andy
July 3rd, 2025 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words arqios. I will be baking bread and rolls today.
Andy
July 3rd, 2025 01:52
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David Wakeling said:
For me this reads like a song.The little extra service that people give is what makes life worth living.A gift that does not require payment is a treasure.Really enjoyable read.
July 2nd, 2025 18:45
David Wakeling said:
For me this reads like a song.The little extra service that people give is what makes life worth living.A gift that does not require payment is a treasure.Really enjoyable read.
July 2nd, 2025 18:45
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤯 Step right up folks. Check this poem out. This is how a poem ought to be done. Wonderful form, thoughtful flow, layered metaphor and a meaning that the universe will keep unfolding as it follows you through life. Seriously, dear arqios, this may be one of my all time faves of yours. Until you publish tomorrow! 🤣 I love all your work. I really do! 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 12:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤯 Step right up folks. Check this poem out. This is how a poem ought to be done. Wonderful form, thoughtful flow, layered metaphor and a meaning that the universe will keep unfolding as it follows you through life. Seriously, dear arqios, this may be one of my all time faves of yours. Until you publish tomorrow! 🤣 I love all your work. I really do! 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 12:40
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Bragee said:
Good writing! We definitely need more of the behaviors you speak of in the world today.
July 2nd, 2025 11:14
Bragee said:
Good writing! We definitely need more of the behaviors you speak of in the world today.
July 2nd, 2025 11:14
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Friendship said:
Well written, the poem \"A Baker\'s Gift\" explores the theme of generosity and kindness, emphasizing the importance of giving and the small, often unnoticed acts of service that enhance human connections. It suggests that true gifts come from the heart and do not require acknowledgment or reciprocation. Your poem serves to remind readers of the value of kindness and the importance of giving without expectation, encouraging a culture of generosity and empathy in everyday life.
July 2nd, 2025 10:50
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem \"A Baker\'s Gift\" explores the theme of generosity and kindness, emphasizing the importance of giving and the small, often unnoticed acts of service that enhance human connections. It suggests that true gifts come from the heart and do not require acknowledgment or reciprocation. Your poem serves to remind readers of the value of kindness and the importance of giving without expectation, encouraging a culture of generosity and empathy in everyday life.
July 2nd, 2025 10:50
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Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Awesome, what a gorgeous number. Beautifully rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a wonderfully haunting poignancy.
July 2nd, 2025 09:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Awesome, what a gorgeous number. Beautifully rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a wonderfully haunting poignancy.
July 2nd, 2025 09:29
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Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the way things should be naturally and in alot of ways used to be, I had a butchers round when i was a kid for a while, the butcher always put a bit extra in for the unemployed families, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 08:33
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the way things should be naturally and in alot of ways used to be, I had a butchers round when i was a kid for a while, the butcher always put a bit extra in for the unemployed families, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 08:33
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arqios said:
Thanks for the Fave of this poem: @Caring dove and @sorenbarrett
July 2nd, 2025 07:34
arqios said:
Thanks for the Fave of this poem: @Caring dove and @sorenbarrett
July 2nd, 2025 07:34
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sorenbarrett said:
The message of the poem alone merits the fave. Nicely written it flows like the kindness of honey on buttered bread spreading its gold for the listener\'s tongue to taste. Very nicely done
July 2nd, 2025 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
The message of the poem alone merits the fave. Nicely written it flows like the kindness of honey on buttered bread spreading its gold for the listener\'s tongue to taste. Very nicely done
July 2nd, 2025 07:27
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arqios said:
Not really a hundred percent about the title just yet... any ideas? This piece being a quiet nod to the things we often overlook—the unspoken gestures that ripple through our days without fanfare. It traces the outline of generosity not by what\'s expected, but by what’s offered freely, instinctively.
July 2nd, 2025 06:59
arqios said:
Not really a hundred percent about the title just yet... any ideas? This piece being a quiet nod to the things we often overlook—the unspoken gestures that ripple through our days without fanfare. It traces the outline of generosity not by what\'s expected, but by what’s offered freely, instinctively.
July 2nd, 2025 06:59
baker’s gift
2781 said:
My dear departed mum used this code. She was an oyster farmer/processor, and always put an extra oyster in each jar.
It paid off.
July 2nd, 2025 06:46
2781 said:
My dear departed mum used this code. She was an oyster farmer/processor, and always put an extra oyster in each jar.
It paid off.
July 2nd, 2025 06:46
June 14, 2010: journal entry
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave quiet magic—ordinary moments brim with grace. The kettle’s hiss, the unanswered question, all hum with sacred light.
July 2nd, 2025 04:43
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave quiet magic—ordinary moments brim with grace. The kettle’s hiss, the unanswered question, all hum with sacred light.
July 2nd, 2025 04:43
June 14, 2010: journal entry
Goldfinch60 said:
Poems come from many places arqios.
Andy
July 2nd, 2025 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Poems come from many places arqios.
Andy
July 2nd, 2025 01:41
June 14, 2010: journal entry
MendedFences27 said:
Wow, If we could live in our poetry worlds, the world would be a beautiful place. A great poem, It seemed casual, but structured. Unessential and yet poignant.
Whimsical. yet formalized. Part humor, part morality, part wonderment, also down to earth and forthright. I\'m sure not all these things were planned but sometimes our pens just take over and there it is. Beautiful poem. - Phil A.
July 1st, 2025 14:00
MendedFences27 said:
Wow, If we could live in our poetry worlds, the world would be a beautiful place. A great poem, It seemed casual, but structured. Unessential and yet poignant.
Whimsical. yet formalized. Part humor, part morality, part wonderment, also down to earth and forthright. I\'m sure not all these things were planned but sometimes our pens just take over and there it is. Beautiful poem. - Phil A.
July 1st, 2025 14:00
June 14, 2010: journal entry
Damaso said:
wow, I stayed speechless, thank you for sharing it! Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 10:13
Damaso said:
wow, I stayed speechless, thank you for sharing it! Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 10:13
June 14, 2010: journal entry
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and prettily rendered with gorgeous imagery and a delicate, haunting poignancy akin to dewdrops. Thank you for sharing.
July 1st, 2025 05:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and prettily rendered with gorgeous imagery and a delicate, haunting poignancy akin to dewdrops. Thank you for sharing.
July 1st, 2025 05:30
June 14, 2010: journal entry
Poetic Licence said:
A Lovely write and it sounded like a beautiful day, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 05:27
Poetic Licence said:
A Lovely write and it sounded like a beautiful day, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 05:27
June 14, 2010: journal entry
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts run, bump into and sometimes pass over each other and in this weave of a tapestry a poem emerges. This poem carries a lovely texture and feel and a fave
July 1st, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts run, bump into and sometimes pass over each other and in this weave of a tapestry a poem emerges. This poem carries a lovely texture and feel and a fave
July 1st, 2025 05:04
June 14, 2010: journal entry
David Wakeling said:
A very poetic morning indeed. Quite a beautiful start to the day. great poem. Well done
July 1st, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
A very poetic morning indeed. Quite a beautiful start to the day. great poem. Well done
July 1st, 2025 04:14
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Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios. Shakespeare was rammed down my throat when I was at school!
Andy
July 1st, 2025 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios. Shakespeare was rammed down my throat when I was at school!
Andy
July 1st, 2025 02:29
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