Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Breaking patterns, don\'t scream
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 8th, 2017 10:26

My therapy
myself and me said:

I see your heart and feel your pain. Hope you be fine soon.

September 7th, 2017 12:42

My therapy
poetboy123 said:

An important message paired with a phenomenal write!

September 7th, 2017 12:41

My therapy
FredPeyer said:

While I don\'t have the problems you do, as a father your poem touched me deeply!

September 7th, 2017 04:03

On repeat for it to set deep
myself and me said:

You did set it deep by repeat.
Wonderful writing.

September 6th, 2017 19:39

On repeat for it to set deep
poetboy123 said:

Another ecstatic write my friend!

September 6th, 2017 12:09

On repeat for it to set deep
FredPeyer said:

.....and the more I read from you,
the more I admire your creativity!

September 6th, 2017 11:08

Life is a trip
myself and me said:

In the picture, is that the tree of life?
Indeed, life is a trip, stress, regrets, happy, success, good and bad, all part of the views on the side, make this trip a wonderful one.
Nice poem.

September 5th, 2017 18:21

Life is a trip
sue.evans said:

Great write - enjoyed reading your work - thank you 😊

September 5th, 2017 14:40

Life is a trip
Frank Prem said:

Very trippy Dan. Enjoyed and really liked the illustration.

September 5th, 2017 02:13

You are what you count
FredPeyer said:

....and we all live happily ever after!!!
Thank you PD for a great poem. You just made my day!

September 4th, 2017 14:28

No beef
FredPeyer said:

Idiots participate, men walk away! Nicely penned!

September 4th, 2017 13:27

You are what you count
sue.evans said:

Happy Liveday to you and soon to be happy birthday 🎉 I too am a September birthday! Enjoyed your write.

September 4th, 2017 11:49

You are what you count
Seek said:

A philosophy of life well articulated. The penultimate stanza is a gem!

September 4th, 2017 09:24

No beef
dusk arising said:

Sometimes certain mens actions can lead you to believe you are a quite different animal, or they are the sub-species. I\'ve been lucky in similar situations having the appearance of looking like a lot more trouble than i actually am. Respect to you Dan... walk away every time. you are above such low-brow activity. A clear and thoughtful piece showing your frustration at the madness of the street corner for it does not bade well for our goal of peace on earth.

September 3rd, 2017 06:45

I have the power
FredPeyer said:

While I did not have the challenges you had, your writing resonates with me as well. Life is a journey of self-discovery and you are fortunate to have arrived at the point where you now are. But the journey goes on and we never stop learning!

September 2nd, 2017 13:30

I have the power
poetboy123 said:

Regardless of when you were lost, you found yourself again, not within a system, but within yourself. Immense respect bro and please do keep up the writing.

September 2nd, 2017 11:20

I have the power
dusk arising said:

Good writing. The self healing within your writing is profound. There are those here who do believe this earthly existence is only a part of the whole as you suggest, and we will move on into the spirit world to be reborn to tread another lesson path. Very good writing and with clarity here. Please comment on some of my stuff

September 2nd, 2017 05:55

How do you play
dusk arising said:

Little gems of wisdom brought together to make an impactful read sir. Good thought and writing.

September 1st, 2017 19:40

How do you play
FredPeyer said:

And you did exactly what you wrote in the last stanza! Perfectly done, great poem, great subject, full of meaning and thought provoking.

September 1st, 2017 12:09

How do you play
poetboy123 said:

An inspiring and thought-provoking piece, as great as always!

September 1st, 2017 10:06

Son from another ragguan
FredPeyer said:

A beautiful poem and a beautiful message from father to son.
Well done, PD!

August 30th, 2017 14:14

To all out there
FredPeyer said:

Great writing, P D! Now if only everybody in this world would think like you, we would have a much better place!

August 29th, 2017 11:50

To all out there
lasergraph said:

The world has become our family these days. Good write.

August 29th, 2017 09:11

To all out there
orchidee said:

Cooeeeee, we\'re all here! heehee.

August 29th, 2017 08:58

Shoulder exercises
FredPeyer said:

Just keep on giving them all that love! My kids are now married, have children themselves and told me that only now do they realize how much love they got when they were teenagers.

August 29th, 2017 02:35

Shoulder exercises
dusk arising said:

Your honesty here shows such love and care for the fragile wellbeing of all three of you.Clearly theres soo much love here. Will this much caring and goodwill you\'ll have every chance of success and i hope youre going to be writing about your grandchildren with as much care and love in future years. Truly an excellent write with so much feeling within.

August 28th, 2017 11:30

Shoulder exercises
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

August 28th, 2017 10:42

Ubuntu
FredPeyer said:

After reading your incredible poem, PD, I looked up the meaning (dictionary) of Ubuntu: \'a quality that includes the essential human virtues; compassion and humanity\'.
I just wish everybody would see the light!

August 27th, 2017 21:55

Ubuntu
poetboy123 said:

Wonderful flow and meaning everyone should hear, another great write.

August 27th, 2017 14:24



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