Comments received on poems by 2781
Flies to the honey
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one. The message is a favorite of mine for you can not know a man unless you have walked in his shoes. None of us walk in another\'s shoes and can not know what he undergoes, thinks or feels. Judge not is a Jewish and Christian belief by scripture yet so few follow their beliefs. A fave
October 3rd, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one. The message is a favorite of mine for you can not know a man unless you have walked in his shoes. None of us walk in another\'s shoes and can not know what he undergoes, thinks or feels. Judge not is a Jewish and Christian belief by scripture yet so few follow their beliefs. A fave
October 3rd, 2025 08:43
Flies to the honey
Paul Bell said:
Too many perfect people out there.
Well, at least the ones who put their arm round you.
October 3rd, 2025 08:38
Paul Bell said:
Too many perfect people out there.
Well, at least the ones who put their arm round you.
October 3rd, 2025 08:38
Forgive me
Doggerel Dave said:
For the most part you captured a thought process I both recognize and am very familiar with.
Your conclusion? Sorry we will differ there, but that doesn\'t detract from the rest. Thanks.
October 1st, 2025 20:38
Doggerel Dave said:
For the most part you captured a thought process I both recognize and am very familiar with.
Your conclusion? Sorry we will differ there, but that doesn\'t detract from the rest. Thanks.
October 1st, 2025 20:38
Forgive me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. The wrestling, the questions, the prayer woven through…it all feels so raw and searching. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 20:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. The wrestling, the questions, the prayer woven through…it all feels so raw and searching. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 20:03
Forgive me
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and thought-provoking with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 1st, 2025 12:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and thought-provoking with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 1st, 2025 12:52
Forgive me
sorenbarrett said:
I like the doubt shown in the beginning of this poem it reveals open mindedness. A good write
October 1st, 2025 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
I like the doubt shown in the beginning of this poem it reveals open mindedness. A good write
October 1st, 2025 09:29
On the level
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, this is both proclamation and poem. The sickle at harvest, the call to stay on the level, the cadence of warning...very powerful. Urgent, heavy, unforgettable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2025 09:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, this is both proclamation and poem. The sickle at harvest, the call to stay on the level, the cadence of warning...very powerful. Urgent, heavy, unforgettable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2025 09:02
On the level
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s something just slightly.. almost.. there.. but slightly out of reach...
PS Who is this Isaiah bloke anyway..?
September 26th, 2025 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s something just slightly.. almost.. there.. but slightly out of reach...
PS Who is this Isaiah bloke anyway..?
September 26th, 2025 07:20
On the level
2781 said:
Arqios - AI should be careful, you could take their job!
September 25th, 2025 20:34
2781 said:
Arqios - AI should be careful, you could take their job!
September 25th, 2025 20:34
On the level
arqios said:
This refracts the imagery into a more contemporary, layered meditation: a modern idiom of “levels,” games, bait, and tests; suggesting that in the chaos of perception, competition, and judgment, the only way to endure is to remain “on the level.” It’s almost a commentary: \"don’t get lost in the noise of winners and losers, bait and games. The Servant shows that the true test is silence, endurance, and what remains after fire.\"
September 25th, 2025 19:39
arqios said:
This refracts the imagery into a more contemporary, layered meditation: a modern idiom of “levels,” games, bait, and tests; suggesting that in the chaos of perception, competition, and judgment, the only way to endure is to remain “on the level.” It’s almost a commentary: \"don’t get lost in the noise of winners and losers, bait and games. The Servant shows that the true test is silence, endurance, and what remains after fire.\"
September 25th, 2025 19:39
Complete
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like a ride through both satire and scripture…the gravy train and the mountain side by side. Powerful and relatable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2025 16:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like a ride through both satire and scripture…the gravy train and the mountain side by side. Powerful and relatable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2025 16:22
On the level
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to be a plea for one to choose their side and recognize the right. Nicely written
September 25th, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to be a plea for one to choose their side and recognize the right. Nicely written
September 25th, 2025 13:59
Complete
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that calls question to the issue of should one love oneself and I believe one should for if you don\'t I don\'t believe you can love any thing or any one else. Well written
September 24th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that calls question to the issue of should one love oneself and I believe one should for if you don\'t I don\'t believe you can love any thing or any one else. Well written
September 24th, 2025 11:12
Who I am
NafisaSB said:
it is the inner self which truly knows and recognizes what is, and what\'s worth knowing - a good write
September 22nd, 2025 23:52
NafisaSB said:
it is the inner self which truly knows and recognizes what is, and what\'s worth knowing - a good write
September 22nd, 2025 23:52
My Lord
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is emotional, reverent, and vivid, blending personal devotion with scripture-inspired imagery.
September 19th, 2025 15:38
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is emotional, reverent, and vivid, blending personal devotion with scripture-inspired imagery.
September 19th, 2025 15:38
My Lord
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads like a worn prayer turned prophetic call…gratitude for rescue…“you set me free”…moves into an insistence: know the times, choose life, stand firm. The poem balances reassurance (“set my feet upon the rock”) with a startling edge…the thief, the surprise, “slay them with your tongue”…so worship and confrontation live in the same breath. It’s both comfort and battle cry, tender and unflinching. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 19th, 2025 15:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads like a worn prayer turned prophetic call…gratitude for rescue…“you set me free”…moves into an insistence: know the times, choose life, stand firm. The poem balances reassurance (“set my feet upon the rock”) with a startling edge…the thief, the surprise, “slay them with your tongue”…so worship and confrontation live in the same breath. It’s both comfort and battle cry, tender and unflinching. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 19th, 2025 15:35
My Lord
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic proclamation of belief sent in powerful words. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic proclamation of belief sent in powerful words. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 04:18
Lover
Keeter C said:
Nice. It’s like a little bread trail. The warnings of old about lovers.
September 19th, 2025 00:01
Keeter C said:
Nice. It’s like a little bread trail. The warnings of old about lovers.
September 19th, 2025 00:01
Who I am
orchidee said:
Erm, who are ya? You can tell I didn\'t read the poem properly. lol.
September 18th, 2025 02:07
orchidee said:
Erm, who are ya? You can tell I didn\'t read the poem properly. lol.
September 18th, 2025 02:07
Who I am
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem elegantly captures the journey of self-awareness and the moral weight of choices. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:07
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem elegantly captures the journey of self-awareness and the moral weight of choices. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:07
Who I am
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like tracing my own wrestlings…the battlefield of the mind, the choice to hold on, the hope that victory lives inside. You’ve named that tension clearly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 17th, 2025 11:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like tracing my own wrestlings…the battlefield of the mind, the choice to hold on, the hope that victory lives inside. You’ve named that tension clearly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 17th, 2025 11:12
Who I am
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to be heard above the din of the crowd. A wonderful write
September 17th, 2025 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to be heard above the din of the crowd. A wonderful write
September 17th, 2025 07:46
Lover
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is stark and piercing, my friend…politics as betrayal, love as a lie, the nation mourning like children. It weaves together anger and sorrow in a way that lingers long after reading. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 13:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is stark and piercing, my friend…politics as betrayal, love as a lie, the nation mourning like children. It weaves together anger and sorrow in a way that lingers long after reading. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 13:00
Lover
sorenbarrett said:
Well said an allegory so well set in poetic style Yes indeed government does not love the people and receives gifts from it all the time a whore to votes. Wonderfully written
September 15th, 2025 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
Well said an allegory so well set in poetic style Yes indeed government does not love the people and receives gifts from it all the time a whore to votes. Wonderfully written
September 15th, 2025 10:23
Come down
sorenbarrett said:
Vague enough to apply to many things yet specific enough to provoke thought this poem cries out. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Vague enough to apply to many things yet specific enough to provoke thought this poem cries out. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 04:08
Meta-verse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, my friend…this is the struggle of our age—creation and destruction entwined. You’ve captured the paradox with sharp edges. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, my friend…this is the struggle of our age—creation and destruction entwined. You’ve captured the paradox with sharp edges. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:40
Meta-verse
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rhyme and flow and the message is a most inspiring one. A wonderful write
September 10th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rhyme and flow and the message is a most inspiring one. A wonderful write
September 10th, 2025 08:14
Desire
sorenbarrett said:
Tis far better to give hope than answers. Hope people will follow answers they disregard, disbelieve and will not follow out of stubbornness. Good write
September 9th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Tis far better to give hope than answers. Hope people will follow answers they disregard, disbelieve and will not follow out of stubbornness. Good write
September 9th, 2025 04:26
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