Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
the paid price
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is something different. So well worded and cleverly structured it rolls off the tongue but rattles in the mind. The meaning of this may be many but what I took was feelings of being discarded, when there is an expectation of being cared for, of being nothing more than an object to be purchased and used therefore abused. A sad poem of people treated as objects. Whether a child, woman or weak person treated as a slave and or disposable property. Gut wrenching. A most ingenious write deserving of a fave.
March 4th, 2025 17:14
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is something different. So well worded and cleverly structured it rolls off the tongue but rattles in the mind. The meaning of this may be many but what I took was feelings of being discarded, when there is an expectation of being cared for, of being nothing more than an object to be purchased and used therefore abused. A sad poem of people treated as objects. Whether a child, woman or weak person treated as a slave and or disposable property. Gut wrenching. A most ingenious write deserving of a fave.
March 4th, 2025 17:14
paranoid
Firefall said:
Love your poem! Wonderful capture of that paranoid feeling.
March 4th, 2025 16:01
Firefall said:
Love your poem! Wonderful capture of that paranoid feeling.
March 4th, 2025 16:01
Time Passes
Cassie58 said:
A lovely poem which conveys some dark imagery. Yes change isn’t always for the good, but we have to live in hope. We have to keep that light at the end of the tunnel. Enjoyed reading you Ninjagirl.
March 4th, 2025 03:37
Cassie58 said:
A lovely poem which conveys some dark imagery. Yes change isn’t always for the good, but we have to live in hope. We have to keep that light at the end of the tunnel. Enjoyed reading you Ninjagirl.
March 4th, 2025 03:37
looking like crap
NafisaSB said:
so poignantly expressed -most of us have had those days- i wish they will occur with less frequency, or disappear altogether
March 4th, 2025 00:17
NafisaSB said:
so poignantly expressed -most of us have had those days- i wish they will occur with less frequency, or disappear altogether
March 4th, 2025 00:17
Time Passes
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard a story about an old Taoist practitioner who, when he died, it took three days for rigor mortis to set in. Then of course, there\'s that story about a guy who died, \"slept\" in a cave for three days and came back out again... in the same body! What does it all mean?!
March 3rd, 2025 18:47
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard a story about an old Taoist practitioner who, when he died, it took three days for rigor mortis to set in. Then of course, there\'s that story about a guy who died, \"slept\" in a cave for three days and came back out again... in the same body! What does it all mean?!
March 3rd, 2025 18:47
Time Passes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. We can change for good or worse. Sometimes, often times perhaps, we make/accept those changes thinking one thing will come only to discover another. What we thought good...bad. What we thought bad...good. Then again, what makes them bad or good, but the effect we perceive they have on us. Those effects, of course, very real but what affects one positively might not be positive to someone else. Fascinating poem with thought-provoking teeth, my friend. An easy fave from me. Powerful stuff. 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 17:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. We can change for good or worse. Sometimes, often times perhaps, we make/accept those changes thinking one thing will come only to discover another. What we thought good...bad. What we thought bad...good. Then again, what makes them bad or good, but the effect we perceive they have on us. Those effects, of course, very real but what affects one positively might not be positive to someone else. Fascinating poem with thought-provoking teeth, my friend. An easy fave from me. Powerful stuff. 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 17:28
Time Passes
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with despair shows hope then returns to darkness only to end on what was really important and bright. A most lovely write.
March 3rd, 2025 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with despair shows hope then returns to darkness only to end on what was really important and bright. A most lovely write.
March 3rd, 2025 14:44
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
NafisaSB said:
I respect, laud and second your sentiments.
keep it up
February 28th, 2025 23:57
NafisaSB said:
I respect, laud and second your sentiments.
keep it up
February 28th, 2025 23:57
sleepless nights
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This sings! Beautiful job, my friend! An easy fave! 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 18:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This sings! Beautiful job, my friend! An easy fave! 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 18:29
sleepless nights
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic is this poem. The rhyme holds me like a magnet and it rolls on pulling me with it. A wonderful short
February 27th, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic is this poem. The rhyme holds me like a magnet and it rolls on pulling me with it. A wonderful short
February 27th, 2025 14:26
looking like crap
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, I feel bad being a man sometimes as we don\'t generally have any pressure like this.
February 27th, 2025 08:39
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, I feel bad being a man sometimes as we don\'t generally have any pressure like this.
February 27th, 2025 08:39
looking like crap
Cassie58 said:
Chocolate is a great soother and comfort on those days when everything else sucks. Hope you have better days ahead. Enjoyed your poem. I’m a chocolate lover.
February 27th, 2025 03:34
Cassie58 said:
Chocolate is a great soother and comfort on those days when everything else sucks. Hope you have better days ahead. Enjoyed your poem. I’m a chocolate lover.
February 27th, 2025 03:34
goodbye
Shellsea said:
You seem steady in your choice to say goodbye. love it.
February 26th, 2025 22:10
Shellsea said:
You seem steady in your choice to say goodbye. love it.
February 26th, 2025 22:10
looking like crap
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It really was one of those days. Hence my rabbit hole adventure this morning! 🤣 Well expressed, my friend. Right there with you, minus the mascara and bun (no hair...its sadly a thing). 🌹👏
February 26th, 2025 22:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It really was one of those days. Hence my rabbit hole adventure this morning! 🤣 Well expressed, my friend. Right there with you, minus the mascara and bun (no hair...its sadly a thing). 🌹👏
February 26th, 2025 22:05
looking like crap
Mutley Ravishes said:
Morihei Ueshiba once said, \"I am the universe.\" Now, that\'s not something you hear everyday!
February 26th, 2025 18:19
Mutley Ravishes said:
Morihei Ueshiba once said, \"I am the universe.\" Now, that\'s not something you hear everyday!
February 26th, 2025 18:19
looking like crap
Distant View said:
This made me smile. Some days it does feel as though the universe is against you! We all have to face such times. A poem I\'m sure most people can readily relate to!
February 26th, 2025 16:11
Distant View said:
This made me smile. Some days it does feel as though the universe is against you! We all have to face such times. A poem I\'m sure most people can readily relate to!
February 26th, 2025 16:11
looking like crap
sorenbarrett said:
No it is just called entropy. All a matter of perspective and winding down. Fun read
February 26th, 2025 14:14
sorenbarrett said:
No it is just called entropy. All a matter of perspective and winding down. Fun read
February 26th, 2025 14:14
looking like crap
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Honestly, this is too perfect. If only the whole world could see this, it\'d resonate with countless. Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and an exquisite poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 13:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Honestly, this is too perfect. If only the whole world could see this, it\'d resonate with countless. Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and an exquisite poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 13:51
goodbye
RSM0812 said:
Sometimes people need to know that they have someone in their corner. I really like this read.
February 26th, 2025 09:49
RSM0812 said:
Sometimes people need to know that they have someone in their corner. I really like this read.
February 26th, 2025 09:49
goodbye
Poetic Licence said:
Sadness, pain, determination and positivity all in one write, nicely done
February 26th, 2025 01:46
Poetic Licence said:
Sadness, pain, determination and positivity all in one write, nicely done
February 26th, 2025 01:46
goodbye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was painful to read, beautiful and painful. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹👏
February 25th, 2025 20:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was painful to read, beautiful and painful. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹👏
February 25th, 2025 20:14
directions to love
Doggerel Dave said:
So long as I get some reciprocal handling...
February 25th, 2025 05:38
Doggerel Dave said:
So long as I get some reciprocal handling...
February 25th, 2025 05:38
directions to love
RSM0812 said:
Where was your advice before my wife left me. Aughhhhh. Lol. Just kidding. Nice read. You make a great point in great form and good choice of words. Your very wise. But again I\'m assuming your a female bc of your pseudonym. If i find another love one day your advise I will wholeheartedly take. Sometimes you can unbeknownst to yourself you can take things or people ( or women) you love for granted. Unfortunatley. And you don\'t realize it until it\'s all gone.
February 25th, 2025 00:20
RSM0812 said:
Where was your advice before my wife left me. Aughhhhh. Lol. Just kidding. Nice read. You make a great point in great form and good choice of words. Your very wise. But again I\'m assuming your a female bc of your pseudonym. If i find another love one day your advise I will wholeheartedly take. Sometimes you can unbeknownst to yourself you can take things or people ( or women) you love for granted. Unfortunatley. And you don\'t realize it until it\'s all gone.
February 25th, 2025 00:20
directions to love
sorenbarrett said:
In some ways this metaphor can be taken several ways and although love is implied it may be any one of sever others. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 22:05
sorenbarrett said:
In some ways this metaphor can be taken several ways and although love is implied it may be any one of sever others. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 22:05
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