Comments received on poems by arqios
my poetic side
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words show life in our community here arqios.
Andy
June 20th, 2025 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words show life in our community here arqios.
Andy
June 20th, 2025 01:40
my poetic side
MendedFences27 said:
Arqios, this is a great synopsis of the site and a beautiful poem as well. I loved it.
June 19th, 2025 11:45
MendedFences27 said:
Arqios, this is a great synopsis of the site and a beautiful poem as well. I loved it.
June 19th, 2025 11:45
my poetic side
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine way of describing MPS. It\'s a being but you can\'t touch it. You have a good way with words ,
Like Wot eye wood like two bee.
June 19th, 2025 10:29
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine way of describing MPS. It\'s a being but you can\'t touch it. You have a good way with words ,
Like Wot eye wood like two bee.
June 19th, 2025 10:29
my poetic side
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It takes all kinds and, despite the kinds I don\'t like, I wouldn\'t change a thing about it...even them. Though I do wish they would change themselves! 🤣 Humans need community and we make community. It\'s a beautiful thing overall, hiccups aside. Wonderful write, my friend.
June 19th, 2025 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It takes all kinds and, despite the kinds I don\'t like, I wouldn\'t change a thing about it...even them. Though I do wish they would change themselves! 🤣 Humans need community and we make community. It\'s a beautiful thing overall, hiccups aside. Wonderful write, my friend.
June 19th, 2025 08:39
my poetic side
Poetic Licence said:
Without words and art we would know nothing of any history, we would never have developed as human beings and we could never learn about each other. This site is a proper box of all sorts, so many different life experiences, cultures, history, events, festivals, different views which makes it a wonderful place to reveal your words, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
Without words and art we would know nothing of any history, we would never have developed as human beings and we could never learn about each other. This site is a proper box of all sorts, so many different life experiences, cultures, history, events, festivals, different views which makes it a wonderful place to reveal your words, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 06:13
my poetic side
David Wakeling said:
This is delightful to read. I particularly liked the \'Voices scatter across a vast terrain\" Very powerful images here
June 19th, 2025 04:24
David Wakeling said:
This is delightful to read. I particularly liked the \'Voices scatter across a vast terrain\" Very powerful images here
June 19th, 2025 04:24
my poetic side
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has roots that go deep. The one that I followed took me to the origin of language and what would society or community be without it. No poetry, no history, no learning accumulated, no technology.. Words the primary means of sharing. You hide well in metaphor the that like roots covered under ground compose much of the tree\'s meaning. A fave for the depth of this poem
June 19th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has roots that go deep. The one that I followed took me to the origin of language and what would society or community be without it. No poetry, no history, no learning accumulated, no technology.. Words the primary means of sharing. You hide well in metaphor the that like roots covered under ground compose much of the tree\'s meaning. A fave for the depth of this poem
June 19th, 2025 04:17
my poetic side
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, and we are indeed a community full of all sorts of souls and when we are here we are all accepted and respected. 🌹
June 19th, 2025 02:40
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, and we are indeed a community full of all sorts of souls and when we are here we are all accepted and respected. 🌹
June 19th, 2025 02:40
still the earth breathes
Goldfinch60 said:
The earth is our life and may it breathe on us forever arqios.
Andy
June 19th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
The earth is our life and may it breathe on us forever arqios.
Andy
June 19th, 2025 01:24
hobbitual
Kevin Hulme said:
Family is the most important thing in our Life.
You can look around the World, but the World is within the Home. Enjoyable Write.
June 18th, 2025 19:36
Kevin Hulme said:
Family is the most important thing in our Life.
You can look around the World, but the World is within the Home. Enjoyable Write.
June 18th, 2025 19:36
hobbitual
Kevin Hulme said:
Family is the most important thing in our Life.
You can look around the World, but the World is within the Home. Enjoyable Write.
June 18th, 2025 19:36
Kevin Hulme said:
Family is the most important thing in our Life.
You can look around the World, but the World is within the Home. Enjoyable Write.
June 18th, 2025 19:36
still the earth breathes
David Wakeling said:
Wow that\'s what I\'m talkin\' \'bout. Nature in particular our own Earth doesn\'t breathe for us. It\'s there for its own sake. There is a touch of T.S. Eliot in this piece which I really admire. Wonderful poem to read out loud.
June 18th, 2025 19:07
David Wakeling said:
Wow that\'s what I\'m talkin\' \'bout. Nature in particular our own Earth doesn\'t breathe for us. It\'s there for its own sake. There is a touch of T.S. Eliot in this piece which I really admire. Wonderful poem to read out loud.
June 18th, 2025 19:07
still the earth breathes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Just wow! Hands down, a phenomenal write that just speaks on so many levels. It is profoundly true and deserving of the faves and praise it is getting. Bravo, dear poet and friend. 🌹👏
June 18th, 2025 17:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Just wow! Hands down, a phenomenal write that just speaks on so many levels. It is profoundly true and deserving of the faves and praise it is getting. Bravo, dear poet and friend. 🌹👏
June 18th, 2025 17:34
still the earth breathes
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave resilience into every line, echoing the earth’s untamed spirit. A hauntingly beautiful reminder that we, too, rise—rooted in something greater.
June 18th, 2025 13:22
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave resilience into every line, echoing the earth’s untamed spirit. A hauntingly beautiful reminder that we, too, rise—rooted in something greater.
June 18th, 2025 13:22
still the earth breathes
arqios said:
Thanks heaps @Somam Fagavan for the Fave 🤩🙏🏻🕊
June 18th, 2025 13:06
arqios said:
Thanks heaps @Somam Fagavan for the Fave 🤩🙏🏻🕊
June 18th, 2025 13:06
still the earth breathes
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful message of hope this planet, and beautiful and brilliant
June 18th, 2025 09:56
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful message of hope this planet, and beautiful and brilliant
June 18th, 2025 09:56
still the earth breathes
Doggerel Dave said:
A hymn of hope for this earth beyond my words. I leave it to Soren above and his tribute with which I heartily agree.
June 18th, 2025 07:21
Doggerel Dave said:
A hymn of hope for this earth beyond my words. I leave it to Soren above and his tribute with which I heartily agree.
June 18th, 2025 07:21
still the earth breathes
sorenbarrett said:
A truly great soliloquy that touches the soul with some wonderful lines and metaphor
(the earth breathes—not for you,
not for me, but for itself
.A pulse steady, undaunted by
the footsteps we leave behind.)
So true a self evident truth that we all try to deny
(You will taste the salt of oceans past,
and still the waves will rise)
Another great set of lines
(You cannot still it, nor should you try.
For even as I stumble, even as the gale bends me low,
I rise—not alone, but as one with the tide, with the soil,
with the breath that remains when all else fades.)
Such an empowering stanza and so fitting to end on.
The resto of the lines I would not are just as great but so as not to site the whole poem I have noted only these but it is the whole poem that is great as a whole and it is a crime to break it up like this. So well written i believe that this is my favorite or all your writes and could easily be placed in any great book of poetry. Congratulations on a masterpiece. Without saying a fave
June 18th, 2025 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
A truly great soliloquy that touches the soul with some wonderful lines and metaphor
(the earth breathes—not for you,
not for me, but for itself
.A pulse steady, undaunted by
the footsteps we leave behind.)
So true a self evident truth that we all try to deny
(You will taste the salt of oceans past,
and still the waves will rise)
Another great set of lines
(You cannot still it, nor should you try.
For even as I stumble, even as the gale bends me low,
I rise—not alone, but as one with the tide, with the soil,
with the breath that remains when all else fades.)
Such an empowering stanza and so fitting to end on.
The resto of the lines I would not are just as great but so as not to site the whole poem I have noted only these but it is the whole poem that is great as a whole and it is a crime to break it up like this. So well written i believe that this is my favorite or all your writes and could easily be placed in any great book of poetry. Congratulations on a masterpiece. Without saying a fave
June 18th, 2025 06:41
hobbitual
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. This poem had a calming effect as I read it. And the last line was just perfect.
June 18th, 2025 04:30
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. This poem had a calming effect as I read it. And the last line was just perfect.
June 18th, 2025 04:30
hobbitual
Goldfinch60 said:
May that contentment be forever with us all arqios.
Andy
June 18th, 2025 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
May that contentment be forever with us all arqios.
Andy
June 18th, 2025 02:18
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