Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
my home
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of decision and determination. Our body is our shell and houses who we are. A great write
February 8th, 2025 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of decision and determination. Our body is our shell and houses who we are. A great write
February 8th, 2025 14:38
The Tall and Skinny Brooding Man
sorenbarrett said:
Love poems from other languages they carry their own flavor and have written one in Portugeese but it is not my strong suite Thsois looks like Greek and I don\'t know Greek so will wait for your next one
February 7th, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
Love poems from other languages they carry their own flavor and have written one in Portugeese but it is not my strong suite Thsois looks like Greek and I don\'t know Greek so will wait for your next one
February 7th, 2025 13:00
The Tall and Skinny Brooding Man
Cassie58 said:
Wow, quite graphic. This seems like a dream, well a nightmare really. Scary stuff the violence. Interesting read NinjaGirl.
February 7th, 2025 12:28
Cassie58 said:
Wow, quite graphic. This seems like a dream, well a nightmare really. Scary stuff the violence. Interesting read NinjaGirl.
February 7th, 2025 12:28
Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
Poetic Licence said:
There are so many Coulda`s and none of them are ever helpful to anyone, let a lone those experiencing the trauma and pain, powerfully expressed.
February 7th, 2025 04:41
Poetic Licence said:
There are so many Coulda`s and none of them are ever helpful to anyone, let a lone those experiencing the trauma and pain, powerfully expressed.
February 7th, 2025 04:41
Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda
sorenbarrett said:
Three words that are best not to use in real life or in a poem either. The disempower. A powerful write even with the use of them
February 7th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Three words that are best not to use in real life or in a poem either. The disempower. A powerful write even with the use of them
February 7th, 2025 04:25
lovesick
Mutley Ravishes said:
That\'s the first \"love\" poem I\'ve read in an age.
Sick of love? Well, when I rely on someone else for \"my\" happiness/fulfilment then I\'m asking to get sick! So I guess I should rely on Someone Else instead!
Great write.
February 5th, 2025 23:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
That\'s the first \"love\" poem I\'ve read in an age.
Sick of love? Well, when I rely on someone else for \"my\" happiness/fulfilment then I\'m asking to get sick! So I guess I should rely on Someone Else instead!
Great write.
February 5th, 2025 23:37
lovesick
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Loved this love poem. I can relate. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 5th, 2025 21:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Loved this love poem. I can relate. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 5th, 2025 21:20
миний доторх энэ тулаан
Emile Dubois said:
Peut-être que la bataille est l\'intérieur avec l\'extérieur
February 5th, 2025 21:20
Emile Dubois said:
Peut-être que la bataille est l\'intérieur avec l\'extérieur
February 5th, 2025 21:20
lovesick
Poetic Licence said:
A few words but they capture being in love right to the point, a different love poem but a very good one.
February 5th, 2025 19:51
Poetic Licence said:
A few words but they capture being in love right to the point, a different love poem but a very good one.
February 5th, 2025 19:51
lovesick
sorenbarrett said:
A poem enigmatic I love it. It is far different than most love poems and therefor most creative. As someone that has been there in all aspects I would say it contains wisdom beyound your years
February 5th, 2025 18:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem enigmatic I love it. It is far different than most love poems and therefor most creative. As someone that has been there in all aspects I would say it contains wisdom beyound your years
February 5th, 2025 18:51
hollow
sorenbarrett said:
The transformation of changing from what one is to what one thinks that others want them to be. It is an emptying process. Very nicely done
February 4th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
The transformation of changing from what one is to what one thinks that others want them to be. It is an emptying process. Very nicely done
February 4th, 2025 04:14
Juxtaposed Justice
2781 said:
Because of his strength will I wait upon thee: for God is my defence.
February 1st, 2025 00:29
2781 said:
Because of his strength will I wait upon thee: for God is my defence.
February 1st, 2025 00:29
Juxtaposed Justice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This prayer/psalm does not go unheard, my dear friend. Heartbreaking because I have prayed similarly and understand this well. So sorry you had to endure such horrific evil. Justice will be had one way or the other. Praying for peace and healing for you in the meantime. This is a wonderful poem and an excellent display of faith, too. That is exactly what makes the Psalms so powerful, imho. They\'re human, raw, and honest. Well done! 🌹👏
January 31st, 2025 23:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This prayer/psalm does not go unheard, my dear friend. Heartbreaking because I have prayed similarly and understand this well. So sorry you had to endure such horrific evil. Justice will be had one way or the other. Praying for peace and healing for you in the meantime. This is a wonderful poem and an excellent display of faith, too. That is exactly what makes the Psalms so powerful, imho. They\'re human, raw, and honest. Well done! 🌹👏
January 31st, 2025 23:37
Juxtaposed Justice
sorenbarrett said:
Heart rending and powerful this poem speaks to pain
January 31st, 2025 21:36
sorenbarrett said:
Heart rending and powerful this poem speaks to pain
January 31st, 2025 21:36
start over
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this message my friend. Your note is so true and so hard to sell myself on! 🤣😭 We are so prone to think that way, are we not? Thank you for the reminder! 🙏❤️
January 29th, 2025 22:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this message my friend. Your note is so true and so hard to sell myself on! 🤣😭 We are so prone to think that way, are we not? Thank you for the reminder! 🙏❤️
January 29th, 2025 22:16
start over
sorenbarrett said:
A great message that there is always choice, there is always another time, there is always a way to be happy. Very uplifting
January 29th, 2025 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
A great message that there is always choice, there is always another time, there is always a way to be happy. Very uplifting
January 29th, 2025 19:32
rain
Poetic Licence said:
Very cleverly done, feel it raining as you read down, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:52
Poetic Licence said:
Very cleverly done, feel it raining as you read down, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:52
rain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this vertical poem that has you reading what feels like the rain falling. Well done, and very relatable.
January 28th, 2025 19:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this vertical poem that has you reading what feels like the rain falling. Well done, and very relatable.
January 28th, 2025 19:44
rain
sorenbarrett said:
A great picture running in a stream from the roof to the gutter free. Ithought that you had gone back to that time when there were no spaces between words and no punctuation. That made things as hard to read as the rain itself. I was going to do this to this review as a puddle but thought better of it. Very createive.
January 28th, 2025 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
A great picture running in a stream from the roof to the gutter free. Ithought that you had gone back to that time when there were no spaces between words and no punctuation. That made things as hard to read as the rain itself. I was going to do this to this review as a puddle but thought better of it. Very createive.
January 28th, 2025 14:00
It\'s always \"why did you send them pictures of yourself, you\'re so irresponsible\" and not \"oh my word they were pedophiles is there not any way we can track them down?\"
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:
True
January 28th, 2025 00:34
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:
True
January 28th, 2025 00:34
It\'s always \"why did you send them pictures of yourself, you\'re so irresponsible\" and not \"oh my word they were pedophiles is there not any way we can track them down?\"
NinjaGirl said:
Reminder that if a 45 year old man is preying on a 15-16 year old girl, the girl is not the problem.
January 27th, 2025 22:00
NinjaGirl said:
Reminder that if a 45 year old man is preying on a 15-16 year old girl, the girl is not the problem.
January 27th, 2025 22:00
she
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this was a fun mix of French and English. I really love how it bounces back and forth between the languages giving it a really unique vibe. As I read it, it is about this “belle” (beautiful) woman who’s going through shitty times, how people have abandoned her because of what appears to be selfishness, but then the poignant reminder that it was not her choice to be that way, calling the reader to have empathy and understanding. Nice write! Really loved this, my friend. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
January 25th, 2025 20:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this was a fun mix of French and English. I really love how it bounces back and forth between the languages giving it a really unique vibe. As I read it, it is about this “belle” (beautiful) woman who’s going through shitty times, how people have abandoned her because of what appears to be selfishness, but then the poignant reminder that it was not her choice to be that way, calling the reader to have empathy and understanding. Nice write! Really loved this, my friend. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
January 25th, 2025 20:19
she
sorenbarrett said:
Very interesting a blend of French and English leaving me halfout or at least a quarter out in that I don\'t speak French but do understand some latin based words. Very unique and a fun read like a puzzle to think about. Liked the form as well
January 25th, 2025 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
Very interesting a blend of French and English leaving me halfout or at least a quarter out in that I don\'t speak French but do understand some latin based words. Very unique and a fun read like a puzzle to think about. Liked the form as well
January 25th, 2025 18:33
another little girl
NafisaSB said:
we never know the reason why we have to undergo suffering despite being a good person - but i have realized that there is always a purpose in how things shape up. earlier i used to try to fight and change things; now i accept them knowing that whatever is destined will be; and hopefully the best
January 24th, 2025 23:28
NafisaSB said:
we never know the reason why we have to undergo suffering despite being a good person - but i have realized that there is always a purpose in how things shape up. earlier i used to try to fight and change things; now i accept them knowing that whatever is destined will be; and hopefully the best
January 24th, 2025 23:28
the tall woman
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hauntingly awesome, my friend! From the anals of reddit! LOL! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 15:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hauntingly awesome, my friend! From the anals of reddit! LOL! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 15:49
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