Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
too much on my plate
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve been here...and felt it. Today, as a matter of fact. The good news is that we poets turn such situations into poetry.Wonderful write! :)
September 30th, 2024 22:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve been here...and felt it. Today, as a matter of fact. The good news is that we poets turn such situations into poetry.Wonderful write! :)
September 30th, 2024 22:42
Mannequin
Dan Williams said:
This relationship is in dire need of adjustment. Well said.
September 24th, 2024 00:07
Dan Williams said:
This relationship is in dire need of adjustment. Well said.
September 24th, 2024 00:07
tiptoe
Dan Williams said:
Love sure can make sleeping an ordeal, eh? Nice work.
September 24th, 2024 00:00
Dan Williams said:
Love sure can make sleeping an ordeal, eh? Nice work.
September 24th, 2024 00:00
Mannequin
Cheeky Missy said:
I don\'t think it\'s mannequin, but rather a far uglier term applied to nonliving items where it wouldn\'t be half as satisfactory if you weren\'t so very alive. I don\'t know how to comfort you.
Excellently rendered with a biting poignancy and superb details. Thank you for sharing.
September 23rd, 2024 17:26
Cheeky Missy said:
I don\'t think it\'s mannequin, but rather a far uglier term applied to nonliving items where it wouldn\'t be half as satisfactory if you weren\'t so very alive. I don\'t know how to comfort you.
Excellently rendered with a biting poignancy and superb details. Thank you for sharing.
September 23rd, 2024 17:26
tiptoe
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent, evocative, beautifully haunting write! So glad you are on here sharing!
September 22nd, 2024 20:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent, evocative, beautifully haunting write! So glad you are on here sharing!
September 22nd, 2024 20:41
tiptoe
Cheeky Missy said:
Both tiptoe like a puddy tat on padded paws so as not to disturb the dead, and also find another, far different path to tread altogether, for replacing the hellish evil of that literal devil is virtually the only escape possible.
Excellently rendered with a haunting, beautifully painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 17:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Both tiptoe like a puddy tat on padded paws so as not to disturb the dead, and also find another, far different path to tread altogether, for replacing the hellish evil of that literal devil is virtually the only escape possible.
Excellently rendered with a haunting, beautifully painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 17:07
Me
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re you, regrettably forced to maturity before time, the necessary resort of waiting like a cat for her prey, or else like a mouse dreading pussy\'s return. I can\'t attempt to console you since I\'m not certain I\'d appreciate it were I in your case. Thank you for sharing. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy which reaches for the very soul. Excellent.
September 19th, 2024 19:59
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re you, regrettably forced to maturity before time, the necessary resort of waiting like a cat for her prey, or else like a mouse dreading pussy\'s return. I can\'t attempt to console you since I\'m not certain I\'d appreciate it were I in your case. Thank you for sharing. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy which reaches for the very soul. Excellent.
September 19th, 2024 19:59
kill me first
Mase ♪ said:
For I am convinced that neither death nor life, neither angels nor demons, neither the present nor the future, nor any powers, neither height nor depth, nor anything else in all creation, will be able to separate us from the love of God that is in Christ Jesus our Lord. Romans 8
September 14th, 2024 20:37
Mase ♪ said:
For I am convinced that neither death nor life, neither angels nor demons, neither the present nor the future, nor any powers, neither height nor depth, nor anything else in all creation, will be able to separate us from the love of God that is in Christ Jesus our Lord. Romans 8
September 14th, 2024 20:37
I CHOOSE ANGER
Dan Williams said:
Harsh. I do feel the need to remind that you don\'t forgive for the offender, you forgive for yourself. Give it time.
September 14th, 2024 00:30
Dan Williams said:
Harsh. I do feel the need to remind that you don\'t forgive for the offender, you forgive for yourself. Give it time.
September 14th, 2024 00:30
I\'ll always be less than you
MR.apocalypse said:
If you walk away what happens
You let him back in
It\'s a battle to fight
It\'s healing to win
The only way to stop is through you and not him
Walking away is never easy
But living like that is even harder
September 13th, 2024 20:46
MR.apocalypse said:
If you walk away what happens
You let him back in
It\'s a battle to fight
It\'s healing to win
The only way to stop is through you and not him
Walking away is never easy
But living like that is even harder
September 13th, 2024 20:46
I\'ll always be less than you
Mase ♪ said:
People think women are inferior to men, Haha.
September 13th, 2024 18:53
Mase ♪ said:
People think women are inferior to men, Haha.
September 13th, 2024 18:53
I CHOOSE ANGER
Lil said:
Plz be safe just remember no one can bring you down only you can.
September 13th, 2024 18:23
Lil said:
Plz be safe just remember no one can bring you down only you can.
September 13th, 2024 18:23
I\'ll always be less than you
Ladywithaquill said:
Nothing is ever right if it\'s a woman doing it.
September 13th, 2024 17:10
Ladywithaquill said:
Nothing is ever right if it\'s a woman doing it.
September 13th, 2024 17:10
I CHOOSE ANGER
MR.apocalypse said:
To hurt and kill will never be enough
To forgive and let be might not either
Nothing might be enough
For you
Except you
September 12th, 2024 20:24
MR.apocalypse said:
To hurt and kill will never be enough
To forgive and let be might not either
Nothing might be enough
For you
Except you
September 12th, 2024 20:24
anger is better than peace
AmIAPoet-QuestionMark said:
I love how you changed the font size to emphasize Anger!! Very creative and expressive.
Anger\'s not the answer tho. Anger is harder to hold on to, and hard to release.
September 12th, 2024 20:10
AmIAPoet-QuestionMark said:
I love how you changed the font size to emphasize Anger!! Very creative and expressive.
Anger\'s not the answer tho. Anger is harder to hold on to, and hard to release.
September 12th, 2024 20:10
\"no\"
AmIAPoet-QuestionMark said:
It\'s not your fault. Fuck him for doing that. But don\'t let it define you
September 12th, 2024 19:54
AmIAPoet-QuestionMark said:
It\'s not your fault. Fuck him for doing that. But don\'t let it define you
September 12th, 2024 19:54
thick thoughts
AmIAPoet-QuestionMark said:
Poetry is an amazing outlet, isn\'t it?? I\'ve found in my life and with what I write, if you \'feed the right wolf\' - that being the positive wolf that talks good to you, that leaves you with a smile, that gives you butterflies, that tastes like a powdered donut, then your life will get better and the past, though never forgotten, becomes the past, and you can focus on the present and the future.
I hope these words help you. I\'ve read some of your work and it\'s amazing! Dark, and amazing. Never stop! Get those words out. But also, look for the light and you\'ll find it. Look for the dark, and you\'ll find it too. Feed the dark wolf, and it may eventually eat you.
September 12th, 2024 18:09
AmIAPoet-QuestionMark said:
Poetry is an amazing outlet, isn\'t it?? I\'ve found in my life and with what I write, if you \'feed the right wolf\' - that being the positive wolf that talks good to you, that leaves you with a smile, that gives you butterflies, that tastes like a powdered donut, then your life will get better and the past, though never forgotten, becomes the past, and you can focus on the present and the future.
I hope these words help you. I\'ve read some of your work and it\'s amazing! Dark, and amazing. Never stop! Get those words out. But also, look for the light and you\'ll find it. Look for the dark, and you\'ll find it too. Feed the dark wolf, and it may eventually eat you.
September 12th, 2024 18:09
I CHOOSE ANGER
Cheeky Missy said:
My niece was less than 5 years old and he ruined her. Her uncles are furious and so am I. I know that will not help you, but, you\'re sadly far from alone in this unspeakable horror.
September 12th, 2024 16:35
Cheeky Missy said:
My niece was less than 5 years old and he ruined her. Her uncles are furious and so am I. I know that will not help you, but, you\'re sadly far from alone in this unspeakable horror.
September 12th, 2024 16:35
thick thoughts
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha. Ya. Marvelously rendered with a gripping poignancy and excellent details, this is one dangerous game. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 19:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha. Ya. Marvelously rendered with a gripping poignancy and excellent details, this is one dangerous game. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 19:32
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