Comments received on poems by 2781
Who I am
NafisaSB said:
it is the inner self which truly knows and recognizes what is, and what\'s worth knowing - a good write
September 22nd, 2025 23:52
NafisaSB said:
it is the inner self which truly knows and recognizes what is, and what\'s worth knowing - a good write
September 22nd, 2025 23:52
My Lord
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is emotional, reverent, and vivid, blending personal devotion with scripture-inspired imagery.
September 19th, 2025 15:38
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is emotional, reverent, and vivid, blending personal devotion with scripture-inspired imagery.
September 19th, 2025 15:38
My Lord
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads like a worn prayer turned prophetic call…gratitude for rescue…“you set me free”…moves into an insistence: know the times, choose life, stand firm. The poem balances reassurance (“set my feet upon the rock”) with a startling edge…the thief, the surprise, “slay them with your tongue”…so worship and confrontation live in the same breath. It’s both comfort and battle cry, tender and unflinching. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 19th, 2025 15:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads like a worn prayer turned prophetic call…gratitude for rescue…“you set me free”…moves into an insistence: know the times, choose life, stand firm. The poem balances reassurance (“set my feet upon the rock”) with a startling edge…the thief, the surprise, “slay them with your tongue”…so worship and confrontation live in the same breath. It’s both comfort and battle cry, tender and unflinching. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 19th, 2025 15:35
My Lord
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic proclamation of belief sent in powerful words. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic proclamation of belief sent in powerful words. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 04:18
Lover
Keeter C said:
Nice. It’s like a little bread trail. The warnings of old about lovers.
September 19th, 2025 00:01
Keeter C said:
Nice. It’s like a little bread trail. The warnings of old about lovers.
September 19th, 2025 00:01
Who I am
orchidee said:
Erm, who are ya? You can tell I didn\'t read the poem properly. lol.
September 18th, 2025 02:07
orchidee said:
Erm, who are ya? You can tell I didn\'t read the poem properly. lol.
September 18th, 2025 02:07
Who I am
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem elegantly captures the journey of self-awareness and the moral weight of choices. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:07
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem elegantly captures the journey of self-awareness and the moral weight of choices. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:07
Who I am
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like tracing my own wrestlings…the battlefield of the mind, the choice to hold on, the hope that victory lives inside. You’ve named that tension clearly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 17th, 2025 11:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like tracing my own wrestlings…the battlefield of the mind, the choice to hold on, the hope that victory lives inside. You’ve named that tension clearly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 17th, 2025 11:12
Who I am
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to be heard above the din of the crowd. A wonderful write
September 17th, 2025 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to be heard above the din of the crowd. A wonderful write
September 17th, 2025 07:46
Lover
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is stark and piercing, my friend…politics as betrayal, love as a lie, the nation mourning like children. It weaves together anger and sorrow in a way that lingers long after reading. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 13:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is stark and piercing, my friend…politics as betrayal, love as a lie, the nation mourning like children. It weaves together anger and sorrow in a way that lingers long after reading. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 13:00
Lover
sorenbarrett said:
Well said an allegory so well set in poetic style Yes indeed government does not love the people and receives gifts from it all the time a whore to votes. Wonderfully written
September 15th, 2025 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
Well said an allegory so well set in poetic style Yes indeed government does not love the people and receives gifts from it all the time a whore to votes. Wonderfully written
September 15th, 2025 10:23
Come down
sorenbarrett said:
Vague enough to apply to many things yet specific enough to provoke thought this poem cries out. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Vague enough to apply to many things yet specific enough to provoke thought this poem cries out. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 04:08
Meta-verse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, my friend…this is the struggle of our age—creation and destruction entwined. You’ve captured the paradox with sharp edges. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, my friend…this is the struggle of our age—creation and destruction entwined. You’ve captured the paradox with sharp edges. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:40
Meta-verse
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rhyme and flow and the message is a most inspiring one. A wonderful write
September 10th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rhyme and flow and the message is a most inspiring one. A wonderful write
September 10th, 2025 08:14
Desire
sorenbarrett said:
Tis far better to give hope than answers. Hope people will follow answers they disregard, disbelieve and will not follow out of stubbornness. Good write
September 9th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Tis far better to give hope than answers. Hope people will follow answers they disregard, disbelieve and will not follow out of stubbornness. Good write
September 9th, 2025 04:26
Watch
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow, this is powerful. The imagery of light versus darkness really makes you reflect on the spiritual battles we face.
Deep and thought-provoking. Evil hiding in plain sight is so real this poem captures it perfectly. Such strong words. It reminds us to stay awake and discerning in a world full of hidden deceptions.
September 7th, 2025 08:33
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow, this is powerful. The imagery of light versus darkness really makes you reflect on the spiritual battles we face.
Deep and thought-provoking. Evil hiding in plain sight is so real this poem captures it perfectly. Such strong words. It reminds us to stay awake and discerning in a world full of hidden deceptions.
September 7th, 2025 08:33
Watch
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with many religious connotations. Nicely worded in verse and rhyme. Well done
September 7th, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with many religious connotations. Nicely worded in verse and rhyme. Well done
September 7th, 2025 08:19
Father\'s day
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words that all makes sense if one sits and thinks it through. A fun read
August 30th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words that all makes sense if one sits and thinks it through. A fun read
August 30th, 2025 11:25
Father\'s day
Doggerel Dave said:
Confusion mounts...coulda been any one of \'em by the sounds of it....
August 30th, 2025 09:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Confusion mounts...coulda been any one of \'em by the sounds of it....
August 30th, 2025 09:29
Father\'s day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fun poem, my friend. Father’s Day is in June where I’m from, but then again, everyday is father’s day for those who father. 🤷♂️ #Truth. Silliness aside, loved it! 🤘😎
August 30th, 2025 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fun poem, my friend. Father’s Day is in June where I’m from, but then again, everyday is father’s day for those who father. 🤷♂️ #Truth. Silliness aside, loved it! 🤘😎
August 30th, 2025 09:21
Father\'s day
Cheeky Missy said:
Alright, now you\'ve got me totally mixt up. I give up. Tell me, pretty please?
August 30th, 2025 09:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Alright, now you\'ve got me totally mixt up. I give up. Tell me, pretty please?
August 30th, 2025 09:13
Student and teacher
orchidee said:
I wasn\'t in Eden. Oh! You don\'t mean me! lol.
August 23rd, 2025 02:02
orchidee said:
I wasn\'t in Eden. Oh! You don\'t mean me! lol.
August 23rd, 2025 02:02
Student and teacher
sorenbarrett said:
No matter how much we know we can always learn more and I have learned more from students than professors. Nicely doen
August 22nd, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
No matter how much we know we can always learn more and I have learned more from students than professors. Nicely doen
August 22nd, 2025 10:44
Doctor Doctor
Paul Bell said:
The days when a GP visited you, now they just phone with the remedy.
August 17th, 2025 08:14
Paul Bell said:
The days when a GP visited you, now they just phone with the remedy.
August 17th, 2025 08:14
Ramblings of a mad man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title reminded me of Ozzy\'s Diary of a Madman. Regardless madmen rambling makes for great poetry, so carry on my friend! We all go a little mad sometimes and, as the cookie crumbles, we poets can ramble! 🤣 Glad to see you post again and sending the love right back to you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title reminded me of Ozzy\'s Diary of a Madman. Regardless madmen rambling makes for great poetry, so carry on my friend! We all go a little mad sometimes and, as the cookie crumbles, we poets can ramble! 🤣 Glad to see you post again and sending the love right back to you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:40
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