Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
paranoid
sorenbarrett said:
Which is better to think that no one is after you when they are or think they are not? And we know they are. A pertinant poem about how things are for many now days. Very nicely put and written
January 7th, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
Which is better to think that no one is after you when they are or think they are not? And we know they are. A pertinant poem about how things are for many now days. Very nicely put and written
January 7th, 2025 13:37
paranoid
rin said:
In my case, when I can\'t stop thinking, I listen to pop music to clear my head and think of poetry. If you think about it too much, the poem will become complicated.
January 7th, 2025 13:24
rin said:
In my case, when I can\'t stop thinking, I listen to pop music to clear my head and think of poetry. If you think about it too much, the poem will become complicated.
January 7th, 2025 13:24
shattered
TobaniNataiella said:
Everything has a use and has value, it is how we perceive and use it that matters, enjoyed the read.
January 7th, 2025 04:11
TobaniNataiella said:
Everything has a use and has value, it is how we perceive and use it that matters, enjoyed the read.
January 7th, 2025 04:11
shattered
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought deeply philosophical highly existential and seems to leave no bright answer, But no everything has its use and those shards may be gathered by an artist to be used in their next work, a fisherman to cut his line, they may cut the foot of a murderer now unable to complete his task. All things have a purpose.
January 7th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought deeply philosophical highly existential and seems to leave no bright answer, But no everything has its use and those shards may be gathered by an artist to be used in their next work, a fisherman to cut his line, they may cut the foot of a murderer now unable to complete his task. All things have a purpose.
January 7th, 2025 03:58
shattered
rin said:
Even if you become dangerous, you may feel spicy to others. But it might still be good.
When you look in the mirror and keep checking yourself, you may not know the real you.
January 6th, 2025 23:04
rin said:
Even if you become dangerous, you may feel spicy to others. But it might still be good.
When you look in the mirror and keep checking yourself, you may not know the real you.
January 6th, 2025 23:04
shattered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
C\'est une trรจs bonne question mon ami. Je ne pense pas. Brava, my deeply philosophical friend! Excellent poetic musing! ๐น๐
January 6th, 2025 21:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
C\'est une trรจs bonne question mon ami. Je ne pense pas. Brava, my deeply philosophical friend! Excellent poetic musing! ๐น๐
January 6th, 2025 21:19
wild curls
TobaniNataiella said:
This is a very brave poem dealing with some a subject absolutely disgusting, sadly i know myself how common this was and still is. It raises anger that it happened and still happens and sorrow and feeling for the recipient. I wish you all the best
January 5th, 2025 20:48
TobaniNataiella said:
This is a very brave poem dealing with some a subject absolutely disgusting, sadly i know myself how common this was and still is. It raises anger that it happened and still happens and sorrow and feeling for the recipient. I wish you all the best
January 5th, 2025 20:48
wild curls
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes my skin crawl with revultion, not from the poem but the content itself. Sad and upsetting it provokes anger and pitty. I have always said that you can tell if a work is a piece of art by the emotion it provoke and so I proclaim this a work of art
January 5th, 2025 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes my skin crawl with revultion, not from the poem but the content itself. Sad and upsetting it provokes anger and pitty. I have always said that you can tell if a work is a piece of art by the emotion it provoke and so I proclaim this a work of art
January 5th, 2025 18:04
blistered fingers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading Sorenโs beautiful comment, I have nothing to offer other than to say, brillianf job NG! ๐น๐
January 4th, 2025 23:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading Sorenโs beautiful comment, I have nothing to offer other than to say, brillianf job NG! ๐น๐
January 4th, 2025 23:01
blistered fingers
Mutley Ravishes said:
Led Zeppelin have a song, โNobodyโs Fault But Mine,โ which is pausetastic!
January 4th, 2025 20:52
Mutley Ravishes said:
Led Zeppelin have a song, โNobodyโs Fault But Mine,โ which is pausetastic!
January 4th, 2025 20:52
blistered fingers
rin said:
I guess there is music called emotion in the spaces between the notes. This is my favorite poem.
January 4th, 2025 18:21
rin said:
I guess there is music called emotion in the spaces between the notes. This is my favorite poem.
January 4th, 2025 18:21
blistered fingers
TobaniNataiella said:
The pause is important that is where you stamp your own mark, nicely written
January 4th, 2025 16:50
TobaniNataiella said:
The pause is important that is where you stamp your own mark, nicely written
January 4th, 2025 16:50
blistered fingers
sorenbarrett said:
Two people playing the same song do not sound the same. Each puts their own soul into it. It is the white spaces that make it yours
January 4th, 2025 15:19
sorenbarrett said:
Two people playing the same song do not sound the same. Each puts their own soul into it. It is the white spaces that make it yours
January 4th, 2025 15:19
trauma
rin said:
I still have vague memories of trauma, but I don\'t think I can reject it because it\'s the path I\'ve taken.
January 4th, 2025 00:48
rin said:
I still have vague memories of trauma, but I don\'t think I can reject it because it\'s the path I\'ve taken.
January 4th, 2025 00:48
trauma
TobaniNataiella said:
No one opens doors easily if they already know the horrors behind them. I have found with time, some i managed to have a peek through, some i opened and some i decided it was best i never opened again, but each person is different. I totally understand the feeling and emotion in this poem. All the best
January 3rd, 2025 21:20
TobaniNataiella said:
No one opens doors easily if they already know the horrors behind them. I have found with time, some i managed to have a peek through, some i opened and some i decided it was best i never opened again, but each person is different. I totally understand the feeling and emotion in this poem. All the best
January 3rd, 2025 21:20
trauma
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor and it is hard to open doors that have no key. Hard to change what you have always been. A most existential poem.
January 3rd, 2025 20:58
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor and it is hard to open doors that have no key. Hard to change what you have always been. A most existential poem.
January 3rd, 2025 20:58
his sister
TobaniNataiella said:
A very honest and emotional read, hope you are on the mend. Happy New Year To You and All
January 3rd, 2025 01:51
TobaniNataiella said:
A very honest and emotional read, hope you are on the mend. Happy New Year To You and All
January 3rd, 2025 01:51
his sister
๐ฉMase๐ช said:
I can see the emotion put into this piece, good write NinjaGirl. ๐
January 2nd, 2025 22:05
๐ฉMase๐ช said:
I can see the emotion put into this piece, good write NinjaGirl. ๐
January 2nd, 2025 22:05
his sister
sorenbarrett said:
Raw, open and full of gut wrenching emotion. This poem is difficult to take in its honesty and sadness. It shows sensitivity to the emotional needs of others in contradiction to their own. Complex and courageous in its expression. A tough read. Bravo
January 2nd, 2025 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
Raw, open and full of gut wrenching emotion. This poem is difficult to take in its honesty and sadness. It shows sensitivity to the emotional needs of others in contradiction to their own. Complex and courageous in its expression. A tough read. Bravo
January 2nd, 2025 20:49
his sister
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can feel the emotions, which are rich in this poem my friend. Raw and honest. Well done! ๐น๐
January 2nd, 2025 20:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can feel the emotions, which are rich in this poem my friend. Raw and honest. Well done! ๐น๐
January 2nd, 2025 20:23
young me mirage
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse is never acceptable and to allow it only fosters it. So glad to hear that this poem acknowledges it and no the victim is not to blame. A powerful write that takes courage to write.
January 2nd, 2025 18:00
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse is never acceptable and to allow it only fosters it. So glad to hear that this poem acknowledges it and no the victim is not to blame. A powerful write that takes courage to write.
January 2nd, 2025 18:00
when
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes! You are! We all have areas we need to grow in, but we should fundamentally love ourselves for who we are. Oh, my dear friend, I feel for you as I know this struggle deeply. The struggle to love yourself. I am so praying for healing for you and trust you will resiliently find a way to it...but it is so very hard and takes time. That I know personally. Your writing, no doubt, is a part of your healing. It has been a part of mine. And I still got a hell of a lot more to heal. My heart is heavy for you, but I also rejoice at the fact that you, my talented friend, have found this outlet of expression. Anywho, I hope you are well and cannot wait to read another of your poems! ๐ And, maybe next time I won\'t read it 4 days late! ๐คฃ Hope you had a Merry Christmas/Happy Holiday!
December 29th, 2024 18:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes! You are! We all have areas we need to grow in, but we should fundamentally love ourselves for who we are. Oh, my dear friend, I feel for you as I know this struggle deeply. The struggle to love yourself. I am so praying for healing for you and trust you will resiliently find a way to it...but it is so very hard and takes time. That I know personally. Your writing, no doubt, is a part of your healing. It has been a part of mine. And I still got a hell of a lot more to heal. My heart is heavy for you, but I also rejoice at the fact that you, my talented friend, have found this outlet of expression. Anywho, I hope you are well and cannot wait to read another of your poems! ๐ And, maybe next time I won\'t read it 4 days late! ๐คฃ Hope you had a Merry Christmas/Happy Holiday!
December 29th, 2024 18:24
when
jarcher54 said:
Short gut punch... in the best way poetry can do that. You always wake me from my daily somnambulation with your questions. Wounds can heal, but the deep ones leave scars. Scars can be a sign of wisdom, and are sexy to boot!
December 25th, 2024 23:25
jarcher54 said:
Short gut punch... in the best way poetry can do that. You always wake me from my daily somnambulation with your questions. Wounds can heal, but the deep ones leave scars. Scars can be a sign of wisdom, and are sexy to boot!
December 25th, 2024 23:25
when
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view on what you are and what you should change. Well written and provocative
December 25th, 2024 18:50
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view on what you are and what you should change. Well written and provocative
December 25th, 2024 18:50
when
Cheeky Missy said:
Perhaps you will realize at some later point when you\'ve given up, that you have actually always been more fond of yourself than otherwise-- it\'s what causes us so much misery. We love ourselves, that\'s why we\'re perpetually dissatisfied with ourselves, because reality proves we fall short of our high estimation. But enough of that.
Beautifully rendered in charming brevity with a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 25th, 2024 18:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Perhaps you will realize at some later point when you\'ve given up, that you have actually always been more fond of yourself than otherwise-- it\'s what causes us so much misery. We love ourselves, that\'s why we\'re perpetually dissatisfied with ourselves, because reality proves we fall short of our high estimation. But enough of that.
Beautifully rendered in charming brevity with a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 25th, 2024 18:31
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