Comments received on poems by arqios
a grasp away
TobaniNataiella said:
The Hand of peace, lovely piece of writing highlighting that even a simple gesture can have some a dramatic effect, enjoyed the read.
January 9th, 2025 06:03
TobaniNataiella said:
The Hand of peace, lovely piece of writing highlighting that even a simple gesture can have some a dramatic effect, enjoyed the read.
January 9th, 2025 06:03
a grasp away
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this cryptic poem in its depth speaks to me of the power of symbols and actions beyond words. Forgiveness is not a word but an action. Honor not a word but an action. So well set in this metaphoric piece is the notion that words are not needed there is a poetry in the doing, the act itself.
January 9th, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this cryptic poem in its depth speaks to me of the power of symbols and actions beyond words. Forgiveness is not a word but an action. Honor not a word but an action. So well set in this metaphoric piece is the notion that words are not needed there is a poetry in the doing, the act itself.
January 9th, 2025 05:58
a grasp away
orchidee said:
Here\'s \'hostile advice\', said by a clergyman, of all people - \'I\'m a man of peace, and if anyone doesn\'t agree with me, I\'ll punch them on the nose\'. Doh!
Or a fictitious scene, hopefully - A guy said \'hello\' to a nasty guy. He replied \'What do you mean hello? What do you want? I\'ll give you a good punch for speaking to me\'. A pleasant chap - not!
January 9th, 2025 03:41
orchidee said:
Here\'s \'hostile advice\', said by a clergyman, of all people - \'I\'m a man of peace, and if anyone doesn\'t agree with me, I\'ll punch them on the nose\'. Doh!
Or a fictitious scene, hopefully - A guy said \'hello\' to a nasty guy. He replied \'What do you mean hello? What do you want? I\'ll give you a good punch for speaking to me\'. A pleasant chap - not!
January 9th, 2025 03:41
tears you could have cried
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.I love poems that have adjectives in them.Well done
January 8th, 2025 19:48
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.I love poems that have adjectives in them.Well done
January 8th, 2025 19:48
tears you could have cried
TobaniNataiella said:
The tears of Healing and was away the pain, a touching, emotionally and i feel personal piece of poetry, i enjoyed reading from the poetry aspect
January 8th, 2025 10:30
TobaniNataiella said:
The tears of Healing and was away the pain, a touching, emotionally and i feel personal piece of poetry, i enjoyed reading from the poetry aspect
January 8th, 2025 10:30
tears you could have cried
orchidee said:
I cried tears over spilt milk - if that relates to this in any way? Probably not! lol.
I baulk at the convolutions in cryptic poems, and sometimes add some daft, inane comment instead!
January 8th, 2025 09:46
orchidee said:
I cried tears over spilt milk - if that relates to this in any way? Probably not! lol.
I baulk at the convolutions in cryptic poems, and sometimes add some daft, inane comment instead!
January 8th, 2025 09:46
tears you could have cried
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First. Love the Everly Brothers. Second, that picture is making me tear. 🤣 Finally, tears are indeed healing. I have not cried more than I have in the past year...guess I\'m finally catching up to where I should have been all along...but those tears have brought healing, for sure. Bravo, my friend, this poem hit home! 🌹👏
January 8th, 2025 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First. Love the Everly Brothers. Second, that picture is making me tear. 🤣 Finally, tears are indeed healing. I have not cried more than I have in the past year...guess I\'m finally catching up to where I should have been all along...but those tears have brought healing, for sure. Bravo, my friend, this poem hit home! 🌹👏
January 8th, 2025 08:17
tears you could have cried
2781 said:
\"He that goeth forth and weepeth, bearing precious seed, shall doubtless come again with rejoicing, bringing his sheaths with him.\"
January 8th, 2025 08:09
2781 said:
\"He that goeth forth and weepeth, bearing precious seed, shall doubtless come again with rejoicing, bringing his sheaths with him.\"
January 8th, 2025 08:09
tears you could have cried
sorenbarrett said:
Like most of your writing this poem requires thought and rereading to grasp its meaning. In its depth swirl emotions as well as thoughts and in those tears of rain the pain of cracked and broken past events are mended. Very nicely done my friend
January 8th, 2025 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Like most of your writing this poem requires thought and rereading to grasp its meaning. In its depth swirl emotions as well as thoughts and in those tears of rain the pain of cracked and broken past events are mended. Very nicely done my friend
January 8th, 2025 07:24
tarkovsky-esque
Goldfinch60 said:
May your home be full of wonder, joy and love arqios.
Andy
January 8th, 2025 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May your home be full of wonder, joy and love arqios.
Andy
January 8th, 2025 02:59
tarkovsky-esque
Michael Edwards said:
Really flows thanks to the 575 format - not easy to write but an easy read.
January 8th, 2025 01:56
Michael Edwards said:
Really flows thanks to the 575 format - not easy to write but an easy read.
January 8th, 2025 01:56
tarkovsky-esque
Thad Wilk said:
A thought provoking
and evocative write!!
Feeling alone in a crowd
not a pretty sight! 😞
Thank you for sharing
a pleasure to recite!👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 21:18
Thad Wilk said:
A thought provoking
and evocative write!!
Feeling alone in a crowd
not a pretty sight! 😞
Thank you for sharing
a pleasure to recite!👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 21:18
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Dan Williams said:
Oh, there is always room for tragic, heroism maybe not so much. \"The scaffold, a dark spectre, looms ever closer\" covers a lot of ground. Nice.
January 7th, 2025 20:35
Dan Williams said:
Oh, there is always room for tragic, heroism maybe not so much. \"The scaffold, a dark spectre, looms ever closer\" covers a lot of ground. Nice.
January 7th, 2025 20:35
tarkovsky-esque
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like something is missing. Beautifully done. 🌹
January 7th, 2025 16:46
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like something is missing. Beautifully done. 🌹
January 7th, 2025 16:46
tarkovsky-esque
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"People together, alone.\" Reminds me of the Bon Jovi song, \"Living in Sin\", \"You can talk but still say nothing / You stay together but alone.\" Indeed. So very true. A powerful write my friend. 🙏❤️
January 7th, 2025 15:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"People together, alone.\" Reminds me of the Bon Jovi song, \"Living in Sin\", \"You can talk but still say nothing / You stay together but alone.\" Indeed. So very true. A powerful write my friend. 🙏❤️
January 7th, 2025 15:25
tarkovsky-esque
LP2187 said:
So nice to read, especially the fragmented but kinda connected lines which shows so much disorientation but as well as contemplation. And we all long for a sense of home.
January 7th, 2025 14:44
LP2187 said:
So nice to read, especially the fragmented but kinda connected lines which shows so much disorientation but as well as contemplation. And we all long for a sense of home.
January 7th, 2025 14:44
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Tom Dylan said:
You really capture the feel of Dickens. A fine write.
January 7th, 2025 08:49
Tom Dylan said:
You really capture the feel of Dickens. A fine write.
January 7th, 2025 08:49
tarkovsky-esque
TobaniNataiella said:
It comes in many forms feeling on your own, individual isolation, an individual in a crowd, or even a group of people battling on their own, feeling the world has ignored them. Mor about todays mindset, only worry what`s on our doorstep and don`t look down the street enough. Enjoyed the thought provoking read
January 7th, 2025 08:24
TobaniNataiella said:
It comes in many forms feeling on your own, individual isolation, an individual in a crowd, or even a group of people battling on their own, feeling the world has ignored them. Mor about todays mindset, only worry what`s on our doorstep and don`t look down the street enough. Enjoyed the thought provoking read
January 7th, 2025 08:24
tarkovsky-esque
sorenbarrett said:
Words to give thought.I particularly loved \"people together, alone\" so often true and in the deepest sense always true. A poem of increasing depth the more it is read
January 7th, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Words to give thought.I particularly loved \"people together, alone\" so often true and in the deepest sense always true. A poem of increasing depth the more it is read
January 7th, 2025 06:03
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words argios and that passage:
\"Remember, our lives are more than this moment,
we endure in the hearts of those we leave behind.\"
is so meaningful.
Andy
January 7th, 2025 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words argios and that passage:
\"Remember, our lives are more than this moment,
we endure in the hearts of those we leave behind.\"
is so meaningful.
Andy
January 7th, 2025 02:10
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Sharp and vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2025 19:51
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Sharp and vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2025 19:51
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Teddy.15 said:
Such wonderful imagery if not a bit gory 🤣, usually I dislike reading epics but this had me on the edge of my seat, yes a wonderful tale of courage and a shout out to Dickens no less, kudos. Brilliantly written. 🌹
January 6th, 2025 14:27
Teddy.15 said:
Such wonderful imagery if not a bit gory 🤣, usually I dislike reading epics but this had me on the edge of my seat, yes a wonderful tale of courage and a shout out to Dickens no less, kudos. Brilliantly written. 🌹
January 6th, 2025 14:27
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching and
poignant poem
and story on the book
A Tale of Two Cities! 📖
Poetic perfection flows
throughout each
wonderfully woven
poetic line!! 🏆
Thanks for sharing!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 6th, 2025 10:55
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching and
poignant poem
and story on the book
A Tale of Two Cities! 📖
Poetic perfection flows
throughout each
wonderfully woven
poetic line!! 🏆
Thanks for sharing!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 6th, 2025 10:55
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful rendering of Charles\' Dickens\'s \"A Tale of Two Cities\" and the haunting picture of the Reign of Terror it presents. Not too heavy for my tastes friend. Well done on this...for real! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 10:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful rendering of Charles\' Dickens\'s \"A Tale of Two Cities\" and the haunting picture of the Reign of Terror it presents. Not too heavy for my tastes friend. Well done on this...for real! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 10:32
A Seamstress\'s Courage
TobaniNataiella said:
An Ode to a classic giant and one of their books, i had to read in English Lit at school, and it is a lovely classic piece of poetry you have written, Great read
January 6th, 2025 09:38
TobaniNataiella said:
An Ode to a classic giant and one of their books, i had to read in English Lit at school, and it is a lovely classic piece of poetry you have written, Great read
January 6th, 2025 09:38
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