Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Just writing it out
FredPeyer said:
PD, your poem fits right in with a poem I wrote to be published tomorrow (that decision was made before I read yours), called \'Tired\'. It is unbelievable how much the two poems have in common in essence. I love your poem!
November 16th, 2017 20:50
FredPeyer said:
PD, your poem fits right in with a poem I wrote to be published tomorrow (that decision was made before I read yours), called \'Tired\'. It is unbelievable how much the two poems have in common in essence. I love your poem!
November 16th, 2017 20:50
Just writing it out
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the last line is so meaningful. Each moment of our lives is special.
November 16th, 2017 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the last line is so meaningful. Each moment of our lives is special.
November 16th, 2017 01:39
Just writing it out
Fay Slimm. said:
To live in the moment brings ultimate clarity as to who we really are Dan - good write.
November 15th, 2017 12:02
Fay Slimm. said:
To live in the moment brings ultimate clarity as to who we really are Dan - good write.
November 15th, 2017 12:02
Just writing it out
Laura🌻 said:
Like your outlook!
Living in the present
is the way to go!
All the best to you,
Poetic Dan!
November 15th, 2017 07:24
Laura🌻 said:
Like your outlook!
Living in the present
is the way to go!
All the best to you,
Poetic Dan!
November 15th, 2017 07:24
Dear oldest friend
Laura🌻 said:
So beautifully expressed
Poetic Dan...
“Anger and resentment no
longer sit on my plate,
I feel it in my heart that
love is the better way.”
At times it’s difficult, but
that is the better direction!
November 15th, 2017 07:15
Laura🌻 said:
So beautifully expressed
Poetic Dan...
“Anger and resentment no
longer sit on my plate,
I feel it in my heart that
love is the better way.”
At times it’s difficult, but
that is the better direction!
November 15th, 2017 07:15
Dear oldest friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, yes love is the better way.
November 14th, 2017 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, yes love is the better way.
November 14th, 2017 02:00
Dear oldest friend
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly heartwarming read Dan and written with a nod to right metre and rhyme this must be one of your most appealing writes - A definite fave. for me.
November 13th, 2017 12:55
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly heartwarming read Dan and written with a nod to right metre and rhyme this must be one of your most appealing writes - A definite fave. for me.
November 13th, 2017 12:55
Knock knock
Christina8 said:
I don\'t know you that well, PD, but I can\'t pretend to imagine what you are going through! I too hope that this difficult time is only temporary. Good vibes sent your way!
November 12th, 2017 13:15
Christina8 said:
I don\'t know you that well, PD, but I can\'t pretend to imagine what you are going through! I too hope that this difficult time is only temporary. Good vibes sent your way!
November 12th, 2017 13:15
Knock knock
FredPeyer said:
PD, this is so sad. Well written, but sad. I just hope you are not in jail as the picture suggests! And you are so right, we have to speak the truth to our children. I do hope you overcome the difficulties you are having right now!
November 12th, 2017 03:34
FredPeyer said:
PD, this is so sad. Well written, but sad. I just hope you are not in jail as the picture suggests! And you are so right, we have to speak the truth to our children. I do hope you overcome the difficulties you are having right now!
November 12th, 2017 03:34
Even if they\'re watching be your self
FredPeyer said:
PD, you have to be who you are. You make the decisions, and you have to take responsibility for them.
I have to say that I think it is not \'funny\' to be yourself, it is hard and scary!
November 10th, 2017 05:06
FredPeyer said:
PD, you have to be who you are. You make the decisions, and you have to take responsibility for them.
I have to say that I think it is not \'funny\' to be yourself, it is hard and scary!
November 10th, 2017 05:06
Hear my plea
Christina8 said:
A soul wrenching read and I hope the universe hears your plea! I hope you get to be with your son, PD!
November 8th, 2017 21:18
Christina8 said:
A soul wrenching read and I hope the universe hears your plea! I hope you get to be with your son, PD!
November 8th, 2017 21:18
Hear my plea
FredPeyer said:
First there has to be the desire, then the wisdom to ask for help, and finally the willingness to accept that help. PD, you are ready, this poem shows it in very eloquent form, and I am sure your plea will be heard!
November 8th, 2017 12:58
FredPeyer said:
First there has to be the desire, then the wisdom to ask for help, and finally the willingness to accept that help. PD, you are ready, this poem shows it in very eloquent form, and I am sure your plea will be heard!
November 8th, 2017 12:58
Hear my plea
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-touching read and may all your efforts and dreams to help a much loved son be blessed with success my friend.
November 8th, 2017 10:06
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-touching read and may all your efforts and dreams to help a much loved son be blessed with success my friend.
November 8th, 2017 10:06
Silent wisdom
Accidental Poet said:
I have to agree Dan, this is a really great poem.
November 6th, 2017 19:13
Accidental Poet said:
I have to agree Dan, this is a really great poem.
November 6th, 2017 19:13
Silent wisdom
FredPeyer said:
You expressed in a beautiful way where that silent wisdom comes from: Deep within yourself, God (if you believe). I like the line \'Accountability of my integrity\'.
November 6th, 2017 16:26
FredPeyer said:
You expressed in a beautiful way where that silent wisdom comes from: Deep within yourself, God (if you believe). I like the line \'Accountability of my integrity\'.
November 6th, 2017 16:26
Forever proud
FredPeyer said:
Dan, riding along on a bike like that I would have the same grin on my face! Love the picture, great kid, and as a father of three who was Mr. Mom a lot (my wife worked as a flight attendant), I know exactly how you feel. Great poem!
October 31st, 2017 11:50
FredPeyer said:
Dan, riding along on a bike like that I would have the same grin on my face! Love the picture, great kid, and as a father of three who was Mr. Mom a lot (my wife worked as a flight attendant), I know exactly how you feel. Great poem!
October 31st, 2017 11:50
Forever proud
Christina8 said:
Wonderful tribute to your son!! What a great dad you are--beaming with pride! Awesome!
October 30th, 2017 12:02
Christina8 said:
Wonderful tribute to your son!! What a great dad you are--beaming with pride! Awesome!
October 30th, 2017 12:02
00:00
FredPeyer said:
Very, very, very clever, P.D.!
Took me about 20 seconds to figure it out. 0.00 really is all three, the point where tomorrow, now, and yesterday meet. I try to keep my favorites to a minimum, but this one is definitely on that list.
October 26th, 2017 04:24
FredPeyer said:
Very, very, very clever, P.D.!
Took me about 20 seconds to figure it out. 0.00 really is all three, the point where tomorrow, now, and yesterday meet. I try to keep my favorites to a minimum, but this one is definitely on that list.
October 26th, 2017 04:24
Submerge in eternal bliss
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we always need to be ourselves.
October 21st, 2017 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we always need to be ourselves.
October 21st, 2017 00:54
Submerge in eternal bliss
Fay Slimm. said:
Wishing that bliss stays with you from now and forever my friend - a most beautiful read.
October 20th, 2017 13:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Wishing that bliss stays with you from now and forever my friend - a most beautiful read.
October 20th, 2017 13:58
Submerge in eternal bliss
Christina8 said:
What a sweet picture and poem. Love it! Hold on to that eternal bliss!
October 20th, 2017 13:41
Christina8 said:
What a sweet picture and poem. Love it! Hold on to that eternal bliss!
October 20th, 2017 13:41
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