Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
sharp metal
Poetic Licence said:
Honest,raw and powerful write that will relate to many , it\'s much common than people are prepared to acknowledge
March 28th, 2025 21:00
Poetic Licence said:
Honest,raw and powerful write that will relate to many , it\'s much common than people are prepared to acknowledge
March 28th, 2025 21:00
sharp metal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I know you know I relate to this one! Well expressed, friend. A reality for so many! Thank you, as always, for your willingness to make yourself vulnerable! π€ππ¦π¦ββ¬π¦β€οΈβπ©Ή
March 28th, 2025 20:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I know you know I relate to this one! Well expressed, friend. A reality for so many! Thank you, as always, for your willingness to make yourself vulnerable! π€ππ¦π¦ββ¬π¦β€οΈβπ©Ή
March 28th, 2025 20:57
wolly mammoth
MR.apocalypse said:
right 100% thats whay we need to stop funding these random and unhelpfull government agencys
March 17th, 2025 13:10
MR.apocalypse said:
right 100% thats whay we need to stop funding these random and unhelpfull government agencys
March 17th, 2025 13:10
wolly mammoth
sorenbarrett said:
Science follows funding not priorities unfortunately. A poignant write that gets to the heart of why things are the way they are.
March 10th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Science follows funding not priorities unfortunately. A poignant write that gets to the heart of why things are the way they are.
March 10th, 2025 04:09
wolly mammoth
Poetic Licence said:
It is astounding what some people consider priority in life, valid point, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:31
Poetic Licence said:
It is astounding what some people consider priority in life, valid point, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:31
wolly mammoth
Mutley Ravishes said:
Try checking out what\'s happening to the plankton in the oceans.
March 10th, 2025 02:39
Mutley Ravishes said:
Try checking out what\'s happening to the plankton in the oceans.
March 10th, 2025 02:39
wolly mammoth
α΄·α΅αΆ»α΅Λ£Λ£α΅ said:
They\'re actually trying that?!?! WHAT?
March 9th, 2025 23:48
α΄·α΅αΆ»α΅Λ£Λ£α΅ said:
They\'re actually trying that?!?! WHAT?
March 9th, 2025 23:48
wolly mammoth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Perhaps they\'re working on a more docile mammal to inhabit the White House? π€£ I mean, could be? π€·ββοΈ All jokes aside, you ain\'t kidding...not to mention, wasn\'t their an entire sci-fi book and film series devoted to warning us as to why that is a VERY BAD IDEA? Well done on this, my friend!!! π¦£π
March 9th, 2025 22:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Perhaps they\'re working on a more docile mammal to inhabit the White House? π€£ I mean, could be? π€·ββοΈ All jokes aside, you ain\'t kidding...not to mention, wasn\'t their an entire sci-fi book and film series devoted to warning us as to why that is a VERY BAD IDEA? Well done on this, my friend!!! π¦£π
March 9th, 2025 22:37
silent plea
RSM0812 said:
Sounds lonely. Time for a cup of hot chocolate and a cigarette.
March 9th, 2025 16:36
RSM0812 said:
Sounds lonely. Time for a cup of hot chocolate and a cigarette.
March 9th, 2025 16:36
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The plain speaking rebel talks in this poem. Yes and more yes, we need more of this. Wonderful!
March 9th, 2025 09:38
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The plain speaking rebel talks in this poem. Yes and more yes, we need more of this. Wonderful!
March 9th, 2025 09:38
silent plea
Poetic Licence said:
Hope the prayers are answered, powerful and sad write
March 7th, 2025 14:01
Poetic Licence said:
Hope the prayers are answered, powerful and sad write
March 7th, 2025 14:01
silent plea
sorenbarrett said:
When holding on over a long fall it is surprising how long one can hold on. A most heart felt read
March 7th, 2025 12:22
sorenbarrett said:
When holding on over a long fall it is surprising how long one can hold on. A most heart felt read
March 7th, 2025 12:22
The In-Between
Cassie58 said:
Great title and a place I recognize. Well done NinjaGirl.
March 5th, 2025 18:37
Cassie58 said:
Great title and a place I recognize. Well done NinjaGirl.
March 5th, 2025 18:37
The In-Between
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a place I\'ve been often. Great descriptive words. Lovely
March 5th, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a place I\'ve been often. Great descriptive words. Lovely
March 5th, 2025 13:30
the paid price
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was witty, clever and rang so wonderfully that I had to ready it three times over! You are not just any ninja my friend...you are a brilliant ninja! An easy fave for me.πΉπ
March 5th, 2025 02:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was witty, clever and rang so wonderfully that I had to ready it three times over! You are not just any ninja my friend...you are a brilliant ninja! An easy fave for me.πΉπ
March 5th, 2025 02:11
the paid price
Poetic Licence said:
I got the sense of the cycle of abuse, how people are used,abused and disposed of for someone else to then use and abuse,a sad but very powerful write, clever in it\'s writings
March 4th, 2025 18:04
Poetic Licence said:
I got the sense of the cycle of abuse, how people are used,abused and disposed of for someone else to then use and abuse,a sad but very powerful write, clever in it\'s writings
March 4th, 2025 18:04
the paid price
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is something different. So well worded and cleverly structured it rolls off the tongue but rattles in the mind. The meaning of this may be many but what I took was feelings of being discarded, when there is an expectation of being cared for, of being nothing more than an object to be purchased and used therefore abused. A sad poem of people treated as objects. Whether a child, woman or weak person treated as a slave and or disposable property. Gut wrenching. A most ingenious write deserving of a fave.
March 4th, 2025 17:14
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is something different. So well worded and cleverly structured it rolls off the tongue but rattles in the mind. The meaning of this may be many but what I took was feelings of being discarded, when there is an expectation of being cared for, of being nothing more than an object to be purchased and used therefore abused. A sad poem of people treated as objects. Whether a child, woman or weak person treated as a slave and or disposable property. Gut wrenching. A most ingenious write deserving of a fave.
March 4th, 2025 17:14
paranoid
Firefall said:
Love your poem! Wonderful capture of that paranoid feeling.
March 4th, 2025 16:01
Firefall said:
Love your poem! Wonderful capture of that paranoid feeling.
March 4th, 2025 16:01
Time Passes
Cassie58 said:
A lovely poem which conveys some dark imagery. Yes change isnβt always for the good, but we have to live in hope. We have to keep that light at the end of the tunnel. Enjoyed reading you Ninjagirl.
March 4th, 2025 03:37
Cassie58 said:
A lovely poem which conveys some dark imagery. Yes change isnβt always for the good, but we have to live in hope. We have to keep that light at the end of the tunnel. Enjoyed reading you Ninjagirl.
March 4th, 2025 03:37
looking like crap
NafisaSB said:
so poignantly expressed -most of us have had those days- i wish they will occur with less frequency, or disappear altogether
March 4th, 2025 00:17
NafisaSB said:
so poignantly expressed -most of us have had those days- i wish they will occur with less frequency, or disappear altogether
March 4th, 2025 00:17
Time Passes
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard a story about an old Taoist practitioner who, when he died, it took three days for rigor mortis to set in. Then of course, there\'s that story about a guy who died, \"slept\" in a cave for three days and came back out again... in the same body! What does it all mean?!
March 3rd, 2025 18:47
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard a story about an old Taoist practitioner who, when he died, it took three days for rigor mortis to set in. Then of course, there\'s that story about a guy who died, \"slept\" in a cave for three days and came back out again... in the same body! What does it all mean?!
March 3rd, 2025 18:47
Time Passes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. We can change for good or worse. Sometimes, often times perhaps, we make/accept those changes thinking one thing will come only to discover another. What we thought good...bad. What we thought bad...good. Then again, what makes them bad or good, but the effect we perceive they have on us. Those effects, of course, very real but what affects one positively might not be positive to someone else. Fascinating poem with thought-provoking teeth, my friend. An easy fave from me. Powerful stuff. πΉπ
March 3rd, 2025 17:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. We can change for good or worse. Sometimes, often times perhaps, we make/accept those changes thinking one thing will come only to discover another. What we thought good...bad. What we thought bad...good. Then again, what makes them bad or good, but the effect we perceive they have on us. Those effects, of course, very real but what affects one positively might not be positive to someone else. Fascinating poem with thought-provoking teeth, my friend. An easy fave from me. Powerful stuff. πΉπ
March 3rd, 2025 17:28
Time Passes
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with despair shows hope then returns to darkness only to end on what was really important and bright. A most lovely write.
March 3rd, 2025 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with despair shows hope then returns to darkness only to end on what was really important and bright. A most lovely write.
March 3rd, 2025 14:44
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
NafisaSB said:
I respect, laud and second your sentiments.
keep it up
February 28th, 2025 23:57
NafisaSB said:
I respect, laud and second your sentiments.
keep it up
February 28th, 2025 23:57
sleepless nights
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This sings! Beautiful job, my friend! An easy fave! πΉπ
February 27th, 2025 18:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This sings! Beautiful job, my friend! An easy fave! πΉπ
February 27th, 2025 18:29
sleepless nights
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic is this poem. The rhyme holds me like a magnet and it rolls on pulling me with it. A wonderful short
February 27th, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic is this poem. The rhyme holds me like a magnet and it rolls on pulling me with it. A wonderful short
February 27th, 2025 14:26
looking like crap
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, I feel bad being a man sometimes as we don\'t generally have any pressure like this.
February 27th, 2025 08:39
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, I feel bad being a man sometimes as we don\'t generally have any pressure like this.
February 27th, 2025 08:39
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