Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
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FredPeyer said:
Very, very well done PD!
I don\'t know if I had the courage to stand up in front of a crowd and read my poems. So, hat\'s off to you!
October 12th, 2017 18:02
FredPeyer said:
Very, very well done PD!
I don\'t know if I had the courage to stand up in front of a crowd and read my poems. So, hat\'s off to you!
October 12th, 2017 18:02
I\'m thinking
FredPeyer said:
A very good write, PD. We ARE experiencing ourselves through the people around us. Sometimes in a good way, sometimes in a not so good way. Then, instead of getting mad or upset, we do have to take a good look at ourselves to find the truth. I do believe that if we love somebody we give up part of ourselves and together with the other person become a new whole.
You went pretty deep here!
October 11th, 2017 11:18
FredPeyer said:
A very good write, PD. We ARE experiencing ourselves through the people around us. Sometimes in a good way, sometimes in a not so good way. Then, instead of getting mad or upset, we do have to take a good look at ourselves to find the truth. I do believe that if we love somebody we give up part of ourselves and together with the other person become a new whole.
You went pretty deep here!
October 11th, 2017 11:18
His and hers
Christina8 said:
A sad read, probably difficult to write. The childhood stuff was not your fault. Glad you are healing through this process. Good luck to you and your healing heart!
October 10th, 2017 11:28
Christina8 said:
A sad read, probably difficult to write. The childhood stuff was not your fault. Glad you are healing through this process. Good luck to you and your healing heart!
October 10th, 2017 11:28
His and hers
Fay Slimm. said:
A sad read which must have been painful to write Dan -- questions asked that have no one answer as troubles come by the score to some - yet the piece shows so clearly the results of childhood abuse. Thanks my friend for sharing such hurtful memories.
October 10th, 2017 08:24
Fay Slimm. said:
A sad read which must have been painful to write Dan -- questions asked that have no one answer as troubles come by the score to some - yet the piece shows so clearly the results of childhood abuse. Thanks my friend for sharing such hurtful memories.
October 10th, 2017 08:24
No hesitation
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all need to write what is within us.
October 10th, 2017 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all need to write what is within us.
October 10th, 2017 00:34
No hesitation
Christina8 said:
Great write Dan! I loved the Cheyenne saying in the beginning. Also the last two lines of your poem is so true! Thanks for sharing this write with us!
October 9th, 2017 16:42
Christina8 said:
Great write Dan! I loved the Cheyenne saying in the beginning. Also the last two lines of your poem is so true! Thanks for sharing this write with us!
October 9th, 2017 16:42
No hesitation
FredPeyer said:
Reading your great poem, PD, I vibrated right along with you! And I do think you could expand the \'Dan syndrome\' to a \'Writers syndrome\'
October 9th, 2017 13:00
FredPeyer said:
Reading your great poem, PD, I vibrated right along with you! And I do think you could expand the \'Dan syndrome\' to a \'Writers syndrome\'
October 9th, 2017 13:00
Wings
FredPeyer said:
My rhythm just went up a notch after reading this, PD!
And with my voice, I go hide now and sing a song!
Love your poem!
October 8th, 2017 15:15
FredPeyer said:
My rhythm just went up a notch after reading this, PD!
And with my voice, I go hide now and sing a song!
Love your poem!
October 8th, 2017 15:15
Consequences are free
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, may the dog and you share a great journey together.
October 8th, 2017 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, may the dog and you share a great journey together.
October 8th, 2017 01:05
Consequences are free
FredPeyer said:
After reading the quote I was ready for some deep thoughts challenging my mind. Then, by the third line of the poem I realized you were talking about a dog, and getting to the \'mostly fun\' line, was smiling too.
But then, I also realized that you are talking about much more here than \'just a dog\'. The \'history of our connection\', \'fear of expressing\', \'walking together\', and \'compassion and balance\', apply to any relationship, be it animal or human, as does the last line. So, challenge my mind it did!!!
Great, great poem, PD!
October 7th, 2017 12:37
FredPeyer said:
After reading the quote I was ready for some deep thoughts challenging my mind. Then, by the third line of the poem I realized you were talking about a dog, and getting to the \'mostly fun\' line, was smiling too.
But then, I also realized that you are talking about much more here than \'just a dog\'. The \'history of our connection\', \'fear of expressing\', \'walking together\', and \'compassion and balance\', apply to any relationship, be it animal or human, as does the last line. So, challenge my mind it did!!!
Great, great poem, PD!
October 7th, 2017 12:37
Consequences are free
Accidental Poet said:
I knew it was the dog from the first line. Great idea and write. ; )
October 7th, 2017 09:05
Accidental Poet said:
I knew it was the dog from the first line. Great idea and write. ; )
October 7th, 2017 09:05
Consequences are free
Fay Slimm. said:
Haha ha Dan - - what a surprise at the end of this intriguing write. Had to read it over again and I am still smiling.
October 7th, 2017 08:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Haha ha Dan - - what a surprise at the end of this intriguing write. Had to read it over again and I am still smiling.
October 7th, 2017 08:30
Frolicking fun
FredPeyer said:
Days like that are like the icing on the cake! You did a tremendous job, PD!
October 6th, 2017 00:53
FredPeyer said:
Days like that are like the icing on the cake! You did a tremendous job, PD!
October 6th, 2017 00:53
Frolicking fun
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing like having some family fun Dan. ; )
October 5th, 2017 18:57
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing like having some family fun Dan. ; )
October 5th, 2017 18:57
Frolicking fun
orchidee said:
Was a bit scared to read this, in case it brought on a swoon - erm \'frolicking?\' heehee.
October 5th, 2017 15:30
orchidee said:
Was a bit scared to read this, in case it brought on a swoon - erm \'frolicking?\' heehee.
October 5th, 2017 15:30
Frolicking fun
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how alive both the verse and the video - could feel the flow and the rhythm and was out there having a go at that dance with you and the family - great last stanza too Dan - - or should I be calling you D-man !! Lovely stuff.
October 5th, 2017 11:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how alive both the verse and the video - could feel the flow and the rhythm and was out there having a go at that dance with you and the family - great last stanza too Dan - - or should I be calling you D-man !! Lovely stuff.
October 5th, 2017 11:08
Words of passion
FredPeyer said:
Great imagination, PD! Great lines, like \'Atoms become entwined in the mist\' and \'As I rise within my own being to walk your deck\'. And the picture goes well with the poem. Kudos!
October 4th, 2017 14:12
FredPeyer said:
Great imagination, PD! Great lines, like \'Atoms become entwined in the mist\' and \'As I rise within my own being to walk your deck\'. And the picture goes well with the poem. Kudos!
October 4th, 2017 14:12
Littlest of things
Goldfinch60 said:
Those little things in our lives are so important and can bring us such joy.
October 4th, 2017 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Those little things in our lives are so important and can bring us such joy.
October 4th, 2017 00:46
Littlest of things
poetboy123 said:
Short and peaceful, with a strong message, nice write Dan!
October 3rd, 2017 19:34
poetboy123 said:
Short and peaceful, with a strong message, nice write Dan!
October 3rd, 2017 19:34
Littlest of things
Fay Slimm. said:
Little things have always meant a lot Dan - - love the chosen image too.
October 3rd, 2017 13:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Little things have always meant a lot Dan - - love the chosen image too.
October 3rd, 2017 13:40
Littlest of things
FredPeyer said:
I like this a lot PD, I do try to appreciate the little things, but too bad I don\'t have a boat!
October 3rd, 2017 11:47
FredPeyer said:
I like this a lot PD, I do try to appreciate the little things, but too bad I don\'t have a boat!
October 3rd, 2017 11:47
Take my hand
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a special read Dan - so pleased you have found the way to love the life you live - - may rainbows of happiness dance you through dark days. This must go in my favourites.
October 2nd, 2017 16:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a special read Dan - so pleased you have found the way to love the life you live - - may rainbows of happiness dance you through dark days. This must go in my favourites.
October 2nd, 2017 16:27
Take my hand
Pintu Mahakul said:
There is love and there is life. Deep words are told today. This is really very brilliant expression shared here.
October 2nd, 2017 15:40
Pintu Mahakul said:
There is love and there is life. Deep words are told today. This is really very brilliant expression shared here.
October 2nd, 2017 15:40
Take my hand
FredPeyer said:
PD, this is a poem to live by every day of our lives. Very inspirational, beautifully written, this is a keeper! Print it out and hang it on the wall.
October 2nd, 2017 15:18
FredPeyer said:
PD, this is a poem to live by every day of our lives. Very inspirational, beautifully written, this is a keeper! Print it out and hang it on the wall.
October 2nd, 2017 15:18
Take my hand
Louis Gibbs said:
Very inspirational, Dan! Well written, and I love that third stanza.
October 2nd, 2017 13:01
Louis Gibbs said:
Very inspirational, Dan! Well written, and I love that third stanza.
October 2nd, 2017 13:01
Unimaginably unknowning of the mind
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Dan. I wouldn\'t meet any dog at one stage, chihuahua to great dane size, and all in between! Best to always ask the owners first, isn\'t it, if we can stroke their dogs?
September 30th, 2017 08:51
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Dan. I wouldn\'t meet any dog at one stage, chihuahua to great dane size, and all in between! Best to always ask the owners first, isn\'t it, if we can stroke their dogs?
September 30th, 2017 08:51
Unimaginably unknowning of the mind
Christina8 said:
I love your message in your poem. You can achieve anything you put your mind to. Are those all your dogs? BTW, is there a puff of smoke coming from the man walking by? lol Could just be me. Nice poem!
September 29th, 2017 21:54
Christina8 said:
I love your message in your poem. You can achieve anything you put your mind to. Are those all your dogs? BTW, is there a puff of smoke coming from the man walking by? lol Could just be me. Nice poem!
September 29th, 2017 21:54
Unimaginably unknowning of the mind
FredPeyer said:
PD, I love your poem. The mind is the most incredible thing there is. I am fascinated and awed by it.
Btw, are you a dog walker, or are they all yours?
September 29th, 2017 20:53
FredPeyer said:
PD, I love your poem. The mind is the most incredible thing there is. I am fascinated and awed by it.
Btw, are you a dog walker, or are they all yours?
September 29th, 2017 20:53
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very true, we must all move forward in our lives.
September 28th, 2017 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very true, we must all move forward in our lives.
September 28th, 2017 00:27
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