Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
the tall woman
Poetic Licence said:
That is a haunting write that made my hair stand up, nicely written.
January 24th, 2025 15:48
Poetic Licence said:
That is a haunting write that made my hair stand up, nicely written.
January 24th, 2025 15:48
the tall woman
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor perhaps? A mirror of some part. A hanunting write that gives me shivers
January 24th, 2025 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor perhaps? A mirror of some part. A hanunting write that gives me shivers
January 24th, 2025 15:44
another little girl
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truthfully, nor does God. I truly believe that God does not wish for us to suffer, and yet we live in a cruel and broken world. This is a true lament from one who has known suffering. I pray along with you, my dear friend, for the suffering to end. This is a poem that expresses faith and empathy amid horror and suffering. A beautiful and heart-wrenching write! 🌹👏🙏❤️🩹
January 23rd, 2025 15:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truthfully, nor does God. I truly believe that God does not wish for us to suffer, and yet we live in a cruel and broken world. This is a true lament from one who has known suffering. I pray along with you, my dear friend, for the suffering to end. This is a poem that expresses faith and empathy amid horror and suffering. A beautiful and heart-wrenching write! 🌹👏🙏❤️🩹
January 23rd, 2025 15:53
another little girl
sorenbarrett said:
The world is sad sometimes and is full of pain for some. A dark poem about past shadows
January 23rd, 2025 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
The world is sad sometimes and is full of pain for some. A dark poem about past shadows
January 23rd, 2025 12:28
disappointment
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been taught that when one thinks of another, if the person being thought of is incapable of accepting the thought as true of another, then it is returned to the sender to appear in their life experience (at some point). \"judge not that ye be judged not,\" was how it was summed up, I think. if we take this as true then to say it\'s a hard test is an understatement!
January 22nd, 2025 23:45
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been taught that when one thinks of another, if the person being thought of is incapable of accepting the thought as true of another, then it is returned to the sender to appear in their life experience (at some point). \"judge not that ye be judged not,\" was how it was summed up, I think. if we take this as true then to say it\'s a hard test is an understatement!
January 22nd, 2025 23:45
disappointment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The disgraces are those who judge others and look a them with disgrace. Sorry you are going through this, my friend! ❤️🙏
January 22nd, 2025 21:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The disgraces are those who judge others and look a them with disgrace. Sorry you are going through this, my friend! ❤️🙏
January 22nd, 2025 21:16
disappointment
sorenbarrett said:
Sad that past trauma can cause such damage. Good write
January 22nd, 2025 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sad that past trauma can cause such damage. Good write
January 22nd, 2025 14:29
disappointment
Cheeky Missy said:
Miserably enough, this is the painful reality all through life, adulthood not even altering matters as handily as the humorous Hollywood flick Romy and Michele\'s Highschool Reunion. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a creeping, haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Miserably enough, this is the painful reality all through life, adulthood not even altering matters as handily as the humorous Hollywood flick Romy and Michele\'s Highschool Reunion. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a creeping, haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:23
disappointment
Cassie58 said:
If looks could kill. Sadly there are some who can’t help themselves. Like to judge first, then think about questions later. They aren’t worth the time. Well penned.
January 22nd, 2025 13:08
Cassie58 said:
If looks could kill. Sadly there are some who can’t help themselves. Like to judge first, then think about questions later. They aren’t worth the time. Well penned.
January 22nd, 2025 13:08
Bleeding Ink
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, healing is a long, hard road out of hell. Our past, in part, informs who we are, so the past cannot ever fully be discarded, good or bad. I get that realization and the sense of frustration out of it. With that said, I also get resilience. Nowhere in this poem is there a hint of stopping writing...metaphorically or literally. And that\'s the key, right? We muddle through somehow. Well done in tackling some more icky cliches. 🌹👏
January 22nd, 2025 08:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, healing is a long, hard road out of hell. Our past, in part, informs who we are, so the past cannot ever fully be discarded, good or bad. I get that realization and the sense of frustration out of it. With that said, I also get resilience. Nowhere in this poem is there a hint of stopping writing...metaphorically or literally. And that\'s the key, right? We muddle through somehow. Well done in tackling some more icky cliches. 🌹👏
January 22nd, 2025 08:58
Bleeding Ink
Poetic Licence said:
Frustration of being trapped in the pain of the past, our past is and will always be there, we have to learn ( and it takes time ) to understand and accept it in a better way, than it allows us to have future. Well written piece from the heart
January 22nd, 2025 07:14
Poetic Licence said:
Frustration of being trapped in the pain of the past, our past is and will always be there, we have to learn ( and it takes time ) to understand and accept it in a better way, than it allows us to have future. Well written piece from the heart
January 22nd, 2025 07:14
Bleeding Ink
sorenbarrett said:
Past trauma has sullied the page and turning it only finds it has blead through to the next. Maybe a new book is in order. A great poem of how one\'s past can not be discarded and affects one\'s future. A mislaid brick set in cement must be built around if not removed. I can hear the anxst in this poem.
January 22nd, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Past trauma has sullied the page and turning it only finds it has blead through to the next. Maybe a new book is in order. A great poem of how one\'s past can not be discarded and affects one\'s future. A mislaid brick set in cement must be built around if not removed. I can hear the anxst in this poem.
January 22nd, 2025 04:11
the Unfathomable
NafisaSB said:
the pain echoes and stands out so well, that the reader cannot but fail to see the misery of the suffering person
hauntingly beautiful
January 21st, 2025 11:35
NafisaSB said:
the pain echoes and stands out so well, that the reader cannot but fail to see the misery of the suffering person
hauntingly beautiful
January 21st, 2025 11:35
choice?
arqios said:
It’s like part of us has been stolen away and there doesn’t seem a way to retrieve it.
January 20th, 2025 22:28
arqios said:
It’s like part of us has been stolen away and there doesn’t seem a way to retrieve it.
January 20th, 2025 22:28
choice?
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of definitions, happieness may not be an immediate choice but as you said healing and future happieness may be.
January 20th, 2025 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of definitions, happieness may not be an immediate choice but as you said healing and future happieness may be.
January 20th, 2025 13:01
choice?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!! Let\'s bury these awful clichés one-by-one...alive! LOL! For real. This is 💯 truth, my wise friend! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 12:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!! Let\'s bury these awful clichés one-by-one...alive! LOL! For real. This is 💯 truth, my wise friend! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 12:00
choice?
Cassie58 said:
Happiness needs working for. I find it in the smallest of things. All those little things can then add up. All the best.
January 20th, 2025 11:44
Cassie58 said:
Happiness needs working for. I find it in the smallest of things. All those little things can then add up. All the best.
January 20th, 2025 11:44
Shortcut
sorenbarrett said:
If you\'re not dead rage against the dying light. The strength of the mind overcomes the weakness of the flesh. A poem that speaks with power.
January 19th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
If you\'re not dead rage against the dying light. The strength of the mind overcomes the weakness of the flesh. A poem that speaks with power.
January 19th, 2025 17:11
Shortcut
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliant poem, and, ain\'t that the truth! 💯 👏🌹
January 19th, 2025 16:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliant poem, and, ain\'t that the truth! 💯 👏🌹
January 19th, 2025 16:53
blistered fingers
Shahla Latifi said:
Artistic souls are undoubtedly intriguing souls.
January 19th, 2025 11:08
Shahla Latifi said:
Artistic souls are undoubtedly intriguing souls.
January 19th, 2025 11:08
f words
sorenbarrett said:
Flexability, focus, function, friendship, freedom Ninja a most fun read
January 18th, 2025 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
Flexability, focus, function, friendship, freedom Ninja a most fun read
January 18th, 2025 15:26
f words
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! This, my friend, is art! And much more than just \"some words\" or a banana duct taped to a wall (though, honestly, I wish I thought up that 🤣)...each word could be a poem unto themselves. So the depth of this...just 🤯 Well done. As you know, I am a fan! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 14:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! This, my friend, is art! And much more than just \"some words\" or a banana duct taped to a wall (though, honestly, I wish I thought up that 🤣)...each word could be a poem unto themselves. So the depth of this...just 🤯 Well done. As you know, I am a fan! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 14:51
pain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I swear you and I are like synched or sending mind vibes or something! I am now going out to dance under the waning moon before a snowstorm after experiencing this beautiful serendipity! I just finished writing a poem that is eerily similar to what you just shared! Like eerily! Mine will be posted tomorrow. But that is enough about me, my friend. I totally get this poem. It speaks my language; it expresses a reality I know personally. Not that this is the first time. I really do find a home in your work, my friend. This poem is so powerful because I know so many other people experience this and, wow...just wow! Well done! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 20:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I swear you and I are like synched or sending mind vibes or something! I am now going out to dance under the waning moon before a snowstorm after experiencing this beautiful serendipity! I just finished writing a poem that is eerily similar to what you just shared! Like eerily! Mine will be posted tomorrow. But that is enough about me, my friend. I totally get this poem. It speaks my language; it expresses a reality I know personally. Not that this is the first time. I really do find a home in your work, my friend. This poem is so powerful because I know so many other people experience this and, wow...just wow! Well done! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 20:00
pain
sorenbarrett said:
Again a dark write and it ends leaving the reader concerned. Does pain take away pain? A most emotional write
January 17th, 2025 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
Again a dark write and it ends leaving the reader concerned. Does pain take away pain? A most emotional write
January 17th, 2025 19:21
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