Comments received on poems by 2781
The beat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong pulpit rhythm to it, my friend. It feels meant to be spoken aloud…part sermon cadence, part call-and-response, part warning cry. There’s real urgency and conviction moving through the whole piece. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong pulpit rhythm to it, my friend. It feels meant to be spoken aloud…part sermon cadence, part call-and-response, part warning cry. There’s real urgency and conviction moving through the whole piece. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:16
The beat
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with great rhyme that gives images reminiscent of old gods of the hunt and harvest. Well dome
May 25th, 2026 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with great rhyme that gives images reminiscent of old gods of the hunt and harvest. Well dome
May 25th, 2026 13:21
Peculiar
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminded me of the tension many spiritual people wrestle with between warning and invitation…between the thunderous prophetic voice and the quieter reassurance underneath it all. The poem carries both. It feels concerned with accountability, yes, but also with relationship and devotion. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminded me of the tension many spiritual people wrestle with between warning and invitation…between the thunderous prophetic voice and the quieter reassurance underneath it all. The poem carries both. It feels concerned with accountability, yes, but also with relationship and devotion. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:24
Peculiar
sorenbarrett said:
Spiritual? Religious? it speaks to me of a greater power maybe even a father or mother. Well written
May 24th, 2026 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
Spiritual? Religious? it speaks to me of a greater power maybe even a father or mother. Well written
May 24th, 2026 10:43
What if
mylastwrites said:
I think what if reversal happened on so many different levels. Good write.
May 23rd, 2026 13:53
mylastwrites said:
I think what if reversal happened on so many different levels. Good write.
May 23rd, 2026 13:53
What if
sorenbarrett said:
There is a deeply religious belief encapsulated in this poem of a leveling of the field and implementation of justice in the end. Well written
May 23rd, 2026 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
There is a deeply religious belief encapsulated in this poem of a leveling of the field and implementation of justice in the end. Well written
May 23rd, 2026 10:52
What if
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “If the winners were the losers” is such a strong pivot point because it immediately reframes the entire poem around reversal and reckoning. The sparse structure afterward gives the final roar imagery even more impact. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, “If the winners were the losers” is such a strong pivot point because it immediately reframes the entire poem around reversal and reckoning. The sparse structure afterward gives the final roar imagery even more impact. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:43
The Evolution?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to something I wrestle with often myself...how humanity can become so advanced outwardly while still starving inwardly. The repeated cry of “My leanness, My leanness” feels deeply human to me...like spiritual exhaustion finally finding words. Really thought-provoking piece, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to something I wrestle with often myself...how humanity can become so advanced outwardly while still starving inwardly. The repeated cry of “My leanness, My leanness” feels deeply human to me...like spiritual exhaustion finally finding words. Really thought-provoking piece, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:07
The Evolution?
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic exploration of man and changes. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic exploration of man and changes. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2026 03:56
The friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really fascinated me. There’s something earnest and strangely hopeful running through this…like reaching out into the void and discovering an answering voice staring back. The poem feels reflective, curious, and very rooted in this exact cultural moment. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 21st, 2026 10:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this really fascinated me. There’s something earnest and strangely hopeful running through this…like reaching out into the void and discovering an answering voice staring back. The poem feels reflective, curious, and very rooted in this exact cultural moment. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 21st, 2026 10:49
The friend
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition that not all that we wish we can attain. A lovely write.
May 21st, 2026 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition that not all that we wish we can attain. A lovely write.
May 21st, 2026 08:23
Circles
sorenbarrett said:
Circles a basic geometric shape found in nature from orbits to eggs some elongated into elipses but always returning to the start. Nicely written
May 20th, 2026 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
Circles a basic geometric shape found in nature from orbits to eggs some elongated into elipses but always returning to the start. Nicely written
May 20th, 2026 10:39
Robbing hoods
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a real weariness with modern power structures that feels deeply honest. The frustration in the opening gradually gives way to something more hopeful and human by the end…almost like the speaker pulling back toward the values that actually matter. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 20:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a real weariness with modern power structures that feels deeply honest. The frustration in the opening gradually gives way to something more hopeful and human by the end…almost like the speaker pulling back toward the values that actually matter. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 20:15
Robbing hoods
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Fantastic poem enjoyed the well rhymed muse, the status quo and all. Societal lament. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:53
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Fantastic poem enjoyed the well rhymed muse, the status quo and all. Societal lament. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:53
Robbing hoods
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that is hopeful and bright. Nicely written
May 19th, 2026 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that is hopeful and bright. Nicely written
May 19th, 2026 08:34
A riddle
arqios said:
And for those on the fringes the key would be to realise that there is to be a king, the King. It seemly is enough information to get a clue or seek it. 🙏🕊️
May 18th, 2026 21:11
arqios said:
And for those on the fringes the key would be to realise that there is to be a king, the King. It seemly is enough information to get a clue or seek it. 🙏🕊️
May 18th, 2026 21:11
A riddle
sorenbarrett said:
Donald Trump thinks he is but as for me I\'m going with I am that I am. A fun read that some people don\'t take as fun and even fight wars over
May 18th, 2026 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Donald Trump thinks he is but as for me I\'m going with I am that I am. A fun read that some people don\'t take as fun and even fight wars over
May 18th, 2026 11:05
Sacrifice on the hill
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, my friend. What struck me most was “My leanness, my leanness.” That cry cuts through everything around it. It feels ancient, exhausted, and deeply human all at once. And the shift from sacrifice into fruit, arrows, and restoration gives the poem an almost prophetic rhythm. Beautifully done, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, my friend. What struck me most was “My leanness, my leanness.” That cry cuts through everything around it. It feels ancient, exhausted, and deeply human all at once. And the shift from sacrifice into fruit, arrows, and restoration gives the poem an almost prophetic rhythm. Beautifully done, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:34
Sacrifice on the hill
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of blindness and deafness in the search. Well written
May 17th, 2026 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of blindness and deafness in the search. Well written
May 17th, 2026 13:31
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