Comments received on poems by arqios



weaving dreams
NafisaSB said:

Sweet dreams ๐Ÿ˜ด relax and get refreshed and may your dreams be attainable and come true ๐Ÿ˜

October 13th, 2026 04:31

abandonee
NafisaSB said:

Enjoyed the verse ๐Ÿ‘

October 13th, 2026 04:25

matilda to the coast
Dan Williams said:

Wow. My ancestors came here as indentured servants from Scotland, Ireland, Wales when this country was for some a penal colony. I have tried to tell their stories unsuccessfully, so thank you for this. Fourth verse especially. Nice work.

October 12th, 2026 21:10

abandonee
Tristan Robert Lange said:

LOL! Rik, I\'m just wondering what happens when the band goes on tour. Does he need orthopedic clearance, or will a good pair of compression socks suffice? Either way, I\'m buying tickets! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐ŸŽท๐Ÿฅ

October 12th, 2026 19:37

abandonee
Tony Grannell said:

Hello, arqios,

Did you publish this poem just a few days ago? It matters not for a lovely poem it is. \'Music is the breath of life\' according to the bard and this poem proves it. Joyous.

Fond regards,

Tony.

October 12th, 2026 11:17

abandonee
orchidee said:

Good writeeeeee A.

October 12th, 2026 08:14

abandonee
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write my friend, lovely piece

October 12th, 2026 07:14

abandonee
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely message in this poem my friend. One only depends on oneself for company and joy. Don\'t march to the step of the troops but to one\'s own tune and one will never be lonely or sad. Nicely done

October 12th, 2026 06:52

matilda to the coast
Paul Bell said:

I suppose in a way, Austrailia benifited from prisoners from Britain.
You sort of can\'t get it into your mind that someone who stole a loaf of bread could be shipped out to serve a sentence.
In saying that, all my ancesters came from Australia. lol

October 12th, 2026 05:52

matilda to the coast
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Those boots got to me, Rikโ€ฆsuch a young person to have been through so much already. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

October 11th, 2026 23:07

matilda to the coast
Tony Grannell said:

Hello, arqios,

An horrendous affair. \'Civilised\' do gooders doing what they do best, adulterating the minds, hearts and freedoms of those poor honest souls of blue skies to grey cobblestons. This is a poem well worth reading, as an Irish man,I found it heartbreaking as it is relative. A superlative passage of poetry. Thank you very much.

Wishing you much happiness,

Tony.

October 11th, 2026 16:09

matilda to the coast
Kevin Hulme said:

A fine Historical Piece. Good Write.

October 11th, 2026 15:18

weaving dreams
NafisaSB said:

Good night ๐Ÿ˜ด sleep tight ๐Ÿ˜ด

October 11th, 2026 12:56

matilda to the coast
orchidee said:

Good write A. Yes, criminals deported to Australia from the UK in olden days. \'Why send us your rubbish?\' do you reply there?! lol.

October 11th, 2026 10:04

matilda to the coast
Friendship said:

nicely written

October 11th, 2026 08:39

matilda to the coast
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

a much enjoyed and epic journey

October 11th, 2026 07:53

matilda to the coast
sorenbarrett said:

Epic and historical in its implications it dives deep into psychology, culture and social manipulation to tell a tale of man\'s need for conformity. The history of the American Indian, the Australian bushman, Africans and many others adopted into a new culture as well as those captured and raised in a foreign culture and redeemed. Even feral children brought back to society often die or at best find it hard to adapt. A most wonderful write my friend that has implications even for those raised in society with different values and upbringing. This poem deserves far greater exposure. A fave

October 11th, 2026 06:11

weaving dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Dream away Rik, dream away.

Andy

October 11th, 2026 01:09

weaving dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Rik, youโ€™ve talked me into calling it a nightโ€ฆthough now I want a teddy before I go! Great write, my friend.๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

October 10th, 2026 22:07

weaving dreams
Doggerel Dave said:

Insomnia at night, sleep all day. I have hopes that your short enough to remeber poem may be the first step to righting the situation...

October 10th, 2026 18:39

weaving dreams
Kevin Hulme said:

The Annoying thing about Dreams is how they slip from the Memory when waking.
A good short Write.

October 10th, 2026 14:54

weaving dreams
orchidee said:

Good write weaver, erm, A. lol.

October 10th, 2026 10:36

weaving dreams
Friendship said:

Well done

October 10th, 2026 07:07

weaving dreams
Tony Grannell said:

Hello, arqios,

In snoring dreams and all is well with the world, the epitome of serenity. I\'m quite relaxed, myself after the reading. A lovely poem.

Fond regards,

Tony.

October 10th, 2026 06:28

weaving dreams
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Dreams, our ultimate entertainment , be they good or bad

October 10th, 2026 06:02

weaving dreams
sorenbarrett said:

We all become children again in dreams and the soft covers of a bed where time has no meaning. A mother\'s loving embrace resurrected in night\'s shadows. This poem is tender and comforting. I loved particularly the first stanza where your poetic imagery breaks the silence like a snore. The last line \"to ruffle night\'s silence\" is marvelous and caught my attention right away. Well done my friend.

October 10th, 2026 05:54

dry creek theory
Goldfinch60 said:

Those poems will never be lost Rik.

Andy

October 10th, 2026 01:10

dry creek theory
Kevin Hulme said:

\'What leaves is not always lost\' etc is such a good way of putting Something that can live on.
A good Write.

October 9th, 2026 18:46

dry creek theory
Tristan Robert Lange said:

arqios, I love when someone reads something in my work that I hadnโ€™t consciously put there. Makes me want to sit down and hear them out. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

October 9th, 2026 11:48

dry creek theory
vicecream said:

I LOVE that last stanza especially

October 9th, 2026 10:16

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