Comments received on poems by arqios
break of dawn
Neville said:
.. it can happen .. quick as the blink of an eye ..
July 19th, 2023 08:09
Neville said:
.. it can happen .. quick as the blink of an eye ..
July 19th, 2023 08:09
new bloom
Neville said:
its rarely as plain sailing as it says in the manual .. muchly enjoyed regardless .................... Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:30
Neville said:
its rarely as plain sailing as it says in the manual .. muchly enjoyed regardless .................... Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:30
new bloom
sorenbarrett said:
The swells are but waves that crest and fall. in this world, like a mobius strip, a half twist brings us back to where we began on a one sided journey. Lovely
July 18th, 2023 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
The swells are but waves that crest and fall. in this world, like a mobius strip, a half twist brings us back to where we began on a one sided journey. Lovely
July 18th, 2023 07:49
winter furnace
Bella Shepard said:
A lovely analogy dear friend, to forgive and possibly forget, that wounds may heal, but scars may remain.
July 17th, 2023 15:32
Bella Shepard said:
A lovely analogy dear friend, to forgive and possibly forget, that wounds may heal, but scars may remain.
July 17th, 2023 15:32
weedkillers
L. B. Mek said:
nature recognises no weeds
Gaia loves her children equal
its our toxic environments
that depict life as being deprived
of worth
red sands, stained by the crimson
of tears, from those who survived
rest
are well n truly deep into their
hard earned rest
this be the mercy imbued
in the promise between
death and destiny...
(love reading and engaging
with your poems, dear Poet
they never fail to push my limits
thank you!)
July 14th, 2023 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
nature recognises no weeds
Gaia loves her children equal
its our toxic environments
that depict life as being deprived
of worth
red sands, stained by the crimson
of tears, from those who survived
rest
are well n truly deep into their
hard earned rest
this be the mercy imbued
in the promise between
death and destiny...
(love reading and engaging
with your poems, dear Poet
they never fail to push my limits
thank you!)
July 14th, 2023 03:35
minutiae
L. B. Mek said:
windswept, from but a blink
squinting through life, hoping
choices come with marks
for intent..
and we roll our dice, to find
our place upon nature\'s sands..
(I so relate, dear Poet
loving the complexity
in your wordplay layers)
July 14th, 2023 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
windswept, from but a blink
squinting through life, hoping
choices come with marks
for intent..
and we roll our dice, to find
our place upon nature\'s sands..
(I so relate, dear Poet
loving the complexity
in your wordplay layers)
July 14th, 2023 03:30
Faraday\'s lack
Bella Shepard said:
I love reading about science, so this poem really intrigued me. I Wikipedia-ed Faraday and learned about Faraday efficiency and Faradaic loss. Very interesting. But for the mind of man, what would we be. Thank you for always stimulating the little gray cells dear poet, well done!
July 12th, 2023 11:09
Bella Shepard said:
I love reading about science, so this poem really intrigued me. I Wikipedia-ed Faraday and learned about Faraday efficiency and Faradaic loss. Very interesting. But for the mind of man, what would we be. Thank you for always stimulating the little gray cells dear poet, well done!
July 12th, 2023 11:09
minutiae
orchidee said:
How did you spend that extra second we had one year?
I made the most of it - sailed round the world 3,475 times; ran 8,593 marathons; and sang 6,496 songs - all in that second! lol.
I can\'t calculate if I would be able to do all that at the speed of light.
July 11th, 2023 10:09
orchidee said:
How did you spend that extra second we had one year?
I made the most of it - sailed round the world 3,475 times; ran 8,593 marathons; and sang 6,496 songs - all in that second! lol.
I can\'t calculate if I would be able to do all that at the speed of light.
July 11th, 2023 10:09
good lad
orchidee said:
The title is what KP says to me when I lend (give!) her more money for botox! lol.
July 10th, 2023 14:31
orchidee said:
The title is what KP says to me when I lend (give!) her more money for botox! lol.
July 10th, 2023 14:31
dancing koto
Neville said:
made me think on my most recent embu (moving prayer) my friend ..
July 9th, 2023 12:42
Neville said:
made me think on my most recent embu (moving prayer) my friend ..
July 9th, 2023 12:42
dancing koto
Bella Shepard said:
The deliberate movement and precision in each step of this dance is a thing of beauty. In a world where we seem to feel the need to move at max speed, this poem and video present an opportunity to pause and breath deep. Thank you dear poet!
July 9th, 2023 11:05
Bella Shepard said:
The deliberate movement and precision in each step of this dance is a thing of beauty. In a world where we seem to feel the need to move at max speed, this poem and video present an opportunity to pause and breath deep. Thank you dear poet!
July 9th, 2023 11:05
dancing koto
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna play me koto/zither thingy. I also played it in person years ago in Old Testament days. I whisked out me zither, lyre, etc. lol.
July 9th, 2023 09:44
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna play me koto/zither thingy. I also played it in person years ago in Old Testament days. I whisked out me zither, lyre, etc. lol.
July 9th, 2023 09:44
door
orchidee said:
Godo write CB.
My rather negative poem, a maxim, not that I ascribe to it, is:
\'Ohhh, when one door closes, cheer up; another one will slam in your face!\' \'heehee.
July 8th, 2023 11:56
orchidee said:
Godo write CB.
My rather negative poem, a maxim, not that I ascribe to it, is:
\'Ohhh, when one door closes, cheer up; another one will slam in your face!\' \'heehee.
July 8th, 2023 11:56
door
Neville said:
who in their write mind wants to be lonely and locked in ..
where would we be without them eh .. friends and doors that is .. Neville
July 8th, 2023 02:38
Neville said:
who in their write mind wants to be lonely and locked in ..
where would we be without them eh .. friends and doors that is .. Neville
July 8th, 2023 02:38
manicured thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Oh Cryptic this one has roots that go deep. Sounds do travel through the ground and plants do respond. Sometimes we do not hear the most essential or needful. Such a nice metaphor.
July 6th, 2023 10:00
sorenbarrett said:
Oh Cryptic this one has roots that go deep. Sounds do travel through the ground and plants do respond. Sometimes we do not hear the most essential or needful. Such a nice metaphor.
July 6th, 2023 10:00
manicured thoughts
2781 said:
Their predicting a dry year.
Need to get the roots into good deep soil.
Good gardening.
July 6th, 2023 09:44
2781 said:
Their predicting a dry year.
Need to get the roots into good deep soil.
Good gardening.
July 6th, 2023 09:44
manicured thoughts
orchidee said:
A fine write CB.
Could be a windy write - fresh sprouts - brussels?! lol.
July 6th, 2023 07:01
orchidee said:
A fine write CB.
Could be a windy write - fresh sprouts - brussels?! lol.
July 6th, 2023 07:01
pop goes resolve
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic words my friend. Vivid images ignighting emotions.
July 5th, 2023 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic words my friend. Vivid images ignighting emotions.
July 5th, 2023 10:14
pop goes resolve
Neville said:
Could this possibly be when she finally gave up her secret .. Just asking for a friend you understand ... Neville
July 5th, 2023 05:26
Neville said:
Could this possibly be when she finally gave up her secret .. Just asking for a friend you understand ... Neville
July 5th, 2023 05:26
squelch
Bobby O said:
And hopefully before the paint dries I could add influence and an escape window ?? Dude , I wanna be Sundance.
July 1st, 2023 00:03
Bobby O said:
And hopefully before the paint dries I could add influence and an escape window ?? Dude , I wanna be Sundance.
July 1st, 2023 00:03
mimesis by torchlight
orchidee said:
I (and Bobby too probably) are lost in the cryptic maze! heehee.
June 17th, 2023 12:31
orchidee said:
I (and Bobby too probably) are lost in the cryptic maze! heehee.
June 17th, 2023 12:31
mimesis by torchlight
Bobby O said:
I got excited when thinking if I knew what a fortnight was I could taste some oranges but then I got all scared about the daggers. ???
June 17th, 2023 10:08
Bobby O said:
I got excited when thinking if I knew what a fortnight was I could taste some oranges but then I got all scared about the daggers. ???
June 17th, 2023 10:08
empty bookends
L. B. Mek said:
inspirational words, dear Poet
I couldn\'t help but try n pen
the feeble poetic reply below
thank you!
(that \'green room\' of perhaps
a pretence of betwixt, coveting
assurances, while yearning
to throw that dice of innate
take a chance on ourselves
if only, our heart\'s and mind\'s
came with fireproof vests
to lessen those scorching
bruises, of life\'s menacing
indiscriminate, ill-Fate...)
June 16th, 2023 01:29
L. B. Mek said:
inspirational words, dear Poet
I couldn\'t help but try n pen
the feeble poetic reply below
thank you!
(that \'green room\' of perhaps
a pretence of betwixt, coveting
assurances, while yearning
to throw that dice of innate
take a chance on ourselves
if only, our heart\'s and mind\'s
came with fireproof vests
to lessen those scorching
bruises, of life\'s menacing
indiscriminate, ill-Fate...)
June 16th, 2023 01:29
splice and sail
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor, old as Homer but seaworthy still. I always loved Melville. Indeed words that search thoughts and not only the unseen wind of our words but its effect driving vessels forward. Thank you for the call to join this inky journey.
June 13th, 2023 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor, old as Homer but seaworthy still. I always loved Melville. Indeed words that search thoughts and not only the unseen wind of our words but its effect driving vessels forward. Thank you for the call to join this inky journey.
June 13th, 2023 05:53
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