Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
forget me not
Cheeky Missy said:
How beautifully rendered and with a haunting poignancy and imagery so delicate, I almost catch my breath. Once again I wish to know what that particular flower looks like, as I\'m more acquainted with the violets, of which I am, were I a flower. Thank you so very much for sharing! Love you.
January 8th, 2025 23:31
Cheeky Missy said:
How beautifully rendered and with a haunting poignancy and imagery so delicate, I almost catch my breath. Once again I wish to know what that particular flower looks like, as I\'m more acquainted with the violets, of which I am, were I a flower. Thank you so very much for sharing! Love you.
January 8th, 2025 23:31
paranoid
Dan Williams said:
Paranoid means all too often they really are out to get you. Hang on.
January 7th, 2025 20:48
Dan Williams said:
Paranoid means all too often they really are out to get you. Hang on.
January 7th, 2025 20:48
paranoid
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know they\'re all after me! Jokes aside, I get this and have felt this way. And no, the thinking never stops, does it? It spins on rotation. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 7th, 2025 15:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know they\'re all after me! Jokes aside, I get this and have felt this way. And no, the thinking never stops, does it? It spins on rotation. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 7th, 2025 15:34
paranoid
Poetic Licence said:
i can connect with this poem when your mind is in overdrive, you think the world is out to get you but you have no idea Why, How or even what for. Nicely worded.
January 7th, 2025 13:49
Poetic Licence said:
i can connect with this poem when your mind is in overdrive, you think the world is out to get you but you have no idea Why, How or even what for. Nicely worded.
January 7th, 2025 13:49
paranoid
sorenbarrett said:
Which is better to think that no one is after you when they are or think they are not? And we know they are. A pertinant poem about how things are for many now days. Very nicely put and written
January 7th, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
Which is better to think that no one is after you when they are or think they are not? And we know they are. A pertinant poem about how things are for many now days. Very nicely put and written
January 7th, 2025 13:37
paranoid
rin said:
In my case, when I can\'t stop thinking, I listen to pop music to clear my head and think of poetry. If you think about it too much, the poem will become complicated.
January 7th, 2025 13:24
rin said:
In my case, when I can\'t stop thinking, I listen to pop music to clear my head and think of poetry. If you think about it too much, the poem will become complicated.
January 7th, 2025 13:24
shattered
Poetic Licence said:
Everything has a use and has value, it is how we perceive and use it that matters, enjoyed the read.
January 7th, 2025 04:11
Poetic Licence said:
Everything has a use and has value, it is how we perceive and use it that matters, enjoyed the read.
January 7th, 2025 04:11
shattered
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought deeply philosophical highly existential and seems to leave no bright answer, But no everything has its use and those shards may be gathered by an artist to be used in their next work, a fisherman to cut his line, they may cut the foot of a murderer now unable to complete his task. All things have a purpose.
January 7th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought deeply philosophical highly existential and seems to leave no bright answer, But no everything has its use and those shards may be gathered by an artist to be used in their next work, a fisherman to cut his line, they may cut the foot of a murderer now unable to complete his task. All things have a purpose.
January 7th, 2025 03:58
shattered
rin said:
Even if you become dangerous, you may feel spicy to others. But it might still be good.
When you look in the mirror and keep checking yourself, you may not know the real you.
January 6th, 2025 23:04
rin said:
Even if you become dangerous, you may feel spicy to others. But it might still be good.
When you look in the mirror and keep checking yourself, you may not know the real you.
January 6th, 2025 23:04
shattered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
C\'est une très bonne question mon ami. Je ne pense pas. Brava, my deeply philosophical friend! Excellent poetic musing! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 21:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
C\'est une très bonne question mon ami. Je ne pense pas. Brava, my deeply philosophical friend! Excellent poetic musing! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 21:19
wild curls
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very brave poem dealing with some a subject absolutely disgusting, sadly i know myself how common this was and still is. It raises anger that it happened and still happens and sorrow and feeling for the recipient. I wish you all the best
January 5th, 2025 20:48
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very brave poem dealing with some a subject absolutely disgusting, sadly i know myself how common this was and still is. It raises anger that it happened and still happens and sorrow and feeling for the recipient. I wish you all the best
January 5th, 2025 20:48
wild curls
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes my skin crawl with revultion, not from the poem but the content itself. Sad and upsetting it provokes anger and pitty. I have always said that you can tell if a work is a piece of art by the emotion it provoke and so I proclaim this a work of art
January 5th, 2025 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes my skin crawl with revultion, not from the poem but the content itself. Sad and upsetting it provokes anger and pitty. I have always said that you can tell if a work is a piece of art by the emotion it provoke and so I proclaim this a work of art
January 5th, 2025 18:04
blistered fingers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading Soren’s beautiful comment, I have nothing to offer other than to say, brillianf job NG! 🌹👏
January 4th, 2025 23:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading Soren’s beautiful comment, I have nothing to offer other than to say, brillianf job NG! 🌹👏
January 4th, 2025 23:01
blistered fingers
Mutley Ravishes said:
Led Zeppelin have a song, “Nobody’s Fault But Mine,” which is pausetastic!
January 4th, 2025 20:52
Mutley Ravishes said:
Led Zeppelin have a song, “Nobody’s Fault But Mine,” which is pausetastic!
January 4th, 2025 20:52
blistered fingers
rin said:
I guess there is music called emotion in the spaces between the notes. This is my favorite poem.
January 4th, 2025 18:21
rin said:
I guess there is music called emotion in the spaces between the notes. This is my favorite poem.
January 4th, 2025 18:21
blistered fingers
Poetic Licence said:
The pause is important that is where you stamp your own mark, nicely written
January 4th, 2025 16:50
Poetic Licence said:
The pause is important that is where you stamp your own mark, nicely written
January 4th, 2025 16:50
blistered fingers
sorenbarrett said:
Two people playing the same song do not sound the same. Each puts their own soul into it. It is the white spaces that make it yours
January 4th, 2025 15:19
sorenbarrett said:
Two people playing the same song do not sound the same. Each puts their own soul into it. It is the white spaces that make it yours
January 4th, 2025 15:19
trauma
rin said:
I still have vague memories of trauma, but I don\'t think I can reject it because it\'s the path I\'ve taken.
January 4th, 2025 00:48
rin said:
I still have vague memories of trauma, but I don\'t think I can reject it because it\'s the path I\'ve taken.
January 4th, 2025 00:48
trauma
Poetic Licence said:
No one opens doors easily if they already know the horrors behind them. I have found with time, some i managed to have a peek through, some i opened and some i decided it was best i never opened again, but each person is different. I totally understand the feeling and emotion in this poem. All the best
January 3rd, 2025 21:20
Poetic Licence said:
No one opens doors easily if they already know the horrors behind them. I have found with time, some i managed to have a peek through, some i opened and some i decided it was best i never opened again, but each person is different. I totally understand the feeling and emotion in this poem. All the best
January 3rd, 2025 21:20
trauma
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor and it is hard to open doors that have no key. Hard to change what you have always been. A most existential poem.
January 3rd, 2025 20:58
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor and it is hard to open doors that have no key. Hard to change what you have always been. A most existential poem.
January 3rd, 2025 20:58
his sister
Poetic Licence said:
A very honest and emotional read, hope you are on the mend. Happy New Year To You and All
January 3rd, 2025 01:51
Poetic Licence said:
A very honest and emotional read, hope you are on the mend. Happy New Year To You and All
January 3rd, 2025 01:51
his sister
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I can see the emotion put into this piece, good write NinjaGirl. 👍
January 2nd, 2025 22:05
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I can see the emotion put into this piece, good write NinjaGirl. 👍
January 2nd, 2025 22:05
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