Comments received on poems by 2781
The third trench
sorenbarrett said:
What a metaphor here. Well set up and worked out it portrays the present day situation very well. Even the point of view is metaphorical and the narrator breaks the forth wall talking to the reader. Lovely
October 19th, 2024 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
What a metaphor here. Well set up and worked out it portrays the present day situation very well. Even the point of view is metaphorical and the narrator breaks the forth wall talking to the reader. Lovely
October 19th, 2024 05:17
The third trench
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks - I really got stuck in there, and no bad back or calloused hands. I\'m with you all the way (from here!)
October 19th, 2024 01:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks - I really got stuck in there, and no bad back or calloused hands. I\'m with you all the way (from here!)
October 19th, 2024 01:52
Oils down
sorenbarrett said:
Money runs the world\'s machine and oil greases its gears. Nicely written
October 17th, 2024 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
Money runs the world\'s machine and oil greases its gears. Nicely written
October 17th, 2024 09:06
Searching
Goldfinch60 said:
If only the leaders of the world could see that this is the way to go 2781 we would be in a wonderful place.
Andy
October 6th, 2024 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
If only the leaders of the world could see that this is the way to go 2781 we would be in a wonderful place.
Andy
October 6th, 2024 01:12
Searching
Dan Williams said:
Unfortunately, yes; man does seem so shallow. Enough to be destroying this planet, the only one we have. This terrifies me. Good job.
October 6th, 2024 00:08
Dan Williams said:
Unfortunately, yes; man does seem so shallow. Enough to be destroying this planet, the only one we have. This terrifies me. Good job.
October 6th, 2024 00:08
Searching
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 clapping!
A trrrific poem
thoughts and
message penned!! 👍
Wonderfully woven,
great rhyme, flow and blend! 🏆
Thanks for sharing,
much enjoyed my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 5th, 2024 19:11
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 clapping!
A trrrific poem
thoughts and
message penned!! 👍
Wonderfully woven,
great rhyme, flow and blend! 🏆
Thanks for sharing,
much enjoyed my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 5th, 2024 19:11
Searching
Neville said:
sometimes it takes more than just looking to find something .. doesn\'t it
October 5th, 2024 12:31
Neville said:
sometimes it takes more than just looking to find something .. doesn\'t it
October 5th, 2024 12:31
Searching
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...we wrestle not against flesh and blood--\" yet despite ably and glibly reciting this, fail to realize whom the adversaries truly are. Or?
October 5th, 2024 12:22
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...we wrestle not against flesh and blood--\" yet despite ably and glibly reciting this, fail to realize whom the adversaries truly are. Or?
October 5th, 2024 12:22
Searching
sorenbarrett said:
Turn the other cheek and forgive is the commandment. Love thy neighbor and your enemies.
October 5th, 2024 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
Turn the other cheek and forgive is the commandment. Love thy neighbor and your enemies.
October 5th, 2024 11:38
What is man
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm, \"...that Thou art mindful of him--\" interesting and rather provocative, loaded subtly with snatches like the title is, rendered almost like a tease, yet not, intriguing. Fascinating. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 29th, 2024 15:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm, \"...that Thou art mindful of him--\" interesting and rather provocative, loaded subtly with snatches like the title is, rendered almost like a tease, yet not, intriguing. Fascinating. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 29th, 2024 15:42
What is man
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome poem
on what is man indeed! 🙏
Just resonates with
greatness, and a
Joy to read!! 👍👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 29th, 2024 13:20
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome poem
on what is man indeed! 🙏
Just resonates with
greatness, and a
Joy to read!! 👍👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 29th, 2024 13:20
Latitudes
Cheeky Missy said:
Loaded to effect with a haunting poignancy and superb quotes and imagery, I shall try to stop there, lest I say more than I aught. Thank you very much for sharing, Sir.
September 28th, 2024 14:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Loaded to effect with a haunting poignancy and superb quotes and imagery, I shall try to stop there, lest I say more than I aught. Thank you very much for sharing, Sir.
September 28th, 2024 14:33
Latitudes
sorenbarrett said:
Some hope for vengence I look for peace. Good write
September 28th, 2024 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
Some hope for vengence I look for peace. Good write
September 28th, 2024 06:34
Nothing to see hear
Doggerel Dave said:
You are talking a million dollars here I hope (I’m no good with figures after I’ve taken my shoes and socks off…)
Because all I know is that in good old Sydney town even modest dwellings in most parts are selling north of the million. In my inner west ‘burb a normal two bedroom goes for one and a half. (not me – I moved into my cupboard over twenty years ago having reached a certain age).
People nailed in place for life.
September 26th, 2024 02:04
Doggerel Dave said:
You are talking a million dollars here I hope (I’m no good with figures after I’ve taken my shoes and socks off…)
Because all I know is that in good old Sydney town even modest dwellings in most parts are selling north of the million. In my inner west ‘burb a normal two bedroom goes for one and a half. (not me – I moved into my cupboard over twenty years ago having reached a certain age).
People nailed in place for life.
September 26th, 2024 02:04
Goodness
Dan Williams said:
I sure could use a handful of your optimism. Nice work.
September 24th, 2024 00:05
Dan Williams said:
I sure could use a handful of your optimism. Nice work.
September 24th, 2024 00:05
Goodness
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you. Simply stated with a subtle poignancy it is too beautifully rendered.
September 23rd, 2024 18:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you. Simply stated with a subtle poignancy it is too beautifully rendered.
September 23rd, 2024 18:39
Goodness
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes definitely still there…but perhaps as times get harder then it\'s harder to find….
A rhyme of hope, and for that, thanks.
September 23rd, 2024 02:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes definitely still there…but perhaps as times get harder then it\'s harder to find….
A rhyme of hope, and for that, thanks.
September 23rd, 2024 02:18
Crap for the masses
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, thank you for proving superbly eloquent in describing the subtle reality lurking just in sight yet unseen whileas we trot toward the end of the end. \"....this iniquity shall not be purged from you till ye die, saith the LORD God of hosts.\" (Is 22:14b) What I\'ve been mulling is how to avoid that condemnation seeing I\'ve a penchant for fun.
Excellently rendered with a truly haunting poignancy.
Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 13:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, thank you for proving superbly eloquent in describing the subtle reality lurking just in sight yet unseen whileas we trot toward the end of the end. \"....this iniquity shall not be purged from you till ye die, saith the LORD God of hosts.\" (Is 22:14b) What I\'ve been mulling is how to avoid that condemnation seeing I\'ve a penchant for fun.
Excellently rendered with a truly haunting poignancy.
Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 13:33
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