Comments received on poems by arqios
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Friendship said:
the poem is filled with visual imagery, particularly in the references to stars and constellations, a sense of wonder and exploration.nicely done.
March 10th, 2025 15:32
Friendship said:
the poem is filled with visual imagery, particularly in the references to stars and constellations, a sense of wonder and exploration.nicely done.
March 10th, 2025 15:32
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem and not just the words of it. I love how it is structured to taper outward. From the shorter opening lines to the broader/longer lines at the end. Well done, my friend. That chorus of yours...awesome!🌹👏
On another note, read your notice of absence. Yikes, Glad you are all okay. Cyclones are no fun, I know...having endured Superstorm Sandy. Keeping you all in prayers, my friend.
March 10th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem and not just the words of it. I love how it is structured to taper outward. From the shorter opening lines to the broader/longer lines at the end. Well done, my friend. That chorus of yours...awesome!🌹👏
On another note, read your notice of absence. Yikes, Glad you are all okay. Cyclones are no fun, I know...having endured Superstorm Sandy. Keeping you all in prayers, my friend.
March 10th, 2025 08:08
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Doggerel Dave said:
The sometime chaos of my own mind can find some consolation here.
March 10th, 2025 06:35
Doggerel Dave said:
The sometime chaos of my own mind can find some consolation here.
March 10th, 2025 06:35
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David Wakeling said:
This is very enjoyable word play.It creates wonderful images . Well done commendatore.
March 10th, 2025 05:24
David Wakeling said:
This is very enjoyable word play.It creates wonderful images . Well done commendatore.
March 10th, 2025 05:24
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sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful vision of the unified relationship of all things from infinitesimally small to the infinitely large from energy to matter. Music of the universe Beautiful.
March 10th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful vision of the unified relationship of all things from infinitesimally small to the infinitely large from energy to matter. Music of the universe Beautiful.
March 10th, 2025 04:07
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Goldfinch60 said:
May that chorus always bring love to our lives arqios.
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
May that chorus always bring love to our lives arqios.
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:22
goodbye robin
Goldfinch60 said:
This is my life with Mary arqios, \'..always and forever\'.
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
This is my life with Mary arqios, \'..always and forever\'.
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:09
goodbye robin
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Mum having read and reread countless times Winnie the Pooh and etc until the tales are entrenched within me, I even bought the book on my own and retell the various tidbits from memory when occasion serves, and what is this farewell? Fascinating and intriguing in brevity with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
March 9th, 2025 18:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Mum having read and reread countless times Winnie the Pooh and etc until the tales are entrenched within me, I even bought the book on my own and retell the various tidbits from memory when occasion serves, and what is this farewell? Fascinating and intriguing in brevity with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
March 9th, 2025 18:58
goodbye robin
Friendship said:
Lovely done, arqios,Your poem \"always and forever\" conveys the profound bond and commitment shared between two entities, likely representing lovers or close companions. It explores themes of unity, enduring love, and the intertwining of lives over time.
March 9th, 2025 08:51
Friendship said:
Lovely done, arqios,Your poem \"always and forever\" conveys the profound bond and commitment shared between two entities, likely representing lovers or close companions. It explores themes of unity, enduring love, and the intertwining of lives over time.
March 9th, 2025 08:51
goodbye robin
Cassie58 said:
always and forever
Such very touching thoughts and your poem transferred me back to childhood days and promises made to forever friends. And then we grow up and forever takes on a new meaning. For some, it’s until something better comes along. Call me a cynic why don’t chã. I still believe there can be happy ever afters though. I have known many that have worked out. Your poem is a fairy story and I love it.
March 9th, 2025 08:04
Cassie58 said:
always and forever
Such very touching thoughts and your poem transferred me back to childhood days and promises made to forever friends. And then we grow up and forever takes on a new meaning. For some, it’s until something better comes along. Call me a cynic why don’t chã. I still believe there can be happy ever afters though. I have known many that have worked out. Your poem is a fairy story and I love it.
March 9th, 2025 08:04
goodbye robin
Distant View said:
This poem speaks to me of childhood. A rite of passage kind of thing. Hopefully most of us have wonderful childhood memories. Some of them become bitter-sweet as we grow older, for those innocent days are now gone! We still have the memories though, and we should cherish them!
March 9th, 2025 05:41
Distant View said:
This poem speaks to me of childhood. A rite of passage kind of thing. Hopefully most of us have wonderful childhood memories. Some of them become bitter-sweet as we grow older, for those innocent days are now gone! We still have the memories though, and we should cherish them!
March 9th, 2025 05:41
goodbye robin
Poetic Licence said:
I didn\'t get it until I read the comments, am having a slow day, enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 05:40
Poetic Licence said:
I didn\'t get it until I read the comments, am having a slow day, enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 05:40
goodbye robin
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a sensitive look at always and forever.I enjoyed reading.
March 9th, 2025 05:10
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a sensitive look at always and forever.I enjoyed reading.
March 9th, 2025 05:10
goodbye robin
sorenbarrett said:
An anniversary? Or do we speak of childhood here that we carry always with us? A lovely cryptic metaphor that I have to admit could go many ways for my scattered brain
March 9th, 2025 03:24
sorenbarrett said:
An anniversary? Or do we speak of childhood here that we carry always with us? A lovely cryptic metaphor that I have to admit could go many ways for my scattered brain
March 9th, 2025 03:24
Presents from Penzance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A dear friend of mine, a very talented actor and singer who even competed on NBC\'s The Voice here in the USA was in a national tour of Pirates of Penzance. Well done on this, my friend! ❤️🙏
March 8th, 2025 11:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A dear friend of mine, a very talented actor and singer who even competed on NBC\'s The Voice here in the USA was in a national tour of Pirates of Penzance. Well done on this, my friend! ❤️🙏
March 8th, 2025 11:06
Presents from Penzance
Neville said:
One hundred & fifty nine miles exactly & two hours and fifty seven minutes on a good day from my front door .. My front door by the way was originally made in 1547 but hey .. who\'s counting .. I was in Penzance only last weekend .. Love the cut of your jib arqios & the saltiness these words conjure up in my head this blustery Saturday .. I met a modern day Pirate of Penzance while there in the form of an overly enthusiastic car park attendant who slapped a fine notice to my windscreen two whole minutes before my time was up .. He was appalling & I am appealing .. Neville
March 8th, 2025 08:15
Neville said:
One hundred & fifty nine miles exactly & two hours and fifty seven minutes on a good day from my front door .. My front door by the way was originally made in 1547 but hey .. who\'s counting .. I was in Penzance only last weekend .. Love the cut of your jib arqios & the saltiness these words conjure up in my head this blustery Saturday .. I met a modern day Pirate of Penzance while there in the form of an overly enthusiastic car park attendant who slapped a fine notice to my windscreen two whole minutes before my time was up .. He was appalling & I am appealing .. Neville
March 8th, 2025 08:15
Presents from Penzance
Doggerel Dave said:
The Golden Age of Piracy - tick; Gilbert and Sullivan - tick; Penzance - tick.... I spent a long Easter weekend of jazz there one memorable year and consumed not a few pints of Directors and (don\'t forget) London Pride to keep lubricated...
Thanks for the memory, mate.
March 8th, 2025 06:19
Doggerel Dave said:
The Golden Age of Piracy - tick; Gilbert and Sullivan - tick; Penzance - tick.... I spent a long Easter weekend of jazz there one memorable year and consumed not a few pints of Directors and (don\'t forget) London Pride to keep lubricated...
Thanks for the memory, mate.
March 8th, 2025 06:19
Presents from Penzance
Mutley Ravishes said:
Been to Penzance. Lovely, like this poem!
March 8th, 2025 06:12
Mutley Ravishes said:
Been to Penzance. Lovely, like this poem!
March 8th, 2025 06:12
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arqios said:
In whatever endeavour it is the waiting that always grates and kills…
March 8th, 2025 05:52
arqios said:
In whatever endeavour it is the waiting that always grates and kills…
March 8th, 2025 05:52
Presents from Penzance
cellinic said:
Quite enigmatic, full of secret senses and blended with reserved emotions... Best wishes,
March 8th, 2025 05:26
cellinic said:
Quite enigmatic, full of secret senses and blended with reserved emotions... Best wishes,
March 8th, 2025 05:26
Presents from Penzance
Poetic Licence said:
Let the child within us release their imagination to the full, lovely imagery of days gone by, sadly Penzance is no longer like this, lovely enjoyable read.
March 8th, 2025 05:12
Poetic Licence said:
Let the child within us release their imagination to the full, lovely imagery of days gone by, sadly Penzance is no longer like this, lovely enjoyable read.
March 8th, 2025 05:12
Presents from Penzance
David Wakeling said:
What a brilliant and entertaining poem. Gilbert and Sullivan would be proud of it.Wonderful to read
March 8th, 2025 04:33
David Wakeling said:
What a brilliant and entertaining poem. Gilbert and Sullivan would be proud of it.Wonderful to read
March 8th, 2025 04:33
Presents from Penzance
sorenbarrett said:
The name itself Penzance in origin brings thoughts (Head land or holy headland) it may be coincidental but in Portuguese (pensar) is a verb to think related to head but it\'s origin comes from the verb to hang and they hang pirates don\'t they. An English town and in this poem locked in child imagination and fantasy it takes us back across time as indeed it does me to remember childhood itself. Lovely Cryptic full of childhood imagination.
March 8th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
The name itself Penzance in origin brings thoughts (Head land or holy headland) it may be coincidental but in Portuguese (pensar) is a verb to think related to head but it\'s origin comes from the verb to hang and they hang pirates don\'t they. An English town and in this poem locked in child imagination and fantasy it takes us back across time as indeed it does me to remember childhood itself. Lovely Cryptic full of childhood imagination.
March 8th, 2025 04:03
Presents from Penzance
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, the Pirate King will always be remembered in Penzance. We saw the operetta a few weeks ago.
Andy
https://youtu.be/IGzv4vufN-k?si=q-e5U7bjoNqKUdoj
March 8th, 2025 03:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, the Pirate King will always be remembered in Penzance. We saw the operetta a few weeks ago.
Andy
https://youtu.be/IGzv4vufN-k?si=q-e5U7bjoNqKUdoj
March 8th, 2025 03:11
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