Comments received on poems by 2781
A love story
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valianstar, this feels deeply heartfelt…there’s a sincerity here that comes straight from devotion and memory. You can feel the love carried through every line. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valianstar, this feels deeply heartfelt…there’s a sincerity here that comes straight from devotion and memory. You can feel the love carried through every line. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:48
A love story
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said a beautiful poetic statement of faith
April 23rd, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said a beautiful poetic statement of faith
April 23rd, 2026 04:56
His place
NafisaSB said:
repentance, surrender, mercy - all so well portrayed here...
April 17th, 2026 23:56
NafisaSB said:
repentance, surrender, mercy - all so well portrayed here...
April 17th, 2026 23:56
Avenues
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, my friend, this made me smile…there’s a lightness here that carries all the way through. It feels like a real moment unfolding, from memory into surprise, and it keeps that playful tone without losing its charm. Really enjoyable. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, my friend, this made me smile…there’s a lightness here that carries all the way through. It feels like a real moment unfolding, from memory into surprise, and it keeps that playful tone without losing its charm. Really enjoyable. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:15
Avenues
sorenbarrett said:
You made me smile on this one and the smile will carry me through the day. thank you for that
April 16th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
You made me smile on this one and the smile will carry me through the day. thank you for that
April 16th, 2026 04:20
Avenues
orchidee said:
Good write 2. I went down a dead-end. Is that similar to an avenue?! lol.
April 16th, 2026 02:14
orchidee said:
Good write 2. I went down a dead-end. Is that similar to an avenue?! lol.
April 16th, 2026 02:14
Think
Doggerel Dave said:
Questions very familiar to me - I ask them or variants to myself frequently. However, the nature of the prophesy remains elusively just out of reach...
Certainly ticked several boxes for me.
April 14th, 2026 16:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Questions very familiar to me - I ask them or variants to myself frequently. However, the nature of the prophesy remains elusively just out of reach...
Certainly ticked several boxes for me.
April 14th, 2026 16:51
Think
sorenbarrett said:
One has to wonder sometimes what people are thinking or if they are thinking at all. Well written
April 14th, 2026 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
One has to wonder sometimes what people are thinking or if they are thinking at all. Well written
April 14th, 2026 11:02
Think
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar… this carries that uneasy tension…questions stacking one after another, never quite landing on an answer. It feels like trying to make sense of something just out of reach, and it stays with you. Strong, thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar… this carries that uneasy tension…questions stacking one after another, never quite landing on an answer. It feels like trying to make sense of something just out of reach, and it stays with you. Strong, thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:20
Triggered
Thomas W Case said:
Reflective and rough-edged—wrestling with faith, loss, and what’s been traded away.
The grit sits in that tension, where nostalgia and doubt grind against each other.
April 14th, 2026 07:09
Thomas W Case said:
Reflective and rough-edged—wrestling with faith, loss, and what’s been traded away.
The grit sits in that tension, where nostalgia and doubt grind against each other.
April 14th, 2026 07:09
Triggered
sorenbarrett said:
Renasant of old times and old values. Well written
April 13th, 2026 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
Renasant of old times and old values. Well written
April 13th, 2026 14:29
Triggered
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the tension between past simplicity and present complexity, reflecting on the transformative power of the teachings of the cross.
April 13th, 2026 08:54
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the tension between past simplicity and present complexity, reflecting on the transformative power of the teachings of the cross.
April 13th, 2026 08:54
Triggered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar… this carries that reflective tension…looking back at what was and weighing it against what is. That sense of something lost along the way comes through clearly, and it lingers. Strong, thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar… this carries that reflective tension…looking back at what was and weighing it against what is. That sense of something lost along the way comes through clearly, and it lingers. Strong, thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:44
His place
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this hit me hard…that raw posture of surrender, head down and unable to look up, makes the whole moment feel stripped and real. It carries that sense of facing something unavoidable, searching for mercy in the middle of it. It’s heavy, honest, and it lingers. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 12th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this hit me hard…that raw posture of surrender, head down and unable to look up, makes the whole moment feel stripped and real. It carries that sense of facing something unavoidable, searching for mercy in the middle of it. It’s heavy, honest, and it lingers. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 12th, 2026 10:16
His place
sorenbarrett said:
I love the mix in this poem so nicely worded and metered
April 12th, 2026 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
I love the mix in this poem so nicely worded and metered
April 12th, 2026 05:53
His place
arqios said:
Love the humility and grace found in the grit of life🙏🏻🕊️
April 12th, 2026 02:35
arqios said:
Love the humility and grace found in the grit of life🙏🏻🕊️
April 12th, 2026 02:35
The reaper
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this feels honest in a way that doesn’t try to hide anything…mistakes, trust, all of it sitting side by side. That tension is what makes it work. It’s steady, grounded, and real. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this feels honest in a way that doesn’t try to hide anything…mistakes, trust, all of it sitting side by side. That tension is what makes it work. It’s steady, grounded, and real. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:25
The reaper
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure of the quoted references but do think I grasp the general gist. I think there may be a case for ploughing this crop in to start again. But where the right machinery is found to achieves this is an open question.
April 10th, 2026 18:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure of the quoted references but do think I grasp the general gist. I think there may be a case for ploughing this crop in to start again. But where the right machinery is found to achieves this is an open question.
April 10th, 2026 18:01
The reaper
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poetic questioning of reason. Nicely worded in good rhyme
April 10th, 2026 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poetic questioning of reason. Nicely worded in good rhyme
April 10th, 2026 15:55
Who are you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a searching weight…question after question, and it doesn’t rush to answer them. It just sits in that tension. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 07:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a searching weight…question after question, and it doesn’t rush to answer them. It just sits in that tension. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 07:43
Who are you
sorenbarrett said:
We are sheep in search of a shepherd and we latch onto who seems the strongest
April 7th, 2026 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
We are sheep in search of a shepherd and we latch onto who seems the strongest
April 7th, 2026 09:11
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