Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Doors left open
Nicholas Browning said:
Dan, the poetic man, well done sir.
The quote was a lovely touch.
September 9th, 2017 08:13
Nicholas Browning said:
Dan, the poetic man, well done sir.
The quote was a lovely touch.
September 9th, 2017 08:13
Doors left open
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words have hit me Dan and the image is carefully chosen to mold into the thought that doors can open when we anticipate they can. Thanks for sharing this.
September 9th, 2017 05:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words have hit me Dan and the image is carefully chosen to mold into the thought that doors can open when we anticipate they can. Thanks for sharing this.
September 9th, 2017 05:14
Breaking patterns, don\'t scream
myself and me said:
I think it is OK to scream occasionally to unload the burden, as long as you do not scream to someone.
Nice job.
September 8th, 2017 21:09
myself and me said:
I think it is OK to scream occasionally to unload the burden, as long as you do not scream to someone.
Nice job.
September 8th, 2017 21:09
Breaking patterns, don\'t scream
dusk arising said:
LOL @ real man is etc.... real men realised long ago that the concept of thinking one man any more of a \'man\' than any other is a load of macho twaddle.
You are on a journey of self improvement it seems, thats the basis of buddhist teachings. Who could fault you in this my friend. May your path lead you thru the reward you seek.
September 8th, 2017 10:36
dusk arising said:
LOL @ real man is etc.... real men realised long ago that the concept of thinking one man any more of a \'man\' than any other is a load of macho twaddle.
You are on a journey of self improvement it seems, thats the basis of buddhist teachings. Who could fault you in this my friend. May your path lead you thru the reward you seek.
September 8th, 2017 10:36
Breaking patterns, don\'t scream
poetboy123 said:
A great topic that we can all relate to Dan!
September 8th, 2017 10:27
poetboy123 said:
A great topic that we can all relate to Dan!
September 8th, 2017 10:27
My therapy
myself and me said:
I see your heart and feel your pain. Hope you be fine soon.
September 7th, 2017 12:42
myself and me said:
I see your heart and feel your pain. Hope you be fine soon.
September 7th, 2017 12:42
My therapy
poetboy123 said:
An important message paired with a phenomenal write!
September 7th, 2017 12:41
poetboy123 said:
An important message paired with a phenomenal write!
September 7th, 2017 12:41
My therapy
FredPeyer said:
While I don\'t have the problems you do, as a father your poem touched me deeply!
September 7th, 2017 04:03
FredPeyer said:
While I don\'t have the problems you do, as a father your poem touched me deeply!
September 7th, 2017 04:03
On repeat for it to set deep
myself and me said:
You did set it deep by repeat.
Wonderful writing.
September 6th, 2017 19:39
myself and me said:
You did set it deep by repeat.
Wonderful writing.
September 6th, 2017 19:39
On repeat for it to set deep
poetboy123 said:
Another ecstatic write my friend!
September 6th, 2017 12:09
poetboy123 said:
Another ecstatic write my friend!
September 6th, 2017 12:09
On repeat for it to set deep
FredPeyer said:
.....and the more I read from you,
the more I admire your creativity!
September 6th, 2017 11:08
FredPeyer said:
.....and the more I read from you,
the more I admire your creativity!
September 6th, 2017 11:08
Life is a trip
myself and me said:
In the picture, is that the tree of life?
Indeed, life is a trip, stress, regrets, happy, success, good and bad, all part of the views on the side, make this trip a wonderful one.
Nice poem.
September 5th, 2017 18:21
myself and me said:
In the picture, is that the tree of life?
Indeed, life is a trip, stress, regrets, happy, success, good and bad, all part of the views on the side, make this trip a wonderful one.
Nice poem.
September 5th, 2017 18:21
Life is a trip
sue.evans said:
Great write - enjoyed reading your work - thank you 😊
September 5th, 2017 14:40
sue.evans said:
Great write - enjoyed reading your work - thank you 😊
September 5th, 2017 14:40
Life is a trip
Frank Prem said:
Very trippy Dan. Enjoyed and really liked the illustration.
September 5th, 2017 02:13
Frank Prem said:
Very trippy Dan. Enjoyed and really liked the illustration.
September 5th, 2017 02:13
You are what you count
FredPeyer said:
....and we all live happily ever after!!!
Thank you PD for a great poem. You just made my day!
September 4th, 2017 14:28
FredPeyer said:
....and we all live happily ever after!!!
Thank you PD for a great poem. You just made my day!
September 4th, 2017 14:28
You are what you count
sue.evans said:
Happy Liveday to you and soon to be happy birthday 🎉 I too am a September birthday! Enjoyed your write.
September 4th, 2017 11:49
sue.evans said:
Happy Liveday to you and soon to be happy birthday 🎉 I too am a September birthday! Enjoyed your write.
September 4th, 2017 11:49
You are what you count
Seek said:
A philosophy of life well articulated. The penultimate stanza is a gem!
September 4th, 2017 09:24
Seek said:
A philosophy of life well articulated. The penultimate stanza is a gem!
September 4th, 2017 09:24
No beef
dusk arising said:
Sometimes certain mens actions can lead you to believe you are a quite different animal, or they are the sub-species. I\'ve been lucky in similar situations having the appearance of looking like a lot more trouble than i actually am. Respect to you Dan... walk away every time. you are above such low-brow activity. A clear and thoughtful piece showing your frustration at the madness of the street corner for it does not bade well for our goal of peace on earth.
September 3rd, 2017 06:45
dusk arising said:
Sometimes certain mens actions can lead you to believe you are a quite different animal, or they are the sub-species. I\'ve been lucky in similar situations having the appearance of looking like a lot more trouble than i actually am. Respect to you Dan... walk away every time. you are above such low-brow activity. A clear and thoughtful piece showing your frustration at the madness of the street corner for it does not bade well for our goal of peace on earth.
September 3rd, 2017 06:45
I have the power
FredPeyer said:
While I did not have the challenges you had, your writing resonates with me as well. Life is a journey of self-discovery and you are fortunate to have arrived at the point where you now are. But the journey goes on and we never stop learning!
September 2nd, 2017 13:30
FredPeyer said:
While I did not have the challenges you had, your writing resonates with me as well. Life is a journey of self-discovery and you are fortunate to have arrived at the point where you now are. But the journey goes on and we never stop learning!
September 2nd, 2017 13:30
I have the power
poetboy123 said:
Regardless of when you were lost, you found yourself again, not within a system, but within yourself. Immense respect bro and please do keep up the writing.
September 2nd, 2017 11:20
poetboy123 said:
Regardless of when you were lost, you found yourself again, not within a system, but within yourself. Immense respect bro and please do keep up the writing.
September 2nd, 2017 11:20
I have the power
dusk arising said:
Good writing. The self healing within your writing is profound. There are those here who do believe this earthly existence is only a part of the whole as you suggest, and we will move on into the spirit world to be reborn to tread another lesson path. Very good writing and with clarity here. Please comment on some of my stuff
September 2nd, 2017 05:55
dusk arising said:
Good writing. The self healing within your writing is profound. There are those here who do believe this earthly existence is only a part of the whole as you suggest, and we will move on into the spirit world to be reborn to tread another lesson path. Very good writing and with clarity here. Please comment on some of my stuff
September 2nd, 2017 05:55
How do you play
dusk arising said:
Little gems of wisdom brought together to make an impactful read sir. Good thought and writing.
September 1st, 2017 19:40
dusk arising said:
Little gems of wisdom brought together to make an impactful read sir. Good thought and writing.
September 1st, 2017 19:40
How do you play
FredPeyer said:
And you did exactly what you wrote in the last stanza! Perfectly done, great poem, great subject, full of meaning and thought provoking.
September 1st, 2017 12:09
FredPeyer said:
And you did exactly what you wrote in the last stanza! Perfectly done, great poem, great subject, full of meaning and thought provoking.
September 1st, 2017 12:09
How do you play
poetboy123 said:
An inspiring and thought-provoking piece, as great as always!
September 1st, 2017 10:06
poetboy123 said:
An inspiring and thought-provoking piece, as great as always!
September 1st, 2017 10:06
Son from another ragguan
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful poem and a beautiful message from father to son.
Well done, PD!
August 30th, 2017 14:14
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful poem and a beautiful message from father to son.
Well done, PD!
August 30th, 2017 14:14
To all out there
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, P D! Now if only everybody in this world would think like you, we would have a much better place!
August 29th, 2017 11:50
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, P D! Now if only everybody in this world would think like you, we would have a much better place!
August 29th, 2017 11:50
To all out there
lasergraph said:
The world has become our family these days. Good write.
August 29th, 2017 09:11
lasergraph said:
The world has become our family these days. Good write.
August 29th, 2017 09:11
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