Comments received on poems by arqios
it walks, not me
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is the past that walks and changes in peoples minds but we have already walked it and can not go back and walk it again. It has already been walked. A lovely write deeper that the surface so nicely worded its message seeps through soft words and a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is the past that walks and changes in peoples minds but we have already walked it and can not go back and walk it again. It has already been walked. A lovely write deeper that the surface so nicely worded its message seeps through soft words and a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:48
it walks, not me
Poetic Licence said:
As the past slowly passes, the footsteps slowly disappear, another loss is gained, loved the write
May 22nd, 2025 04:26
Poetic Licence said:
As the past slowly passes, the footsteps slowly disappear, another loss is gained, loved the write
May 22nd, 2025 04:26
it walks, not me
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the haunting dance between memory and time—each step fading before it’s fully grasped. The repetition and imagery of dissolving footprints evoke a quiet, inevitable loss. A hauntingly reflective piece.
May 22nd, 2025 04:14
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the haunting dance between memory and time—each step fading before it’s fully grasped. The repetition and imagery of dissolving footprints evoke a quiet, inevitable loss. A hauntingly reflective piece.
May 22nd, 2025 04:14
it walks, not me
David Wakeling said:
A very pleasant cadence here with an abrupt stop at the \"theme\".The theme being that the Past does all the walking not the author.I haven\'t viewed the Past that way before.Its a clever twist.Enjoyable read mi amigo
May 22nd, 2025 04:07
David Wakeling said:
A very pleasant cadence here with an abrupt stop at the \"theme\".The theme being that the Past does all the walking not the author.I haven\'t viewed the Past that way before.Its a clever twist.Enjoyable read mi amigo
May 22nd, 2025 04:07
hair in the wind
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A whirl of imagery—wind, light, and myth collide. Nursery rhymes twist like strands of sunlit hair. Brief, but it lingers.
May 21st, 2025 13:15
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A whirl of imagery—wind, light, and myth collide. Nursery rhymes twist like strands of sunlit hair. Brief, but it lingers.
May 21st, 2025 13:15
hair in the wind
arqios said:
There up on a hill a parliament sat, hung on a bill....
May 21st, 2025 05:37
arqios said:
There up on a hill a parliament sat, hung on a bill....
May 21st, 2025 05:37
hair in the wind
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely feel to these reworkings of chilhood memories and favourites, lovely calming write, enjoyed the read
May 21st, 2025 04:58
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely feel to these reworkings of chilhood memories and favourites, lovely calming write, enjoyed the read
May 21st, 2025 04:58
hair in the wind
sorenbarrett said:
This rework of past childhood rhyme casts a special feel to this poem as if one has been here before but can not place where or when. That surreal feel make the rhyme haunting. Lovely with the feel of a message that I remain oblivious to
May 21st, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
This rework of past childhood rhyme casts a special feel to this poem as if one has been here before but can not place where or when. That surreal feel make the rhyme haunting. Lovely with the feel of a message that I remain oblivious to
May 21st, 2025 04:17
hair in the wind
David Wakeling said:
Some powerful re-take on some old nursery rhymes.It bounces along really well. Enjoyable read
May 21st, 2025 03:58
David Wakeling said:
Some powerful re-take on some old nursery rhymes.It bounces along really well. Enjoyable read
May 21st, 2025 03:58
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
NafisaSB said:
so beautifully writtenc- can imagine the tranquility of the scene before the hordes pour in and the rush starts.
thanks for sharing
May 21st, 2025 00:17
NafisaSB said:
so beautifully writtenc- can imagine the tranquility of the scene before the hordes pour in and the rush starts.
thanks for sharing
May 21st, 2025 00:17
Sven\'s Uninvited Guest
Tom Dylan said:
A really powerful piece. Works on so many levels. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2025 06:40
Tom Dylan said:
A really powerful piece. Works on so many levels. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2025 06:40
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is lovely! It beautifully captures the quiet arrival of winter with vivid imagery and a peaceful tone.
May 20th, 2025 06:39
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is lovely! It beautifully captures the quiet arrival of winter with vivid imagery and a peaceful tone.
May 20th, 2025 06:39
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful poem. A great tribute to the first snows of Thredbo.Well done compadre
May 20th, 2025 04:11
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful poem. A great tribute to the first snows of Thredbo.Well done compadre
May 20th, 2025 04:11
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful images cast in this poem of the seasons. I too headed into winter can feel this change in my memories of winter\'s onset. Loved it
May 20th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful images cast in this poem of the seasons. I too headed into winter can feel this change in my memories of winter\'s onset. Loved it
May 20th, 2025 04:03
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
Doggerel Dave said:
Well when you put it like that, It\'s beautiful. Full marks for the poetry.
Once upon a time I experienced Thredbo in winter..............
May 20th, 2025 02:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Well when you put it like that, It\'s beautiful. Full marks for the poetry.
Once upon a time I experienced Thredbo in winter..............
May 20th, 2025 02:41
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
Poetic Licence said:
Reminds of the one time i went skiing, absolutely hated it, the most fake environment I have ever been in, that said this is a lovely write, with lovely images of the first virgin snow falling, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 02:40
Poetic Licence said:
Reminds of the one time i went skiing, absolutely hated it, the most fake environment I have ever been in, that said this is a lovely write, with lovely images of the first virgin snow falling, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 02:40
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Beautiful imagery—I can almost feel the crisp winter air and see the snow-dusted peaks. A lovely, serene start to the season in Thredbo!
May 20th, 2025 02:14
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Beautiful imagery—I can almost feel the crisp winter air and see the snow-dusted peaks. A lovely, serene start to the season in Thredbo!
May 20th, 2025 02:14
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
Goldfinch60 said:
Hear it is the start of summer and all is yellow and green arqios.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Hear it is the start of summer and all is yellow and green arqios.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:44
Sven\'s Uninvited Guest
Goldfinch60 said:
Home is where the heart is arqios.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Home is where the heart is arqios.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:17
soul of time
NafisaSB said:
beautiful whispers from the past...lovely poem - enjoyed it
May 20th, 2025 01:05
NafisaSB said:
beautiful whispers from the past...lovely poem - enjoyed it
May 20th, 2025 01:05
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
arqios said:
A preliminary Fave 🤩 this is a harbinger of sorts. May the winds shift favourable to travel. 🧳🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 00:56
arqios said:
A preliminary Fave 🤩 this is a harbinger of sorts. May the winds shift favourable to travel. 🧳🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 00:56
a reckoning of voices
Kevin Hulme said:
History remains the same throughout; only Ladies and Men\'s fashions change. A Poem well said.
May 19th, 2025 19:08
Kevin Hulme said:
History remains the same throughout; only Ladies and Men\'s fashions change. A Poem well said.
May 19th, 2025 19:08
Sven\'s Uninvited Guest
Cheeky Missy said:
At least you realize you\'re pretending to belong. My mind is perpetually carving out niches for me where I\'ve never belonged nor can, the inhabitants of wherever looking askance at me. This being a stranger on earth is my normal yet I keep thinking I belong. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a haunting poignancy, its ability to resonate swallowing me whole. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 19th, 2025 09:10
Cheeky Missy said:
At least you realize you\'re pretending to belong. My mind is perpetually carving out niches for me where I\'ve never belonged nor can, the inhabitants of wherever looking askance at me. This being a stranger on earth is my normal yet I keep thinking I belong. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a haunting poignancy, its ability to resonate swallowing me whole. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 19th, 2025 09:10
Sven\'s Uninvited Guest
David Wakeling said:
Hey this poem is better than anything I could write,Very powerful images here with minimal effort.I see a party where the usual guests arrive and immediately play the usual games and irritate the host. I enjoyed reading
May 19th, 2025 04:45
David Wakeling said:
Hey this poem is better than anything I could write,Very powerful images here with minimal effort.I see a party where the usual guests arrive and immediately play the usual games and irritate the host. I enjoyed reading
May 19th, 2025 04:45
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