Comments received on poems by arqios
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Now, I\'m hungry.
January 14th, 2025 18:09
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Now, I\'m hungry.
January 14th, 2025 18:09
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
LP2187 said:
A really nice poem, a delight to read, I\'m also hungry. It\'s obvious you\'ve mastered the power of imagery.
January 14th, 2025 15:30
LP2187 said:
A really nice poem, a delight to read, I\'m also hungry. It\'s obvious you\'ve mastered the power of imagery.
January 14th, 2025 15:30
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
Cassie58 said:
This poem reminds me very much how I had to encourage our Robbie as a three year old to eat his veg. We had to play games. Lots of them. Airplanes incoming. The spoon descending from a height with a full load and then a handclap when the cargo landed safely in a little open mouth. It worked a treat. Your stew looks delicious. Straight down the hatch. Yummy.
January 14th, 2025 12:49
Cassie58 said:
This poem reminds me very much how I had to encourage our Robbie as a three year old to eat his veg. We had to play games. Lots of them. Airplanes incoming. The spoon descending from a height with a full load and then a handclap when the cargo landed safely in a little open mouth. It worked a treat. Your stew looks delicious. Straight down the hatch. Yummy.
January 14th, 2025 12:49
once there was a boy
Kevin Hulme said:
Wow , Nice Poem about the Journey through life to the Present age . Something I can relate to. With ‘Dreams’ and ‘Ambitions ‘ Won or lost. Saddest words in the English language are ‘What might have been’. Good one.
January 14th, 2025 10:33
Kevin Hulme said:
Wow , Nice Poem about the Journey through life to the Present age . Something I can relate to. With ‘Dreams’ and ‘Ambitions ‘ Won or lost. Saddest words in the English language are ‘What might have been’. Good one.
January 14th, 2025 10:33
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have never been much of a soup fan...but stew...now you are talking. And, damn, if I had a dragon in my stew I would be playing as opposed to eating! LOL! Such a fun poem that warmed the cockles of my heart as surely as a bowl o\' warm stew would warm and satiate my belly. Well done, friend! 🙏❤️
January 14th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have never been much of a soup fan...but stew...now you are talking. And, damn, if I had a dragon in my stew I would be playing as opposed to eating! LOL! Such a fun poem that warmed the cockles of my heart as surely as a bowl o\' warm stew would warm and satiate my belly. Well done, friend! 🙏❤️
January 14th, 2025 08:20
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
Teddy.15 said:
Structured poetry for me is a big task so we\'ll done, as for the imagery exceptional my friend. A fun read and what a way to promote stew 🤣 🍲 try to make one with Guinness my friend. 🌹
January 14th, 2025 04:21
Teddy.15 said:
Structured poetry for me is a big task so we\'ll done, as for the imagery exceptional my friend. A fun read and what a way to promote stew 🤣 🍲 try to make one with Guinness my friend. 🌹
January 14th, 2025 04:21
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
sorenbarrett said:
As a child used to look at the soup and imagine things now I eat it to fast for pictures to form. Several metaphors here and yet the main plot seems litteral and delicious
January 14th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
As a child used to look at the soup and imagine things now I eat it to fast for pictures to form. Several metaphors here and yet the main plot seems litteral and delicious
January 14th, 2025 04:14
once there was a boy
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words arqios, we all have those memories of times gone by, may the good times always outweigh the bad times.
Andy
January 14th, 2025 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words arqios, we all have those memories of times gone by, may the good times always outweigh the bad times.
Andy
January 14th, 2025 02:45
spaces we inhabit: with every breath
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work, my friend.
January 13th, 2025 13:51
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work, my friend.
January 13th, 2025 13:51
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
Accidental Poet said:
Growing up in a town with two lighthouses in it, I have a special appreciation for this poem of yours arqios. 😊👍
January 13th, 2025 12:04
Accidental Poet said:
Growing up in a town with two lighthouses in it, I have a special appreciation for this poem of yours arqios. 😊👍
January 13th, 2025 12:04
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes nice One. It must have been a Solitary life for these people, but a important one.
When I was a Kid I always wanted to live in a Lighthouse, don’t know why. ( Calling Dr Freud, Patient to see you).
A good write.
January 13th, 2025 08:54
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes nice One. It must have been a Solitary life for these people, but a important one.
When I was a Kid I always wanted to live in a Lighthouse, don’t know why. ( Calling Dr Freud, Patient to see you).
A good write.
January 13th, 2025 08:54
once there was a boy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the loss of innocence...and in particular I like how that loss comes through with the crumbling or loss of the sandcastle. A brilliant extended metaphor, my friend. Well done! 👏🌹
January 13th, 2025 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the loss of innocence...and in particular I like how that loss comes through with the crumbling or loss of the sandcastle. A brilliant extended metaphor, my friend. Well done! 👏🌹
January 13th, 2025 08:41
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. You really paint the scene. A fine write.
January 13th, 2025 07:32
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. You really paint the scene. A fine write.
January 13th, 2025 07:32
once there was a boy
David Wakeling said:
I remember these feelings so well. This poem capture the sad and wonderful moments of childhood and how they fade into adulthood.There is a great sadness in this process. But the heart still remembers how to dream.Wonderful line and amazing poem
January 13th, 2025 05:03
David Wakeling said:
I remember these feelings so well. This poem capture the sad and wonderful moments of childhood and how they fade into adulthood.There is a great sadness in this process. But the heart still remembers how to dream.Wonderful line and amazing poem
January 13th, 2025 05:03
once there was a boy
TobaniNataiella said:
Remembering our journey into adulthood and all it`s good, bad, sad and happy times along the way, yet still arriving with hope for the future to come. Loved it
January 13th, 2025 05:02
TobaniNataiella said:
Remembering our journey into adulthood and all it`s good, bad, sad and happy times along the way, yet still arriving with hope for the future to come. Loved it
January 13th, 2025 05:02
once there was a boy
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic This is a beautiful write that details that right of passage to manhood detailing the shadow side. It reads with a bit of sadness and retains a taste of hope.
January 13th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic This is a beautiful write that details that right of passage to manhood detailing the shadow side. It reads with a bit of sadness and retains a taste of hope.
January 13th, 2025 04:42
once there was a boy
Neville said:
A whole childhood captured in its entirety .. I doubt anyone who travels here will not be able to relate & in so many ways .. I know I do .. Neville
January 13th, 2025 03:40
Neville said:
A whole childhood captured in its entirety .. I doubt anyone who travels here will not be able to relate & in so many ways .. I know I do .. Neville
January 13th, 2025 03:40
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, being just with the stars and sees can be wonderful.
Andy
January 13th, 2025 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, being just with the stars and sees can be wonderful.
Andy
January 13th, 2025 02:53
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
Teddy.15 said:
There has always been something most intriguing about the lighthouse and how they keep the shore from the ships and vice versa and how in great storms the lighthouse is the hero in the storm. 🌹
January 12th, 2025 15:45
Teddy.15 said:
There has always been something most intriguing about the lighthouse and how they keep the shore from the ships and vice versa and how in great storms the lighthouse is the hero in the storm. 🌹
January 12th, 2025 15:45
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love lighthouses. Also loved the Robert Eggers\' film The Lighthouse. But that is neither here nor there. This is a wonderful poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 12th, 2025 12:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love lighthouses. Also loved the Robert Eggers\' film The Lighthouse. But that is neither here nor there. This is a wonderful poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 12th, 2025 12:11
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
cellinic said:
Very deep and really impressive... Happy New Year! best wishes,
January 12th, 2025 10:46
cellinic said:
Very deep and really impressive... Happy New Year! best wishes,
January 12th, 2025 10:46
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
TobaniNataiella said:
A calm thinking head in very stormy waters, need more of the. Enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 05:27
TobaniNataiella said:
A calm thinking head in very stormy waters, need more of the. Enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 05:27
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
LP2187 said:
Such a good poem of hope against a chaotic storm, I love it.
January 12th, 2025 05:23
LP2187 said:
Such a good poem of hope against a chaotic storm, I love it.
January 12th, 2025 05:23
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
sorenbarrett said:
The poem resonates with me because I from time to time live on that rocky shore within a stones throw of a lighthouse and I hear those wave meet the shore. The metaphor is iconic as well and like the waves keeps coming back. Very nicely written
January 12th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
The poem resonates with me because I from time to time live on that rocky shore within a stones throw of a lighthouse and I hear those wave meet the shore. The metaphor is iconic as well and like the waves keeps coming back. Very nicely written
January 12th, 2025 04:50
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
David Wakeling said:
I have always admired the light house watchman.The perfect job for a creative mind.Enjoyable poem.
January 12th, 2025 04:42
David Wakeling said:
I have always admired the light house watchman.The perfect job for a creative mind.Enjoyable poem.
January 12th, 2025 04:42
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