Comments received on poems by 2781
A new song
arqios said:
The new song is a heart song that springs forth from abiding and communing.🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:50
arqios said:
The new song is a heart song that springs forth from abiding and communing.🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:50
A new song
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries the cadence of scripture and hymn alike…there’s a prophetic warmth to it that feels both invitational and solemn at the same time. The repetition of “Sing me a new song” gives the whole piece a strong spiritual pulse. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries the cadence of scripture and hymn alike…there’s a prophetic warmth to it that feels both invitational and solemn at the same time. The repetition of “Sing me a new song” gives the whole piece a strong spiritual pulse. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:01
Commentary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, you got me with this one…there’s humor all through it, but also a real warning underneath the madness. “Making cages” especially lands. Chaotic in the best way, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, you got me with this one…there’s humor all through it, but also a real warning underneath the madness. “Making cages” especially lands. Chaotic in the best way, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:56
The plot
arqios said:
That is where the best answers come, in the state of pure joy 🕊️🙏🤩
May 5th, 2026 04:35
arqios said:
That is where the best answers come, in the state of pure joy 🕊️🙏🤩
May 5th, 2026 04:35
The plot
orchidee said:
Aww, I lost the plot! heehee. No change there then for me. lol.
May 4th, 2026 14:17
orchidee said:
Aww, I lost the plot! heehee. No change there then for me. lol.
May 4th, 2026 14:17
The plot
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a hopeful push…letting go, stepping into something new, and trusting that joy will meet you there. It feels like movement and renewal all at once. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a hopeful push…letting go, stepping into something new, and trusting that joy will meet you there. It feels like movement and renewal all at once. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:53
The load
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, that contrast between descent and rising really stands out… it gives the piece a powerful movement through it. There’s a clear shift that holds everything together. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 3rd, 2026 16:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, that contrast between descent and rising really stands out… it gives the piece a powerful movement through it. There’s a clear shift that holds everything together. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 3rd, 2026 16:13
The load
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem deals with existential struggles, the burden of past sins or misdeeds, and the relief that comes from love, trust, and spiritual guidance.
May 3rd, 2026 05:52
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem deals with existential struggles, the burden of past sins or misdeeds, and the relief that comes from love, trust, and spiritual guidance.
May 3rd, 2026 05:52
The load
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal ride from hades to the upper world. Nicely written
May 3rd, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal ride from hades to the upper world. Nicely written
May 3rd, 2026 04:26
Prophesy
arqios said:
And many have gone silent but not as many as those whose tongues have wagged like flames 🔥🙃🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2026 18:14
arqios said:
And many have gone silent but not as many as those whose tongues have wagged like flames 🔥🙃🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2026 18:14
Prophesy
sorenbarrett said:
My grandfather a very religious man once told me any prophesy is true if you put no date on it. A good write
May 1st, 2026 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
My grandfather a very religious man once told me any prophesy is true if you put no date on it. A good write
May 1st, 2026 16:23
Hands
Doggerel Dave said:
Many folks in retirement \'complain\' that they have less spare time than when they worked. Some ironical truth in that.
May 1st, 2026 00:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Many folks in retirement \'complain\' that they have less spare time than when they worked. Some ironical truth in that.
May 1st, 2026 00:28
Hands
arqios said:
Keeps us out of mischief, less idle hands for the devil\'s workshop! 🕊️🙏
April 30th, 2026 20:36
arqios said:
Keeps us out of mischief, less idle hands for the devil\'s workshop! 🕊️🙏
April 30th, 2026 20:36
Hands
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a changing course and mind nicely done
April 30th, 2026 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a changing course and mind nicely done
April 30th, 2026 09:23
Hands
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the experience of manual labor and the emotional and physical toll it can take, while also celebrating the joy and dignity that can come from that work.
April 30th, 2026 09:13
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the experience of manual labor and the emotional and physical toll it can take, while also celebrating the joy and dignity that can come from that work.
April 30th, 2026 09:13
Hairy goat
Doggerel Dave said:
Tell me, just quietly: is this when he found faith? Reference to September - seems like a fairly ordinary month to me...
April 28th, 2026 16:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Tell me, just quietly: is this when he found faith? Reference to September - seems like a fairly ordinary month to me...
April 28th, 2026 16:56
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