Comments received on poems by arqios
where he was
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really moved me. There is a quiet stillness here that feels profound. The poem captures a moment of recognition so subtle that it might be missed, yet it changes everything. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 11:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really moved me. There is a quiet stillness here that feels profound. The poem captures a moment of recognition so subtle that it might be missed, yet it changes everything. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 11:01
where he was
orchidee said:
Good write A. I don\'t suppose I will get any cryptic meanings in this. lol.
June 8th, 2026 09:02
orchidee said:
Good write A. I don\'t suppose I will get any cryptic meanings in this. lol.
June 8th, 2026 09:02
recross
Tom Dylan said:
A moving piece, really well written. Sometimes people drift apart. Life just works that way sometimes, doesn\'t it?
June 8th, 2026 07:03
Tom Dylan said:
A moving piece, really well written. Sometimes people drift apart. Life just works that way sometimes, doesn\'t it?
June 8th, 2026 07:03
where he was
sorenbarrett said:
Always looking for depth in what is near I smiled at the word play of frame. Then it seemed to me that in the double meaning the window became the picture. Both reflection of what is within and vision through it of what is outside double meaning again in this frame. No one outside having departed, withdrawn within where the reflection showed he still remained. Under such realization the floorboards do cool. Good or bad the reader is left to choose.
June 8th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Always looking for depth in what is near I smiled at the word play of frame. Then it seemed to me that in the double meaning the window became the picture. Both reflection of what is within and vision through it of what is outside double meaning again in this frame. No one outside having departed, withdrawn within where the reflection showed he still remained. Under such realization the floorboards do cool. Good or bad the reader is left to choose.
June 8th, 2026 06:30
the baron declares
NafisaSB said:
enjoyed the read, though not seen the movie...
June 8th, 2026 00:14
NafisaSB said:
enjoyed the read, though not seen the movie...
June 8th, 2026 00:14
recross
Kevin Hulme said:
An sad fact of life in separations .
I had Old friends I hope to see again.
Even though they live at the other end of the Country. Good Write.
June 7th, 2026 18:16
Kevin Hulme said:
An sad fact of life in separations .
I had Old friends I hope to see again.
Even though they live at the other end of the Country. Good Write.
June 7th, 2026 18:16
recross
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this speaks to me. There have been people whose paths diverged from mine not because anyone was wrong, but because life simply carried us in different directions. The poem captures that bittersweet acceptance beautifully. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this speaks to me. There have been people whose paths diverged from mine not because anyone was wrong, but because life simply carried us in different directions. The poem captures that bittersweet acceptance beautifully. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:06
recross
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet maturity in this—feeling the ache, but still honoring the necessity of distance.
Feels like you’re holding both truths at once… loss in one hand, acceptance in the other.
June 7th, 2026 06:51
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet maturity in this—feeling the ache, but still honoring the necessity of distance.
Feels like you’re holding both truths at once… loss in one hand, acceptance in the other.
June 7th, 2026 06:51
recross
sorenbarrett said:
Well thought out this poem presents human relationships as electrical in nature, at times needing insulation from one another and although the poem seems to look forward to future crossings I see it as leading sparks (be they good or bad) and a possible short in the system. Nicely done my friend and a fave
June 7th, 2026 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
Well thought out this poem presents human relationships as electrical in nature, at times needing insulation from one another and although the poem seems to look forward to future crossings I see it as leading sparks (be they good or bad) and a possible short in the system. Nicely done my friend and a fave
June 7th, 2026 05:49
the baron declares
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of the \'Python\' Sketch where a Man Claimed to have written all of Shakespeare\'s Plays . And his Wife the Sonnets. A very Surreal Poem. Enjoyed.
June 6th, 2026 19:15
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of the \'Python\' Sketch where a Man Claimed to have written all of Shakespeare\'s Plays . And his Wife the Sonnets. A very Surreal Poem. Enjoyed.
June 6th, 2026 19:15
the baron declares
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m here again, unless a blip cuts me off again. Good write A.
June 6th, 2026 11:22
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m here again, unless a blip cuts me off again. Good write A.
June 6th, 2026 11:22
the price of looking
orchidee said:
It\'s not showing recent poems on here - a blip? You having trouble posting too?
June 6th, 2026 10:59
orchidee said:
It\'s not showing recent poems on here - a blip? You having trouble posting too?
June 6th, 2026 10:59
the baron declares
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really made me smile. The poem captures that wonderful spirit of tall tales where every obstacle becomes an epic challenge and every trivial victory becomes a legendary feat. I had a great time with this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this really made me smile. The poem captures that wonderful spirit of tall tales where every obstacle becomes an epic challenge and every trivial victory becomes a legendary feat. I had a great time with this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:31
the baron declares
Katie B. said:
Clever, entertaining tale. A most enjoyable read my friend.
June 6th, 2026 06:32
Katie B. said:
Clever, entertaining tale. A most enjoyable read my friend.
June 6th, 2026 06:32
the baron declares
sorenbarrett said:
Like the memory and story with some word play. Grueling was a great one reminiscent of gruel that goes well with the table. The fantastic exploits beyond belief are filed away as the exaggerations we all experience from fishermen to all that tell us of there exploits with poetic license. Great fun my friend and another fave
June 6th, 2026 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Like the memory and story with some word play. Grueling was a great one reminiscent of gruel that goes well with the table. The fantastic exploits beyond belief are filed away as the exaggerations we all experience from fishermen to all that tell us of there exploits with poetic license. Great fun my friend and another fave
June 6th, 2026 05:58
let the shadows drift
Mutley Ravishes said:
Daring to dream, and then working (with a lot of help from \"someone\"!) to see it materialize is a trip and a half, isn`t it? I`ve found all the \"seven sins\" are called in to play their parts in this work. Those \"parts\" being (necessary) opposition to the materialization of the dreams! What do you think?
Great write, Arqios.
June 6th, 2026 00:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
Daring to dream, and then working (with a lot of help from \"someone\"!) to see it materialize is a trip and a half, isn`t it? I`ve found all the \"seven sins\" are called in to play their parts in this work. Those \"parts\" being (necessary) opposition to the materialization of the dreams! What do you think?
Great write, Arqios.
June 6th, 2026 00:17
let the shadows drift
Kevin Hulme said:
I get the feeling this is something that\'s Sustains us through the Ages . Hope maybe.
June 5th, 2026 19:44
Kevin Hulme said:
I get the feeling this is something that\'s Sustains us through the Ages . Hope maybe.
June 5th, 2026 19:44
10-4 coded shouts
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t think I ever owned a proper kite. Twigs and paper, string and wind was all you needed.
Then they invented girls and the world changed forever.
June 5th, 2026 10:24
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t think I ever owned a proper kite. Twigs and paper, string and wind was all you needed.
Then they invented girls and the world changed forever.
June 5th, 2026 10:24
let the shadows drift
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good advice well written
June 5th, 2026 07:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good advice well written
June 5th, 2026 07:51
let the shadows drift
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I found myself thinking about ideas, communities, and even people while reading this. Things can be forgotten, overlooked, or tested, yet somehow persist because others continue to carry them forward. I really enjoyed that aspect of the poem. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I found myself thinking about ideas, communities, and even people while reading this. Things can be forgotten, overlooked, or tested, yet somehow persist because others continue to carry them forward. I really enjoyed that aspect of the poem. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:31
let the shadows drift
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about human aspiration.Wanting more that Life can give.And so let the shadows drift because in the end you make your own destiny.I could br wrong here but that\'s life.
June 5th, 2026 05:35
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about human aspiration.Wanting more that Life can give.And so let the shadows drift because in the end you make your own destiny.I could br wrong here but that\'s life.
June 5th, 2026 05:35
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