Comments received on poems by 2781
Troubled life
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of religious loyalty in this poem. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of religious loyalty in this poem. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2026 04:28
Strategies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong scriptural cadence from beginning to end. It feels like a call back to enduring truth in the midst of rebellion and wandering. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong scriptural cadence from beginning to end. It feels like a call back to enduring truth in the midst of rebellion and wandering. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:36
Strategies
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic values set in this work where Christian values are most evident. Well written
August 1st, 2026 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic values set in this work where Christian values are most evident. Well written
August 1st, 2026 03:39
Not boring
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a joyful and uplifting expression of faith! The devotion here is wholehearted and infectious...full of gratitude for a God who transforms lives. Beautiful write, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a joyful and uplifting expression of faith! The devotion here is wholehearted and infectious...full of gratitude for a God who transforms lives. Beautiful write, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:04
Alert!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what an unsettling and thought-provoking piece! You turn a source of public reassurance into an instrument of chaos...then leave us wondering whether remaining beyond its reach might be the safest place of all. Excellent write, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 08:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what an unsettling and thought-provoking piece! You turn a source of public reassurance into an instrument of chaos...then leave us wondering whether remaining beyond its reach might be the safest place of all. Excellent write, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 08:58
Alert!
arqios said:
Another flex in social engineering. Apparently, there was a spike in vehicular accidents at 2pm. Wonder why that was!? My phone felt like a U.S. alarm, having been to the military installations while visiting Japan. Wonder why that its!? My daughter\'s phone was on aeroplane mode and didn\'t sound. Not a peep. Lol.
July 27th, 2026 05:29
arqios said:
Another flex in social engineering. Apparently, there was a spike in vehicular accidents at 2pm. Wonder why that was!? My phone felt like a U.S. alarm, having been to the military installations while visiting Japan. Wonder why that its!? My daughter\'s phone was on aeroplane mode and didn\'t sound. Not a peep. Lol.
July 27th, 2026 05:29
Alert!
sorenbarrett said:
Too much information can be distracting and overwhelming as well as cause assumptions that are not warranted due to incomplete information. Sometimes ignorance is bliss. Well written
July 27th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Too much information can be distracting and overwhelming as well as cause assumptions that are not warranted due to incomplete information. Sometimes ignorance is bliss. Well written
July 27th, 2026 04:12
Alert!
Poetic Dan said:
Only time will tell but you\'ve written it well. Time to remember our own intuition of safe or not
July 27th, 2026 01:58
Poetic Dan said:
Only time will tell but you\'ve written it well. Time to remember our own intuition of safe or not
July 27th, 2026 01:58
Jealousy
sorenbarrett said:
Your name might as well be Isaiah or maybe John from Revelations. Well written in good style
July 25th, 2026 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Your name might as well be Isaiah or maybe John from Revelations. Well written in good style
July 25th, 2026 09:29
Jealousy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one heck of a powerful piece…fierce, prophetic, and utterly uncompromising. The righteous fury burns throughout. Excellent write, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one heck of a powerful piece…fierce, prophetic, and utterly uncompromising. The righteous fury burns throughout. Excellent write, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:26
A violent paradox
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend! This really exposes the difference between genuine goodness and mere social performance. Civilization may teach people to behave when observed...but character is revealed by what they permit themselves in secret. That truth lands hard. Outstanding poem, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend! This really exposes the difference between genuine goodness and mere social performance. Civilization may teach people to behave when observed...but character is revealed by what they permit themselves in secret. That truth lands hard. Outstanding poem, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:07
A violent paradox
Doggerel Dave said:
Believe there are elements (traditionalists?) who still go for the biff. However far too many keyboard warriors today exist and pound their key boards for perhaps even more devastating effect.
Enjoyed the write.
July 22nd, 2026 21:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Believe there are elements (traditionalists?) who still go for the biff. However far too many keyboard warriors today exist and pound their key boards for perhaps even more devastating effect.
Enjoyed the write.
July 22nd, 2026 21:28
A violent paradox
arqios said:
A revealing peek that human behaviour presents us. 🙏🕊️
July 22nd, 2026 19:59
arqios said:
A revealing peek that human behaviour presents us. 🙏🕊️
July 22nd, 2026 19:59
A violent paradox
sorenbarrett said:
Some have this proclivity while others are peaceful. The question being what makes a dark heart. Well written in good rhyme
July 22nd, 2026 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
Some have this proclivity while others are peaceful. The question being what makes a dark heart. Well written in good rhyme
July 22nd, 2026 08:50
Messy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is hilarious! You take us from drowsy confidence to victorious celebration…then let the betting gods steal the whole morning. Somewhere, a bookmaker is smiling while you sing the extra-time gambler’s blues! Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 00:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is hilarious! You take us from drowsy confidence to victorious celebration…then let the betting gods steal the whole morning. Somewhere, a bookmaker is smiling while you sing the extra-time gambler’s blues! Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 00:14
Messy
Doggerel Dave said:
So long as you confine yourself to a bet on the world soccer final (or whatever it might be called), you will do OK and not find yourself a member of GA.
An exposé of the gambling industry right there...
July 20th, 2026 16:37
Doggerel Dave said:
So long as you confine yourself to a bet on the world soccer final (or whatever it might be called), you will do OK and not find yourself a member of GA.
An exposé of the gambling industry right there...
July 20th, 2026 16:37
Messy
Syd said:
I\'m very happy with the result too. There\'s nothing worse than when your bet is within 90 mins but it\'s decided in extra time.
Nice write - Syd 🍄
July 20th, 2026 12:16
Syd said:
I\'m very happy with the result too. There\'s nothing worse than when your bet is within 90 mins but it\'s decided in extra time.
Nice write - Syd 🍄
July 20th, 2026 12:16
Messy
sorenbarrett said:
The devil is in the details. A fine read and fun one too after the game
July 20th, 2026 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
The devil is in the details. A fine read and fun one too after the game
July 20th, 2026 09:37
Assay
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, my own faith has always lived more honestly within questions than tidy human certainty. We interpret mysteries far greater than ourselves, yet too often speak as though we own them. This resonated deeply, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, my own faith has always lived more honestly within questions than tidy human certainty. We interpret mysteries far greater than ourselves, yet too often speak as though we own them. This resonated deeply, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:18
Assay
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical in nature it speaks faith and belief that become truth in the speaker\'s eyes. Well done
July 19th, 2026 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical in nature it speaks faith and belief that become truth in the speaker\'s eyes. Well done
July 19th, 2026 10:18
The stalker
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, you got me with this one. The playful misdirection keeps things moving, and the football payoff at the end puts a smile on your face. Clever, enjoyable write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, you got me with this one. The playful misdirection keeps things moving, and the football payoff at the end puts a smile on your face. Clever, enjoyable write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:16
The stalker
sorenbarrett said:
Messi not what he used to be but still good enough. The game was a good one as is the write. Now it will be Argentina and Spain. A fun read.
July 16th, 2026 03:28
sorenbarrett said:
Messi not what he used to be but still good enough. The game was a good one as is the write. Now it will be Argentina and Spain. A fun read.
July 16th, 2026 03:28
Edna
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fun little write, Valiantstar. You lull the reader into expecting a wholesome birthday adventure, then veer straight into absurd comedy. That contrast is exactly what makes the punchline work. Thanks for the laugh, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fun little write, Valiantstar. You lull the reader into expecting a wholesome birthday adventure, then veer straight into absurd comedy. That contrast is exactly what makes the punchline work. Thanks for the laugh, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:46
Edna
Kevin Hulme said:
Oh Dear. Unlucky Edna. A fun piece, as the other two might have said. 😁
July 14th, 2026 16:15
Kevin Hulme said:
Oh Dear. Unlucky Edna. A fun piece, as the other two might have said. 😁
July 14th, 2026 16:15
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