Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
watchtower
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write brick by brick we try to build relationships and trust, in the end realizing no one can be trusted, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 02:12
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write brick by brick we try to build relationships and trust, in the end realizing no one can be trusted, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 02:12
watchtower
sorenbarrett said:
A psychological understanding cast in metaphor so well constructed. Line by line brick by brick a poem built that leads to an unacceptable but inevitable ending where none are to be trusted. Without trust one can not tell the truth. Great write a fave
April 9th, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
A psychological understanding cast in metaphor so well constructed. Line by line brick by brick a poem built that leads to an unacceptable but inevitable ending where none are to be trusted. Without trust one can not tell the truth. Great write a fave
April 9th, 2025 15:05
Divided
NafisaSB said:
politics and politicians - best avoided - they seek to divide people as they feel they can gain votes - reform is a far cry, though sorely needed
April 8th, 2025 00:46
NafisaSB said:
politics and politicians - best avoided - they seek to divide people as they feel they can gain votes - reform is a far cry, though sorely needed
April 8th, 2025 00:46
sharp metal
NafisaSB said:
just today morning my sister told me she had cut herself, and the wound was deep
i am just glad it was only physical, and will soon heal
April 6th, 2025 02:58
NafisaSB said:
just today morning my sister told me she had cut herself, and the wound was deep
i am just glad it was only physical, and will soon heal
April 6th, 2025 02:58
Divided
spilleronsheet said:
The true world…the only reality that seems ignored but true to core…well written dear poet
April 3rd, 2025 14:39
spilleronsheet said:
The true world…the only reality that seems ignored but true to core…well written dear poet
April 3rd, 2025 14:39
Divided
Poetic Licence said:
To those who create division and hatred and continue to fuel the fire unity is there biggest fear, I hope one day people put politics to one side and come together to do what is right for all, not just the elite, loved the read
April 2nd, 2025 12:07
Poetic Licence said:
To those who create division and hatred and continue to fuel the fire unity is there biggest fear, I hope one day people put politics to one side and come together to do what is right for all, not just the elite, loved the read
April 2nd, 2025 12:07
Divided
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a flawed process in a flawed system. Very well written.
April 2nd, 2025 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a flawed process in a flawed system. Very well written.
April 2nd, 2025 10:22
Divided
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Preach it sister! Amen! 💯 You are wise and this poem is absolutely needed! Another swipe of your katana! #ResistTheMachine 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2025 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Preach it sister! Amen! 💯 You are wise and this poem is absolutely needed! Another swipe of your katana! #ResistTheMachine 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2025 09:21
The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting and different way of looking at how love and punishment are handed out. It raises alot of thought and pondering, well written, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 04:36
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting and different way of looking at how love and punishment are handed out. It raises alot of thought and pondering, well written, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 04:36
The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare
sorenbarrett said:
There is some deep philosophical thought in these three stanzas. Might i offer that we all tend to judge things on a human scale the universe and death are not human and have a different measuring stick. Pain is prejudiced not at all equal in its treatment of individuals. Love and care again very unequal. To me death is an equalizer happening to all without discrimination. What we see as justice is not part of the universal game where there are no winners or loosers only players. Very nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 02:48
sorenbarrett said:
There is some deep philosophical thought in these three stanzas. Might i offer that we all tend to judge things on a human scale the universe and death are not human and have a different measuring stick. Pain is prejudiced not at all equal in its treatment of individuals. Love and care again very unequal. To me death is an equalizer happening to all without discrimination. What we see as justice is not part of the universal game where there are no winners or loosers only players. Very nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 02:48
The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I am humbled and super excited to see this! Indeed, how just is death if it is the reward for the oppressed is the same exact thing as the punishment for the oppressor. That is a strange, if not cruel, sort of out come to be calling \"level\", let alone the differences at how the two arrived there, though in the end, it is a level in the sense that all go through it, but not all go through it equally and no \"justice\" involved in it, just a reality we all must face and there\'s no avoiding it, rich or not. But, it is not equal in how or when it is distributed. Well done on this, my dear friend. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 00:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I am humbled and super excited to see this! Indeed, how just is death if it is the reward for the oppressed is the same exact thing as the punishment for the oppressor. That is a strange, if not cruel, sort of out come to be calling \"level\", let alone the differences at how the two arrived there, though in the end, it is a level in the sense that all go through it, but not all go through it equally and no \"justice\" involved in it, just a reality we all must face and there\'s no avoiding it, rich or not. But, it is not equal in how or when it is distributed. Well done on this, my dear friend. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 00:02
10 stories
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted and structured write, leading you to the ultimate end, nice write
March 31st, 2025 14:01
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted and structured write, leading you to the ultimate end, nice write
March 31st, 2025 14:01
10 stories
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and dark at the beginning becoming darker as it goes on and black at the end. Wow! very impactful.
March 31st, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and dark at the beginning becoming darker as it goes on and black at the end. Wow! very impactful.
March 31st, 2025 12:57
10 stories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem fall with impact, my friend! The creative structure felt like each stage of the fall with the point, such an urgent message, being the ground! Well done! A fave from me for its creativity and boldness. 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem fall with impact, my friend! The creative structure felt like each stage of the fall with the point, such an urgent message, being the ground! Well done! A fave from me for its creativity and boldness. 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:49
sharp metal
Damaso said:
What a painful and sad landscape is described in this poem. Anyone who has been there knows better than to judge the reasons. I hope all the wounds heal. Very beautiful. Greetings.
March 29th, 2025 08:44
Damaso said:
What a painful and sad landscape is described in this poem. Anyone who has been there knows better than to judge the reasons. I hope all the wounds heal. Very beautiful. Greetings.
March 29th, 2025 08:44
sharp metal
sorenbarrett said:
Literal or metaphoric it resounds with pain. Pain and concern. Why do we all injure ourselves in one way or another? Self destructive in relationships, business, politics, driving, it doesn\'t matter knowing better makes no difference. A raw and powerful poem, brave.
March 29th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Literal or metaphoric it resounds with pain. Pain and concern. Why do we all injure ourselves in one way or another? Self destructive in relationships, business, politics, driving, it doesn\'t matter knowing better makes no difference. A raw and powerful poem, brave.
March 29th, 2025 03:52
sharp metal
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s got a blade
That’s sharper than anything
Man made
Have a great
Weekend
March 29th, 2025 01:46
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s got a blade
That’s sharper than anything
Man made
Have a great
Weekend
March 29th, 2025 01:46
sharp metal
Poetic Licence said:
Honest,raw and powerful write that will relate to many , it\'s much common than people are prepared to acknowledge
March 28th, 2025 21:00
Poetic Licence said:
Honest,raw and powerful write that will relate to many , it\'s much common than people are prepared to acknowledge
March 28th, 2025 21:00
sharp metal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I know you know I relate to this one! Well expressed, friend. A reality for so many! Thank you, as always, for your willingness to make yourself vulnerable! 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛🦇❤️🩹
March 28th, 2025 20:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I know you know I relate to this one! Well expressed, friend. A reality for so many! Thank you, as always, for your willingness to make yourself vulnerable! 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛🦇❤️🩹
March 28th, 2025 20:57
wolly mammoth
MR.apocalypse said:
right 100% thats whay we need to stop funding these random and unhelpfull government agencys
March 17th, 2025 13:10
MR.apocalypse said:
right 100% thats whay we need to stop funding these random and unhelpfull government agencys
March 17th, 2025 13:10
wolly mammoth
sorenbarrett said:
Science follows funding not priorities unfortunately. A poignant write that gets to the heart of why things are the way they are.
March 10th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Science follows funding not priorities unfortunately. A poignant write that gets to the heart of why things are the way they are.
March 10th, 2025 04:09
wolly mammoth
Poetic Licence said:
It is astounding what some people consider priority in life, valid point, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:31
Poetic Licence said:
It is astounding what some people consider priority in life, valid point, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:31
wolly mammoth
Mutley Ravishes said:
Try checking out what\'s happening to the plankton in the oceans.
March 10th, 2025 02:39
Mutley Ravishes said:
Try checking out what\'s happening to the plankton in the oceans.
March 10th, 2025 02:39
wolly mammoth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Perhaps they\'re working on a more docile mammal to inhabit the White House? 🤣 I mean, could be? 🤷♂️ All jokes aside, you ain\'t kidding...not to mention, wasn\'t their an entire sci-fi book and film series devoted to warning us as to why that is a VERY BAD IDEA? Well done on this, my friend!!! 🦣🐁
March 9th, 2025 22:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Perhaps they\'re working on a more docile mammal to inhabit the White House? 🤣 I mean, could be? 🤷♂️ All jokes aside, you ain\'t kidding...not to mention, wasn\'t their an entire sci-fi book and film series devoted to warning us as to why that is a VERY BAD IDEA? Well done on this, my friend!!! 🦣🐁
March 9th, 2025 22:37
silent plea
RSM0812 said:
Sounds lonely. Time for a cup of hot chocolate and a cigarette.
March 9th, 2025 16:36
RSM0812 said:
Sounds lonely. Time for a cup of hot chocolate and a cigarette.
March 9th, 2025 16:36
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The plain speaking rebel talks in this poem. Yes and more yes, we need more of this. Wonderful!
March 9th, 2025 09:38
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The plain speaking rebel talks in this poem. Yes and more yes, we need more of this. Wonderful!
March 9th, 2025 09:38
silent plea
Poetic Licence said:
Hope the prayers are answered, powerful and sad write
March 7th, 2025 14:01
Poetic Licence said:
Hope the prayers are answered, powerful and sad write
March 7th, 2025 14:01
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