Comments received on poems by arqios
right here, right now
arqios said:
2/3 - now this is beginning to look interesting... let\'s see where the day takes us!
July 29th, 2025 04:13
arqios said:
2/3 - now this is beginning to look interesting... let\'s see where the day takes us!
July 29th, 2025 04:13
right here, right now
sorenbarrett said:
This is one of those rare poems that can be read in any order or its lines scrambled and still makes sense in much the same way. It has a lovely care free carpe diem feel to it and gets a fave for its creativity.
July 29th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This is one of those rare poems that can be read in any order or its lines scrambled and still makes sense in much the same way. It has a lovely care free carpe diem feel to it and gets a fave for its creativity.
July 29th, 2025 04:11
right here, right now
arqios said:
I’m excited to share “right here, right now,” a poem about seizing the moment,
chasing sparks of connection, and discovering home in simple steps.
No spoilers—just lean in, let the imagery of umbrellas, fireflies, and spinning compasses guide you.
What line speaks to you most? Where do you find your “right here, right now”?
I’d love to hear your thoughts and experiences. 🕊️👍📝📲
July 29th, 2025 02:55
arqios said:
I’m excited to share “right here, right now,” a poem about seizing the moment,
chasing sparks of connection, and discovering home in simple steps.
No spoilers—just lean in, let the imagery of umbrellas, fireflies, and spinning compasses guide you.
What line speaks to you most? Where do you find your “right here, right now”?
I’d love to hear your thoughts and experiences. 🕊️👍📝📲
July 29th, 2025 02:55
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
NafisaSB said:
Hope this continues for all time. A very cheerful and positive poem
July 29th, 2025 01:54
NafisaSB said:
Hope this continues for all time. A very cheerful and positive poem
July 29th, 2025 01:54
riptide fantasia
NafisaSB said:
so well expressed that one can almost visualize the dance , the music and the feelings generrated
well done!!
July 29th, 2025 00:41
NafisaSB said:
so well expressed that one can almost visualize the dance , the music and the feelings generrated
well done!!
July 29th, 2025 00:41
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, intriguing, and rather chilling. The tree thus personified is an interesting commentator on his circumstances. Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 15:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, intriguing, and rather chilling. The tree thus personified is an interesting commentator on his circumstances. Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 15:43
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this holds the weight of centuries in just a handful of lines. It feels like the earth speaking…rooted in grief, but loyal to memory. That final couplet is both quiet and devastating. You’re carving something timeless in this suite, I mean that. I, for one, have not tired of this and do look forward to part 7...and the epilogue! 😊 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my friend.
July 28th, 2025 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, this holds the weight of centuries in just a handful of lines. It feels like the earth speaking…rooted in grief, but loyal to memory. That final couplet is both quiet and devastating. You’re carving something timeless in this suite, I mean that. I, for one, have not tired of this and do look forward to part 7...and the epilogue! 😊 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my friend.
July 28th, 2025 08:54
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
arqios said:
We may be looking at a moving of dates for the Epilogue of the cherry orchard suite. It kinda feels like a Broadway flop in some ways. But then again, you can\'t win it all and we can\'t really please everyone all at once. Let\'s keep on keeping on.🕊️🙏🏻
July 28th, 2025 06:23
arqios said:
We may be looking at a moving of dates for the Epilogue of the cherry orchard suite. It kinda feels like a Broadway flop in some ways. But then again, you can\'t win it all and we can\'t really please everyone all at once. Let\'s keep on keeping on.🕊️🙏🏻
July 28th, 2025 06:23
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
Poetic Licence said:
This has quite a sad and haunting feel to it, standing guard over what was home, knowing that soon he will be gone as well. Nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 05:53
Poetic Licence said:
This has quite a sad and haunting feel to it, standing guard over what was home, knowing that soon he will be gone as well. Nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 05:53
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a very haunting quality to it. It has a sense of finality as well, it is as vague as the fog and speaks with a sense of being ancient and entitlement to the land itself. It feels final and being the last of a type. Very nice Cryptic
July 28th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a very haunting quality to it. It has a sense of finality as well, it is as vague as the fog and speaks with a sense of being ancient and entitlement to the land itself. It feels final and being the last of a type. Very nice Cryptic
July 28th, 2025 04:20
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
arqios said:
It may not fare well but there is no resolve but to go through and complete what has been commenced...
July 28th, 2025 04:19
arqios said:
It may not fare well but there is no resolve but to go through and complete what has been commenced...
July 28th, 2025 04:19
6 Fir\'s Last Watch
arqios said:
Quite sure many will be happy this is over and done with. I may or may not put up the epilogue poem but 7/7 is in sight and will end the series
July 28th, 2025 02:30
arqios said:
Quite sure many will be happy this is over and done with. I may or may not put up the epilogue poem but 7/7 is in sight and will end the series
July 28th, 2025 02:30
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
Friendship said:
nicely said.I love Sunday, it\'s my day to vent all day to God, I the to catch him up on all I do,🙌❤️🙌
July 27th, 2025 15:29
Friendship said:
nicely said.I love Sunday, it\'s my day to vent all day to God, I the to catch him up on all I do,🙌❤️🙌
July 27th, 2025 15:29
choirside
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
Hailing the morn\'s choristers, muses of the bards as one meanders through each noble verse of this most resplendent poem, blessed in gratefulness and love of the morning\'s quietude. One of those rare poems that should not be read aloud - but whispered.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 11:48
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, arqios,
Hailing the morn\'s choristers, muses of the bards as one meanders through each noble verse of this most resplendent poem, blessed in gratefulness and love of the morning\'s quietude. One of those rare poems that should not be read aloud - but whispered.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 11:48
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Why, Happy Sunday, my friend. What a playful and vivid burst. This reads like resistance wrapped in joy...sunlight pressed through headlines, laughter over static. The who piece has perfect pitch, imho. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2025 07:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Why, Happy Sunday, my friend. What a playful and vivid burst. This reads like resistance wrapped in joy...sunlight pressed through headlines, laughter over static. The who piece has perfect pitch, imho. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2025 07:59
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read, perfect for a relaxing Sunday, enjoyed
July 27th, 2025 06:36
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read, perfect for a relaxing Sunday, enjoyed
July 27th, 2025 06:36
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, arqios. Dark and gloomy here, but I rejoice anyway. Enjoyed your read over morning coffee.
July 27th, 2025 06:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, arqios. Dark and gloomy here, but I rejoice anyway. Enjoyed your read over morning coffee.
July 27th, 2025 06:06
\"Sunday, Fun-Day\"
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the process of awakening and entering the busy day in this poem. This baptism or rebirth in a bustling world is an eye opener. Well done Cryptic
July 27th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the process of awakening and entering the busy day in this poem. This baptism or rebirth in a bustling world is an eye opener. Well done Cryptic
July 27th, 2025 04:51
choirside
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, music brings love to all in the world.
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, music brings love to all in the world.
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:53
murmur of whispers
NafisaSB said:
yes, thanks - it is a very soothing message
felt good reading it too...
July 26th, 2025 23:26
NafisaSB said:
yes, thanks - it is a very soothing message
felt good reading it too...
July 26th, 2025 23:26
choirside
Bella Shepard said:
I love the setting you\'ve chosen for this poem. A place where both voice and silence hold sway. Beautifully written!
July 26th, 2025 14:29
Bella Shepard said:
I love the setting you\'ve chosen for this poem. A place where both voice and silence hold sway. Beautifully written!
July 26th, 2025 14:29
choirside
orchidee said:
Or these days in some places - Worship Groups-side, *Gets out the guitar, drums, keyboard, whatever*
July 26th, 2025 11:07
orchidee said:
Or these days in some places - Worship Groups-side, *Gets out the guitar, drums, keyboard, whatever*
July 26th, 2025 11:07
choirside
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a stunningly tender and luminous piece, dear poet and friend. The language here feels both sacred and lived-in...like liturgy rising from breath and memory. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a stunningly tender and luminous piece, dear poet and friend. The language here feels both sacred and lived-in...like liturgy rising from breath and memory. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:25
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