Comments received on poems by arqios
unhinged
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe we should 86 the 67. Don\'t do Social media; so had to look it up. A fine Poem.
November 13th, 2025 19:37
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe we should 86 the 67. Don\'t do Social media; so had to look it up. A fine Poem.
November 13th, 2025 19:37
unhinged
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Unhinged? Who? Me? 🤪 My friend, this feels like a scroll breathing…identity, time, and message looping into a quiet chant. You made the in-between its own terrain. Love this lots. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 13th, 2025 15:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Unhinged? Who? Me? 🤪 My friend, this feels like a scroll breathing…identity, time, and message looping into a quiet chant. You made the in-between its own terrain. Love this lots. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 13th, 2025 15:16
unhinged
orchidee said:
Thought you was writing about me there - unhinged - in my behaviour towards KP. lol.
November 13th, 2025 14:41
orchidee said:
Thought you was writing about me there - unhinged - in my behaviour towards KP. lol.
November 13th, 2025 14:41
unhinged
Neilton said:
A combination of poetry and social media trends.Very interesting!!
November 13th, 2025 12:29
Neilton said:
A combination of poetry and social media trends.Very interesting!!
November 13th, 2025 12:29
unhinged
sorenbarrett said:
Branded by age Not sure if this was the intent but I see each of us as that parchment or page that curls with age and unrolls each day with words that march and fade. That pause or hinge is a time of reflection or change. A lovely write of reflection on the passing of time in each life.
November 13th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Branded by age Not sure if this was the intent but I see each of us as that parchment or page that curls with age and unrolls each day with words that march and fade. That pause or hinge is a time of reflection or change. A lovely write of reflection on the passing of time in each life.
November 13th, 2025 06:26
star black out
Goldfinch60 said:
That memory will always be with us Rik.
Andy
November 13th, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That memory will always be with us Rik.
Andy
November 13th, 2025 02:14
star black out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, the way you link stars, cells, memory, and music creates a whole orbit of meaning…small and infinite at the same time. Stunning piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 12th, 2025 21:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, the way you link stars, cells, memory, and music creates a whole orbit of meaning…small and infinite at the same time. Stunning piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 12th, 2025 21:10
star black out
orchidee said:
I was The Birdman. I flapped me wings and fell in a black hole. Do ya hear me? I\'m don \'ere in this \'ole! lol.
November 12th, 2025 10:06
orchidee said:
I was The Birdman. I flapped me wings and fell in a black hole. Do ya hear me? I\'m don \'ere in this \'ole! lol.
November 12th, 2025 10:06
star black out
Paul Bell said:
The artist maybe dead, but the music still shines bright.
Bowie must be the most original artist ever and like the star it never wanes.
November 12th, 2025 06:33
Paul Bell said:
The artist maybe dead, but the music still shines bright.
Bowie must be the most original artist ever and like the star it never wanes.
November 12th, 2025 06:33
star black out
sorenbarrett said:
Whether this poem is intended as a tribute to a great star or not it applies. His album \"Space Odyssey\" (one of his most famous) ties him to this poem. He was dark not in complexion but in the aura he projected. Very nicely written my friend
November 12th, 2025 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Whether this poem is intended as a tribute to a great star or not it applies. His album \"Space Odyssey\" (one of his most famous) ties him to this poem. He was dark not in complexion but in the aura he projected. Very nicely written my friend
November 12th, 2025 06:17
a moment turning
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Undoubtedly one of the best I have come across on tbe theme of aging. A fave.
November 12th, 2025 05:56
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Undoubtedly one of the best I have come across on tbe theme of aging. A fave.
November 12th, 2025 05:56
Chad on his soapbox
Tom Dylan said:
Wonderful! And the last line just smashed it!
November 12th, 2025 03:30
Tom Dylan said:
Wonderful! And the last line just smashed it!
November 12th, 2025 03:30
Chad on his soapbox
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Stop and Smell the Roses\' in fact.
Plenty of these People about. Well Said.
November 11th, 2025 19:58
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Stop and Smell the Roses\' in fact.
Plenty of these People about. Well Said.
November 11th, 2025 19:58
Chad on his soapbox
orchidee said:
Good write Chad, erm Arqios. Or.... just call me Chad. lol.
November 11th, 2025 09:48
orchidee said:
Good write Chad, erm Arqios. Or.... just call me Chad. lol.
November 11th, 2025 09:48
Chad on his soapbox
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this one preaches without sermonizing...clever, convicting, and compassionate all at once. The final plea lands beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 11th, 2025 09:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this one preaches without sermonizing...clever, convicting, and compassionate all at once. The final plea lands beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 11th, 2025 09:37
eleventh hour remembrance
NafisaSB said:
Glad that the ride turned- a very good write ✍️
November 11th, 2025 08:42
NafisaSB said:
Glad that the ride turned- a very good write ✍️
November 11th, 2025 08:42
Chad on his soapbox
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Arqios. Timely message.
November 11th, 2025 07:40
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Arqios. Timely message.
November 11th, 2025 07:40
Chad on his soapbox
sorenbarrett said:
There are those that only have critical words to say, nothing good they see. It is easy to find fault when one looks for it in their life of misery. So much a happier life to find the beauty and save for the important issues one\'s energy. Nicely said Cryptic.
November 11th, 2025 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
There are those that only have critical words to say, nothing good they see. It is easy to find fault when one looks for it in their life of misery. So much a happier life to find the beauty and save for the important issues one\'s energy. Nicely said Cryptic.
November 11th, 2025 05:48
eleventh hour remembrance
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Rik. \"We will remember them.\"
Andy
November 11th, 2025 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Rik. \"We will remember them.\"
Andy
November 11th, 2025 02:20
eleventh hour remembrance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is beautifully reverent…you’ve woven faith and remembrance into one seamless breath. The closing couplet lands like prayer itself. Love it my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 10th, 2025 21:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is beautifully reverent…you’ve woven faith and remembrance into one seamless breath. The closing couplet lands like prayer itself. Love it my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 10th, 2025 21:10
eleventh hour remembrance
orchidee said:
Also, I get the meaning of the labourers in the vineyard parable, cleverly linked with the \'11\' of Remembrance here.
November 10th, 2025 12:53
orchidee said:
Also, I get the meaning of the labourers in the vineyard parable, cleverly linked with the \'11\' of Remembrance here.
November 10th, 2025 12:53
eleventh hour remembrance
orchidee said:
Good write A. Permission to adapt this to a Remembrance hymn-poem? I will note \'Adapted with permission from\'......\'so I don\'t plaguey-wotsit - plagiarise.
November 10th, 2025 12:47
orchidee said:
Good write A. Permission to adapt this to a Remembrance hymn-poem? I will note \'Adapted with permission from\'......\'so I don\'t plaguey-wotsit - plagiarise.
November 10th, 2025 12:47
in the end
NafisaSB said:
To bend, and yet not break but stay true to self- an achievement indeed
November 10th, 2025 11:38
NafisaSB said:
To bend, and yet not break but stay true to self- an achievement indeed
November 10th, 2025 11:38
farcical bloomery
Doggerel Dave said:
Aah - that\'s what I mean - real poetry. My nostrils are quivering.
Good for you, Rik.
November 10th, 2025 07:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Aah - that\'s what I mean - real poetry. My nostrils are quivering.
Good for you, Rik.
November 10th, 2025 07:47
eleventh hour remembrance
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, arqios. Profound reminder of how out of control we are.
November 10th, 2025 07:18
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, arqios. Profound reminder of how out of control we are.
November 10th, 2025 07:18
eleventh hour remembrance
Paul Bell said:
How many young kids were killed for the ego of some despot, and still going on today.
We remember them as we should and hope it never happens again.
November 10th, 2025 06:33
Paul Bell said:
How many young kids were killed for the ego of some despot, and still going on today.
We remember them as we should and hope it never happens again.
November 10th, 2025 06:33
eleventh hour remembrance
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a reverent tribute to past wars of senseless slaughter of blood spilt on both sides for the greed and anger of a few. A wonderful homage for those that fell.
November 10th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a reverent tribute to past wars of senseless slaughter of blood spilt on both sides for the greed and anger of a few. A wonderful homage for those that fell.
November 10th, 2025 06:18
farcical bloomery
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is delight and depth all at once…nature laughing through its own imperfections. A symphony of silliness done masterfully, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2025 22:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is delight and depth all at once…nature laughing through its own imperfections. A symphony of silliness done masterfully, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2025 22:45
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