Comments received on poems by arqios
Dog-Tired Simplicity
Neville said:
You clearly need more Z\'s .. that\'s not a horizontal N by the way ..
November 5th, 2024 04:39
Neville said:
You clearly need more Z\'s .. that\'s not a horizontal N by the way ..
November 5th, 2024 04:39
A Bridge Once Too Far
NafisaSB said:
i agree that \'kindness is our compass, and compassion our guide\' to live a beautiful and fruitful life..good one
November 5th, 2024 00:46
NafisaSB said:
i agree that \'kindness is our compass, and compassion our guide\' to live a beautiful and fruitful life..good one
November 5th, 2024 00:46
Severed Bridges
sorenbarrett said:
Such diverted traffic wanders lost amongst the side roads. A most wonderful metaphor that speaks to broken relationships. Very nice Cryptic
November 4th, 2024 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
Such diverted traffic wanders lost amongst the side roads. A most wonderful metaphor that speaks to broken relationships. Very nice Cryptic
November 4th, 2024 09:01
A Bridge Once Too Far
Neville said:
very nicely poemed sir a little masterpiece if you ask me .. đź‘Ť
November 4th, 2024 02:59
Neville said:
very nicely poemed sir a little masterpiece if you ask me .. đź‘Ť
November 4th, 2024 02:59
A Bridge Once Too Far
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words arqios, let us all cross those bridges ahead of us.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words arqios, let us all cross those bridges ahead of us.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:46
All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
Ladywithaquill said:
This was so clever! And I can hear it being sung as a lullaby.
November 3rd, 2024 19:27
Ladywithaquill said:
This was so clever! And I can hear it being sung as a lullaby.
November 3rd, 2024 19:27
A Bridge Once Too Far
sorenbarrett said:
Not so cryptic this read sets a course through past devestation to new understanding and structure that will withstand time and its ravishes. Lovely words my friend.
November 3rd, 2024 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Not so cryptic this read sets a course through past devestation to new understanding and structure that will withstand time and its ravishes. Lovely words my friend.
November 3rd, 2024 07:33
All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write arqios.
Andy
November 3rd, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write arqios.
Andy
November 3rd, 2024 02:21
Time to Live
Dan Williams said:
It cheers me to see people like you that can be so optimistic, something that comes very hard to me. Nice work.
November 2nd, 2024 23:40
Dan Williams said:
It cheers me to see people like you that can be so optimistic, something that comes very hard to me. Nice work.
November 2nd, 2024 23:40
All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
Neville said:
I always sleep with one eye open .. just in case .. plus I like to know what\'s going on @ all times .. N
November 2nd, 2024 10:09
Neville said:
I always sleep with one eye open .. just in case .. plus I like to know what\'s going on @ all times .. N
November 2nd, 2024 10:09
All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay, that riddle rattled my pitiful sense of intelligence more than it should have. Ah, but I do love this one! Awesome! Excellently rendered with superb imagery and subtly haunting poignancy, oh, but I love it!
November 2nd, 2024 09:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay, that riddle rattled my pitiful sense of intelligence more than it should have. Ah, but I do love this one! Awesome! Excellently rendered with superb imagery and subtly haunting poignancy, oh, but I love it!
November 2nd, 2024 09:35
All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby)
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Cryptic you have captured the feel of sleep and that peaceful hour. Your careful wording of Wynken with waves, Blynken with eyes the again followed by weaving and lastly Nod with dreams followed by wandering is a careful and masterful weaving ot thought and sound. Congratulations
November 2nd, 2024 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Cryptic you have captured the feel of sleep and that peaceful hour. Your careful wording of Wynken with waves, Blynken with eyes the again followed by weaving and lastly Nod with dreams followed by wandering is a careful and masterful weaving ot thought and sound. Congratulations
November 2nd, 2024 08:39
Time to Live
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day we awake is so special to us arqios, enjoy every one of them.
Andy
November 2nd, 2024 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day we awake is so special to us arqios, enjoy every one of them.
Andy
November 2nd, 2024 02:14
Time to Live
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this I see the rising and falling of each breath and I think of the breathing of all other creatures large and small even the plants and yes indeed life\'s dance is indeed a gift to see. Most lovely
November 1st, 2024 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this I see the rising and falling of each breath and I think of the breathing of all other creatures large and small even the plants and yes indeed life\'s dance is indeed a gift to see. Most lovely
November 1st, 2024 15:32
Time to Live
orchidee said:
Good write A. Not altogether unlinked to the time of All Saints Day, today 1st Nov.
November 1st, 2024 11:27
orchidee said:
Good write A. Not altogether unlinked to the time of All Saints Day, today 1st Nov.
November 1st, 2024 11:27
Time to Live
Parisab said:
Dawn is always fascinating and full of promise!
Through trials faced, the victor’s call,
Embrace the light, let shadows flee,
From dawn’s first light to evening’s fall,
Life’s fleeting dance, a gift to see.
The interplay of light and dark, dawn to dusk, beautifully choreographed…
November 1st, 2024 10:56
Parisab said:
Dawn is always fascinating and full of promise!
Through trials faced, the victor’s call,
Embrace the light, let shadows flee,
From dawn’s first light to evening’s fall,
Life’s fleeting dance, a gift to see.
The interplay of light and dark, dawn to dusk, beautifully choreographed…
November 1st, 2024 10:56
heavenly bodice
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to the soul. Each and every line a treasure. The last line encapsulates all and is my favorite
October 31st, 2024 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to the soul. Each and every line a treasure. The last line encapsulates all and is my favorite
October 31st, 2024 06:07
heavenly bodice
Neville said:
This is really cool .. and I see you are a man of your word .. Great title too mate .. bravo .. Neville
October 31st, 2024 05:55
Neville said:
This is really cool .. and I see you are a man of your word .. Great title too mate .. bravo .. Neville
October 31st, 2024 05:55
untitled (autumn sijo)
Goldfinch60 said:
May that warmth always be with us arqois.
Andy
October 31st, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May that warmth always be with us arqois.
Andy
October 31st, 2024 02:23
Whispers of a Wandering Soul
Dan Williams said:
Suitable praise for poetry and the poet, in this case, you. Nice work.
October 30th, 2024 23:33
Dan Williams said:
Suitable praise for poetry and the poet, in this case, you. Nice work.
October 30th, 2024 23:33
untitled (autumn sijo)
Neville said:
As far as I can recount this is my first encounter with this particular poetic form .. I am thrilled you should have introduced me to it since I have an interest in all poetic forms .. I did a swift Wiki check and can see that you have been true to form and all associated criteria have been well met .. I doubt I shall have such a warm glow in my belly for the rest of the day .. perhaps .. and as such, I subsequently award you the increasingly prestigious dubble đź‘Ťđź‘Ť
October 30th, 2024 06:29
Neville said:
As far as I can recount this is my first encounter with this particular poetic form .. I am thrilled you should have introduced me to it since I have an interest in all poetic forms .. I did a swift Wiki check and can see that you have been true to form and all associated criteria have been well met .. I doubt I shall have such a warm glow in my belly for the rest of the day .. perhaps .. and as such, I subsequently award you the increasingly prestigious dubble đź‘Ťđź‘Ť
October 30th, 2024 06:29
untitled (autumn sijo)
sorenbarrett said:
To one never having been there it feels as if I were. Very picturesque
October 30th, 2024 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
To one never having been there it feels as if I were. Very picturesque
October 30th, 2024 05:49
untitled (autumn sijo)
David Wakeling said:
This captures warmth and winter chill all in one. Excellent
October 30th, 2024 05:35
David Wakeling said:
This captures warmth and winter chill all in one. Excellent
October 30th, 2024 05:35
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