Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
Harmless
RSM0812 said:
This write is very emotional and descriptive. Great job.
August 14th, 2025 07:13
RSM0812 said:
This write is very emotional and descriptive. Great job.
August 14th, 2025 07:13
Harmless
Poetic Licence said:
I see this as people thinking its not ok to show your pain through anger, often they cannot understand as they cannot see and often treat it in a light hearted way, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 01:11
Poetic Licence said:
I see this as people thinking its not ok to show your pain through anger, often they cannot understand as they cannot see and often treat it in a light hearted way, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 01:11
Harmless
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw and stripped of any false comfort, which you do so beautifully. You’ve captured how pain can wear anger’s face, and how quickly others turn against what they don’t understand. The melting hilt is a haunting image. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ So glad you’re back!
August 11th, 2025 20:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw and stripped of any false comfort, which you do so beautifully. You’ve captured how pain can wear anger’s face, and how quickly others turn against what they don’t understand. The melting hilt is a haunting image. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ So glad you’re back!
August 11th, 2025 20:01
Harmless
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! The poem starts with powerful anger and actual damage that moves to the threat of a noose and ends with a toy threat that like anger moves from rage through threat to a joke. Very nicely done a fave
August 11th, 2025 19:19
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! The poem starts with powerful anger and actual damage that moves to the threat of a noose and ends with a toy threat that like anger moves from rage through threat to a joke. Very nicely done a fave
August 11th, 2025 19:19
2 months
jarcher54 said:
The Statute of Limitations applies to crimes formally, but yes it applies to the events of our lives and what we do about them... wait to long and the remedies may be barred... welcome back.
August 10th, 2025 17:26
jarcher54 said:
The Statute of Limitations applies to crimes formally, but yes it applies to the events of our lives and what we do about them... wait to long and the remedies may be barred... welcome back.
August 10th, 2025 17:26
2 months
Poetic Licence said:
A very difficult decision to make, feeling you want justice, understanding to try to put the pain to bed, then on the other hand do I really want to relive it all. I faced a similier situation many years ago, I chose to leave it and even to this day I am not sure I made the right decision. Wishing you all the best
August 10th, 2025 14:11
Poetic Licence said:
A very difficult decision to make, feeling you want justice, understanding to try to put the pain to bed, then on the other hand do I really want to relive it all. I faced a similier situation many years ago, I chose to leave it and even to this day I am not sure I made the right decision. Wishing you all the best
August 10th, 2025 14:11
2 months
sorenbarrett said:
Time, procrastination, hesitation, decision where courage and discretion weigh in the balance nicely written.
August 10th, 2025 14:06
sorenbarrett said:
Time, procrastination, hesitation, decision where courage and discretion weigh in the balance nicely written.
August 10th, 2025 14:06
Written Rebellion
RSM0812 said:
You are an amazing writer. It\'s a gift. This is one of my all time favs of your works
It really struck me with its message and even imagery of your word placement. I loved it.
May 27th, 2025 08:53
RSM0812 said:
You are an amazing writer. It\'s a gift. This is one of my all time favs of your works
It really struck me with its message and even imagery of your word placement. I loved it.
May 27th, 2025 08:53
in love with me
RSM0812 said:
Sounds quaint. There is a melancholy in solitude. Unaccompanied silence is a virtue. We need to breath it in our nose and out our mouths sometimes I guess. Lol
May 26th, 2025 09:09
RSM0812 said:
Sounds quaint. There is a melancholy in solitude. Unaccompanied silence is a virtue. We need to breath it in our nose and out our mouths sometimes I guess. Lol
May 26th, 2025 09:09
he\'s a boy, not a man
sorenbarrett said:
Insightful, delightful a glimpse inside two minds and how they do not mesh. Awareness prevents future misunderstanding and pain. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Insightful, delightful a glimpse inside two minds and how they do not mesh. Awareness prevents future misunderstanding and pain. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2025 04:09
he\'s a boy, not a man
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining read, he will learn eventually, enjoyed the read
May 22nd, 2025 02:23
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining read, he will learn eventually, enjoyed the read
May 22nd, 2025 02:23
Written Rebellion
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a strong and moving poem. It shows how even quiet words can have power. Well done!!!
May 21st, 2025 12:09
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a strong and moving poem. It shows how even quiet words can have power. Well done!!!
May 21st, 2025 12:09
Written Rebellion
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of defiance in this poem and screams out of each falling line. Well done
May 21st, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of defiance in this poem and screams out of each falling line. Well done
May 21st, 2025 03:58
Written Rebellion
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write, I too write what I find hard to say in person, love the lay out
May 21st, 2025 02:32
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write, I too write what I find hard to say in person, love the lay out
May 21st, 2025 02:32
in love with me
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
So beautifully written! Your poem is a warm hug.
May 20th, 2025 21:45
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
So beautifully written! Your poem is a warm hug.
May 20th, 2025 21:45
in love with me
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. we should be nice to ourselves treat ourselves nicely but it’s not always the case .. sometimes we’re harsh towards ourselves / critical
Self love important tho
May 19th, 2025 14:29
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. we should be nice to ourselves treat ourselves nicely but it’s not always the case .. sometimes we’re harsh towards ourselves / critical
Self love important tho
May 19th, 2025 14:29
in love with me
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of one spending time with and on themselves, a relaxing feel to the write, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 13:30
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of one spending time with and on themselves, a relaxing feel to the write, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 13:30
in love with me
sorenbarrett said:
Such a home like feel and at the same time a solitary warmth. A most lovely read
May 19th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
Such a home like feel and at the same time a solitary warmth. A most lovely read
May 19th, 2025 12:31
in love with me
BlessedbyGod said:
In all honesty this piece is true , there is nobody out there that will be here for us or know what we want more then ourselves
We will always treat ourselves better than another person will
May 19th, 2025 12:13
BlessedbyGod said:
In all honesty this piece is true , there is nobody out there that will be here for us or know what we want more then ourselves
We will always treat ourselves better than another person will
May 19th, 2025 12:13
The cost of pain is change
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for something more comes through in this piece. How to be happy with oneself is another. It is difficult when society, family, friends are telling you what to do. That needs to come from you not them. I hear this too in this piece. It is a cry for acceptance from yourself and others and the two seldom are the same. Raw and heart felt it cries out.
May 18th, 2025 15:41
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for something more comes through in this piece. How to be happy with oneself is another. It is difficult when society, family, friends are telling you what to do. That needs to come from you not them. I hear this too in this piece. It is a cry for acceptance from yourself and others and the two seldom are the same. Raw and heart felt it cries out.
May 18th, 2025 15:41
The White Room
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An instant fave. Wow! Clinical, psychological, and deeply liminal. This poem blurs the line between sterility and suffering, evoking both an institution and a void. “Under observation,” “a single move and they’ll know,” and “he only stares back blank”—to me, all speak to powerlessness under scrutiny, like being trapped in a psych ward or purgatory. The absence of definition mirrors the collapse of identity or sanity, and it’s filled with an internal scream—that silence that’s louder than noise. It’s as if you’re in the sanitarium of your own mind. I totally relate, brilliant poet and friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An instant fave. Wow! Clinical, psychological, and deeply liminal. This poem blurs the line between sterility and suffering, evoking both an institution and a void. “Under observation,” “a single move and they’ll know,” and “he only stares back blank”—to me, all speak to powerlessness under scrutiny, like being trapped in a psych ward or purgatory. The absence of definition mirrors the collapse of identity or sanity, and it’s filled with an internal scream—that silence that’s louder than noise. It’s as if you’re in the sanitarium of your own mind. I totally relate, brilliant poet and friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:09
Eating
NafisaSB said:
i empathize with you - have heard a lot of comments when commented upon about y weight - although i always tried to avoid bingeing...and in fact was always trying to avoid what i enjoyed most [reverse factor here]
hope you will climb out of this stage soon...
May 14th, 2025 00:30
NafisaSB said:
i empathize with you - have heard a lot of comments when commented upon about y weight - although i always tried to avoid bingeing...and in fact was always trying to avoid what i enjoyed most [reverse factor here]
hope you will climb out of this stage soon...
May 14th, 2025 00:30
The White Room
sorenbarrett said:
We are all biased by our past so I see a hospital room and bed, not just any hospital but mental hospital and observation room with observing tech. But then I also see other things as well. Love poems that leave questions
May 13th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
We are all biased by our past so I see a hospital room and bed, not just any hospital but mental hospital and observation room with observing tech. But then I also see other things as well. Love poems that leave questions
May 13th, 2025 12:15
Eating
Poetic Licence said:
A important write that will be relatable to many, one of the hidden disorders that many suffer from for a multitude of reasons, nicely done
May 13th, 2025 02:22
Poetic Licence said:
A important write that will be relatable to many, one of the hidden disorders that many suffer from for a multitude of reasons, nicely done
May 13th, 2025 02:22
Eating
sorenbarrett said:
Eating disorders are serious and felt to beyond the person\'s control. Help is available but not all help works so find someone you can work with and trust. A brave write especially since most find it very hard to talk about and keep it secret.
May 12th, 2025 17:48
sorenbarrett said:
Eating disorders are serious and felt to beyond the person\'s control. Help is available but not all help works so find someone you can work with and trust. A brave write especially since most find it very hard to talk about and keep it secret.
May 12th, 2025 17:48
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