Comments received on poems by 2781
Losing it
orchidee said:
Aww, why they say to me - Why you looking for summat you never had in the first place? - a mind! or, a brain! lol.
March 28th, 2026 11:53
orchidee said:
Aww, why they say to me - Why you looking for summat you never had in the first place? - a mind! or, a brain! lol.
March 28th, 2026 11:53
Losing it
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has a sharp, almost playful edge to it…like it’s dancing right on the line between instability and control. There’s something defiant in the tone, especially in that opening question. It lands with a kind of crooked confidence. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this has a sharp, almost playful edge to it…like it’s dancing right on the line between instability and control. There’s something defiant in the tone, especially in that opening question. It lands with a kind of crooked confidence. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:37
Losing it
sorenbarrett said:
The ravages of time in this poem of aging with or without grace. Lovely
March 28th, 2026 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
The ravages of time in this poem of aging with or without grace. Lovely
March 28th, 2026 07:55
Fishy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this comes in hot…there’s a prophetic urgency here that doesn’t hold back. It feels like a warning shouted into the noise…raw, unfiltered, and meant to shake something loose. The ending lands with weight. Well done, Valiantstar.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this comes in hot…there’s a prophetic urgency here that doesn’t hold back. It feels like a warning shouted into the noise…raw, unfiltered, and meant to shake something loose. The ending lands with weight. Well done, Valiantstar.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:58
Fishy
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a talking to or about God and the things that he is known for and can be relied upon for. Well written
March 25th, 2026 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a talking to or about God and the things that he is known for and can be relied upon for. Well written
March 25th, 2026 10:40
Shred
Doggerel Dave said:
Terrified of digging deeper than the toaster, this is my thought of the month for what it\'s worth:
Only utilise toaster for breakfast, then in the event of malfunction you have all day to fix or replace.
March 24th, 2026 23:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Terrified of digging deeper than the toaster, this is my thought of the month for what it\'s worth:
Only utilise toaster for breakfast, then in the event of malfunction you have all day to fix or replace.
March 24th, 2026 23:29
Shred
arqios said:
The newer toasters are not much better and they break down sooner as well.🕊️🙏🏻🍞
March 24th, 2026 15:58
arqios said:
The newer toasters are not much better and they break down sooner as well.🕊️🙏🏻🍞
March 24th, 2026 15:58
Shred
sorenbarrett said:
I have to agree this is such a common occurrence built into product production in order to increase sales and cut production costs. All a bottom line issue for the shareholder and short term profits. Acceptable to the buyers because it gives good excuse to replace old with new every year or so for remodeling and keeping up with the neighbors. Good write
March 24th, 2026 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
I have to agree this is such a common occurrence built into product production in order to increase sales and cut production costs. All a bottom line issue for the shareholder and short term profits. Acceptable to the buyers because it gives good excuse to replace old with new every year or so for remodeling and keeping up with the neighbors. Good write
March 24th, 2026 09:49
Shred
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this got me…what starts as a toaster rant turns into something way bigger. It’s chaotic in a good way, like your thoughts just running and not holding back. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this got me…what starts as a toaster rant turns into something way bigger. It’s chaotic in a good way, like your thoughts just running and not holding back. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 09:34
Dive in
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for a way out this poem speaks of a few. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 13:27
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for a way out this poem speaks of a few. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 13:27
Dive in
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this comes in with real fire…there’s urgency here, like you’re trying to shake something loose. It doesn’t sit quietly…it pushes and presses the whole way through. Well done and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this comes in with real fire…there’s urgency here, like you’re trying to shake something loose. It doesn’t sit quietly…it pushes and presses the whole way through. Well done and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:33
R&R
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like wrestling with belief and meaning…asking questions while still holding onto something at the center. I’ve sat in that space before...where certainty and curiosity meet. Well done in capturing it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like wrestling with belief and meaning…asking questions while still holding onto something at the center. I’ve sat in that space before...where certainty and curiosity meet. Well done in capturing it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:40
R&R
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor in a religious riddle that is as amusing as the answer. A fun read that teases the mind
March 22nd, 2026 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor in a religious riddle that is as amusing as the answer. A fun read that teases the mind
March 22nd, 2026 07:17
Weak
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this moves with a prophetic force…imagery, warning, and lament all woven together. Lines like “I sought a man among them who would make a wall… / But I found none.” anchor it in something stark and unresolved. It feels urgent and unrelenting. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this moves with a prophetic force…imagery, warning, and lament all woven together. Lines like “I sought a man among them who would make a wall… / But I found none.” anchor it in something stark and unresolved. It feels urgent and unrelenting. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:41
Weak
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem of belief and faith that speaks of the division between good and evil and believers and non believers well done
March 19th, 2026 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem of belief and faith that speaks of the division between good and evil and believers and non believers well done
March 19th, 2026 09:53
Search
Doggerel Dave said:
Gotta have Word or similar. I even bang out many of my comments there first before a copy and paste here, where all too often my comment gets lost or sunk before I can post.. Most folks here will relate, I bet.
March 18th, 2026 16:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Gotta have Word or similar. I even bang out many of my comments there first before a copy and paste here, where all too often my comment gets lost or sunk before I can post.. Most folks here will relate, I bet.
March 18th, 2026 16:17
Search
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this made me smile…there’s a playful frustration here that feels real and immediate. It stumbles on purpose, then leans into it. The shifting form mirrors that searching energy…like the poem is figuring itself out as it goes. Loved this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this made me smile…there’s a playful frustration here that feels real and immediate. It stumbles on purpose, then leans into it. The shifting form mirrors that searching energy…like the poem is figuring itself out as it goes. Loved this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:34
Search
sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t that the most vexing thing. I too have lost pieces in that way out of a careless touch of the keyboard. This is a piece that many can identify with.
March 18th, 2026 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t that the most vexing thing. I too have lost pieces in that way out of a careless touch of the keyboard. This is a piece that many can identify with.
March 18th, 2026 07:20
hotHotHOT
Doggerel Dave said:
My throat shrivelled and my fillings began to jangle just reading this. Think of your audience - I\'ve got to find a way to keep breathing now....
March 16th, 2026 18:08
Doggerel Dave said:
My throat shrivelled and my fillings began to jangle just reading this. Think of your audience - I\'ve got to find a way to keep breathing now....
March 16th, 2026 18:08
hotHotHOT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a fun one…starting with chili and heat, then slowly slipping into playful double meaning. The nitrate gloves line really sells the joke, and the habanero ending ties it all together with a grin. Clever, cheeky, and very entertaining. And...oooh do I love to cook and eat chili! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a fun one…starting with chili and heat, then slowly slipping into playful double meaning. The nitrate gloves line really sells the joke, and the habanero ending ties it all together with a grin. Clever, cheeky, and very entertaining. And...oooh do I love to cook and eat chili! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:52
hotHotHOT
sorenbarrett said:
Woh now that sounds good. I have a jar of tequila soaked peppers that I use from time to time to spice up a dish. This poem is nicely written with a bit of humor to sweeten it and the peppers to give it flavor. Very nicely done
March 16th, 2026 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Woh now that sounds good. I have a jar of tequila soaked peppers that I use from time to time to spice up a dish. This poem is nicely written with a bit of humor to sweeten it and the peppers to give it flavor. Very nicely done
March 16th, 2026 07:33
The horns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this unfolds as a prophetic spiritual call to discernment…horns, false teachers, and voices competing for power, all contrasted with the reminder that truth does not need to boast. The prophetic tone and scriptural imagery give the poem the feeling of a warning spoken across generations. Strong message here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 15th, 2026 18:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this unfolds as a prophetic spiritual call to discernment…horns, false teachers, and voices competing for power, all contrasted with the reminder that truth does not need to boast. The prophetic tone and scriptural imagery give the poem the feeling of a warning spoken across generations. Strong message here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 15th, 2026 18:44
The horns
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded in rhyme and flow it gives its message to all
March 15th, 2026 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded in rhyme and flow it gives its message to all
March 15th, 2026 09:04
Stories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, there’s a quiet searching spirit in this piece… it moves from doubt toward something deeper and steadier. That sense of a story behind all the other stories gives the poem a thoughtful, reflective feel. I really enjoyed the journey through it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 13th, 2026 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, there’s a quiet searching spirit in this piece… it moves from doubt toward something deeper and steadier. That sense of a story behind all the other stories gives the poem a thoughtful, reflective feel. I really enjoyed the journey through it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 13th, 2026 09:10
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