Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
Oh God,
AlitaOpal said:
A beautiful prayer almost beckoning retribution, but didn\'t you know that you will always be forgiven despite everything you do.. life is a gift, knowing this realise good and bad are the same energy.. you could never be anything more than what god created you to be.. Love in its purest form, casted in the realm of duality.. I love this poem as I was once questioning the same thing.. stay wonderful and blessed 🌹
October 3rd, 2023 21:56
AlitaOpal said:
A beautiful prayer almost beckoning retribution, but didn\'t you know that you will always be forgiven despite everything you do.. life is a gift, knowing this realise good and bad are the same energy.. you could never be anything more than what god created you to be.. Love in its purest form, casted in the realm of duality.. I love this poem as I was once questioning the same thing.. stay wonderful and blessed 🌹
October 3rd, 2023 21:56
I wish society would stop joking about it...
GeekSusie said:
Thank you for sharing such a profound and moving expression of your feelings. Your words remind us of the gravity of PTSD and the immense emotional weight it can carry. It\'s essential for all of us to be compassionate and understanding, recognizing that everyone\'s pain and struggles are unique and real. Please know that I hear you, and your strength is evident in your words. Always remember, you are not alone in your journey, and there are people and resources out there to support you.
October 1st, 2023 14:09
GeekSusie said:
Thank you for sharing such a profound and moving expression of your feelings. Your words remind us of the gravity of PTSD and the immense emotional weight it can carry. It\'s essential for all of us to be compassionate and understanding, recognizing that everyone\'s pain and struggles are unique and real. Please know that I hear you, and your strength is evident in your words. Always remember, you are not alone in your journey, and there are people and resources out there to support you.
October 1st, 2023 14:09
My Suicide Note to My Abuser
L. B. Mek said:
I hope and pray
this was just an artistic outlet
A release of repressed emotions
But
The very fact that you put this
out in the world, gives me hope
That you have found your path
of healing
and that monster, will never win!
(\'STAY\' strong! dear poet)
there are some
wonderful people here at mps
if you need to reach out
or you can try those closer to you
or a helpline, maybe a professional
never
feel that you are out of
options,
reach out! and Fight the good fight
(thank you
for choosing to share
how BRAVE!)
September 29th, 2023 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
I hope and pray
this was just an artistic outlet
A release of repressed emotions
But
The very fact that you put this
out in the world, gives me hope
That you have found your path
of healing
and that monster, will never win!
(\'STAY\' strong! dear poet)
there are some
wonderful people here at mps
if you need to reach out
or you can try those closer to you
or a helpline, maybe a professional
never
feel that you are out of
options,
reach out! and Fight the good fight
(thank you
for choosing to share
how BRAVE!)
September 29th, 2023 05:46
☁the dream☁
MyFeelingsInWriting said:
This poem hit me on so many different levels. I love it
September 15th, 2023 11:41
MyFeelingsInWriting said:
This poem hit me on so many different levels. I love it
September 15th, 2023 11:41
☁the dream☁
L. B. Mek said:
so well written!
impassioned doesn\'t do it justice
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 15th, 2023 06:22
L. B. Mek said:
so well written!
impassioned doesn\'t do it justice
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 15th, 2023 06:22
☁the dream☁
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow!!!!! There are no other words !!! WOW!!!
September 14th, 2023 20:51
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow!!!!! There are no other words !!! WOW!!!
September 14th, 2023 20:51
Quiet
Pop64 said:
So much expressed in this write. It\'s so often not easy to talk about things, but writing about them can surely help.
September 1st, 2023 08:30
Pop64 said:
So much expressed in this write. It\'s so often not easy to talk about things, but writing about them can surely help.
September 1st, 2023 08:30
Quiet
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m proud of you for sharing these words
for giving a voice to those unheard
and even if you\'re pretending
a semblance of fine, to ink out these rhymes
that\'s just fine, whatever it takes
for you to manoeuvre away
from the hurt in your life..
thanks for sharing, stay strong
September 1st, 2023 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m proud of you for sharing these words
for giving a voice to those unheard
and even if you\'re pretending
a semblance of fine, to ink out these rhymes
that\'s just fine, whatever it takes
for you to manoeuvre away
from the hurt in your life..
thanks for sharing, stay strong
September 1st, 2023 04:33
Perfectionist
B.E.Poet said:
I partially get this. there are things in my life where i have to be perfect but when i\'m writing I tend to let my emotions flow and since im all over the place my writing is messy or weird. But I think this is a good poem i liked it.
May 15th, 2023 16:16
B.E.Poet said:
I partially get this. there are things in my life where i have to be perfect but when i\'m writing I tend to let my emotions flow and since im all over the place my writing is messy or weird. But I think this is a good poem i liked it.
May 15th, 2023 16:16
Bathroom Stall
Audrey A. said:
Whatever news you got, I hope it was on the better side of issues as issues go.
April 28th, 2023 17:40
Audrey A. said:
Whatever news you got, I hope it was on the better side of issues as issues go.
April 28th, 2023 17:40
Bathroom Stall
Bobby O said:
Honest and personal yet universal in message and offers shire that reminds and holds accountability in the chosen paths as a shared goal. I liked it. Nice.
April 28th, 2023 17:05
Bobby O said:
Honest and personal yet universal in message and offers shire that reminds and holds accountability in the chosen paths as a shared goal. I liked it. Nice.
April 28th, 2023 17:05
I\'m t i r e d
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.What would be helpful is to explain what you intend to do about it
April 25th, 2023 16:51
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.What would be helpful is to explain what you intend to do about it
April 25th, 2023 16:51
RAGE
Audrey A. said:
I take this wrath and channel it into a plate, one from the kitchen, and bring it somewhere where I can just smash it. Put all your strength and wrath into it. With one giant swing, smash it to the ground into a million pieces.
April 24th, 2023 20:18
Audrey A. said:
I take this wrath and channel it into a plate, one from the kitchen, and bring it somewhere where I can just smash it. Put all your strength and wrath into it. With one giant swing, smash it to the ground into a million pieces.
April 24th, 2023 20:18
My Conversation With Fear
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
a really creative and relatable read
have you seen/heard the song,
\'hi Ren\'
very similar to your poem\'s theme
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_nc1IVoMxc
)
April 24th, 2023 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
a really creative and relatable read
have you seen/heard the song,
\'hi Ren\'
very similar to your poem\'s theme
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_nc1IVoMxc
)
April 24th, 2023 05:29
Helpless.
jarcher54 said:
I hope the deep sadness you relate is largely in your imagination! But some intense and fine phrases, even if they are close to trite: Not cool to be standing on the roof! love it.
April 8th, 2023 12:33
jarcher54 said:
I hope the deep sadness you relate is largely in your imagination! But some intense and fine phrases, even if they are close to trite: Not cool to be standing on the roof! love it.
April 8th, 2023 12:33
\"Little slut\" \"Princess\" \"Baby girl\"
jarcher54 said:
Well this story is beautifully told and I for one hope to never forget it. It brought tears to my eyes.
April 7th, 2023 22:39
jarcher54 said:
Well this story is beautifully told and I for one hope to never forget it. It brought tears to my eyes.
April 7th, 2023 22:39
To All Those At My Funeral...
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, I know how it feels to feel this way,
My entire life was like a game of charades, I have been fake for 40 years, but not anymore, I left the situation and found healing and love and acceptance for who I really am, just so you know, you are worth it, you are strong enough to overcome this and you don\'t have to be fake, there are people like me that will accept you for who and what you are, no questions asked just be you, and anybody that has a problem with the real you, should look in the mirror and see what is looking back at them.
Hang in there, you got this, I\'m here for you
March 28th, 2023 12:05
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, I know how it feels to feel this way,
My entire life was like a game of charades, I have been fake for 40 years, but not anymore, I left the situation and found healing and love and acceptance for who I really am, just so you know, you are worth it, you are strong enough to overcome this and you don\'t have to be fake, there are people like me that will accept you for who and what you are, no questions asked just be you, and anybody that has a problem with the real you, should look in the mirror and see what is looking back at them.
Hang in there, you got this, I\'m here for you
March 28th, 2023 12:05
Attempter
Abby1234 said:
Very nice.
I tried to do it but then I became stressed when I thought of my family. Now I try it with cough drops. Doesn\'t work. So I stopped. This poem is so powerful. Amazing poem.
March 27th, 2023 13:01
Abby1234 said:
Very nice.
I tried to do it but then I became stressed when I thought of my family. Now I try it with cough drops. Doesn\'t work. So I stopped. This poem is so powerful. Amazing poem.
March 27th, 2023 13:01
Attempter
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Good poem. Suppose some of the best poetry, really is about real events...
And of course life for some... can be very sad. Peace... can be difficult to find.
Time... there are somethings... that just... never heal.
Anyway... Hope you\'re alive.
If you are... please, try and keep it that way.
Yes... sometimes it can be our own choice.
Or it can something that is imposed.
Many things are so.
Best luck.
March 24th, 2023 15:38
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Good poem. Suppose some of the best poetry, really is about real events...
And of course life for some... can be very sad. Peace... can be difficult to find.
Time... there are somethings... that just... never heal.
Anyway... Hope you\'re alive.
If you are... please, try and keep it that way.
Yes... sometimes it can be our own choice.
Or it can something that is imposed.
Many things are so.
Best luck.
March 24th, 2023 15:38
Silent Rainy Tears
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This is a very powerful and emotional poem. The imagery of the storm and the rain is used effectively to convey the feeling of being overwhelmed and consumed by fear and pain. The repetition of the phrase \"afraid\" emphasizes the sense of isolation and despair that the speaker is experiencing. However, the turning point of the poem, where the speaker sees a light in the distance and finds hope, is a powerful and uplifting moment. It\'s a reminder that even in the darkest of times, there is always a glimmer of hope to hold onto. Overall, this is a beautifully written and evocative poem that captures the struggle of facing one\'s fears and finding the strength to persevere.
March 22nd, 2023 13:05
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This is a very powerful and emotional poem. The imagery of the storm and the rain is used effectively to convey the feeling of being overwhelmed and consumed by fear and pain. The repetition of the phrase \"afraid\" emphasizes the sense of isolation and despair that the speaker is experiencing. However, the turning point of the poem, where the speaker sees a light in the distance and finds hope, is a powerful and uplifting moment. It\'s a reminder that even in the darkest of times, there is always a glimmer of hope to hold onto. Overall, this is a beautifully written and evocative poem that captures the struggle of facing one\'s fears and finding the strength to persevere.
March 22nd, 2023 13:05
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