spaces we inhabit: with every breath
Neville said:


What you have created here is without doubt a little masterpiece in its very own write .. & no kidding .. so very muchly enjoyed .. Neville

January 12th, 2025 02:15

spaces we inhabit: with every breath
Thad Wilk said:

Clapping! 👏👏
A wonderful,
delightful and
insightful write!!
Artfully expressed
and a pleasure
to recite!! 🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad


January 11th, 2025 21:26

spaces we inhabit: with every breath
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed. Every house I have lived in I have tried to imagine the people who lived there before, what their lives were like. One time I entered an abandoned house in weirdly abandoned community in Weird NJ...not the magazine...but the state in the USA I grew up. Though do check out the magazine. Fun stuff. Anywho, the house was just up and abandoned. There were fly swatters hanging on the walls, remnants of human life that was there one day and seemingly gone the next. Not sure if twas an imminent domain thing, or what. (I feel a poem about this coming on, actually, so thanks for the inspiration!)...but it was haunting to see to say the least. All of this to say, well done my friend! Well written, happy to be the second person to fave it! 🌹👏

January 11th, 2025 12:24

spaces we inhabit: with every breath
orchidee said:

It was laurels - now we\'re cutting down olive trees! Doh! heehee.

January 11th, 2025 09:17

spaces we inhabit: with every breath
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed it is so you can still see the spirit of Pompeii in its frozen figures and of Hiroshima in the shadows burnt on sidewalks but that is not the spirit you speak of there is a sense of home to a house, a city, a country. There are bonds built into each structure and when these are torn down we feel a loss and the present is no longer the past. A most beautiful and positive write. Disregard my begining dysphoria and gloom

January 11th, 2025 07:48

reflection by the sea
Dan Williams said:

Strikes me you are a very lucky person. Nicely done.

January 11th, 2025 01:28

reflection by the sea
Reynaldo Casison said:

Calm and Soothing Nice Imagery arqios

January 10th, 2025 23:01

reflection by the sea
David Wakeling said:

A wonderful thoughtful poem. It really possesses the elements of poetry. Cadence, theme and metaphor. Well done

January 10th, 2025 15:22

reflection by the sea
LP2187 said:

A lovely poem about the calm ocean being a bond between two people, with love and strength flowing through every wave. Enjoyed reading this!

January 10th, 2025 13:05

a grasp away
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done. A fine write and love the sentiment.

January 10th, 2025 10:29

reflection by the sea
TobaniNataiella said:

Looking out at natures beauty reflecting and remembering loved lost ones, there is something magical about the sea, i find, enjoyed me read, all the best

January 10th, 2025 08:01

reflection by the sea
orchidee said:

I imagined I met you, and you said to me: \'No need to go mad and chop down the whole laurel tree\'. Doh! lol.

January 10th, 2025 07:00

grappling with Today
Kevin Hulme said:

Very Philosophical. Something we must take on board
in our days.
Good one.

January 9th, 2025 20:16

a grasp away
LP2187 said:

A single gesture can make a massive difference. A touching piece about potential for growth, enjoyed it!

January 9th, 2025 12:04

a grasp away
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed, we live in a world of extending swords instead of laurels. This is a great call to action, which is what this poem is about. The offering of peace and forgiveness...not just the mere wish of having it. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏

January 9th, 2025 09:45