Comments received on poems by arqios



splice and sail
orchidee said:

You gone sailing? Where ya going?! lol.

June 13th, 2023 01:56

beats
orchidee said:

I\'m getting out me 78RPMs. A record player we had, had 45, 33, and 16 RPMs on it!
16RPM for singhing showly if ya been at the gin! lol.

June 8th, 2023 08:19

leap of faith
Bella Shepard said:

Truth does seem to be a leap of faith these days, as you so eloquently say. How we will navigate that winding thoroughfare will determine our destiny. Good write my friend!

June 3rd, 2023 12:31

leap of faith
orchidee said:

I knew an un-cultured or un-educated guy (me!) who spent so long finding out what Carpe Diem meant, that there was no time left in the day to seize. Well, I was looking in a fishing book for 3 hours. I thought it was a French fish - carpe? lol.

June 1st, 2023 10:47

leap of faith
orchidee said:

Would I fancy a bit of \'perfunctory\' if I knew what it was exactly?! lol.
A leap of \'blind faith\' by me, as I try, very un-culturedly, to unravel some cryptic poems.
Fido understand them perfectly of course. lol.

June 1st, 2023 10:46

a little poem’s wayfaring
Bobby O said:

I’ll take my chances with that finest miss! Or is it mist ?

May 31st, 2023 18:08

a little poem’s wayfaring
Rocky Lagou said:

I’m perplexed but in complete awe. Thank you for this gem of a poem; your words always penetrate right to the soul. The subtle weight of the “melodies” you mention hover over me like a gliding bird.

May 31st, 2023 10:14

a little poem’s wayfaring
orchidee said:

Erm, \'friad I get lost in the meanings of your poems often. I say \'good write\', which I\'m sure they are, but - it\'s me - sometimes not knowing the foggiest what you\'re meaning! lol.
Wish the fog would clear. hehee.

May 31st, 2023 09:27

leading you home
L. B. Mek said:

loved this, dear Poet
so well written
\'like a milestone along that long road\'
(a memento\'s reprieve, upon
that bustling sea
of life\'s cherished memories)

May 29th, 2023 02:02

fare thee well
L. B. Mek said:

\'fare ye well\'
is one of my most cherished sayings of old
a great write, dear Poet
thank you!

May 29th, 2023 01:57

fare thee well
Bella Shepard said:

It is the poet who finds hidden treasures and brings them to life, or takes simple things and makes them extraordinary with magical words. Their work lives on to delight and inspire us. Beautifuly worded dear poet.

May 27th, 2023 13:28

fare thee well
Neville said:



I am inclined to agree CB and may they each rest in peace now the long shift is over .................. Neville


May 27th, 2023 13:24

fare thee well
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
Can\'t understand Dylan Thomas. Some of his stuff is daft, I think: \'I am not there; I did not die.....\' Is he a zombie then?

May 27th, 2023 10:25

a small night music disarray
2781 said:

That piece has a place in my heart.

May 26th, 2023 16:59

a small night music disarray
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

May 26th, 2023 14:42

leading you home
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A fine write expressed swell, poetic impressions wow! Thumbs up.

Plz also read and comment on my newest poem

May 26th, 2023 05:44

leading you home
Neville said:


indeed, tis very much like that same old same old winding road ..

The long and winding road
That leads to your door
Will never disappear
I\'ve seen that road before ... blah de blah de blah ... 🎵🎶🎵🎶


May 26th, 2023 01:12

leading you home
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

May 25th, 2023 09:58

blessing
Goldfinch60 said:

Those sparks of life are always there CB,

Andy

May 22nd, 2023 02:27

blessing
Neville said:



............. how luverly is that eh\' .. :)

May 22nd, 2023 00:49

blessing
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

May 21st, 2023 10:36

blessing
2781 said:

Amen.

May 21st, 2023 07:54

scare
Bella Shepard said:

I cannot imagine any worse feeling in the world than seeing someone you love in pain, and suffering. God bless dear poet, your brother and your family as you struggle through this difficult time.

May 20th, 2023 15:45

scare
Neville said:


I hit the heart shaped button because I feel for you CB and appreciate where you are coming from .. my own baby brother recently had his right lung removed and I know how I thought it really should have been me ....... Neville

May 19th, 2023 12:45

scare
Dr. Soma said:

Heart touching. May God bless your brother! 🙏🙏🙏

May 19th, 2023 11:38

scare
orchidee said:

A sensitive write CB.

May 19th, 2023 11:32

scare
2781 said:

X

May 19th, 2023 10:39

scare
Elahe poems said:

I\'m sorry for your pain. you created something beautiful out of it. Brotherhood is love and you wrote it well

May 19th, 2023 10:08

fair go
L. B. Mek said:

\'parading flotilla on digital sea\'
lovely imagery
a wonderful read, dear Poet


May 19th, 2023 02:38

fair go
Neville said:

My mind ran riot with this one CB ..
I imagine you looking at the screen in front of you as you are typing into the keyboard with one hand and while your free elbow is resting unbeknownst to you on the delete button .. But then, I note you blame someone or something for unwriting or deleting you so I guess I must be wrong ... maybe ... Neville

May 18th, 2023 22:16



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