Comments received on poems by 2781
Masters touch
sorenbarrett said:
Although this seems a deeper layer than the surface speaking to making changes at many levels it makes me think of the superficial desire to be more beautiful than one is and employing a plastic surgeon to do a Michael Jackson makeover. Nicely written
June 30th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Although this seems a deeper layer than the surface speaking to making changes at many levels it makes me think of the superficial desire to be more beautiful than one is and employing a plastic surgeon to do a Michael Jackson makeover. Nicely written
June 30th, 2026 08:37
Masters touch
Thomas W Case said:
A soft pitch for transformation, like hope being offered on a painter’s brush—but with just enough tension underneath to wonder who’s really in control.
It feels like invitation and persuasion at the same time, beauty almost close enough to be edited into existence.
June 30th, 2026 08:31
Thomas W Case said:
A soft pitch for transformation, like hope being offered on a painter’s brush—but with just enough tension underneath to wonder who’s really in control.
It feels like invitation and persuasion at the same time, beauty almost close enough to be edited into existence.
June 30th, 2026 08:31
Keep me
Durdica Porobija said:
I\'m not sure if that prayer is ultimately self-critical or ironic.
June 29th, 2026 13:02
Durdica Porobija said:
I\'m not sure if that prayer is ultimately self-critical or ironic.
June 29th, 2026 13:02
Keep me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is a heartfelt prayer. The image of becoming God\'s feet, hands, and face really resonated with me because it moves faith beyond words and into daily living. Thank you for sharing this beautiful expression of trust, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is a heartfelt prayer. The image of becoming God\'s feet, hands, and face really resonated with me because it moves faith beyond words and into daily living. Thank you for sharing this beautiful expression of trust, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:35
Deception?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this certainly made me stop and think. There are only a handful of words here, yet they carry the weight of a much larger conversation. I found myself sitting with it long after I finished reading. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this certainly made me stop and think. There are only a handful of words here, yet they carry the weight of a much larger conversation. I found myself sitting with it long after I finished reading. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:14
Deception?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one think. Being excommunicated not a bad thing. Well done
June 28th, 2026 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one think. Being excommunicated not a bad thing. Well done
June 28th, 2026 08:46
Fake it
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a powerful declaration of hope and redemption. The voice throughout the poem carries both authority and compassion...calling the reader forward rather than leaving them behind. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what a powerful declaration of hope and redemption. The voice throughout the poem carries both authority and compassion...calling the reader forward rather than leaving them behind. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:51
Fake it
sorenbarrett said:
A modern call to action and faith well written in good rhyme. Well done
June 25th, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
A modern call to action and faith well written in good rhyme. Well done
June 25th, 2026 07:43
This that the other
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this made me smile, my friend. There is a lighthearted, encouraging spirit running through the whole thing. It feels like a friendly reminder that we do not have to carry everything alone. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ValiantStar, this made me smile, my friend. There is a lighthearted, encouraging spirit running through the whole thing. It feels like a friendly reminder that we do not have to carry everything alone. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:37
This that the other
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that plays off rhyme and old sayings modified well done
June 23rd, 2026 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that plays off rhyme and old sayings modified well done
June 23rd, 2026 06:53
Manifestation
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic call. Nicely written with rhyme and a message. Well done
June 13th, 2026 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic call. Nicely written with rhyme and a message. Well done
June 13th, 2026 12:36
Done what
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this hit me hard. There is a beautiful persistence running through this...the sense of continuing the work even while carrying grief, uncertainty, and the weight of passing time. That really resonated with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this hit me hard. There is a beautiful persistence running through this...the sense of continuing the work even while carrying grief, uncertainty, and the weight of passing time. That really resonated with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:30
Done what
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with catching lines of rhyme. Well done
June 12th, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with catching lines of rhyme. Well done
June 12th, 2026 13:25
Capture
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, there is a beautiful sense of movement here...from fire, to light, to freedom, to forgiveness. I especially enjoyed the repeated questions, which invite the reader to examine where their allegiance truly lies and what it costs to follow that path. And after all that kingdom, crown, and Spirit talk, I suppose there is only one remaining question...who\'s your daddy, now? 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 12:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, there is a beautiful sense of movement here...from fire, to light, to freedom, to forgiveness. I especially enjoyed the repeated questions, which invite the reader to examine where their allegiance truly lies and what it costs to follow that path. And after all that kingdom, crown, and Spirit talk, I suppose there is only one remaining question...who\'s your daddy, now? 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 12:28
Conflicted
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds scriptural in its wording and prophetic in nature. Nicely done
June 7th, 2026 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds scriptural in its wording and prophetic in nature. Nicely done
June 7th, 2026 10:56
Conflicted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. There is a deep sense of spiritual wrestling throughout the poem...questions, doubts, hopes, and convictions all sharing the same space. It feels honest precisely because it does not pretend the journey is simple. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. There is a deep sense of spiritual wrestling throughout the poem...questions, doubts, hopes, and convictions all sharing the same space. It feels honest precisely because it does not pretend the journey is simple. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:16
What\'s seen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. There is a sense of conviction running through this piece from beginning to end...a confidence that light ultimately reveals what darkness tries to conceal. The spiritual energy here is unmistakable. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 07:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really moved me. There is a sense of conviction running through this piece from beginning to end...a confidence that light ultimately reveals what darkness tries to conceal. The spiritual energy here is unmistakable. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 07:28
What\'s seen
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and light perceptions cast in this poem nicely done
June 6th, 2026 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and light perceptions cast in this poem nicely done
June 6th, 2026 11:04
Qualities
sorenbarrett said:
There is a belief and faith in this poem of a greater power that comes to enact its will on the people. Well penned
June 5th, 2026 03:37
sorenbarrett said:
There is a belief and faith in this poem of a greater power that comes to enact its will on the people. Well penned
June 5th, 2026 03:37
Wasted talents
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “past the guards where no man goes” is one of the linearly that grabbed me. It transforms the search for talent and purpose into a treasure hunt through forbidden territory. That image gives the poem a real sense of mystery. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “past the guards where no man goes” is one of the linearly that grabbed me. It transforms the search for talent and purpose into a treasure hunt through forbidden territory. That image gives the poem a real sense of mystery. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:17
Wasted talents
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for buried treasure is seldom successful a great write
June 4th, 2026 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for buried treasure is seldom successful a great write
June 4th, 2026 12:40
Switch over
arqios said:
Goads are interesting travelling equipment, specifically propulsion-wise.
May 31st, 2026 01:07
arqios said:
Goads are interesting travelling equipment, specifically propulsion-wise.
May 31st, 2026 01:07
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