Comments received on poems by 2781
The plot
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a hopeful push…letting go, stepping into something new, and trusting that joy will meet you there. It feels like movement and renewal all at once. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a hopeful push…letting go, stepping into something new, and trusting that joy will meet you there. It feels like movement and renewal all at once. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:53
The load
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, that contrast between descent and rising really stands out… it gives the piece a powerful movement through it. There’s a clear shift that holds everything together. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 3rd, 2026 16:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, that contrast between descent and rising really stands out… it gives the piece a powerful movement through it. There’s a clear shift that holds everything together. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 3rd, 2026 16:13
The load
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem deals with existential struggles, the burden of past sins or misdeeds, and the relief that comes from love, trust, and spiritual guidance.
May 3rd, 2026 05:52
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem deals with existential struggles, the burden of past sins or misdeeds, and the relief that comes from love, trust, and spiritual guidance.
May 3rd, 2026 05:52
The load
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal ride from hades to the upper world. Nicely written
May 3rd, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal ride from hades to the upper world. Nicely written
May 3rd, 2026 04:26
Prophesy
arqios said:
And many have gone silent but not as many as those whose tongues have wagged like flames 🔥🙃🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2026 18:14
arqios said:
And many have gone silent but not as many as those whose tongues have wagged like flames 🔥🙃🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2026 18:14
Prophesy
sorenbarrett said:
My grandfather a very religious man once told me any prophesy is true if you put no date on it. A good write
May 1st, 2026 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
My grandfather a very religious man once told me any prophesy is true if you put no date on it. A good write
May 1st, 2026 16:23
Hands
Doggerel Dave said:
Many folks in retirement \'complain\' that they have less spare time than when they worked. Some ironical truth in that.
May 1st, 2026 00:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Many folks in retirement \'complain\' that they have less spare time than when they worked. Some ironical truth in that.
May 1st, 2026 00:28
Hands
arqios said:
Keeps us out of mischief, less idle hands for the devil\'s workshop! 🕊️🙏
April 30th, 2026 20:36
arqios said:
Keeps us out of mischief, less idle hands for the devil\'s workshop! 🕊️🙏
April 30th, 2026 20:36
Hands
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a changing course and mind nicely done
April 30th, 2026 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a changing course and mind nicely done
April 30th, 2026 09:23
Hands
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the experience of manual labor and the emotional and physical toll it can take, while also celebrating the joy and dignity that can come from that work.
April 30th, 2026 09:13
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the experience of manual labor and the emotional and physical toll it can take, while also celebrating the joy and dignity that can come from that work.
April 30th, 2026 09:13
Hairy goat
Doggerel Dave said:
Tell me, just quietly: is this when he found faith? Reference to September - seems like a fairly ordinary month to me...
April 28th, 2026 16:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Tell me, just quietly: is this when he found faith? Reference to September - seems like a fairly ordinary month to me...
April 28th, 2026 16:56
A love story
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valianstar, this feels deeply heartfelt…there’s a sincerity here that comes straight from devotion and memory. You can feel the love carried through every line. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valianstar, this feels deeply heartfelt…there’s a sincerity here that comes straight from devotion and memory. You can feel the love carried through every line. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:48
A love story
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said a beautiful poetic statement of faith
April 23rd, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said a beautiful poetic statement of faith
April 23rd, 2026 04:56
His place
NafisaSB said:
repentance, surrender, mercy - all so well portrayed here...
April 17th, 2026 23:56
NafisaSB said:
repentance, surrender, mercy - all so well portrayed here...
April 17th, 2026 23:56
Avenues
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, my friend, this made me smile…there’s a lightness here that carries all the way through. It feels like a real moment unfolding, from memory into surprise, and it keeps that playful tone without losing its charm. Really enjoyable. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, my friend, this made me smile…there’s a lightness here that carries all the way through. It feels like a real moment unfolding, from memory into surprise, and it keeps that playful tone without losing its charm. Really enjoyable. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:15
Avenues
sorenbarrett said:
You made me smile on this one and the smile will carry me through the day. thank you for that
April 16th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
You made me smile on this one and the smile will carry me through the day. thank you for that
April 16th, 2026 04:20
Avenues
orchidee said:
Good write 2. I went down a dead-end. Is that similar to an avenue?! lol.
April 16th, 2026 02:14
orchidee said:
Good write 2. I went down a dead-end. Is that similar to an avenue?! lol.
April 16th, 2026 02:14
Think
Doggerel Dave said:
Questions very familiar to me - I ask them or variants to myself frequently. However, the nature of the prophesy remains elusively just out of reach...
Certainly ticked several boxes for me.
April 14th, 2026 16:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Questions very familiar to me - I ask them or variants to myself frequently. However, the nature of the prophesy remains elusively just out of reach...
Certainly ticked several boxes for me.
April 14th, 2026 16:51
Think
sorenbarrett said:
One has to wonder sometimes what people are thinking or if they are thinking at all. Well written
April 14th, 2026 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
One has to wonder sometimes what people are thinking or if they are thinking at all. Well written
April 14th, 2026 11:02
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