Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
fire
Cheeky Missy said:
Whether you resort to setting the past on fire and letting the ashes serve for making soap to wash all quite away, or simply shut the door on the same, in stating the case thus, I realize the difference. Every morning is yet another opportunity to lift up your eyes and reach for higher in lieu of what was. Likewise the previous year and past are put away that we might move forward.
That aside, how beautifully rendered with great imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Love you!
January 12th, 2025 14:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Whether you resort to setting the past on fire and letting the ashes serve for making soap to wash all quite away, or simply shut the door on the same, in stating the case thus, I realize the difference. Every morning is yet another opportunity to lift up your eyes and reach for higher in lieu of what was. Likewise the previous year and past are put away that we might move forward.
That aside, how beautifully rendered with great imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Love you!
January 12th, 2025 14:38
fire
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love this! It seems, my dear friend, that we both had fire on the mind! I absolutely love this and I am glad we both set the 🔥 loose at the same time! How awesome! Well done on this! A great little reminder to oneself! Thank you for this! 🙏❤️
January 12th, 2025 06:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love this! It seems, my dear friend, that we both had fire on the mind! I absolutely love this and I am glad we both set the 🔥 loose at the same time! How awesome! Well done on this! A great little reminder to oneself! Thank you for this! 🙏❤️
January 12th, 2025 06:32
fire
sorenbarrett said:
Cleaning out old memories and burning them is a great image to present especially at the first of the year. We clean out our atics and our garage why not our mind. Well done
January 11th, 2025 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
Cleaning out old memories and burning them is a great image to present especially at the first of the year. We clean out our atics and our garage why not our mind. Well done
January 11th, 2025 14:07
fingerprints
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abuse sucks! A real example of the sin and evil out in the world. This poem, my dear friend, flows like a chant…a wonderfully flowing rhyme that delivers the truth with a punch. Well done! 🍓👏
January 11th, 2025 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abuse sucks! A real example of the sin and evil out in the world. This poem, my dear friend, flows like a chant…a wonderfully flowing rhyme that delivers the truth with a punch. Well done! 🍓👏
January 11th, 2025 07:53
blistered fingers
NafisaSB said:
to each his/her own - for some it\'s the music, and for others the pause - agree with you - it\'s a personal thing
January 11th, 2025 01:10
NafisaSB said:
to each his/her own - for some it\'s the music, and for others the pause - agree with you - it\'s a personal thing
January 11th, 2025 01:10
fingerprints
sorenbarrett said:
A great run of rhyme that leave a bit of doubt regarding whether abuse, or a tattoo. Maybe an abusive tattoo. Although short it gives a powerful message.
January 10th, 2025 21:15
sorenbarrett said:
A great run of rhyme that leave a bit of doubt regarding whether abuse, or a tattoo. Maybe an abusive tattoo. Although short it gives a powerful message.
January 10th, 2025 21:15
shame
sorenbarrett said:
Poems can be liberating to the author and at their most powerful state liberating to others as well. I hear the determination in this poem and feel the drive
January 10th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Poems can be liberating to the author and at their most powerful state liberating to others as well. I hear the determination in this poem and feel the drive
January 10th, 2025 04:24
shame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raw sometimes is better than revised, my dear friend. Right now it\'s what it needs to be and, if ever you choose, you can rework or write a follow up. I\'ve at least found that approach to be liberating. I could feel every bit of pain and hurt in your words. They come across very deeply and, for this poem, that is key. Well done NinjaGirl! ❤️
January 9th, 2025 23:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Raw sometimes is better than revised, my dear friend. Right now it\'s what it needs to be and, if ever you choose, you can rework or write a follow up. I\'ve at least found that approach to be liberating. I could feel every bit of pain and hurt in your words. They come across very deeply and, for this poem, that is key. Well done NinjaGirl! ❤️
January 9th, 2025 23:07
forget me not
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this piece. It\'s about time for the flower to pluck back! I love the vibe this poem has...the taking back of what has been taken. Hauntingly beautiful and poignant, my dear friend! 🌹👏 An easy fave for me!
January 9th, 2025 17:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this piece. It\'s about time for the flower to pluck back! I love the vibe this poem has...the taking back of what has been taken. Hauntingly beautiful and poignant, my dear friend! 🌹👏 An easy fave for me!
January 9th, 2025 17:12
forget me not
sorenbarrett said:
This poem dives deeper into the psychi of memory, The desire to be remembered for all that is good and the desire to forget all that is bad. Even the desire to be remembered for pain and sacrifice as opposed to be forgotten for not suffering, The idea of mayrterdom begins to enter and its eternal cementing in the memory of man. This poem bleeds perfume of the violet crushed on the heel. A very philosophical write
January 9th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
This poem dives deeper into the psychi of memory, The desire to be remembered for all that is good and the desire to forget all that is bad. Even the desire to be remembered for pain and sacrifice as opposed to be forgotten for not suffering, The idea of mayrterdom begins to enter and its eternal cementing in the memory of man. This poem bleeds perfume of the violet crushed on the heel. A very philosophical write
January 9th, 2025 05:18
forget me not
Poetic Licence said:
A flower that is toughening up and about to seek revenge, A haunting piece
January 9th, 2025 01:54
Poetic Licence said:
A flower that is toughening up and about to seek revenge, A haunting piece
January 9th, 2025 01:54
forget me not
Cheeky Missy said:
How beautifully rendered and with a haunting poignancy and imagery so delicate, I almost catch my breath. Once again I wish to know what that particular flower looks like, as I\'m more acquainted with the violets, of which I am, were I a flower. Thank you so very much for sharing! Love you.
January 8th, 2025 23:31
Cheeky Missy said:
How beautifully rendered and with a haunting poignancy and imagery so delicate, I almost catch my breath. Once again I wish to know what that particular flower looks like, as I\'m more acquainted with the violets, of which I am, were I a flower. Thank you so very much for sharing! Love you.
January 8th, 2025 23:31
paranoid
Dan Williams said:
Paranoid means all too often they really are out to get you. Hang on.
January 7th, 2025 20:48
Dan Williams said:
Paranoid means all too often they really are out to get you. Hang on.
January 7th, 2025 20:48
paranoid
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know they\'re all after me! Jokes aside, I get this and have felt this way. And no, the thinking never stops, does it? It spins on rotation. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 7th, 2025 15:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know they\'re all after me! Jokes aside, I get this and have felt this way. And no, the thinking never stops, does it? It spins on rotation. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 7th, 2025 15:34
paranoid
Poetic Licence said:
i can connect with this poem when your mind is in overdrive, you think the world is out to get you but you have no idea Why, How or even what for. Nicely worded.
January 7th, 2025 13:49
Poetic Licence said:
i can connect with this poem when your mind is in overdrive, you think the world is out to get you but you have no idea Why, How or even what for. Nicely worded.
January 7th, 2025 13:49
paranoid
sorenbarrett said:
Which is better to think that no one is after you when they are or think they are not? And we know they are. A pertinant poem about how things are for many now days. Very nicely put and written
January 7th, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
Which is better to think that no one is after you when they are or think they are not? And we know they are. A pertinant poem about how things are for many now days. Very nicely put and written
January 7th, 2025 13:37
paranoid
rin said:
In my case, when I can\'t stop thinking, I listen to pop music to clear my head and think of poetry. If you think about it too much, the poem will become complicated.
January 7th, 2025 13:24
rin said:
In my case, when I can\'t stop thinking, I listen to pop music to clear my head and think of poetry. If you think about it too much, the poem will become complicated.
January 7th, 2025 13:24
shattered
Poetic Licence said:
Everything has a use and has value, it is how we perceive and use it that matters, enjoyed the read.
January 7th, 2025 04:11
Poetic Licence said:
Everything has a use and has value, it is how we perceive and use it that matters, enjoyed the read.
January 7th, 2025 04:11
shattered
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought deeply philosophical highly existential and seems to leave no bright answer, But no everything has its use and those shards may be gathered by an artist to be used in their next work, a fisherman to cut his line, they may cut the foot of a murderer now unable to complete his task. All things have a purpose.
January 7th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought deeply philosophical highly existential and seems to leave no bright answer, But no everything has its use and those shards may be gathered by an artist to be used in their next work, a fisherman to cut his line, they may cut the foot of a murderer now unable to complete his task. All things have a purpose.
January 7th, 2025 03:58
shattered
rin said:
Even if you become dangerous, you may feel spicy to others. But it might still be good.
When you look in the mirror and keep checking yourself, you may not know the real you.
January 6th, 2025 23:04
rin said:
Even if you become dangerous, you may feel spicy to others. But it might still be good.
When you look in the mirror and keep checking yourself, you may not know the real you.
January 6th, 2025 23:04
shattered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
C\'est une très bonne question mon ami. Je ne pense pas. Brava, my deeply philosophical friend! Excellent poetic musing! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 21:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
C\'est une très bonne question mon ami. Je ne pense pas. Brava, my deeply philosophical friend! Excellent poetic musing! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 21:19
wild curls
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very brave poem dealing with some a subject absolutely disgusting, sadly i know myself how common this was and still is. It raises anger that it happened and still happens and sorrow and feeling for the recipient. I wish you all the best
January 5th, 2025 20:48
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very brave poem dealing with some a subject absolutely disgusting, sadly i know myself how common this was and still is. It raises anger that it happened and still happens and sorrow and feeling for the recipient. I wish you all the best
January 5th, 2025 20:48
wild curls
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes my skin crawl with revultion, not from the poem but the content itself. Sad and upsetting it provokes anger and pitty. I have always said that you can tell if a work is a piece of art by the emotion it provoke and so I proclaim this a work of art
January 5th, 2025 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes my skin crawl with revultion, not from the poem but the content itself. Sad and upsetting it provokes anger and pitty. I have always said that you can tell if a work is a piece of art by the emotion it provoke and so I proclaim this a work of art
January 5th, 2025 18:04
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