Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
TRUST NO ONE
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write Ninja Girl.
I heard this thing from a artist I admire DMX,
It goes like, I don\'t like the term, Trust No One. I think you should trust everyone to be themselves, trust a liar to lie, trust a theif to steal, trust a snake to bite, trust them to be them. Trust there true nature. It takes to much energy to not trust them. Just trust everyone to be themselves. Yet again, good write. 👍
September 7th, 2024 21:10
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write Ninja Girl.
I heard this thing from a artist I admire DMX,
It goes like, I don\'t like the term, Trust No One. I think you should trust everyone to be themselves, trust a liar to lie, trust a theif to steal, trust a snake to bite, trust them to be them. Trust there true nature. It takes to much energy to not trust them. Just trust everyone to be themselves. Yet again, good write. 👍
September 7th, 2024 21:10
\"no\"
Cheeky Missy said:
You poor girl! I\'m so very, very sorry if this is not mere fiction but rather an expose. Excellently rendered with a subtly haunting poignancy. Tastefully detailed to purpose.
September 6th, 2024 15:09
Cheeky Missy said:
You poor girl! I\'m so very, very sorry if this is not mere fiction but rather an expose. Excellently rendered with a subtly haunting poignancy. Tastefully detailed to purpose.
September 6th, 2024 15:09
\"no\"
orchidee said:
Not intended in any way to be on the same theme, but me being humorous - and now for my next poem entitled: \'Yes!\' (heehee).
September 6th, 2024 14:21
orchidee said:
Not intended in any way to be on the same theme, but me being humorous - and now for my next poem entitled: \'Yes!\' (heehee).
September 6th, 2024 14:21
dont
Cheeky Missy said:
Since I am not superwoman, then lately I end up shutting up. They are forever generally shocked when I do actually do what I warned them I\'d do.
Beautifully poignant and amply expressive, delightfully rhymed.
September 3rd, 2024 19:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Since I am not superwoman, then lately I end up shutting up. They are forever generally shocked when I do actually do what I warned them I\'d do.
Beautifully poignant and amply expressive, delightfully rhymed.
September 3rd, 2024 19:38
anxious
Dan Williams said:
This is as good a definition of stress as I have seen. Fight it girl.
September 3rd, 2024 00:10
Dan Williams said:
This is as good a definition of stress as I have seen. Fight it girl.
September 3rd, 2024 00:10
anxious
Mutley Ravishes said:
Breathe like Wim Hof
It`ll help stop
The anxiety
September 2nd, 2024 01:56
Mutley Ravishes said:
Breathe like Wim Hof
It`ll help stop
The anxiety
September 2nd, 2024 01:56
anxious
Cheeky Missy said:
Hang in there. Take a deep breath and let it out very slowly. Relax. Here...https://youtu.be/BubaEmJg4so?si=TSdk2TTwEVyhyHwl
Try that.
September 1st, 2024 21:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Hang in there. Take a deep breath and let it out very slowly. Relax. Here...https://youtu.be/BubaEmJg4so?si=TSdk2TTwEVyhyHwl
Try that.
September 1st, 2024 21:37
well?
sorenbarrett said:
Anger pervades this poem and so it should with so many complaining of what they should be grateful for
August 27th, 2024 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
Anger pervades this poem and so it should with so many complaining of what they should be grateful for
August 27th, 2024 12:46
well?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Indeed, mine as well just swallow it with razor blades. Or just razor blades without the pill, it\'d do the trick. Good write NinjaGirl.
August 27th, 2024 12:18
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Indeed, mine as well just swallow it with razor blades. Or just razor blades without the pill, it\'d do the trick. Good write NinjaGirl.
August 27th, 2024 12:18
quiet company
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes just company is enough and anything more is upsetting. Well stated
August 27th, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes just company is enough and anything more is upsetting. Well stated
August 27th, 2024 05:50
drips for the grip on reality
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Brilliant wordplay yet again! Wow.
August 25th, 2024 19:43
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Brilliant wordplay yet again! Wow.
August 25th, 2024 19:43
everyone wants to be loved
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Powerful yet true poem, NinjaGirl, Clever wordplay.
August 25th, 2024 19:40
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Powerful yet true poem, NinjaGirl, Clever wordplay.
August 25th, 2024 19:40
everyone wants to be loved
BlessedbyGod said:
No truer words my dear , but sometime there is deep meaning behind those words, just have to be careful who to trust
August 25th, 2024 19:24
BlessedbyGod said:
No truer words my dear , but sometime there is deep meaning behind those words, just have to be careful who to trust
August 25th, 2024 19:24
everyone wants to be loved
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes. We want to be appreciated for ourselves, not lost in the eyes and lusts of the beholder, buried beneath what veil(?), as all he sees is a body.
August 25th, 2024 19:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes. We want to be appreciated for ourselves, not lost in the eyes and lusts of the beholder, buried beneath what veil(?), as all he sees is a body.
August 25th, 2024 19:21
drips for the grip on reality
sorenbarrett said:
Mark it beautifully to remind yourself of the beauty inside. A most powerful write.
August 24th, 2024 18:31
sorenbarrett said:
Mark it beautifully to remind yourself of the beauty inside. A most powerful write.
August 24th, 2024 18:31
drips for the grip on reality
Thoughtless said:
Doing your thing as usual, girl.
Interesting.
August 24th, 2024 15:00
Thoughtless said:
Doing your thing as usual, girl.
Interesting.
August 24th, 2024 15:00
the light
Bella Shepard said:
The tear of regret, the sadness of never being able to go back. Beautifully crafted in this poem!
August 23rd, 2024 16:44
Bella Shepard said:
The tear of regret, the sadness of never being able to go back. Beautifully crafted in this poem!
August 23rd, 2024 16:44
the light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent write NinjaGirl! I\'m a fan! You captured such raw emotions and guilt in such few words. A true gift!
August 23rd, 2024 11:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent write NinjaGirl! I\'m a fan! You captured such raw emotions and guilt in such few words. A true gift!
August 23rd, 2024 11:23
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