Comments received on poems by 2781
Circumcision
sorenbarrett said:
You did well the story to tell and from history to reveal the mystery/. If I may be so bold story nicely told.
December 15th, 2024 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
You did well the story to tell and from history to reveal the mystery/. If I may be so bold story nicely told.
December 15th, 2024 04:02
Blind
arqios said:
Very \"extraspective\" of the human condition and the challenges of being.
December 14th, 2024 18:41
arqios said:
Very \"extraspective\" of the human condition and the challenges of being.
December 14th, 2024 18:41
Blind
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have something there, but I can\'t see a way to comment on it and do it justice....
December 13th, 2024 19:57
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have something there, but I can\'t see a way to comment on it and do it justice....
December 13th, 2024 19:57
Blind
sorenbarrett said:
Differences in opinions and views that are not well tolerated. I don’t know why it is so difficult to let others believe as they do As long as it doesn’t affect me and you.
December 13th, 2024 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
Differences in opinions and views that are not well tolerated. I don’t know why it is so difficult to let others believe as they do As long as it doesn’t affect me and you.
December 13th, 2024 10:14
Now
sorenbarrett said:
The most fun read is it ramble along from one topic to another just as the thoughts and one’s head follow the same aimless path. Nicely done.
December 12th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
The most fun read is it ramble along from one topic to another just as the thoughts and one’s head follow the same aimless path. Nicely done.
December 12th, 2024 04:35
Now
arqios said:
Distraction and struggle are a regular thing here, what with uncooperative technology and the onslaught of distractions hurled every second. But we know where Peace comes from. And that is worth all the struggle.
December 12th, 2024 04:20
arqios said:
Distraction and struggle are a regular thing here, what with uncooperative technology and the onslaught of distractions hurled every second. But we know where Peace comes from. And that is worth all the struggle.
December 12th, 2024 04:20
The rapture!
arqios said:
What a rich tapestry of spiritual contemplation and prophetic anticipation woven together on the central them of the Rapture.
December 12th, 2024 02:16
arqios said:
What a rich tapestry of spiritual contemplation and prophetic anticipation woven together on the central them of the Rapture.
December 12th, 2024 02:16
The rapture!
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I thank you for this. This was much needed.
December 11th, 2024 09:32
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I thank you for this. This was much needed.
December 11th, 2024 09:32
The rapture!
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the story it seems that I\'ve heard it befor, vaguely familiar lol. You have summed it all up pretty well in this poem.
December 11th, 2024 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the story it seems that I\'ve heard it befor, vaguely familiar lol. You have summed it all up pretty well in this poem.
December 11th, 2024 09:06
Granny
sorenbarrett said:
Youth is no match for the treachery of old age. Loved the poem a most fun read.
December 9th, 2024 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
Youth is no match for the treachery of old age. Loved the poem a most fun read.
December 9th, 2024 06:53
Granny
arqios said:
Every town’s got one of those! Fortunate for you (or not so much) it hadda be yer Nan.
December 9th, 2024 06:45
arqios said:
Every town’s got one of those! Fortunate for you (or not so much) it hadda be yer Nan.
December 9th, 2024 06:45
Shoosh
sorenbarrett said:
Unique and intriguing. This poem set up. It’s interest in the first line by making it a secret. It is well rhymed and has a good flow and pursues a story that we all know. Very nicely written.
December 8th, 2024 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
Unique and intriguing. This poem set up. It’s interest in the first line by making it a secret. It is well rhymed and has a good flow and pursues a story that we all know. Very nicely written.
December 8th, 2024 07:30
Silly
Doggerel Dave said:
Wonder who\'s joke you are messing with....
Occasionally necessary ( thesaurus), otherwise clanging (repetition of the same word) occurs and it is necessary to find an alternative, Good write in good order.
December 6th, 2024 16:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Wonder who\'s joke you are messing with....
Occasionally necessary ( thesaurus), otherwise clanging (repetition of the same word) occurs and it is necessary to find an alternative, Good write in good order.
December 6th, 2024 16:06
Silly
arqios said:
Spewing too many antonyms as well, or is that the Anto-dote !?
December 6th, 2024 14:24
arqios said:
Spewing too many antonyms as well, or is that the Anto-dote !?
December 6th, 2024 14:24
Silly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this was witty. Loved it my friend! A fun read. And having personally had thesaurus throat, we’re poets after all, this is a fave for me! 😂 well done!
December 6th, 2024 09:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this was witty. Loved it my friend! A fun read. And having personally had thesaurus throat, we’re poets after all, this is a fave for me! 😂 well done!
December 6th, 2024 09:42
Silly
sorenbarrett said:
A great use of words in this write. Clever and well done.
December 6th, 2024 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
A great use of words in this write. Clever and well done.
December 6th, 2024 07:54
Plagiarised
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! This made me laugh, my friend! No apologies needed! 🤣
December 5th, 2024 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! This made me laugh, my friend! No apologies needed! 🤣
December 5th, 2024 08:12
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