Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Dear oldest friend
Laura🌻 said:

So beautifully expressed
Poetic Dan...

“Anger and resentment no
longer sit on my plate,
I feel it in my heart that
love is the better way.”

At times it’s difficult, but
that is the better direction!

November 15th, 2017 07:15

Dear oldest friend
Goldfinch60 said:

Good strong write, yes love is the better way.

November 14th, 2017 02:00

Dear oldest friend
Fay Slimm. said:

A truly heartwarming read Dan and written with a nod to right metre and rhyme this must be one of your most appealing writes - A definite fave. for me.

November 13th, 2017 12:55

Knock knock
Tony36 said:

Sad but a well written and expressed poem

November 12th, 2017 14:30

Knock knock
Christina8 said:

I don\'t know you that well, PD, but I can\'t pretend to imagine what you are going through! I too hope that this difficult time is only temporary. Good vibes sent your way!

November 12th, 2017 13:15

Knock knock
FredPeyer said:

PD, this is so sad. Well written, but sad. I just hope you are not in jail as the picture suggests! And you are so right, we have to speak the truth to our children. I do hope you overcome the difficulties you are having right now!

November 12th, 2017 03:34

Even if they\'re watching be your self
FredPeyer said:

PD, you have to be who you are. You make the decisions, and you have to take responsibility for them.
I have to say that I think it is not \'funny\' to be yourself, it is hard and scary!

November 10th, 2017 05:06

Hear my plea
Christina8 said:

A soul wrenching read and I hope the universe hears your plea! I hope you get to be with your son, PD!

November 8th, 2017 21:18

Hear my plea
FredPeyer said:

First there has to be the desire, then the wisdom to ask for help, and finally the willingness to accept that help. PD, you are ready, this poem shows it in very eloquent form, and I am sure your plea will be heard!

November 8th, 2017 12:58

Hear my plea
Fay Slimm. said:

A heart-touching read and may all your efforts and dreams to help a much loved son be blessed with success my friend.

November 8th, 2017 10:06

Silent wisdom
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, so much can be said in silence.

November 7th, 2017 01:46

Silent wisdom
Accidental Poet said:

I have to agree Dan, this is a really great poem.

November 6th, 2017 19:13

Silent wisdom
FredPeyer said:

You expressed in a beautiful way where that silent wisdom comes from: Deep within yourself, God (if you believe). I like the line \'Accountability of my integrity\'.

November 6th, 2017 16:26

Forever proud
FredPeyer said:

Dan, riding along on a bike like that I would have the same grin on my face! Love the picture, great kid, and as a father of three who was Mr. Mom a lot (my wife worked as a flight attendant), I know exactly how you feel. Great poem!

October 31st, 2017 11:50

Forever proud
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write Dan.

October 30th, 2017 13:50

Forever proud
kevin browne said:

great write, Poetic Dan.

October 30th, 2017 13:00

Forever proud
Christina8 said:

Wonderful tribute to your son!! What a great dad you are--beaming with pride! Awesome!

October 30th, 2017 12:02

Forever proud
orchidee said:

Ahhh, worthy pride in a fine poem and son!

October 30th, 2017 09:46

00:00
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, enjoy each new day.

October 27th, 2017 00:59

00:00
Fay Slimm. said:

Excellent reasoning in three little lines my friend.

October 26th, 2017 13:13

00:00
myself and me said:

The moment hold so many.

October 26th, 2017 07:45

00:00
FredPeyer said:

Very, very, very clever, P.D.!
Took me about 20 seconds to figure it out. 0.00 really is all three, the point where tomorrow, now, and yesterday meet. I try to keep my favorites to a minimum, but this one is definitely on that list.

October 26th, 2017 04:24

Submerge in eternal bliss
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, we always need to be ourselves.

October 21st, 2017 00:54

Submerge in eternal bliss
Fay Slimm. said:

Wishing that bliss stays with you from now and forever my friend - a most beautiful read.

October 20th, 2017 13:58

Submerge in eternal bliss
Christina8 said:

What a sweet picture and poem. Love it! Hold on to that eternal bliss!

October 20th, 2017 13:41

O what a giggle
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write. We should all be laughing especially at ourselves.

October 20th, 2017 00:50

O what a giggle
orchidee said:

Erm - why, of course. lol!

October 19th, 2017 04:14

Don\'t believe the hype
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true, never give up.

Good video of a super dog.

October 19th, 2017 00:41

Don\'t believe the hype
Christina8 said:

Great poem PD! I love the last line of your poem. I should heed your great advice! Wonderful!

October 18th, 2017 10:43

Don\'t believe the hype
orchidee said:

Ahh lovely write and clip Dan. Well, he looks happy enough to learn those tricks!

October 18th, 2017 09:40



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