Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
her death
sorenbarrett said:
Hard, powerful. Very nicely written. Well done. Very nice imagery in this poem
May 5th, 2025 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
Hard, powerful. Very nicely written. Well done. Very nice imagery in this poem
May 5th, 2025 16:36
watchtower
vicecream said:
You have captured so clearly here one of the biggest human themes i have seen time and time again throughout all times all places all faces- this. Very. Thing. Wonderful poem tho it makes my heart ache
April 29th, 2025 19:57
vicecream said:
You have captured so clearly here one of the biggest human themes i have seen time and time again throughout all times all places all faces- this. Very. Thing. Wonderful poem tho it makes my heart ache
April 29th, 2025 19:57
wolly mammoth
RSM0812 said:
You know, human beings playing God. Unfortunately it seems to be our nature.
April 23rd, 2025 06:50
RSM0812 said:
You know, human beings playing God. Unfortunately it seems to be our nature.
April 23rd, 2025 06:50
reflection
sorenbarrett said:
This one made me think. Very thought provoking. Short but well written
April 19th, 2025 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
This one made me think. Very thought provoking. Short but well written
April 19th, 2025 14:39
watchtower
RSM0812 said:
I really like the indifference of the wall. The wall doesn\'t feel it provides. Safety and such. And doesn\'t prefer the cause of the attackers or defenders. Really nicely written. One of my favs today for sure.
April 16th, 2025 19:10
RSM0812 said:
I really like the indifference of the wall. The wall doesn\'t feel it provides. Safety and such. And doesn\'t prefer the cause of the attackers or defenders. Really nicely written. One of my favs today for sure.
April 16th, 2025 19:10
Rage-filled Turns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
So verrrry cathartic, my friend. Dance...no...not just dance or performance, but the practice of it---the are of perfecting it---pushing oneself to jump and lift and stretch higher. A release. An explosion of raw energy (in this case rage) out into the cosmos. Something beautiful emerges. Not just the dancer, not just the dance, but...deliverance. And not just for the one dancing, but also for the ones who are blessed to experience the dance for themselves. A most brilliant metaphor for life and much more and, hopefully, I have not just murdered it! 🤣 But it really spoke so much to me, literally (I happen to love to dance) and metaphorically. Brava, my dear friend! You just positively slayed anyone who read this. Pure ninja brilliance. I mean that! 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 15:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
So verrrry cathartic, my friend. Dance...no...not just dance or performance, but the practice of it---the are of perfecting it---pushing oneself to jump and lift and stretch higher. A release. An explosion of raw energy (in this case rage) out into the cosmos. Something beautiful emerges. Not just the dancer, not just the dance, but...deliverance. And not just for the one dancing, but also for the ones who are blessed to experience the dance for themselves. A most brilliant metaphor for life and much more and, hopefully, I have not just murdered it! 🤣 But it really spoke so much to me, literally (I happen to love to dance) and metaphorically. Brava, my dear friend! You just positively slayed anyone who read this. Pure ninja brilliance. I mean that! 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 15:33
Rage-filled Turns
Poetic Licence said:
Life is like constantly going to the gym and going through different pain levels just to make a little progress. They say no pain no gain, but sometimes it is just too painful, nicely expressed and written write
April 14th, 2025 11:49
Poetic Licence said:
Life is like constantly going to the gym and going through different pain levels just to make a little progress. They say no pain no gain, but sometimes it is just too painful, nicely expressed and written write
April 14th, 2025 11:49
Rage-filled Turns
sorenbarrett said:
Took dance lessons for a year or two and at times it was painful but the fun after was worth it. But I take this as more than meets the eye. Live is a dance and at times learning that dance is painful. A lovely write
April 14th, 2025 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
Took dance lessons for a year or two and at times it was painful but the fun after was worth it. But I take this as more than meets the eye. Live is a dance and at times learning that dance is painful. A lovely write
April 14th, 2025 11:24
Jailers
Poetic Licence said:
Its all your point of view and the perspective you are coming from, nicely expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 02:19
Poetic Licence said:
Its all your point of view and the perspective you are coming from, nicely expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 02:19
Jailers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And how...they totally are! Well done on this. Loved this! What a beautiful bilingual poetic expression! A fave from me! 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 19:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And how...they totally are! Well done on this. Loved this! What a beautiful bilingual poetic expression! A fave from me! 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 19:05
Jailers
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they are subjective all is in the point of view. Well done
April 13th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they are subjective all is in the point of view. Well done
April 13th, 2025 16:14
watchtower
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write brick by brick we try to build relationships and trust, in the end realizing no one can be trusted, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 02:12
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write brick by brick we try to build relationships and trust, in the end realizing no one can be trusted, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 02:12
watchtower
sorenbarrett said:
A psychological understanding cast in metaphor so well constructed. Line by line brick by brick a poem built that leads to an unacceptable but inevitable ending where none are to be trusted. Without trust one can not tell the truth. Great write a fave
April 9th, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
A psychological understanding cast in metaphor so well constructed. Line by line brick by brick a poem built that leads to an unacceptable but inevitable ending where none are to be trusted. Without trust one can not tell the truth. Great write a fave
April 9th, 2025 15:05
Divided
NafisaSB said:
politics and politicians - best avoided - they seek to divide people as they feel they can gain votes - reform is a far cry, though sorely needed
April 8th, 2025 00:46
NafisaSB said:
politics and politicians - best avoided - they seek to divide people as they feel they can gain votes - reform is a far cry, though sorely needed
April 8th, 2025 00:46
sharp metal
NafisaSB said:
just today morning my sister told me she had cut herself, and the wound was deep
i am just glad it was only physical, and will soon heal
April 6th, 2025 02:58
NafisaSB said:
just today morning my sister told me she had cut herself, and the wound was deep
i am just glad it was only physical, and will soon heal
April 6th, 2025 02:58
Divided
spilleronsheet said:
The true world…the only reality that seems ignored but true to core…well written dear poet
April 3rd, 2025 14:39
spilleronsheet said:
The true world…the only reality that seems ignored but true to core…well written dear poet
April 3rd, 2025 14:39
Divided
Poetic Licence said:
To those who create division and hatred and continue to fuel the fire unity is there biggest fear, I hope one day people put politics to one side and come together to do what is right for all, not just the elite, loved the read
April 2nd, 2025 12:07
Poetic Licence said:
To those who create division and hatred and continue to fuel the fire unity is there biggest fear, I hope one day people put politics to one side and come together to do what is right for all, not just the elite, loved the read
April 2nd, 2025 12:07
Divided
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a flawed process in a flawed system. Very well written.
April 2nd, 2025 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a flawed process in a flawed system. Very well written.
April 2nd, 2025 10:22
Divided
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Preach it sister! Amen! 💯 You are wise and this poem is absolutely needed! Another swipe of your katana! #ResistTheMachine 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2025 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Preach it sister! Amen! 💯 You are wise and this poem is absolutely needed! Another swipe of your katana! #ResistTheMachine 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2025 09:21
The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting and different way of looking at how love and punishment are handed out. It raises alot of thought and pondering, well written, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 04:36
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting and different way of looking at how love and punishment are handed out. It raises alot of thought and pondering, well written, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 04:36
The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare
sorenbarrett said:
There is some deep philosophical thought in these three stanzas. Might i offer that we all tend to judge things on a human scale the universe and death are not human and have a different measuring stick. Pain is prejudiced not at all equal in its treatment of individuals. Love and care again very unequal. To me death is an equalizer happening to all without discrimination. What we see as justice is not part of the universal game where there are no winners or loosers only players. Very nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 02:48
sorenbarrett said:
There is some deep philosophical thought in these three stanzas. Might i offer that we all tend to judge things on a human scale the universe and death are not human and have a different measuring stick. Pain is prejudiced not at all equal in its treatment of individuals. Love and care again very unequal. To me death is an equalizer happening to all without discrimination. What we see as justice is not part of the universal game where there are no winners or loosers only players. Very nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 02:48
The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I am humbled and super excited to see this! Indeed, how just is death if it is the reward for the oppressed is the same exact thing as the punishment for the oppressor. That is a strange, if not cruel, sort of out come to be calling \"level\", let alone the differences at how the two arrived there, though in the end, it is a level in the sense that all go through it, but not all go through it equally and no \"justice\" involved in it, just a reality we all must face and there\'s no avoiding it, rich or not. But, it is not equal in how or when it is distributed. Well done on this, my dear friend. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 00:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I am humbled and super excited to see this! Indeed, how just is death if it is the reward for the oppressed is the same exact thing as the punishment for the oppressor. That is a strange, if not cruel, sort of out come to be calling \"level\", let alone the differences at how the two arrived there, though in the end, it is a level in the sense that all go through it, but not all go through it equally and no \"justice\" involved in it, just a reality we all must face and there\'s no avoiding it, rich or not. But, it is not equal in how or when it is distributed. Well done on this, my dear friend. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 00:02
10 stories
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted and structured write, leading you to the ultimate end, nice write
March 31st, 2025 14:01
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted and structured write, leading you to the ultimate end, nice write
March 31st, 2025 14:01
10 stories
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and dark at the beginning becoming darker as it goes on and black at the end. Wow! very impactful.
March 31st, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and dark at the beginning becoming darker as it goes on and black at the end. Wow! very impactful.
March 31st, 2025 12:57
10 stories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem fall with impact, my friend! The creative structure felt like each stage of the fall with the point, such an urgent message, being the ground! Well done! A fave from me for its creativity and boldness. 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem fall with impact, my friend! The creative structure felt like each stage of the fall with the point, such an urgent message, being the ground! Well done! A fave from me for its creativity and boldness. 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:49
sharp metal
Damaso said:
What a painful and sad landscape is described in this poem. Anyone who has been there knows better than to judge the reasons. I hope all the wounds heal. Very beautiful. Greetings.
March 29th, 2025 08:44
Damaso said:
What a painful and sad landscape is described in this poem. Anyone who has been there knows better than to judge the reasons. I hope all the wounds heal. Very beautiful. Greetings.
March 29th, 2025 08:44
sharp metal
sorenbarrett said:
Literal or metaphoric it resounds with pain. Pain and concern. Why do we all injure ourselves in one way or another? Self destructive in relationships, business, politics, driving, it doesn\'t matter knowing better makes no difference. A raw and powerful poem, brave.
March 29th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Literal or metaphoric it resounds with pain. Pain and concern. Why do we all injure ourselves in one way or another? Self destructive in relationships, business, politics, driving, it doesn\'t matter knowing better makes no difference. A raw and powerful poem, brave.
March 29th, 2025 03:52
sharp metal
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s got a blade
That’s sharper than anything
Man made
Have a great
Weekend
March 29th, 2025 01:46
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s got a blade
That’s sharper than anything
Man made
Have a great
Weekend
March 29th, 2025 01:46
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