Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
My own writing
sorenbarrett said:
Sanguine and heart felt. Although powerful sad. Ink will do.
September 10th, 2025 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
Sanguine and heart felt. Although powerful sad. Ink will do.
September 10th, 2025 15:08
S(WORDS)
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in the title. The poem follows suit each line with an aspect. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in the title. The poem follows suit each line with an aspect. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 03:51
A Piece of Paper
Friendship said:
OMG, well written, poem \"A Piece of Paper\" revolves around the concept of mistakes and the often humorous yet chaotic consequences that can arise from them. It personifies a piece of paper, illustrating how a small error (spilling ink) can lead to increasingly disastrous outcomes, ultimately suggesting that some mistakes are better left unaddressed or that they might spiral out of control.
September 8th, 2025 15:41
Friendship said:
OMG, well written, poem \"A Piece of Paper\" revolves around the concept of mistakes and the often humorous yet chaotic consequences that can arise from them. It personifies a piece of paper, illustrating how a small error (spilling ink) can lead to increasingly disastrous outcomes, ultimately suggesting that some mistakes are better left unaddressed or that they might spiral out of control.
September 8th, 2025 15:41
A Piece of Paper
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I’ve felt life fold in on itself the way you describe here, 🥷. Thin as paper, yet carrying stories, scars, and truths that cut deep. You captured it with clarity, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I’ve felt life fold in on itself the way you describe here, 🥷. Thin as paper, yet carrying stories, scars, and truths that cut deep. You captured it with clarity, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:50
A Piece of Paper
sorenbarrett said:
A series of consequences that remind me of childhood and many such actions that lead from one mistake to another getting each time worse. A most fun read and it well could be a metaphor. Nicely done
September 7th, 2025 16:56
sorenbarrett said:
A series of consequences that remind me of childhood and many such actions that lead from one mistake to another getting each time worse. A most fun read and it well could be a metaphor. Nicely done
September 7th, 2025 16:56
Role Model
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Straight from the heart. It really spoke the words. That\'s what I call poetey.
Perhaps it\'s my limitation that I can\'t understand euphemistic excusion into the void of metaphorical metaphores. Sorry for the whinging.
September 6th, 2025 11:13
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Straight from the heart. It really spoke the words. That\'s what I call poetey.
Perhaps it\'s my limitation that I can\'t understand euphemistic excusion into the void of metaphorical metaphores. Sorry for the whinging.
September 6th, 2025 11:13
Role Model
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is raw and powerful. Moving from the little girl to the teen to yourself now, you give voice to pain that too often stays hidden...and that close, “I will speak loud,” lands with strength for so many. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ You are most courageous and definitely a great role model in my eyes!
September 6th, 2025 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is raw and powerful. Moving from the little girl to the teen to yourself now, you give voice to pain that too often stays hidden...and that close, “I will speak loud,” lands with strength for so many. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ You are most courageous and definitely a great role model in my eyes!
September 6th, 2025 10:07
The Blood of a Self-Sacrifice
Tooway said:
This is a great poem, I feel like discussing and lamenting every line, Nice one
September 5th, 2025 20:09
Tooway said:
This is a great poem, I feel like discussing and lamenting every line, Nice one
September 5th, 2025 20:09
Role Model
sorenbarrett said:
Speak out. yell it from the mountain tops if it helps it is good I use poetry to cleanse what is inside. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 15:27
sorenbarrett said:
Speak out. yell it from the mountain tops if it helps it is good I use poetry to cleanse what is inside. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 15:27
I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember
Tooway said:
Wish I could forget, different sides off a coin :)
September 5th, 2025 12:30
Tooway said:
Wish I could forget, different sides off a coin :)
September 5th, 2025 12:30
Handprints
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful piece, 🥷. You turned something simple into a timeline of memory and harm. Strong, unflinching writing. As your work is...and I love it! A fave, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful piece, 🥷. You turned something simple into a timeline of memory and harm. Strong, unflinching writing. As your work is...and I love it! A fave, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:18
The Blood of a Self-Sacrifice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, 🥷. The repetition works like an echo of pain...circling back, unavoidable, completely raw. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 16:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, 🥷. The repetition works like an echo of pain...circling back, unavoidable, completely raw. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 16:27
Handprints
sorenbarrett said:
A very clever use of metaphor here sadly all too real. Very nicely worded it bleeds its message. A fave
September 4th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
A very clever use of metaphor here sadly all too real. Very nicely worded it bleeds its message. A fave
September 4th, 2025 12:06
The Blood of a Self-Sacrifice
RSM0812 said:
You are one of the best poets on the sight Ninjagirl. This another beautiful write. Keep it going.
September 4th, 2025 10:15
RSM0812 said:
You are one of the best poets on the sight Ninjagirl. This another beautiful write. Keep it going.
September 4th, 2025 10:15
The Blood of a Self-Sacrifice
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done and with deep meaning as well. Loved it
September 3rd, 2025 14:49
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done and with deep meaning as well. Loved it
September 3rd, 2025 14:49
Callous Contemplation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest 🥷, this one hit me deep. The stillness around those thoughts makes it even heavier…quiet, relentless, and haunting. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Wonderful job, my friend!
September 3rd, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest 🥷, this one hit me deep. The stillness around those thoughts makes it even heavier…quiet, relentless, and haunting. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Wonderful job, my friend!
September 3rd, 2025 10:50
I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow this is a well written poem, love it.
September 3rd, 2025 08:01
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow this is a well written poem, love it.
September 3rd, 2025 08:01
what else is there to say?
Tom Dylan said:
Just brilliant! Love it! Absolute work of art!
September 3rd, 2025 01:58
Tom Dylan said:
Just brilliant! Love it! Absolute work of art!
September 3rd, 2025 01:58
Callous Contemplation
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and packed with tension this poem dives deep into the psyche. A relief in sleep but wakeful hours are highly tense.
September 2nd, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and packed with tension this poem dives deep into the psyche. A relief in sleep but wakeful hours are highly tense.
September 2nd, 2025 16:16
what else is there to say?
Doggerel Dave said:
Heard it all before, but never like that - might have changed my mind if I had...
September 1st, 2025 18:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Heard it all before, but never like that - might have changed my mind if I had...
September 1st, 2025 18:07
what else is there to say?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh.........my...........fucking............damn..
This poem deserves to be framed and preserved for eternity. The pain/longing/loneliness/ocean of isolation that is in a tear, displayed both visually and thematically in the most profound way. My God, this is a truly 🥷 move from you, my dearest friend...and I am not just blowing smoke darts here. This is amazing and easily one of my faves from you...or pretty much anyone. Proof that one need not be wordy to spark a cosmos of meaning, emotions and thought! Just wow! 🤯 How this is not more faved is beyond me...just know a FOREVER FAVE from me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2025 14:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh.........my...........fucking............damn..
This poem deserves to be framed and preserved for eternity. The pain/longing/loneliness/ocean of isolation that is in a tear, displayed both visually and thematically in the most profound way. My God, this is a truly 🥷 move from you, my dearest friend...and I am not just blowing smoke darts here. This is amazing and easily one of my faves from you...or pretty much anyone. Proof that one need not be wordy to spark a cosmos of meaning, emotions and thought! Just wow! 🤯 How this is not more faved is beyond me...just know a FOREVER FAVE from me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2025 14:06
The Man
Neville said:
Cor blimey .. I wasn\'t expecting that .. it kinda did what you said on the tin .. it just crept up on me ..
September 1st, 2025 11:37
Neville said:
Cor blimey .. I wasn\'t expecting that .. it kinda did what you said on the tin .. it just crept up on me ..
September 1st, 2025 11:37
what else is there to say?
sorenbarrett said:
In a tear drop shape this poem speaks of pain that they did not cause. Most creative
September 1st, 2025 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
In a tear drop shape this poem speaks of pain that they did not cause. Most creative
September 1st, 2025 11:26
The Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment where she freezes before the bite…that image is chilling. It’s the stillness that makes the violence land even deeper. Powerful work, my dear 🥷 poet friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2025 17:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment where she freezes before the bite…that image is chilling. It’s the stillness that makes the violence land even deeper. Powerful work, my dear 🥷 poet friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2025 17:17
The Man
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor? Taking advantage of someone unsuspecting whether as a vampire or a sexual vampire is equally bad. A most interesting write where horror becomes real.
August 31st, 2025 15:30
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor? Taking advantage of someone unsuspecting whether as a vampire or a sexual vampire is equally bad. A most interesting write where horror becomes real.
August 31st, 2025 15:30
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