Comments received on poems by 2781
Wrong write
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love the wordplay in the title right out of the gate. “Wrong Write” is clever and sets the tone perfectly. This feels sharp, cheeky, and self-aware all at once. And that final “Or would I?” lands with a grin. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 26th, 2026 10:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love the wordplay in the title right out of the gate. “Wrong Write” is clever and sets the tone perfectly. This feels sharp, cheeky, and self-aware all at once. And that final “Or would I?” lands with a grin. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 26th, 2026 10:31
Wrong write
sorenbarrett said:
Some acronyms unknown to me but I think I get the gist and related in a tangential way to my post today as well. I here vacillating discontent the ends in a bit of uncertainty. Very nicely done
February 26th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Some acronyms unknown to me but I think I get the gist and related in a tangential way to my post today as well. I here vacillating discontent the ends in a bit of uncertainty. Very nicely done
February 26th, 2026 04:51
To big
Doggerel Dave said:
You are auditioning for a spot on Gardening Australia aren\'t you? I think you may well have the gig ....
February 24th, 2026 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
You are auditioning for a spot on Gardening Australia aren\'t you? I think you may well have the gig ....
February 24th, 2026 18:10
To big
Thomas W Case said:
Bitter-sweet reckoning, the tree holds secrets in its roots—beauty and menace tangled.
You feel the loss deep, but your hand is steady; sometimes love is pruning before the grief.
February 24th, 2026 08:58
Thomas W Case said:
Bitter-sweet reckoning, the tree holds secrets in its roots—beauty and menace tangled.
You feel the loss deep, but your hand is steady; sometimes love is pruning before the grief.
February 24th, 2026 08:58
To big
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what works here is the shift from charm to consequence. Cute beginnings, subtle changes, thinning leaves…then the root truth. “Problems at the roots” reframes the whole piece. It’s not just about a tree…it’s about discernment. Strong close, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what works here is the shift from charm to consequence. Cute beginnings, subtle changes, thinning leaves…then the root truth. “Problems at the roots” reframes the whole piece. It’s not just about a tree…it’s about discernment. Strong close, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:14
To big
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a gem in that one believes it is something else of a serious nature being spoken of. Nicely written what I thought might have been a lie now growing turns out to be a tree, or is it really? Loved it
February 24th, 2026 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a gem in that one believes it is something else of a serious nature being spoken of. Nicely written what I thought might have been a lie now growing turns out to be a tree, or is it really? Loved it
February 24th, 2026 05:28
Stones
sorenbarrett said:
Unless I am deluded it seems clear about whom this poem is written. But he cares not any publicity is better than none and it can always be twisted. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
Unless I am deluded it seems clear about whom this poem is written. But he cares not any publicity is better than none and it can always be twisted. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 12:46
Stones
Paul Bell said:
We put them into power and then we wonder why we bothered.
Dictators, democracy. Once upon a time they were different, not anymore.
February 23rd, 2026 12:14
Paul Bell said:
We put them into power and then we wonder why we bothered.
Dictators, democracy. Once upon a time they were different, not anymore.
February 23rd, 2026 12:14
Stones
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has bite. It feels confrontational in the right way…calling out puffed chests and hollow noise. “Kindle a little fire” lands like a final spark after all that accusation. There’s heat here, but it’s controlled. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 10:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has bite. It feels confrontational in the right way…calling out puffed chests and hollow noise. “Kindle a little fire” lands like a final spark after all that accusation. There’s heat here, but it’s controlled. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 10:30
The liar
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is razor sharp. Three movements…and it cuts clean. “He had to be good / To convince himself he wasn\'t.” That lands like a quiet gut punch. Simple on the surface, but it echoes. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is razor sharp. Three movements…and it cuts clean. “He had to be good / To convince himself he wasn\'t.” That lands like a quiet gut punch. Simple on the surface, but it echoes. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:54
The liar
Maori11 said:
it depends on the level of malignancy of his leprosy on his heart (of a liar in the sense of a hypocrite) - whether he can convince himself. Although in the end it can\'t last forever.
February 23rd, 2026 01:10
Maori11 said:
it depends on the level of malignancy of his leprosy on his heart (of a liar in the sense of a hypocrite) - whether he can convince himself. Although in the end it can\'t last forever.
February 23rd, 2026 01:10
The liar
marissa said:
If you have watched pretty little liars (a girly show) this is something that would be said there!
February 22nd, 2026 13:50
marissa said:
If you have watched pretty little liars (a girly show) this is something that would be said there!
February 22nd, 2026 13:50
The liar
sorenbarrett said:
One has to be a good liar to convince oneself that one is not. Very nice
February 22nd, 2026 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
One has to be a good liar to convince oneself that one is not. Very nice
February 22nd, 2026 09:48
Dumb founded
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, the ring imagery gives this bite and rhythm, but it’s the prophetic closing that lingers. Moving from political colors to Nebuchadnezzar’s dream shifts it from debate to destiny. It feels like spectacle under judgment. Fierce, symbolic, and unafraid. A wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, the ring imagery gives this bite and rhythm, but it’s the prophetic closing that lingers. Moving from political colors to Nebuchadnezzar’s dream shifts it from debate to destiny. It feels like spectacle under judgment. Fierce, symbolic, and unafraid. A wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:20
Dumb founded
sorenbarrett said:
That dream it seems is made of many materials and translated by Daniel. A most interesting write
February 11th, 2026 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
That dream it seems is made of many materials and translated by Daniel. A most interesting write
February 11th, 2026 08:49
A tribute
orchidee said:
Good write 2. I can\'t see that\'s been either \'the good old days\' nor \'the bad old days\'. It\'s probably \'the same old days\'.
February 4th, 2026 11:17
orchidee said:
Good write 2. I can\'t see that\'s been either \'the good old days\' nor \'the bad old days\'. It\'s probably \'the same old days\'.
February 4th, 2026 11:17
A tribute
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this poem moves like a pilgrimage of questions. Ancient stories, modern confusion, and a longing to understand all braided together. It doesn’t force answers, but it keeps asking, and that persistence gives it power. Wonderful job, my friend 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 4th, 2026 10:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this poem moves like a pilgrimage of questions. Ancient stories, modern confusion, and a longing to understand all braided together. It doesn’t force answers, but it keeps asking, and that persistence gives it power. Wonderful job, my friend 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 4th, 2026 10:36
A tribute
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely woven poem of belief and faith that takes the reader to a different level. Well done
February 4th, 2026 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely woven poem of belief and faith that takes the reader to a different level. Well done
February 4th, 2026 09:48
Creation groans
arqios said:
That’s in the epistle to Corinth, correct? Superb rendering 🕊️🙏🏻
February 3rd, 2026 00:47
arqios said:
That’s in the epistle to Corinth, correct? Superb rendering 🕊️🙏🏻
February 3rd, 2026 00:47
Creation groans
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this poem moves between Scripture and soul with intention. Humanity’s confusion, creation’s groaning, and divine love all converge in the question of who comes first. A sincere, devotional piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 14:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this poem moves between Scripture and soul with intention. Humanity’s confusion, creation’s groaning, and divine love all converge in the question of who comes first. A sincere, devotional piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 14:21
Creation groans
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely composed the words of a father to a son. Well done
February 2nd, 2026 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely composed the words of a father to a son. Well done
February 2nd, 2026 10:28
Rant
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope you feel better now. When someone with troubles lives in the neighbourhood I do worry.. yer never know....
Some good \'uns in there - thanks for putting them up.
January 29th, 2026 18:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope you feel better now. When someone with troubles lives in the neighbourhood I do worry.. yer never know....
Some good \'uns in there - thanks for putting them up.
January 29th, 2026 18:32
Rant
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a raw moral urgency. It feels restless, questioning, unwilling to accept easy narratives…and that tension gives the poem its force. It doesn’t comfort, it confronts. Powerful, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 11:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a raw moral urgency. It feels restless, questioning, unwilling to accept easy narratives…and that tension gives the poem its force. It doesn’t comfort, it confronts. Powerful, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 11:07
Rant
sorenbarrett said:
This collage of sayings some altered for effect cast a mood of suspect and suspicion leading one to be warry. A lovely write
January 29th, 2026 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
This collage of sayings some altered for effect cast a mood of suspect and suspicion leading one to be warry. A lovely write
January 29th, 2026 10:19
Pincers
Thomas W Case said:
A grim, relentless vision, raw and unflinching—each line strikes like a blade through sorrow and witness.
You weave fury and mercy together, gritty and heartfelt, leaving the reader both haunted and awed.
January 20th, 2026 08:53
Thomas W Case said:
A grim, relentless vision, raw and unflinching—each line strikes like a blade through sorrow and witness.
You weave fury and mercy together, gritty and heartfelt, leaving the reader both haunted and awed.
January 20th, 2026 08:53
Pincers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, reading this stirred that familiar unease of watching belief, power, and fear collide in real time. The way you layer warning and grief feels honest, not theatrical. I felt the weight of that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, reading this stirred that familiar unease of watching belief, power, and fear collide in real time. The way you layer warning and grief feels honest, not theatrical. I felt the weight of that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 10:16
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