Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Amazing grace by the shore
Fay Slimm. said:
A touching read Dan - - a gentle reminder too of the value of faith - thanks for the lovely video.
November 19th, 2017 21:11
Fay Slimm. said:
A touching read Dan - - a gentle reminder too of the value of faith - thanks for the lovely video.
November 19th, 2017 21:11
Amazing grace by the shore
Laura🌻 said:
Poetic Dan,
A beautiful write...especially the last stanza! Enjoyed the read and the video! Is that you in the video?
~Laura~
November 19th, 2017 18:27
Laura🌻 said:
Poetic Dan,
A beautiful write...especially the last stanza! Enjoyed the read and the video! Is that you in the video?
~Laura~
November 19th, 2017 18:27
Amazing grace by the shore
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. It\'s me fussing about metres again! Or syllables-per-line! This almost fits to the hymn of the same name, with adjustments here and there.
Any excuse will do, for me/us to sing it! lol.
November 19th, 2017 11:53
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. It\'s me fussing about metres again! Or syllables-per-line! This almost fits to the hymn of the same name, with adjustments here and there.
Any excuse will do, for me/us to sing it! lol.
November 19th, 2017 11:53
More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit
FredPeyer said:
PD, you have this uncanny ability to write from your heart and to pull us in. Wish I could help you with your \'demons\' in more than just words.
November 19th, 2017 02:25
FredPeyer said:
PD, you have this uncanny ability to write from your heart and to pull us in. Wish I could help you with your \'demons\' in more than just words.
November 19th, 2017 02:25
More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit
dusk arising said:
So well expressed ! I know this sentiment only too well. Into my favourites
November 18th, 2017 17:54
dusk arising said:
So well expressed ! I know this sentiment only too well. Into my favourites
November 18th, 2017 17:54
More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit
Laura🌻 said:
“I’m blessed with my life
But the war is always at the door.”
In some form or another, a war is always at our door!
SO don’t focus on the war...with conviction, focus on all the blessings in your life and knock on our door. We’re here for you!
November 18th, 2017 16:11
Laura🌻 said:
“I’m blessed with my life
But the war is always at the door.”
In some form or another, a war is always at our door!
SO don’t focus on the war...with conviction, focus on all the blessings in your life and knock on our door. We’re here for you!
November 18th, 2017 16:11
More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, that war is at peace with those for whom you care.
November 18th, 2017 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, that war is at peace with those for whom you care.
November 18th, 2017 02:12
More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit
kevin browne said:
knock knock, I\'m at your door, AP, if you need any help, then just open up. I feel for you buddy,
November 18th, 2017 02:05
kevin browne said:
knock knock, I\'m at your door, AP, if you need any help, then just open up. I feel for you buddy,
November 18th, 2017 02:05
Letting go but holding on
Christina8 said:
This poem is full of wisdom. It\'s clear that you have a great big heart! So happy to hear that you are not going to let them take away your light. Very positive poem. Thanks for sharing!
November 17th, 2017 13:29
Christina8 said:
This poem is full of wisdom. It\'s clear that you have a great big heart! So happy to hear that you are not going to let them take away your light. Very positive poem. Thanks for sharing!
November 17th, 2017 13:29
Letting go but holding on
myself and me said:
\"Letting go\" is easy to say but hard to do. Very well penned.
November 17th, 2017 08:45
myself and me said:
\"Letting go\" is easy to say but hard to do. Very well penned.
November 17th, 2017 08:45
Who\'s the who\'st who?
kevin browne said:
beautiful poem, PD. good work with a thrust of authority.
November 17th, 2017 01:35
kevin browne said:
beautiful poem, PD. good work with a thrust of authority.
November 17th, 2017 01:35
Who\'s the who\'st who?
FredPeyer said:
PD, both your poem and the quote are great. Need to read it again a few times to really get into it.
November 16th, 2017 21:49
FredPeyer said:
PD, both your poem and the quote are great. Need to read it again a few times to really get into it.
November 16th, 2017 21:49
Just writing it out
FredPeyer said:
PD, your poem fits right in with a poem I wrote to be published tomorrow (that decision was made before I read yours), called \'Tired\'. It is unbelievable how much the two poems have in common in essence. I love your poem!
November 16th, 2017 20:50
FredPeyer said:
PD, your poem fits right in with a poem I wrote to be published tomorrow (that decision was made before I read yours), called \'Tired\'. It is unbelievable how much the two poems have in common in essence. I love your poem!
November 16th, 2017 20:50
Just writing it out
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the last line is so meaningful. Each moment of our lives is special.
November 16th, 2017 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the last line is so meaningful. Each moment of our lives is special.
November 16th, 2017 01:39
Just writing it out
Fay Slimm. said:
To live in the moment brings ultimate clarity as to who we really are Dan - good write.
November 15th, 2017 12:02
Fay Slimm. said:
To live in the moment brings ultimate clarity as to who we really are Dan - good write.
November 15th, 2017 12:02
Just writing it out
Laura🌻 said:
Like your outlook!
Living in the present
is the way to go!
All the best to you,
Poetic Dan!
November 15th, 2017 07:24
Laura🌻 said:
Like your outlook!
Living in the present
is the way to go!
All the best to you,
Poetic Dan!
November 15th, 2017 07:24
Dear oldest friend
Laura🌻 said:
So beautifully expressed
Poetic Dan...
“Anger and resentment no
longer sit on my plate,
I feel it in my heart that
love is the better way.”
At times it’s difficult, but
that is the better direction!
November 15th, 2017 07:15
Laura🌻 said:
So beautifully expressed
Poetic Dan...
“Anger and resentment no
longer sit on my plate,
I feel it in my heart that
love is the better way.”
At times it’s difficult, but
that is the better direction!
November 15th, 2017 07:15
Dear oldest friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, yes love is the better way.
November 14th, 2017 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, yes love is the better way.
November 14th, 2017 02:00
Dear oldest friend
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly heartwarming read Dan and written with a nod to right metre and rhyme this must be one of your most appealing writes - A definite fave. for me.
November 13th, 2017 12:55
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly heartwarming read Dan and written with a nod to right metre and rhyme this must be one of your most appealing writes - A definite fave. for me.
November 13th, 2017 12:55
Knock knock
Christina8 said:
I don\'t know you that well, PD, but I can\'t pretend to imagine what you are going through! I too hope that this difficult time is only temporary. Good vibes sent your way!
November 12th, 2017 13:15
Christina8 said:
I don\'t know you that well, PD, but I can\'t pretend to imagine what you are going through! I too hope that this difficult time is only temporary. Good vibes sent your way!
November 12th, 2017 13:15
Knock knock
FredPeyer said:
PD, this is so sad. Well written, but sad. I just hope you are not in jail as the picture suggests! And you are so right, we have to speak the truth to our children. I do hope you overcome the difficulties you are having right now!
November 12th, 2017 03:34
FredPeyer said:
PD, this is so sad. Well written, but sad. I just hope you are not in jail as the picture suggests! And you are so right, we have to speak the truth to our children. I do hope you overcome the difficulties you are having right now!
November 12th, 2017 03:34
Even if they\'re watching be your self
FredPeyer said:
PD, you have to be who you are. You make the decisions, and you have to take responsibility for them.
I have to say that I think it is not \'funny\' to be yourself, it is hard and scary!
November 10th, 2017 05:06
FredPeyer said:
PD, you have to be who you are. You make the decisions, and you have to take responsibility for them.
I have to say that I think it is not \'funny\' to be yourself, it is hard and scary!
November 10th, 2017 05:06
Hear my plea
Christina8 said:
A soul wrenching read and I hope the universe hears your plea! I hope you get to be with your son, PD!
November 8th, 2017 21:18
Christina8 said:
A soul wrenching read and I hope the universe hears your plea! I hope you get to be with your son, PD!
November 8th, 2017 21:18
Hear my plea
FredPeyer said:
First there has to be the desire, then the wisdom to ask for help, and finally the willingness to accept that help. PD, you are ready, this poem shows it in very eloquent form, and I am sure your plea will be heard!
November 8th, 2017 12:58
FredPeyer said:
First there has to be the desire, then the wisdom to ask for help, and finally the willingness to accept that help. PD, you are ready, this poem shows it in very eloquent form, and I am sure your plea will be heard!
November 8th, 2017 12:58
Hear my plea
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-touching read and may all your efforts and dreams to help a much loved son be blessed with success my friend.
November 8th, 2017 10:06
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-touching read and may all your efforts and dreams to help a much loved son be blessed with success my friend.
November 8th, 2017 10:06
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