Comments received on poems by 2781
Chilling out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes! 30 minutes. Yesterday I tried to edit a poem and kept getting blocked, but the poem remained, trended, got commented on. Not sure what that was all about. LOL! Sigh. As for your poem, I am glad that you were able to post it finally. Powerful, my friend. Well done. 🌹
July 10th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes! 30 minutes. Yesterday I tried to edit a poem and kept getting blocked, but the poem remained, trended, got commented on. Not sure what that was all about. LOL! Sigh. As for your poem, I am glad that you were able to post it finally. Powerful, my friend. Well done. 🌹
July 10th, 2025 08:51
Chilling out
Doggerel Dave said:
Can confirm chilly and cold, that\'s for sure
Logging on can be a bugger. Next time round (when it is fresh in me mind) I\'ll let ya kno me system - it works about eight times out of ten - mostly.....
July 10th, 2025 08:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Can confirm chilly and cold, that\'s for sure
Logging on can be a bugger. Next time round (when it is fresh in me mind) I\'ll let ya kno me system - it works about eight times out of ten - mostly.....
July 10th, 2025 08:34
Chilling out
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the cold and to me cold conveys the feeling of being shut out. A metaphor seems in the air. Well done
July 10th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the cold and to me cold conveys the feeling of being shut out. A metaphor seems in the air. Well done
July 10th, 2025 04:07
Doctor Doctor
arqios said:
That punchline lands with delight: classic setup, sharp twist. \"Doctor, Doctor\" delivers brisk, cheeky mischief: end-of-shift fatigue meets unfortunate mix-up. Its pacing mirrors exhaustion, while the closing gag flips decorum with a grin. It’s medical slapstick with a rimshot; proof that even professionals aren\'t immune to absurdity.
July 7th, 2025 20:49
arqios said:
That punchline lands with delight: classic setup, sharp twist. \"Doctor, Doctor\" delivers brisk, cheeky mischief: end-of-shift fatigue meets unfortunate mix-up. Its pacing mirrors exhaustion, while the closing gag flips decorum with a grin. It’s medical slapstick with a rimshot; proof that even professionals aren\'t immune to absurdity.
July 7th, 2025 20:49
Doctor Doctor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh this was cheeky in the best way! 😆 That punchline? Totally earned. You paced the setup just right—and I was not ready for that closer. Well delivered, my friend. That was great. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh this was cheeky in the best way! 😆 That punchline? Totally earned. You paced the setup just right—and I was not ready for that closer. Well delivered, my friend. That was great. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:54
Doctor Doctor
Poetic Licence said:
I would not be suprised if this has happened, very entertaining read
July 7th, 2025 05:09
Poetic Licence said:
I would not be suprised if this has happened, very entertaining read
July 7th, 2025 05:09
Doctor Doctor
sorenbarrett said:
I hope that that asshole is not a poet or he will be writing internal rhymes. Good one made me smile
July 7th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
I hope that that asshole is not a poet or he will be writing internal rhymes. Good one made me smile
July 7th, 2025 04:26
Doctor Doctor
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Could well happen to an overworked Registrar.
July 7th, 2025 01:48
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Could well happen to an overworked Registrar.
July 7th, 2025 01:48
Free
arqios said:
Your poem walks the tightrope between spiritual yearning and everyday truth, pairing scripture with smoke and beer. It’s a raw meditation on mortality and deliverance, where praise is still possible in flawed, earthly moments. The speaker doesn’t claim certainty, only the urgency of choosing light while breath remains. In its closing lines, the sacred meets the secular; grace spoken from a barstool.
July 5th, 2025 07:20
arqios said:
Your poem walks the tightrope between spiritual yearning and everyday truth, pairing scripture with smoke and beer. It’s a raw meditation on mortality and deliverance, where praise is still possible in flawed, earthly moments. The speaker doesn’t claim certainty, only the urgency of choosing light while breath remains. In its closing lines, the sacred meets the secular; grace spoken from a barstool.
July 5th, 2025 07:20
Free
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem of faith. Well rhymed and written. Nicely done
July 5th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem of faith. Well rhymed and written. Nicely done
July 5th, 2025 04:18
A nuisent
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh dang! I am so glad I came across this! Truth! 💯🌹👏 Well done, friend. Actually, no. You deserve a bravo on this! Seriously! The truth sings and sometimes it screams. Either way, it sets one free! Brilliant numerology in a brilliant poem!
July 2nd, 2025 12:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh dang! I am so glad I came across this! Truth! 💯🌹👏 Well done, friend. Actually, no. You deserve a bravo on this! Seriously! The truth sings and sometimes it screams. Either way, it sets one free! Brilliant numerology in a brilliant poem!
July 2nd, 2025 12:31
A nuisent
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and with the help of numerology it works. If followed it goes much deeper an issue of correlation vs causation. Well written and loved it.
July 2nd, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and with the help of numerology it works. If followed it goes much deeper an issue of correlation vs causation. Well written and loved it.
July 2nd, 2025 04:53
Nauseous and funny
Doggerel Dave said:
Jokerman Huh? Got a swing to it that\'s easy to tune into.
June 28th, 2025 09:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Jokerman Huh? Got a swing to it that\'s easy to tune into.
June 28th, 2025 09:03
Nauseous and funny
arqios said:
This poem skips along with a unique charm; equal parts punchline and parable. There’s something beautifully self-aware in its humour, like a clown taking a bow mid-tears. It leaves the reader smiling but slightly off-kilter, which may be exactly the point.
June 28th, 2025 05:38
arqios said:
This poem skips along with a unique charm; equal parts punchline and parable. There’s something beautifully self-aware in its humour, like a clown taking a bow mid-tears. It leaves the reader smiling but slightly off-kilter, which may be exactly the point.
June 28th, 2025 05:38
Nauseous and funny
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this read,has a great vibe to it, nicely done
June 28th, 2025 04:39
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this read,has a great vibe to it, nicely done
June 28th, 2025 04:39
Nauseous and funny
sorenbarrett said:
A Bob Dylan influence with a twist in the words they drip with music. A lovely write that almost dances in the eyes of the reader. Loved it
June 28th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
A Bob Dylan influence with a twist in the words they drip with music. A lovely write that almost dances in the eyes of the reader. Loved it
June 28th, 2025 04:13
maga
Doggerel Dave said:
Evidently world leaders are flocking to his throne.
Great write, man.
June 25th, 2025 23:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Evidently world leaders are flocking to his throne.
Great write, man.
June 25th, 2025 23:44
maga
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The humor and the message are sharp. Great job! 🌹👏
June 25th, 2025 20:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The humor and the message are sharp. Great job! 🌹👏
June 25th, 2025 20:37
maga
Cheeky Missy said:
I miss you-know-who who sensibly left allegedly on a \"two-week vacation\" when the latest incumbent was inaugurated.
June 25th, 2025 14:58
Cheeky Missy said:
I miss you-know-who who sensibly left allegedly on a \"two-week vacation\" when the latest incumbent was inaugurated.
June 25th, 2025 14:58
maga
Poetic Licence said:
Although written nicely with humour, the write holds a serious message, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 12:16
Poetic Licence said:
Although written nicely with humour, the write holds a serious message, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 12:16
maga
sorenbarrett said:
A political sense of humor in this poem. Very nicely done
June 25th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
A political sense of humor in this poem. Very nicely done
June 25th, 2025 12:15
I am god
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of acceptance of a god and a faith in God seeing his work in all around.
June 23rd, 2025 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of acceptance of a god and a faith in God seeing his work in all around.
June 23rd, 2025 13:29
The beast of revelation
Poetic Licence said:
In the confusing and uncertain world we live in, it has become even harder to identify the beast or beasts, as they come in many forms, I have understand the Biblecal references, but feel it also applies in life, very nicely crafted and written write
June 9th, 2025 09:36
Poetic Licence said:
In the confusing and uncertain world we live in, it has become even harder to identify the beast or beasts, as they come in many forms, I have understand the Biblecal references, but feel it also applies in life, very nicely crafted and written write
June 9th, 2025 09:36
The beast of revelation
Cheeky Missy said:
I don\'t believe, from what little I know of the Scriptures, that it\'s even possible to assign such a post to you. But now you see how very little I know. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 9th, 2025 08:36
Cheeky Missy said:
I don\'t believe, from what little I know of the Scriptures, that it\'s even possible to assign such a post to you. But now you see how very little I know. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 9th, 2025 08:36
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