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Doggerel Dave said:
So long as I get some reciprocal handling...
February 25th, 2025 05:38
Doggerel Dave said:
So long as I get some reciprocal handling...
February 25th, 2025 05:38
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RSM0812 said:
Where was your advice before my wife left me. Aughhhhh. Lol. Just kidding. Nice read. You make a great point in great form and good choice of words. Your very wise. But again I\'m assuming your a female bc of your pseudonym. If i find another love one day your advise I will wholeheartedly take. Sometimes you can unbeknownst to yourself you can take things or people ( or women) you love for granted. Unfortunatley. And you don\'t realize it until it\'s all gone.
February 25th, 2025 00:20
RSM0812 said:
Where was your advice before my wife left me. Aughhhhh. Lol. Just kidding. Nice read. You make a great point in great form and good choice of words. Your very wise. But again I\'m assuming your a female bc of your pseudonym. If i find another love one day your advise I will wholeheartedly take. Sometimes you can unbeknownst to yourself you can take things or people ( or women) you love for granted. Unfortunatley. And you don\'t realize it until it\'s all gone.
February 25th, 2025 00:20
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sorenbarrett said:
In some ways this metaphor can be taken several ways and although love is implied it may be any one of sever others. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 22:05
sorenbarrett said:
In some ways this metaphor can be taken several ways and although love is implied it may be any one of sever others. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 22:05
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww! You deserve that love too. If you haven\'t found it yet, I have faith that you will. Don\'t settle for less than what you wrote above! You deserve to be loved and handled with care, not broken! A most beautiful write, my friend! 🌹👏
February 24th, 2025 20:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww! You deserve that love too. If you haven\'t found it yet, I have faith that you will. Don\'t settle for less than what you wrote above! You deserve to be loved and handled with care, not broken! A most beautiful write, my friend! 🌹👏
February 24th, 2025 20:27
surrender
Funmiwrites said:
Nicely done,
I like the end, it indeed the offender that forces us to surrender.
February 24th, 2025 14:11
Funmiwrites said:
Nicely done,
I like the end, it indeed the offender that forces us to surrender.
February 24th, 2025 14:11
distort
NafisaSB said:
we all have these moments- they are disheartening, but thankfully they go away
February 24th, 2025 00:08
NafisaSB said:
we all have these moments- they are disheartening, but thankfully they go away
February 24th, 2025 00:08
distort
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Distorted soup sounds like my mental space! 😂 Your poem is brilliant and true! Well done!, my friend 👏🌹
February 23rd, 2025 23:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Distorted soup sounds like my mental space! 😂 Your poem is brilliant and true! Well done!, my friend 👏🌹
February 23rd, 2025 23:12
assaulted
TommyDingo said:
So heart breaking such a sad thing to read your so brave for sharing I hope your ok ❤
February 23rd, 2025 19:51
TommyDingo said:
So heart breaking such a sad thing to read your so brave for sharing I hope your ok ❤
February 23rd, 2025 19:51
distort
sorenbarrett said:
Wondering if this is connected with the last. It describes well the state of mind that occurs after trauma. Well written
February 23rd, 2025 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
Wondering if this is connected with the last. It describes well the state of mind that occurs after trauma. Well written
February 23rd, 2025 16:09
assaulted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
People say lots of things, and then show what side they are talking out of the very next minute. Don’t listen to assholes. Only mouths should be talking to you! Well done ion this poem! 💯 truth! Sorry you have to endure methane when coming up for air. It makes the abuse worse, I know, even though I DO NOT know what it is like to be sexually assaulted as a child. Anyone who claims “to know” without experiencing, and tells you to move on, isn’t truly caring for you. They’re shielding themselves…at best. Again, well done my friend. 🌹👏 You are a beautiful soul, wise, and extremely talented! Glad our paths crossed.
February 23rd, 2025 07:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
People say lots of things, and then show what side they are talking out of the very next minute. Don’t listen to assholes. Only mouths should be talking to you! Well done ion this poem! 💯 truth! Sorry you have to endure methane when coming up for air. It makes the abuse worse, I know, even though I DO NOT know what it is like to be sexually assaulted as a child. Anyone who claims “to know” without experiencing, and tells you to move on, isn’t truly caring for you. They’re shielding themselves…at best. Again, well done my friend. 🌹👏 You are a beautiful soul, wise, and extremely talented! Glad our paths crossed.
February 23rd, 2025 07:36
assaulted
sorenbarrett said:
Horrific! No no one can ever know what another person has been through even if they have it is different for everyone. That is why some people get PTSD and others don\'t people are different and react different even to the same circumstances. This poem was hard to read and although I have worked with many abuse survivors each is different. A brave write.
February 22nd, 2025 20:06
sorenbarrett said:
Horrific! No no one can ever know what another person has been through even if they have it is different for everyone. That is why some people get PTSD and others don\'t people are different and react different even to the same circumstances. This poem was hard to read and although I have worked with many abuse survivors each is different. A brave write.
February 22nd, 2025 20:06
desperation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I get this for sure! Well expressed! Loved the word play and depth! 🙏❤️
February 21st, 2025 21:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I get this for sure! Well expressed! Loved the word play and depth! 🙏❤️
February 21st, 2025 21:15
desperation
Mutley Ravishes said:
At one time I became so desperate to \"win,\" \"be great,\" or whatever that it almost cost me my life (twice). The effortless way is the best!
Great write, by the way.
February 21st, 2025 19:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
At one time I became so desperate to \"win,\" \"be great,\" or whatever that it almost cost me my life (twice). The effortless way is the best!
Great write, by the way.
February 21st, 2025 19:58
desperation
sorenbarrett said:
In this there are two forms of desperate the good and the bad. Nicely done in using this wordplay.
February 21st, 2025 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
In this there are two forms of desperate the good and the bad. Nicely done in using this wordplay.
February 21st, 2025 13:24
desperation
Poetic Licence said:
The desperation within the desperation, well expressed write.
February 21st, 2025 12:57
Poetic Licence said:
The desperation within the desperation, well expressed write.
February 21st, 2025 12:57
I\'m tired
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yeah. I\'ve always said I\'ll put it on my \"75 list\". Meaning, I\'ll be able to do it when I\'m retired and 75. Not sure, why that age, but it stuck. So, your poem rings SO VERY TRUE TO ME. Well done, my friend. Forgive my absence the past few days; I just got over some ungodly non-COVID but virulent plague 💀
February 20th, 2025 21:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yeah. I\'ve always said I\'ll put it on my \"75 list\". Meaning, I\'ll be able to do it when I\'m retired and 75. Not sure, why that age, but it stuck. So, your poem rings SO VERY TRUE TO ME. Well done, my friend. Forgive my absence the past few days; I just got over some ungodly non-COVID but virulent plague 💀
February 20th, 2025 21:19
I\'m tired
sorenbarrett said:
The future always looks better. The only problem is the future never comes. Oh yes retirement will but it will no longer be the future and you will still do as you do today. A great poem of looking to another day.
February 20th, 2025 14:02
sorenbarrett said:
The future always looks better. The only problem is the future never comes. Oh yes retirement will but it will no longer be the future and you will still do as you do today. A great poem of looking to another day.
February 20th, 2025 14:02
Un Jour
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said
The sexual energy
Has the power to enslave
And the power to free
Great write, Ninja Girl!
February 19th, 2025 00:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said
The sexual energy
Has the power to enslave
And the power to free
Great write, Ninja Girl!
February 19th, 2025 00:30
Un Jour
Hey! said:
Moi connaissant le français... Quand j\'ai vu le mot porno, j\'étais comme oups. J\'espère que personne ne traduit cela. Fille, bien écrire, j\'espère que tu es la seule à lire mon commentaire. Mais oui, bien écrire !
February 18th, 2025 16:11
Hey! said:
Moi connaissant le français... Quand j\'ai vu le mot porno, j\'étais comme oups. J\'espère que personne ne traduit cela. Fille, bien écrire, j\'espère que tu es la seule à lire mon commentaire. Mais oui, bien écrire !
February 18th, 2025 16:11
Un Jour
sorenbarrett said:
Not for like of desire but for lack of French I can only make out bits and pieces but I applaud the ability and courage to write in other languages I have written only one poem in Portuguese so good for you.
February 18th, 2025 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
Not for like of desire but for lack of French I can only make out bits and pieces but I applaud the ability and courage to write in other languages I have written only one poem in Portuguese so good for you.
February 18th, 2025 14:16
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
whats write for me said:
Well written, marvelous insight. Worthy of being read. Thank you for sharing.
February 18th, 2025 11:32
whats write for me said:
Well written, marvelous insight. Worthy of being read. Thank you for sharing.
February 18th, 2025 11:32
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
Poetic Licence said:
Equal means equal for all, great write
February 18th, 2025 01:56
Poetic Licence said:
Equal means equal for all, great write
February 18th, 2025 01:56
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
Doggerel Dave said:
Your title provoked an abiding interest......😋
February 17th, 2025 23:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Your title provoked an abiding interest......😋
February 17th, 2025 23:11
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