Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
disappointment
sorenbarrett said:
Sad that past trauma can cause such damage. Good write
January 22nd, 2025 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sad that past trauma can cause such damage. Good write
January 22nd, 2025 14:29
disappointment
Cheeky Missy said:
Miserably enough, this is the painful reality all through life, adulthood not even altering matters as handily as the humorous Hollywood flick Romy and Michele\'s Highschool Reunion. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a creeping, haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Miserably enough, this is the painful reality all through life, adulthood not even altering matters as handily as the humorous Hollywood flick Romy and Michele\'s Highschool Reunion. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a creeping, haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:23
disappointment
Cassie58 said:
If looks could kill. Sadly there are some who can’t help themselves. Like to judge first, then think about questions later. They aren’t worth the time. Well penned.
January 22nd, 2025 13:08
Cassie58 said:
If looks could kill. Sadly there are some who can’t help themselves. Like to judge first, then think about questions later. They aren’t worth the time. Well penned.
January 22nd, 2025 13:08
Bleeding Ink
LP2187 said:
This is so true, can’t possibly relate anymore, good writes thanks for sharing!
January 22nd, 2025 11:22
LP2187 said:
This is so true, can’t possibly relate anymore, good writes thanks for sharing!
January 22nd, 2025 11:22
Bleeding Ink
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, healing is a long, hard road out of hell. Our past, in part, informs who we are, so the past cannot ever fully be discarded, good or bad. I get that realization and the sense of frustration out of it. With that said, I also get resilience. Nowhere in this poem is there a hint of stopping writing...metaphorically or literally. And that\'s the key, right? We muddle through somehow. Well done in tackling some more icky cliches. 🌹👏
January 22nd, 2025 08:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, healing is a long, hard road out of hell. Our past, in part, informs who we are, so the past cannot ever fully be discarded, good or bad. I get that realization and the sense of frustration out of it. With that said, I also get resilience. Nowhere in this poem is there a hint of stopping writing...metaphorically or literally. And that\'s the key, right? We muddle through somehow. Well done in tackling some more icky cliches. 🌹👏
January 22nd, 2025 08:58
Bleeding Ink
Poetic Licence said:
Frustration of being trapped in the pain of the past, our past is and will always be there, we have to learn ( and it takes time ) to understand and accept it in a better way, than it allows us to have future. Well written piece from the heart
January 22nd, 2025 07:14
Poetic Licence said:
Frustration of being trapped in the pain of the past, our past is and will always be there, we have to learn ( and it takes time ) to understand and accept it in a better way, than it allows us to have future. Well written piece from the heart
January 22nd, 2025 07:14
Bleeding Ink
sorenbarrett said:
Past trauma has sullied the page and turning it only finds it has blead through to the next. Maybe a new book is in order. A great poem of how one\'s past can not be discarded and affects one\'s future. A mislaid brick set in cement must be built around if not removed. I can hear the anxst in this poem.
January 22nd, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Past trauma has sullied the page and turning it only finds it has blead through to the next. Maybe a new book is in order. A great poem of how one\'s past can not be discarded and affects one\'s future. A mislaid brick set in cement must be built around if not removed. I can hear the anxst in this poem.
January 22nd, 2025 04:11
the Unfathomable
NafisaSB said:
the pain echoes and stands out so well, that the reader cannot but fail to see the misery of the suffering person
hauntingly beautiful
January 21st, 2025 11:35
NafisaSB said:
the pain echoes and stands out so well, that the reader cannot but fail to see the misery of the suffering person
hauntingly beautiful
January 21st, 2025 11:35
choice?
arqios said:
It’s like part of us has been stolen away and there doesn’t seem a way to retrieve it.
January 20th, 2025 22:28
arqios said:
It’s like part of us has been stolen away and there doesn’t seem a way to retrieve it.
January 20th, 2025 22:28
choice?
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of definitions, happieness may not be an immediate choice but as you said healing and future happieness may be.
January 20th, 2025 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of definitions, happieness may not be an immediate choice but as you said healing and future happieness may be.
January 20th, 2025 13:01
choice?
LP2187 said:
A very powerful poem, I really understand what\'s it\'s like. Thanks for sharing.
January 20th, 2025 12:15
LP2187 said:
A very powerful poem, I really understand what\'s it\'s like. Thanks for sharing.
January 20th, 2025 12:15
choice?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!! Let\'s bury these awful clichés one-by-one...alive! LOL! For real. This is 💯 truth, my wise friend! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 12:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!! Let\'s bury these awful clichés one-by-one...alive! LOL! For real. This is 💯 truth, my wise friend! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 12:00
choice?
Cassie58 said:
Happiness needs working for. I find it in the smallest of things. All those little things can then add up. All the best.
January 20th, 2025 11:44
Cassie58 said:
Happiness needs working for. I find it in the smallest of things. All those little things can then add up. All the best.
January 20th, 2025 11:44
Shortcut
sorenbarrett said:
If you\'re not dead rage against the dying light. The strength of the mind overcomes the weakness of the flesh. A poem that speaks with power.
January 19th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
If you\'re not dead rage against the dying light. The strength of the mind overcomes the weakness of the flesh. A poem that speaks with power.
January 19th, 2025 17:11
Shortcut
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliant poem, and, ain\'t that the truth! 💯 👏🌹
January 19th, 2025 16:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliant poem, and, ain\'t that the truth! 💯 👏🌹
January 19th, 2025 16:53
blistered fingers
Shahla Latifi said:
Artistic souls are undoubtedly intriguing souls.
January 19th, 2025 11:08
Shahla Latifi said:
Artistic souls are undoubtedly intriguing souls.
January 19th, 2025 11:08
f words
sorenbarrett said:
Flexability, focus, function, friendship, freedom Ninja a most fun read
January 18th, 2025 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
Flexability, focus, function, friendship, freedom Ninja a most fun read
January 18th, 2025 15:26
f words
LP2187 said:
Though just words, they have strong impacts. A powerful read!
January 18th, 2025 14:59
LP2187 said:
Though just words, they have strong impacts. A powerful read!
January 18th, 2025 14:59
f words
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! This, my friend, is art! And much more than just \"some words\" or a banana duct taped to a wall (though, honestly, I wish I thought up that 🤣)...each word could be a poem unto themselves. So the depth of this...just 🤯 Well done. As you know, I am a fan! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 14:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! This, my friend, is art! And much more than just \"some words\" or a banana duct taped to a wall (though, honestly, I wish I thought up that 🤣)...each word could be a poem unto themselves. So the depth of this...just 🤯 Well done. As you know, I am a fan! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 14:51
pain
LP2187 said:
A powerful poem of the past and healing, this definitely touched me.
January 18th, 2025 07:55
LP2187 said:
A powerful poem of the past and healing, this definitely touched me.
January 18th, 2025 07:55
pain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I swear you and I are like synched or sending mind vibes or something! I am now going out to dance under the waning moon before a snowstorm after experiencing this beautiful serendipity! I just finished writing a poem that is eerily similar to what you just shared! Like eerily! Mine will be posted tomorrow. But that is enough about me, my friend. I totally get this poem. It speaks my language; it expresses a reality I know personally. Not that this is the first time. I really do find a home in your work, my friend. This poem is so powerful because I know so many other people experience this and, wow...just wow! Well done! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 20:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I swear you and I are like synched or sending mind vibes or something! I am now going out to dance under the waning moon before a snowstorm after experiencing this beautiful serendipity! I just finished writing a poem that is eerily similar to what you just shared! Like eerily! Mine will be posted tomorrow. But that is enough about me, my friend. I totally get this poem. It speaks my language; it expresses a reality I know personally. Not that this is the first time. I really do find a home in your work, my friend. This poem is so powerful because I know so many other people experience this and, wow...just wow! Well done! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 20:00
pain
sorenbarrett said:
Again a dark write and it ends leaving the reader concerned. Does pain take away pain? A most emotional write
January 17th, 2025 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
Again a dark write and it ends leaving the reader concerned. Does pain take away pain? A most emotional write
January 17th, 2025 19:21
forgotten soul
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It is. In fact, I can\'t have it because of my body\'s newfound aversion to caffeine. Ah. Yay me! 🤣 Anyway, now for the poem. Wonderful job, my friend! I have felt this very way. Truthfully, I have been feeling this way a lot lately. People would rather remain ignorant of someone else\'s suffering rather than stand in the mud with someone who is going through the shit. It\'s not you, it is them. They are suppressing one of the best parts of humanity (empathy) to embrace one of the worst parts of it (apathy). For what it\'s worth, you\'re not forgotten by me or others on here! I am glad our paths have crossed, NinjaGirl! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It is. In fact, I can\'t have it because of my body\'s newfound aversion to caffeine. Ah. Yay me! 🤣 Anyway, now for the poem. Wonderful job, my friend! I have felt this very way. Truthfully, I have been feeling this way a lot lately. People would rather remain ignorant of someone else\'s suffering rather than stand in the mud with someone who is going through the shit. It\'s not you, it is them. They are suppressing one of the best parts of humanity (empathy) to embrace one of the worst parts of it (apathy). For what it\'s worth, you\'re not forgotten by me or others on here! I am glad our paths have crossed, NinjaGirl! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 09:15
forgotten soul
Demar Desu said:
5 hours of energy in a bottle that can fit in your palm… I wonder if we could create food that is as filling
January 16th, 2025 06:40
Demar Desu said:
5 hours of energy in a bottle that can fit in your palm… I wonder if we could create food that is as filling
January 16th, 2025 06:40
forgotten soul
sorenbarrett said:
Ignored possiblly but never forgotten. Good or bad our memories remain with all. A lovely write of abandonment that we all feel from time to time. Dark but most wonderful
January 16th, 2025 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Ignored possiblly but never forgotten. Good or bad our memories remain with all. A lovely write of abandonment that we all feel from time to time. Dark but most wonderful
January 16th, 2025 05:57
the Unfathomable
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully penned and poignant. Painful to think about and yet it happens all too often.
January 16th, 2025 01:44
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully penned and poignant. Painful to think about and yet it happens all too often.
January 16th, 2025 01:44
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