Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare
sorenbarrett said:
There is some deep philosophical thought in these three stanzas. Might i offer that we all tend to judge things on a human scale the universe and death are not human and have a different measuring stick. Pain is prejudiced not at all equal in its treatment of individuals. Love and care again very unequal. To me death is an equalizer happening to all without discrimination. What we see as justice is not part of the universal game where there are no winners or loosers only players. Very nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 02:48
sorenbarrett said:
There is some deep philosophical thought in these three stanzas. Might i offer that we all tend to judge things on a human scale the universe and death are not human and have a different measuring stick. Pain is prejudiced not at all equal in its treatment of individuals. Love and care again very unequal. To me death is an equalizer happening to all without discrimination. What we see as justice is not part of the universal game where there are no winners or loosers only players. Very nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 02:48
The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I am humbled and super excited to see this! Indeed, how just is death if it is the reward for the oppressed is the same exact thing as the punishment for the oppressor. That is a strange, if not cruel, sort of out come to be calling \"level\", let alone the differences at how the two arrived there, though in the end, it is a level in the sense that all go through it, but not all go through it equally and no \"justice\" involved in it, just a reality we all must face and there\'s no avoiding it, rich or not. But, it is not equal in how or when it is distributed. Well done on this, my dear friend. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 00:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I am humbled and super excited to see this! Indeed, how just is death if it is the reward for the oppressed is the same exact thing as the punishment for the oppressor. That is a strange, if not cruel, sort of out come to be calling \"level\", let alone the differences at how the two arrived there, though in the end, it is a level in the sense that all go through it, but not all go through it equally and no \"justice\" involved in it, just a reality we all must face and there\'s no avoiding it, rich or not. But, it is not equal in how or when it is distributed. Well done on this, my dear friend. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 00:02
10 stories
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted and structured write, leading you to the ultimate end, nice write
March 31st, 2025 14:01
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted and structured write, leading you to the ultimate end, nice write
March 31st, 2025 14:01
10 stories
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and dark at the beginning becoming darker as it goes on and black at the end. Wow! very impactful.
March 31st, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and dark at the beginning becoming darker as it goes on and black at the end. Wow! very impactful.
March 31st, 2025 12:57
10 stories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem fall with impact, my friend! The creative structure felt like each stage of the fall with the point, such an urgent message, being the ground! Well done! A fave from me for its creativity and boldness. 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem fall with impact, my friend! The creative structure felt like each stage of the fall with the point, such an urgent message, being the ground! Well done! A fave from me for its creativity and boldness. 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:49
sharp metal
Damaso said:
What a painful and sad landscape is described in this poem. Anyone who has been there knows better than to judge the reasons. I hope all the wounds heal. Very beautiful. Greetings.
March 29th, 2025 08:44
Damaso said:
What a painful and sad landscape is described in this poem. Anyone who has been there knows better than to judge the reasons. I hope all the wounds heal. Very beautiful. Greetings.
March 29th, 2025 08:44
sharp metal
sorenbarrett said:
Literal or metaphoric it resounds with pain. Pain and concern. Why do we all injure ourselves in one way or another? Self destructive in relationships, business, politics, driving, it doesn\'t matter knowing better makes no difference. A raw and powerful poem, brave.
March 29th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Literal or metaphoric it resounds with pain. Pain and concern. Why do we all injure ourselves in one way or another? Self destructive in relationships, business, politics, driving, it doesn\'t matter knowing better makes no difference. A raw and powerful poem, brave.
March 29th, 2025 03:52
sharp metal
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s got a blade
That’s sharper than anything
Man made
Have a great
Weekend
March 29th, 2025 01:46
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s got a blade
That’s sharper than anything
Man made
Have a great
Weekend
March 29th, 2025 01:46
sharp metal
Poetic Licence said:
Honest,raw and powerful write that will relate to many , it\'s much common than people are prepared to acknowledge
March 28th, 2025 21:00
Poetic Licence said:
Honest,raw and powerful write that will relate to many , it\'s much common than people are prepared to acknowledge
March 28th, 2025 21:00
sharp metal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I know you know I relate to this one! Well expressed, friend. A reality for so many! Thank you, as always, for your willingness to make yourself vulnerable! 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛🦇❤️🩹
March 28th, 2025 20:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I know you know I relate to this one! Well expressed, friend. A reality for so many! Thank you, as always, for your willingness to make yourself vulnerable! 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛🦇❤️🩹
March 28th, 2025 20:57
wolly mammoth
MR.apocalypse said:
right 100% thats whay we need to stop funding these random and unhelpfull government agencys
March 17th, 2025 13:10
MR.apocalypse said:
right 100% thats whay we need to stop funding these random and unhelpfull government agencys
March 17th, 2025 13:10
wolly mammoth
sorenbarrett said:
Science follows funding not priorities unfortunately. A poignant write that gets to the heart of why things are the way they are.
March 10th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Science follows funding not priorities unfortunately. A poignant write that gets to the heart of why things are the way they are.
March 10th, 2025 04:09
wolly mammoth
Poetic Licence said:
It is astounding what some people consider priority in life, valid point, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:31
Poetic Licence said:
It is astounding what some people consider priority in life, valid point, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:31
wolly mammoth
Mutley Ravishes said:
Try checking out what\'s happening to the plankton in the oceans.
March 10th, 2025 02:39
Mutley Ravishes said:
Try checking out what\'s happening to the plankton in the oceans.
March 10th, 2025 02:39
wolly mammoth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Perhaps they\'re working on a more docile mammal to inhabit the White House? 🤣 I mean, could be? 🤷♂️ All jokes aside, you ain\'t kidding...not to mention, wasn\'t their an entire sci-fi book and film series devoted to warning us as to why that is a VERY BAD IDEA? Well done on this, my friend!!! 🦣🐁
March 9th, 2025 22:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Perhaps they\'re working on a more docile mammal to inhabit the White House? 🤣 I mean, could be? 🤷♂️ All jokes aside, you ain\'t kidding...not to mention, wasn\'t their an entire sci-fi book and film series devoted to warning us as to why that is a VERY BAD IDEA? Well done on this, my friend!!! 🦣🐁
March 9th, 2025 22:37
silent plea
RSM0812 said:
Sounds lonely. Time for a cup of hot chocolate and a cigarette.
March 9th, 2025 16:36
RSM0812 said:
Sounds lonely. Time for a cup of hot chocolate and a cigarette.
March 9th, 2025 16:36
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The plain speaking rebel talks in this poem. Yes and more yes, we need more of this. Wonderful!
March 9th, 2025 09:38
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The plain speaking rebel talks in this poem. Yes and more yes, we need more of this. Wonderful!
March 9th, 2025 09:38
silent plea
Poetic Licence said:
Hope the prayers are answered, powerful and sad write
March 7th, 2025 14:01
Poetic Licence said:
Hope the prayers are answered, powerful and sad write
March 7th, 2025 14:01
silent plea
sorenbarrett said:
When holding on over a long fall it is surprising how long one can hold on. A most heart felt read
March 7th, 2025 12:22
sorenbarrett said:
When holding on over a long fall it is surprising how long one can hold on. A most heart felt read
March 7th, 2025 12:22
The In-Between
Cassie58 said:
Great title and a place I recognize. Well done NinjaGirl.
March 5th, 2025 18:37
Cassie58 said:
Great title and a place I recognize. Well done NinjaGirl.
March 5th, 2025 18:37
The In-Between
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a place I\'ve been often. Great descriptive words. Lovely
March 5th, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a place I\'ve been often. Great descriptive words. Lovely
March 5th, 2025 13:30
the paid price
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was witty, clever and rang so wonderfully that I had to ready it three times over! You are not just any ninja my friend...you are a brilliant ninja! An easy fave for me.🌹👏
March 5th, 2025 02:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was witty, clever and rang so wonderfully that I had to ready it three times over! You are not just any ninja my friend...you are a brilliant ninja! An easy fave for me.🌹👏
March 5th, 2025 02:11
the paid price
Poetic Licence said:
I got the sense of the cycle of abuse, how people are used,abused and disposed of for someone else to then use and abuse,a sad but very powerful write, clever in it\'s writings
March 4th, 2025 18:04
Poetic Licence said:
I got the sense of the cycle of abuse, how people are used,abused and disposed of for someone else to then use and abuse,a sad but very powerful write, clever in it\'s writings
March 4th, 2025 18:04
the paid price
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is something different. So well worded and cleverly structured it rolls off the tongue but rattles in the mind. The meaning of this may be many but what I took was feelings of being discarded, when there is an expectation of being cared for, of being nothing more than an object to be purchased and used therefore abused. A sad poem of people treated as objects. Whether a child, woman or weak person treated as a slave and or disposable property. Gut wrenching. A most ingenious write deserving of a fave.
March 4th, 2025 17:14
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is something different. So well worded and cleverly structured it rolls off the tongue but rattles in the mind. The meaning of this may be many but what I took was feelings of being discarded, when there is an expectation of being cared for, of being nothing more than an object to be purchased and used therefore abused. A sad poem of people treated as objects. Whether a child, woman or weak person treated as a slave and or disposable property. Gut wrenching. A most ingenious write deserving of a fave.
March 4th, 2025 17:14
paranoid
Firefall said:
Love your poem! Wonderful capture of that paranoid feeling.
March 4th, 2025 16:01
Firefall said:
Love your poem! Wonderful capture of that paranoid feeling.
March 4th, 2025 16:01
Time Passes
Cassie58 said:
A lovely poem which conveys some dark imagery. Yes change isn’t always for the good, but we have to live in hope. We have to keep that light at the end of the tunnel. Enjoyed reading you Ninjagirl.
March 4th, 2025 03:37
Cassie58 said:
A lovely poem which conveys some dark imagery. Yes change isn’t always for the good, but we have to live in hope. We have to keep that light at the end of the tunnel. Enjoyed reading you Ninjagirl.
March 4th, 2025 03:37
looking like crap
NafisaSB said:
so poignantly expressed -most of us have had those days- i wish they will occur with less frequency, or disappear altogether
March 4th, 2025 00:17
NafisaSB said:
so poignantly expressed -most of us have had those days- i wish they will occur with less frequency, or disappear altogether
March 4th, 2025 00:17
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