Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Can\'t believe where my life is going
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Man....So many of us can relate to your dismay here...I also dropped out of high school because I wanted to grow up and mae money and be on my own terribly...I regretted it way down the road. Back in those days , you could get a job at entry level and work your way all the way up....Mid Life I took a few years off after a couple of traumatic events that too place and when I went back into the workforce, I was absolutely stunned at how hard it was to find a decent job....Currently, I have been job hunting now for 3 months...But, I went back to school online and got my Associate\'s degree...turns out they want a Bachelors but my point is that its never too late to turn your entire life around. Nobody can do it but YOU! Take care
July 26th, 2017 19:42
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Man....So many of us can relate to your dismay here...I also dropped out of high school because I wanted to grow up and mae money and be on my own terribly...I regretted it way down the road. Back in those days , you could get a job at entry level and work your way all the way up....Mid Life I took a few years off after a couple of traumatic events that too place and when I went back into the workforce, I was absolutely stunned at how hard it was to find a decent job....Currently, I have been job hunting now for 3 months...But, I went back to school online and got my Associate\'s degree...turns out they want a Bachelors but my point is that its never too late to turn your entire life around. Nobody can do it but YOU! Take care
July 26th, 2017 19:42
Can\'t believe where my life is going
kevin browne said:
and now I feel the need for you to expand this into another piece which has more insight towards the under current pattern of your life. that is your decision however and only you can decide what to reveal. lives we read about in poetry capture almost every feeling of emotion there is, yet, described in such ways that you wouldn\'t think impossible. new ideas are always welcome in poetry and that\'s the beauty of it I find. devote what you think is right for your character and your personality and let it shine through your work. then hopefully you will even see for yourself the insight of your own mind and that\'s a very beautiful thing my friend.
July 26th, 2017 18:26
kevin browne said:
and now I feel the need for you to expand this into another piece which has more insight towards the under current pattern of your life. that is your decision however and only you can decide what to reveal. lives we read about in poetry capture almost every feeling of emotion there is, yet, described in such ways that you wouldn\'t think impossible. new ideas are always welcome in poetry and that\'s the beauty of it I find. devote what you think is right for your character and your personality and let it shine through your work. then hopefully you will even see for yourself the insight of your own mind and that\'s a very beautiful thing my friend.
July 26th, 2017 18:26
Music in my head
willyweed said:
you sing\' you dance you touch the soul life is a cabaret my friend, nicely done! ww
July 25th, 2017 17:53
willyweed said:
you sing\' you dance you touch the soul life is a cabaret my friend, nicely done! ww
July 25th, 2017 17:53
Every word I see or hear
FredPeyer said:
Dan, wonderful writing, straight from the heart or even the gut. It is uncanny how your poem here and my \"just around the corner\" say kind of the same thing in different words.
And you are so right that it is the people around you who care who will help you up that mountain called life.
July 25th, 2017 17:51
FredPeyer said:
Dan, wonderful writing, straight from the heart or even the gut. It is uncanny how your poem here and my \"just around the corner\" say kind of the same thing in different words.
And you are so right that it is the people around you who care who will help you up that mountain called life.
July 25th, 2017 17:51
Every word I see or hear
kevin browne said:
you take it in and let it out like a volcanic eruption with your words on fire my friend.a great percentage of the population are far too ignorant to understand what you have written here. it holds the truth and you write it well. having faith in your fellow man is truly a beautiful thing, just like you.
July 23rd, 2017 16:54
kevin browne said:
you take it in and let it out like a volcanic eruption with your words on fire my friend.a great percentage of the population are far too ignorant to understand what you have written here. it holds the truth and you write it well. having faith in your fellow man is truly a beautiful thing, just like you.
July 23rd, 2017 16:54
What did I see
kevin browne said:
wow, wow and another wow! this one is about the the weather and how it effects you. you have packed as much into thought about writing this and it\'s a very different style towards how you normally write. your work is always thought provoking and interesting to say the least. great write from a very cool writer.
July 23rd, 2017 15:29
kevin browne said:
wow, wow and another wow! this one is about the the weather and how it effects you. you have packed as much into thought about writing this and it\'s a very different style towards how you normally write. your work is always thought provoking and interesting to say the least. great write from a very cool writer.
July 23rd, 2017 15:29
Lois Bernadette
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the loss of a loved one is so sad, I know how you feel.
Great tribute to Robert.
July 21st, 2017 03:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the loss of a loved one is so sad, I know how you feel.
Great tribute to Robert.
July 21st, 2017 03:50
Lois Bernadette
Michael Edwards said:
Having had a couple of scares with my wifes health (one of which was truly touch and go - 20% chance of pulling through) this poem meant so much to me - not ashamed to say my eyes watered as I read it.
July 21st, 2017 03:30
Michael Edwards said:
Having had a couple of scares with my wifes health (one of which was truly touch and go - 20% chance of pulling through) this poem meant so much to me - not ashamed to say my eyes watered as I read it.
July 21st, 2017 03:30
Testimonial of my healing session
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This was a pleasure to read! I really liked the picture too. Writing has helped so many to cope. It\'s amazing!
July 20th, 2017 17:33
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This was a pleasure to read! I really liked the picture too. Writing has helped so many to cope. It\'s amazing!
July 20th, 2017 17:33
Delusional?
malubotelho said:
I share your thought about having that feeling people just tell half truth. But I accept it in compassion of me and others. We are confused 🤷♀️ about things. Understanding only comes very slowly and progress takes baby steps. All the best. Nice writing.
July 20th, 2017 14:22
malubotelho said:
I share your thought about having that feeling people just tell half truth. But I accept it in compassion of me and others. We are confused 🤷♀️ about things. Understanding only comes very slowly and progress takes baby steps. All the best. Nice writing.
July 20th, 2017 14:22
Testimonial of my healing session
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting to me how poetry is spawned so often by suffering, and poets are created so often by abuse and a touch of madness. All go through the trials and tribulations of life, but at least poets have an outlet for what they have experienced. So in that respect, we are lucky. Thank you for sharing this information with us, Dan, and I wish you the best with your struggles.
July 20th, 2017 08:53
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting to me how poetry is spawned so often by suffering, and poets are created so often by abuse and a touch of madness. All go through the trials and tribulations of life, but at least poets have an outlet for what they have experienced. So in that respect, we are lucky. Thank you for sharing this information with us, Dan, and I wish you the best with your struggles.
July 20th, 2017 08:53
Delusional?
poetboy123 said:
I implore you my friend to have confidence, for you seem like a person to rely on, great pen!
July 19th, 2017 20:42
poetboy123 said:
I implore you my friend to have confidence, for you seem like a person to rely on, great pen!
July 19th, 2017 20:42
Delusional?
Louis Gibbs said:
I can relate. My daughter hated me when she hit fourteen ... for trying to be a good, protective father, as were you. Fortunately we both got past that and are very close now. Hang in there, Dan. Good write!
July 19th, 2017 16:05
Louis Gibbs said:
I can relate. My daughter hated me when she hit fourteen ... for trying to be a good, protective father, as were you. Fortunately we both got past that and are very close now. Hang in there, Dan. Good write!
July 19th, 2017 16:05
My girl is turning 10
Heather T said:
What a tender tribute to your little love! I imagine she lights up any room she\'s in. Lovely, Dan!
July 18th, 2017 18:49
Heather T said:
What a tender tribute to your little love! I imagine she lights up any room she\'s in. Lovely, Dan!
July 18th, 2017 18:49
My girl is turning 10
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written tribute to your daughter
July 18th, 2017 11:09
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written tribute to your daughter
July 18th, 2017 11:09
Speaking in tongue
kevin browne said:
sounds about right Poetic Dan, and if you are trying to create a world then make sure you do it with an unorthodox type of style which no one has ever heard of or seen before. create with the poetry available and make you words attractive, beautiful and eye catching. good luck my friend.
July 16th, 2017 06:22
kevin browne said:
sounds about right Poetic Dan, and if you are trying to create a world then make sure you do it with an unorthodox type of style which no one has ever heard of or seen before. create with the poetry available and make you words attractive, beautiful and eye catching. good luck my friend.
July 16th, 2017 06:22
Music in my head
Fay Slimm. said:
A flow of good rhythm in this excellent tribute to dancing for fun Dan - well done.
July 16th, 2017 04:20
Fay Slimm. said:
A flow of good rhythm in this excellent tribute to dancing for fun Dan - well done.
July 16th, 2017 04:20
Music in my head
kevin browne said:
I will sing along with you my friend because your work is so cool.
July 16th, 2017 03:01
kevin browne said:
I will sing along with you my friend because your work is so cool.
July 16th, 2017 03:01
Music in my head
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true music can cure all ills and bring on all emotions. Good write.
July 16th, 2017 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true music can cure all ills and bring on all emotions. Good write.
July 16th, 2017 02:58
K9 teaching
kevin browne said:
now this poem is barking at me how great it actually is. love this poem as indeed I love animals also. fantastic write my friend.
July 15th, 2017 21:09
kevin browne said:
now this poem is barking at me how great it actually is. love this poem as indeed I love animals also. fantastic write my friend.
July 15th, 2017 21:09
K9 teaching
FredPeyer said:
PD, I do like this poem. Am still trying to absorb it all though. Not an easy one.
July 15th, 2017 03:29
FredPeyer said:
PD, I do like this poem. Am still trying to absorb it all though. Not an easy one.
July 15th, 2017 03:29
Speaking in tongue
Adri said:
Hi Dan! I just picked this poem to read of yours because the title caught my attention! I love the message of your poem. I think my favorite line was, \"I should be free to settle and move as I please.\" I love how you incorporated empathy into it with feeling too much, overloaded with rules and information. I can definitely relate to that since, I am an extremely sensitive person!!!😬😬😬 Anyways, I loved your poem and keep writing! -A
July 14th, 2017 18:06
Adri said:
Hi Dan! I just picked this poem to read of yours because the title caught my attention! I love the message of your poem. I think my favorite line was, \"I should be free to settle and move as I please.\" I love how you incorporated empathy into it with feeling too much, overloaded with rules and information. I can definitely relate to that since, I am an extremely sensitive person!!!😬😬😬 Anyways, I loved your poem and keep writing! -A
July 14th, 2017 18:06
Speaking in tongue
FredPeyer said:
Dan, great poem, love the \"Rules upon rules\" part.
Here is something that proves your point in a way people can understand:
USA Federal Tax Code in 2016:
Total 74,608 pages long
187 times longer than it was a century ago
It was 400 pages in 1913
I rest my case!
July 14th, 2017 17:02
FredPeyer said:
Dan, great poem, love the \"Rules upon rules\" part.
Here is something that proves your point in a way people can understand:
USA Federal Tax Code in 2016:
Total 74,608 pages long
187 times longer than it was a century ago
It was 400 pages in 1913
I rest my case!
July 14th, 2017 17:02
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