Comments received on poems by arqios
the tears you could\'ve cried
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes a good cry and opening the floodgates relieves the pressure behind the dam. Nicely written my friend.
October 2nd, 2026 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes a good cry and opening the floodgates relieves the pressure behind the dam. Nicely written my friend.
October 2nd, 2026 05:56
dinner invitation
NafisaSB said:
We offer our thoughts but get so many different opinions and interpretations- it’s amazing- only some grasp what was intended to be shared 🤔😱🤐
October 2nd, 2026 01:27
NafisaSB said:
We offer our thoughts but get so many different opinions and interpretations- it’s amazing- only some grasp what was intended to be shared 🤔😱🤐
October 2nd, 2026 01:27
endless reverie
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this one feels to me like being trapped in a memory loop you know is hurting you but still can’t quite leave. That ache came through hard and is very relatable, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 10:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this one feels to me like being trapped in a memory loop you know is hurting you but still can’t quite leave. That ache came through hard and is very relatable, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 10:02
statuesque
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this one is so very tender. I especially liked the move from Galatea to just being beside someone and doing life together. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
arqios, this one is so very tender. I especially liked the move from Galatea to just being beside someone and doing life together. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:03
endless reverie
Kevin Hulme said:
Time and Tide like the Bus you hurry too : Waits for no Man.
A good Write.
October 1st, 2026 08:48
Kevin Hulme said:
Time and Tide like the Bus you hurry too : Waits for no Man.
A good Write.
October 1st, 2026 08:48
endless reverie
sorenbarrett said:
Time like every other force we fight against but with less success. I love your rhyme scheme in this poem Cryptic it compartmentalizes but like time keeps running within. A fave my friend.
October 1st, 2026 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
Time like every other force we fight against but with less success. I love your rhyme scheme in this poem Cryptic it compartmentalizes but like time keeps running within. A fave my friend.
October 1st, 2026 07:38
statuesque
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very beautiful and seemingly evocative with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy, sweetly rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 30th, 2026 22:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very beautiful and seemingly evocative with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy, sweetly rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 30th, 2026 22:50
statuesque
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Pygmalion Myth.
A certain fave.
September 30th, 2026 19:45
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Pygmalion Myth.
A certain fave.
September 30th, 2026 19:45
statuesque
arqios said:
So that didn’t work out at all. Perhaps it was too niche. Oh well 🫥🎻🕊️🙏🏻
September 30th, 2026 19:19
arqios said:
So that didn’t work out at all. Perhaps it was too niche. Oh well 🫥🎻🕊️🙏🏻
September 30th, 2026 19:19
statuesque
sorenbarrett said:
The myth of Pygmalion so carefully conceived in this poem. King sculpture creating a statue not of marble but of ivory that he fell in love with and Aphrodite turned to life marrying the two. But I see deeper meaning brought out by the latter part of the poem. A person worshiped and adored before marriage becomes common after.
\"Today she is simply
the person beside me,
doing the next thing
side by side.\"
How easily the holy, sacred and worshiped becomes the common. A fave my friend
September 30th, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
The myth of Pygmalion so carefully conceived in this poem. King sculpture creating a statue not of marble but of ivory that he fell in love with and Aphrodite turned to life marrying the two. But I see deeper meaning brought out by the latter part of the poem. A person worshiped and adored before marriage becomes common after.
\"Today she is simply
the person beside me,
doing the next thing
side by side.\"
How easily the holy, sacred and worshiped becomes the common. A fave my friend
September 30th, 2026 06:49
statuesque
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A charming and calming piece my friend
September 30th, 2026 05:57
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A charming and calming piece my friend
September 30th, 2026 05:57
welcome to canon hall
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I felt this, arqios. A lot of worthwhile work happens outside the rooms where people hand out legitimacy, and sometimes that outside work is where the real life is. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2026 20:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I felt this, arqios. A lot of worthwhile work happens outside the rooms where people hand out legitimacy, and sometimes that outside work is where the real life is. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2026 20:10
welcome to canon hall
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the undiscovered Voice.
September 29th, 2026 18:22
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the undiscovered Voice.
September 29th, 2026 18:22
welcome to canon hall
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
A very pleasent stroll within and outside the realm. One could hear the whispers. A lovely poem indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 15:34
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
A very pleasent stroll within and outside the realm. One could hear the whispers. A lovely poem indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 15:34
welcome to canon hall
MendedFences27 said:
A museum of poetry. Sounds like a good idea. Enjoyed your poem. Perhaps, those outside will one day be recognized. - Phil A.
September 29th, 2026 12:13
MendedFences27 said:
A museum of poetry. Sounds like a good idea. Enjoyed your poem. Perhaps, those outside will one day be recognized. - Phil A.
September 29th, 2026 12:13
welcome to canon hall
orchidee said:
Erm, is it cannon or canon? I been three hours trying to light this cannon, until someone told m it\'s a canon! lol.
September 29th, 2026 09:46
orchidee said:
Erm, is it cannon or canon? I been three hours trying to light this cannon, until someone told m it\'s a canon! lol.
September 29th, 2026 09:46
welcome to canon hall
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message here that grabs the mind and heart. So many artists that have not followed the beaten path the paved highway neglected during life have found immortality after death in creative work not accepted at their time. Encouraging and nicely presented Cryptic.
September 29th, 2026 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message here that grabs the mind and heart. So many artists that have not followed the beaten path the paved highway neglected during life have found immortality after death in creative work not accepted at their time. Encouraging and nicely presented Cryptic.
September 29th, 2026 06:17
welcome to canon hall
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Theres a certain tranquility here despite the numerous times and people who once walked the floors
September 29th, 2026 05:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Theres a certain tranquility here despite the numerous times and people who once walked the floors
September 29th, 2026 05:51
hate me
orchidee said:
Good write A. \'Hate\' in some older Bible versions can mean \'love less\' rather than \'hate\' itself.
September 28th, 2026 09:48
orchidee said:
Good write A. \'Hate\' in some older Bible versions can mean \'love less\' rather than \'hate\' itself.
September 28th, 2026 09:48
hate me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s something almost prayerful in this without it needing to announce itself as one. I liked that a lot. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2026 07:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s something almost prayerful in this without it needing to announce itself as one. I liked that a lot. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2026 07:02
hate me
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful dream from which I too often awake. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful dream from which I too often awake. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:30
hate me
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Sadly some people love to hate while others love peace my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:12
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Sadly some people love to hate while others love peace my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:12
dinner invitation
Kevin Hulme said:
Thoughts on how I feel? Fine Poem as usual.
September 27th, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Thoughts on how I feel? Fine Poem as usual.
September 27th, 2026 18:43
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