Comments received on poems by 2781
Heads
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is fierce…almost prophetic in tone. The imagery feels like a storm rolling in, full of warning and reckoning. There’s a raw urgency here that gives the whole piece real bite. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is fierce…almost prophetic in tone. The imagery feels like a storm rolling in, full of warning and reckoning. There’s a raw urgency here that gives the whole piece real bite. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:47
Heads
sorenbarrett said:
A religious view of the deterioration and corruption seen in the world. Nicely written
March 6th, 2026 19:03
sorenbarrett said:
A religious view of the deterioration and corruption seen in the world. Nicely written
March 6th, 2026 19:03
Unreal
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you sure it is \'real is unreal\' and not \'unreal is real\'?
March 5th, 2026 16:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you sure it is \'real is unreal\' and not \'unreal is real\'?
March 5th, 2026 16:41
Unreal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, the refrain “real is unreal” works well as the backbone here… it gives the poem that looping, reflective rhythm while the images move from everyday life to something more philosophical. That tension drives the whole piece forward. The final thought wraps it nicely: “Just part of the show.” Nicely framed idea, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 5th, 2026 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, the refrain “real is unreal” works well as the backbone here… it gives the poem that looping, reflective rhythm while the images move from everyday life to something more philosophical. That tension drives the whole piece forward. The final thought wraps it nicely: “Just part of the show.” Nicely framed idea, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 5th, 2026 16:14
Unreal
sorenbarrett said:
Once convinced that one can not tell the difference between real and unreal the crowd is easily manipulated and dominated. Nicely written
March 5th, 2026 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
Once convinced that one can not tell the difference between real and unreal the crowd is easily manipulated and dominated. Nicely written
March 5th, 2026 09:38
Locked in
sorenbarrett said:
Locked in tight I assume means firmly believing in God. A good read
March 3rd, 2026 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Locked in tight I assume means firmly believing in God. A good read
March 3rd, 2026 09:32
Clever
Poetic Licence said:
A carefully written warning, short and sharp that delivers the message, so there is no confusion, enjoyed the read.
March 1st, 2026 06:44
Poetic Licence said:
A carefully written warning, short and sharp that delivers the message, so there is no confusion, enjoyed the read.
March 1st, 2026 06:44
Clever
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this bites… short, sharp, and confident. The warning lands clean without overexplaining itself. There’s restraint in the delivery, which makes the final image hit harder. Powerfuly, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this bites… short, sharp, and confident. The warning lands clean without overexplaining itself. There’s restraint in the delivery, which makes the final image hit harder. Powerfuly, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:36
Clever
orchidee said:
A mind game? If the mind is part of the brain, or in the brain, It\'s no use to me with only my 3 brain cells! lol.
February 28th, 2026 10:22
orchidee said:
A mind game? If the mind is part of the brain, or in the brain, It\'s no use to me with only my 3 brain cells! lol.
February 28th, 2026 10:22
Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads like a condensed testimony arc…creation, hardship, shaping, mission, abundance. The clipped phrasing gives it a proclamatory tone, and the closing “Before life, must come rebirth” frames renewal as prerequisite, not afterthought. A succinct and purposeful piece, and a fave for sure. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 11:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this reads like a condensed testimony arc…creation, hardship, shaping, mission, abundance. The clipped phrasing gives it a proclamatory tone, and the closing “Before life, must come rebirth” frames renewal as prerequisite, not afterthought. A succinct and purposeful piece, and a fave for sure. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 11:05
Life
sorenbarrett said:
The last two lines seal this poem. Well told and nicely worded it speaks out.
February 27th, 2026 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
The last two lines seal this poem. Well told and nicely worded it speaks out.
February 27th, 2026 09:10
Wrong write
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t watch footy, but do settle in for a game or two of State of Origin once a year.
So I have looked in on the very final episode of mafs one or two seasons. The grand final can be rare entertainment, but never, not, no the whole bloody series... Oh sorry - you are talking about Parliamentary Question Time, aren\'t you?
February 26th, 2026 16:08
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t watch footy, but do settle in for a game or two of State of Origin once a year.
So I have looked in on the very final episode of mafs one or two seasons. The grand final can be rare entertainment, but never, not, no the whole bloody series... Oh sorry - you are talking about Parliamentary Question Time, aren\'t you?
February 26th, 2026 16:08
Wrong write
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love the wordplay in the title right out of the gate. “Wrong Write” is clever and sets the tone perfectly. This feels sharp, cheeky, and self-aware all at once. And that final “Or would I?” lands with a grin. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 26th, 2026 10:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love the wordplay in the title right out of the gate. “Wrong Write” is clever and sets the tone perfectly. This feels sharp, cheeky, and self-aware all at once. And that final “Or would I?” lands with a grin. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 26th, 2026 10:31
Wrong write
sorenbarrett said:
Some acronyms unknown to me but I think I get the gist and related in a tangential way to my post today as well. I here vacillating discontent the ends in a bit of uncertainty. Very nicely done
February 26th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Some acronyms unknown to me but I think I get the gist and related in a tangential way to my post today as well. I here vacillating discontent the ends in a bit of uncertainty. Very nicely done
February 26th, 2026 04:51
To big
Doggerel Dave said:
You are auditioning for a spot on Gardening Australia aren\'t you? I think you may well have the gig ....
February 24th, 2026 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
You are auditioning for a spot on Gardening Australia aren\'t you? I think you may well have the gig ....
February 24th, 2026 18:10
To big
Thomas W Case said:
Bitter-sweet reckoning, the tree holds secrets in its roots—beauty and menace tangled.
You feel the loss deep, but your hand is steady; sometimes love is pruning before the grief.
February 24th, 2026 08:58
Thomas W Case said:
Bitter-sweet reckoning, the tree holds secrets in its roots—beauty and menace tangled.
You feel the loss deep, but your hand is steady; sometimes love is pruning before the grief.
February 24th, 2026 08:58
To big
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what works here is the shift from charm to consequence. Cute beginnings, subtle changes, thinning leaves…then the root truth. “Problems at the roots” reframes the whole piece. It’s not just about a tree…it’s about discernment. Strong close, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, what works here is the shift from charm to consequence. Cute beginnings, subtle changes, thinning leaves…then the root truth. “Problems at the roots” reframes the whole piece. It’s not just about a tree…it’s about discernment. Strong close, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:14
To big
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a gem in that one believes it is something else of a serious nature being spoken of. Nicely written what I thought might have been a lie now growing turns out to be a tree, or is it really? Loved it
February 24th, 2026 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a gem in that one believes it is something else of a serious nature being spoken of. Nicely written what I thought might have been a lie now growing turns out to be a tree, or is it really? Loved it
February 24th, 2026 05:28
Stones
sorenbarrett said:
Unless I am deluded it seems clear about whom this poem is written. But he cares not any publicity is better than none and it can always be twisted. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
Unless I am deluded it seems clear about whom this poem is written. But he cares not any publicity is better than none and it can always be twisted. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 12:46
Stones
Paul Bell said:
We put them into power and then we wonder why we bothered.
Dictators, democracy. Once upon a time they were different, not anymore.
February 23rd, 2026 12:14
Paul Bell said:
We put them into power and then we wonder why we bothered.
Dictators, democracy. Once upon a time they were different, not anymore.
February 23rd, 2026 12:14
Stones
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has bite. It feels confrontational in the right way…calling out puffed chests and hollow noise. “Kindle a little fire” lands like a final spark after all that accusation. There’s heat here, but it’s controlled. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 10:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has bite. It feels confrontational in the right way…calling out puffed chests and hollow noise. “Kindle a little fire” lands like a final spark after all that accusation. There’s heat here, but it’s controlled. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 10:30
The liar
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is razor sharp. Three movements…and it cuts clean. “He had to be good / To convince himself he wasn\'t.” That lands like a quiet gut punch. Simple on the surface, but it echoes. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this is razor sharp. Three movements…and it cuts clean. “He had to be good / To convince himself he wasn\'t.” That lands like a quiet gut punch. Simple on the surface, but it echoes. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:54
The liar
Maori11 said:
it depends on the level of malignancy of his leprosy on his heart (of a liar in the sense of a hypocrite) - whether he can convince himself. Although in the end it can\'t last forever.
February 23rd, 2026 01:10
Maori11 said:
it depends on the level of malignancy of his leprosy on his heart (of a liar in the sense of a hypocrite) - whether he can convince himself. Although in the end it can\'t last forever.
February 23rd, 2026 01:10
The liar
marissa said:
If you have watched pretty little liars (a girly show) this is something that would be said there!
February 22nd, 2026 13:50
marissa said:
If you have watched pretty little liars (a girly show) this is something that would be said there!
February 22nd, 2026 13:50
The liar
sorenbarrett said:
One has to be a good liar to convince oneself that one is not. Very nice
February 22nd, 2026 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
One has to be a good liar to convince oneself that one is not. Very nice
February 22nd, 2026 09:48
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