Comments received on poems by arqios
across the ether
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This grabbed me, arqios...especially the suggestion that our connection to existence extends in directions we haven’t yet learned how to perceive. There’s something wonderfully unsettling about imagining ourselves tethered between the dust beneath us and unread stars beyond us. Powerful and thought-provoking, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This grabbed me, arqios...especially the suggestion that our connection to existence extends in directions we haven’t yet learned how to perceive. There’s something wonderfully unsettling about imagining ourselves tethered between the dust beneath us and unread stars beyond us. Powerful and thought-provoking, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:52
across the ether
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most beautiful piece and a fav
August 10th, 2026 06:42
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most beautiful piece and a fav
August 10th, 2026 06:42
across the ether
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful my friend this one captures a mood of marble polished and so nicely displayed. It is classic in the nature of its beauty. I loved it as it rolled off the tongue it feels so rich and full of meaning. This could well come from a Wordsworth or a Keats. Truly well crafted my friend and a fave
August 10th, 2026 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful my friend this one captures a mood of marble polished and so nicely displayed. It is classic in the nature of its beauty. I loved it as it rolled off the tongue it feels so rich and full of meaning. This could well come from a Wordsworth or a Keats. Truly well crafted my friend and a fave
August 10th, 2026 05:30
unprinted dots
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes , so much is being unsaid, and left to the Readers Imagination.
And no: the beginning and end were not in Braille. And anyone who says I ran my finger along the Screen is Lying.
August 9th, 2026 18:17
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes , so much is being unsaid, and left to the Readers Imagination.
And no: the beginning and end were not in Braille. And anyone who says I ran my finger along the Screen is Lying.
August 9th, 2026 18:17
unprinted dots
orchidee said:
Good write A. Meanwhile, I\'m discussing if it should be two dots or three dots. A matter of major importance. lol.
Three is usual for an ellipsis, as I think it\'s called. Fancy me knowing that long word! lol.
August 9th, 2026 08:12
orchidee said:
Good write A. Meanwhile, I\'m discussing if it should be two dots or three dots. A matter of major importance. lol.
Three is usual for an ellipsis, as I think it\'s called. Fancy me knowing that long word! lol.
August 9th, 2026 08:12
unprinted dots
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet tension here, the kind that lives in the space between a gesture and the words that never come. The pen becomes a loaded little object, carrying all that hesitation and possibility without a single sentence being written.
August 9th, 2026 07:44
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet tension here, the kind that lives in the space between a gesture and the words that never come. The pen becomes a loaded little object, carrying all that hesitation and possibility without a single sentence being written.
August 9th, 2026 07:44
unprinted dots
sorenbarrett said:
It is the unsaid that is read in these dots that thought or feeling that lack words or the courage to speak them. It holds in suspension the future. Well done my friend.
August 9th, 2026 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
It is the unsaid that is read in these dots that thought or feeling that lack words or the courage to speak them. It holds in suspension the future. Well done my friend.
August 9th, 2026 06:01
unprinted dots
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love the restraint here, Rik...nothing dramatic needs to happen because that tiny exchange already contains all the uncertainty and possibility the moment can hold. Even the empty space feels occupied by what might come next. Beautiful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 9th, 2026 05:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love the restraint here, Rik...nothing dramatic needs to happen because that tiny exchange already contains all the uncertainty and possibility the moment can hold. Even the empty space feels occupied by what might come next. Beautiful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 9th, 2026 05:49
August winds
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn is my favourite time of the year Rik. Fine words.
Andy
August 9th, 2026 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn is my favourite time of the year Rik. Fine words.
Andy
August 9th, 2026 02:35
August winds
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s hard to Imagine Winter in August up here.
Or Christmas in Summer for that matter.
An enjoyable Read all the same.
August 8th, 2026 18:09
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s hard to Imagine Winter in August up here.
Or Christmas in Summer for that matter.
An enjoyable Read all the same.
August 8th, 2026 18:09
August winds
orchidee said:
Must be like our UK February there at the moment. One of us is upside down! lol.
August 8th, 2026 10:00
orchidee said:
Must be like our UK February there at the moment. One of us is upside down! lol.
August 8th, 2026 10:00
August winds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is beautifully reflective. I love that quiet anticipation running through it...change approaching gradually, carried in on the wind rather than announcing itself. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is beautifully reflective. I love that quiet anticipation running through it...change approaching gradually, carried in on the wind rather than announcing itself. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:45
August winds
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most thoughtful write my friend
August 8th, 2026 07:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most thoughtful write my friend
August 8th, 2026 07:26
August winds
sorenbarrett said:
These winds seem a portend of a future set by the fates. They carry a sense of intimidation and concern. Well written my friend
August 8th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
These winds seem a portend of a future set by the fates. They carry a sense of intimidation and concern. Well written my friend
August 8th, 2026 06:31
life after
NafisaSB said:
That’s the spirit- gather yourself up and get going again. 👍💅
August 7th, 2026 12:37
NafisaSB said:
That’s the spirit- gather yourself up and get going again. 👍💅
August 7th, 2026 12:37
kindle it with care
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, Rik...hope here isn’t some passive expectation that everything will work out. It’s something deliberately tended through all those small, stubborn choices we keep making. Quiet resilience with real weight behind it. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, Rik...hope here isn’t some passive expectation that everything will work out. It’s something deliberately tended through all those small, stubborn choices we keep making. Quiet resilience with real weight behind it. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:36
kindle it with care
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed write my friend
August 7th, 2026 05:39
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed write my friend
August 7th, 2026 05:39
kindle it with care
Paul Bell said:
I think by the time we see the light, we\'ll be gone.
August 7th, 2026 05:20
Paul Bell said:
I think by the time we see the light, we\'ll be gone.
August 7th, 2026 05:20
kindle it with care
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautifully said a truth in poetic form
August 7th, 2026 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautifully said a truth in poetic form
August 7th, 2026 05:12
laureled youth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this really moved me…celebration and grief exist together without either diminishing the other. The honor belongs to the living, yet love carries it beyond death. Beautifully rendered! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this really moved me…celebration and grief exist together without either diminishing the other. The honor belongs to the living, yet love carries it beyond death. Beautifully rendered! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:14
laureled youth
sorenbarrett said:
Deep meaning in mythologic terms from the underworld of Persephone to the heights of Zeus there is an existential journey here that pales the trips of Odysseus or Jason. Well written my friend
August 6th, 2026 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
Deep meaning in mythologic terms from the underworld of Persephone to the heights of Zeus there is an existential journey here that pales the trips of Odysseus or Jason. Well written my friend
August 6th, 2026 07:48
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