Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
lovesick
sorenbarrett said:
A poem enigmatic I love it. It is far different than most love poems and therefor most creative. As someone that has been there in all aspects I would say it contains wisdom beyound your years
February 5th, 2025 18:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem enigmatic I love it. It is far different than most love poems and therefor most creative. As someone that has been there in all aspects I would say it contains wisdom beyound your years
February 5th, 2025 18:51
hollow
sorenbarrett said:
The transformation of changing from what one is to what one thinks that others want them to be. It is an emptying process. Very nicely done
February 4th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
The transformation of changing from what one is to what one thinks that others want them to be. It is an emptying process. Very nicely done
February 4th, 2025 04:14
hollow
LP2187 said:
A powerful poem about dehumanising when trying to fit in to stuff like social standards I really liked reading!
February 4th, 2025 02:28
LP2187 said:
A powerful poem about dehumanising when trying to fit in to stuff like social standards I really liked reading!
February 4th, 2025 02:28
Juxtaposed Justice
2781 said:
Because of his strength will I wait upon thee: for God is my defence.
February 1st, 2025 00:29
2781 said:
Because of his strength will I wait upon thee: for God is my defence.
February 1st, 2025 00:29
Juxtaposed Justice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This prayer/psalm does not go unheard, my dear friend. Heartbreaking because I have prayed similarly and understand this well. So sorry you had to endure such horrific evil. Justice will be had one way or the other. Praying for peace and healing for you in the meantime. This is a wonderful poem and an excellent display of faith, too. That is exactly what makes the Psalms so powerful, imho. They\'re human, raw, and honest. Well done! πΉπ
January 31st, 2025 23:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This prayer/psalm does not go unheard, my dear friend. Heartbreaking because I have prayed similarly and understand this well. So sorry you had to endure such horrific evil. Justice will be had one way or the other. Praying for peace and healing for you in the meantime. This is a wonderful poem and an excellent display of faith, too. That is exactly what makes the Psalms so powerful, imho. They\'re human, raw, and honest. Well done! πΉπ
January 31st, 2025 23:37
Juxtaposed Justice
sorenbarrett said:
Heart rending and powerful this poem speaks to pain
January 31st, 2025 21:36
sorenbarrett said:
Heart rending and powerful this poem speaks to pain
January 31st, 2025 21:36
start over
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this message my friend. Your note is so true and so hard to sell myself on! π€£π We are so prone to think that way, are we not? Thank you for the reminder! πβ€οΈ
January 29th, 2025 22:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this message my friend. Your note is so true and so hard to sell myself on! π€£π We are so prone to think that way, are we not? Thank you for the reminder! πβ€οΈ
January 29th, 2025 22:16
start over
sorenbarrett said:
A great message that there is always choice, there is always another time, there is always a way to be happy. Very uplifting
January 29th, 2025 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
A great message that there is always choice, there is always another time, there is always a way to be happy. Very uplifting
January 29th, 2025 19:32
rain
Poetic Licence said:
Very cleverly done, feel it raining as you read down, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:52
Poetic Licence said:
Very cleverly done, feel it raining as you read down, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:52
rain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this vertical poem that has you reading what feels like the rain falling. Well done, and very relatable.
January 28th, 2025 19:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this vertical poem that has you reading what feels like the rain falling. Well done, and very relatable.
January 28th, 2025 19:44
rain
LP2187 said:
Such an impactful poem, I like the layout, thanks for sharing.
January 28th, 2025 14:06
LP2187 said:
Such an impactful poem, I like the layout, thanks for sharing.
January 28th, 2025 14:06
rain
sorenbarrett said:
A great picture running in a stream from the roof to the gutter free. Ithought that you had gone back to that time when there were no spaces between words and no punctuation. That made things as hard to read as the rain itself. I was going to do this to this review as a puddle but thought better of it. Very createive.
January 28th, 2025 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
A great picture running in a stream from the roof to the gutter free. Ithought that you had gone back to that time when there were no spaces between words and no punctuation. That made things as hard to read as the rain itself. I was going to do this to this review as a puddle but thought better of it. Very createive.
January 28th, 2025 14:00
It\'s always \"why did you send them pictures of yourself, you\'re so irresponsible\" and not \"oh my word they were pedophiles is there not any way we can track them down?\"
ακ«ΖΊκ«α₯α₯κ« said:
True
January 28th, 2025 00:34
ακ«ΖΊκ«α₯α₯κ« said:
True
January 28th, 2025 00:34
It\'s always \"why did you send them pictures of yourself, you\'re so irresponsible\" and not \"oh my word they were pedophiles is there not any way we can track them down?\"
NinjaGirl said:
Reminder that if a 45 year old man is preying on a 15-16 year old girl, the girl is not the problem.
January 27th, 2025 22:00
NinjaGirl said:
Reminder that if a 45 year old man is preying on a 15-16 year old girl, the girl is not the problem.
January 27th, 2025 22:00
she
LP2187 said:
An intriguing poem, wish I still learnt French. Enjoyed the read!
January 26th, 2025 03:38
LP2187 said:
An intriguing poem, wish I still learnt French. Enjoyed the read!
January 26th, 2025 03:38
she
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this was a fun mix of French and English. I really love how it bounces back and forth between the languages giving it a really unique vibe. As I read it, it is about this βbelleβ (beautiful) woman whoβs going through shitty times, how people have abandoned her because of what appears to be selfishness, but then the poignant reminder that it was not her choice to be that way, calling the reader to have empathy and understanding. Nice write! Really loved this, my friend. A fave for sure. πΉπ
January 25th, 2025 20:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this was a fun mix of French and English. I really love how it bounces back and forth between the languages giving it a really unique vibe. As I read it, it is about this βbelleβ (beautiful) woman whoβs going through shitty times, how people have abandoned her because of what appears to be selfishness, but then the poignant reminder that it was not her choice to be that way, calling the reader to have empathy and understanding. Nice write! Really loved this, my friend. A fave for sure. πΉπ
January 25th, 2025 20:19
she
sorenbarrett said:
Very interesting a blend of French and English leaving me halfout or at least a quarter out in that I don\'t speak French but do understand some latin based words. Very unique and a fun read like a puzzle to think about. Liked the form as well
January 25th, 2025 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
Very interesting a blend of French and English leaving me halfout or at least a quarter out in that I don\'t speak French but do understand some latin based words. Very unique and a fun read like a puzzle to think about. Liked the form as well
January 25th, 2025 18:33
another little girl
NafisaSB said:
we never know the reason why we have to undergo suffering despite being a good person - but i have realized that there is always a purpose in how things shape up. earlier i used to try to fight and change things; now i accept them knowing that whatever is destined will be; and hopefully the best
January 24th, 2025 23:28
NafisaSB said:
we never know the reason why we have to undergo suffering despite being a good person - but i have realized that there is always a purpose in how things shape up. earlier i used to try to fight and change things; now i accept them knowing that whatever is destined will be; and hopefully the best
January 24th, 2025 23:28
the tall woman
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hauntingly awesome, my friend! From the anals of reddit! LOL! πΉπ
January 24th, 2025 15:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hauntingly awesome, my friend! From the anals of reddit! LOL! πΉπ
January 24th, 2025 15:49
the tall woman
Poetic Licence said:
That is a haunting write that made my hair stand up, nicely written.
January 24th, 2025 15:48
Poetic Licence said:
That is a haunting write that made my hair stand up, nicely written.
January 24th, 2025 15:48
the tall woman
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor perhaps? A mirror of some part. A hanunting write that gives me shivers
January 24th, 2025 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor perhaps? A mirror of some part. A hanunting write that gives me shivers
January 24th, 2025 15:44
another little girl
ακ«ΖΊκ«α₯α₯κ« said:
Amazing, they do need your help
January 23rd, 2025 16:34
ακ«ΖΊκ«α₯α₯κ« said:
Amazing, they do need your help
January 23rd, 2025 16:34
another little girl
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truthfully, nor does God. I truly believe that God does not wish for us to suffer, and yet we live in a cruel and broken world. This is a true lament from one who has known suffering. I pray along with you, my dear friend, for the suffering to end. This is a poem that expresses faith and empathy amid horror and suffering. A beautiful and heart-wrenching write! πΉππβ€οΈβπ©Ή
January 23rd, 2025 15:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truthfully, nor does God. I truly believe that God does not wish for us to suffer, and yet we live in a cruel and broken world. This is a true lament from one who has known suffering. I pray along with you, my dear friend, for the suffering to end. This is a poem that expresses faith and empathy amid horror and suffering. A beautiful and heart-wrenching write! πΉππβ€οΈβπ©Ή
January 23rd, 2025 15:53
another little girl
sorenbarrett said:
The world is sad sometimes and is full of pain for some. A dark poem about past shadows
January 23rd, 2025 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
The world is sad sometimes and is full of pain for some. A dark poem about past shadows
January 23rd, 2025 12:28
disappointment
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been taught that when one thinks of another, if the person being thought of is incapable of accepting the thought as true of another, then it is returned to the sender to appear in their life experience (at some point). \"judge not that ye be judged not,\" was how it was summed up, I think. if we take this as true then to say it\'s a hard test is an understatement!
January 22nd, 2025 23:45
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been taught that when one thinks of another, if the person being thought of is incapable of accepting the thought as true of another, then it is returned to the sender to appear in their life experience (at some point). \"judge not that ye be judged not,\" was how it was summed up, I think. if we take this as true then to say it\'s a hard test is an understatement!
January 22nd, 2025 23:45
disappointment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The disgraces are those who judge others and look a them with disgrace. Sorry you are going through this, my friend! β€οΈπ
January 22nd, 2025 21:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The disgraces are those who judge others and look a them with disgrace. Sorry you are going through this, my friend! β€οΈπ
January 22nd, 2025 21:16
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