Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
in love with me
sorenbarrett said:
Such a home like feel and at the same time a solitary warmth. A most lovely read
May 19th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
Such a home like feel and at the same time a solitary warmth. A most lovely read
May 19th, 2025 12:31
in love with me
BlessedbyGod said:
In all honesty this piece is true , there is nobody out there that will be here for us or know what we want more then ourselves
We will always treat ourselves better than another person will
May 19th, 2025 12:13
BlessedbyGod said:
In all honesty this piece is true , there is nobody out there that will be here for us or know what we want more then ourselves
We will always treat ourselves better than another person will
May 19th, 2025 12:13
The cost of pain is change
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for something more comes through in this piece. How to be happy with oneself is another. It is difficult when society, family, friends are telling you what to do. That needs to come from you not them. I hear this too in this piece. It is a cry for acceptance from yourself and others and the two seldom are the same. Raw and heart felt it cries out.
May 18th, 2025 15:41
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for something more comes through in this piece. How to be happy with oneself is another. It is difficult when society, family, friends are telling you what to do. That needs to come from you not them. I hear this too in this piece. It is a cry for acceptance from yourself and others and the two seldom are the same. Raw and heart felt it cries out.
May 18th, 2025 15:41
The White Room
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An instant fave. Wow! Clinical, psychological, and deeply liminal. This poem blurs the line between sterility and suffering, evoking both an institution and a void. “Under observation,” “a single move and they’ll know,” and “he only stares back blank”—to me, all speak to powerlessness under scrutiny, like being trapped in a psych ward or purgatory. The absence of definition mirrors the collapse of identity or sanity, and it’s filled with an internal scream—that silence that’s louder than noise. It’s as if you’re in the sanitarium of your own mind. I totally relate, brilliant poet and friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An instant fave. Wow! Clinical, psychological, and deeply liminal. This poem blurs the line between sterility and suffering, evoking both an institution and a void. “Under observation,” “a single move and they’ll know,” and “he only stares back blank”—to me, all speak to powerlessness under scrutiny, like being trapped in a psych ward or purgatory. The absence of definition mirrors the collapse of identity or sanity, and it’s filled with an internal scream—that silence that’s louder than noise. It’s as if you’re in the sanitarium of your own mind. I totally relate, brilliant poet and friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:09
Eating
NafisaSB said:
i empathize with you - have heard a lot of comments when commented upon about y weight - although i always tried to avoid bingeing...and in fact was always trying to avoid what i enjoyed most [reverse factor here]
hope you will climb out of this stage soon...
May 14th, 2025 00:30
NafisaSB said:
i empathize with you - have heard a lot of comments when commented upon about y weight - although i always tried to avoid bingeing...and in fact was always trying to avoid what i enjoyed most [reverse factor here]
hope you will climb out of this stage soon...
May 14th, 2025 00:30
The White Room
sorenbarrett said:
We are all biased by our past so I see a hospital room and bed, not just any hospital but mental hospital and observation room with observing tech. But then I also see other things as well. Love poems that leave questions
May 13th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
We are all biased by our past so I see a hospital room and bed, not just any hospital but mental hospital and observation room with observing tech. But then I also see other things as well. Love poems that leave questions
May 13th, 2025 12:15
Eating
Poetic Licence said:
A important write that will be relatable to many, one of the hidden disorders that many suffer from for a multitude of reasons, nicely done
May 13th, 2025 02:22
Poetic Licence said:
A important write that will be relatable to many, one of the hidden disorders that many suffer from for a multitude of reasons, nicely done
May 13th, 2025 02:22
Eating
sorenbarrett said:
Eating disorders are serious and felt to beyond the person\'s control. Help is available but not all help works so find someone you can work with and trust. A brave write especially since most find it very hard to talk about and keep it secret.
May 12th, 2025 17:48
sorenbarrett said:
Eating disorders are serious and felt to beyond the person\'s control. Help is available but not all help works so find someone you can work with and trust. A brave write especially since most find it very hard to talk about and keep it secret.
May 12th, 2025 17:48
Eating
rrodriguez said:
I care... I work on my wife\'s weight and help her. So, yes, your message is relatable. So, thank you for sharing it. Be blessed!
May 12th, 2025 17:35
rrodriguez said:
I care... I work on my wife\'s weight and help her. So, yes, your message is relatable. So, thank you for sharing it. Be blessed!
May 12th, 2025 17:35
death to the past
Poetic Licence said:
Very creative layout and the write is very true, nicely expressed and written
May 9th, 2025 12:50
Poetic Licence said:
Very creative layout and the write is very true, nicely expressed and written
May 9th, 2025 12:50
death to the past
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🌟💪🥷 This poem. Wow! Brilliant ninja poetry, my friend. The form fits the frequency this is emitting out into the world on! Seriously, this is masterful, not to mention, profoundly true, and deserves many likes and faves in my humble opinion. Brava, dear poet and friend! 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 11:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🌟💪🥷 This poem. Wow! Brilliant ninja poetry, my friend. The form fits the frequency this is emitting out into the world on! Seriously, this is masterful, not to mention, profoundly true, and deserves many likes and faves in my humble opinion. Brava, dear poet and friend! 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 11:42
death to the past
sorenbarrett said:
Creative design and accompanying meaning. Very nicely written with poetic strength
May 9th, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
Creative design and accompanying meaning. Very nicely written with poetic strength
May 9th, 2025 11:22
an evening activity
hzugman said:
Wonderful picture you paint with words. Very good write.
May 7th, 2025 08:58
hzugman said:
Wonderful picture you paint with words. Very good write.
May 7th, 2025 08:58
an evening activity
Poetic Licence said:
A well written but sad and touching write around loneliness and isolation, very relatable to me and many others
May 7th, 2025 02:21
Poetic Licence said:
A well written but sad and touching write around loneliness and isolation, very relatable to me and many others
May 7th, 2025 02:21
an evening activity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very heartbreaking and the feeling of isolation and loneliness, depression, melancholy and the need for human touch and companionship. I have been here and the scars remain. Wonderful expression, my friend. 🌹👏❤️🩹
May 6th, 2025 20:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very heartbreaking and the feeling of isolation and loneliness, depression, melancholy and the need for human touch and companionship. I have been here and the scars remain. Wonderful expression, my friend. 🌹👏❤️🩹
May 6th, 2025 20:51
an evening activity
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lonely feel to this poem a feeling of isolation. It cries out for affiliation and love. Well written pulling at hearts and tears.
May 6th, 2025 20:27
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lonely feel to this poem a feeling of isolation. It cries out for affiliation and love. Well written pulling at hearts and tears.
May 6th, 2025 20:27
her death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Just
wow! I mean it. Speechless.
And my goodness, you have been missed my friend. This poem is not only brilliantly, hauntingly beautiful...
It is a sight for sore eyes as well! Hope all is well, dear NinjaPoet! 🌹👏 A fave!
May 5th, 2025 18:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Just
wow! I mean it. Speechless.
And my goodness, you have been missed my friend. This poem is not only brilliantly, hauntingly beautiful...
It is a sight for sore eyes as well! Hope all is well, dear NinjaPoet! 🌹👏 A fave!
May 5th, 2025 18:38
her death
sorenbarrett said:
Hard, powerful. Very nicely written. Well done. Very nice imagery in this poem
May 5th, 2025 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
Hard, powerful. Very nicely written. Well done. Very nice imagery in this poem
May 5th, 2025 16:36
watchtower
vicecream said:
You have captured so clearly here one of the biggest human themes i have seen time and time again throughout all times all places all faces- this. Very. Thing. Wonderful poem tho it makes my heart ache
April 29th, 2025 19:57
vicecream said:
You have captured so clearly here one of the biggest human themes i have seen time and time again throughout all times all places all faces- this. Very. Thing. Wonderful poem tho it makes my heart ache
April 29th, 2025 19:57
wolly mammoth
RSM0812 said:
You know, human beings playing God. Unfortunately it seems to be our nature.
April 23rd, 2025 06:50
RSM0812 said:
You know, human beings playing God. Unfortunately it seems to be our nature.
April 23rd, 2025 06:50
reflection
sorenbarrett said:
This one made me think. Very thought provoking. Short but well written
April 19th, 2025 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
This one made me think. Very thought provoking. Short but well written
April 19th, 2025 14:39
watchtower
RSM0812 said:
I really like the indifference of the wall. The wall doesn\'t feel it provides. Safety and such. And doesn\'t prefer the cause of the attackers or defenders. Really nicely written. One of my favs today for sure.
April 16th, 2025 19:10
RSM0812 said:
I really like the indifference of the wall. The wall doesn\'t feel it provides. Safety and such. And doesn\'t prefer the cause of the attackers or defenders. Really nicely written. One of my favs today for sure.
April 16th, 2025 19:10
Rage-filled Turns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
So verrrry cathartic, my friend. Dance...no...not just dance or performance, but the practice of it---the are of perfecting it---pushing oneself to jump and lift and stretch higher. A release. An explosion of raw energy (in this case rage) out into the cosmos. Something beautiful emerges. Not just the dancer, not just the dance, but...deliverance. And not just for the one dancing, but also for the ones who are blessed to experience the dance for themselves. A most brilliant metaphor for life and much more and, hopefully, I have not just murdered it! 🤣 But it really spoke so much to me, literally (I happen to love to dance) and metaphorically. Brava, my dear friend! You just positively slayed anyone who read this. Pure ninja brilliance. I mean that! 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 15:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
So verrrry cathartic, my friend. Dance...no...not just dance or performance, but the practice of it---the are of perfecting it---pushing oneself to jump and lift and stretch higher. A release. An explosion of raw energy (in this case rage) out into the cosmos. Something beautiful emerges. Not just the dancer, not just the dance, but...deliverance. And not just for the one dancing, but also for the ones who are blessed to experience the dance for themselves. A most brilliant metaphor for life and much more and, hopefully, I have not just murdered it! 🤣 But it really spoke so much to me, literally (I happen to love to dance) and metaphorically. Brava, my dear friend! You just positively slayed anyone who read this. Pure ninja brilliance. I mean that! 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 15:33
Rage-filled Turns
Poetic Licence said:
Life is like constantly going to the gym and going through different pain levels just to make a little progress. They say no pain no gain, but sometimes it is just too painful, nicely expressed and written write
April 14th, 2025 11:49
Poetic Licence said:
Life is like constantly going to the gym and going through different pain levels just to make a little progress. They say no pain no gain, but sometimes it is just too painful, nicely expressed and written write
April 14th, 2025 11:49
Rage-filled Turns
sorenbarrett said:
Took dance lessons for a year or two and at times it was painful but the fun after was worth it. But I take this as more than meets the eye. Live is a dance and at times learning that dance is painful. A lovely write
April 14th, 2025 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
Took dance lessons for a year or two and at times it was painful but the fun after was worth it. But I take this as more than meets the eye. Live is a dance and at times learning that dance is painful. A lovely write
April 14th, 2025 11:24
Jailers
Poetic Licence said:
Its all your point of view and the perspective you are coming from, nicely expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 02:19
Poetic Licence said:
Its all your point of view and the perspective you are coming from, nicely expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 02:19
Jailers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And how...they totally are! Well done on this. Loved this! What a beautiful bilingual poetic expression! A fave from me! 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 19:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And how...they totally are! Well done on this. Loved this! What a beautiful bilingual poetic expression! A fave from me! 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 19:05
Jailers
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they are subjective all is in the point of view. Well done
April 13th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they are subjective all is in the point of view. Well done
April 13th, 2025 16:14
watchtower
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write brick by brick we try to build relationships and trust, in the end realizing no one can be trusted, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 02:12
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write brick by brick we try to build relationships and trust, in the end realizing no one can be trusted, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 02:12
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