Comments received on poems by 2781
Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a quiet sadness. One brief encounter opens onto an entire unseen history...and the physical detail shows that time has already collected its price. This brought several people to mind. Thought-provoking work,Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a quiet sadness. One brief encounter opens onto an entire unseen history...and the physical detail shows that time has already collected its price. This brought several people to mind. Thought-provoking work,Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:50
Life
arqios said:
Was a merry old soul was he. Calling for his pipe and such. 👍🏻🕊️
August 25th, 2026 07:16
arqios said:
Was a merry old soul was he. Calling for his pipe and such. 👍🏻🕊️
August 25th, 2026 07:16
Life
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that leaves one questioning the issue of paying for what one does. Well done
August 25th, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that leaves one questioning the issue of paying for what one does. Well done
August 25th, 2026 04:46
Life
Paul Bell said:
Yes, smoking can damage your health and eventually make you gumsy.
In saying that, just going to the shops can kill you these days.
August 25th, 2026 03:17
Paul Bell said:
Yes, smoking can damage your health and eventually make you gumsy.
In saying that, just going to the shops can kill you these days.
August 25th, 2026 03:17
Dim wit
Doggerel Dave said:
One man\'s happiness could be another\'s horror. Liked this - enjoyed his perspective.
August 24th, 2026 00:53
Doggerel Dave said:
One man\'s happiness could be another\'s horror. Liked this - enjoyed his perspective.
August 24th, 2026 00:53
Dim wit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I feel personally attacked by this one! 🤣 A wonderfully affectionate portrait of a lovable oddball whose inner world is far busier than anything happening outside it. Great fun, my Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I feel personally attacked by this one! 🤣 A wonderfully affectionate portrait of a lovable oddball whose inner world is far busier than anything happening outside it. Great fun, my Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:00
Dim wit
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of Lewis Carroll this one is entertaining and enlightening as well. Well done
August 23rd, 2026 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of Lewis Carroll this one is entertaining and enlightening as well. Well done
August 23rd, 2026 11:00
Money
arqios said:
Ironic, isn\'t it! When divine paradoxes connect, we see our paradoxical dilemmas in a more reflective light. Hope this leads to godly sorrow.
August 21st, 2026 20:26
arqios said:
Ironic, isn\'t it! When divine paradoxes connect, we see our paradoxical dilemmas in a more reflective light. Hope this leads to godly sorrow.
August 21st, 2026 20:26
Money
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and searching poem, Valiantstar! The image of wealth slipping through torn purses captures a culture that continually acquires yet remains unsatisfied. Money can serve life, but when it becomes sacred, generosity, dignity, and faith are sacrificed before it. Your movement toward open hands offers the necessary answer. Excellent write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 09:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and searching poem, Valiantstar! The image of wealth slipping through torn purses captures a culture that continually acquires yet remains unsatisfied. Money can serve life, but when it becomes sacred, generosity, dignity, and faith are sacrificed before it. Your movement toward open hands offers the necessary answer. Excellent write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 09:59
Money
sorenbarrett said:
The issues of money raised and the issue of a God that provides as well. Nicely paired
August 21st, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
The issues of money raised and the issue of a God that provides as well. Nicely paired
August 21st, 2026 04:42
Money
David Wakeling said:
Wow a lot to unpack here. A well written and thoughtful poem involving the worship of Money replacing prayer.This one made me think
August 21st, 2026 03:11
David Wakeling said:
Wow a lot to unpack here. A well written and thoughtful poem involving the worship of Money replacing prayer.This one made me think
August 21st, 2026 03:11
In the dark
Butter said:
:3 idk what it’s saying but I had fun reading it and to me that’s all that matters.
August 20th, 2026 03:59
Butter said:
:3 idk what it’s saying but I had fun reading it and to me that’s all that matters.
August 20th, 2026 03:59
In the dark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a warm and energizing piece, Valiantstar. It begins in struggle, then another person’s words arrive with clarity, strength, and nourishment…until the whole spirit feels ready to move again. Loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a warm and energizing piece, Valiantstar. It begins in struggle, then another person’s words arrive with clarity, strength, and nourishment…until the whole spirit feels ready to move again. Loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:28
In the dark
Doggerel Dave said:
Not mystified about this at all....
Should be unambiguous to to whom it will (I hope) concern.
Smooth read. Thanks.
August 19th, 2026 18:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Not mystified about this at all....
Should be unambiguous to to whom it will (I hope) concern.
Smooth read. Thanks.
August 19th, 2026 18:20
In the dark
sorenbarrett said:
Bring it on is the message I get. Lovely and so well said in rhyme well placed and rhythm that appeals to the thought.
August 19th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Bring it on is the message I get. Lovely and so well said in rhyme well placed and rhythm that appeals to the thought.
August 19th, 2026 10:54
Alert!
Syd said:
The UK got a one too. Tell us not to use disposable BBQ\'s because of the wildfire risk.
- Syd 🍄
August 18th, 2026 06:51
Syd said:
The UK got a one too. Tell us not to use disposable BBQ\'s because of the wildfire risk.
- Syd 🍄
August 18th, 2026 06:51
Here I am
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is tender, spiritual, and full of gratitude. There’s a strong sense of being released from what once held you and finding peace in something truer. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is tender, spiritual, and full of gratitude. There’s a strong sense of being released from what once held you and finding peace in something truer. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:22
Here I am
sorenbarrett said:
There is a touch of sweetness in this poem tempered by a bit of arrogance. Nicely written it has a good flow and feel
August 15th, 2026 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
There is a touch of sweetness in this poem tempered by a bit of arrogance. Nicely written it has a good flow and feel
August 15th, 2026 08:49
Going on
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There’s a searching quality to this, Valiantstar...question after question stripping away appearances, cleverness, and easy answers in pursuit of something deeper. I like where you ultimately locate what we’re seeking: waiting quietly within the pages for someone willing to look. Thought-provoking, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There’s a searching quality to this, Valiantstar...question after question stripping away appearances, cleverness, and easy answers in pursuit of something deeper. I like where you ultimately locate what we’re seeking: waiting quietly within the pages for someone willing to look. Thought-provoking, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:53
Going on
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this write expounds the need for study through reading. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this write expounds the need for study through reading. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 07:21
Attention
arqios said:
Indeed, a blessing in disguise. Attested by one wont to overthink and be overwrought. 👍🏻🙏🕊️
August 10th, 2026 06:20
arqios said:
Indeed, a blessing in disguise. Attested by one wont to overthink and be overwrought. 👍🏻🙏🕊️
August 10th, 2026 06:20
Attention
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of tongue in cheek humor here that made me smile. Set in good rhyme it shows the good and bad of attentional problems
August 9th, 2026 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of tongue in cheek humor here that made me smile. Set in good rhyme it shows the good and bad of attentional problems
August 9th, 2026 06:11
Attention
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Valiantstar! 😂 The clarification at the end got me. There’s something wonderfully self-aware about admitting that sometimes the mind simply checks out regardless of what’s being offered. And “endless teaching / like a fart” certainly brought me back to attention! 🤣 Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 9th, 2026 05:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Valiantstar! 😂 The clarification at the end got me. There’s something wonderfully self-aware about admitting that sometimes the mind simply checks out regardless of what’s being offered. And “endless teaching / like a fart” certainly brought me back to attention! 🤣 Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 9th, 2026 05:51
Dave\'s
Doggerel Dave said:
Suspect all you like - my embarrassment is not going to improve my temper any.....🙃....😂
August 8th, 2026 19:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Suspect all you like - my embarrassment is not going to improve my temper any.....🙃....😂
August 8th, 2026 19:40
Dave\'s
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This put a smile on my face, my friend! 😂 A whole collection of Daves, each remembered for the quirks and qualities that make them lovable. There’s plenty of humor here, but underneath it all there’s genuine affection for these guys. Great job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This put a smile on my face, my friend! 😂 A whole collection of Daves, each remembered for the quirks and qualities that make them lovable. There’s plenty of humor here, but underneath it all there’s genuine affection for these guys. Great job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:41
Dave\'s
sorenbarrett said:
All true I am most sure. A fun read that sends a good message as well. Loved it a fave
August 8th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
All true I am most sure. A fun read that sends a good message as well. Loved it a fave
August 8th, 2026 04:28
See
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, Valiantstar...brief, inviting, and quietly joyful. There’s something lovely about faith being presented not as forcing anything into being, but simply opening ourselves enough for the Son to enter. Beautifully done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, Valiantstar...brief, inviting, and quietly joyful. There’s something lovely about faith being presented not as forcing anything into being, but simply opening ourselves enough for the Son to enter. Beautifully done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:33
Pool comp
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantsstar, this speaks to me. I’ve had moments where an unexpected conversation ends up becoming the part of the day I remember most. Your poem captures that beautifully…how grace often arrives quietly, without fanfare. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 23:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantsstar, this speaks to me. I’ve had moments where an unexpected conversation ends up becoming the part of the day I remember most. Your poem captures that beautifully…how grace often arrives quietly, without fanfare. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 23:00
Pool comp
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward tale simply told, and none the worse for that. Enjoyed the experience.
August 5th, 2026 16:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward tale simply told, and none the worse for that. Enjoyed the experience.
August 5th, 2026 16:34
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