Comments received on poems by arqios
Hidden Garden (reverse nonet)
Neville said:
Neville ..forms poetic these over fawning stop must really I ,like to not what\'s Hey,
December 5th, 2024 09:26
Neville said:
Neville ..forms poetic these over fawning stop must really I ,like to not what\'s Hey,
December 5th, 2024 09:26
Hidden Garden (reverse nonet)
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful and relaxing passage. I was in that very spot this morning. Yes secrets lie in the leaves, indeed many of which we don’t understand. A very calming read.
December 5th, 2024 08:31
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful and relaxing passage. I was in that very spot this morning. Yes secrets lie in the leaves, indeed many of which we don’t understand. A very calming read.
December 5th, 2024 08:31
Hidden Garden (reverse nonet)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh, I thorougly enjoyed the reverse nonet. What a wonderful feel the form gave the poem. A beautiful write, my friend! 🌹👏
December 5th, 2024 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh, I thorougly enjoyed the reverse nonet. What a wonderful feel the form gave the poem. A beautiful write, my friend! 🌹👏
December 5th, 2024 08:25
Hidden Garden (reverse nonet)
TobaniNataiella said:
A place to just chill, i enjoyed the read, Thank you
December 5th, 2024 06:27
TobaniNataiella said:
A place to just chill, i enjoyed the read, Thank you
December 5th, 2024 06:27
Hidden Garden (reverse nonet)
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, serenely peaceful in everyway. My kind of peaceful 🌹
December 5th, 2024 06:03
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, serenely peaceful in everyway. My kind of peaceful 🌹
December 5th, 2024 06:03
tango of us
NafisaSB said:
dance your way through life - enjoy the beautiful days
nice one
December 5th, 2024 02:21
NafisaSB said:
dance your way through life - enjoy the beautiful days
nice one
December 5th, 2024 02:21
home is where the heart beats
NafisaSB said:
yes whatever the home is like - happy, sad, challenging or trying - there is no place like home..
good one
December 5th, 2024 02:16
NafisaSB said:
yes whatever the home is like - happy, sad, challenging or trying - there is no place like home..
good one
December 5th, 2024 02:16
home is where the heart beats
Goldfinch60 said:
Our homes are such special places arqios, people are always welcome into our home.
Andy
December 5th, 2024 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Our homes are such special places arqios, people are always welcome into our home.
Andy
December 5th, 2024 02:08
mateship’s duty of care
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Poem . Good that you finally got a Brother.
December 4th, 2024 20:32
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Poem . Good that you finally got a Brother.
December 4th, 2024 20:32
home is where the heart beats
David Wakeling said:
This is a thoughtful piece. Home certainly is important.Well done
December 4th, 2024 17:37
David Wakeling said:
This is a thoughtful piece. Home certainly is important.Well done
December 4th, 2024 17:37
home is where the heart beats
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I concur with our friend Soren on this, actually. Your poem both works in terms of speaking of one\'s abode, but also one\'s body. I would even add that this could even mean, where one might find themselves, and their heart, to be? It could be engaging in something one is passionate with, or spending time with a dear friend. Indeed, home is where the heart is...no matter where or with whom it is. Well done, my friend. A most excellent write and a profound read! 🌹👏❤️🏡
December 4th, 2024 11:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I concur with our friend Soren on this, actually. Your poem both works in terms of speaking of one\'s abode, but also one\'s body. I would even add that this could even mean, where one might find themselves, and their heart, to be? It could be engaging in something one is passionate with, or spending time with a dear friend. Indeed, home is where the heart is...no matter where or with whom it is. Well done, my friend. A most excellent write and a profound read! 🌹👏❤️🏡
December 4th, 2024 11:11
home is where the heart beats
Cassie58 said:
Home sweet home. Our refuse and where the heart is. Whether quiet or noisy and full of young adults in my case, I wouldn’t have it any other way. When it gets too crazy, a trip to the river does it for me. Enjoyed.
December 4th, 2024 08:36
Cassie58 said:
Home sweet home. Our refuse and where the heart is. Whether quiet or noisy and full of young adults in my case, I wouldn’t have it any other way. When it gets too crazy, a trip to the river does it for me. Enjoyed.
December 4th, 2024 08:36
home is where the heart beats
Neville said:
excellent ink & spilt so unashamedly & truthfully .. 👍
December 4th, 2024 05:39
Neville said:
excellent ink & spilt so unashamedly & truthfully .. 👍
December 4th, 2024 05:39
home is where the heart beats
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic, Again, if you dive just below the surface of your poems, there is much deeper hidden meaning. Yes home is where the hot is and that means literally as well. What better homes than the body that we have? Yet As you say, even there, we are not alone. Our thoughts quarrel with our emotions and in that noise, we sometimes find resolution in peace. Where else can we go but there?
December 4th, 2024 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic, Again, if you dive just below the surface of your poems, there is much deeper hidden meaning. Yes home is where the hot is and that means literally as well. What better homes than the body that we have? Yet As you say, even there, we are not alone. Our thoughts quarrel with our emotions and in that noise, we sometimes find resolution in peace. Where else can we go but there?
December 4th, 2024 05:30
home is where the heart beats
TobaniNataiella said:
Safety in the castle, enjoyed the read
December 4th, 2024 05:21
TobaniNataiella said:
Safety in the castle, enjoyed the read
December 4th, 2024 05:21
tango of us
Cassie58 said:
A wonderful use of metaphor here. You caught the start of romance building up to the passion of the tango. Final line, completes the poem perfectly. Much enjoyed.
December 4th, 2024 03:46
Cassie58 said:
A wonderful use of metaphor here. You caught the start of romance building up to the passion of the tango. Final line, completes the poem perfectly. Much enjoyed.
December 4th, 2024 03:46
tango of us
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios. It is so true that dancing together makes you one.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios. It is so true that dancing together makes you one.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:59
a rude remorse
TobaniNataiella said:
No one can make it successfully on their own, we all need support at some stage. Enjoyable read
December 4th, 2024 00:00
TobaniNataiella said:
No one can make it successfully on their own, we all need support at some stage. Enjoyable read
December 4th, 2024 00:00
tango of us
Thad Wilk said:
An outstanding poem
and great use of metaphor!! 👍
The rhyme, \"rhythm\" and flow
a dance I so adore! 🎵 🎶🤩
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 3rd, 2024 19:35
Thad Wilk said:
An outstanding poem
and great use of metaphor!! 👍
The rhyme, \"rhythm\" and flow
a dance I so adore! 🎵 🎶🤩
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 3rd, 2024 19:35
tango of us
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love love love the word play: two-gether. Brilliant. Wonderful poem my friend! 🙏❤️
December 3rd, 2024 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love love love the word play: two-gether. Brilliant. Wonderful poem my friend! 🙏❤️
December 3rd, 2024 09:40
where I could no longer go home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My childhood home is still standing all these years later! I lived there till I moved out with my then fiancé, now wife when I was around 20. I drive by it occasionally, which always feels weird. So. I can only imagine the feeling of driving by and no home being there! Anyway, not sure if your poem has any sort of metaphorical meaning, which it totally could have…it is quite the powerful poem here, friend. It could mean a literal home…it could also be a metaphor for the dissolution or destruction of the family. Wishing one could go home but there being no home or family who will receive them for whatever reason. Either way, this is a wonderful Shakespearean sonnet my friend! 🌹👏
December 3rd, 2024 08:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My childhood home is still standing all these years later! I lived there till I moved out with my then fiancé, now wife when I was around 20. I drive by it occasionally, which always feels weird. So. I can only imagine the feeling of driving by and no home being there! Anyway, not sure if your poem has any sort of metaphorical meaning, which it totally could have…it is quite the powerful poem here, friend. It could mean a literal home…it could also be a metaphor for the dissolution or destruction of the family. Wishing one could go home but there being no home or family who will receive them for whatever reason. Either way, this is a wonderful Shakespearean sonnet my friend! 🌹👏
December 3rd, 2024 08:50
where I could no longer go home
Teddy.15 said:
This is some beautiful reflection, Rome isn\'t far from me, and when I visited this year to find them rebuilding for more metro stops underground trains like in London. I love nature and I\'m very lucky to live in the magnificent Tuscan countryside, I don\'t like to see new builds fortunately here it\'s very difficult to do. This makes me think about my home London and how it\'s all so built up and what underneath it all. Most enjoyed this and the reflection it has given me. 🌹
December 3rd, 2024 06:05
Teddy.15 said:
This is some beautiful reflection, Rome isn\'t far from me, and when I visited this year to find them rebuilding for more metro stops underground trains like in London. I love nature and I\'m very lucky to live in the magnificent Tuscan countryside, I don\'t like to see new builds fortunately here it\'s very difficult to do. This makes me think about my home London and how it\'s all so built up and what underneath it all. Most enjoyed this and the reflection it has given me. 🌹
December 3rd, 2024 06:05
tango of us
Neville said:
I\'m ashamed to say I\'m more of a hand jive kinda guy but I know folk who live n breathe dance & I have a good deal of respect for them & their particular art form ..
December 3rd, 2024 05:59
Neville said:
I\'m ashamed to say I\'m more of a hand jive kinda guy but I know folk who live n breathe dance & I have a good deal of respect for them & their particular art form ..
December 3rd, 2024 05:59
tango of us
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor. Through my years of life, I have mastered several dances, but although I’ve tried the tango I have never mastered it. It is a wonderful dance of emotion and passion just like life itself. I guess I’ve never mastered life either and I’m still working on it
December 3rd, 2024 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor. Through my years of life, I have mastered several dances, but although I’ve tried the tango I have never mastered it. It is a wonderful dance of emotion and passion just like life itself. I guess I’ve never mastered life either and I’m still working on it
December 3rd, 2024 05:56
tango of us
TobaniNataiella said:
A lovely piece of evocative writing, thank you Arqios
December 3rd, 2024 05:37
TobaniNataiella said:
A lovely piece of evocative writing, thank you Arqios
December 3rd, 2024 05:37
Boy and Bonnet
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful, so touching, and so much love passing back and fro
fantastic
December 3rd, 2024 00:44
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful, so touching, and so much love passing back and fro
fantastic
December 3rd, 2024 00:44
where I could no longer go home
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
and thought provoking write!
I took a plane to visit my
place where I was born, it
changed so much in only
ten years, clubs gone, movie
theaters abandoned, just
didn\'t seem like my old
home town any more..
Anywho, thanks for sharing
a great read indeed!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 2nd, 2024 23:41
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
and thought provoking write!
I took a plane to visit my
place where I was born, it
changed so much in only
ten years, clubs gone, movie
theaters abandoned, just
didn\'t seem like my old
home town any more..
Anywho, thanks for sharing
a great read indeed!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 2nd, 2024 23:41
where I could no longer go home
Doggerel Dave said:
A polished write. ....I cannot relate that to myself but as a reminder of the transience of life and place, You\'ve cracked it.
December 2nd, 2024 16:23
Doggerel Dave said:
A polished write. ....I cannot relate that to myself but as a reminder of the transience of life and place, You\'ve cracked it.
December 2nd, 2024 16:23
where I could no longer go home
Neville said:
You took me back to Betsy Drury\'s old ramshackle cottage (they said she was a witch) not far from my mothers pre-marital home in the wilds of Devon .. I have written about it often .. a very special place for me & mine .. muchly enjoyed .. Neville
December 2nd, 2024 08:45
Neville said:
You took me back to Betsy Drury\'s old ramshackle cottage (they said she was a witch) not far from my mothers pre-marital home in the wilds of Devon .. I have written about it often .. a very special place for me & mine .. muchly enjoyed .. Neville
December 2nd, 2024 08:45
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