Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
What death would say to me
sorenbarrett said:
A dark read where thoughts of ending things come before enjoying them. I always thought, what if what comes makes this the best of what there is. A sobering poem
November 13th, 2025 03:31
sorenbarrett said:
A dark read where thoughts of ending things come before enjoying them. I always thought, what if what comes makes this the best of what there is. A sobering poem
November 13th, 2025 03:31
The Invader of my Cave
sorenbarrett said:
Ah deep and metaphorical a double difficulty. It speaks of gradual but insidious invasion and the difficulty of extraction. Is it indoctrination? Well written NinjaGirl
November 11th, 2025 15:00
sorenbarrett said:
Ah deep and metaphorical a double difficulty. It speaks of gradual but insidious invasion and the difficulty of extraction. Is it indoctrination? Well written NinjaGirl
November 11th, 2025 15:00
Just no Justice
RSM0812 said:
The next generation will always have burdens from the previous one. This was nicley written. Good job.
November 11th, 2025 14:22
RSM0812 said:
The next generation will always have burdens from the previous one. This was nicley written. Good job.
November 11th, 2025 14:22
Just no Justice
NafisaSB said:
This message is a raw truth- one man’s liberty may be at the cost of another sometimes.
November 11th, 2025 08:46
NafisaSB said:
This message is a raw truth- one man’s liberty may be at the cost of another sometimes.
November 11th, 2025 08:46
She Stared Back
NafisaSB said:
this is a chilling tale well told - the question remain - was it the statue, or some bug on it which moved, and inspired the terror
November 10th, 2025 23:30
NafisaSB said:
this is a chilling tale well told - the question remain - was it the statue, or some bug on it which moved, and inspired the terror
November 10th, 2025 23:30
Just no Justice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, 🥷, I felt the ache of legacy…the fear that what we build might still bind those who come after. You put that perfectly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 10th, 2025 21:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, 🥷, I felt the ache of legacy…the fear that what we build might still bind those who come after. You put that perfectly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 10th, 2025 21:17
Just no Justice
sorenbarrett said:
The yin and yang of reality. A lovely writing of dilema and the human concept of justice overthrown by nature\'s rules. A fave
November 10th, 2025 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
The yin and yang of reality. A lovely writing of dilema and the human concept of justice overthrown by nature\'s rules. A fave
November 10th, 2025 14:36
What if...
NafisaSB said:
Let the if hide behind you and say aloud/ I can and I will
November 10th, 2025 11:54
NafisaSB said:
Let the if hide behind you and say aloud/ I can and I will
November 10th, 2025 11:54
1 View
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Isn\'t that the truth of it? Great acknowledgement! For we are our own firsts in here. Way to call it out!
November 8th, 2025 11:13
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Isn\'t that the truth of it? Great acknowledgement! For we are our own firsts in here. Way to call it out!
November 8th, 2025 11:13
1 View
Tristan Robert Lange said:
If you don\'t love and advocate for yourself, who will! Also, I have noticed the 1 View after publishing too. What a neat homage to the view and a powerful message. Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2025 22:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
If you don\'t love and advocate for yourself, who will! Also, I have noticed the 1 View after publishing too. What a neat homage to the view and a powerful message. Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2025 22:04
1 View
sorenbarrett said:
One has to believe in oneself and support oneself in this life. A lovely write about taking one\'s own side. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
One has to believe in oneself and support oneself in this life. A lovely write about taking one\'s own side. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 14:00
What if...
RSM0812 said:
A poem about self doubt and a lack of confidence. I think every person goes through this in their life time. Nicely written Ninjagirl.
November 6th, 2025 06:34
RSM0812 said:
A poem about self doubt and a lack of confidence. I think every person goes through this in their life time. Nicely written Ninjagirl.
November 6th, 2025 06:34
What if...
Paul Bell said:
There is a willing there, a little spark.
Sometimes that\'s all you need. Onwards and upwards.
November 5th, 2025 07:26
Paul Bell said:
There is a willing there, a little spark.
Sometimes that\'s all you need. Onwards and upwards.
November 5th, 2025 07:26
What if...
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is raw and it calls out for help. The answer would seem to be one step at a time. Keep up the good work and write it out.
November 5th, 2025 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is raw and it calls out for help. The answer would seem to be one step at a time. Keep up the good work and write it out.
November 5th, 2025 03:39
Thought\'s Grasp
Doggerel Dave said:
I do hope you get some benefit from putting it out here, because it isn\'t an easy read. I\'m at a loss - I can\'t seriously say \'Cheer up, look on the bright side,\' but I do ache to say.......
November 5th, 2025 02:07
Doggerel Dave said:
I do hope you get some benefit from putting it out here, because it isn\'t an easy read. I\'m at a loss - I can\'t seriously say \'Cheer up, look on the bright side,\' but I do ache to say.......
November 5th, 2025 02:07
Thought\'s Grasp
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening poem that is very personal and that is the frightening part. I would very much miss your poetry as I miss the poetry of others that have died and left the site. Keep up your writing.
November 4th, 2025 21:03
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening poem that is very personal and that is the frightening part. I would very much miss your poetry as I miss the poetry of others that have died and left the site. Keep up your writing.
November 4th, 2025 21:03
She Stared Back
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend 🥷…this one creeps up quiet and cold. The stillness between blinks is pure terror. You let the silence do all the screaming. Perfection, imho. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend 🥷…this one creeps up quiet and cold. The stillness between blinks is pure terror. You let the silence do all the screaming. Perfection, imho. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:13
She Stared Back
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice use of human curiosity to hold reader attention. By never revealing and only implying the poem takes on an unfinished and most alluring feel leaving the reader on the edge of their seat. It seems as if it is the statue that moved or was it something on the statue, a bug or spider possibly. We are left to never know and finish it with our own mind supernatural or real the reader\'s choice. Very nicely done
November 4th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice use of human curiosity to hold reader attention. By never revealing and only implying the poem takes on an unfinished and most alluring feel leaving the reader on the edge of their seat. It seems as if it is the statue that moved or was it something on the statue, a bug or spider possibly. We are left to never know and finish it with our own mind supernatural or real the reader\'s choice. Very nicely done
November 4th, 2025 03:57
Dread and Damnation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of symbolism where sins red as blood stain and tears of contrition atone removing the stain. Nicely done
November 3rd, 2025 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of symbolism where sins red as blood stain and tears of contrition atone removing the stain. Nicely done
November 3rd, 2025 03:34
Ghost Child
RSM0812 said:
This is really well writen. It expains the nonexistent souls and the darkness witin them. Nice ✍️
October 26th, 2025 14:53
RSM0812 said:
This is really well writen. It expains the nonexistent souls and the darkness witin them. Nice ✍️
October 26th, 2025 14:53
Answer me!
RSM0812 said:
This is full of great emotion and adversity. I loved the whole poem. Nice ✍️. 😀
October 26th, 2025 14:52
RSM0812 said:
This is full of great emotion and adversity. I loved the whole poem. Nice ✍️. 😀
October 26th, 2025 14:52
A Walk
NafisaSB said:
i find that what is up above is purer till it touches the ground [base] and that is where the dirt starts mingling..
so it is with life too..
[and by the way i too enjoy the rain till it soaks me and then i too start shivering]
October 24th, 2025 01:02
NafisaSB said:
i find that what is up above is purer till it touches the ground [base] and that is where the dirt starts mingling..
so it is with life too..
[and by the way i too enjoy the rain till it soaks me and then i too start shivering]
October 24th, 2025 01:02
Ghost Child
Friendship said:
well written, my friend. Your poem \"Ghost Child\" explores themes of isolation, identity, and the struggle for recognition in an increasingly disconnected world. The ghost child symbolizes a feeling of being unseen and misunderstood, existing in a state of limbo between reality and reflection.🐀
October 23rd, 2025 11:38
Friendship said:
well written, my friend. Your poem \"Ghost Child\" explores themes of isolation, identity, and the struggle for recognition in an increasingly disconnected world. The ghost child symbolizes a feeling of being unseen and misunderstood, existing in a state of limbo between reality and reflection.🐀
October 23rd, 2025 11:38
Ghost Child
sorenbarrett said:
There are people like this who have not formed their identity and do not see who they are. Then again being the season it could speak of ghosts or vampires that supposedly can not see their reflection. Nicely composed it has a haunting feeling.
October 22nd, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
There are people like this who have not formed their identity and do not see who they are. Then again being the season it could speak of ghosts or vampires that supposedly can not see their reflection. Nicely composed it has a haunting feeling.
October 22nd, 2025 04:10
Ghost Child
jarcher54 said:
Scaring and scared... perfect description of our imagined (or real?) ghosts... kind of like a rat... scares us to death but is more scared of us than we are of it. The ghostly being is as vulnerable as it is powerful... as confused as it is aggressive.
October 22nd, 2025 00:05
jarcher54 said:
Scaring and scared... perfect description of our imagined (or real?) ghosts... kind of like a rat... scares us to death but is more scared of us than we are of it. The ghostly being is as vulnerable as it is powerful... as confused as it is aggressive.
October 22nd, 2025 00:05
Answer me!
sorenbarrett said:
A most graphic description of anguish and desire for its removal. The imagery is well done here and very descriptive
October 21st, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most graphic description of anguish and desire for its removal. The imagery is well done here and very descriptive
October 21st, 2025 04:09
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