Comments received on poems by 2781
Modular homes
Doggerel Dave said:
Whatever Govt decides to do to \'solve the housing crisis\', what they won\'t do is to build enough houses to reduce demand to the point where housing values and/or rents will reduce to affordable levels. That is the crux of the matter; all else is so much rubbish.
July 7th, 2026 09:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Whatever Govt decides to do to \'solve the housing crisis\', what they won\'t do is to build enough houses to reduce demand to the point where housing values and/or rents will reduce to affordable levels. That is the crux of the matter; all else is so much rubbish.
July 7th, 2026 09:19
Modular homes
sorenbarrett said:
Money rules and this poem speaks to growing population and inflation with poorer buyers. Well done
July 7th, 2026 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
Money rules and this poem speaks to growing population and inflation with poorer buyers. Well done
July 7th, 2026 09:11
Tight
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet struggle here between responsibility and faith, between what the hands must do and what the heart hopes for.
The simplicity gives it weight, like someone standing at the crossroads of worry and trust.
July 7th, 2026 07:51
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet struggle here between responsibility and faith, between what the hands must do and what the heart hopes for.
The simplicity gives it weight, like someone standing at the crossroads of worry and trust.
July 7th, 2026 07:51
Tight
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a thoughtful piece. I love how you let the tension remain instead of forcing an easy answer. The balance between trusting God and navigating everyday responsibilities feels honest and relatable. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 12:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a thoughtful piece. I love how you let the tension remain instead of forcing an easy answer. The balance between trusting God and navigating everyday responsibilities feels honest and relatable. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 12:10
Tight
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that assumes we all have a bill to pay. Nicely worded it speaks of paying the debt.
July 5th, 2026 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that assumes we all have a bill to pay. Nicely worded it speaks of paying the debt.
July 5th, 2026 11:37
Weak
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a thoughtful piece. I love how it moves from honest self-examination to quiet dependence on something greater than oneself. The closing lines don\'t erase the struggle, but they offer hope that we don\'t have to face it alone. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a thoughtful piece. I love how it moves from honest self-examination to quiet dependence on something greater than oneself. The closing lines don\'t erase the struggle, but they offer hope that we don\'t have to face it alone. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:53
Weak
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said a friend whether spiritual of physical to depend on.
July 3rd, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said a friend whether spiritual of physical to depend on.
July 3rd, 2026 08:37
Brainwssh
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this packs a surprising amount into just a handful of lines. The rhythmic repetition, the provocative central idea, and the closing call toward \"a new creation\" make it linger after the last word. It invites reflection without overstaying its welcome. Wonderfully done, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this packs a surprising amount into just a handful of lines. The rhythmic repetition, the provocative central idea, and the closing call toward \"a new creation\" make it linger after the last word. It invites reflection without overstaying its welcome. Wonderfully done, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:14
Masters touch
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really touched me. The image of the Master Artist patiently adding brushstrokes until beauty emerges is both hopeful and uplifting. It reminds us that transformation is a process, not a single moment. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 19:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really touched me. The image of the Master Artist patiently adding brushstrokes until beauty emerges is both hopeful and uplifting. It reminds us that transformation is a process, not a single moment. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 19:00
Brainwssh
sorenbarrett said:
Brain washing the selling of a point of view often done over time. Nicely written
July 1st, 2026 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
Brain washing the selling of a point of view often done over time. Nicely written
July 1st, 2026 11:29
Masters touch
sorenbarrett said:
Although this seems a deeper layer than the surface speaking to making changes at many levels it makes me think of the superficial desire to be more beautiful than one is and employing a plastic surgeon to do a Michael Jackson makeover. Nicely written
June 30th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Although this seems a deeper layer than the surface speaking to making changes at many levels it makes me think of the superficial desire to be more beautiful than one is and employing a plastic surgeon to do a Michael Jackson makeover. Nicely written
June 30th, 2026 08:37
Masters touch
Thomas W Case said:
A soft pitch for transformation, like hope being offered on a painter’s brush—but with just enough tension underneath to wonder who’s really in control.
It feels like invitation and persuasion at the same time, beauty almost close enough to be edited into existence.
June 30th, 2026 08:31
Thomas W Case said:
A soft pitch for transformation, like hope being offered on a painter’s brush—but with just enough tension underneath to wonder who’s really in control.
It feels like invitation and persuasion at the same time, beauty almost close enough to be edited into existence.
June 30th, 2026 08:31
Keep me
Durdica Porobija said:
I\'m not sure if that prayer is ultimately self-critical or ironic.
June 29th, 2026 13:02
Durdica Porobija said:
I\'m not sure if that prayer is ultimately self-critical or ironic.
June 29th, 2026 13:02
Keep me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is a heartfelt prayer. The image of becoming God\'s feet, hands, and face really resonated with me because it moves faith beyond words and into daily living. Thank you for sharing this beautiful expression of trust, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is a heartfelt prayer. The image of becoming God\'s feet, hands, and face really resonated with me because it moves faith beyond words and into daily living. Thank you for sharing this beautiful expression of trust, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:35
Deception?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this certainly made me stop and think. There are only a handful of words here, yet they carry the weight of a much larger conversation. I found myself sitting with it long after I finished reading. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this certainly made me stop and think. There are only a handful of words here, yet they carry the weight of a much larger conversation. I found myself sitting with it long after I finished reading. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:14
Deception?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one think. Being excommunicated not a bad thing. Well done
June 28th, 2026 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one think. Being excommunicated not a bad thing. Well done
June 28th, 2026 08:46
Fake it
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a powerful declaration of hope and redemption. The voice throughout the poem carries both authority and compassion...calling the reader forward rather than leaving them behind. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a powerful declaration of hope and redemption. The voice throughout the poem carries both authority and compassion...calling the reader forward rather than leaving them behind. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:51
Fake it
sorenbarrett said:
A modern call to action and faith well written in good rhyme. Well done
June 25th, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
A modern call to action and faith well written in good rhyme. Well done
June 25th, 2026 07:43
This that the other
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this made me smile, my friend. There is a lighthearted, encouraging spirit running through the whole thing. It feels like a friendly reminder that we do not have to carry everything alone. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this made me smile, my friend. There is a lighthearted, encouraging spirit running through the whole thing. It feels like a friendly reminder that we do not have to carry everything alone. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:37
This that the other
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that plays off rhyme and old sayings modified well done
June 23rd, 2026 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that plays off rhyme and old sayings modified well done
June 23rd, 2026 06:53
Manifestation
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic call. Nicely written with rhyme and a message. Well done
June 13th, 2026 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic call. Nicely written with rhyme and a message. Well done
June 13th, 2026 12:36
Done what
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this hit me hard. There is a beautiful persistence running through this...the sense of continuing the work even while carrying grief, uncertainty, and the weight of passing time. That really resonated with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this hit me hard. There is a beautiful persistence running through this...the sense of continuing the work even while carrying grief, uncertainty, and the weight of passing time. That really resonated with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:30
Done what
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with catching lines of rhyme. Well done
June 12th, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with catching lines of rhyme. Well done
June 12th, 2026 13:25
Capture
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, there is a beautiful sense of movement here...from fire, to light, to freedom, to forgiveness. I especially enjoyed the repeated questions, which invite the reader to examine where their allegiance truly lies and what it costs to follow that path. And after all that kingdom, crown, and Spirit talk, I suppose there is only one remaining question...who\'s your daddy, now? 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 12:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, there is a beautiful sense of movement here...from fire, to light, to freedom, to forgiveness. I especially enjoyed the repeated questions, which invite the reader to examine where their allegiance truly lies and what it costs to follow that path. And after all that kingdom, crown, and Spirit talk, I suppose there is only one remaining question...who\'s your daddy, now? 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 12:28
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