Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
Dear Death
sorenbarrett said:
Glad that the sad did not occur. Such a feeling of ambivalence expressed here.
August 21st, 2024 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
Glad that the sad did not occur. Such a feeling of ambivalence expressed here.
August 21st, 2024 19:23
*poof* HELLO MOTHERFVCKER!
Thoughtless said:
Nothing like toxic people to NOT make your day. Well written.
August 20th, 2024 12:19
Thoughtless said:
Nothing like toxic people to NOT make your day. Well written.
August 20th, 2024 12:19
Time
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is something to puzzle about and waste 10 minutes of the half of my life. Loved the puzzle brief but deep
August 19th, 2024 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is something to puzzle about and waste 10 minutes of the half of my life. Loved the puzzle brief but deep
August 19th, 2024 14:44
mis understood
Thoughtless said:
I get the hint of being bullied. Am I correct or not?
August 14th, 2024 21:49
Thoughtless said:
I get the hint of being bullied. Am I correct or not?
August 14th, 2024 21:49
mis understood
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely love the play on words here. When a poet does that, it\'s pure magic, and you pulled it off brilliantly! I also appreciate how the poem visually deconstructs as it progresses, mirroring the emotional unraveling you\'re expressing. Absolutely brilliant!
August 14th, 2024 18:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely love the play on words here. When a poet does that, it\'s pure magic, and you pulled it off brilliantly! I also appreciate how the poem visually deconstructs as it progresses, mirroring the emotional unraveling you\'re expressing. Absolutely brilliant!
August 14th, 2024 18:45
Observer
sorenbarrett said:
The dichotomy of who we are and how we see ourselves made clear in the split of even watching them from afar. Nice
August 4th, 2024 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
The dichotomy of who we are and how we see ourselves made clear in the split of even watching them from afar. Nice
August 4th, 2024 18:36
Sinning Shame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
NinjaGirl, your poem deeply moved me. The raw honesty and pain you convey are both heartbreaking and profoundly powerful. While I have faced my own struggles, I cannot fully understand the depths of what you have experienced. Your courage in sharing this piece is truly commendable, and your craft in expressing such a difficult experience is exceptional. Reading your words has helped me process my own pain in a new way. Thank you for giving voice to such an important issue. Keep writing and sharing your truth—your words have a powerful impact.
August 3rd, 2024 16:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
NinjaGirl, your poem deeply moved me. The raw honesty and pain you convey are both heartbreaking and profoundly powerful. While I have faced my own struggles, I cannot fully understand the depths of what you have experienced. Your courage in sharing this piece is truly commendable, and your craft in expressing such a difficult experience is exceptional. Reading your words has helped me process my own pain in a new way. Thank you for giving voice to such an important issue. Keep writing and sharing your truth—your words have a powerful impact.
August 3rd, 2024 16:21
no excuses
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
People are lost and dark. Maybe they do so because it\'s all they know? We\'ll never know.
August 2nd, 2024 16:51
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
People are lost and dark. Maybe they do so because it\'s all they know? We\'ll never know.
August 2nd, 2024 16:51
no excuses
sorenbarrett said:
A simple true statement that should be obvious. Nice to cut straight to the point. Well said
August 1st, 2024 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
A simple true statement that should be obvious. Nice to cut straight to the point. Well said
August 1st, 2024 19:21
unjust injustice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poem \"Unjust Injustice\" is incredibly powerful. The raw emotion and fierce advocacy for silenced victims, especially children, are deeply moving. I share your rage at the injustice perpetrated against the innocent. Keep using your voice to shed light on these critical issues. Your words matter.
August 1st, 2024 00:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poem \"Unjust Injustice\" is incredibly powerful. The raw emotion and fierce advocacy for silenced victims, especially children, are deeply moving. I share your rage at the injustice perpetrated against the innocent. Keep using your voice to shed light on these critical issues. Your words matter.
August 1st, 2024 00:47
unjust injustice
sorenbarrett said:
The saddest of injustices is that against the innocent and few are more innocent than children. A good write
July 31st, 2024 12:03
sorenbarrett said:
The saddest of injustices is that against the innocent and few are more innocent than children. A good write
July 31st, 2024 12:03
Not Fair
sorenbarrett said:
Well expressed what many feel. Live is not fair, that is a human concept and nature made.
July 30th, 2024 19:20
sorenbarrett said:
Well expressed what many feel. Live is not fair, that is a human concept and nature made.
July 30th, 2024 19:20
Sinning Shame
The Struggler said:
Often times, people want to blame what is right in front of them. Even if it’s not right. You can only control your actions. Realise, you had no control over another’s actions.
July 29th, 2024 20:29
The Struggler said:
Often times, people want to blame what is right in front of them. Even if it’s not right. You can only control your actions. Realise, you had no control over another’s actions.
July 29th, 2024 20:29
\"Everything happens for a reason\" Yeah, right.
The Struggler said:
No one should have to go through that. It’s unfortunate, wishing you the best.
July 29th, 2024 20:26
The Struggler said:
No one should have to go through that. It’s unfortunate, wishing you the best.
July 29th, 2024 20:26
cute clothes?
vividvoid14 said:
true beauts not on the outside, its on the inside, in some comments you said \"You know very well most people will never see that\"
but those who see your smile, look into your eyes, see your kind gestures,and read youre poetry those are the people who know and see your true beauty
July 29th, 2024 19:15
vividvoid14 said:
true beauts not on the outside, its on the inside, in some comments you said \"You know very well most people will never see that\"
but those who see your smile, look into your eyes, see your kind gestures,and read youre poetry those are the people who know and see your true beauty
July 29th, 2024 19:15
\"Everything happens for a reason\" Yeah, right.
vividvoid14 said:
damn, changes your whole perspective on life
July 29th, 2024 19:11
vividvoid14 said:
damn, changes your whole perspective on life
July 29th, 2024 19:11
\"Everything happens for a reason\" Yeah, right.
sorenbarrett said:
So that you would no longer be nine and so you could become eleven. This one gave me a smile. Thank you
July 29th, 2024 18:10
sorenbarrett said:
So that you would no longer be nine and so you could become eleven. This one gave me a smile. Thank you
July 29th, 2024 18:10
cute clothes?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Don\'t care about the people who don\'t see it, if they don\'t see it, it wasn\'t meant for them to see.
July 24th, 2024 11:40
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Don\'t care about the people who don\'t see it, if they don\'t see it, it wasn\'t meant for them to see.
July 24th, 2024 11:40
a breath of rain
sorenbarrett said:
Images and more images, metaphoric blended with vivid description make for a great write
July 24th, 2024 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
Images and more images, metaphoric blended with vivid description make for a great write
July 24th, 2024 07:07
Not Me.
Weep little lion girl said:
This is unfortunately super relatable. Great writing though :))
July 19th, 2024 22:09
Weep little lion girl said:
This is unfortunately super relatable. Great writing though :))
July 19th, 2024 22:09
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