Comments received on poems by 2781
Here I am
sorenbarrett said:
There is a touch of sweetness in this poem tempered by a bit of arrogance. Nicely written it has a good flow and feel
August 15th, 2026 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
There is a touch of sweetness in this poem tempered by a bit of arrogance. Nicely written it has a good flow and feel
August 15th, 2026 08:49
Going on
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There’s a searching quality to this, Valiantstar...question after question stripping away appearances, cleverness, and easy answers in pursuit of something deeper. I like where you ultimately locate what we’re seeking: waiting quietly within the pages for someone willing to look. Thought-provoking, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There’s a searching quality to this, Valiantstar...question after question stripping away appearances, cleverness, and easy answers in pursuit of something deeper. I like where you ultimately locate what we’re seeking: waiting quietly within the pages for someone willing to look. Thought-provoking, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:53
Going on
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this write expounds the need for study through reading. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this write expounds the need for study through reading. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 07:21
Attention
arqios said:
Indeed, a blessing in disguise. Attested by one wont to overthink and be overwrought. 👍🏻🙏🕊️
August 10th, 2026 06:20
arqios said:
Indeed, a blessing in disguise. Attested by one wont to overthink and be overwrought. 👍🏻🙏🕊️
August 10th, 2026 06:20
Attention
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of tongue in cheek humor here that made me smile. Set in good rhyme it shows the good and bad of attentional problems
August 9th, 2026 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of tongue in cheek humor here that made me smile. Set in good rhyme it shows the good and bad of attentional problems
August 9th, 2026 06:11
Attention
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Valiantstar! 😂 The clarification at the end got me. There’s something wonderfully self-aware about admitting that sometimes the mind simply checks out regardless of what’s being offered. And “endless teaching / like a fart” certainly brought me back to attention! 🤣 Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 9th, 2026 05:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Valiantstar! 😂 The clarification at the end got me. There’s something wonderfully self-aware about admitting that sometimes the mind simply checks out regardless of what’s being offered. And “endless teaching / like a fart” certainly brought me back to attention! 🤣 Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 9th, 2026 05:51
Dave\'s
Doggerel Dave said:
Suspect all you like - my embarrassment is not going to improve my temper any.....🙃....😂
August 8th, 2026 19:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Suspect all you like - my embarrassment is not going to improve my temper any.....🙃....😂
August 8th, 2026 19:40
Dave\'s
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This put a smile on my face, my friend! 😂 A whole collection of Daves, each remembered for the quirks and qualities that make them lovable. There’s plenty of humor here, but underneath it all there’s genuine affection for these guys. Great job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This put a smile on my face, my friend! 😂 A whole collection of Daves, each remembered for the quirks and qualities that make them lovable. There’s plenty of humor here, but underneath it all there’s genuine affection for these guys. Great job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:41
Dave\'s
sorenbarrett said:
All true I am most sure. A fun read that sends a good message as well. Loved it a fave
August 8th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
All true I am most sure. A fun read that sends a good message as well. Loved it a fave
August 8th, 2026 04:28
See
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, Valiantstar...brief, inviting, and quietly joyful. There’s something lovely about faith being presented not as forcing anything into being, but simply opening ourselves enough for the Son to enter. Beautifully done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, Valiantstar...brief, inviting, and quietly joyful. There’s something lovely about faith being presented not as forcing anything into being, but simply opening ourselves enough for the Son to enter. Beautifully done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:33
Pool comp
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantsstar, this speaks to me. I’ve had moments where an unexpected conversation ends up becoming the part of the day I remember most. Your poem captures that beautifully…how grace often arrives quietly, without fanfare. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 23:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantsstar, this speaks to me. I’ve had moments where an unexpected conversation ends up becoming the part of the day I remember most. Your poem captures that beautifully…how grace often arrives quietly, without fanfare. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 23:00
Pool comp
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward tale simply told, and none the worse for that. Enjoyed the experience.
August 5th, 2026 16:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward tale simply told, and none the worse for that. Enjoyed the experience.
August 5th, 2026 16:34
Pool comp
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritual message in a poem of rhyme. Nicely done
August 5th, 2026 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritual message in a poem of rhyme. Nicely done
August 5th, 2026 09:51
Pool comp
Paul Bell said:
God sure works in mysterious ways, and the guy was only selling love, and free at that.
Sometimes a simple gesture speaks volumes, as two people acknowledge the world together.
August 5th, 2026 09:33
Paul Bell said:
God sure works in mysterious ways, and the guy was only selling love, and free at that.
Sometimes a simple gesture speaks volumes, as two people acknowledge the world together.
August 5th, 2026 09:33
Troubled life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a moving testimony, Valiantstar. The honesty about former failures gives the spiritual renewal real weight...and I love how completely the speaker entrusts both the present and eternity to God. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a moving testimony, Valiantstar. The honesty about former failures gives the spiritual renewal real weight...and I love how completely the speaker entrusts both the present and eternity to God. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:53
Troubled life
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of religious loyalty in this poem. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of religious loyalty in this poem. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2026 04:28
Strategies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong scriptural cadence from beginning to end. It feels like a call back to enduring truth in the midst of rebellion and wandering. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong scriptural cadence from beginning to end. It feels like a call back to enduring truth in the midst of rebellion and wandering. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:36
Strategies
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic values set in this work where Christian values are most evident. Well written
August 1st, 2026 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic values set in this work where Christian values are most evident. Well written
August 1st, 2026 03:39
Not boring
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a joyful and uplifting expression of faith! The devotion here is wholehearted and infectious...full of gratitude for a God who transforms lives. Beautiful write, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a joyful and uplifting expression of faith! The devotion here is wholehearted and infectious...full of gratitude for a God who transforms lives. Beautiful write, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:04
Alert!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what an unsettling and thought-provoking piece! You turn a source of public reassurance into an instrument of chaos...then leave us wondering whether remaining beyond its reach might be the safest place of all. Excellent write, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 08:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what an unsettling and thought-provoking piece! You turn a source of public reassurance into an instrument of chaos...then leave us wondering whether remaining beyond its reach might be the safest place of all. Excellent write, Valiantstar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 08:58
Alert!
arqios said:
Another flex in social engineering. Apparently, there was a spike in vehicular accidents at 2pm. Wonder why that was!? My phone felt like a U.S. alarm, having been to the military installations while visiting Japan. Wonder why that its!? My daughter\'s phone was on aeroplane mode and didn\'t sound. Not a peep. Lol.
July 27th, 2026 05:29
arqios said:
Another flex in social engineering. Apparently, there was a spike in vehicular accidents at 2pm. Wonder why that was!? My phone felt like a U.S. alarm, having been to the military installations while visiting Japan. Wonder why that its!? My daughter\'s phone was on aeroplane mode and didn\'t sound. Not a peep. Lol.
July 27th, 2026 05:29
Alert!
sorenbarrett said:
Too much information can be distracting and overwhelming as well as cause assumptions that are not warranted due to incomplete information. Sometimes ignorance is bliss. Well written
July 27th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Too much information can be distracting and overwhelming as well as cause assumptions that are not warranted due to incomplete information. Sometimes ignorance is bliss. Well written
July 27th, 2026 04:12
Alert!
Poetic Dan said:
Only time will tell but you\'ve written it well. Time to remember our own intuition of safe or not
July 27th, 2026 01:58
Poetic Dan said:
Only time will tell but you\'ve written it well. Time to remember our own intuition of safe or not
July 27th, 2026 01:58
Jealousy
sorenbarrett said:
Your name might as well be Isaiah or maybe John from Revelations. Well written in good style
July 25th, 2026 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Your name might as well be Isaiah or maybe John from Revelations. Well written in good style
July 25th, 2026 09:29
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