Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
surrender
sorenbarrett said:
This was a realy good write. There are great lines but the best part is the flow from one stanza to the next and each builds on the last. Very well done definately a fave
February 10th, 2025 17:20
sorenbarrett said:
This was a realy good write. There are great lines but the best part is the flow from one stanza to the next and each builds on the last. Very well done definately a fave
February 10th, 2025 17:20
A spiritual poem
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought that gives strength and belief necessary for hope
February 9th, 2025 17:27
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought that gives strength and belief necessary for hope
February 9th, 2025 17:27
my home
Distant View said:
Quite profound and poetic! Your words are wise, and something we should all aspire to work towards!
February 9th, 2025 16:06
Distant View said:
Quite profound and poetic! Your words are wise, and something we should all aspire to work towards!
February 9th, 2025 16:06
my home
teardrop said:
love your thought process here. Your format is perfect for this piece. Very much enjoyed this read!
February 9th, 2025 05:09
teardrop said:
love your thought process here. Your format is perfect for this piece. Very much enjoyed this read!
February 9th, 2025 05:09
my home
Hollow Enigma said:
Thank you for this , I will be reading this in the future when I will need it.
February 8th, 2025 21:45
Hollow Enigma said:
Thank you for this , I will be reading this in the future when I will need it.
February 8th, 2025 21:45
my home
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of decision and determination. Our body is our shell and houses who we are. A great write
February 8th, 2025 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of decision and determination. Our body is our shell and houses who we are. A great write
February 8th, 2025 14:38
The Tall and Skinny Brooding Man
sorenbarrett said:
Love poems from other languages they carry their own flavor and have written one in Portugeese but it is not my strong suite Thsois looks like Greek and I don\'t know Greek so will wait for your next one
February 7th, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
Love poems from other languages they carry their own flavor and have written one in Portugeese but it is not my strong suite Thsois looks like Greek and I don\'t know Greek so will wait for your next one
February 7th, 2025 13:00
The Tall and Skinny Brooding Man
Cassie58 said:
Wow, quite graphic. This seems like a dream, well a nightmare really. Scary stuff the violence. Interesting read NinjaGirl.
February 7th, 2025 12:28
Cassie58 said:
Wow, quite graphic. This seems like a dream, well a nightmare really. Scary stuff the violence. Interesting read NinjaGirl.
February 7th, 2025 12:28
Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
Poetic Licence said:
There are so many Coulda`s and none of them are ever helpful to anyone, let a lone those experiencing the trauma and pain, powerfully expressed.
February 7th, 2025 04:41
Poetic Licence said:
There are so many Coulda`s and none of them are ever helpful to anyone, let a lone those experiencing the trauma and pain, powerfully expressed.
February 7th, 2025 04:41
Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
sorenbarrett said:
Three words that are best not to use in real life or in a poem either. The disempower. A powerful write even with the use of them
February 7th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Three words that are best not to use in real life or in a poem either. The disempower. A powerful write even with the use of them
February 7th, 2025 04:25
lovesick
Mutley Ravishes said:
That\'s the first \"love\" poem I\'ve read in an age.
Sick of love? Well, when I rely on someone else for \"my\" happiness/fulfilment then I\'m asking to get sick! So I guess I should rely on Someone Else instead!
Great write.
February 5th, 2025 23:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
That\'s the first \"love\" poem I\'ve read in an age.
Sick of love? Well, when I rely on someone else for \"my\" happiness/fulfilment then I\'m asking to get sick! So I guess I should rely on Someone Else instead!
Great write.
February 5th, 2025 23:37
lovesick
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Loved this love poem. I can relate. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 5th, 2025 21:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Loved this love poem. I can relate. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 5th, 2025 21:20
миний доторх энэ тулаан
Emile Dubois said:
Peut-être que la bataille est l\'intérieur avec l\'extérieur
February 5th, 2025 21:20
Emile Dubois said:
Peut-être que la bataille est l\'intérieur avec l\'extérieur
February 5th, 2025 21:20
lovesick
Poetic Licence said:
A few words but they capture being in love right to the point, a different love poem but a very good one.
February 5th, 2025 19:51
Poetic Licence said:
A few words but they capture being in love right to the point, a different love poem but a very good one.
February 5th, 2025 19:51
lovesick
sorenbarrett said:
A poem enigmatic I love it. It is far different than most love poems and therefor most creative. As someone that has been there in all aspects I would say it contains wisdom beyound your years
February 5th, 2025 18:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem enigmatic I love it. It is far different than most love poems and therefor most creative. As someone that has been there in all aspects I would say it contains wisdom beyound your years
February 5th, 2025 18:51
hollow
sorenbarrett said:
The transformation of changing from what one is to what one thinks that others want them to be. It is an emptying process. Very nicely done
February 4th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
The transformation of changing from what one is to what one thinks that others want them to be. It is an emptying process. Very nicely done
February 4th, 2025 04:14
Juxtaposed Justice
2781 said:
Because of his strength will I wait upon thee: for God is my defence.
February 1st, 2025 00:29
2781 said:
Because of his strength will I wait upon thee: for God is my defence.
February 1st, 2025 00:29
Juxtaposed Justice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This prayer/psalm does not go unheard, my dear friend. Heartbreaking because I have prayed similarly and understand this well. So sorry you had to endure such horrific evil. Justice will be had one way or the other. Praying for peace and healing for you in the meantime. This is a wonderful poem and an excellent display of faith, too. That is exactly what makes the Psalms so powerful, imho. They\'re human, raw, and honest. Well done! 🌹👏
January 31st, 2025 23:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This prayer/psalm does not go unheard, my dear friend. Heartbreaking because I have prayed similarly and understand this well. So sorry you had to endure such horrific evil. Justice will be had one way or the other. Praying for peace and healing for you in the meantime. This is a wonderful poem and an excellent display of faith, too. That is exactly what makes the Psalms so powerful, imho. They\'re human, raw, and honest. Well done! 🌹👏
January 31st, 2025 23:37
Juxtaposed Justice
sorenbarrett said:
Heart rending and powerful this poem speaks to pain
January 31st, 2025 21:36
sorenbarrett said:
Heart rending and powerful this poem speaks to pain
January 31st, 2025 21:36
start over
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this message my friend. Your note is so true and so hard to sell myself on! 🤣😭 We are so prone to think that way, are we not? Thank you for the reminder! 🙏❤️
January 29th, 2025 22:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this message my friend. Your note is so true and so hard to sell myself on! 🤣😭 We are so prone to think that way, are we not? Thank you for the reminder! 🙏❤️
January 29th, 2025 22:16
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