Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
My Conversation With Fear
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
a really creative and relatable read
have you seen/heard the song,
\'hi Ren\'
very similar to your poem\'s theme
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_nc1IVoMxc
)
April 24th, 2023 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
a really creative and relatable read
have you seen/heard the song,
\'hi Ren\'
very similar to your poem\'s theme
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_nc1IVoMxc
)
April 24th, 2023 05:29
Helpless.
jarcher54 said:
I hope the deep sadness you relate is largely in your imagination! But some intense and fine phrases, even if they are close to trite: Not cool to be standing on the roof! love it.
April 8th, 2023 12:33
jarcher54 said:
I hope the deep sadness you relate is largely in your imagination! But some intense and fine phrases, even if they are close to trite: Not cool to be standing on the roof! love it.
April 8th, 2023 12:33
\"Little slut\" \"Princess\" \"Baby girl\"
jarcher54 said:
Well this story is beautifully told and I for one hope to never forget it. It brought tears to my eyes.
April 7th, 2023 22:39
jarcher54 said:
Well this story is beautifully told and I for one hope to never forget it. It brought tears to my eyes.
April 7th, 2023 22:39
To All Those At My Funeral...
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, I know how it feels to feel this way,
My entire life was like a game of charades, I have been fake for 40 years, but not anymore, I left the situation and found healing and love and acceptance for who I really am, just so you know, you are worth it, you are strong enough to overcome this and you don\'t have to be fake, there are people like me that will accept you for who and what you are, no questions asked just be you, and anybody that has a problem with the real you, should look in the mirror and see what is looking back at them.
Hang in there, you got this, I\'m here for you
March 28th, 2023 12:05
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, I know how it feels to feel this way,
My entire life was like a game of charades, I have been fake for 40 years, but not anymore, I left the situation and found healing and love and acceptance for who I really am, just so you know, you are worth it, you are strong enough to overcome this and you don\'t have to be fake, there are people like me that will accept you for who and what you are, no questions asked just be you, and anybody that has a problem with the real you, should look in the mirror and see what is looking back at them.
Hang in there, you got this, I\'m here for you
March 28th, 2023 12:05
Attempter
Abby1234 said:
Very nice.
I tried to do it but then I became stressed when I thought of my family. Now I try it with cough drops. Doesn\'t work. So I stopped. This poem is so powerful. Amazing poem.
March 27th, 2023 13:01
Abby1234 said:
Very nice.
I tried to do it but then I became stressed when I thought of my family. Now I try it with cough drops. Doesn\'t work. So I stopped. This poem is so powerful. Amazing poem.
March 27th, 2023 13:01
Attempter
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Good poem. Suppose some of the best poetry, really is about real events...
And of course life for some... can be very sad. Peace... can be difficult to find.
Time... there are somethings... that just... never heal.
Anyway... Hope you\'re alive.
If you are... please, try and keep it that way.
Yes... sometimes it can be our own choice.
Or it can something that is imposed.
Many things are so.
Best luck.
March 24th, 2023 15:38
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Good poem. Suppose some of the best poetry, really is about real events...
And of course life for some... can be very sad. Peace... can be difficult to find.
Time... there are somethings... that just... never heal.
Anyway... Hope you\'re alive.
If you are... please, try and keep it that way.
Yes... sometimes it can be our own choice.
Or it can something that is imposed.
Many things are so.
Best luck.
March 24th, 2023 15:38
Silent Rainy Tears
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This is a very powerful and emotional poem. The imagery of the storm and the rain is used effectively to convey the feeling of being overwhelmed and consumed by fear and pain. The repetition of the phrase \"afraid\" emphasizes the sense of isolation and despair that the speaker is experiencing. However, the turning point of the poem, where the speaker sees a light in the distance and finds hope, is a powerful and uplifting moment. It\'s a reminder that even in the darkest of times, there is always a glimmer of hope to hold onto. Overall, this is a beautifully written and evocative poem that captures the struggle of facing one\'s fears and finding the strength to persevere.
March 22nd, 2023 13:05
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This is a very powerful and emotional poem. The imagery of the storm and the rain is used effectively to convey the feeling of being overwhelmed and consumed by fear and pain. The repetition of the phrase \"afraid\" emphasizes the sense of isolation and despair that the speaker is experiencing. However, the turning point of the poem, where the speaker sees a light in the distance and finds hope, is a powerful and uplifting moment. It\'s a reminder that even in the darkest of times, there is always a glimmer of hope to hold onto. Overall, this is a beautifully written and evocative poem that captures the struggle of facing one\'s fears and finding the strength to persevere.
March 22nd, 2023 13:05
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