Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
sleepless nights
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic is this poem. The rhyme holds me like a magnet and it rolls on pulling me with it. A wonderful short
February 27th, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic is this poem. The rhyme holds me like a magnet and it rolls on pulling me with it. A wonderful short
February 27th, 2025 14:26
looking like crap
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, I feel bad being a man sometimes as we don\'t generally have any pressure like this.
February 27th, 2025 08:39
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, I feel bad being a man sometimes as we don\'t generally have any pressure like this.
February 27th, 2025 08:39
looking like crap
Cassie58 said:
Chocolate is a great soother and comfort on those days when everything else sucks. Hope you have better days ahead. Enjoyed your poem. I’m a chocolate lover.
February 27th, 2025 03:34
Cassie58 said:
Chocolate is a great soother and comfort on those days when everything else sucks. Hope you have better days ahead. Enjoyed your poem. I’m a chocolate lover.
February 27th, 2025 03:34
goodbye
Shellsea said:
You seem steady in your choice to say goodbye. love it.
February 26th, 2025 22:10
Shellsea said:
You seem steady in your choice to say goodbye. love it.
February 26th, 2025 22:10
looking like crap
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It really was one of those days. Hence my rabbit hole adventure this morning! 🤣 Well expressed, my friend. Right there with you, minus the mascara and bun (no hair...its sadly a thing). 🌹👏
February 26th, 2025 22:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It really was one of those days. Hence my rabbit hole adventure this morning! 🤣 Well expressed, my friend. Right there with you, minus the mascara and bun (no hair...its sadly a thing). 🌹👏
February 26th, 2025 22:05
looking like crap
Mutley Ravishes said:
Morihei Ueshiba once said, \"I am the universe.\" Now, that\'s not something you hear everyday!
February 26th, 2025 18:19
Mutley Ravishes said:
Morihei Ueshiba once said, \"I am the universe.\" Now, that\'s not something you hear everyday!
February 26th, 2025 18:19
looking like crap
Distant View said:
This made me smile. Some days it does feel as though the universe is against you! We all have to face such times. A poem I\'m sure most people can readily relate to!
February 26th, 2025 16:11
Distant View said:
This made me smile. Some days it does feel as though the universe is against you! We all have to face such times. A poem I\'m sure most people can readily relate to!
February 26th, 2025 16:11
looking like crap
sorenbarrett said:
No it is just called entropy. All a matter of perspective and winding down. Fun read
February 26th, 2025 14:14
sorenbarrett said:
No it is just called entropy. All a matter of perspective and winding down. Fun read
February 26th, 2025 14:14
looking like crap
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Honestly, this is too perfect. If only the whole world could see this, it\'d resonate with countless. Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and an exquisite poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 13:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Honestly, this is too perfect. If only the whole world could see this, it\'d resonate with countless. Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and an exquisite poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 13:51
goodbye
RSM0812 said:
Sometimes people need to know that they have someone in their corner. I really like this read.
February 26th, 2025 09:49
RSM0812 said:
Sometimes people need to know that they have someone in their corner. I really like this read.
February 26th, 2025 09:49
goodbye
Poetic Licence said:
Sadness, pain, determination and positivity all in one write, nicely done
February 26th, 2025 01:46
Poetic Licence said:
Sadness, pain, determination and positivity all in one write, nicely done
February 26th, 2025 01:46
goodbye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was painful to read, beautiful and painful. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹👏
February 25th, 2025 20:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was painful to read, beautiful and painful. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹👏
February 25th, 2025 20:14
directions to love
Doggerel Dave said:
So long as I get some reciprocal handling...
February 25th, 2025 05:38
Doggerel Dave said:
So long as I get some reciprocal handling...
February 25th, 2025 05:38
directions to love
RSM0812 said:
Where was your advice before my wife left me. Aughhhhh. Lol. Just kidding. Nice read. You make a great point in great form and good choice of words. Your very wise. But again I\'m assuming your a female bc of your pseudonym. If i find another love one day your advise I will wholeheartedly take. Sometimes you can unbeknownst to yourself you can take things or people ( or women) you love for granted. Unfortunatley. And you don\'t realize it until it\'s all gone.
February 25th, 2025 00:20
RSM0812 said:
Where was your advice before my wife left me. Aughhhhh. Lol. Just kidding. Nice read. You make a great point in great form and good choice of words. Your very wise. But again I\'m assuming your a female bc of your pseudonym. If i find another love one day your advise I will wholeheartedly take. Sometimes you can unbeknownst to yourself you can take things or people ( or women) you love for granted. Unfortunatley. And you don\'t realize it until it\'s all gone.
February 25th, 2025 00:20
directions to love
sorenbarrett said:
In some ways this metaphor can be taken several ways and although love is implied it may be any one of sever others. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 22:05
sorenbarrett said:
In some ways this metaphor can be taken several ways and although love is implied it may be any one of sever others. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 22:05
directions to love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww! You deserve that love too. If you haven\'t found it yet, I have faith that you will. Don\'t settle for less than what you wrote above! You deserve to be loved and handled with care, not broken! A most beautiful write, my friend! 🌹👏
February 24th, 2025 20:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww! You deserve that love too. If you haven\'t found it yet, I have faith that you will. Don\'t settle for less than what you wrote above! You deserve to be loved and handled with care, not broken! A most beautiful write, my friend! 🌹👏
February 24th, 2025 20:27
surrender
Funmiwrites said:
Nicely done,
I like the end, it indeed the offender that forces us to surrender.
February 24th, 2025 14:11
Funmiwrites said:
Nicely done,
I like the end, it indeed the offender that forces us to surrender.
February 24th, 2025 14:11
distort
NafisaSB said:
we all have these moments- they are disheartening, but thankfully they go away
February 24th, 2025 00:08
NafisaSB said:
we all have these moments- they are disheartening, but thankfully they go away
February 24th, 2025 00:08
distort
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Distorted soup sounds like my mental space! 😂 Your poem is brilliant and true! Well done!, my friend 👏🌹
February 23rd, 2025 23:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Distorted soup sounds like my mental space! 😂 Your poem is brilliant and true! Well done!, my friend 👏🌹
February 23rd, 2025 23:12
assaulted
TommyDingo said:
So heart breaking such a sad thing to read your so brave for sharing I hope your ok ❤
February 23rd, 2025 19:51
TommyDingo said:
So heart breaking such a sad thing to read your so brave for sharing I hope your ok ❤
February 23rd, 2025 19:51
distort
sorenbarrett said:
Wondering if this is connected with the last. It describes well the state of mind that occurs after trauma. Well written
February 23rd, 2025 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
Wondering if this is connected with the last. It describes well the state of mind that occurs after trauma. Well written
February 23rd, 2025 16:09
assaulted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
People say lots of things, and then show what side they are talking out of the very next minute. Don’t listen to assholes. Only mouths should be talking to you! Well done ion this poem! 💯 truth! Sorry you have to endure methane when coming up for air. It makes the abuse worse, I know, even though I DO NOT know what it is like to be sexually assaulted as a child. Anyone who claims “to know” without experiencing, and tells you to move on, isn’t truly caring for you. They’re shielding themselves…at best. Again, well done my friend. 🌹👏 You are a beautiful soul, wise, and extremely talented! Glad our paths crossed.
February 23rd, 2025 07:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
People say lots of things, and then show what side they are talking out of the very next minute. Don’t listen to assholes. Only mouths should be talking to you! Well done ion this poem! 💯 truth! Sorry you have to endure methane when coming up for air. It makes the abuse worse, I know, even though I DO NOT know what it is like to be sexually assaulted as a child. Anyone who claims “to know” without experiencing, and tells you to move on, isn’t truly caring for you. They’re shielding themselves…at best. Again, well done my friend. 🌹👏 You are a beautiful soul, wise, and extremely talented! Glad our paths crossed.
February 23rd, 2025 07:36
assaulted
sorenbarrett said:
Horrific! No no one can ever know what another person has been through even if they have it is different for everyone. That is why some people get PTSD and others don\'t people are different and react different even to the same circumstances. This poem was hard to read and although I have worked with many abuse survivors each is different. A brave write.
February 22nd, 2025 20:06
sorenbarrett said:
Horrific! No no one can ever know what another person has been through even if they have it is different for everyone. That is why some people get PTSD and others don\'t people are different and react different even to the same circumstances. This poem was hard to read and although I have worked with many abuse survivors each is different. A brave write.
February 22nd, 2025 20:06
desperation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I get this for sure! Well expressed! Loved the word play and depth! 🙏❤️
February 21st, 2025 21:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I get this for sure! Well expressed! Loved the word play and depth! 🙏❤️
February 21st, 2025 21:15
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