Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
Handprints
sorenbarrett said:
A very clever use of metaphor here sadly all too real. Very nicely worded it bleeds its message. A fave
September 4th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
A very clever use of metaphor here sadly all too real. Very nicely worded it bleeds its message. A fave
September 4th, 2025 12:06
The Blood of a Self-Sacrifice
RSM0812 said:
You are one of the best poets on the sight Ninjagirl. This another beautiful write. Keep it going.
September 4th, 2025 10:15
RSM0812 said:
You are one of the best poets on the sight Ninjagirl. This another beautiful write. Keep it going.
September 4th, 2025 10:15
The Blood of a Self-Sacrifice
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done and with deep meaning as well. Loved it
September 3rd, 2025 14:49
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done and with deep meaning as well. Loved it
September 3rd, 2025 14:49
Callous Contemplation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest 🥷, this one hit me deep. The stillness around those thoughts makes it even heavier…quiet, relentless, and haunting. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Wonderful job, my friend!
September 3rd, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest 🥷, this one hit me deep. The stillness around those thoughts makes it even heavier…quiet, relentless, and haunting. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Wonderful job, my friend!
September 3rd, 2025 10:50
I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Wow this is a well written poem, love it.
September 3rd, 2025 08:01
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Wow this is a well written poem, love it.
September 3rd, 2025 08:01
what else is there to say?
Tom Dylan said:
Just brilliant! Love it! Absolute work of art!
September 3rd, 2025 01:58
Tom Dylan said:
Just brilliant! Love it! Absolute work of art!
September 3rd, 2025 01:58
Callous Contemplation
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and packed with tension this poem dives deep into the psyche. A relief in sleep but wakeful hours are highly tense.
September 2nd, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and packed with tension this poem dives deep into the psyche. A relief in sleep but wakeful hours are highly tense.
September 2nd, 2025 16:16
what else is there to say?
Doggerel Dave said:
Heard it all before, but never like that - might have changed my mind if I had...
September 1st, 2025 18:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Heard it all before, but never like that - might have changed my mind if I had...
September 1st, 2025 18:07
what else is there to say?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh.........my...........fucking............damn..
This poem deserves to be framed and preserved for eternity. The pain/longing/loneliness/ocean of isolation that is in a tear, displayed both visually and thematically in the most profound way. My God, this is a truly 🥷 move from you, my dearest friend...and I am not just blowing smoke darts here. This is amazing and easily one of my faves from you...or pretty much anyone. Proof that one need not be wordy to spark a cosmos of meaning, emotions and thought! Just wow! 🤯 How this is not more faved is beyond me...just know a FOREVER FAVE from me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2025 14:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh.........my...........fucking............damn..
This poem deserves to be framed and preserved for eternity. The pain/longing/loneliness/ocean of isolation that is in a tear, displayed both visually and thematically in the most profound way. My God, this is a truly 🥷 move from you, my dearest friend...and I am not just blowing smoke darts here. This is amazing and easily one of my faves from you...or pretty much anyone. Proof that one need not be wordy to spark a cosmos of meaning, emotions and thought! Just wow! 🤯 How this is not more faved is beyond me...just know a FOREVER FAVE from me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2025 14:06
The Man
Neville said:
Cor blimey .. I wasn\'t expecting that .. it kinda did what you said on the tin .. it just crept up on me ..
September 1st, 2025 11:37
Neville said:
Cor blimey .. I wasn\'t expecting that .. it kinda did what you said on the tin .. it just crept up on me ..
September 1st, 2025 11:37
what else is there to say?
sorenbarrett said:
In a tear drop shape this poem speaks of pain that they did not cause. Most creative
September 1st, 2025 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
In a tear drop shape this poem speaks of pain that they did not cause. Most creative
September 1st, 2025 11:26
The Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment where she freezes before the bite…that image is chilling. It’s the stillness that makes the violence land even deeper. Powerful work, my dear 🥷 poet friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2025 17:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment where she freezes before the bite…that image is chilling. It’s the stillness that makes the violence land even deeper. Powerful work, my dear 🥷 poet friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2025 17:17
The Man
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor? Taking advantage of someone unsuspecting whether as a vampire or a sexual vampire is equally bad. A most interesting write where horror becomes real.
August 31st, 2025 15:30
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor? Taking advantage of someone unsuspecting whether as a vampire or a sexual vampire is equally bad. A most interesting write where horror becomes real.
August 31st, 2025 15:30
She was a Flower
sorenbarrett said:
Creative a dual perspective and a sad story. Nicely done
August 30th, 2025 19:49
sorenbarrett said:
Creative a dual perspective and a sad story. Nicely done
August 30th, 2025 19:49
Agnus Dei
sunshine777 said:
This is deep. Maybe one day we can stop carrying this cross. Does it count if our innocence is taken against our will....
August 29th, 2025 06:45
sunshine777 said:
This is deep. Maybe one day we can stop carrying this cross. Does it count if our innocence is taken against our will....
August 29th, 2025 06:45
Agnus Dei
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of sacrifice, an offering of innocence that may have deep implications. Nicely written
August 29th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of sacrifice, an offering of innocence that may have deep implications. Nicely written
August 29th, 2025 04:09
I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember
NafisaSB said:
certain memories are so painful, that it\'s best to find relief from closure, and try to forget them, and move on in life..never try to dredge them up and hurt you once again
August 27th, 2025 00:12
NafisaSB said:
certain memories are so painful, that it\'s best to find relief from closure, and try to forget them, and move on in life..never try to dredge them up and hurt you once again
August 27th, 2025 00:12
I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember
RSM0812 said:
Memory can be selective. Sometimes are conscience protects us, sometimes it guilts us. I really like your writing. You are a great modern poet.
August 25th, 2025 11:43
RSM0812 said:
Memory can be selective. Sometimes are conscience protects us, sometimes it guilts us. I really like your writing. You are a great modern poet.
August 25th, 2025 11:43
I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, my dear friend. I could already feel your pain in the title and the poem; but your note hit me deep as well. I want to say this up front, your anger is completely on point and valid. Righteous even. It\'s incredible what we can remember/can\'t forget versus what we can\'t remember/do forget. Defense mechanisms. In my understanding of God, dear friend, it is not that God is doing it to you. It happened to you to no fault of your own and not because God willed it. The trauma causes us to protect ourselves. Defense mechanisms we have. So, in that sense, we can say God gave us the ability to survive terrible, awful trauma. At least, that is how I have come to understand it. That said, God hears your cries, dear friend, and is with you...in Spirit, yes! But also through the presence of those who love you....in person, online, wherever. You are loved by me and many others on here...and as I see it, that is God too! That said, I also believe God understands our need to cry out and God has gifted you with the ability to express it, get it out so that others can read, relate and find presence through your words. How many people (in the Psalms alone) call out to God the way you just did here? So relatable. God hears and God is with you, my friend. As your poem brilliantly expresses, forgetting is its own scar—it’s not fake, it’s survival. You named that truth in a way that hits hard and stays. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
August 24th, 2025 17:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, my dear friend. I could already feel your pain in the title and the poem; but your note hit me deep as well. I want to say this up front, your anger is completely on point and valid. Righteous even. It\'s incredible what we can remember/can\'t forget versus what we can\'t remember/do forget. Defense mechanisms. In my understanding of God, dear friend, it is not that God is doing it to you. It happened to you to no fault of your own and not because God willed it. The trauma causes us to protect ourselves. Defense mechanisms we have. So, in that sense, we can say God gave us the ability to survive terrible, awful trauma. At least, that is how I have come to understand it. That said, God hears your cries, dear friend, and is with you...in Spirit, yes! But also through the presence of those who love you....in person, online, wherever. You are loved by me and many others on here...and as I see it, that is God too! That said, I also believe God understands our need to cry out and God has gifted you with the ability to express it, get it out so that others can read, relate and find presence through your words. How many people (in the Psalms alone) call out to God the way you just did here? So relatable. God hears and God is with you, my friend. As your poem brilliantly expresses, forgetting is its own scar—it’s not fake, it’s survival. You named that truth in a way that hits hard and stays. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
August 24th, 2025 17:51
I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember
sorenbarrett said:
Memory can be cruel or kind it also can be accurate or distorted. I choose to remember the good things, it leaves me happy. Digging for garbage stinks but if one wants to build on top of it sometimes it needs to be removed. To remove it though sometimes requires professional help so as to not expose oneself to too much toxic waste. Well written
August 24th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Memory can be cruel or kind it also can be accurate or distorted. I choose to remember the good things, it leaves me happy. Digging for garbage stinks but if one wants to build on top of it sometimes it needs to be removed. To remove it though sometimes requires professional help so as to not expose oneself to too much toxic waste. Well written
August 24th, 2025 04:24
I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember
Demar Desu said:
Great poem… what a way to turn anger into art
August 24th, 2025 03:07
Demar Desu said:
Great poem… what a way to turn anger into art
August 24th, 2025 03:07
I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember
Neville said:
Very clever indeed .. skilfully crafted and with both feeling and meaning .. Neville
August 24th, 2025 02:37
Neville said:
Very clever indeed .. skilfully crafted and with both feeling and meaning .. Neville
August 24th, 2025 02:37
I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember
Cheeky Missy said:
It\'s a protective measure. What you\'ll be horrified to learn later is how memories which now are inaccessible will be triggered to rear their heads when you least expect it. Or so I\'ve experienced. Excellently rendered with great imagery and a deadly poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there.
August 24th, 2025 01:31
Cheeky Missy said:
It\'s a protective measure. What you\'ll be horrified to learn later is how memories which now are inaccessible will be triggered to rear their heads when you least expect it. Or so I\'ve experienced. Excellently rendered with great imagery and a deadly poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there.
August 24th, 2025 01:31
Harmless
NafisaSB said:
wow, the anger, the pain and then the anti climax...well done
August 20th, 2025 00:19
NafisaSB said:
wow, the anger, the pain and then the anti climax...well done
August 20th, 2025 00:19
What could have been
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷 poet , this is quiet but devastating…each “maybe” pulling me closer to that final, unshakable truth. The restraint in your words makes the impact hit even harder. Very, very relatable. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2025 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷 poet , this is quiet but devastating…each “maybe” pulling me closer to that final, unshakable truth. The restraint in your words makes the impact hit even harder. Very, very relatable. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2025 09:51
What could have been
sorenbarrett said:
That common thought that most have of what if. What could have been, should have been, would have been never are able to be answered. A very powerful statement the last sentence. It rings out in anguish of regret and doubt. But a broken child may still find repair within themselves if given a chance for the glue to dry and the cement to set. A lovely write NinjaGirl
August 15th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
That common thought that most have of what if. What could have been, should have been, would have been never are able to be answered. A very powerful statement the last sentence. It rings out in anguish of regret and doubt. But a broken child may still find repair within themselves if given a chance for the glue to dry and the cement to set. A lovely write NinjaGirl
August 15th, 2025 04:55
What could have been
Poetic Licence said:
Questions I and many others have always asked like yourself. There are those who will say it happened when you were a child, you should of got over it by now. To me your last line says it all, I have tried my whole life to find a repair kit that works and I haven\'t. For me a raw write, nicely expressed and written
August 15th, 2025 00:41
Poetic Licence said:
Questions I and many others have always asked like yourself. There are those who will say it happened when you were a child, you should of got over it by now. To me your last line says it all, I have tried my whole life to find a repair kit that works and I haven\'t. For me a raw write, nicely expressed and written
August 15th, 2025 00:41
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