Comments received on poems by 2781
Sacrifice on the hill
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of blindness and deafness in the search. Well written
May 17th, 2026 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of blindness and deafness in the search. Well written
May 17th, 2026 13:31
Internal/external
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads like a late-night philosophical spiral in the best sense. Power, manipulation, identity, thought, emotion…it all keeps folding inward until the ending quietly questions whether the struggle was ever external at all. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads like a late-night philosophical spiral in the best sense. Power, manipulation, identity, thought, emotion…it all keeps folding inward until the ending quietly questions whether the struggle was ever external at all. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:35
Internal/external
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this flows in metaphor the squeezed juice that ferments in the barrel. Well done
May 14th, 2026 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this flows in metaphor the squeezed juice that ferments in the barrel. Well done
May 14th, 2026 09:02
Dubious distinction
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, short but sharp 🤣 This feels like a political jab delivered with just enough restraint to let the sarcasm do the work. Nicely aimed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, short but sharp 🤣 This feels like a political jab delivered with just enough restraint to let the sarcasm do the work. Nicely aimed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:19
Dubious distinction
sorenbarrett said:
This one leaves me on edge without knowing which way it will cut. Nicely done
May 13th, 2026 17:20
sorenbarrett said:
This one leaves me on edge without knowing which way it will cut. Nicely done
May 13th, 2026 17:20
Dubious distinction
Paul Bell said:
Something tells me he wont be missed.
Replacing him with a used car saleman, wes streeting, not good.
May 13th, 2026 10:08
Paul Bell said:
Something tells me he wont be missed.
Replacing him with a used car saleman, wes streeting, not good.
May 13th, 2026 10:08
What can I do
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem of saying goodbye. Tender and soft.
May 12th, 2026 20:40
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem of saying goodbye. Tender and soft.
May 12th, 2026 20:40
What can I do
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the helplessness that can come beside a hospital bed…the feeling that love is both everything and somehow never enough at the same time. This poem captures that quiet ache with honesty and grace. I felt this deeply, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 14:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the helplessness that can come beside a hospital bed…the feeling that love is both everything and somehow never enough at the same time. This poem captures that quiet ache with honesty and grace. I felt this deeply, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 14:00
Why
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong prophetic pulse. The imagery of idols, hollow labor, and wealth slipping through open hands all builds toward something wiser and steadier by the close. “Blessed to be a blessing” lands with real peace after everything that comes before it. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong prophetic pulse. The imagery of idols, hollow labor, and wealth slipping through open hands all builds toward something wiser and steadier by the close. “Blessed to be a blessing” lands with real peace after everything that comes before it. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:09
Why
arqios said:
Can\'t take any of it to the grave. And the amount of trouble we go through in life for such vainglory and striving! 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 19:09
arqios said:
Can\'t take any of it to the grave. And the amount of trouble we go through in life for such vainglory and striving! 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 19:09
Why
sorenbarrett said:
A weaving of words that takes the thoughts to task. Well done
May 10th, 2026 18:56
sorenbarrett said:
A weaving of words that takes the thoughts to task. Well done
May 10th, 2026 18:56
A new song
arqios said:
The new song is a heart song that springs forth from abiding and communing.🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:50
arqios said:
The new song is a heart song that springs forth from abiding and communing.🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:50
A new song
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries the cadence of scripture and hymn alike…there’s a prophetic warmth to it that feels both invitational and solemn at the same time. The repetition of “Sing me a new song” gives the whole piece a strong spiritual pulse. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries the cadence of scripture and hymn alike…there’s a prophetic warmth to it that feels both invitational and solemn at the same time. The repetition of “Sing me a new song” gives the whole piece a strong spiritual pulse. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:01
Commentary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, you got me with this one…there’s humor all through it, but also a real warning underneath the madness. “Making cages” especially lands. Chaotic in the best way, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, you got me with this one…there’s humor all through it, but also a real warning underneath the madness. “Making cages” especially lands. Chaotic in the best way, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:56
The plot
arqios said:
That is where the best answers come, in the state of pure joy 🕊️🙏🤩
May 5th, 2026 04:35
arqios said:
That is where the best answers come, in the state of pure joy 🕊️🙏🤩
May 5th, 2026 04:35
The plot
orchidee said:
Aww, I lost the plot! heehee. No change there then for me. lol.
May 4th, 2026 14:17
orchidee said:
Aww, I lost the plot! heehee. No change there then for me. lol.
May 4th, 2026 14:17
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