where I could no longer go home
Teddy.15 said:

This is some beautiful reflection, Rome isn\'t far from me, and when I visited this year to find them rebuilding for more metro stops underground trains like in London. I love nature and I\'m very lucky to live in the magnificent Tuscan countryside, I don\'t like to see new builds fortunately here it\'s very difficult to do. This makes me think about my home London and how it\'s all so built up and what underneath it all. Most enjoyed this and the reflection it has given me. 🌹

December 3rd, 2024 06:05

tango of us
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor. Through my years of life, I have mastered several dances, but although I’ve tried the tango I have never mastered it. It is a wonderful dance of emotion and passion just like life itself. I guess I’ve never mastered life either and I’m still working on it

December 3rd, 2024 05:56

Boy and Bonnet
NafisaSB said:

so beautiful, so touching, and so much love passing back and fro
fantastic

December 3rd, 2024 00:44

where I could no longer go home
Doggerel Dave said:

A polished write. ....I cannot relate that to myself but as a reminder of the transience of life and place, You\'ve cracked it.

December 2nd, 2024 16:23

where I could no longer go home
Neville said:



You took me back to Betsy Drury\'s old ramshackle cottage (they said she was a witch) not far from my mothers pre-marital home in the wilds of Devon .. I have written about it often .. a very special place for me & mine .. muchly enjoyed .. Neville

December 2nd, 2024 08:45

where I could no longer go home
sorenbarrett said:

Marvelously worded this poem rolls like waves on the sea. The beauty of the scene is cast in splendid images and is good enough by itself but below lies a deeper metaphor where in this life none of us can ever go home again. Time does not flow upstream.

December 2nd, 2024 06:12

where I could no longer go home
Goldfinch60 said:

So many places where we used to live have been torn down arqios and it is such a shame for us in many cases.

Andy

December 2nd, 2024 02:28

Boy and Bonnet
Dan Williams said:

So very sweet. Hits home, I lost my Mom at age of eight, some comfort here. Thanks.

December 2nd, 2024 00:30

a.c.r.o.n.y.m.s.
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 1st, 2024 14:00

a.c.r.o.n.y.m.s.
orchidee said:

Ohh, AGW - a good write! Also LOL, etc etc.

December 1st, 2024 10:11

a.c.r.o.n.y.m.s.
Neville said:



I\'m not very good at this game .. but I know a good un when it crosses my path whatever the time of week it might be .. 😎👍

December 1st, 2024 06:54

a.c.r.o.n.y.m.s.
sorenbarrett said:

Cryptic this poem sends a hidden message. So often in poetry messages are sent through metaphor, analogies, and in parable form. These hidden messages like alphabet soup spell out hidden meanings. I often feel like an occultist When writing using symbols to convey meaning. This was a fun read, but one with a message.

December 1st, 2024 05:40

Boy and Bonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words and thoughts arqios.

Andy

December 1st, 2024 02:50

Boy and Bonnet
Kevin Hulme said:

Yes Yes and Yes . Lovely Poem . Nice One. Must be Sunny Days there now.
Here in Pom-Land it’s 🥶.

November 30th, 2024 21:28

Boy and Bonnet
FrasMac said:

full of sweetness, this travels well to my senses.

November 30th, 2024 15:59