Comments received on poems by arqios
choirside
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read some say silence can be deafening but to only those who can hear it, nicely done
July 26th, 2025 08:23
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read some say silence can be deafening but to only those who can hear it, nicely done
July 26th, 2025 08:23
choirside
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful piece Cryptic I particularly loved the last line that in its contradiction those notes can be heard. It seems that all things are waves and particles two ways of seeing the same thing and sound no different is carried in those waves where particle vibration makes it recognizable to the human ear. I believe that silence can be heard because like everything else there is no absolute but if there were it too would be heard. A fave if for nothing else for listening to my ramblings.
July 26th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful piece Cryptic I particularly loved the last line that in its contradiction those notes can be heard. It seems that all things are waves and particles two ways of seeing the same thing and sound no different is carried in those waves where particle vibration makes it recognizable to the human ear. I believe that silence can be heard because like everything else there is no absolute but if there were it too would be heard. A fave if for nothing else for listening to my ramblings.
July 26th, 2025 05:07
murmur of whispers
Goldfinch60 said:
You can never hear them coming arqios until they want their food.
Andy
July 26th, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
You can never hear them coming arqios until they want their food.
Andy
July 26th, 2025 01:14
murmur of whispers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Beautiful! The imagery is wrapped in a soft rhythm, love the flow lots, and that there is a quiet grace present in that closing benediction Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Beautiful! The imagery is wrapped in a soft rhythm, love the flow lots, and that there is a quiet grace present in that closing benediction Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:54
murmur of whispers
Priya Tomar said:
Very lovely !
The last stanza has heart touching tone......
July 25th, 2025 10:52
Priya Tomar said:
Very lovely !
The last stanza has heart touching tone......
July 25th, 2025 10:52
murmur of whispers
Bella Shepard said:
On little cat\'s feet this poem creeps in and charms. Delightful!
July 25th, 2025 08:50
Bella Shepard said:
On little cat\'s feet this poem creeps in and charms. Delightful!
July 25th, 2025 08:50
murmur of whispers
arqios said:
Hopefully the animal lovers here catch on to this as well...
July 25th, 2025 06:20
arqios said:
Hopefully the animal lovers here catch on to this as well...
July 25th, 2025 06:20
murmur of whispers
arqios said:
I hope the physical shape of the poem also elevated the visual aspect of the poem.
July 25th, 2025 05:59
arqios said:
I hope the physical shape of the poem also elevated the visual aspect of the poem.
July 25th, 2025 05:59
murmur of whispers
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed this, those little pads tip toeing through the night, getting up to no good, lovely
July 25th, 2025 04:51
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed this, those little pads tip toeing through the night, getting up to no good, lovely
July 25th, 2025 04:51
murmur of whispers
sorenbarrett said:
Images of Carl Sandburg and Fog that comes on little cat feet. Loved this write Cryptic I have had cats and it evokes images of them. I can hear their soft padded walk over the floor. Nicely done a fave
July 25th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Images of Carl Sandburg and Fog that comes on little cat feet. Loved this write Cryptic I have had cats and it evokes images of them. I can hear their soft padded walk over the floor. Nicely done a fave
July 25th, 2025 04:24
riptide fantasia
Goldfinch60 said:
Let\' just continue dancing to the tunes arqios.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Let\' just continue dancing to the tunes arqios.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:50
riptide fantasia
Dan Williams said:
I like the short but intent phrases, \"Staccato sparks ignite\", \"in the hush between heartbeats\", nice.
July 25th, 2025 00:24
Dan Williams said:
I like the short but intent phrases, \"Staccato sparks ignite\", \"in the hush between heartbeats\", nice.
July 25th, 2025 00:24
riptide fantasia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is damn electric...sound, sweat, tide, all folding into one motion. “We are the current / We are infinite” is such a mic drop. Beautiful crafting done in this poem, my friend...and that is always the case with you. Love this. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is damn electric...sound, sweat, tide, all folding into one motion. “We are the current / We are infinite” is such a mic drop. Beautiful crafting done in this poem, my friend...and that is always the case with you. Love this. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 08:12
5 Varya and Anya’s Vigil
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this holds such delicate strength. “Smiling around broken china”...I get that, deeply. it’s a quiet kind of survival only sisters can share. Each image blooms with restraint. This whole suite has been a gift to witness...I’m here for the home stretch, my friend. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 07:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this holds such delicate strength. “Smiling around broken china”...I get that, deeply. it’s a quiet kind of survival only sisters can share. Each image blooms with restraint. This whole suite has been a gift to witness...I’m here for the home stretch, my friend. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 07:19
riptide fantasia
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely write taking me back to the day of out dancing and clubbing, I find music is like a photograph, you remember each song where and when you first heard it, they evoke emotions and so on, the beauty of creative art, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 05:45
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely write taking me back to the day of out dancing and clubbing, I find music is like a photograph, you remember each song where and when you first heard it, they evoke emotions and so on, the beauty of creative art, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 05:45
riptide fantasia
arqios said:
Something a bit different for a hopefully exciting read🕊️🙏🏻
July 24th, 2025 05:14
arqios said:
Something a bit different for a hopefully exciting read🕊️🙏🏻
July 24th, 2025 05:14
riptide fantasia
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poem serves to celebrate the power of art, music, and human connection, illustrating how these experiences can lift individuals out of their everyday lives and into moments of shared ecstasy. The exploration of rhythm and movement emphasizes the beauty of unity in diversity, suggesting that in these moments, we can feel infinite.
July 24th, 2025 03:55
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poem serves to celebrate the power of art, music, and human connection, illustrating how these experiences can lift individuals out of their everyday lives and into moments of shared ecstasy. The exploration of rhythm and movement emphasizes the beauty of unity in diversity, suggesting that in these moments, we can feel infinite.
July 24th, 2025 03:55
riptide fantasia
sorenbarrett said:
This could have been anything from the 20\'s to the 90\'s with the mirror reference I thought first of disco and the disco ball. Music fills the senses from visual, auditory and tactile. This write encompases them all with briliant images that take me through many songs of the past. Music as sacred as poetry. A fave
July 24th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
This could have been anything from the 20\'s to the 90\'s with the mirror reference I thought first of disco and the disco ball. Music fills the senses from visual, auditory and tactile. This write encompases them all with briliant images that take me through many songs of the past. Music as sacred as poetry. A fave
July 24th, 2025 03:51
5 Varya and Anya’s Vigil
arqios said:
his is the 5th in the Cherry Orchard suite, almost at the home stretch now... thanks for putting up with this 🙏🏻
July 23rd, 2025 18:12
arqios said:
his is the 5th in the Cherry Orchard suite, almost at the home stretch now... thanks for putting up with this 🙏🏻
July 23rd, 2025 18:12
5 Varya and Anya’s Vigil
arqios said:
when doubts turn to reality, that\'s where the buck ends
July 23rd, 2025 18:10
arqios said:
when doubts turn to reality, that\'s where the buck ends
July 23rd, 2025 18:10
5 Varya and Anya’s Vigil
Poetic Licence said:
I have no idea of the title but the write to me resemble the loss of hope, clinging on together to reignite that fire, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 16:01
Poetic Licence said:
I have no idea of the title but the write to me resemble the loss of hope, clinging on together to reignite that fire, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 16:01
5 Varya and Anya’s Vigil
arqios said:
perhaps it could be perceived as a down-vote on the cherry orchard series... so\'s the landscape at the moment
July 23rd, 2025 15:14
arqios said:
perhaps it could be perceived as a down-vote on the cherry orchard series... so\'s the landscape at the moment
July 23rd, 2025 15:14
5 Varya and Anya’s Vigil
arqios said:
and now we\'re back to 1/3, seems quite reflective...
July 23rd, 2025 07:17
arqios said:
and now we\'re back to 1/3, seems quite reflective...
July 23rd, 2025 07:17
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