Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Will not give up
myself and me said:

\" I\'m with a woman that let\'s me dream \"
Have such a lady in your life should be more than enough.
Nice poem.

August 15th, 2017 22:53

Will not give up
FredPeyer said:

Very well said PD! Never give up!

August 15th, 2017 13:21

Lois Bernadette
jaybob said:

losing someone you love hurts. I think it hurts more when you lose them but they\'re still out there somewhere. If they pass away you can tell yourself we will all go one day. It can help you in a way. Beautiful writing!!

August 12th, 2017 10:23

Double enjoyment
Heather T said:

Super cute video and neat short, Dan!

August 7th, 2017 20:36

Double enjoyment
Michael Edwards said:

Great in its simplicity PD

August 7th, 2017 01:04

I\'ll be there when you call
FredPeyer said:

Wonderful way of saying: Don\'t worry, I\'ll be there when the next teardrop falls. (Courtesy of Freddie Fender)

August 2nd, 2017 10:40

I\'ll be there when you call
orchidee said:

Cooeeee I\'m calling! heehee. you there? What days will you be there? No use me being there if you\'re not! lol.

August 2nd, 2017 10:08

I\'ll be there when you call
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

August 2nd, 2017 08:18

I\'ll be there when you call
Adri said:

Heartfelt and romantic Dan!

August 2nd, 2017 07:10

Day on my stage
FredPeyer said:

Dan, love to read about your bike, decided that tomorrow I will publish my motorcycle poem.
And the rest of your day story is just great.

August 1st, 2017 18:45

Yin to my yang
Heather T said:

Inspired and loving piece, dear Dan.

July 31st, 2017 19:58

Yin to my yang
FredPeyer said:

Thanks Dan for this beautiful way of saying \'I love you\'!

July 31st, 2017 12:33

Who are you?
FredPeyer said:

Awesome poem Dan! Yes, sometimes it feels as if we were naked, letting it all hang out, letting the world see much too deep into our interior.
.....and the music ain\'t bad either!

July 31st, 2017 11:40

Yin to my yang
kevin browne said:

a bit of classy poetry. nice work.

July 31st, 2017 11:37

Yin to my yang
Fay Slimm. said:

A wonderful verse of assurance for some lucky lady - such a delight to read.Dan - - keep that romantic ink flowing my friend.

July 31st, 2017 05:36

Yin to my yang
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving write. I am sure that your heaven will always be there.

July 31st, 2017 04:13

Who are you?
kevin browne said:

super true write. I\'m impressed.

July 30th, 2017 14:00

Who are you?
Heather T said:

Thank you for giving your honest, open self. I appreciate that from friends unendingly. A double gift, your words and video.

July 30th, 2017 12:09

Who are you?
poetboy123 said:

Wow, this was incredible, both the video and the poem!

July 30th, 2017 10:53

I see what I\'m doing
Goldfinch60 said:

Sometimes the mind goes its own way but it always comes back.

July 29th, 2017 00:19

I see what I\'m doing
FredPeyer said:

For your sake I hope too that you are listening!!! :-)
Sometimes the brain has its own mysterious ways, sometimes it does not want to let go even though it should. That is where our subconscious, our gut-feeling is needed to set the brain straight!
Good writing Dan!

July 28th, 2017 15:10

I see what I\'m doing
Louis Gibbs said:

I love it when our split personalities converse with each other, as you describe so well herein. Mine have quite lively conversations ... it\'s fun to listen in. Oops, Did I just reveal a third one? I\'m in trouble. Did so appreciate your excellent poem, Dan!

July 28th, 2017 10:16

Decoding
Poetic Dan said:

Best way to learn I do agree, think I\'d try to enjoy my hole though

July 27th, 2017 16:00

Decoding
onepauly said:

follow the unknown. I learn most things by trial and error. sometimes what we mean may not mean the same thing to another. and we don\'t want to dig a hole we cant climb out of.if I ask you to see a house on a hill and you do so. I also see a house on a hill. but they are different houses on different hills. so there

July 27th, 2017 15:37

Decoding
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 27th, 2017 12:09

Decoding
Goldfinch60 said:

We each see different things in others words. Good write.

July 27th, 2017 08:04

What did I see
malubotelho said:

You are a daring man. Very brave. What you did as you described was trying to clean your mind from any thought but concentrate in the moment. Beautiful way of doing so. Dangerous though. I enjoyed to read you.

July 27th, 2017 07:47

Decoding
kevin browne said:

you are pobably mostly right about decoding but like FredPeyer has mentioned, you may be able to decode the pattern of your life but decoding a human maybe a task too much. unless we can superchip the brain and download all the information onto a screen so we can see how everything is put together and how it works then I think it may never be done in the physical realm. thought provoking none-the-less.

July 27th, 2017 05:40

Decoding
FredPeyer said:

Dan, no matter how much you decode, you cannot decode the soul or essence of a man.

July 27th, 2017 04:48

Can\'t believe where my life is going
Christina8 said:

I hope life gets better for you. Sorry your life is so tough right now.

July 26th, 2017 21:49



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