Comments received on poems by 2781
Strange
arqios said:
But by the Spirit! Shall he not!? My dermal allergies can attest to the fact. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 10th, 2025 07:40
arqios said:
But by the Spirit! Shall he not!? My dermal allergies can attest to the fact. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 10th, 2025 07:40
Strange
sorenbarrett said:
A fun run through episodes of one\'s day and the accompanying thought streem that goew with it. Felt real.
January 10th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A fun run through episodes of one\'s day and the accompanying thought streem that goew with it. Felt real.
January 10th, 2025 04:41
Out
NinjaGirl said:
feels like a certain \"Jesus take the wheel!\" moment! beautiful poem!
January 8th, 2025 19:50
NinjaGirl said:
feels like a certain \"Jesus take the wheel!\" moment! beautiful poem!
January 8th, 2025 19:50
Out
arqios said:
What a poem outing the tension between control and surrender, connection and isolation, clarity and confusion. It resonates with the universal quest for meaning and understanding in the face of life\'s unpredictability. We a,l are searching for something… 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 8th, 2025 06:55
arqios said:
What a poem outing the tension between control and surrender, connection and isolation, clarity and confusion. It resonates with the universal quest for meaning and understanding in the face of life\'s unpredictability. We a,l are searching for something… 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 8th, 2025 06:55
Out
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we trie too hard to control what is happening around us and don\'t just sit back and enjoy the ride. No one likes a back seat driver. Nicely done
January 8th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we trie too hard to control what is happening around us and don\'t just sit back and enjoy the ride. No one likes a back seat driver. Nicely done
January 8th, 2025 04:25
Wasps
arqios said:
Sometime last year I was told that after smoking them out or whatever method of shooing them off to leave the nests be as they are territorial and will not build where there are structures abandoned or not. Love the twist at the end of your poem. They are quite a deterrent!
January 6th, 2025 07:39
arqios said:
Sometime last year I was told that after smoking them out or whatever method of shooing them off to leave the nests be as they are territorial and will not build where there are structures abandoned or not. Love the twist at the end of your poem. They are quite a deterrent!
January 6th, 2025 07:39
Wasps
Poetic Licence said:
i have many run in with wasps, insect and human form, insect for there is a cure, human ones there is not, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 04:33
Poetic Licence said:
i have many run in with wasps, insect and human form, insect for there is a cure, human ones there is not, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 04:33
Wasps
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and do I detect a metaphor in the gist of this poem? I have had my turn with wasps as well on many occasions sometimes under truce and sometimes war.
January 6th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and do I detect a metaphor in the gist of this poem? I have had my turn with wasps as well on many occasions sometimes under truce and sometimes war.
January 6th, 2025 04:14
Wasps
orchidee said:
Pop over to the UK if you want Winter/cooler now! Some in Uk have dashed off to Spain, etc for about 4 months, in a migration, which they can do if they are retired.
January 6th, 2025 03:24
orchidee said:
Pop over to the UK if you want Winter/cooler now! Some in Uk have dashed off to Spain, etc for about 4 months, in a migration, which they can do if they are retired.
January 6th, 2025 03:24
Daley double
Cheeky Missy said:
Turns out I\'ve apparently been living in Illinois too long by now since your title keeps me thinking of a certain mayor. This is curious and intriguing, charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing, Sir.
January 4th, 2025 08:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Turns out I\'ve apparently been living in Illinois too long by now since your title keeps me thinking of a certain mayor. This is curious and intriguing, charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing, Sir.
January 4th, 2025 08:38
Daley double
arqios said:
Without compassion we are as clanging cymbals, an anointed one once said… 😊👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 4th, 2025 07:55
arqios said:
Without compassion we are as clanging cymbals, an anointed one once said… 😊👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 4th, 2025 07:55
Focus
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A humorous, self-reflective, and poignant poem, my friend! Really flows nicely too! 🌹👏
January 3rd, 2025 13:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A humorous, self-reflective, and poignant poem, my friend! Really flows nicely too! 🌹👏
January 3rd, 2025 13:29
Focus
arqios said:
Wow, this poem is rich in personality and self-awareness, offering a glimpse into a mind that values authenticity over conformity. It\'s both humorous and poignant, and I believe encourages readers to appreciate the unique ways we all navigate focus and meaning in our lives. Let’s keep refocusing when we’re distracted or detracted… and all that. Cheers 👍🏻🕊
January 3rd, 2025 07:33
arqios said:
Wow, this poem is rich in personality and self-awareness, offering a glimpse into a mind that values authenticity over conformity. It\'s both humorous and poignant, and I believe encourages readers to appreciate the unique ways we all navigate focus and meaning in our lives. Let’s keep refocusing when we’re distracted or detracted… and all that. Cheers 👍🏻🕊
January 3rd, 2025 07:33
Here we go
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write, love the way the words flowed throughout.
January 3rd, 2025 06:14
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write, love the way the words flowed throughout.
January 3rd, 2025 06:14
Here we go
arqios said:
Those with ears are able to listen and those with ash are able to see, but the Spirit quickens! Bright lights indeed… these are the days…
January 2nd, 2025 08:46
arqios said:
Those with ears are able to listen and those with ash are able to see, but the Spirit quickens! Bright lights indeed… these are the days…
January 2nd, 2025 08:46
Here we go
rin said:
Most of the children\'s predictions come true, but the ending is hilarious and warms my heart.
January 2nd, 2025 08:25
rin said:
Most of the children\'s predictions come true, but the ending is hilarious and warms my heart.
January 2nd, 2025 08:25
Here we go
sorenbarrett said:
Most hopefully the future is bright for those in the nursery. A warning poem nicely written
January 2nd, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
Most hopefully the future is bright for those in the nursery. A warning poem nicely written
January 2nd, 2025 08:20
New year
rin said:
I also want to toast to all kinds of people. With you, of course.
January 2nd, 2025 07:56
rin said:
I also want to toast to all kinds of people. With you, of course.
January 2nd, 2025 07:56
New year
arqios said:
He knows and they eventually hear his voice above the din that surrounds and within!
December 31st, 2024 15:47
arqios said:
He knows and they eventually hear his voice above the din that surrounds and within!
December 31st, 2024 15:47
New year
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Those who know him know, but yeah, looking around and seeing how things continue to be, no one would know. Anywho, well done my friend! A great poem to ring in what I hope will be a wonderful happy New Year for us all. 🌹👏❤️
December 31st, 2024 14:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Those who know him know, but yeah, looking around and seeing how things continue to be, no one would know. Anywho, well done my friend! A great poem to ring in what I hope will be a wonderful happy New Year for us all. 🌹👏❤️
December 31st, 2024 14:46
New year
sorenbarrett said:
A great toast to a new year. Here is wishing you and yours a most Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
A great toast to a new year. Here is wishing you and yours a most Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 13:54
Depressing
sorenbarrett said:
Suicide passes through most people\'s mind at one time or another most of us brush it off some don\'t. It is a selfish act that affects many others and leaves pain behind. In the case of euthanasia where a person is in chronic intractable pain with no hope for recovery I can understand it as a valid choice it family and friends are included before it happens. A poignant write about a dark and sad situation
December 29th, 2024 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Suicide passes through most people\'s mind at one time or another most of us brush it off some don\'t. It is a selfish act that affects many others and leaves pain behind. In the case of euthanasia where a person is in chronic intractable pain with no hope for recovery I can understand it as a valid choice it family and friends are included before it happens. A poignant write about a dark and sad situation
December 29th, 2024 13:55
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