Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Would you believe me
billybob said:

Very thought provoking... Beautifully written!

July 10th, 2017 03:41

Words to the younger me
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you sir, Shakespeare sort of said it first ;)

July 10th, 2017 03:14

Words to the younger me
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and the last two lines are very true.

July 10th, 2017 00:41

Words to the younger me
Augustus said:

Forged in fire makes for strong iron. You my man are iron with heart.

July 9th, 2017 23:01

For you or for me?
ron parrish aka wordman said:

i guess it`s a secret what we are really after,for you or for me,i think a little of both

July 9th, 2017 18:59

Words to the younger me
Nicholas Browning said:

The stage of life shuns no man. Let\'s all put on a good show. Speak the truth friend.

July 9th, 2017 17:48

Words to the younger me
Moonflower15 said:

I think we all reflect and wish we could speak to ourselves when we were younger. I really enjoyed this.

July 9th, 2017 13:59

Words to the younger me
Heather T said:

Oh, I love this exhortation to your younger self! Touching and inspiring.

July 9th, 2017 11:26

Words to the younger me
Louis Gibbs said:

A good poem ... made great by the last phrase! Well done, Dan!

July 9th, 2017 11:24

Dear sun & moon,
Augustus said:

Very nice

July 7th, 2017 17:16

Tea with my head demon
Nicholas Browning said:

There\'s a demon within us all.

July 6th, 2017 09:58

For you or for me?
lostgirl24 said:

This is very profound; beautiful and truthful writing, Poetic Dan.

July 5th, 2017 19:45

For you or for me?
onepauly said:

comfort yourself, and you will find what your after.

July 5th, 2017 19:44

Pen warriors needed!
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July 4th, 2017 17:24

Reprogramming
Fay Slimm. said:

Agree wholeheartedly with these lines Dan - - loud applause for the reminder.

July 4th, 2017 09:22

Reprogramming
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 4th, 2017 07:32

Reprogramming
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, go forward in your life to the wonder that is ahead.

July 4th, 2017 05:22

Reprogramming
FredPeyer said:

Dan, I do like your poem! We have to reprogram our lives all the time. Living on past experience just isn\'t enough. I just published a poem that has to do with comparing our life to a spreadsheet. I guess we are all computer nerds!

July 4th, 2017 05:02

Pen warriors needed!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true, words can be so powerful.

July 4th, 2017 00:49

Pen warriors needed!
burning-embers said:

Sadly the warriors of the world are attracted to things more exciting to them than poetry my friend.

July 3rd, 2017 07:36

Live, learn and figure out
kevin browne said:

And i making it not a \'maybe\' but \'a huge difference\' instead. lets mix our thoughts together. great write my friend.

July 1st, 2017 07:05

Reap what I have sown
onepauly said:

it makes me feel sad because I have no daughter

July 1st, 2017 04:58

Reap what I have sown
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful write, you must have been doing something right to get these words written for you.

July 1st, 2017 00:46

Reap what I have sown
Christina8 said:

Your daughter sounds wonderful and what great things she had to say in honor of you! It speaks volumes of you as a dad.

June 30th, 2017 18:13

Timeless task
onepauly said:

we can never be the whole person we are at any one time. lets work with all these other selves.

June 29th, 2017 20:43

Timeless task
malubotelho said:

It is beautiful. Flowing like a ballerina on a stage.

June 29th, 2017 20:22

Timeless task
FredPeyer said:

Beautifully written poem. The last two lines reminded me of how it feels sometimes when I write, like a surfer who caught the perfect wave.

June 29th, 2017 19:21

Timeless task
kevin browne said:

I think you just proved your point very indeed. leave those unwanted on board thought well alone and get on with your life. great write with reflecting thoughts.

June 29th, 2017 14:37

Indication
onepauly said:

the direction you are going now is just fine.

June 28th, 2017 19:27

Indication
malubotelho said:

Such beautiful way of writing. Thanks

June 28th, 2017 11:02



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