Comments received on poems by arqios
velveteen quietude
MLHnow said:
So beautiful bringing much to the heart and soul. I love how you apply rhyme rhythm and each word speaks here as a gift thank you!
Write more!
May 12th, 2025 12:49
MLHnow said:
So beautiful bringing much to the heart and soul. I love how you apply rhyme rhythm and each word speaks here as a gift thank you!
Write more!
May 12th, 2025 12:49
velveteen quietude
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This title reminded me of the \"Velveteen Rabbit.\" Used to love that story as a kid. What a.wonderful and dream-like poem. 🌹👏
May 12th, 2025 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This title reminded me of the \"Velveteen Rabbit.\" Used to love that story as a kid. What a.wonderful and dream-like poem. 🌹👏
May 12th, 2025 08:40
velveteen quietude
arqios said:
Halfway is neither here nor there.... as long as it keeps going forward...
May 12th, 2025 07:20
arqios said:
Halfway is neither here nor there.... as long as it keeps going forward...
May 12th, 2025 07:20
velveteen quietude
David Wakeling said:
a masterpiece of rhyme cadence and theme. So many vivid images created here from velvet haze to grand waltz.Wonderful.
May 12th, 2025 06:54
David Wakeling said:
a masterpiece of rhyme cadence and theme. So many vivid images created here from velvet haze to grand waltz.Wonderful.
May 12th, 2025 06:54
velveteen quietude
MDStone said:
“In this grand waltz”, I feel as though I watched it in the hushed moments. The tune, the very precise movements, the elegance, and the grace. Thank you, Arqios for sharing this piece. It was a splendid performance.
May 12th, 2025 05:36
MDStone said:
“In this grand waltz”, I feel as though I watched it in the hushed moments. The tune, the very precise movements, the elegance, and the grace. Thank you, Arqios for sharing this piece. It was a splendid performance.
May 12th, 2025 05:36
velveteen quietude
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in gentle waves turns upon itself rocking the reader into a hypnotic trance. Its revolving lines like those waves return. Very nicely done Cryptic
May 12th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in gentle waves turns upon itself rocking the reader into a hypnotic trance. Its revolving lines like those waves return. Very nicely done Cryptic
May 12th, 2025 04:05
velveteen quietude
Poetic Licence said:
That has a wonderful calming feel as you read through, lovely start to the week, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 04:04
Poetic Licence said:
That has a wonderful calming feel as you read through, lovely start to the week, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 04:04
momEntary deEp
John Prophet said:
Your words dance off the page. Well done.
John
May 11th, 2025 21:25
John Prophet said:
Your words dance off the page. Well done.
John
May 11th, 2025 21:25
momEntary deEp
Tony Grannell said:
Powerful observations and yet rendered forth with eloquent poetry with a style to enrapture any reader. A poem to linger on in the mind well after the reading. You have a great talent. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
May 11th, 2025 08:06
Tony Grannell said:
Powerful observations and yet rendered forth with eloquent poetry with a style to enrapture any reader. A poem to linger on in the mind well after the reading. You have a great talent. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
May 11th, 2025 08:06
Ypres, lest we forget
Cheeky Missy said:
1995 wasn\'t that long ago... whence this is all the more exquisite, where the coldness of sheer death eats through your skin and reaches to your heart, leering at you almost hungrily. They want every last one of us dead, and systematically push forward, coldly calculating. We\'re supposed to be solaced by these memorials as if such could mollify. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 07:51
Cheeky Missy said:
1995 wasn\'t that long ago... whence this is all the more exquisite, where the coldness of sheer death eats through your skin and reaches to your heart, leering at you almost hungrily. They want every last one of us dead, and systematically push forward, coldly calculating. We\'re supposed to be solaced by these memorials as if such could mollify. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 07:51
momEntary deEp
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, my friend. That last stanza reminded me last night staring up at the stars, Mars, and the Gibbons moon. It was bright, beautiful, alluring. Much like this poem. Well done! A fave. 🌹👏
May 11th, 2025 07:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, my friend. That last stanza reminded me last night staring up at the stars, Mars, and the Gibbons moon. It was bright, beautiful, alluring. Much like this poem. Well done! A fave. 🌹👏
May 11th, 2025 07:41
momEntary deEp
MDStone said:
Wow! In just a few words, I lived a thousand memories, felt joy, love, magic, and pain. But then, I also gathered up the fragments hopeful that nothing was lost or wasted and that there are new memories, joys, loves, and magic ahead! Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:57
MDStone said:
Wow! In just a few words, I lived a thousand memories, felt joy, love, magic, and pain. But then, I also gathered up the fragments hopeful that nothing was lost or wasted and that there are new memories, joys, loves, and magic ahead! Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:57
momEntary deEp
Cheeky Missy said:
This is too beautiful and deliciously evocative. Every single line is loaded, the stanzas trickling down the page like raindrops after the storm, solacing the thought of yonder momentarily. Superbly rendered with gorgeous imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:22
Cheeky Missy said:
This is too beautiful and deliciously evocative. Every single line is loaded, the stanzas trickling down the page like raindrops after the storm, solacing the thought of yonder momentarily. Superbly rendered with gorgeous imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:22
momEntary deEp
arqios said:
Must thank @Cheeky Missy for the Fave 🤩🙏🏻🕊️ you did say why you do it... and this is just a way to acknowledge you as well 👍
May 11th, 2025 06:21
arqios said:
Must thank @Cheeky Missy for the Fave 🤩🙏🏻🕊️ you did say why you do it... and this is just a way to acknowledge you as well 👍
May 11th, 2025 06:21
momEntary deEp
arqios said:
Perhaps a week’s break is not enough for the masses…when is it ever?
May 11th, 2025 04:26
arqios said:
Perhaps a week’s break is not enough for the masses…when is it ever?
May 11th, 2025 04:26
momEntary deEp
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful view of life explodes with this poem where trails traveled and wounds received all blend into memories. Very nice
May 11th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful view of life explodes with this poem where trails traveled and wounds received all blend into memories. Very nice
May 11th, 2025 04:05
momEntary deEp
David Wakeling said:
wow so much to unpack here.I like the cadence.The poem is enjoyable to read.I love \"universe of dreams\".Some many powerful images here and it ends with wonderful positivity. Well done.
May 11th, 2025 03:52
David Wakeling said:
wow so much to unpack here.I like the cadence.The poem is enjoyable to read.I love \"universe of dreams\".Some many powerful images here and it ends with wonderful positivity. Well done.
May 11th, 2025 03:52
momEntary deEp
Poetic Licence said:
Very enjoyable read on a Sunday, with some lovely lines, nicely done
May 11th, 2025 03:47
Poetic Licence said:
Very enjoyable read on a Sunday, with some lovely lines, nicely done
May 11th, 2025 03:47
there is no lack in you
Poetic Licence said:
Loved this write so much truth in it, always write as yourself and as you feel, if you write to please, I feel it looses it\'s honesty and feeling and meaning, does not matter if it is liked or not if it came from within you, very nicely done, have a great weekend
May 9th, 2025 03:49
Poetic Licence said:
Loved this write so much truth in it, always write as yourself and as you feel, if you write to please, I feel it looses it\'s honesty and feeling and meaning, does not matter if it is liked or not if it came from within you, very nicely done, have a great weekend
May 9th, 2025 03:49
the thread between us
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and chockful of gorgeous imagery rendering a sense of now and of humanity so beautifully with a gripping, haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and chockful of gorgeous imagery rendering a sense of now and of humanity so beautifully with a gripping, haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:11
the thread between us
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of are we as free to do and say as we humans wish,or has it all been laid and planned before and we just follow the path, there are implications in the write but that was the main one for me, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 06:15
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of are we as free to do and say as we humans wish,or has it all been laid and planned before and we just follow the path, there are implications in the write but that was the main one for me, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 06:15
the thread between us
Goldfinch60 said:
The paths we walk in our lives can lead to both good and bad but eventually we come to the place we are meant to be arqios.
Andy
May 7th, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The paths we walk in our lives can lead to both good and bad but eventually we come to the place we are meant to be arqios.
Andy
May 7th, 2025 01:26
the thread between us
arqios said:
Oh, now I remember… Diana’s song 🕯 haven’t heard that song in a long while 🕊🙏🏻
May 6th, 2025 20:40
arqios said:
Oh, now I remember… Diana’s song 🕯 haven’t heard that song in a long while 🕊🙏🏻
May 6th, 2025 20:40
the thread between us
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound. Philosophical. Important. These questions get to the heart of what it means to be human in a world where nothing is new and things have been laid out before us. It\'s hard to imagine a world otherwise. I love the interconnectivity built into this poem. Well done, my friend. The stuff a fave is made of! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound. Philosophical. Important. These questions get to the heart of what it means to be human in a world where nothing is new and things have been laid out before us. It\'s hard to imagine a world otherwise. I love the interconnectivity built into this poem. Well done, my friend. The stuff a fave is made of! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:30
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