Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
My girl is turning 10
Heather T said:
What a tender tribute to your little love! I imagine she lights up any room she\'s in. Lovely, Dan!
July 18th, 2017 18:49
Heather T said:
What a tender tribute to your little love! I imagine she lights up any room she\'s in. Lovely, Dan!
July 18th, 2017 18:49
My girl is turning 10
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written tribute to your daughter
July 18th, 2017 11:09
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written tribute to your daughter
July 18th, 2017 11:09
Speaking in tongue
kevin browne said:
sounds about right Poetic Dan, and if you are trying to create a world then make sure you do it with an unorthodox type of style which no one has ever heard of or seen before. create with the poetry available and make you words attractive, beautiful and eye catching. good luck my friend.
July 16th, 2017 06:22
kevin browne said:
sounds about right Poetic Dan, and if you are trying to create a world then make sure you do it with an unorthodox type of style which no one has ever heard of or seen before. create with the poetry available and make you words attractive, beautiful and eye catching. good luck my friend.
July 16th, 2017 06:22
Music in my head
Fay Slimm. said:
A flow of good rhythm in this excellent tribute to dancing for fun Dan - well done.
July 16th, 2017 04:20
Fay Slimm. said:
A flow of good rhythm in this excellent tribute to dancing for fun Dan - well done.
July 16th, 2017 04:20
Music in my head
kevin browne said:
I will sing along with you my friend because your work is so cool.
July 16th, 2017 03:01
kevin browne said:
I will sing along with you my friend because your work is so cool.
July 16th, 2017 03:01
Music in my head
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true music can cure all ills and bring on all emotions. Good write.
July 16th, 2017 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true music can cure all ills and bring on all emotions. Good write.
July 16th, 2017 02:58
K9 teaching
kevin browne said:
now this poem is barking at me how great it actually is. love this poem as indeed I love animals also. fantastic write my friend.
July 15th, 2017 21:09
kevin browne said:
now this poem is barking at me how great it actually is. love this poem as indeed I love animals also. fantastic write my friend.
July 15th, 2017 21:09
K9 teaching
FredPeyer said:
PD, I do like this poem. Am still trying to absorb it all though. Not an easy one.
July 15th, 2017 03:29
FredPeyer said:
PD, I do like this poem. Am still trying to absorb it all though. Not an easy one.
July 15th, 2017 03:29
Speaking in tongue
Adri said:
Hi Dan! I just picked this poem to read of yours because the title caught my attention! I love the message of your poem. I think my favorite line was, \"I should be free to settle and move as I please.\" I love how you incorporated empathy into it with feeling too much, overloaded with rules and information. I can definitely relate to that since, I am an extremely sensitive person!!!😬😬😬 Anyways, I loved your poem and keep writing! -A
July 14th, 2017 18:06
Adri said:
Hi Dan! I just picked this poem to read of yours because the title caught my attention! I love the message of your poem. I think my favorite line was, \"I should be free to settle and move as I please.\" I love how you incorporated empathy into it with feeling too much, overloaded with rules and information. I can definitely relate to that since, I am an extremely sensitive person!!!😬😬😬 Anyways, I loved your poem and keep writing! -A
July 14th, 2017 18:06
Speaking in tongue
FredPeyer said:
Dan, great poem, love the \"Rules upon rules\" part.
Here is something that proves your point in a way people can understand:
USA Federal Tax Code in 2016:
Total 74,608 pages long
187 times longer than it was a century ago
It was 400 pages in 1913
I rest my case!
July 14th, 2017 17:02
FredPeyer said:
Dan, great poem, love the \"Rules upon rules\" part.
Here is something that proves your point in a way people can understand:
USA Federal Tax Code in 2016:
Total 74,608 pages long
187 times longer than it was a century ago
It was 400 pages in 1913
I rest my case!
July 14th, 2017 17:02
Speaking in tongue
Nicholas Browning said:
This indeed is interesting. When you said you had a new work ready, I wasn\'t expecting this. You\'re right. There\'s too many laws. Too many rules. They just keep overlapping with each other. It\'s ridiculous. Good message sir. Keep up the work!
July 14th, 2017 15:51
Nicholas Browning said:
This indeed is interesting. When you said you had a new work ready, I wasn\'t expecting this. You\'re right. There\'s too many laws. Too many rules. They just keep overlapping with each other. It\'s ridiculous. Good message sir. Keep up the work!
July 14th, 2017 15:51
Speaking in tongue
burning-embers said:
Dan my mate. You\'ve given me a headache. I\'ve read this five times.
But i know you\'re right to question what is real.
July 14th, 2017 06:31
burning-embers said:
Dan my mate. You\'ve given me a headache. I\'ve read this five times.
But i know you\'re right to question what is real.
July 14th, 2017 06:31
Speaking in tongue
Fay Slimm. said:
Rule-shifting and being our real selves is the way to freedom - well said Dan.
July 14th, 2017 06:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Rule-shifting and being our real selves is the way to freedom - well said Dan.
July 14th, 2017 06:29
Speaking in tongue
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written...I like that its something truly DIFFERENT
July 14th, 2017 05:58
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written...I like that its something truly DIFFERENT
July 14th, 2017 05:58
My boys birthday write
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and message. May your son go along his path of life knowing that you will always be there for him.
July 14th, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and message. May your son go along his path of life knowing that you will always be there for him.
July 14th, 2017 01:40
My boys birthday write
burning-embers said:
Great emotional outpouring.. Tell him that people (you) only get older on the outside and have to have responsibilities but on the inside you\'re same age as him and want to play or join in his interest/hobby or whatever
July 13th, 2017 10:23
burning-embers said:
Great emotional outpouring.. Tell him that people (you) only get older on the outside and have to have responsibilities but on the inside you\'re same age as him and want to play or join in his interest/hobby or whatever
July 13th, 2017 10:23
Drifter no longer drifting
Augustus said:
We were given children to teach us I\'ve heard. Wish I had listened more. Kudos
July 12th, 2017 16:19
Augustus said:
We were given children to teach us I\'ve heard. Wish I had listened more. Kudos
July 12th, 2017 16:19
Drifter no longer drifting
Augustus said:
We were given children to teach us I\'ve heard. Wish I had listened more. Kudos
July 12th, 2017 16:19
Augustus said:
We were given children to teach us I\'ve heard. Wish I had listened more. Kudos
July 12th, 2017 16:19
Drifter no longer drifting
Nicholas Browning said:
Just curious, is English your primary language? By the way, massive props for the title.
July 12th, 2017 12:20
Nicholas Browning said:
Just curious, is English your primary language? By the way, massive props for the title.
July 12th, 2017 12:20
Drifter no longer drifting
kevin browne said:
our children teach us the way my friend. a wonderful tribute to Jake and his father,
July 12th, 2017 09:38
kevin browne said:
our children teach us the way my friend. a wonderful tribute to Jake and his father,
July 12th, 2017 09:38
Shadow of yourself
burning-embers said:
Well written and well done for writing it. Its a theraputic outlet for me i know and often when really moved the words just fall out of my fingertips. I can tell this was a heartfelt outpouring from you and a noble plea. Good one.
July 11th, 2017 19:01
burning-embers said:
Well written and well done for writing it. Its a theraputic outlet for me i know and often when really moved the words just fall out of my fingertips. I can tell this was a heartfelt outpouring from you and a noble plea. Good one.
July 11th, 2017 19:01
Would you believe me
Augustus said:
Will never be able to see a rainbow the same again. Light but serious. Thanks. Sending positive thoughts.
July 10th, 2017 09:50
Augustus said:
Will never be able to see a rainbow the same again. Light but serious. Thanks. Sending positive thoughts.
July 10th, 2017 09:50
Would you believe me
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we can always change our ways.
July 10th, 2017 07:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we can always change our ways.
July 10th, 2017 07:38
Would you believe me
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Change is a recourse that is never too late to be obtained. The mind can definitely bring about many things unseen to the human eye.
July 10th, 2017 06:11
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Change is a recourse that is never too late to be obtained. The mind can definitely bring about many things unseen to the human eye.
July 10th, 2017 06:11
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