Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
Dread and Damnation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of symbolism where sins red as blood stain and tears of contrition atone removing the stain. Nicely done
November 3rd, 2025 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of symbolism where sins red as blood stain and tears of contrition atone removing the stain. Nicely done
November 3rd, 2025 03:34
Ghost Child
RSM0812 said:
This is really well writen. It expains the nonexistent souls and the darkness witin them. Nice ✍️
October 26th, 2025 14:53
RSM0812 said:
This is really well writen. It expains the nonexistent souls and the darkness witin them. Nice ✍️
October 26th, 2025 14:53
Answer me!
RSM0812 said:
This is full of great emotion and adversity. I loved the whole poem. Nice ✍️. 😀
October 26th, 2025 14:52
RSM0812 said:
This is full of great emotion and adversity. I loved the whole poem. Nice ✍️. 😀
October 26th, 2025 14:52
A Walk
NafisaSB said:
i find that what is up above is purer till it touches the ground [base] and that is where the dirt starts mingling..
so it is with life too..
[and by the way i too enjoy the rain till it soaks me and then i too start shivering]
October 24th, 2025 01:02
NafisaSB said:
i find that what is up above is purer till it touches the ground [base] and that is where the dirt starts mingling..
so it is with life too..
[and by the way i too enjoy the rain till it soaks me and then i too start shivering]
October 24th, 2025 01:02
Ghost Child
Friendship said:
well written, my friend. Your poem \"Ghost Child\" explores themes of isolation, identity, and the struggle for recognition in an increasingly disconnected world. The ghost child symbolizes a feeling of being unseen and misunderstood, existing in a state of limbo between reality and reflection.🐀
October 23rd, 2025 11:38
Friendship said:
well written, my friend. Your poem \"Ghost Child\" explores themes of isolation, identity, and the struggle for recognition in an increasingly disconnected world. The ghost child symbolizes a feeling of being unseen and misunderstood, existing in a state of limbo between reality and reflection.🐀
October 23rd, 2025 11:38
Ghost Child
sorenbarrett said:
There are people like this who have not formed their identity and do not see who they are. Then again being the season it could speak of ghosts or vampires that supposedly can not see their reflection. Nicely composed it has a haunting feeling.
October 22nd, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
There are people like this who have not formed their identity and do not see who they are. Then again being the season it could speak of ghosts or vampires that supposedly can not see their reflection. Nicely composed it has a haunting feeling.
October 22nd, 2025 04:10
Ghost Child
jarcher54 said:
Scaring and scared... perfect description of our imagined (or real?) ghosts... kind of like a rat... scares us to death but is more scared of us than we are of it. The ghostly being is as vulnerable as it is powerful... as confused as it is aggressive.
October 22nd, 2025 00:05
jarcher54 said:
Scaring and scared... perfect description of our imagined (or real?) ghosts... kind of like a rat... scares us to death but is more scared of us than we are of it. The ghostly being is as vulnerable as it is powerful... as confused as it is aggressive.
October 22nd, 2025 00:05
Answer me!
sorenbarrett said:
A most graphic description of anguish and desire for its removal. The imagery is well done here and very descriptive
October 21st, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most graphic description of anguish and desire for its removal. The imagery is well done here and very descriptive
October 21st, 2025 04:09
Answer me!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This piece is prayer stripped to bone. No artifice, no sermon…just the honest sound of suffering calling heaven’s name. It’s brutal, and it’s beautiful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, my poetic 🥷 friend
October 20th, 2025 21:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This piece is prayer stripped to bone. No artifice, no sermon…just the honest sound of suffering calling heaven’s name. It’s brutal, and it’s beautiful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, my poetic 🥷 friend
October 20th, 2025 21:40
A Walk
Doggerel Dave said:
That woz Mother Nature informing you that you rightfully belong in a white tiled shower recess with hot and cold running water. So leave her alone - too much human intervention in Mother\'s affairs these days........
October 16th, 2025 17:19
Doggerel Dave said:
That woz Mother Nature informing you that you rightfully belong in a white tiled shower recess with hot and cold running water. So leave her alone - too much human intervention in Mother\'s affairs these days........
October 16th, 2025 17:19
A Walk
sorenbarrett said:
This poem and metaphor is deeper than the surface. To be wet with nature\'s distilled rain, pure and clean is cleansing but it with time can make one cold. When mixed with the dirt of the earth it creates mud that takes away all the cleansing done and leaves one worse than before all it takes is a trip and fall. Once we have washed off all past dirt it is most discouraging to fall and have things worse than before. I once was on my way to teach a class and jumping a puddle slipped and fell in it. Besides having everyone around see me fall, I had to teach class dirty and make excuses for it. Nothing worse than falling after being clean. A great poem and a fave
October 16th, 2025 16:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem and metaphor is deeper than the surface. To be wet with nature\'s distilled rain, pure and clean is cleansing but it with time can make one cold. When mixed with the dirt of the earth it creates mud that takes away all the cleansing done and leaves one worse than before all it takes is a trip and fall. Once we have washed off all past dirt it is most discouraging to fall and have things worse than before. I once was on my way to teach a class and jumping a puddle slipped and fell in it. Besides having everyone around see me fall, I had to teach class dirty and make excuses for it. Nothing worse than falling after being clean. A great poem and a fave
October 16th, 2025 16:10
A Walk
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the juxtaposition of nature\'s beauty and its challenging aspects, specifically through the experience of walking in the rain. The central idea revolves around the duality of nature, portraying it as both refreshing and liberating, yet also uncomfortable and messy. The subject matter includes personal experiences with rain, mud, and the emotions tied to these natural elements.
October 16th, 2025 16:08
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the juxtaposition of nature\'s beauty and its challenging aspects, specifically through the experience of walking in the rain. The central idea revolves around the duality of nature, portraying it as both refreshing and liberating, yet also uncomfortable and messy. The subject matter includes personal experiences with rain, mud, and the emotions tied to these natural elements.
October 16th, 2025 16:08
Taking its Toll
sorenbarrett said:
Selfishness is an expensive past time or hobby. Short but pregnant with meaning.
October 16th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Selfishness is an expensive past time or hobby. Short but pregnant with meaning.
October 16th, 2025 04:11
me and the rain
RSM0812 said:
This envokes an unwelcome sadness like being caught in a storm and the rain are your tears. Seeiously, nicely done.
October 15th, 2025 08:00
RSM0812 said:
This envokes an unwelcome sadness like being caught in a storm and the rain are your tears. Seeiously, nicely done.
October 15th, 2025 08:00
me and the rain
sorenbarrett said:
Always easier to give up but not always better. A heartfelt poem of joining nature and leaving this shell behind. Sad and dark in a light way. Nicely done
October 14th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Always easier to give up but not always better. A heartfelt poem of joining nature and leaving this shell behind. Sad and dark in a light way. Nicely done
October 14th, 2025 09:33
Escape
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is quiet devastation…the kind that doesn’t shout, just lingers. Justice, guilt, escape—all folded into a single haunting reflection. Brilliant minimalism, my friend. You did what you had to do and such things are out of your control. Your cry for justice, no doubt (as evidenced by this introspective and empathetic poem), is for your little brother too. I pray for justice for you too, my friend. For both of you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is quiet devastation…the kind that doesn’t shout, just lingers. Justice, guilt, escape—all folded into a single haunting reflection. Brilliant minimalism, my friend. You did what you had to do and such things are out of your control. Your cry for justice, no doubt (as evidenced by this introspective and empathetic poem), is for your little brother too. I pray for justice for you too, my friend. For both of you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:04
Escape
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic question that asks one to step outside themselves and judge one\'s own behaviors on the same scale that one judges others. A most lovely write of introspection. Nicely done
October 14th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic question that asks one to step outside themselves and judge one\'s own behaviors on the same scale that one judges others. A most lovely write of introspection. Nicely done
October 14th, 2025 03:44
Escape
Keyara S Trotman said:
Wonderfully written here. This is definitely one that is worth the read. I like how you’ve ended it with such notice as with a question, which you stated “If I left a little one behind in the same unjust situation?” Great question dear, we may not know the answer, yet what would you say is justice to you, although mainly and deeply this is much so about justice entirely.
Overall nicely done here 🥂✨👏🏻
October 14th, 2025 00:51
Keyara S Trotman said:
Wonderfully written here. This is definitely one that is worth the read. I like how you’ve ended it with such notice as with a question, which you stated “If I left a little one behind in the same unjust situation?” Great question dear, we may not know the answer, yet what would you say is justice to you, although mainly and deeply this is much so about justice entirely.
Overall nicely done here 🥂✨👏🏻
October 14th, 2025 00:51
Clipping My Nails
arial said:
It\'s feels like I have to live but the resistance in my body humbles my breathe
Great write ..
October 12th, 2025 12:57
arial said:
It\'s feels like I have to live but the resistance in my body humbles my breathe
Great write ..
October 12th, 2025 12:57
Torture
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is haunting…so human in its breaking. And no...they just don\'t get it. At all. The soapy glass, the sleepless eyes, the rawness of “please stop”...it all bleeds truth. The restraint makes the pain echo longer. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 12th, 2025 07:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is haunting…so human in its breaking. And no...they just don\'t get it. At all. The soapy glass, the sleepless eyes, the rawness of “please stop”...it all bleeds truth. The restraint makes the pain echo longer. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 12th, 2025 07:33
Torture
Paul Bell said:
Remember, a child in need, is usually someone who does your head in.
You can choose your friends, unfortunately you\'re stuck with the other lot.
October 12th, 2025 05:58
Paul Bell said:
Remember, a child in need, is usually someone who does your head in.
You can choose your friends, unfortunately you\'re stuck with the other lot.
October 12th, 2025 05:58
Torture
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the irritation and aggravation in this poem. It calls out for relief. Nicely worded with a most interesting metaphor of a soapy glass in dishwater. Well done
October 12th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the irritation and aggravation in this poem. It calls out for relief. Nicely worded with a most interesting metaphor of a soapy glass in dishwater. Well done
October 12th, 2025 03:49
Clipping My Nails
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷 my friend, this is quietly profound—an everyday ritual turned confession. You captured fatigue, care, and the small triumph of doing something for yourself. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷 my friend, this is quietly profound—an everyday ritual turned confession. You captured fatigue, care, and the small triumph of doing something for yourself. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:18
Clipping My Nails
RSM0812 said:
Nails grow even in death. They are humanitys claws. Nice write.
October 11th, 2025 06:04
RSM0812 said:
Nails grow even in death. They are humanitys claws. Nice write.
October 11th, 2025 06:04
Clipping My Nails
Poetic Licence said:
I really like this very relatable write, the desire to look after oneself knowing we feel good when we have done, but feeling exhausted and worn by the struggles of life, we lack any energy to undertake the simplest of things, well written
October 10th, 2025 20:38
Poetic Licence said:
I really like this very relatable write, the desire to look after oneself knowing we feel good when we have done, but feeling exhausted and worn by the struggles of life, we lack any energy to undertake the simplest of things, well written
October 10th, 2025 20:38
Clipping My Nails
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting analogy that you make with days and hours growing as well as nails. Clipping nails shows that even the most mundane of tasks can be used to make a poem. Well done
October 10th, 2025 20:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting analogy that you make with days and hours growing as well as nails. Clipping nails shows that even the most mundane of tasks can be used to make a poem. Well done
October 10th, 2025 20:26
Clipping My Nails
Friendship said:
The poem \"Clipping My Nails\" explores the theme of self-care and the struggle with maintaining personal rituals amidst the pressures of daily life. It reflects the tension between the desire for perfection and the fatigue that often prevents us from accomplishing even simple tasks.
October 10th, 2025 19:59
Friendship said:
The poem \"Clipping My Nails\" explores the theme of self-care and the struggle with maintaining personal rituals amidst the pressures of daily life. It reflects the tension between the desire for perfection and the fatigue that often prevents us from accomplishing even simple tasks.
October 10th, 2025 19:59
Lighter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷 my friend, I’ve felt that kind of fight...where the smallest act takes all your strength. You made that moment of effort burn with meaning. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷 my friend, I’ve felt that kind of fight...where the smallest act takes all your strength. You made that moment of effort burn with meaning. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:56
Lighter
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Lighter\" explores the struggle to ignite a spark, both literally and metaphorically. It reflects on the effort required to produce light and warmth, suggesting deeper themes of struggle, frustration, and perhaps the yearning for illumination or clarity in life.
October 9th, 2025 07:59
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Lighter\" explores the struggle to ignite a spark, both literally and metaphorically. It reflects on the effort required to produce light and warmth, suggesting deeper themes of struggle, frustration, and perhaps the yearning for illumination or clarity in life.
October 9th, 2025 07:59
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