Comments received on poems by 2781
Peace
sorenbarrett said:
Some famous words of warning nicely woven into this poem that reads smoothly and well with rhyme. Well done
March 19th, 2025 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
Some famous words of warning nicely woven into this poem that reads smoothly and well with rhyme. Well done
March 19th, 2025 03:35
Love for losers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very powerful, my friend. That last line...perfect ending! Well done! 🌹👏
March 16th, 2025 13:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very powerful, my friend. That last line...perfect ending! Well done! 🌹👏
March 16th, 2025 13:26
Waters
arqios said:
Good call there, round or flat, we’re still purposefully here, should we want it. 🙏🏻Thanks for clarity🕊
March 16th, 2025 07:29
arqios said:
Good call there, round or flat, we’re still purposefully here, should we want it. 🙏🏻Thanks for clarity🕊
March 16th, 2025 07:29
Love for losers
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this write and loved the last line
March 15th, 2025 12:10
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this write and loved the last line
March 15th, 2025 12:10
Love for losers
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem and I love the last line. It is full of deeper meaning than is apparent in the surface reading
March 15th, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem and I love the last line. It is full of deeper meaning than is apparent in the surface reading
March 15th, 2025 10:12
The same
arqios said:
Remaining and abiding, quite revolutionary and ever assuring🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 08:38
arqios said:
Remaining and abiding, quite revolutionary and ever assuring🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 08:38
The same
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of acknowledgement and surrender a poem of faith. Nicely written
March 9th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of acknowledgement and surrender a poem of faith. Nicely written
March 9th, 2025 09:39
Whatever his name is
orchidee said:
Good write 2. Whatever my name is - call me Fred, Joe, Sam, anything. Just don\'t call me Agatha! lol. (random names there)
March 9th, 2025 02:58
orchidee said:
Good write 2. Whatever my name is - call me Fred, Joe, Sam, anything. Just don\'t call me Agatha! lol. (random names there)
March 9th, 2025 02:58
Whatever his name is
sorenbarrett said:
A dark view of man\'s beliefs. We create god in our mind in our image. Our rage his, our change in mood his, even our prejudice his. Why do you think he is a man not a woman. Vengeance is his he said just like us and jealous are we not? A great write that starts different than it ends and I wonder will our story of religion end different than it started. Nicely done.
March 8th, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
A dark view of man\'s beliefs. We create god in our mind in our image. Our rage his, our change in mood his, even our prejudice his. Why do you think he is a man not a woman. Vengeance is his he said just like us and jealous are we not? A great write that starts different than it ends and I wonder will our story of religion end different than it started. Nicely done.
March 8th, 2025 11:23
Something new
Cheeky Missy said:
What you can adroitly pull from the bag with nary cue is fascinating, indeed. Rendered casually with tasteful imagery and an intriguing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 14:33
Cheeky Missy said:
What you can adroitly pull from the bag with nary cue is fascinating, indeed. Rendered casually with tasteful imagery and an intriguing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 14:33
Something new
Demar Desu said:
You’re one of my favorite poets on this site…
February 26th, 2025 10:53
Demar Desu said:
You’re one of my favorite poets on this site…
February 26th, 2025 10:53
Something new
sorenbarrett said:
Ah how the mind travels when searching for a topic and the muse is missing. Very nice
February 26th, 2025 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
Ah how the mind travels when searching for a topic and the muse is missing. Very nice
February 26th, 2025 09:42
Confusion
arqios said:
Their name is Subtle and they are Legion… not counting their wayward minions… the plea for peaceful waters is an urgent and commendable one… by them we thrive and are healed. 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:20
arqios said:
Their name is Subtle and they are Legion… not counting their wayward minions… the plea for peaceful waters is an urgent and commendable one… by them we thrive and are healed. 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:20
Confusion
sorenbarrett said:
A confession and declaration both rolled into one. Very nicely done
February 22nd, 2025 02:49
sorenbarrett said:
A confession and declaration both rolled into one. Very nicely done
February 22nd, 2025 02:49
Who
Cassie58 said:
We certainly are in a pickle. There is plenty of sorting out to do. Is anyone capable of stopping these wars? Let’s wait and see. A topical write.
February 19th, 2025 08:24
Cassie58 said:
We certainly are in a pickle. There is plenty of sorting out to do. Is anyone capable of stopping these wars? Let’s wait and see. A topical write.
February 19th, 2025 08:24
Who
arqios said:
Looks that way… the thing is, I’m a bit too old to be conscripted… and munitions these days might be almost completely automated.
February 19th, 2025 05:37
arqios said:
Looks that way… the thing is, I’m a bit too old to be conscripted… and munitions these days might be almost completely automated.
February 19th, 2025 05:37
Who
sorenbarrett said:
Troubled times are predicted by this poem. The view of the common man now days but so has it been on and off through history times of peace followed by war. Maybe it\'s the nature of man we should question. Nicely written
February 19th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Troubled times are predicted by this poem. The view of the common man now days but so has it been on and off through history times of peace followed by war. Maybe it\'s the nature of man we should question. Nicely written
February 19th, 2025 05:14
Trump the devil
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard his work (along with the \"opposition\") is to prepare the ground for a certain someone to make his entrance onto the world stage.
Anyways, none of this can happen
If people pull their heads out of their backsides.
It\'s as much on us as it is on Don Orange and co, as I\'m sure you know!
February 17th, 2025 18:43
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard his work (along with the \"opposition\") is to prepare the ground for a certain someone to make his entrance onto the world stage.
Anyways, none of this can happen
If people pull their heads out of their backsides.
It\'s as much on us as it is on Don Orange and co, as I\'m sure you know!
February 17th, 2025 18:43
Trump the devil
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, my friend. Thought-provoking poem. And no, to answer the question posed in the poem, I am not surprised. What puzzles me is how people are so willing for Trump to be God\'s will, but Joe Biden wasn\'t; It\'s as if when one\'s candidate wins, God\'s will is done. When one\'s candidate loses, God\'s will gets trumped by cheating humans (which is bad theology). As for me, who\'s in power is who\'s in power, and whether or not they follow God determines whether or not I ultimately listen to them. People have made mistakes in choosing human authority over God\'s in the past (King Saul), so this is nothing new to me. God\'s authority trumps human authority. Biblically, that is the case, and it should be in reality, too. Great write, my friend. Got the philosophical/theological juices flowing. 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, my friend. Thought-provoking poem. And no, to answer the question posed in the poem, I am not surprised. What puzzles me is how people are so willing for Trump to be God\'s will, but Joe Biden wasn\'t; It\'s as if when one\'s candidate wins, God\'s will is done. When one\'s candidate loses, God\'s will gets trumped by cheating humans (which is bad theology). As for me, who\'s in power is who\'s in power, and whether or not they follow God determines whether or not I ultimately listen to them. People have made mistakes in choosing human authority over God\'s in the past (King Saul), so this is nothing new to me. God\'s authority trumps human authority. Biblically, that is the case, and it should be in reality, too. Great write, my friend. Got the philosophical/theological juices flowing. 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:44
Trump the devil
sorenbarrett said:
All good stories require a villain, for God there must be a devil and so history has its heroes and despots today is no different. A great write
February 17th, 2025 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
All good stories require a villain, for God there must be a devil and so history has its heroes and despots today is no different. A great write
February 17th, 2025 08:09
Windfall
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. How shockingly delightful! How delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting yet waltzing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
February 16th, 2025 09:08
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. How shockingly delightful! How delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting yet waltzing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
February 16th, 2025 09:08
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