Comments received on poems by 2781
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries such a searching, devotional energy…hesitation, longing, mercy, and trust all moving together. Beautifully heartfelt, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries such a searching, devotional energy…hesitation, longing, mercy, and trust all moving together. Beautifully heartfelt, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:16
Life
NafisaSB said:
smoking kills, but it also fills gaps and gives solace to a few.
September 4th, 2026 02:23
NafisaSB said:
smoking kills, but it also fills gaps and gives solace to a few.
September 4th, 2026 02:23
Scribbles
coracaodacripta said:
Preaching to the choir! Somehow some things make all the sense in the world the moment of its conception, but you give one last look and it all just falls apart like a make-shift dysfunctional mechanism that just kinda sounds right in the end. Ain\'t that somethin\'?
September 3rd, 2026 22:17
coracaodacripta said:
Preaching to the choir! Somehow some things make all the sense in the world the moment of its conception, but you give one last look and it all just falls apart like a make-shift dysfunctional mechanism that just kinda sounds right in the end. Ain\'t that somethin\'?
September 3rd, 2026 22:17
Scribbles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an engaging piece, Valiantstar! The thoughts wander, question themselves, and appear to lose their way...yet that very wandering uncovers the trust holding everything together. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an engaging piece, Valiantstar! The thoughts wander, question themselves, and appear to lose their way...yet that very wandering uncovers the trust holding everything together. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:43
Scribbles
sorenbarrett said:
All things work out for the best although we may not see it at the time or even ever see it. God or nature has a way of working things out.
September 3rd, 2026 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
All things work out for the best although we may not see it at the time or even ever see it. God or nature has a way of working things out.
September 3rd, 2026 08:07
Redeemed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one really wrestles with the mystery of redemption rather than pretending to have it all neatly solved. That questioning gives it real spiritual weight. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one really wrestles with the mystery of redemption rather than pretending to have it all neatly solved. That questioning gives it real spiritual weight. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:35
Redeemed
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious reference nicely written where all will be forgiven. Loved the flow with rhyme
September 1st, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious reference nicely written where all will be forgiven. Loved the flow with rhyme
September 1st, 2026 04:14
Eye eye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This really got me thinking, my friend. There is a deep distrust running through it, not just of AI itself, but of the systems, resources, and motives surrounding it...and that makes the warning feel much broader than technology alone. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This really got me thinking, my friend. There is a deep distrust running through it, not just of AI itself, but of the systems, resources, and motives surrounding it...and that makes the warning feel much broader than technology alone. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:25
Eye eye
orchidee said:
Good write 2. You know those Yin and Yang folks?! lol.
August 30th, 2026 11:11
orchidee said:
Good write 2. You know those Yin and Yang folks?! lol.
August 30th, 2026 11:11
Eye eye
sorenbarrett said:
With no privacy, everything monitored, freedom no longer even a question, controlled in everything, everything artificial and disposable not a world I want to live in. Well written
August 30th, 2026 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
With no privacy, everything monitored, freedom no longer even a question, controlled in everything, everything artificial and disposable not a world I want to live in. Well written
August 30th, 2026 08:30
Eye eye
Doggerel Dave said:
The near future is going to be hell - and I haven\'t much of an idea how it will resolve itself - as it must... Perhaps I should ask Copilot??
August 30th, 2026 08:17
Doggerel Dave said:
The near future is going to be hell - and I haven\'t much of an idea how it will resolve itself - as it must... Perhaps I should ask Copilot??
August 30th, 2026 08:17
YHWH
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries an earnest sense of spiritual discovery. I appreciate how you explore the possibilities without pretending every question has been conclusively settled...allowing mystery, curiosity, and conviction to breathe together. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 16:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries an earnest sense of spiritual discovery. I appreciate how you explore the possibilities without pretending every question has been conclusively settled...allowing mystery, curiosity, and conviction to breathe together. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 16:54
YHWH
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with rhyme and good flow. Hebrew is written and read right to left so it must be put in English to be read the other way around. Nicely done.
August 27th, 2026 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with rhyme and good flow. Hebrew is written and read right to left so it must be put in English to be read the other way around. Nicely done.
August 27th, 2026 07:59
Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a quiet sadness. One brief encounter opens onto an entire unseen history...and the physical detail shows that time has already collected its price. This brought several people to mind. Thought-provoking work,Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a quiet sadness. One brief encounter opens onto an entire unseen history...and the physical detail shows that time has already collected its price. This brought several people to mind. Thought-provoking work,Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:50
Life
arqios said:
Was a merry old soul was he. Calling for his pipe and such. 👍🏻🕊️
August 25th, 2026 07:16
arqios said:
Was a merry old soul was he. Calling for his pipe and such. 👍🏻🕊️
August 25th, 2026 07:16
Life
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that leaves one questioning the issue of paying for what one does. Well done
August 25th, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that leaves one questioning the issue of paying for what one does. Well done
August 25th, 2026 04:46
Life
Paul Bell said:
Yes, smoking can damage your health and eventually make you gumsy.
In saying that, just going to the shops can kill you these days.
August 25th, 2026 03:17
Paul Bell said:
Yes, smoking can damage your health and eventually make you gumsy.
In saying that, just going to the shops can kill you these days.
August 25th, 2026 03:17
Dim wit
Doggerel Dave said:
One man\'s happiness could be another\'s horror. Liked this - enjoyed his perspective.
August 24th, 2026 00:53
Doggerel Dave said:
One man\'s happiness could be another\'s horror. Liked this - enjoyed his perspective.
August 24th, 2026 00:53
Dim wit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I feel personally attacked by this one! 🤣 A wonderfully affectionate portrait of a lovable oddball whose inner world is far busier than anything happening outside it. Great fun, my Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I feel personally attacked by this one! 🤣 A wonderfully affectionate portrait of a lovable oddball whose inner world is far busier than anything happening outside it. Great fun, my Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:00
Dim wit
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of Lewis Carroll this one is entertaining and enlightening as well. Well done
August 23rd, 2026 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of Lewis Carroll this one is entertaining and enlightening as well. Well done
August 23rd, 2026 11:00
Money
arqios said:
Ironic, isn\'t it! When divine paradoxes connect, we see our paradoxical dilemmas in a more reflective light. Hope this leads to godly sorrow.
August 21st, 2026 20:26
arqios said:
Ironic, isn\'t it! When divine paradoxes connect, we see our paradoxical dilemmas in a more reflective light. Hope this leads to godly sorrow.
August 21st, 2026 20:26
Money
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and searching poem, Valiantstar! The image of wealth slipping through torn purses captures a culture that continually acquires yet remains unsatisfied. Money can serve life, but when it becomes sacred, generosity, dignity, and faith are sacrificed before it. Your movement toward open hands offers the necessary answer. Excellent write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 09:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and searching poem, Valiantstar! The image of wealth slipping through torn purses captures a culture that continually acquires yet remains unsatisfied. Money can serve life, but when it becomes sacred, generosity, dignity, and faith are sacrificed before it. Your movement toward open hands offers the necessary answer. Excellent write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 09:59
Money
sorenbarrett said:
The issues of money raised and the issue of a God that provides as well. Nicely paired
August 21st, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
The issues of money raised and the issue of a God that provides as well. Nicely paired
August 21st, 2026 04:42
Money
David Wakeling said:
Wow a lot to unpack here. A well written and thoughtful poem involving the worship of Money replacing prayer.This one made me think
August 21st, 2026 03:11
David Wakeling said:
Wow a lot to unpack here. A well written and thoughtful poem involving the worship of Money replacing prayer.This one made me think
August 21st, 2026 03:11
In the dark
Butter said:
:3 idk what it’s saying but I had fun reading it and to me that’s all that matters.
August 20th, 2026 03:59
Butter said:
:3 idk what it’s saying but I had fun reading it and to me that’s all that matters.
August 20th, 2026 03:59
In the dark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a warm and energizing piece, Valiantstar. It begins in struggle, then another person’s words arrive with clarity, strength, and nourishment…until the whole spirit feels ready to move again. Loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a warm and energizing piece, Valiantstar. It begins in struggle, then another person’s words arrive with clarity, strength, and nourishment…until the whole spirit feels ready to move again. Loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:28
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