Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
choice?
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of definitions, happieness may not be an immediate choice but as you said healing and future happieness may be.
January 20th, 2025 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of definitions, happieness may not be an immediate choice but as you said healing and future happieness may be.
January 20th, 2025 13:01
choice?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!! Let\'s bury these awful clichés one-by-one...alive! LOL! For real. This is 💯 truth, my wise friend! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 12:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!! Let\'s bury these awful clichés one-by-one...alive! LOL! For real. This is 💯 truth, my wise friend! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 12:00
choice?
Cassie58 said:
Happiness needs working for. I find it in the smallest of things. All those little things can then add up. All the best.
January 20th, 2025 11:44
Cassie58 said:
Happiness needs working for. I find it in the smallest of things. All those little things can then add up. All the best.
January 20th, 2025 11:44
Shortcut
sorenbarrett said:
If you\'re not dead rage against the dying light. The strength of the mind overcomes the weakness of the flesh. A poem that speaks with power.
January 19th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
If you\'re not dead rage against the dying light. The strength of the mind overcomes the weakness of the flesh. A poem that speaks with power.
January 19th, 2025 17:11
Shortcut
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliant poem, and, ain\'t that the truth! 💯 👏🌹
January 19th, 2025 16:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliant poem, and, ain\'t that the truth! 💯 👏🌹
January 19th, 2025 16:53
blistered fingers
Shahla Latifi said:
Artistic souls are undoubtedly intriguing souls.
January 19th, 2025 11:08
Shahla Latifi said:
Artistic souls are undoubtedly intriguing souls.
January 19th, 2025 11:08
f words
sorenbarrett said:
Flexability, focus, function, friendship, freedom Ninja a most fun read
January 18th, 2025 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
Flexability, focus, function, friendship, freedom Ninja a most fun read
January 18th, 2025 15:26
f words
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! This, my friend, is art! And much more than just \"some words\" or a banana duct taped to a wall (though, honestly, I wish I thought up that 🤣)...each word could be a poem unto themselves. So the depth of this...just 🤯 Well done. As you know, I am a fan! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 14:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! This, my friend, is art! And much more than just \"some words\" or a banana duct taped to a wall (though, honestly, I wish I thought up that 🤣)...each word could be a poem unto themselves. So the depth of this...just 🤯 Well done. As you know, I am a fan! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 14:51
pain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I swear you and I are like synched or sending mind vibes or something! I am now going out to dance under the waning moon before a snowstorm after experiencing this beautiful serendipity! I just finished writing a poem that is eerily similar to what you just shared! Like eerily! Mine will be posted tomorrow. But that is enough about me, my friend. I totally get this poem. It speaks my language; it expresses a reality I know personally. Not that this is the first time. I really do find a home in your work, my friend. This poem is so powerful because I know so many other people experience this and, wow...just wow! Well done! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 20:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I swear you and I are like synched or sending mind vibes or something! I am now going out to dance under the waning moon before a snowstorm after experiencing this beautiful serendipity! I just finished writing a poem that is eerily similar to what you just shared! Like eerily! Mine will be posted tomorrow. But that is enough about me, my friend. I totally get this poem. It speaks my language; it expresses a reality I know personally. Not that this is the first time. I really do find a home in your work, my friend. This poem is so powerful because I know so many other people experience this and, wow...just wow! Well done! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 20:00
pain
sorenbarrett said:
Again a dark write and it ends leaving the reader concerned. Does pain take away pain? A most emotional write
January 17th, 2025 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
Again a dark write and it ends leaving the reader concerned. Does pain take away pain? A most emotional write
January 17th, 2025 19:21
forgotten soul
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It is. In fact, I can\'t have it because of my body\'s newfound aversion to caffeine. Ah. Yay me! 🤣 Anyway, now for the poem. Wonderful job, my friend! I have felt this very way. Truthfully, I have been feeling this way a lot lately. People would rather remain ignorant of someone else\'s suffering rather than stand in the mud with someone who is going through the shit. It\'s not you, it is them. They are suppressing one of the best parts of humanity (empathy) to embrace one of the worst parts of it (apathy). For what it\'s worth, you\'re not forgotten by me or others on here! I am glad our paths have crossed, NinjaGirl! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It is. In fact, I can\'t have it because of my body\'s newfound aversion to caffeine. Ah. Yay me! 🤣 Anyway, now for the poem. Wonderful job, my friend! I have felt this very way. Truthfully, I have been feeling this way a lot lately. People would rather remain ignorant of someone else\'s suffering rather than stand in the mud with someone who is going through the shit. It\'s not you, it is them. They are suppressing one of the best parts of humanity (empathy) to embrace one of the worst parts of it (apathy). For what it\'s worth, you\'re not forgotten by me or others on here! I am glad our paths have crossed, NinjaGirl! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 09:15
forgotten soul
Demar Desu said:
5 hours of energy in a bottle that can fit in your palm… I wonder if we could create food that is as filling
January 16th, 2025 06:40
Demar Desu said:
5 hours of energy in a bottle that can fit in your palm… I wonder if we could create food that is as filling
January 16th, 2025 06:40
forgotten soul
sorenbarrett said:
Ignored possiblly but never forgotten. Good or bad our memories remain with all. A lovely write of abandonment that we all feel from time to time. Dark but most wonderful
January 16th, 2025 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Ignored possiblly but never forgotten. Good or bad our memories remain with all. A lovely write of abandonment that we all feel from time to time. Dark but most wonderful
January 16th, 2025 05:57
the Unfathomable
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully penned and poignant. Painful to think about and yet it happens all too often.
January 16th, 2025 01:44
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully penned and poignant. Painful to think about and yet it happens all too often.
January 16th, 2025 01:44
the Unfathomable
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nor should you understand it. I don\'t understand it either, my dear friend. All I can say is that your title says it all...it is truly unfathomable. ❤️🩹🌹👏 Sending you lots of ninja hugs 🤗. Not even sure what a \"ninja hug\" is...but I am sending them! 🤣
January 14th, 2025 19:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nor should you understand it. I don\'t understand it either, my dear friend. All I can say is that your title says it all...it is truly unfathomable. ❤️🩹🌹👏 Sending you lots of ninja hugs 🤗. Not even sure what a \"ninja hug\" is...but I am sending them! 🤣
January 14th, 2025 19:44
the Unfathomable
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:
Wow, another amazing poem by one of my favorite poets. Great job NinjaGirl :)
January 14th, 2025 17:19
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:
Wow, another amazing poem by one of my favorite poets. Great job NinjaGirl :)
January 14th, 2025 17:19
the Unfathomable
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors here as well as a direct hint at past pain still present. Sad and haunting
January 14th, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors here as well as a direct hint at past pain still present. Sad and haunting
January 14th, 2025 13:30
red
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rage. Indeed one sees red. I have been there. Poetry is a GREAT way to let it out, actually...not that I need to tell you that, because that is exactly what you are doing here. Well done, my friend! This is a brilliant expression of an emotion we all try to hide ourselves away from. You, on the other hand, have embraced it...and there\'s power in that! That\'s the first step, in my opinion, to controlling it. I find that emotions control us the more we try to deny them. Anyway, well done NinjaGirl! Red slayed! 🌹👏
January 14th, 2025 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rage. Indeed one sees red. I have been there. Poetry is a GREAT way to let it out, actually...not that I need to tell you that, because that is exactly what you are doing here. Well done, my friend! This is a brilliant expression of an emotion we all try to hide ourselves away from. You, on the other hand, have embraced it...and there\'s power in that! That\'s the first step, in my opinion, to controlling it. I find that emotions control us the more we try to deny them. Anyway, well done NinjaGirl! Red slayed! 🌹👏
January 14th, 2025 08:12
red
sorenbarrett said:
Seeing red an old cliche is something that can happen in times of extreem rage. Better to let it out a little at a time before hand. I could sense the anger in this poem.
January 14th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Seeing red an old cliche is something that can happen in times of extreem rage. Better to let it out a little at a time before hand. I could sense the anger in this poem.
January 14th, 2025 03:57
paranoid
NafisaSB said:
sometimes one does get this feeling, and it\'s scary - so hope yours passes quickly away
have a good day
January 13th, 2025 23:40
NafisaSB said:
sometimes one does get this feeling, and it\'s scary - so hope yours passes quickly away
have a good day
January 13th, 2025 23:40
fire
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes let’s have positive thoughts on what will be.
Good write.
January 13th, 2025 21:26
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes let’s have positive thoughts on what will be.
Good write.
January 13th, 2025 21:26
mind trapped
Poetic Licence said:
I have been in this situation and even now it happens sometimes, where your mind will not rest and it relieves everything over and over again, verbally kicking yourself to death in your head. This of course then creates self doubt, suspicion, fear, anger and so on, and the constant expectation of the worst possible outcome, the cycle goes on. The only thing i can say it does get better, which is not much help when you dealing with it, but it does, well written verse. take care
January 12th, 2025 21:52
Poetic Licence said:
I have been in this situation and even now it happens sometimes, where your mind will not rest and it relieves everything over and over again, verbally kicking yourself to death in your head. This of course then creates self doubt, suspicion, fear, anger and so on, and the constant expectation of the worst possible outcome, the cycle goes on. The only thing i can say it does get better, which is not much help when you dealing with it, but it does, well written verse. take care
January 12th, 2025 21:52
mind trapped
Cloie said:
This explores the intense emotional toll of overthinking, amazingly showing how the mind can torture itself with possibilities, even when nothing has actually happened. It reflects the paradox of wanting to prepare for the worst while being weighed down by fear and self-doubt. I can deeply relate to the vulnerability and rawness of these emotions, which come through so clearly in just a few lines.
January 12th, 2025 16:40
Cloie said:
This explores the intense emotional toll of overthinking, amazingly showing how the mind can torture itself with possibilities, even when nothing has actually happened. It reflects the paradox of wanting to prepare for the worst while being weighed down by fear and self-doubt. I can deeply relate to the vulnerability and rawness of these emotions, which come through so clearly in just a few lines.
January 12th, 2025 16:40
mind trapped
sorenbarrett said:
What you describe is common to people that have suffered significant trauma. These echoes of the past bring back old memories. A haunting write.
January 12th, 2025 16:24
sorenbarrett said:
What you describe is common to people that have suffered significant trauma. These echoes of the past bring back old memories. A haunting write.
January 12th, 2025 16:24
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