Comments received on poems by 2781
What good
arqios said:
Appears on the surface to observe a superficiality of societal norms and the lack of genuine glory or purpose in the prescribed roles and actions. There is a palpable frustration with the monotony and the futility of being \"spoon-fed\" stories and routines that lack substance or deliverance. But the change we see in ourselves- the you in me, may just be the turn around point for each individual whole and the world entire.
November 21st, 2024 06:50
arqios said:
Appears on the surface to observe a superficiality of societal norms and the lack of genuine glory or purpose in the prescribed roles and actions. There is a palpable frustration with the monotony and the futility of being \"spoon-fed\" stories and routines that lack substance or deliverance. But the change we see in ourselves- the you in me, may just be the turn around point for each individual whole and the world entire.
November 21st, 2024 06:50
What good
sorenbarrett said:
Porn of hopelessness and regret I feel sadness here
November 21st, 2024 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Porn of hopelessness and regret I feel sadness here
November 21st, 2024 04:23
Seven
NafisaSB said:
good and knowledgeable post - got to know some more items associated with the number
November 18th, 2024 08:45
NafisaSB said:
good and knowledgeable post - got to know some more items associated with the number
November 18th, 2024 08:45
See
sorenbarrett said:
Church not the evening not judged. A good message sent her and agreed to.
November 18th, 2024 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
Church not the evening not judged. A good message sent her and agreed to.
November 18th, 2024 05:43
Seven
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truthfully, the most beautiful expression of seven and God\'s glory I\'ve read on this side of the Bible! Well done friend! An instant fave! โ๏ธ๐
November 17th, 2024 16:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truthfully, the most beautiful expression of seven and God\'s glory I\'ve read on this side of the Bible! Well done friend! An instant fave! โ๏ธ๐
November 17th, 2024 16:24
Seven
sorenbarrett said:
Seven days in a week, seven always a lucky number. A most fun read
November 17th, 2024 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
Seven days in a week, seven always a lucky number. A most fun read
November 17th, 2024 06:32
Seven
arqios said:
Utter completion, ultimate comprehensiveness, when the time of the given is completeโฆ. Oh what a reckoning and resolution there shall be!
November 17th, 2024 05:51
arqios said:
Utter completion, ultimate comprehensiveness, when the time of the given is completeโฆ. Oh what a reckoning and resolution there shall be!
November 17th, 2024 05:51
Power
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, words hold much power and careful tongues are needed in using words. Great write
Friend. Very wise, indeed! Well done! ๐๐น๐คโค๏ธ๐ค
November 16th, 2024 11:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, words hold much power and careful tongues are needed in using words. Great write
Friend. Very wise, indeed! Well done! ๐๐น๐คโค๏ธ๐ค
November 16th, 2024 11:26
Power
sorenbarrett said:
In the beginning was the word and the word was God. The word has more power than most grant. Good write
November 16th, 2024 08:52
sorenbarrett said:
In the beginning was the word and the word was God. The word has more power than most grant. Good write
November 16th, 2024 08:52
Power
Doggerel Dave said:
With you at \"Money is power, wealth a defence\". After that I was a little lost....
Felt it though....
November 16th, 2024 05:07
Doggerel Dave said:
With you at \"Money is power, wealth a defence\". After that I was a little lost....
Felt it though....
November 16th, 2024 05:07
Dippy slip
Cheeky Missy said:
This is charming on the surface, yet so true and heartbreaking, I maunt but resonate, feebly. Very beautifully rendered with such perfect poignancy and imagery. Thank you muchly for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:17
Cheeky Missy said:
This is charming on the surface, yet so true and heartbreaking, I maunt but resonate, feebly. Very beautifully rendered with such perfect poignancy and imagery. Thank you muchly for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:17
Run around
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'ve lost me somewhere in the translation, the beauty of its rendering rather captivating as the lines trip down the page, tantalizing. Intriguing, and vaguely elusive. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:02
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'ve lost me somewhere in the translation, the beauty of its rendering rather captivating as the lines trip down the page, tantalizing. Intriguing, and vaguely elusive. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:02
Dippy slip
sorenbarrett said:
A poem asking for help from a higher power. The sense of needing greater strength than that contained within. Nicely written in poetic form.
November 12th, 2024 14:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem asking for help from a higher power. The sense of needing greater strength than that contained within. Nicely written in poetic form.
November 12th, 2024 14:41
Hazy
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting riddle, indeed. Chickens roost early. They also fly the coop. Fun read my friend.
November 11th, 2024 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting riddle, indeed. Chickens roost early. They also fly the coop. Fun read my friend.
November 11th, 2024 04:46
Fatal attraction
jarcher54 said:
I am with Doggerel on this one, but I was kinda hoping the end was intended to be ironic... fun little tour de force though!
November 11th, 2024 01:48
jarcher54 said:
I am with Doggerel on this one, but I was kinda hoping the end was intended to be ironic... fun little tour de force though!
November 11th, 2024 01:48
Fatal attraction
arqios said:
As with beauty there must be a notion that age is in the heart of the be-holder.
November 10th, 2024 16:40
arqios said:
As with beauty there must be a notion that age is in the heart of the be-holder.
November 10th, 2024 16:40
Fatal attraction
sorenbarrett said:
Temptation is a tough cookie to handle. Good for you.
November 10th, 2024 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Temptation is a tough cookie to handle. Good for you.
November 10th, 2024 11:49
Fatal attraction
Doggerel Dave said:
I was going alright with that - until you flunked it and blamed your Lord....๐
November 10th, 2024 05:33
Doggerel Dave said:
I was going alright with that - until you flunked it and blamed your Lord....๐
November 10th, 2024 05:33
Everything/nothing
arqios said:
A peaceful weekend for there are many days yet ahead. For the converted, strength to carry on.
November 8th, 2024 20:30
arqios said:
A peaceful weekend for there are many days yet ahead. For the converted, strength to carry on.
November 8th, 2024 20:30
Turmoil
MR.apocalypse said:
this is spot on. i don\'t understand why people get caught up in these games
November 8th, 2024 15:02
MR.apocalypse said:
this is spot on. i don\'t understand why people get caught up in these games
November 8th, 2024 15:02
Everything/nothing
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed and with good flow this poem sets forth its message
November 8th, 2024 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed and with good flow this poem sets forth its message
November 8th, 2024 05:36
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