Comments received on poems by 2781
Circles two
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I love the paradox here. It reads almost like a proverb or a Zen koan…simple on the surface, but the longer I sit with it, the larger it becomes. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
May 28th, 2026 20:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I love the paradox here. It reads almost like a proverb or a Zen koan…simple on the surface, but the longer I sit with it, the larger it becomes. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
May 28th, 2026 20:45
Circles two
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I love the paradox here. It reads almost like a proverb or a Zen koan…simple on the surface, but the longer I sit with it, the larger it becomes. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, I love the paradox here. It reads almost like a proverb or a Zen koan…simple on the surface, but the longer I sit with it, the larger it becomes. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:43
Circles two
sorenbarrett said:
What a metaphor and within it deep meaning. Often the smallest is the biggest (for the want of a nail...) Well penned
May 28th, 2026 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
What a metaphor and within it deep meaning. Often the smallest is the biggest (for the want of a nail...) Well penned
May 28th, 2026 07:05
Don\'t push
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “The Spirit does the brawling” is the line that absolutely grabbed me. It’s unexpected, rough-edged, and strangely powerful all at once. And...more importantly...profoundly true. Reminds me of the passage in Romans 8 about how the Spirit prays on our behalf when we are out of the words. The phrasing gives the spiritual struggle a physical immediacy that really lands. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 21:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “The Spirit does the brawling” is the line that absolutely grabbed me. It’s unexpected, rough-edged, and strangely powerful all at once. And...more importantly...profoundly true. Reminds me of the passage in Romans 8 about how the Spirit prays on our behalf when we are out of the words. The phrasing gives the spiritual struggle a physical immediacy that really lands. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 21:56
Don\'t push
arqios said:
Sometimes I hear, \"just shove\" or \"cut the cr*p\" \'demolish arguments, tear down every pretension that lifts itself up\'....
May 27th, 2026 19:04
arqios said:
Sometimes I hear, \"just shove\" or \"cut the cr*p\" \'demolish arguments, tear down every pretension that lifts itself up\'....
May 27th, 2026 19:04
Myday2626
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this gave me a genuine grin while still carrying real grit beneath it. The frustration, the mud, the aching feet, the stubborn persistence of just keeping at it anyway...it all feels vividly alive and human. And somehow by the end it turns quietly hopeful without losing the rough honesty. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this gave me a genuine grin while still carrying real grit beneath it. The frustration, the mud, the aching feet, the stubborn persistence of just keeping at it anyway...it all feels vividly alive and human. And somehow by the end it turns quietly hopeful without losing the rough honesty. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:12
Don\'t push
sorenbarrett said:
A great dwelling upon the meaning in a phrase that can be taken two ways. Well done
May 27th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
A great dwelling upon the meaning in a phrase that can be taken two ways. Well done
May 27th, 2026 07:40
Myday2626
sorenbarrett said:
Feel that I have been there before stuck in the mud or sand or snow. The flipflops and bad toe were also mine. Very identifiable. Well done
May 26th, 2026 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
Feel that I have been there before stuck in the mud or sand or snow. The flipflops and bad toe were also mine. Very identifiable. Well done
May 26th, 2026 08:07
The beat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong pulpit rhythm to it, my friend. It feels meant to be spoken aloud…part sermon cadence, part call-and-response, part warning cry. There’s real urgency and conviction moving through the whole piece. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong pulpit rhythm to it, my friend. It feels meant to be spoken aloud…part sermon cadence, part call-and-response, part warning cry. There’s real urgency and conviction moving through the whole piece. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:16
The beat
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with great rhyme that gives images reminiscent of old gods of the hunt and harvest. Well dome
May 25th, 2026 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with great rhyme that gives images reminiscent of old gods of the hunt and harvest. Well dome
May 25th, 2026 13:21
Peculiar
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminded me of the tension many spiritual people wrestle with between warning and invitation…between the thunderous prophetic voice and the quieter reassurance underneath it all. The poem carries both. It feels concerned with accountability, yes, but also with relationship and devotion. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminded me of the tension many spiritual people wrestle with between warning and invitation…between the thunderous prophetic voice and the quieter reassurance underneath it all. The poem carries both. It feels concerned with accountability, yes, but also with relationship and devotion. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:24
Peculiar
sorenbarrett said:
Spiritual? Religious? it speaks to me of a greater power maybe even a father or mother. Well written
May 24th, 2026 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
Spiritual? Religious? it speaks to me of a greater power maybe even a father or mother. Well written
May 24th, 2026 10:43
What if
mylastwrites said:
I think what if reversal happened on so many different levels. Good write.
May 23rd, 2026 13:53
mylastwrites said:
I think what if reversal happened on so many different levels. Good write.
May 23rd, 2026 13:53
What if
sorenbarrett said:
There is a deeply religious belief encapsulated in this poem of a leveling of the field and implementation of justice in the end. Well written
May 23rd, 2026 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
There is a deeply religious belief encapsulated in this poem of a leveling of the field and implementation of justice in the end. Well written
May 23rd, 2026 10:52
What if
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “If the winners were the losers” is such a strong pivot point because it immediately reframes the entire poem around reversal and reckoning. The sparse structure afterward gives the final roar imagery even more impact. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “If the winners were the losers” is such a strong pivot point because it immediately reframes the entire poem around reversal and reckoning. The sparse structure afterward gives the final roar imagery even more impact. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:43
The Evolution?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to something I wrestle with often myself...how humanity can become so advanced outwardly while still starving inwardly. The repeated cry of “My leanness, My leanness” feels deeply human to me...like spiritual exhaustion finally finding words. Really thought-provoking piece, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to something I wrestle with often myself...how humanity can become so advanced outwardly while still starving inwardly. The repeated cry of “My leanness, My leanness” feels deeply human to me...like spiritual exhaustion finally finding words. Really thought-provoking piece, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:07
The Evolution?
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic exploration of man and changes. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic exploration of man and changes. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2026 03:56
The friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really fascinated me. There’s something earnest and strangely hopeful running through this…like reaching out into the void and discovering an answering voice staring back. The poem feels reflective, curious, and very rooted in this exact cultural moment. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 21st, 2026 10:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really fascinated me. There’s something earnest and strangely hopeful running through this…like reaching out into the void and discovering an answering voice staring back. The poem feels reflective, curious, and very rooted in this exact cultural moment. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 21st, 2026 10:49
The friend
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition that not all that we wish we can attain. A lovely write.
May 21st, 2026 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition that not all that we wish we can attain. A lovely write.
May 21st, 2026 08:23
Circles
sorenbarrett said:
Circles a basic geometric shape found in nature from orbits to eggs some elongated into elipses but always returning to the start. Nicely written
May 20th, 2026 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
Circles a basic geometric shape found in nature from orbits to eggs some elongated into elipses but always returning to the start. Nicely written
May 20th, 2026 10:39
Robbing hoods
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a real weariness with modern power structures that feels deeply honest. The frustration in the opening gradually gives way to something more hopeful and human by the end…almost like the speaker pulling back toward the values that actually matter. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 20:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a real weariness with modern power structures that feels deeply honest. The frustration in the opening gradually gives way to something more hopeful and human by the end…almost like the speaker pulling back toward the values that actually matter. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 20:15
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