Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
rain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this vertical poem that has you reading what feels like the rain falling. Well done, and very relatable.
January 28th, 2025 19:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this vertical poem that has you reading what feels like the rain falling. Well done, and very relatable.
January 28th, 2025 19:44
rain
sorenbarrett said:
A great picture running in a stream from the roof to the gutter free. Ithought that you had gone back to that time when there were no spaces between words and no punctuation. That made things as hard to read as the rain itself. I was going to do this to this review as a puddle but thought better of it. Very createive.
January 28th, 2025 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
A great picture running in a stream from the roof to the gutter free. Ithought that you had gone back to that time when there were no spaces between words and no punctuation. That made things as hard to read as the rain itself. I was going to do this to this review as a puddle but thought better of it. Very createive.
January 28th, 2025 14:00
It\'s always \"why did you send them pictures of yourself, you\'re so irresponsible\" and not \"oh my word they were pedophiles is there not any way we can track them down?\"
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:
True
January 28th, 2025 00:34
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:
True
January 28th, 2025 00:34
It\'s always \"why did you send them pictures of yourself, you\'re so irresponsible\" and not \"oh my word they were pedophiles is there not any way we can track them down?\"
NinjaGirl said:
Reminder that if a 45 year old man is preying on a 15-16 year old girl, the girl is not the problem.
January 27th, 2025 22:00
NinjaGirl said:
Reminder that if a 45 year old man is preying on a 15-16 year old girl, the girl is not the problem.
January 27th, 2025 22:00
she
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this was a fun mix of French and English. I really love how it bounces back and forth between the languages giving it a really unique vibe. As I read it, it is about this “belle” (beautiful) woman who’s going through shitty times, how people have abandoned her because of what appears to be selfishness, but then the poignant reminder that it was not her choice to be that way, calling the reader to have empathy and understanding. Nice write! Really loved this, my friend. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
January 25th, 2025 20:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this was a fun mix of French and English. I really love how it bounces back and forth between the languages giving it a really unique vibe. As I read it, it is about this “belle” (beautiful) woman who’s going through shitty times, how people have abandoned her because of what appears to be selfishness, but then the poignant reminder that it was not her choice to be that way, calling the reader to have empathy and understanding. Nice write! Really loved this, my friend. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
January 25th, 2025 20:19
she
sorenbarrett said:
Very interesting a blend of French and English leaving me halfout or at least a quarter out in that I don\'t speak French but do understand some latin based words. Very unique and a fun read like a puzzle to think about. Liked the form as well
January 25th, 2025 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
Very interesting a blend of French and English leaving me halfout or at least a quarter out in that I don\'t speak French but do understand some latin based words. Very unique and a fun read like a puzzle to think about. Liked the form as well
January 25th, 2025 18:33
another little girl
NafisaSB said:
we never know the reason why we have to undergo suffering despite being a good person - but i have realized that there is always a purpose in how things shape up. earlier i used to try to fight and change things; now i accept them knowing that whatever is destined will be; and hopefully the best
January 24th, 2025 23:28
NafisaSB said:
we never know the reason why we have to undergo suffering despite being a good person - but i have realized that there is always a purpose in how things shape up. earlier i used to try to fight and change things; now i accept them knowing that whatever is destined will be; and hopefully the best
January 24th, 2025 23:28
the tall woman
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hauntingly awesome, my friend! From the anals of reddit! LOL! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 15:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hauntingly awesome, my friend! From the anals of reddit! LOL! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 15:49
the tall woman
Poetic Licence said:
That is a haunting write that made my hair stand up, nicely written.
January 24th, 2025 15:48
Poetic Licence said:
That is a haunting write that made my hair stand up, nicely written.
January 24th, 2025 15:48
the tall woman
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor perhaps? A mirror of some part. A hanunting write that gives me shivers
January 24th, 2025 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor perhaps? A mirror of some part. A hanunting write that gives me shivers
January 24th, 2025 15:44
another little girl
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truthfully, nor does God. I truly believe that God does not wish for us to suffer, and yet we live in a cruel and broken world. This is a true lament from one who has known suffering. I pray along with you, my dear friend, for the suffering to end. This is a poem that expresses faith and empathy amid horror and suffering. A beautiful and heart-wrenching write! 🌹👏🙏❤️🩹
January 23rd, 2025 15:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truthfully, nor does God. I truly believe that God does not wish for us to suffer, and yet we live in a cruel and broken world. This is a true lament from one who has known suffering. I pray along with you, my dear friend, for the suffering to end. This is a poem that expresses faith and empathy amid horror and suffering. A beautiful and heart-wrenching write! 🌹👏🙏❤️🩹
January 23rd, 2025 15:53
another little girl
sorenbarrett said:
The world is sad sometimes and is full of pain for some. A dark poem about past shadows
January 23rd, 2025 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
The world is sad sometimes and is full of pain for some. A dark poem about past shadows
January 23rd, 2025 12:28
disappointment
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been taught that when one thinks of another, if the person being thought of is incapable of accepting the thought as true of another, then it is returned to the sender to appear in their life experience (at some point). \"judge not that ye be judged not,\" was how it was summed up, I think. if we take this as true then to say it\'s a hard test is an understatement!
January 22nd, 2025 23:45
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been taught that when one thinks of another, if the person being thought of is incapable of accepting the thought as true of another, then it is returned to the sender to appear in their life experience (at some point). \"judge not that ye be judged not,\" was how it was summed up, I think. if we take this as true then to say it\'s a hard test is an understatement!
January 22nd, 2025 23:45
disappointment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The disgraces are those who judge others and look a them with disgrace. Sorry you are going through this, my friend! ❤️🙏
January 22nd, 2025 21:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The disgraces are those who judge others and look a them with disgrace. Sorry you are going through this, my friend! ❤️🙏
January 22nd, 2025 21:16
disappointment
sorenbarrett said:
Sad that past trauma can cause such damage. Good write
January 22nd, 2025 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sad that past trauma can cause such damage. Good write
January 22nd, 2025 14:29
disappointment
Cheeky Missy said:
Miserably enough, this is the painful reality all through life, adulthood not even altering matters as handily as the humorous Hollywood flick Romy and Michele\'s Highschool Reunion. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a creeping, haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Miserably enough, this is the painful reality all through life, adulthood not even altering matters as handily as the humorous Hollywood flick Romy and Michele\'s Highschool Reunion. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a creeping, haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:23
disappointment
Cassie58 said:
If looks could kill. Sadly there are some who can’t help themselves. Like to judge first, then think about questions later. They aren’t worth the time. Well penned.
January 22nd, 2025 13:08
Cassie58 said:
If looks could kill. Sadly there are some who can’t help themselves. Like to judge first, then think about questions later. They aren’t worth the time. Well penned.
January 22nd, 2025 13:08
Bleeding Ink
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, healing is a long, hard road out of hell. Our past, in part, informs who we are, so the past cannot ever fully be discarded, good or bad. I get that realization and the sense of frustration out of it. With that said, I also get resilience. Nowhere in this poem is there a hint of stopping writing...metaphorically or literally. And that\'s the key, right? We muddle through somehow. Well done in tackling some more icky cliches. 🌹👏
January 22nd, 2025 08:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, healing is a long, hard road out of hell. Our past, in part, informs who we are, so the past cannot ever fully be discarded, good or bad. I get that realization and the sense of frustration out of it. With that said, I also get resilience. Nowhere in this poem is there a hint of stopping writing...metaphorically or literally. And that\'s the key, right? We muddle through somehow. Well done in tackling some more icky cliches. 🌹👏
January 22nd, 2025 08:58
Bleeding Ink
Poetic Licence said:
Frustration of being trapped in the pain of the past, our past is and will always be there, we have to learn ( and it takes time ) to understand and accept it in a better way, than it allows us to have future. Well written piece from the heart
January 22nd, 2025 07:14
Poetic Licence said:
Frustration of being trapped in the pain of the past, our past is and will always be there, we have to learn ( and it takes time ) to understand and accept it in a better way, than it allows us to have future. Well written piece from the heart
January 22nd, 2025 07:14
Bleeding Ink
sorenbarrett said:
Past trauma has sullied the page and turning it only finds it has blead through to the next. Maybe a new book is in order. A great poem of how one\'s past can not be discarded and affects one\'s future. A mislaid brick set in cement must be built around if not removed. I can hear the anxst in this poem.
January 22nd, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Past trauma has sullied the page and turning it only finds it has blead through to the next. Maybe a new book is in order. A great poem of how one\'s past can not be discarded and affects one\'s future. A mislaid brick set in cement must be built around if not removed. I can hear the anxst in this poem.
January 22nd, 2025 04:11
the Unfathomable
NafisaSB said:
the pain echoes and stands out so well, that the reader cannot but fail to see the misery of the suffering person
hauntingly beautiful
January 21st, 2025 11:35
NafisaSB said:
the pain echoes and stands out so well, that the reader cannot but fail to see the misery of the suffering person
hauntingly beautiful
January 21st, 2025 11:35
choice?
arqios said:
It’s like part of us has been stolen away and there doesn’t seem a way to retrieve it.
January 20th, 2025 22:28
arqios said:
It’s like part of us has been stolen away and there doesn’t seem a way to retrieve it.
January 20th, 2025 22:28
choice?
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of definitions, happieness may not be an immediate choice but as you said healing and future happieness may be.
January 20th, 2025 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of definitions, happieness may not be an immediate choice but as you said healing and future happieness may be.
January 20th, 2025 13:01
choice?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!! Let\'s bury these awful clichés one-by-one...alive! LOL! For real. This is 💯 truth, my wise friend! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 12:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!! Let\'s bury these awful clichés one-by-one...alive! LOL! For real. This is 💯 truth, my wise friend! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 12:00
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