Comments received on poems by arqios
homestead knights
sorenbarrett said:
Deceptively childish and nostalgic this poem fits each of us in our daily fantasies and dreams. We have not come far in our journey from childhood to old age only the weapons and images have changed. There is a theme in this poem that dives deep to the core of man where we all remain children changing only our outward armor. Inside we are still those boys and girls chasing dragons and winning the princesses hand for imagination never dies and we all want to live happily ever after. A definite fave my friend
September 16th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Deceptively childish and nostalgic this poem fits each of us in our daily fantasies and dreams. We have not come far in our journey from childhood to old age only the weapons and images have changed. There is a theme in this poem that dives deep to the core of man where we all remain children changing only our outward armor. Inside we are still those boys and girls chasing dragons and winning the princesses hand for imagination never dies and we all want to live happily ever after. A definite fave my friend
September 16th, 2025 04:09
ochre ledge against folding sky
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. A fine write.
September 16th, 2025 02:04
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. A fine write.
September 16th, 2025 02:04
ochre ledge against folding sky
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and layout Rik.
Andy
September 16th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and layout Rik.
Andy
September 16th, 2025 01:24
between shelves
NafisaSB said:
your love for books and literature literally shines through your verse. .keep walking this path..
September 16th, 2025 00:42
NafisaSB said:
your love for books and literature literally shines through your verse. .keep walking this path..
September 16th, 2025 00:42
ochre ledge against folding sky
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Major fave! This is stunning, arqios…the fractures, the moths, the seam tearing open. It reads like memory and myth folding into each other, impossible to pin down yet impossible to forget. You’ve built something vast here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Major fave! This is stunning, arqios…the fractures, the moths, the seam tearing open. It reads like memory and myth folding into each other, impossible to pin down yet impossible to forget. You’ve built something vast here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:56
\"weekend headline remix\" (happy poems weekend suite)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I love this…doomscroll undone, tulip-bombs planted, a sandwich eclipsing the market. Playful and defiant, it makes light itself a protest. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, I love this…doomscroll undone, tulip-bombs planted, a sandwich eclipsing the market. Playful and defiant, it makes light itself a protest. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:14
ochre ledge against folding sky
sorenbarrett said:
A majestic poem worthy of display in any text of poetry. This poem does not speak or shout but rumbles in its whispers haunting the imagination with metaphoric shadows. Like a fish below deep waters where only movement can be detected in darkness it swims growing in the imagination. An unseen rustle in the dark that raises hair and gooseflesh. It is the unknown shadows of this poem that make that rumble in haunted whispers. A truly great work Cryptic
September 15th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
A majestic poem worthy of display in any text of poetry. This poem does not speak or shout but rumbles in its whispers haunting the imagination with metaphoric shadows. Like a fish below deep waters where only movement can be detected in darkness it swims growing in the imagination. An unseen rustle in the dark that raises hair and gooseflesh. It is the unknown shadows of this poem that make that rumble in haunted whispers. A truly great work Cryptic
September 15th, 2025 04:11
\"weekend headline remix\" (happy poems weekend suite)
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Love how this flips headlines into joy turning dread into something playful and bright. Nicely written.
September 14th, 2025 22:57
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Love how this flips headlines into joy turning dread into something playful and bright. Nicely written.
September 14th, 2025 22:57
\"weekend headline remix\" (happy poems weekend suite)
Doggerel Dave said:
Personal immediacy trumps all else...
I\'ll go with the latte and sandwich - gotta be veggo though....
September 14th, 2025 17:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Personal immediacy trumps all else...
I\'ll go with the latte and sandwich - gotta be veggo though....
September 14th, 2025 17:47
\"weekend headline remix\" (happy poems weekend suite)
sorenbarrett said:
This one brought to mind a scrapbook of newspaper clippings flipped through quickly with only random headings appearing in rapid succession some missed and all meanings in a jumble in the head. What stands out is the last primary needs of the moment always take precedence and we put the worlds worries and others woes aside in that scrapbook of headlines page now turned and forgotten. Nicely done Cryptic
September 14th, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
This one brought to mind a scrapbook of newspaper clippings flipped through quickly with only random headings appearing in rapid succession some missed and all meanings in a jumble in the head. What stands out is the last primary needs of the moment always take precedence and we put the worlds worries and others woes aside in that scrapbook of headlines page now turned and forgotten. Nicely done Cryptic
September 14th, 2025 05:40
of resonances
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Rik, they are so meaningful.
Andy
September 14th, 2025 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Rik, they are so meaningful.
Andy
September 14th, 2025 01:12
of resonances
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is both hymn and hurricane...voice, marrow, and music forged into tribute. You’ve given our friend Soren a piece alive with respect and fire. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2025 14:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Arqios, this is both hymn and hurricane...voice, marrow, and music forged into tribute. You’ve given our friend Soren a piece alive with respect and fire. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2025 14:58
of resonances
Priya Tomar said:
A good poem about friendship...
Nicely done.
September 13th, 2025 08:45
Priya Tomar said:
A good poem about friendship...
Nicely done.
September 13th, 2025 08:45
of resonances
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is breathtaking! The imagery and rhythm make the music almost tangible you can feel the raw intensity and reverence. I love how it balances the visceral power of the sound with the warmth of friendship. Truly a master piece.
September 13th, 2025 06:49
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is breathtaking! The imagery and rhythm make the music almost tangible you can feel the raw intensity and reverence. I love how it balances the visceral power of the sound with the warmth of friendship. Truly a master piece.
September 13th, 2025 06:49
of resonances
sorenbarrett said:
Thunderstruck, tongue stuck words caught in the throat, such beautiful lines this message entwines with words wrote. Poetic word choice in this piece cut to the marrow of meaning and the reader feels the scrape of the knife edge drawn along bone surface. A powerful blend of the cold technology of the present and the warm visceral flesh and blood, fountain of poetic emotion that bleeds on the page but dissolves into pixels on glass. Honored to see my name where a thousand others more worthy would serve as well for this masterful work. Thank you so much for sharing
September 13th, 2025 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Thunderstruck, tongue stuck words caught in the throat, such beautiful lines this message entwines with words wrote. Poetic word choice in this piece cut to the marrow of meaning and the reader feels the scrape of the knife edge drawn along bone surface. A powerful blend of the cold technology of the present and the warm visceral flesh and blood, fountain of poetic emotion that bleeds on the page but dissolves into pixels on glass. Honored to see my name where a thousand others more worthy would serve as well for this masterful work. Thank you so much for sharing
September 13th, 2025 06:31
foment in the firmament
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Rik, the strength of nature is always there but it can also bring wonder to our lives.
Andy
September 13th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Rik, the strength of nature is always there but it can also bring wonder to our lives.
Andy
September 13th, 2025 01:24
foment in the firmament
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
‘Somewhere, a wind rehearses its entrance,
curling through the rafters of the sky,
its breath warm with the scent of rain not yet born.’
Love this stanza. Fascinating poem.
September 12th, 2025 10:28
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
‘Somewhere, a wind rehearses its entrance,
curling through the rafters of the sky,
its breath warm with the scent of rain not yet born.’
Love this stanza. Fascinating poem.
September 12th, 2025 10:28
foment in the firmament
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, dearest Rik…I know that charged stillness before the storm, when air itself tastes of iron. You’ve captured it with force. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, my mate!
September 12th, 2025 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, dearest Rik…I know that charged stillness before the storm, when air itself tastes of iron. You’ve captured it with force. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, my mate!
September 12th, 2025 08:41
foment in the firmament
Kevin Hulme said:
Very Atmospheric, if you\'ll pardon the Pun.
\'Scent of the Rain \' is right . Enjoyed.
September 12th, 2025 08:01
Kevin Hulme said:
Very Atmospheric, if you\'ll pardon the Pun.
\'Scent of the Rain \' is right . Enjoyed.
September 12th, 2025 08:01
between shelves
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A stunning work. The first stanza blew me away. Read it thrice. Great poem
September 12th, 2025 07:51
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A stunning work. The first stanza blew me away. Read it thrice. Great poem
September 12th, 2025 07:51
between shelves
Fred1794 said:
Ahhh a love letter to the library and bookshops everywhere. I am a big fan.
September 12th, 2025 07:38
Fred1794 said:
Ahhh a love letter to the library and bookshops everywhere. I am a big fan.
September 12th, 2025 07:38
foment in the firmament
orchidee said:
I can\'t shay that title after a ginsh or threesh. Hic! lol. Notice the good acting there from me?! Fomentsh in the firmamentsh, is it?
September 12th, 2025 05:55
orchidee said:
I can\'t shay that title after a ginsh or threesh. Hic! lol. Notice the good acting there from me?! Fomentsh in the firmamentsh, is it?
September 12th, 2025 05:55
foment in the firmament
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and full of nature\'s strength this poem feels like a new birth. Lovely Cryptic
September 12th, 2025 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and full of nature\'s strength this poem feels like a new birth. Lovely Cryptic
September 12th, 2025 05:52
between shelves
Goldfinch60 said:
Word written and read will always be there for us all Rik.
Andy
September 11th, 2025 23:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Word written and read will always be there for us all Rik.
Andy
September 11th, 2025 23:45
between shelves
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, my friend…I’ve walked those aisles myself, feeling the dust as currency, breathing in the silence. You captured that weight perfectly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 20:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes indeed, my friend…I’ve walked those aisles myself, feeling the dust as currency, breathing in the silence. You captured that weight perfectly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 20:59
between shelves
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s a fine sight to see Children reading a Book instead of looking at a tablet or Phone.
Well Said.
September 11th, 2025 12:53
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s a fine sight to see Children reading a Book instead of looking at a tablet or Phone.
Well Said.
September 11th, 2025 12:53
between shelves
orchidee said:
In between my shelves....are layers of dust! lol.
September 11th, 2025 10:59
orchidee said:
In between my shelves....are layers of dust! lol.
September 11th, 2025 10:59
between shelves
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve always loved libraries, particularly those of my youth, when books were found on index cards instead of by pounding computer keys. Your beautifully written poem takes me back to that quiet, magical place. Thank you for the reminiscence.
September 11th, 2025 08:40
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve always loved libraries, particularly those of my youth, when books were found on index cards instead of by pounding computer keys. Your beautifully written poem takes me back to that quiet, magical place. Thank you for the reminiscence.
September 11th, 2025 08:40
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